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07:0707:07, 8 December 2024 diff hist −3 m Room 222 →Plot: Changed [While] to [Although] ([While] should be used only in the temporal—not the concessive—sense); in [African-American], deleted the hyphen [-]; after [secretary], added a comma [,]; changed [Additionally] to [Also]; after [students], added a comma [,]. current

07:0007:00, 27 January 2024 diff hist +1 m Nan Goldin →Life and work: Changed [recreate] to [re-create]. These 2 words have entirely different meanings.

16:2816:28, 20 June 2022 diff hist +2 m Hulhumalé →History: After [1997], added the needed year-separating comma [,]; changed [north west] (2 words) to [northwest] (1 word); after [(or Phase I)], added a needed comma [,]; after [added], changed the comma [,] to a semicolon [;]; after the next word, [and], added a comma [,].
15:5715:57, 20 June 2022 diff hist −1 m Hulhumalé →Location within Malé City: Corrected [Hulhulmalé] to [Hulhumalé].

16:1416:14, 1 April 2022 diff hist +5 m Murray Hill (performer) →Biography: Before and after [Shortbus], added the required nonrestrictive comma (NOTE: Because Mitchell made only 1 film in 2006, this film title must be set off by commas [,].); between [and] and [the], added [in].
16:0516:05, 1 April 2022 diff hist +5 m Murray Hill (performer) →Biography: Hyphenated [cutting-edge]; after [Chelsea], added serial comma [,]; after [Ivana Trump], added serial comma [,]; after [Liza Minnelli], added semicolon [;]; between [and] and [HBO]

01:2801:28, 25 March 2022 diff hist +4 m Mark David Chapman →Background: After [U.S. Air Force], added a comma [,]; after [semester], added a comma [,]; after [pipe], added a comma [,]; after [hospital], added a comma [,].
01:1701:17, 25 March 2022 diff hist +4 m Bill Cowsill →Early Life, The Cowsills, 1964-1969: In [1964-1969], changed hyphen to en dash [–]; after [children], deleted space both before and after em dash [–]; after [girl], deleted space both before and after em dash [–]; changed [Following] to [After]; between [manager.] and [He], deleted extra space; after [single], added comma [,]; after [Me], added comma; after [band], deleted comma [,]; changed [While] to [Although]; after [Party Girl"], added comma [,]; and 17 other minor changes.

08:2608:26, 19 December 2021 diff hist +13 m Chiwere language →Names: In paragraph 2 of 2, in the last sentence: after [says], add [that], for clarity; and after [snow], add [that is], for clarity.

12:3512:35, 26 November 2021 diff hist +32 m Eli Roth →Film career: After [animated], added a serial comma [,]; before [foam], deleted [and]; changed [as well as appearing] to [and appeared]; after [Roth said], added [that]; after [and], added [it]; after [family], added a comma [,]; before [made], deleted the extra space; changed [Knowles'] to [Knowles's]; after [saying], added [that]; after [Strompolis], added a serial comma [,]; before [had], added the 'companion' em dash [—]; and 20 other minor changes.
11:5311:53, 26 November 2021 diff hist +9 m Eli Roth →Early life: After [ (born May 1970) ], added a comma [,]; after [brothers], added a comma [,]; after [Gabriel], added a comma [,]; changed [over] to [more than]; after [college], added a comma [,].

02:3102:31, 19 September 2021 diff hist −1 m Russell Williams (criminal) →Media portrayals: After [April 9, 2011], added a semicolon [;]; moved [on August 13, 2015] to the end of the sentence—so as to maintain parallel construction with the [April 9, 2011] wording; changed [Season four] to [Season 4].

05:1005:10, 18 September 2021 diff hist 0 m Disappearance of Madeleine McCann →20:30: Tapas restaurant: After [55 metres], changed [160 ft] to [180 ft]. Note that we can see the correct [180 ft] figure stated in an earlier paragraph.

20:0220:02, 9 September 2021 diff hist +24 m Scott Peterson →Early life and marriage: Both before and after [Lee], added the required nonrestrictive comma [,]; changed [As] to [Because]; before [complained], added [he]; after [Cuesta College], added a comma [,]; after [later], changed comma [,] to [to]; after [Resort], add a comma [,]; after [that], added a comma [,]; after [believing], add [that]; after [and]; add [they];

05:3305:33, 24 August 2021 diff hist +7 m Athole Shearer →Early life: Both before and after [Douglas], added a comma [,]; both before and after [Andrew], added a comma [,]; both before and after [Norma], added a comma [,]; after [mother], added a comma [,].

01:4401:44, 31 May 2021 diff hist +28 m Andy Gibb →1958–1970: Early life and first recordings: Between [descent] and [and], added comma [,]; after [sister], added comma [,]; after [Evans], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;]; after [brothers], changed comma [,] to wide em dash [—]; after [mother], added comma [,]; after [Barbara], added comma [,]; after [later], changed [in] to [on]; between [World] and closing quotation mark ["], added comma [,]; after [him], changed [with] to [and]; and a number of very minor changes.

22:0422:04, 4 April 2021 diff hist +29 m The Prisoner →Development: After [that], added comma [,]; changed [prior to] to [before]; after [speaking], changed [to] to [with]; after [it], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;]; then, changed [while] to [whereas]; changed [though] to [although]; after [Reality], changed comma [,] to wide em dash [—]; after [Portmeirion], changed comma [,] to em dash [—]; between [reality] and [was not], added comma [,]; between [an] and [a BBC], added [in]; between [a] and [history], deleted colon [:]; & other changes

19:2819:28, 14 October 2020 diff hist +8 m Pilou Asbæk →Personal life: After [ancestry], deleted comma [,] (It is NOT correct.); changed [Pip.] to ["Pip."]; changed [petit] to [le plus petit]; after [late artist], deleted comma [,] (It is NOT correct.).
19:2119:21, 14 October 2020 diff hist −4 m Pilou Asbæk →Film: After [film], deleted comma [,] (It is NOT correct.); after [Dogme 95], changed hyphen [-] to en dash [–]; changed [Asbæk co-stars opposite in the film with his] to [In this film, Asbæk co-stars opposite his]; after [Luc Besson film], deleted comma (It is NOT correct.); after [Bille August film], deleted comma (It is NOT correct.); after [Tobias Lindholm in the film], deleted comma (It is NOT correct.); after [Hypnose murders], added comma [,].
19:0219:02, 14 October 2020 diff hist +5 m Pilou Asbæk →Television: Before [Danish TV series], added [the]; between [played] and [spin-doctor], deleted the extra space; after [Borgen], added comma [,]; after [Lindholm], added comma [,].
18:5218:52, 14 October 2020 diff hist +8 m Pilou Asbæk →Early life: After [Herlufsholm School], added a comma [,]; changed [summer 2008] to [the summer of 2008].

17:5717:57, 23 September 2020 diff hist +13 m Mark David Chapman →Background: After [U.S. Air Force], added comma [,]; after [said], added [that]; after [semester], added comma [,]; after [pipe], added comma [,]; after [nurse], added comma [,]; between [and] and [quit], added [he]. Tag: Reverted

08:5008:50, 17 September 2020 diff hist +6 m Edwin Schlossberg →Early life: Changed [His parents Alfred I. Schlossberg and Mae Hirsch were both] to [Both of his parents—Alfred I. Schlossberg and Mae Hirsch—were]; after [school], deleted comma [,].

08:4408:44, 9 July 2020 diff hist +3 m Jack Nicholson →Early work: After [The Raven], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;]; after [The Terror], added comma [,]; after [ghost], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;]; after [particular], changed comma [,] to em dash [—]; after [The Shooting], changed comma [,] to em dash [—].
08:3708:37, 9 July 2020 diff hist +2 m Jack Nicholson →Military service: In [Korean War-era's], changed hyphen [-] to en dash [–].

17:0017:00, 8 July 2020 diff hist −3 m Jaclyn Smith →Early life: moved [only] from before [completed] to after [completed]; after [1968], deleted comma [,]; after [model/actress], deleted comma [,]; after [Farah Fawcett], deleted comma [,].

04:1504:15, 7 July 2020 diff hist −3 m Hy-Line Cruises →History: Changed [adding] to [added]; hyphenated [deep-sea]; after [1966], deleted incorrect comma [,]; hyphenated [passenger-ferry]; between [Vineyard] and [and], deleted incorrect comma [,]; between period [.] and [Hyannis Harbor Tours], deleted extra space [ ].
04:0404:04, 7 July 2020 diff hist +2 m Martha's Vineyard →Towns: After [island], added wide em dash [—] and then deleted [have been regionalized, ]; between [management] and [and], added serial comma [,]; after [waste management], added [—have been regionalized]; after [Vineyard Haven], deleted incorrect comma [,]; after [whaling tradition], deleted incorrect comma [,]; before [open harbor], added [its] (to establish parallel construction); between [and] and [hosts], added [it]; hyphenated [well-known]; 4 other minor changes.

13:4813:48, 15 June 2020 diff hist +26 m Don Lemon →Early career: Between [and] and [WCAU], added [for]; after [Pennsylvania], changed [, as well as] to [. Also, he was]; changed [News] to [News's]; after [for], added [both]; between [Today] and [NBC Nightly News], added [and]; after [NBC Nightly News], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;]; between [as] and [anchor], added [an]; after [began], added [working]; and after [(5 in Chicago)], deleted comma [,] (It is not correct.).
13:2713:27, 15 June 2020 diff hist +10 m Don Lemon →Early life: After [ancestry], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;]; after [president], added [during]; after [which], added [he].

22:2422:24, 7 June 2020 diff hist +6 m Sir Mix-a-Lot →Other work: Before [which], added [in]; after [which], added comma [,]; after [2000], added comma [,]; in [Sir Mix-a-Lot], changed [a] to [A]; after [June 2018], added comma [,]; in [Mix-a-Lot], changed [a] to [A].

06:2106:21, 15 April 2020 diff hist +12 m Cue note →Other definitions: between ["cue"] and [but], changed comma [,] to em dash [—]; between ["cue notes"] and [explained], added [that is]; changed [either be] to [be either], in order to establish parallel construction; both before and after [therefore], added comma [,].

21:2321:23, 4 June 2019 diff hist −3 m Girl (2018 film) →Plot: After [questions], added comma [,]; changed [she] to [Lara]; after [overprotective], added comma; after [him], added [that]; after [fine], added a comma; after [girlfriend], added semicolon [;]; both before and after [Milo], added comma [,] (She has only 1 brother.); after [demanding], added comma; after [help], added comma; changed [Since] to [Because]; after [infection], added comma; after [dance], added comma; and, after [services], added comma.

21:0221:02, 20 May 2019 diff hist +23 m Jessie Oonark →Utkuhikhalingmiut: NOTE that, in this heading, the 8th letter of the name ″Utkuhikhalingmiut″ is ″h.″ However, in line 1 of 4 of the paragraph (in 2 instances) and in line 3 of 4 (in 1 instance), the 8th letter of this name is ″s.″ Please verify the correct spelling of this name, and make all relevant changes throughout this article; deleted duplicate [of the language]; changed comma [,] to period [.]; changed [Like] to [Just as it was true for the art of]; 7 other minor changes.

01:1901:19, 28 April 2019 diff hist +8 m Idina Menzel →Early life: After [job], changed [which] to [that]; after [pronunciation], added [that]; in [New York-based], changed hyphen [-] to en dash [–]; after [revealed that], added a comma [,].

16:3916:39, 4 August 2018 diff hist +7 Rick Genest →Personal life

15:0415:04, 10 May 2018 diff hist +9 m John and Lorena Bobbitt →Arrest and trial: After [tape-recorded], added a comma [,]; after [infidelities], deleted the comma [,]; changed [which] to [who]; hyphenated [well-known]; after ["snap"], added a comma; changed [as] to [because]; after [her], deleted the comma [,]; after [her], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;]; after [escalating], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;]; after [that], added a comma [,]; after [sex], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;]; after [tired], changed comma [,] to semicolon [;].
14:4614:46, 10 May 2018 diff hist +2 m John and Lorena Bobbitt →Incident: After [that], added a comma [,]; after [hospital], added a comma [,].

00:4600:46, 3 May 2018 diff hist 0 m Galvanism →Modern studies: After [action], moved closing quotation mark ["] to after the period [.].
00:4400:44, 3 May 2018 diff hist +7 m Galvanism →History: After [Galvani], added a comma [,]; after [1786], added a comma [,]; after [that], added a comma [,]; after [time], added a comma [,]; moved [then] to after [they]; after [electricity"], added an em dash [—]; after [wrong], added a comma [,].

05:2905:29, 30 April 2018 diff hist −1 m Ron Vawter →Life and career: Between [Marianne Weems] and the sentence-ending period, deleted the space.
05:2405:24, 30 April 2018 diff hist +11 m Ron Vawter →Life and career: Between [Group] and [Vawter], added comma [,]; after [(Jean Genet)], changed [space+dash+dash+space] to em dash [—]; after [The Silence of the Lambs], added serial comma [,]; changed [recreation] to [re-creation]; after [Marshmallows?], added comma [,]; after [Philoctetes], changed comma [,] to em dash [—]; changed [banned] to [banished]; before [abandoned], added [was]; after [Troy], changed comma [,] to em dash [—].

15:0815:08, 20 April 2018 diff hist +4 m Country code top-level domain →Unused ISO 3166-1 codes: After [policy], moved [not] to after [to]; after [territories], changed the comma [,] to an em dash [—]; after [Saint Martin], changed the comma [,] to an em dash [—]; after [United Kingdom], added a comma []; after [rules], added a comma [,].
14:5914:59, 20 April 2018 diff hist +1 m Country code top-level domain →History: After [.nl], added a serial comma [,].
14:5714:57, 20 April 2018 diff hist +3 m Country code top-level domain →Delegation and management: After [Administration and control], changed [is] to [are]; hyphenated [local-presence]; both before and after [for example], added a comma [,].

04:1704:17, 12 April 2018 diff hist +6 m Cherie Lunghi →Personal life: Changed [man] to [husband]; after [1980s], added a comma [,]; changed [Joffe] to [Joffé].

03:0203:02, 31 March 2018 diff hist +7 m Ann Coulter →Early life: In 2 locations, changed [raised] to [reared]; after [says], added [that]; after [New York City], added comma [,]; after [2002], added comma [,]; changed [allegedly] to [purportedly]; after [history], deleted comma [,].

16:0116:01, 29 March 2018 diff hist 0 m Kidney stone disease →Size: Moved [only] from before [which] to after [which].
15:5715:57, 29 March 2018 diff hist +2 m Kidney stone disease →Other types: After [proline], added serial comma [,]; after [sulfadiazine], added serial comma [,].
15:5215:52, 29 March 2018 diff hist +1 m Kidney stone disease →Uric acid stones: After [allopurinol], added comma [,].

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