User contributions for Rjm319

12 January 2015

• 05:2005:20, 12 January 2015 diff hist −276 m Chris Kyle Made POV ore neutral and removed extraneous info about journalist critics -- reaction to the work is not the subject of this article, and Kyle obviously didn't make the threats since he was deceased!

26 October 2013

• 21:4621:46, 26 October 2013 diff hist +6 m Take Me Back (Imperials song) cleaned up a few minor formatting issues
• 21:4521:45, 26 October 2013 diff hist −20 Take Me Back (Imperials song) Corrected one typo and made some changes to improve style and especially, to make the text less "rah-rah"

26 May 2013

• 17:4217:42, 26 May 2013 diff hist −5 m Julie Delpy fixed one typo and deleted "coveted" as an adjective for an award Ms. Delpy won

16 March 2013

• 00:3800:38, 16 March 2013 diff hist +210 Hipster sexism Removed factually incorrect reference to Richard Mourdock using the term "legitimate rape," added reference to Democrat Whoopi Goldberg's similar "rape rape" comment to increase neutrality in POV/add balance.

3 February 2013

• 05:3005:30, 3 February 2013 diff hist −5 m Ben Klassen No edit summary
• 05:2705:27, 3 February 2013 diff hist +220 Talk:Ben Klassen →Legislative Career
• 05:2505:25, 3 February 2013 diff hist −21 m Ben Klassen No edit summary
• 05:2205:22, 3 February 2013 diff hist +23 m Ben Klassen No edit summary
• 05:2105:21, 3 February 2013 diff hist −2,353 Ben Klassen Removed a lot of irrelevant details that would only interest a COTC member.

27 February 2012

• 04:1404:14, 27 February 2012 diff hist −2,453 Diana Gabaldon Removed a lot of trivia not directly related to the author or her books and deleted more puffery.

23 February 2012

• 02:1502:15, 23 February 2012 diff hist +19 Danny Schechter a few stylistic enhancements (IMHO)
• 02:0902:09, 23 February 2012 diff hist −75 m Al Bowlly removed duplicate mention of "midnight..." being John Batchelor theme song

18 February 2012

• 17:0817:08, 18 February 2012 diff hist −325 Medea Benjamin updated the text (Iraq war is over) and made POV more neutral
• 17:0317:03, 18 February 2012 diff hist +19 Jodie Evans Minor changes to improve accuracy.
• 17:0017:00, 18 February 2012 diff hist −469 Foster Friess Removed a second mention of his contraceptive joke, a strange construction about "someone" starting his investment career, etc.

4 December 2011

• 15:2915:29, 4 December 2011 diff hist 0 m Kurt von Hammerstein-Equord corrected apparent error in German

15 November 2011

• 21:1921:19, 15 November 2011 diff hist −179 Danny Schechter Toned down the promotional nature of the article, streamlined organization.

6 November 2011

• 00:2300:23, 6 November 2011 diff hist −758 Kevin Boyce consolidated redundant info and added a smidgin of context

8 October 2011

• 20:2420:24, 8 October 2011 diff hist −68 Barbara Cleverly Made some stylistic enhancements and corrected a couple of typos.
• 20:2020:20, 8 October 2011 diff hist −194 Talk:Code Pink →"Timeline"
• 20:1720:17, 8 October 2011 diff hist +495 Talk:Code Pink →"Timeline"
• 20:1320:13, 8 October 2011 diff hist −606 Code Pink main change: deleted Medea Benjamin quotations: they belong in the article on her, not CodePink, and moreover, even without the quotes, the article makes it abundantly clear what the group believes.

27 September 2011

• 03:1703:17, 27 September 2011 diff hist +130 Talk:Paraíba →WHAT is going on with tourmaline?!: new section

12 September 2011

• 23:0723:07, 12 September 2011 diff hist −3,320 Code Pink removed redundant material, shortened ENDLESS catalog of the group's actions, improved and standardized style, made POV more neutral, deleted inaccuracies on Scooter Libby

15 April 2011

• 20:0620:06, 15 April 2011 diff hist +5 m Medea Benjamin Fixed a typo, improved consistency within article.
• 20:0020:00, 15 April 2011 diff hist +79 Jodie Evans Removed jargon and excess verbiage, made point-of-view more neutral.
• 19:5119:51, 15 April 2011 diff hist +37 m Banfora Fixed some stylistical and grammatical problems in the English

19 February 2011

• 17:1617:16, 19 February 2011 diff hist +20 m Europa Europa minor edit, to clarify that really, "Hitlerjunge" means "Hitler Youth"

7 February 2011

• 04:1104:11, 7 February 2011 diff hist +2 m Medea Benjamin added quotes around "fair trade," since this is a subjective term.

16 January 2011

• 19:1819:18, 16 January 2011 diff hist +12 m John Van Buren →Life
• 19:1619:16, 16 January 2011 diff hist −581 John Van Buren Performed badly needed copy-editing, made the POV re: American racism more neutral, deleted trivia about club memberships...still needs a lot of work!

27 December 2010

• 21:4121:41, 27 December 2010 diff hist −1 George M. Dallas made one stylistic change
• 21:4021:40, 27 December 2010 diff hist −13 George M. Dallas Tried to improve clarity and delete excess verbiage.
• 21:3821:38, 27 December 2010 diff hist −584 George M. Dallas Deleted 1 of 2 mentions of Scottish ancestry, information on his grandfather, who seems not to have been especially important; consolidated organization.

20 December 2010

• 22:0422:04, 20 December 2010 diff hist −13 m Carrie Borzillo Deleted the descriptor "novelist," since her books are non-fiction or advice-oriented.

14 December 2010

• 05:4505:45, 14 December 2010 diff hist +8 m Carrie Borzillo cleaned up a typo or two and made some stylistic enhancements
• 05:4105:41, 14 December 2010 diff hist −1,558 Carrie Borzillo Changed gushy, self-promoting tone, eliminated a couple of funny malapropisms ("most influenced," "dispersed advice"), eliminated redundant info on someone who after all is not a major figure.

30 November 2010

• 12:4112:41, 30 November 2010 diff hist −10 m Medea Benjamin No edit summary
• 03:4303:43, 30 November 2010 diff hist −86 Medea Benjamin Cleaned up some excess verbiage that I missed in the last edit.
• 03:3703:37, 30 November 2010 diff hist −3,244 Medea Benjamin Cut superfluous factoirs, cut verbiage esp. from the controversies section: she is not Chairman Mao and we don't need word-for-word coverage of her sectarian battles with marginal players on the left
• 03:2203:22, 30 November 2010 diff hist −39 John Steakley changed verbs to past tense since he's now deceased, (in my humble opinion) improved organization and clarity, albeit improvements were minor

29 September 2010

• 22:4122:41, 29 September 2010 diff hist −193 Jodie Evans added some text to make POV more neutral (in the process deleting a statement that I agree with, but it's NOT neutral!), corrected a typo, made a minor copyedit Tag: references removed
• 22:3922:39, 29 September 2010 diff hist +60 Jodie Evans added some text to make POV more neutral, corrected a typo, made a minor copyedit

30 August 2010

• 04:5904:59, 30 August 2010 diff hist +279 Talk:Gaza flotilla raid →"Purported" does NOT imply an NPOV: new section
• 04:4504:45, 30 August 2010 diff hist +2 Kevin Danaher (activist) Added quotes around "social justice" to increase point-of-view neutrality: not everyone defines "social justice" in the same way as Danaher/

29 August 2010

• 18:3518:35, 29 August 2010 diff hist +2 Medea Benjamin clean up two typos
• 16:1216:12, 29 August 2010 diff hist −2,872 Medea Benjamin Made point of view more neutral; deleted sentence about her fluent Spanish -- is this unusual let along unique?; condensed description of protests, do we need details on EACH?
• 15:5015:50, 29 August 2010 diff hist +2 m Jodie Evans Corrected three typographical errors
• 15:4915:49, 29 August 2010 diff hist +309 Jodie Evans Edited prior text to attain stylistic consistency and render point-of-view more neutral; added a sentence about controversy over Evans' alleged remarks.