User contributions for Throckmorpheus

17 November 2024

• 17:5317:53, 17 November 2024 diff hist −33 m Jane Goodall →Possibility of undiscovered species: Removed subsection, moving contents into 'Personal life'. (I'm not exactly sure whether it belongs here, but its not related to her work, and its much more in the realm of 'dogs are her favourite animal' than the realm of 'may have induced a chimpanzee war'.) Tag: Visual edit
• 17:4317:43, 17 November 2024 diff hist −242 Jane Goodall Removed 'Names instead of numbers' subsection of 'Criticism', instead incorporating its contents into the related part of the 'Research at Gombe Stream National Park' subsection of 'Work' Tag: Visual edit
• 17:3317:33, 17 November 2024 diff hist −31 m Jane Goodall →Radio Four Today programme: Removed section, moved contents to awards and recognition. Not sure that its exactly where it belongs but it certainly makes more sense than being its own one-sentence section. Tag: Visual edit
• 17:0917:09, 17 November 2024 diff hist +157 Jane Goodall →Feeding stations: Removed 'recent' from reference to study from 2002, added update notice about outdated follow-up studies not reflecting current scientific consensus on the effect of feeding on chimpanzee warfare. Tag: Visual edit

12 November 2024

• 19:0919:09, 12 November 2024 diff hist +675 Talk:Israel–United States relations →Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 12 November 2024: new section
• 17:5117:51, 12 November 2024 diff hist −3 m Haredi Judaism →Military: Re-ordered two sentences to put events in chronological order. Tag: Visual edit

27 October 2024

• 00:2900:29, 27 October 2024 diff hist +1 m Louis Philippe I Correct 'Jacques Laffite' (the formula one driver) to 'Jacques Laffitte' (the 19th century French politician) in succession section of infobox. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

17 October 2024

• 23:1723:17, 17 October 2024 diff hist +1,157 Talk:Captain Thunderbolt →Photograph - Hat Added?: Reply current Tag: Reply

19 September 2024

• 15:1615:16, 19 September 2024 diff hist −1 m C++11 →Rvalue references and move constructors: Corrected 'an' to 'a' in front of 'const' Tag: Visual edit

22 August 2024

• 23:5923:59, 22 August 2024 diff hist −14 m House of Plantagenet Fixed confusingly phrased sentence at end of introduction Tag: Visual edit

19 August 2024

• 15:0915:09, 19 August 2024 diff hist +226 m Hubble's law →Hubble time: Added citation to claim that the Hubble time is the age the universe would have had if explansion was linear Tag: Visual edit
• 15:0715:07, 19 August 2024 diff hist +680 Hubble volume Rephrased for clarity and to explain why the Hubble time value is slightly different from the age of the universe, added citation Tag: Visual edit

15 August 2024

• 14:4614:46, 15 August 2024 diff hist −3 m Holographic principle Rephrased sentence about the berkenstein bound in the second paragraph for grammatical correctness and clarity. Tag: Visual edit: Switched

6 August 2024

• 21:5921:59, 6 August 2024 diff hist +3 m Roger Ailes Fixed missing 'is' in final paragraph of introduction. Tag: Visual edit

26 July 2024

• 00:5800:58, 26 July 2024 diff hist −43 Objective-collapse theory →Violation of the principle of the conservation of energy: General copy editing for readability and tone. Added citation needed to uncited discussion of potential solution to the problem. Tag: Visual edit

22 July 2024

• 23:3223:32, 22 July 2024 diff hist −29 Lou Wilson (actor) →Web series: Updated filmography to reflect his second appearance on Make Some Noise. Tag: Visual edit

11 July 2024

• 00:4800:48, 11 July 2024 diff hist +304 m Al Roker →Early life: Added a citation to his father's name as already cited article doesn't actually say it Tag: Visual edit

15 June 2024

• 23:0823:08, 15 June 2024 diff hist −10 m Beowulf (2007 film) →Critical response: Removed [sic] after the word 'realer' in a quotation; realer is perfectly valid, if informal. Tag: Visual edit

27 February 2024

• 12:2012:20, 27 February 2024 diff hist −9 m NixOS Linked 'free and open source' to the FOSS page instead of the free software and open source software pages separately. Tag: Visual edit
• 12:1312:13, 27 February 2024 diff hist +1 m Eris (dwarf planet) →Size, mass and density: Corrected 'tha' to 'that'. Tag: Visual edit

29 January 2024

• 04:5204:52, 29 January 2024 diff hist −1 m Arts and Media School, Islington Removed extraneous comma in opening sentence. current Tag: Visual edit

24 January 2024

• 02:0602:06, 24 January 2024 diff hist −11 Leg shaving →Women: Changed 'the majority of' to 'many' as claiming the majority of women do something without any form of citation is just silly. current Tag: Visual edit
• 01:5901:59, 24 January 2024 diff hist −16 m Electric shaver →Razor vs. trimmer: Slightly rephrased to remove extraneous 'but' and improve flow. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:0601:06, 24 January 2024 diff hist −1 m Bikini Changed 'mid to later' to 'mid to late'. Tag: Visual edit

23 January 2024

• 14:4014:40, 23 January 2024 diff hist +150 Bounded function Reformatted additional maths formulae which I missed in my previous edit. Also corrected symbols used for the real and complex sets. Tag: Visual edit
• 14:3414:34, 23 January 2024 diff hist 0 m Bounded function →Related notions: Replaced incorrect usage of colon to join two main clauses with semicolon. Tag: Visual edit
• 14:3214:32, 23 January 2024 diff hist +301 Bounded function Replaced raw text representations of maths formulae with properly formatted formulae Tag: Visual edit

22 January 2024

• 22:5422:54, 22 January 2024 diff hist −11 William Kunstler →Other work: Removed inexplicable inline link to Encyclopedia Brittanica page, replaced it with wikilinks to Jonestown page. Tag: Visual edit

4 January 2024

• 22:4922:49, 4 January 2024 diff hist −1 m Hipparcos →The Pleiades distance controversy: Removed extraneous space before citation Tag: Visual edit
• 11:5611:56, 4 January 2024 diff hist +3 m Operation Plumbbob →Missing steel bore cap: Fixed missing comma before concessive subclause, slightly rephrased for tone. Tag: Visual edit
• 11:4811:48, 4 January 2024 diff hist −22 m Operation Plumbbob →Missing steel bore cap: Removed repeat citation after 'Pascal-B nuclear test' as the same citation appears later in the sentence after the date, and both the date citations mention the name Pascal-B. Also removed extraneous comma between 'nuclear test' and 'of August 1957'. Tag: Visual edit

21 December 2023

• 17:4017:40, 21 December 2023 diff hist +820 Radancy →History: Attempted to clarify relationship to Monster Worldwide, including changing founding date to 2006 as reflected in sources, as Monster Worldwide is the entity which was founded in 1967 and Radancy is the entity which split off. Tag: Visual edit
• 17:1317:13, 21 December 2023 diff hist +656 Monster Worldwide Copy-edited merged content from Radancy, clarified relationship to Radancy, removed outdated information, added better sources. Thus removed multiple issues template as both the problems have been resolved. Tag: Visual edit
• 15:3015:30, 21 December 2023 diff hist +1,751 Monster Worldwide Merged content from Radancy to here. Tag: Visual edit
• 15:2415:24, 21 December 2023 diff hist −186 Monster Worldwide Added source for aquisition, created history section, removed unsourced and largely irrelevant information. Tag: Visual edit
• 14:5414:54, 21 December 2023 diff hist 0 Monster Worldwide Undid revision 1191093588 by Throckmorpheus (talk) as it was a mistake Tag: Undo
• 14:4914:49, 21 December 2023 diff hist 0 Monster Worldwide Corrected founded date in infobox from 1967 to 1997 as stated in the article text. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 14:4614:46, 21 December 2023 diff hist +22 Greenland plate Clarified in the introduction that the greenland plate is a microplate. Tag: Visual edit

20 December 2023

• 21:0121:01, 20 December 2023 diff hist −1,397 Fastweb Removed broken, unreliable and primary sources. Added new sources. Rephrased for encyclopedic tone. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
• 07:0207:02, 20 December 2023 diff hist +26 Name reaction Rephrased for more encyclopedic tone and to clarify to what information the citation is being applied. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:5401:54, 20 December 2023 diff hist −1 m Warfarin →History: Clarified wording around coumarin etymology slightly. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:5001:50, 20 December 2023 diff hist +197 m Dipteryx odorata Added source to etymology of genus name. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:4001:40, 20 December 2023 diff hist −79 Coumarin →Etymology: Rewrote to remove tangent about the etymology of tonka (seemingly resulting from this section being directly copied from the page on Dipteryx odorata) and added source for the etymology. Tag: Visual edit
• 01:3601:36, 20 December 2023 diff hist +210 m Warfarin →History: Clarified origin of Courmarin from 'Indian' to 'Tupi', added source. Tag: Visual edit
• 00:5300:53, 20 December 2023 diff hist +18 m Dipteryx odorata Linked 'Tupi' to the Tupi language page. Tag: Visual edit
• 00:1200:12, 20 December 2023 diff hist +29 m Nazirite →Protestant perspectives: Clarified use of 'charismatic' to describe Lou Engle as a Charismatic Christian by capitalising it and turning it into a link to the page on Charismatic Christianity. Tag: Visual edit

14 December 2023

• 22:5122:51, 14 December 2023 diff hist 0 m Earth Circumference section of infobox - Moved 'equatorial' and 'meridional' out of the preceding brackets. Tag: Visual edit: Switched

23 November 2023

• 03:4303:43, 23 November 2023 diff hist +23 m Charles W. Chesnutt →Marriage and family: Added that Susan Perry was also a teacher, added additional source for their marriage, cleaned up phrasing slightly. Tag: Visual edit
• 03:3503:35, 23 November 2023 diff hist −17 m Charles W. Chesnutt →Marriage and family: Removed inexplicable 'Perry or petty?' line from end of section. Tag: Visual edit

8 November 2023

• 18:2418:24, 8 November 2023 diff hist −1 m Leon Trotsky →Relations with Lenin: Removed stray comma from first sentence Tag: Visual edit