Talk:HSwMS Clas Fleming

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Review: March 18, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. Z1720 (talk) 15:45, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:HSwMS Clas Fleming/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Z1720 (talk · contribs) 17:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing article. Comments will be given below. Z1720 (talk) 17:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Prose:

"before she was began a reconstruction that installed" This sentence needs to be reworked.
"the first ship to be so equipped." First ship in the world, or in Sweden's navy? Clarify in the article
" enemy coast under cover of darkness" -> enemy coast at night while the enemy's visibility would be low.
Split the first sentence of "Background and description" to avoid a run-on
"the beginning of World War 2 in 1939" The beginning of the article used "World War II". This should be consistent.
I conducted some copy-editing while I read, feel free to revert if they are not helpful.

Source review:

No concerns with the sources.
No earwig concerns
References are offline or in another language, so accepting as AGF

Image review:

File:HMS Clas Fleming.jpg, File:Clas Fleming with two funnels.jpg, and File:Clas Fleming during WW2.jpg need US-pd tags.
Per MOS:ALT suggest adding alt text

Those are my thoughts. Ping me when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 18:17, 16 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720: Thanks for the review; see if my changes are acceptable.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:27, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All concerns have been resolved, so this is a pass. Congratulations. Z1720 (talk) 15:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.