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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Significa liberdade was:
Some of the article's organization and formatting could be adjusted to follow common Wikipedia formats better. Specifically, the lead needs to be revised to provide an overview of key information about the topic.
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Hi there! To elaborate on my comment, I think it would be beneficial to use a format similar to the one used in your other articles: lead, background, crime, investigation, trial. Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 21:40, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
