User talk:Ajohn128/Tchoupitoulas Street
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[edit]This looks like it will develop into a really strong article. I like the structure you've established for yourself. As for the content that is already here, remember to slow down and explore the ideas you are sharing more thoroughly, even if you need to go out and look for additional sources. The paragraph under History has a lot of great stuff, but it could be two our three longer paragraphs instead of one rushed one.
While that picture of Lafon is great, you can't use it. There is no indication on the original web site that the creator has given anyone permission to you it. Also, for the caption, you are plagiarizing that cite. You need to be much more careful with this kind of thing. That website (300nola.com) would make a great SOURCE for your article. You could paraphrase some of the details about Lafon's life for the History section of your article. But you can't use the image, and you can't simply copy and paste.