User talk:Fadly kurniadi

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January 2022

Hello, I'm Bovineboy2008. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Tall Girl 2, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. BOVINEBOY2008 10:06, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Kharisma Starvision Plus moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Kharisma Starvision Plus, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. PRAXIDICAE🌈 12:20, 24 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Kharisma Starvision Plus

Hello, Fadly kurniadi. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Kharisma Starvision Plus, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 13:01, 24 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Judika (January 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Lopifalko was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

E.g. "he marries the love of his life on his own 35th birthday ... Ever since then, Judika and Duma Riris' house hold, always looks harmonious and far from bad news. They are blessed with two children..."

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Lopifalko (talk) 07:48, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Fadly kurniadi! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Lopifalko (talk) 07:48, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Lopifalko: Thanks for the review. Is the mistake only in that sentence? Fadly kurniadi (talk) 07:51, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I gave that as an example of the lascivious tone that appears throughout the article. -Lopifalko (talk) 08:30, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

On second thoughts, there is not so much of this, though it does exist. The main issue is the use of the English language and the excessive detail. -Lopifalko (talk) 08:33, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @@Lopifalko! I've tried to edit it. Is it still not neutral and too detailed? Fadly kurniadi (talk) 09:39, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Well done for what you achieved so far. I think you should give it another run through with the same attitude as there remains more, e.g. in "established a record label company", "company" is unnecessary. There remain English language issues too. -Lopifalko (talk) 09:44, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the advice. I will try it. Fadly kurniadi (talk) 09:46, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Judika has been accepted

Judika, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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UtherSRG (talk) 11:39, 5 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Kharisma Starvision Plus

Hello, Fadly kurniadi. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Kharisma Starvision Plus".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Hey man im josh (talk) 12:49, 24 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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