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  • curprev 19:4119:41, 30 May 2018 193.127.238.42 talk 11,304 bytes −66 The second half of the last sentence on the 08 financial crisis was ambiguous and did not contribute to the brief comparison section. The sentence should probably be improved more. undo

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  • curprev 06:1406:14, 13 March 2018 Blether talk contribs 11,368 bytes +57 The sense of the sentence as it stands is that all the many routes were purchased by a single larger company. Nor does the noun phrase "many of the routes" jibe with the final "it". The "each was" is one way to resolve the mess. Another would be to re-write the sentence, maybe as two separate sentences, or even three. Either way, improvement is desperately needed, for grammar and for style. undo

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