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== Awards ==
== Plot ==

This website provides a comprehensive list of every award this film was nominated for [http://www.movie-collection.com/movie/the-fifth-element/awards]. I'm not sure if it meets [[WP:RS]], but if for nothing else i've found it very handy as a way of knowing what awards to search for better references for. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 06:27, 15 May 2013 (UTC)
:I've since used the above reference, along with the reference mentioned below that is used to back up that the film won a Bogey award, an inline citations that the film was nominated for an additional 4 Cesar awards (the article had good references for the 3 Cesar awards it won, just no other references for the other 4 nominations). If both of these sources are deemed to be unreliable I will simply remove both of them and the mentions that the film received the additional 4 Cesar nominations. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 01:07, 20 May 2013 (UTC)
:The Cesar Awards now list all their previous nomination and winners on their official website - so i've ditched the old, questionable reference and cited their official website instead. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 10:26, 21 November 2014 (UTC)

This reliable reference states the film won a [[Lumière Award]]: [http://movies.msn.com/movies/movie-awards-and-nominations/the-fifth-element/?ipp=15], I'm just in the process or determining whether this award itself meets notability guidelines. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 02:18, 16 May 2013 (UTC)
:I'm almost certain the Lumière Award and the [[Prix Lumière]] are in fact, the same award, and until I am told otherwise I am linking the award in the article to Prix Lumière. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 01:55, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
:They were the same award. Someone else has merged the articles. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 10:22, 21 November 2014 (UTC)


At the end of the plot section, the article currently says "Dallas confesses his love for Leeloo and kisses her. In response, Leeloo combines the power of the stones as the Fifth Element and releases the divine light on the great evil." Although the script broadly points to Leeloo as the Fifth Element, it always seemed clear to me that it wasn't ''her''. The Fifth Element is Love. This is supported by the priest's quiet exhortation to "Tell her, Corben."
Awards this film supposedly was nominated for or won currently not mentioned in the article:
*Nominated for the [[Italian National Syndicate of Film Journalists]] Silver Ribbon award for Best Foreign Director (according to IMDb [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0119116/awards?ref_=tt_awd])
*<strike>Nominated for the [[Blockbuster Entertainment Award]] for Favorite Female Newcomer (Milla Jovovich)</strike> Found reference.
*It won the [[Bogey Award]] in Silver - According to IMDb and these not so reliable sources [http://cinedat.org/filme/das_fuenfte_element][http://okino.ru/film/awards/8062][http://www.eofftv.com/c/cin/cinquieme_element%20_main.htm]. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 01:55, 19 May 2013 (UTC) The award itself is also of debated notability.
*The film received 12 nominations at the 1997 [[Online Film & Television Association]] awards, 2 of which it won. [http://ofta.oscarguy.com/Awards/Film/1997.html]. Once again, the award itself is not tremendously notable. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 10:22, 21 November 2014 (UTC)


Suggested replacement text: "Dallas confesses his love for Leeloo and kisses her. Love is the Fifth Element. It activates Leeloo, and allows her to combine the power of the stones and release a powerful light that destroys the great evil." [[User:AceNZ|AceNZ]] ([[User talk:AceNZ|talk]]) 03:41, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
== Budget ==
:Except that it's never ''stated'' in the film that Love is the Fifth Element, so it would be inappropriate for us to state it. Our role is to recount what occurs in the film, not inject our own interpretations.
:I would, however, be amenable to dropping the part about the Fifth Element altogether. [[User:Doniago|DonIago]] ([[User talk:Doniago|talk]]) 04:10, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
::Agreed. We can't say that The Fifth Element is love since that's never explicitly stated, though we can drop the mention of Leeloo being The Fifth Element. I've just done that. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 22:09, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
:::Uh, when Corbin joins Leeloo in their sleep chamber (or whatever it's called) on the spaceship that is going to take them to Fhloston Paradise, Leeloo surprises Dallas by now being able to speak English. Basically, the first thing she says to him is, "You no trouble. Me... Fifth element... supreme being. Me protect you." Apparently, Leeloo believes she is the fifth element and who is going to argue with a "supreme being." <!-- Template:Unsigned IP --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/2601:801:4280:a710:64e4:5:c7b8:5110|2601:801:4280:a710:64e4:5:c7b8:5110]] ([[User talk:2601:801:4280:a710:64e4:5:c7b8:5110#top|talk]]) </small>
::::What does that have to do with anything? It's well established before that that Leeloo is considered a 'Fifth Element', but it never clarifies exactly what that means. I stand by the current text in the article. [[User:Damien Linnane|Damien Linnane]] ([[User talk:Damien Linnane|talk]]) 09:31, 10 April 2021 (UTC)


::::: Citeable source: Susan Hayward, p. 143 of ''The Seeing Century'' (Google books online) says "The question becomes why after all, in Besson's film, is the fifth element a woman? ... [T]he fifth element alone can save the world ...."[[User:Kdammers|Kdammers]] ([[User talk:Kdammers|talk]]) 23:03, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
In my search for references for this article I have noticed that several different figures have been given for the films budget. The following references are currently used somewhere in the article. I am going to continue to go with the figure of $90 million, since that figure has been found the most.
::::::Thanks for sharing. Google Books only offers a snippet preview, which itself does not show the answer to the question [https://www.google.com.au/books/edition/The_Seeing_Century/cfZNEAAAQBAJ]. Keep in mind that even if it did, the source would only have so much weight, since the author has no direct connection to the film. If Besson explicitly clarified what he considers the Fifth Element to be, since he wrote and directed the film, that would be taken as hard fact. At best, this source (assuming it answers the question, which may have been hypothetical), could only be used to say 'Susan Hayward interprets The Fifth Element to be XYZ'. [[User:Damien Linnane|Damien Linnane]] ([[User talk:Damien Linnane|talk]]) 00:40, 24 July 2023 (UTC)
*50 million: [http://books.google.com.au/books?id=9uBnZHmg3VYC&pg=PA58&dq=%22fifth+element%22+expensive+french&hl=en&sa=X&ei=uLGUUb-hFuKiigfcuYDABg&ved=0CEIQ6AEwAw#v=onepage&q=%22fifth%20element%22%20expensive%20french&f=false]
*70 million: [http://variety.com/1997/film/reviews/the-fifth-element-1200449952/]
*80 million: [http://books.google.com.au/books?id=pPxxGelHFLcC&pg=PA382&dq=%22fifth+element%22+french+films&hl=en&sa=X&ei=jyyPUfv2FeyXiAeV94CYDw&ved=0CC4Q6AEwAA#v=onepage&q=%22fifth%20element%22%20french%20films&f=false][http://www.industrycentral.net/director_interviews/LB01.HTM]
*90 million: [http://www.dvdjournal.com/reviews/f/fifthelement_ue.shtml][http://www.rogerebert.com/reviews/the-fifth-element-1997][http://articles.latimes.com/1997-05-08/entertainment/ca-56524_1_luc-besson][http://www.slate.com/articles/arts/movies/1997/05/unmitigated_gaul.html]
*95 million: [http://www.the-numbers.com/movies/1997/FELEM.php] (not currently used in article)
*100 million: [http://www.filmtracks.com/titles/fifth_element.html] [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 14:44, 28 May 2013 (UTC)
*$90 million is the number given in Luc Besson's film diary.[[User:LeeloosGotAGun|LeeloosGotAGun]] ([[User talk:LeeloosGotAGun|talk]]) 01:31, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
For the record, Luc Besson's film diary refers to the book "The Story of the Fifth Element" by Luc Besson, published in 1997, the first half of which is Besson's diary entries on production. Given this fact I think sticking with the figure of $90 million is definitely the right call. If someone could tell me what page number the figure of $90 million appears on (so that I can use it as a reference for the article), that would be appreciated. Thanks. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 00:43, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
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==Song reference==
== Interpretation of Ending 2 ==
*https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Naked_(Ava_Max_song)
[[User:Kenixkil|Kenixkil]] ([[User talk:Kenixkil|talk]]) 01:20, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
:Interesting; thanks for sharing. Her outfits in the music video are clearly inspired by The Fifth Element, as is supported by the references in that article. I'm not convinced this needs to be mentioned in this article though. Typically mentions like this go in 'Legacy' sections, but I think it would look a bit out of place in this one at present. Happy to hear other opinions on it though. [[User:Damien Linnane|Damien Linnane]] ([[User talk:Damien Linnane|talk]]) 01:46, 15 December 2021 (UTC)


== Found paragraph that may need splitting ==
I actually have a small hintquestion: at the end of the film the Evil/weapons planet is stopped just in front of the earth and is "frozen", you see the earth, the moon in orbit and these very evil planet that (! ) looks the same as the Earth's moon .... It should be indicated that the Earth's moon was already a stopped evil weapon planet, too? ... that would even make some sense: eventually the whole thing is supposed to be repeated every 5000 years. (However, then humans/aliens are probably are in the fight against Eivl much more successful when they have left only one other "moons" ... :-). Or evil can be stopped further away and perhaps all the asteroids in the solar system belonged to it? :-)
''Ich habe eigentlich nur einen fragenden kleinen Hinweis zum Schluss: als Das Böse/der fliegende feurige Waffenplanet kurz vor der Erde von den 5 Elementen gestoppt und "eingefroren" harmlos gemacht wird, sieht man die Erde, den Mond im Orbit und eben diesen Bösen-Planeten, der (!) genauso aussieht wie der Erdmond.... Sollte damit geg. angedeutet werden, dass der Erdmond auch schon so eine gestoppte Böse-Waffe war? ... das hätte sogar einen gewissen Sinn: schließlich soll ja das Ganze alle 5000 jahre sich wiederholen. (Allerdings sind wohl dann die Menschen/Aliens im Kampf dagegen sonst viel viel erfolgreicher, wenn sie bis auf einen sonst keine "Monde" hinterlassen haben... :-). Oder kann das Böse auch viel viel früher viel viel weiter weg gestoppt werden und etwa die ganzen Asteroiden im Sonnensystem gehörten dazu?''--[[Special:Contributions/77.176.147.161|77.176.147.161]] ([[User talk:77.176.147.161|talk]]) 22:02, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
:Please note that new Talk page threads should be listed at the bottom of an article. As to the subject at hand, this would constitute [[WP:OR|original research]] unless a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] has discussed it. [[User:Doniago|DonIago]] ([[User talk:Doniago|talk]]) 14:29, 1 July 2013 (UTC)


The first paragraph of the "[[The_Fifth_Element#Production|[p]roduction]]" section seems overly long to me (footnotes removed):
== Gemini Croquette ==


{{quote|As a teenager, Besson envisioned the world of The Fifth Element in an attempt to alleviate boredom. He began writing the script when he was 16, though the film was not released in cinemas until he was 38. The original storyline was set in the year 2300 and was about a "nobody" named Zaltman Bleros (later renamed Korben Dallas) who wins a trip to the Club Med resort on the planet Fhloston Paradise in the Angel constellation. There, he meets Leeloo, a "sand-girl" who has the "beauty of youth" despite being over 2,000 years old. Besson continued to work on the storyline for years; by the time his documentary film Atlantis was released in 1991, he had a 400-page script. Nicolas Seydoux and Patrice Ledoux from Gaumont were the first people to take on the project. In November 1991, while looking for actors for the film, Besson met French comics creators Jean Giraud and Jean-Claude Mézières and recruited them for the film's production design. Giraud and Mézières's comics were a major source of inspiration for Besson's futuristic New York City. Mézières wrote the book The Circles of Power, which contains a character named S'Traks, who drives a flying taxicab through the congested air traffic of the vast metropolis on the planet Rubanis. Mézières showed images of the flying taxi to Besson, who was inspired to change the background of Korben Dallas from a worker in a rocket-ship factory to that of a taxi driver who flies his cab around a Rubanis-inspired futuristic New York City. Five other artists were hired for the project, and Jean-Paul Gaultier was hired to design the costumes. The team spent a year creating over 8,000 drawings, during which time Besson approached both Bruce Willis and Mel Gibson for the lead role. Willis expressed interest, though he was reluctant to take on the role as the film was considered risky after his previous two films, Hudson Hawk and Billy Bathgate, had been received poorly; Gibson eventually turned down the role. While the team impressed film companies with their designs, they struggled to find one willing to take on a budget of almost $100 million. In December 1992, production stopped without any prior warning, and the team disbanded.}}
Who portrayed this character, and should it be mentioned in the article? I think she appeared in the [[Macarena (song)|Macarena]] [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XiBYM6g8Tck music video]. Please notify replies on my talk page. <small style="font-size:85%;">[[User:Twinsday|serioushat]]</small> 11:10, 10 August 2013 (UTC)
:The latter would seem to be [[WP:TRIVIA]] unless a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] took note of it. [[User:Doniago|DonIago]] ([[User talk:Doniago|talk]]) 13:04, 12 August 2013 (UTC)


Could anyone please tell me where a good place to split it would be?--[[User:Thylacine24|Thylacine24]] ([[User talk:Thylacine24|talk]]) 00:46, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
== Fhloston ==
:Personally I can't say I see what the problem is. I don't see a need to split it, nor a great place to do so. The paragraph stays focused and is consistent with subsequent paragraphs, so in my opinion splitting it well would probably require rewording and reorganising the entire section. The first paragraph is only slightly longer than the second paragraph after all. Also just for future reference in general, I don't see much point in copy pasting an entire paragraph onto a talk page to refer to it. Part of a paragraph might be appropriate to highlight what you're referring to, but people can easily find the entire first paragraph of the production section if they want to see what you're talking about, so pasting it here just bloats the talk page. [[User:Damien Linnane|Damien Linnane]] ([[User talk:Damien Linnane|talk]]) 01:31, 18 December 2021 (UTC)


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Fhloston and [[Phlogiston_theory|Phlogiston]]? A coincidence? [[User:Kortoso|Kortoso]] ([[User talk:Kortoso|talk]]) 22:10, 9 July 2014 (UTC)


Hi, re: ''Undid revision [[Special:Diff/1257574079|1257574079]] by [[Special:Contributions/Lux-Spiritus|Lux-Spiritus]] ([[User talk:Lux-Spiritus|talk]])''
:Interesting, well spotted! But you'll need a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] to add any information about this to the actual article of course. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 11:31, 10 July 2014 (UTC)


[No quibble re: name revert, thanks; I'd mistakenly thought the name 'Korben' was already in place, 'matched' it in error] re: Plot expansion: ''<nowiki/>'Dallas attempts to rouse the unconscious Leeloo by planting a kiss, she immediately awakens, and putting Dallas' gun to his head states, "Seno akta gammat!" which Cornelius translates as, "Never without my permission.' -'' I thought tied in with the end paragraph in the sub-section? - ''<nowiki/>'Dallas declares his love..' -'' But I could be alone in that view, & I realise that too much in a summary prevents it from being a summary.
:: Roger that, and thanks. Perhaps this will evince a reputable source. [[User:Kortoso|Kortoso]] ([[User talk:Kortoso|talk]]) 17:09, 14 July 2014 (UTC)
:: Probably IMDB is better place to discuss this, but among early theorists/alchemists, another word for Phlogiston was "the fifth element". [[User:Kortoso|Kortoso]] ([[User talk:Kortoso|talk]]) 17:25, 14 July 2014 (UTC)


<nowiki>*</nowiki>Perhaps the '''She introduces herself as Leeloominaï Lekatariba-Lamina-Tchaï Ekbat De Sebat - Dallas is unable to pronounce this lengthy title; it is shortened to 'Leeloo.'<nowiki/>'' - could be served by putting the character's full name in the 'Cast' section?
== Themes (Gender) ==


I gather from this section that this film is bad and stuff, because it "erases" women and reinforces gender stereotypes, through the nefarious means of ''featuring men and women in various roles, some of whom are competent or interesting, and some who are not''. Sheesh. These opinions are referenced, but are they notable? Because if not, then this section is devoting a lot of text to saying stuff that is not only absurd (in my opinion), but fringe. [[User:Wardog|Iapetus]] ([[User talk:Wardog|talk]]) 12:49, 2 April 2015 (UTC)


[[User:Lux-Spiritus|Radium-13]] ([[User talk:Lux-Spiritus|talk]]) 23:33, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
:I had trouble finding information on themes for this film; this is pretty much all I could come up with. That being said, I don't think there's anything wrong with the gender comments. It's only one paragraph and it contains two sources; one from a notable feminist journal and one from a notable academic publisher. Perhaps the feminist journal could be considered fringe, but I don't think they are given undue weight, and they make observations similar to a book from a mainstream academic publisher. I don't think the take home message from this film paragraph is that it's 'bad', I just accept that it plays into some gender stereotypes. Knowing that doesn't make me enjoy the film any less. If anyone else can find reliable sources on other themes in the film I would be more than happy to write new paragraphs based on the sources myself, so that the gender paragraph has less prominence in the themes section. I would like to hear more opinions on this though. [[User:Freikorp|Freikorp]] ([[User talk:Freikorp|talk]]) 13:10, 2 April 2015 (UTC)


:Its more the point that per [[WP:FILMPLOT]] and [[WP:NOT#PLOT]], summaries of films should remain concise and no more than 700 words. This scene is not essential to the plot, nor is the full name of Leeloo. [[User:Masem|M<span style="font-variant: small-caps">asem</span>]] ([[User Talk:Masem|t]]) 23:37, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
::I agree that the critique is unfair and invalid, but if there aren't any other scholarly analyses, what are you gonna do? [[User:Brutannica|Brutannica]] ([[User talk:Brutannica|talk]]) 15:19, 2 April 2015 (UTC)

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At the end of the plot section, the article currently says "Dallas confesses his love for Leeloo and kisses her. In response, Leeloo combines the power of the stones as the Fifth Element and releases the divine light on the great evil." Although the script broadly points to Leeloo as the Fifth Element, it always seemed clear to me that it wasn't her. The Fifth Element is Love. This is supported by the priest's quiet exhortation to "Tell her, Corben."

Suggested replacement text: "Dallas confesses his love for Leeloo and kisses her. Love is the Fifth Element. It activates Leeloo, and allows her to combine the power of the stones and release a powerful light that destroys the great evil." AceNZ (talk) 03:41, 5 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Except that it's never stated in the film that Love is the Fifth Element, so it would be inappropriate for us to state it. Our role is to recount what occurs in the film, not inject our own interpretations.
I would, however, be amenable to dropping the part about the Fifth Element altogether. DonIago (talk) 04:10, 5 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed. We can't say that The Fifth Element is love since that's never explicitly stated, though we can drop the mention of Leeloo being The Fifth Element. I've just done that. Freikorp (talk) 22:09, 5 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Uh, when Corbin joins Leeloo in their sleep chamber (or whatever it's called) on the spaceship that is going to take them to Fhloston Paradise, Leeloo surprises Dallas by now being able to speak English. Basically, the first thing she says to him is, "You no trouble. Me... Fifth element... supreme being. Me protect you." Apparently, Leeloo believes she is the fifth element and who is going to argue with a "supreme being." — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:801:4280:a710:64e4:5:c7b8:5110 (talk)
What does that have to do with anything? It's well established before that that Leeloo is considered a 'Fifth Element', but it never clarifies exactly what that means. I stand by the current text in the article. Damien Linnane (talk) 09:31, 10 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Citeable source: Susan Hayward, p. 143 of The Seeing Century (Google books online) says "The question becomes why after all, in Besson's film, is the fifth element a woman? ... [T]he fifth element alone can save the world ...."Kdammers (talk) 23:03, 23 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for sharing. Google Books only offers a snippet preview, which itself does not show the answer to the question [1]. Keep in mind that even if it did, the source would only have so much weight, since the author has no direct connection to the film. If Besson explicitly clarified what he considers the Fifth Element to be, since he wrote and directed the film, that would be taken as hard fact. At best, this source (assuming it answers the question, which may have been hypothetical), could only be used to say 'Susan Hayward interprets The Fifth Element to be XYZ'. Damien Linnane (talk) 00:40, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Song reference

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Kenixkil (talk) 01:20, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Interesting; thanks for sharing. Her outfits in the music video are clearly inspired by The Fifth Element, as is supported by the references in that article. I'm not convinced this needs to be mentioned in this article though. Typically mentions like this go in 'Legacy' sections, but I think it would look a bit out of place in this one at present. Happy to hear other opinions on it though. Damien Linnane (talk) 01:46, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Found paragraph that may need splitting

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The first paragraph of the "[p]roduction" section seems overly long to me (footnotes removed):

As a teenager, Besson envisioned the world of The Fifth Element in an attempt to alleviate boredom. He began writing the script when he was 16, though the film was not released in cinemas until he was 38. The original storyline was set in the year 2300 and was about a "nobody" named Zaltman Bleros (later renamed Korben Dallas) who wins a trip to the Club Med resort on the planet Fhloston Paradise in the Angel constellation. There, he meets Leeloo, a "sand-girl" who has the "beauty of youth" despite being over 2,000 years old. Besson continued to work on the storyline for years; by the time his documentary film Atlantis was released in 1991, he had a 400-page script. Nicolas Seydoux and Patrice Ledoux from Gaumont were the first people to take on the project. In November 1991, while looking for actors for the film, Besson met French comics creators Jean Giraud and Jean-Claude Mézières and recruited them for the film's production design. Giraud and Mézières's comics were a major source of inspiration for Besson's futuristic New York City. Mézières wrote the book The Circles of Power, which contains a character named S'Traks, who drives a flying taxicab through the congested air traffic of the vast metropolis on the planet Rubanis. Mézières showed images of the flying taxi to Besson, who was inspired to change the background of Korben Dallas from a worker in a rocket-ship factory to that of a taxi driver who flies his cab around a Rubanis-inspired futuristic New York City. Five other artists were hired for the project, and Jean-Paul Gaultier was hired to design the costumes. The team spent a year creating over 8,000 drawings, during which time Besson approached both Bruce Willis and Mel Gibson for the lead role. Willis expressed interest, though he was reluctant to take on the role as the film was considered risky after his previous two films, Hudson Hawk and Billy Bathgate, had been received poorly; Gibson eventually turned down the role. While the team impressed film companies with their designs, they struggled to find one willing to take on a budget of almost $100 million. In December 1992, production stopped without any prior warning, and the team disbanded.

Could anyone please tell me where a good place to split it would be?--Thylacine24 (talk) 00:46, 18 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Personally I can't say I see what the problem is. I don't see a need to split it, nor a great place to do so. The paragraph stays focused and is consistent with subsequent paragraphs, so in my opinion splitting it well would probably require rewording and reorganising the entire section. The first paragraph is only slightly longer than the second paragraph after all. Also just for future reference in general, I don't see much point in copy pasting an entire paragraph onto a talk page to refer to it. Part of a paragraph might be appropriate to highlight what you're referring to, but people can easily find the entire first paragraph of the production section if they want to see what you're talking about, so pasting it here just bloats the talk page. Damien Linnane (talk) 01:31, 18 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi, re: Undid revision 1257574079 by Lux-Spiritus (talk)

[No quibble re: name revert, thanks; I'd mistakenly thought the name 'Korben' was already in place, 'matched' it in error] re: Plot expansion: 'Dallas attempts to rouse the unconscious Leeloo by planting a kiss, she immediately awakens, and putting Dallas' gun to his head states, "Seno akta gammat!" which Cornelius translates as, "Never without my permission.' - I thought tied in with the end paragraph in the sub-section? - 'Dallas declares his love..' - But I could be alone in that view, & I realise that too much in a summary prevents it from being a summary.

*Perhaps the 'She introduces herself as Leeloominaï Lekatariba-Lamina-Tchaï Ekbat De Sebat - Dallas is unable to pronounce this lengthy title; it is shortened to 'Leeloo.' - could be served by putting the character's full name in the 'Cast' section?


Radium-13 (talk) 23:33, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Its more the point that per WP:FILMPLOT and WP:NOT#PLOT, summaries of films should remain concise and no more than 700 words. This scene is not essential to the plot, nor is the full name of Leeloo. Masem (t) 23:37, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]