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== 03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin == |
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{{Lafc|username=Fuzzpumpkin|ts=03:24, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Office_Hours_Live}} |
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Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved. |
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Hello everyone, |
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I would like to know if anybody could take a look at the draft I am writing, to see if the sources meet the notability requirements. If the link isn't already shared, this is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Mercedes-Benz_GLC_43 |
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Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] ([[User talk:Fuzzpumpkin|talk]]) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Thank you so much! |
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- Jrmango [[User:Jrmango|Jrmango]] ([[User talk:Jrmango|talk]]) 00:00, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Jrmango}}, your draft is overtly promotional and is more suited to a Mercedes marketing brochure than a neutrally written encyclopedia article. The [[WP:NPOV|Neutral point of view]] is a core content policy, and following it is mandatory. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 00:07, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Plus, we already have an article [[Mercedes-Benz GLC]] where the variants are discussed. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 00:11, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::In regards to the neutral point of view, I wonder if Mercedes would include a big issue with the car in their marketing material. [[User:Jrmango|Jrmango]] ([[User talk:Jrmango|talk]]) 00:21, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::I have made some edits and removed some of the language that made it sound like an ad for the car [[User:Jrmango|Jrmango]] ([[User talk:Jrmango|talk]]) 00:34, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] [[User:Jrmango|Jrmango]] ([[User talk:Jrmango|talk]]) 00:34, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::You still have this utterly meaningless marketing language: {{tpq|It combines elegance with power, offering a comfortable ride and modern amenities}}, which is the sort of promotiomal language that every car company on Earth spits out. And you are directly addressing readers which is not permitted and giving prices on various options, which is not permitted. To be frank, your draft is pretty much worthless, {{u|Jrmango}}. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 00:51, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::@[[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]], It is not very kind to call someone’s work “worthless”. [[Special:Contributions/76.82.37.201|76.82.37.201]] ([[User talk:76.82.37.201|talk]]) 01:18, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::That is true, thank you @76.82.37.201 [[User:Jrmango|Jrmango]] ([[User talk:Jrmango|talk]]) 01:28, 23 October 2023 ( UTC) |
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:::::IP editor, I offer frank assessments based on 14 years of experience editing Wikipedia. I recommended removing all promotional drivel and Jrmango left much of it in. Do you consider this draft "worthy"? Do you think that it has any redeeming qualities? [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 01:52, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::::@[[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]]I believe that you still should not call something “worthless”. While @[[User:Jrmango|Jrmango]] could remove some more things, I find it to be an informative article. [[Special:Contributions/76.82.37.201|76.82.37.201]] ([[User talk:76.82.37.201|talk]]) 02:10, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::::I could have said "rejected" instead, new IP editor. Would that have been better? [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 02:31, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::::IP user, Wikipedia articles are not for merely providing information. It provides information to tell you that Walmart has a sale on televisions, but that is not valid encyclopedia content. Not everything that is informative is acceptable here. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 07:28, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:31, 23 October 2023 review of submission by Dinusha Jayaranga == |
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{{Lafc|username=Dinusha Jayaranga|ts=06:31, 23 October 2023|draft=Draft:John_Chresta}} |
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My submission was get decline I am create in this biography for Dr. John Chresta if there anything i can prove this is authorised from the person let me know please [[User:Dinusha Jayaranga|Dinusha Jayaranga]] ([[User talk:Dinusha Jayaranga|talk]]) 06:31, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany == |
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:@[[User:Dinusha Jayaranga|Dinusha Jayaranga]] That's exactly the problem - you're not supposed to write Wikipedia articles for someone who asked you to write one for them. -- [[User:Asilvering|asilvering]] ([[User talk:Asilvering|talk]]) 06:34, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Al Gattany|ts=08:01, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Mohammad_Hossain}} |
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:@[[User:Dinusha Jayaranga|Dinusha Jayaranga]]: this draft is basically a CV with a personal statement, and as such wholly inappropriate for an encyclopaedia. I'm surprised it was only declined, not rejected, but either way it is pending deletion. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:35, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Dinusha Jayaranga|Dinusha Jayaranga]] No, we're not going to help you upload someone's CV to wikipedia. -- [[User:Asilvering|asilvering]] ([[User talk:Asilvering|talk]]) 06:50, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::undersa [[User:Dinusha Jayaranga|Dinusha Jayaranga]] ([[User talk:Dinusha Jayaranga|talk]]) 06:59, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::understood, if i rewrite this in a biographical stand point without mentioning the personal details that much, and focused on the storyline as much as i can? please reply how can i fix this [[User:Dinusha Jayaranga|Dinusha Jayaranga]] ([[User talk:Dinusha Jayaranga|talk]]) 07:02, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::@[[User:Dinusha Jayaranga|Dinusha Jayaranga]]: I would suggest that you read a few biographical articles, especially ones rated [[WP:good|good]], to get an idea of what is required. |
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:::::You need to first find sources that meet the [[WP:GNG]] standard for notability. You then summarise what those sources have said – you do ''not'' just write what you want, and even less what the subject wants you to write. |
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:::::Speaking of which, the very next thing you should do is disclose your conflict of interest. I will post a message on your talk page with instructions. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:20, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]]: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 06:57, 23 October 2023 review of submission by Mrinmoy Sharma == |
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::Ok thanks [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Mrinmoy Sharma|ts=06:57, 23 October 2023|draft=User:Mrinmoy Sharma/sandbox}} |
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:::{{u|Al Gattany}}, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a [[WP:NPERSON|Notable person]] deserving of a Wikipedia article. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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please help me with this |
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[[User:Mrinmoy Sharma|Mrinmoy Sharma]] ([[User talk:Mrinmoy Sharma|talk]]) 06:57, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi == |
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:@[[User:Mrinmoy Sharma|Mrinmoy Sharma]]: I'm sorry, but you will need to be a lot more specific than that. What is your question? |
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{{Lafc|username=Itsfaizanfaizi|ts=12:42, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hafeez_Center}} |
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:That said, you should not be writing about yourself, see [[WP:AUTOBIO]]. And anything you do write, either in this draft or elsewhere, must be supported by reliable published sources. As it stands, your draft is just you telling the world about yourself, which is not what Wikipedia is about. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:23, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them. |
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::{{u|Mrinmoy Sharma}}, unreferenced [[WP:BLP|biographies of living people]] are forbidden by policy, and your draft is entirely unreferenced. Plus, as you have already been informed, writing an [[WP:AUTOBIOGRAPHY|autobiography]] is strongly discouraged. In my experience, over 99% of people who try to write an autobiography fail. The occasional successful results are people who are indisputably [[WP:NPERSON|notable]] and who have taken the time to deeply understand Wikipedia's policies, guidelines and behavioral norms, and have the dedication to do some very challenging work for inexperienced editors. People like that are extremely rare. Your draft is nowhere near being close to being acceptable. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 08:27, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions ''in this thread'' explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:17, 23 October 2023 review of submission by Abayan leo == |
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::I addressed the '''peacock prose''' by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Abayan leo|ts=11:17, 23 October 2023|draft=User:Abayan_leo/sandbox}} |
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:::@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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i have a published the article of a personality who is well known but declined |
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::::Unfortunately another reviewer found that the work done was not sufficient and rejected it, still as a blatant advert. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 08:58, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Abayan leo|Abayan leo]] ([[User talk:Abayan leo|talk]]) 11:17, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 16:09, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689 == |
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:@[[User:Abayan leo|Abayan leo]]: just to be clear, you haven't published anything, you have submitted a draft, which has been declined, and you have then resubmitted it. |
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{{Lafc|username=2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689|ts=16:09, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Julian_Alturas}} |
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:The draft has all sorts of issues, but it was mostly declined for lack of evidence of notability. On which point, "well known" is not what we're looking for; we need to see significant coverage of this person in multiple secondary sources that are reliable and independent of the subject. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:28, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Can someone help me to edit his biography enable for it to be accepted. [[Special:Contributions/2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689|2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689]] ([[User talk:2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689|talk]]) 16:09, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::@[[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] this was resubmitted after an 11 character "improvement" by [[User:Abayan leo|Abayan Leo]]. I took the unusual step (for me) of reviewing for a second time with the suggestion that resubmission a further time without substantive improvement would probably lead to rejection. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 12:41, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:We don't provide co-editing services here; it's up to you to show that this person is notable. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 16:34, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:05, 23 October 2023 review of submission by BrendaBerry13 == |
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{{Lafc|username=BrendaBerry13|ts=18:05, 23 October 2023|draft=Draft:The_Pachakuti_Mesa_Tradition}} |
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I don't understand what the issue with the language is. I've had many people read it and they feel it is neutral. Please tell me exactly what is not neutral and an example of what you're looking for. I use Wikipedia often and feel my article reads like they do. Please advise with some specifics. Thank you. [[User:BrendaBerry13|BrendaBerry13]] ([[User talk:BrendaBerry13|talk]]) 18:05, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:{{u|BrendaBerry13}}, your draft relies on unreliable book sources. Rainbow Bridge Books is a fringe publisher. Morris Publishing is a self-publishing platform. Here are just a few of the inappropriate phrases and sentences: {{tpq|It refers to the time of transformation we live in now, on an individual, community, or global level.}} and {{tpq|It is an imaginary map of the universe, an archetypal cosmic landscape "energetically anchoring” to the curandero, a practitioner of curanderismo.}} and {{tpq|The Pachakuti Mesa Tradition is a living tradition taught to people worldwide and seen as a way to connect with the natural world to find healing and guidance. It is a container of spirit, a soul-infused artifact of the material world, a living and dynamic pattern upon and with which practitioners can consciously do personal and planetary energy healing work.}} and {{tpq|These teachings offer a vision of a more harmonious and integrated world and guide those seeking to cultivate greater awareness, compassion, and wisdom.}} I could go on and on. All of this language is highly promotional, and promotion of any kind is not permitted on Wikipedia. We never use that kind of language in Wikipedia's voice. Acceptable Wikipedia articles must be written in a [[WP:NPOV|rigorously neutral fashion]]. Acceptable sources for an ethnographic topic like this would be books written by scholars and published by university presses or articles published in peer-reviewed academic journals. Your current sources are weak. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 18:47, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 18:58, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Kolorguide == |
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{{Lafc|username=Kolorguide|ts=18:58, 27 December 2024|draft=Dyne Test Pens in Quality Control: Ensuring Surface Tension Accuracy}} |
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I am trying to publish something about quality control and specifically about dyne test pens, on the page it shows me the following title: "Dyne Test Pens in Quality Control: Ensuring Surface Tension Accuracy" Please check draft title. No such draft exists [[User:Kolorguide|Kolorguide]] ([[User talk:Kolorguide|talk]]) 18:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I don't understand the detailed reasons why the article is been declined over and over again. [[User:Charlotte Brum|Charlotte Brum]] ([[User talk:Charlotte Brum|talk]]) 19:43, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:The name in your sandbox unimportant; the reviewer, if accepted, would give it the appropriate title. The larger problem is that this reads like a largely unsourced essay, and it's ''very'' far away from being a Wikipedia-appropriate article. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 19:14, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Charlotte Brum|Charlotte Brum]]. It's been declined once and now rejected by me. That's only two reviews. Frankly, though, your draft is entirely inappropriate for Wikipedia. It reads like an advert, only exists to promote the company, and has not a single source. |
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:Please carefully read [[WP:YFA|Your First Article]] and let me know if you have any specific questions. |
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:If you created this article for your boss, please have them read [[WP:BOSS]]. If you paid the organisation money to create this article, please offer them a refund. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 20:02, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Thanks for the feedback. Can I understand why other translation companies do have an article on Wikipedia? |
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:This one seems promotional: [[Lionbridge]] |
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:This also seems promotional: [[Inc. (magazine)]] [[User:Charlotte Brum|Charlotte Brum]] ([[User talk:Charlotte Brum|talk]]) 21:24, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::{{u|Charlotte Brum}} Please see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]. That said, your draft had no independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]. The main purpose of a Wikipedia article is to summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about (in this case) a company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable company]]. Wikipedia is not interested in what a company says about itself. |
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::Please see [[WP:COI]] and [[WP:PAID]]; if you are associated with this company, that must be disclosed. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 23:08, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::Would it help if I add clients reviews? [[User:Charlotte Brum|Charlotte Brum]] ([[User talk:Charlotte Brum|talk]]) 19:00, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::It would help if you followed the advice I gave above. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:12, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::When we tried adding resources from awards the company has won, Wikipedia said it was "promotional" [[User:Charlotte Brum|Charlotte Brum]] ([[User talk:Charlotte Brum|talk]]) 22:19, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::::Awards generally do not contribute to notability unless the award itself merits an article, like [[Academy Award]] or [[Nobel Peace Prize]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:26, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 19:00, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Movied Freak == |
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{{Lafc|username=Movied Freak|ts=19:00, 27 December 2024|draft=User:Movied_Freak/sandbox}} |
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what should i have to add ? [[User:Movied Freak|Movied Freak]] ([[User talk:Movied Freak|talk]]) 19:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I am wondering if someone can please check this draft. I have changed it to say, Alex Kuch (born Alexander Marcus Dan Aurel Kuch) instead of Alexander Marcus Dan Aurel Kuch (born 19 April 1995). But not sure if that's suitable etc. Thank you. Really appreciate it. [[Special:Contributions/118.148.101.177|118.148.101.177]] ([[User talk:118.148.101.177|talk]]) 20:16, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Movied Freak}} YouTube and IMDB are unacceptable sources as they are user-generated. YouTube videos produced by a reputable news outlet or similar may be acceptable if on a verified channel. The film is also unreleased, meaning it does not yet merit an article(see [[WP:NFF|notability of future films]]) unless you can show that there was something unusual about the production of the film(beyond casting announcements, release of trailers, etc.) [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft has been submitted and it is pending. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:30, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 20:20, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Abu muttalib == |
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{{Lafc|username=Abu muttalib|ts=20:20, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft: Deepali Sahay}} |
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The aproval to draft of my article is declined. Wanted and instructed to post here to know. [[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] ([[User talk:Abu muttalib|talk]]) 20:20, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Hi there, |
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This Wikipedia page has been declined because of the referenced sources. The sources I referenced were from either Flicks' website or from press releases published by independent publications. |
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:@[[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] is posting a request here all that you understood from the detailed decline rationale? 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Since these were insufficient/unreliable, can you please provide examples of sources that would be considered acceptable to reference in this case? Aside from websites and independent publications, what sources would you expect a company Wikipedia page like this to reference? [[User:JewelHL|JewelHL]] ([[User talk:JewelHL|talk]]) 23:10, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Abu muttalib}} Please see the message by the reviewer as to why it was declined and what you can do about it. |
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:I see that you took an image of this person, what is your connection to her? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Yes, I got it. I resubmitted with one more additional independent verifiable source. |
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::As such, no direct connection, except that I was viewer of the said shows and she is from my place. I am a admirer of her singing and wanted a page on Wikipedia for her similar to the Wikipedia page of her husband, which has even a Wikipedia page for both of their common friends Meiyang Chang. The image is clipped and cropped from one of her YouTube videos. Let me share the link. [[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] ([[User talk:Abu muttalib|talk]]) 21:23, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] Please '''do not clip images''' from anywhere unless their licencing is suitable and allows onward use. [[:File:Deepali Sahay.jpg]] is being dealt with on Wikimedia Commons and will be deleted unless you follow the process at [[c:COM:VRT]] to show that you have permission and/or that the licence at the Youtube video allowed you to upload it. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 09:08, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::@[[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] Further; Words/phases such as ''famous, prestigious, ventured into'' tend to be words of praise, and reduce your draft to advertorial. Please look at your phraseology carefully. We require flat, neutral, dull-but-worthy prose asserting facts and verifying them with citations. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 09:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::Got it. Let me rephrase the whole article. [[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] ([[User talk:Abu muttalib|talk]]) 09:13, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::At [[Draft talk:Deepali Sahay]] you say that there is already an article about her at [[Deepali Kishore]]. There cannot be two articles about the same person, so you should not resubmit the draft. (It was disruptive to resubmit it without any changes after the previous decline.) The existing article is in very bad shape – it was created long before the draft process existed, so it has never been reviewed or "accepted", but it can be edited and improved. However, unless there are indeed sources showing that she is notable, that article will be deleted. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 09:29, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::OK. It can be removed. I have the concerned person to send her image so that there is no licensing issue. [[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] ([[User talk:Abu muttalib|talk]]) 09:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::{{u|Abu muttalib}} Note that she might not hold the copyright to images of her; typically it belongs with the photographer. As I said '''images are not relevant''' to getting your draft approved, I would suggest focusing on that first, before worrying about images. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:27, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 22:47, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746 == |
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:@[[User:JewelHL|JewelHL]]: for notability per [[WP:GNG]], we need to see significant coverage, directly of the subject, in multiple secondary sources (newspapers, magazines, TV or radio programmes, books, etc.) that are [[WP:RS|reliable]] and wholly independent of the subject. Your draft currently cites no such source. |
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{{Lafc|username=2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746|ts=22:47, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Allen_A._Dennard_Jr.}} |
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:In fact, the draft should be mostly written by summarising what these sources say, with each source cited against the information it has provided. That would also ensure that the contents are adequately referenced. In your draft, most of the content is unsupported by citations. Which among other things begs the question where, exactly, is that information coming from? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:22, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Thank you for your feedback on why my article was not accepted and for giving me the guidelines that I need to follow in order to improve my chances of getting the article approved. I need to know how much time I have to re-edit the article and resubmit. Thanks. Sincerely, --Elreta Dodds. [[Special:Contributions/2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746|2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746]] ([[User talk:2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746|talk]]) 22:47, 27 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Wikipedia is not interested in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is only interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in [[WP:reliable sources|reliable sources]]. |
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:It follows that the ''very first step'' in creating a Wikipedia article is to find several such sources, each of which meets the criteria in [[WP:golden rule|golden rule]]. Doing anything else before this is like building a house without surveying the site or consulting building regulations - i.e., probably a waste of time. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 17:17, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:You have up to six months to do so. Each edit you make resets that clock. Thus there is absolutely no effective deadline. Happy editing. You may also continue to edit after submission. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 09:04, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== Review of Draft:General Catalyst == |
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:(ec) There is no deadline as long as you are actively working on the draft. If it is inactive for six months, it will be deleted, but even then it can be restored via [[WP:REFUND]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:05, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 28 = |
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Hello! I recently submitted [[Draft:General Catalyst]] for submission and have added WP:notable sources. I made adjustments based on feedback, but the article has not been reviewed. Is there anyone who would be willing to give it a look and let me know what you think? Thanks! [[User:Justwatchmee|Justwatchmee]] ([[User talk:Justwatchmee|talk]]) 23:51, 23 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 01:34, 28 December 2024 review of submission by 103.238.130.133 == |
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:@[[User:Justwatchmee|Justwatchmee]]: as it says on top of the draft, "Review waiting, please be patient." We have over 3,000 drafts awaiting review, and we don't provide on-demand reviews here at the help desk. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:16, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=103.238.130.133|ts=01:34, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Jan_D._Corvin}} |
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:While you're waiting for review, please read [[WP:NAMEDREF|NAMEDREF]] and consolidate multiple citations to the same source. It might not make a difference, but the length of the reference list to plough through is probably one of the things that reviewers look at in deciding whether or not to review a particular draft. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 17:21, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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May I ask why the article was rejected based on notability and how can it be improved for successful resubmission ? [[Special:Contributions/103.238.130.133|103.238.130.133]] ([[User talk:103.238.130.133|talk]]) 01:34, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Rejection typically means that improvement is not possible at this time; [[WP:AKON|no amount of editing can confer notability]] on a topic. It seems like you have no independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that have significant coverage of this person, just descriptions of their activities. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:02, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 02:50, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin == |
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{{Lafc|username=Fuzzpumpkin|ts=02:50, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Office Hours Live}} |
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Hi, I've been having trouble getting my article draft approved to be a "real" article. I'm open to all advice. [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] ([[User talk:Fuzzpumpkin|talk]]) 02:50, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Fuzzpumpkin}} You need to include the "Draft:" portion when linking to your draft, I fixed this for you above. Please see the messages left by the reviewers; the most recent one asks you to improve the tone of the article, and the reviewer left you specific advice on your draft. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:00, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:There is really no need to open a further thread on this matter, [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]], Continuing the same thread is usual and helpful. But, since you have, [[Draft:Office Hours Live]]'s referencing is much improved since my comment, for which I thank you. |
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:When you are sure that you have handled the all reviewer's advice as well I suggest you resubmit for review. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 09:02, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 08:06, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi == |
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= October 24 = |
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{{Lafc|username=Itsfaizanfaizi|ts=08:06, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hafeez_Center}} |
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my article has been rejected 2 times. |
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I understand it was rejected due to concerns about advertising and notability. Could you provide specific feedback on the promotional aspects and what type of sources would demonstrate sufficient notability? |
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I am eager to revise the article to meet Wikipedia's standards. |
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[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 08:06, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]]: slight correction, your draft was previously ''declined'' twice, and has ''now'' been rejected. Rejection means it won't be considered any further. |
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== 02:13, 24 October 2023 review of submission by Drcool 25 == |
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:The relevant notability criterion is [[WP:NBUILD]], which means that we require significant coverage in multiple sources that meet the [[WP:GNG]] standard. Your draft cites no such source. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:32, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Drcool 25|ts=02:13, 24 October 2023|draft=Draft:Hannan_Medispa}} |
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How to edit that it doesn't appear as promotional/advertisement [[User:Drcool 25|Drcool 25]] ([[User talk:Drcool 25|talk]]) 02:13, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 09:28, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Johnsonbl9ck == |
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:@[[User:Drcool 25|Drcool 25]]: you shouldn't be writing about a business you're associated with, as it is almost impossible for you to do it in a neutral, disinterested manner. |
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{{Lafc|username=Johnsonbl9ck|ts=09:28, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kamalı Zeybek (film, 1954)}} |
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:In any case, this draft has been rejected, so the question is somewhat redundant now. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:14, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Reviewed End [[User:Johnsonbl9ck|Johnsonbl9ck]] ([[User talk:Johnsonbl9ck|talk]]) 09:28, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Johnsonbl9ck|Johnsonbl9ck]] it hasn't been reviewed yet, and don't [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Kamal%C4%B1_Zeybek_(film,_1954)&diff=prev&oldid=1265722872 add fake notices], thanks. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 09:30, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:But it is a waste of everybody's time to submit a draft with no content and no sources. A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliable sources]] say about a [[WP:notable|notable]] subject, and very little else. Please see [[WP:REFB]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 22:15, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:07, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Durgaprasadpetla == |
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{{Lafc|username=Durgaprasadpetla|ts=14:07, 28 December 2024|draft=Kambala Srinivas Rao}} |
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I am a beginner on Wikipedia and need some help. I was trying to edit the Talk:Kambala Srinivas Rao page, but I encountered a message saying it was deleted under G8 (talk page of a deleted page). |
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My page has been declined, I don't know the exact reason, And I am not familiar with Wikipedia, I read the auto biography policies, But I think I followed it, Kindly mention the exact things that are decline, Because I don't know what thing got wrong exactly. Thank you much for your service. Have a great day [[User:Hamzaxeros|Hamzaxeros]] ([[User talk:Hamzaxeros|talk]]) 02:30, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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I would like to know: |
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Is it possible to restore the talk page, and under what circumstances? |
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How can I address content or discussions related to the deleted page appropriately? |
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Are there specific steps I should follow to create or request the recreation of the article itself? |
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Thank you for your guidance and support! [[User:Durgaprasadpetla|Durgaprasadpetla]] ([[User talk:Durgaprasadpetla|talk]]) 14:07, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Durgaprasadpetla}} I fixed your post, the whole url is not needed. You may use the [[WP:WIZARD|Article Wizard]] to create a draft. The deleted talk page only has a comment by you. The article was deleted under [[WP:A7|the A7 speedy deletion criterion]](no asserted importance). You need to see your user talk page for important information requiring a response. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:15, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 15:56, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Hays Deutschland == |
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:@[[User:Hamzaxeros|Hamzaxeros]]: you say you read the autobio 'policies', yet you went ahead a wrote one? Please have another look at [[WP:AUTOBIO]]. |
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{{Lafc|username=Hays Deutschland|ts=15:56, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Dominic_V._Spinelli}} |
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:This draft was declined because there is absolutely no indication of, and more to the point no evidence for, notability. The sources are primary, and mostly don't support anything in the draft. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:10, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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I mixed up the references, which I copied from the German Wiki site I worked on. I cant clean the references. Easiest would be to delete all references an set them up new. How can I do that? [[User:Hays Deutschland|Hays Deutschland]] ([[User talk:Hays Deutschland|talk]]) 15:56, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Hays Deutschland|Hays Deutschland]] I've removed all the references. If that's not what you meant, please [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Dominic_V._Spinelli&action=edit&undoafter=1245744559&undo=1265958956 undo my edit]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 12:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:07, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Dreimouse in an nutshell == |
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{{Lafc|username=Dreimouse in an nutshell|ts=17:07, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Saxdor}} |
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I have worked hard to make this article, but i got no way of getting the reference to show on the page😞 [[User:Dreimouse in an nutshell|Dreimouse in an nutshell]] ([[User talk:Dreimouse in an nutshell|talk]]) 17:07, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Please can you disclose your connection with Saxdor? I have left 4 messages today on [[User talk:Dreimouse in an nutshell]] and you haven't responded to any of them. I have reviewed the 4 references that you have added to the bottom of the article but none of them even have working URLs. [[User:Spiderone|<span style="color: #996600">Spiderone</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Spiderone|<span style="color:brown">(Talk to Spider)</span>]]</sup> 17:26, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 21:01, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Accounttree8 == |
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:@[[User:Musitafa Kalyowa|Musitafa Kalyowa]]: this draft has been rejected, and will therefore not be considered further. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:06, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Accounttree8|ts=21:01, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Merrimack_Valley_Conference}} |
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I have no idea why my article has been denied. The reason it was denied was "Reason as the Prod reason." I have no idea what this means. Please advise. I would like this article to be published ASAP, as there is no good reason for its denial. [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] ([[User talk:Accounttree8|talk]]) 21:01, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Accounttree8}} You claim that you created and own the copyright to the conference logo- and you seem to be on a deadline([[WP:DEADLINE|we're not]]). What is your relationship with the conference? |
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== 05:36, 24 October 2023 review of submission by VishalParmar1 == |
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:{{u|SafariScribe}} could you elaborate? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:05, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=VishalParmar1|ts=05:36, 24 October 2023|draft=Draft:Dr._Pravin_Parmar}} |
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::I apologize for the mistake, I'm not sure why it is listed that I created the logo. I did not create the logo, nor do I own the copyright. I am more than happy to fix that, but I'm not sure how to fix that. I am a former employee at the conference (I am since retired and now have some time to do things like this). I have been in communication with the conference and they would like to have a presence on this website, as most of our peer conferences do. I'm juts trying to help my former colleagues. I have been attempting to create this page for 9 months. It has been denied every time. I am not on a deadline, I am just frustrated with the countless denials (which is why I indicated ASAP). I am a Wikipedia novice and have tried to correct it many times, to no avail. I am just very frustrated with the process. 80-year old's aren't savvy with technology like this :) [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] ([[User talk:Accounttree8|talk]]) 21:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Re-submitted my article. [[User:VishalParmar1|VishalParmar1]] ([[User talk:VishalParmar1|talk]]) 05:36, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::Thank you- you must '''immediately without delay''' go to Commons and either request deletion of the logo, or show where the logo has been released with a copyright compatible with Wikipedia's(allowing for reuse by anyone for any purpose, including commerical, with attribution). Logos are typically uploaded to this Wikipedia locally under "fair use" rules, which does carry some restrictions(they cannot be in drafts) but does allow limited use in articles. |
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:::Images are not relevant to the draft process, which only considers the text and sources. Images can wait until the draft is accepted. |
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:::As you are acting on behalf of the organization, you have a [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. |
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:::The trouble you are having is that you [[WP:CITEKILL|have too many references]] and the ones that you do have don't show that the conference is a [[WP:ORG|notable organization as Wikipedia defines one]]. As for other conferences- their articles [[WP:OSE|could be inappropriate as well]] and we just haven't gotten around to addressing them yet. I know this is a lot of information, but these are all important things. Writing a new article is the most difficult task to attempt on Wikipedia for people of any age- we usually recommend that experience be gained first by editing existing articles. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:21, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::@[[User:331dot|331dot]] You may not be aware that there is a logo complexity threshold at Commons. That threshold handles uncopyrightable items - text and simple geometric shapes. I believe that this logo qualifies as being below that threshold. However, advice from a Commons expert is really essential. I work there, but I am far short of being an expert. |
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::::Your advice to [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] seek immediate deletion has strong merit [[c:Commons:Help desk]] will provide them with all the assistance they require. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 21:28, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::I have requested deletion of the logo. |
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::::Respectfully, I disagree I have a conflict of interest. I have done this on my own volition and have not worked at the conference for 15 years. No one working for the conference had any input with this article. |
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::::Is it possible to give me an example of how to prove the conference is a notable organization as Wikipedia defines one? What would I need to do to show this? Appreciate any help you can provide. [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] ([[User talk:Accounttree8|talk]]) 21:38, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::{{u|Accounttree8}} You said "I have been in communication with the conference and they would like to have a presence on this website"; does that not mean you're their representative? |
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:::::To show notability, you need independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that discuss the conference organization itself- not necessarily its member teams. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:10, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] The file is held at [[:c:File:Merrimack Valley Conference Logo.jpg]], and you will need to edit the relevant section fo the page holding it. You have both claimed to be the author, and released it under a [[Creative Commons]] [[ccorg:publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en|CC0 1.0 Universal Public Domain Dedication]]. Neither of these is correct. |
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:::You say "{{tq|I apologize for the mistake, I'm not sure why it is listed that I created the logo.}}" but you were required to fill that information put when you uploaded the file. Thus it is listed that way because you listed it that way. You need to rectify that at once, please 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 21:22, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Hello, @[[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]]. Unfortunately it appears that, like many people, you have a fundamental misunderstanding about Wikipedia. If you are trying to write an article in pursuit of "presence on this website", then you are involved in [[WP:NOTPROMO|promotion]], which is forbidden anywhere on Wikipedia. Any benefit (or detriment) which a subject may accrue by being the subject of a Wikipedia article is of no interest to Wikipedia. An article on your Conference should be a summary of what sources wholly unconnected with your Conference have chosen to publish in reliable places: what the Conference or its associates say or want to say is irrelevant. Please see [[WP:an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing|an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 22:25, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::And this is why nobody donates to Wokipedia! :) [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] ([[User talk:Accounttree8|talk]]) 22:36, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::@[[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] Oh dear. That was rather rude. When given good advice it behoves you to say a pleasant word of thanks. Do, please, pull your horns in. If the MVC is notable then ''all'' you need to do is to show that it is. Declaring a [[WP:COI]] shows a commitment to transparency. It suggests that you have done everything to be an editor in good standing. Arguing against it suggests [[The lady doth protest too much, methinks]] |
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:::::Thank you for nominating the logo for deletion on Commons. 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 23:14, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::<small>I'm sorry you feel that way, @[[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]]. Let me give my personal view: if ever Wikipedia changed its policies so that it ceased to be one of the few places on the internet blessedly free from people promoting themselves and their activities, I would certainly stop contributing my money, and probably, albeit reluctanty, also stop contributing my time. </small> [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:59, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{yo|Accounttree8}} Please read and attend to the comments from the reviewers. The draft suffers from extreme CITEKILL, as explained in some detail by a couple of your fellow editors who declined the draft at different times. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 22:04, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Nobody here is remotely bothered whether you donate or not, it is irrelevant. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 22:52, 28 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 29 = |
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:@[[User:VishalParmar1|VishalParmar1]]: no, you haven't. And given that this draft was rejected already three months ago, you shouldn't, either. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 05:39, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 07:03, 29 December 2024 review of submission by RasaPetrauskaite == |
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Every time I try to make an edit and publish the edit, I get an error message that says that content provided was not properly deflated. This might have happened because I tried to paste a table from a website. But now I cannot undo it and the error message always shows up and prevents me from making any changes. I would like to edit this draft of an article. Could you please suggest how I can move forward with that and resolve the error message? [[User:RasaPetrauskaite|RasaPetrauskaite]] ([[User talk:RasaPetrauskaite|talk]]) 07:03, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Mukesh Chhabra wikipedia Page has been deleted can you please look into it and let me know. and if possible revert it back again to the older version. |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mukesh_Chhabra [[User:Iamrohj|Iamrohj]] ([[User talk:Iamrohj|talk]]) 06:19, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:RasaPetrauskaite|RasaPetrauskaite]]: I've just made a minor edit to this draft without any problems. Perhaps the issue is local to your browser – try restarting, and maybe clearing your cache if that doesn't help? If the issue persists, you are more likely to get competent advice at [[WP:VPT]] where folks who know technical stuff hang out. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:12, 29 December 2024 review of submission by The27thAlphabet == |
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Can i please request help to evaluate this draft. I have added the notable sources and links. but do help in making this better for submission. [[User:The27thAlphabet|The27thAlphabet]] ([[User talk:The27thAlphabet|talk]]) 14:12, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:The27thAlphabet|The27thAlphabet]]: we don't get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. You will get an evaluation when you resubmit the draft. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:57, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You've only linked to basic profiles and daily business news, that do nothing to confirm anything other than Gupta having those specific jobs. Notability requires a good deal more than this. You need to be looking for independent, reliable sources that are ''about'' Gupta. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 18:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:46, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Gidan Fasaha == |
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{{Lafc|username=Gidan Fasaha|ts=17:46, 29 December 2024|draft=Draft:Aliyu_Saidu_Jauro}} |
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Hy, Please Can You Assist Me Check The Errors On This New Page That I am Adding? It Got Rejected. [[User:Gidan Fasaha|Gidan Fasaha]] ([[User talk:Gidan Fasaha|talk]]) 17:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hey Gidan, this was rejected as not a single source was provided to indicate that the subject was notable. While there are nine references, not a single one of them ever mentions Jauro as far as I can tell, let alone confirming any fact asserted in the biography. Just as an example, look at the first paragraph after the lede. Neither Jauro's parents names, the ethnic group they belong to, where they are from, or his father's occupation, have any sourcing whatsoever. The only source provided goes simply to provide more information about the ''Yandang'' not the subject of the article. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 18:29, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Sathish punarjan|Sathish punarjan]]: this draft (such as it is) is purely promotional, with no encyclopaedic content; accordingly, it has been rejected and is pending deletion. Wikipedia is not the right place for you to promote your hospital, you need to use other platforms for your marketing. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:59, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Hello, @[[User:Gidan Fasaha|Gidan Fasaha]]. A Wikipedia article is a summary of what people wholly unconnected with the subject have published about the subject, and very little else. If you do not have any [[WP:42|reliable independent sources]], there is literally nothing which you can put into an article. Please see [[WP:your first article|your first article]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 21:03, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Sathish punarjan}} Wikipedia is not a business directory. See [[WP:NOTDIRECTORY]]. You should use social media to tell the world about this business. Note that Wikipedia summarizes the prevaling scientific consensus that [[Ayurveda]] is pseudoscientfic and has no evidence it is effective in treating cancer. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:00, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 18:09, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Manikingr == |
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{{Lafc|username=Manikingr|ts=18:09, 29 December 2024|draft=Draft:Alef_(company)}} |
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Greetings and respect |
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This article, which is about an Iranian artificial intelligence startup called Alef, has been completely edited and is written in an unbiased language without any advertisements for anyone's benefit.The sources of this article are written from official and completely independent media in Iran. |
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But unfortunately, some Wikipedia editors have monopolized the creation of articles and do not allow the creation of new articles and the improvement of Wikipedia. [[User:Manikingr|Manikingr]] ([[User talk:Manikingr|talk]]) 18:09, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You have not shown that this company meets the [[WP:ORG|special Wikipedia definition of a notable company]]. |
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Hello, I have a query regarding the draft page Helen Leahey (musician/voice over artist). Although the article links to many independent, reliable news articles reporting on the artist it is being continuously declined. Are you able to say what is missing? The notability of the person in question is that she was the first Guinness World Record holder for Lowest Vocal Note by a female. Culturally this is significant as until her record, women were only awarded 'highest vocal note by a female'. The artist also has TV appearences (Voice Germany and Voice UK) and credit on IMDb for a voice over in a major film (Exorcist: Believer - 2023). Thank you in advance for any help with this matter. '''<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>''' [[User:Guinnesslassie|Guinnesslassie]] ([[User talk:Guinnesslassie|talk]]) 09:08, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:This process is usually voluntary. If you wish to disregard what you are being told by more experienced people, you can move the draft into the encyclopedia yourself, but you risk it being nominated for deletion. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:23, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:21, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Jasminmusicz == |
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:{{u|Guinnesslassie}} Please disclose your connection with Ms. Leahey; see [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]] and [[WP:PAID|paid editing]]. You must have a connection since you took an image of her and she posed for you. This would include working for her directly or for the publishers of Guiness World Records. |
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{{Lafc|username=Jasminmusicz|ts=18:21, 29 December 2024|draft=Draft:Jasmin_(Zara)}} |
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:You have documented her activities, but not summarized what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about her and what makes her [[WP:BIO|a notable person]]. If it's the world record, you will need to offer sources that discuss that aspect of her more in depth than the sources you have currently. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:15, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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im a biggner so kindly assist me what is my msitake and how to fix it [[User:Jasminmusicz|Jasminmusicz]] ([[User talk:Jasminmusicz|talk]]) 18:21, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell about themselves, please see the [[WP:AUTO|autobiography policy]]. Your draft has no sources that show you are a [[WP:BAND|notable musician]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:26, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::{{u|Jasminmusicz}}, your highly promotional draft biography of a 13 year old child is completely unreferenced and in violation of multiple [[WP:PAG|Policies and guidelines]]. Most significantly, it violates [[WP:V|Verifiability]] and the [[WP:NPOV|Neutral point of view]]. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 18:28, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Thank you for your reply. I am Leahey's public manager and agree that it is of course more desirable for someone completely independent to write about the artist's activities. Leahey's significance has slipped under the radar until now. There are articles about persons with less credentials on Wikipedia. A quick google search will bring up countless articles about Leahey's activities and official press pictures from independent news outlets. Guinness World Records has officially published about Leahey and is sourced in the draft, a long with many independent news outlets which have also discussed Leahey and her public work to date in detail. To limit the risk of the article being permanently deleted, could you advise what would be the best way forward? Is this article being declined because of the question of notability or the sources used? Thank you very much in advance for any help. It is appreciated, especially as I am new to being a contributor here on Wikipedia. [[User:Guinnesslassie|Guinnesslassie]] ([[User talk:Guinnesslassie|talk]]) 09:56, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::{{ping|Jasminmusicz}} I would '''''seriously reconsider''''' whether the price of a Wikipedia article (i.e. [[WP:Protecting children's privacy|permanent loss of your privacy]]) is worth it. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 20:31, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Guinnesslassie|Guinnesslassie]]: given what you say, you '''must''' declare your paid-editing status; please do this as your very next edit. I will post information on this on your talk page. Thank you. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 09:59, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::{{u|Guinnesslassie}} First, you must declare your paid relationship- this is a Terms of Use requirement and mandatory. See [[WP:PAID]]. |
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:::Please see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]. Existing inappropriate articles does not mean that more inappropriate articles should be added. As this is a volunteer project where people do what they can when they can, it is possible for inapproprpiate articles to get by us. We can only address what we know about. If you would like to help us, please identify any inappropriate articles you see for possible action. |
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:::Persons in your position trying to force the issue of creating an article are not usually successful; articles are typically written by independent editors wholly unconnected with the subject, who take note of coverage of a subject in independent reliable sources and choose on their own to write about it. Your client needs to be aware of [[WP:PROUD|the very good reasons to not want an article]]. We have no interest in publicity or marketing efforts to increase her exposure. Our only interest is in summarizing independent reliable sources. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:03, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 20:39, 29 December 2024 review of submission by JIMMY OFUOYAn14 == |
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please what can i do to make my submission to be accepted [[User:JIMMY OFUOYAn14|JIMMY OFUOYAn14]] ([[User talk:JIMMY OFUOYAn14|talk]]) 20:39, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:There is nothing you can do. Please stop creating new accounts to publish your AI generated autobiography. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 20:52, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:FTR, previously blocked accounts include {{user|JIMMY OFUOYAN10}} and {{user|Jimmy ofuo}}. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 21:01, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 21:58, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Sam241224 == |
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:@[[User:KannappaSara9|KannappaSara9]]: rather than piling the references together at the end like that, it would be best if you could cite them inline against the information they support; that way it would be much easier for the reviewer (and future readers) to see where the contents are coming from, and to verify them when required. See [[WP:REFB]] and [[WP:ILC]] for advice (or just do what you've already done with the two of them that are cited). -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 10:30, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Hi everyone, I recently submitted a wiki page for review and it got rejected for overly cheese language or unreliable sources, something like that. Things gone too wrong and the page was declined. I need help with improving it if possible. Please guide me as I am new here and if its a dead end, that's also ok. just let me know. thanks. [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 21:58, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:As the reviewer noted, at one point schools were inherently notable, but that is no longer the case. Schools must meet [[WP:ORG]] just as any other organization. You should not be describing the school and its offerings, you should be summarizing what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the school. If you have no such sources, then the school does not merit an article. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:28, 24 October 2023 review of submission by Hsin Yu Chou == |
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::thank you @[[User:331dot|331dot]] for your swift and detailed reply, |
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{{Lafc|username=Hsin Yu Chou|ts=11:28, 24 October 2023|draft=Draft:Tensor_Tech}} |
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::Now I got it, Its not what we want to say, but what reliable and Independent sources said that we need to rewrite / convey. Correct me if I am wrong. Can you please check the references and tell me if they qualify? |
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Hi! I have a problem understanding the problem of references i found for this article! Can someone please give me more specific guidance? [[User:Hsin Yu Chou|Hsin Yu Chou]] ([[User talk:Hsin Yu Chou|talk]]) 11:28, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::thanks for helping me understand whole process [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 22:17, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::The activities of the school do nof confer notability; there needs to be sources with significant coverage of the school and what makes it important/significant/influential as a school. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:22, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Content like "Scientia emphasizes a balanced approach to learning, integrating technology and modern teaching methods to prepare students for the challenges of a dynamic world. Known for its commitment to community engagement, the school actively participates in initiatives promoting environmental sustainability and social welfare, fostering holistic development in its students." is just blatant advertising and would never be accepted. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 22:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::ok, understood. thank you for checking the contents and pointing out. @[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 22:30, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Ok, got it. So, how can I start a new page about something else. Lets leave this page here. I want to contribute but I don't think the language I use is right, I need to improve on that before I start working on anything else. |
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::::thanks @[[User:331dot|331dot]] [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 22:29, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::You can create additional sandboxes([[User:Sam241224/sandbox 2]]) or you can use the [[WP:WIZARD|Article Wizard]]. Please know that creating new articles is not the best or only way you can contribute. We have millions of articles that need help, and editing those will help you gain experience before you attempt the difficult task of creating a new article. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:33, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::Ok, I will try to contribute to some other articles, maybe something with structure or easy tweaks before going after a big task as you suggested. I am not sure about the language I need to use in wiki content, It will take time for me to get things, but I have started to get the grip on things like my profile, sandbox and talk page, user page and such things. But, its a long journey, from front Wikipedia looks so simple, but from inside so many things are going on. Amazing. |
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::::::thanks for putting in your valuable time :) [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 22:40, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::@[[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] my genuine advice to new editors is to start out improving existing articles, because writing a new article from scratch is really hard! Like trying to perform in an orchestra when you've only just picked up an instrument. Your [[Special:Homepage|Wikipedia Homepage]] will have some suggested edits you can make at various levels of difficulty. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 22:47, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::Hi @[[User:Qcne|Qcne]], thanks for your suggestion. I will try to find something beginner friendly on my homepage. Any suggestion on matching my tone with Wikipedia standards? [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 23:05, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Practice, really. You should only be paraphrasing or summarising what reliable sources say, and make sure when you do you write in a dry style. This could also be useful: [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch]] <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 23:08, 29 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::::ok, but what is 'dry style'? |
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::::::::::thanks for the link :) [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 15:50, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::Difficult to really give examples, its something that you pick up once you've done enough editing. The tone should always remain formal, impersonal, and dispassionate. Pretend you're writing an autopsy. Wikipedia only ever describes, never leads the reader or engages them. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:08, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::ah, now I got it. Things are becoming clear now. Difficult for me but will try, thank you. [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 23:06, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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= December 30 = |
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:@[[User:Hsin Yu Chou|Hsin Yu Chou]]: the sources cited are a blog, a press release, three cites of the company's own website, and one journal or similar. These are primary sources. Instead, we need to see significant coverage of the company, in multiple secondary sources that are [[WP:RS|reliable]] and wholly independent of the subject. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:36, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 01:54, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Jogershok == |
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Why does this not meet the goals and expectations of this WikiProject? |
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there are literally no pages which are reliable that have in depth information on the topic [[Special:Contributions/49.204.208.101|49.204.208.101]] ([[User talk:49.204.208.101|talk]]) 15:26, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:I have tidied up your draft a little if as you say there "are literally no pages which are reliable that have in depth information on the topic" then we cannot have an article, but I think there should be enough out there with a little searching. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 15:54, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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She is listed in the Charlie Project as well: |
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== 17:03, 24 October 2023 review of submission by Janlopi == |
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https://charleyproject.org/case/kathleen-ann-shea [[User:Jogershok|Jogershok]] ([[User talk:Jogershok|talk]]) 02:03, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Janlopi|ts=17:03, 24 October 2023|draft=Draft:Catholicism’s_effect_on_music}} |
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Could someone help me find out what specifically in my article has an unencyclopedic tone? I don’t exactly understand how it is written like an essay and not an article. [[User:Janlopi|Janlopi]] ([[User talk:Janlopi|talk]]) 17:03, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Jogershok|Jogershok]]: there is insufficient evidence that the subject is [[WP:notable|notable]]. Also, the Charley Project is a primary source, and as such contributes nothing towards notability. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:45, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Janlopi|Janlopi]]. Wikipedia articles usually paraphrase what reliable, independent, secondary sources state about a topic. Your draft however seems to make an assertation about Catholicism' influence on music which is only backed up by the fraryguitar.com source as far as I can see. |
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:You may have written this draft [[WP:BACKWARDS]], where you've wanted to write a topic and then tried to find sources to back it up. You need to find the sources first. |
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:I think this topic may be viable as an article, but I wonder if it would be better served as part of the History sections (fully sourced) in the existing articles of Gregorian Chant, Solfege, and Classical Music? <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 18:32, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::I had like way more sources, mustve deleted them on accident. Thank you so much actually I did’nt know what I did. Also that is a good point, I might do that. Thank you so much <3 [[User:Janlopi|Janlopi]] ([[User talk:Janlopi|talk]]) 21:04, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::Hello, Janlopi. Another mistake that inexperienced editors often make is to load up their drafts with large numbers of low-quality sources. Not only does this ''not'' help get a favourable review (a thousand low-quality sources do not add up to one high-quality one) but it may also make the draft less attractive to a reviewer, who will have to wade through the dross looking for a nugget. |
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:::I suggest that you look critically at every single source you are proposing to cite, and ask |
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:::# is it [[WP:RS|reliably published]]? - ie, by a reputable publisher not a user-generated website (such as a wiki or blog) or a vanity publisher or pay-to-publish journal; |
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:::# is it [[WP:IS|independent of the subject]]? - this may be less relevant for your topic, but if for example most of the work in this area has been done by one person or one team, we need sources wholly unconnected with that team; |
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:::# does it contain [[WP:significant coverage|significant coverage]] of the subject? - not passing mentions, or routine information. In your case, that will be sources specifically about {{tq|Catholicism's effect on music}} - sources about Catholicism, or music, or even catholic music, will generally not cut it, and attempting to argue from them is likely to be [[WP:synthesis|synthesis]], which is a form of [[WP:original research|original research]], and not permitted. Generally, information which is related to the subject but not about the subject, should not be cited at all, but should instead be [[WP:wikilink|wikilink]]ed to whatever article we already have on that topic. |
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:::See [[WP:42]] for a more information. |
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:::[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 17:07, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::Thank you so much. I will be working on making my sources more reliable and make sure the article is even needed. Thank you <3 [[User:Janlopi|Janlopi]] ([[User talk:Janlopi|talk]]) 21:25, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 02:24, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Sivans1734 == |
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My draft was declined for not citing reliable sources but the only spot in which I didn't cite sources was the Early and personal life section which I have all the information from the subject herself and it is not anywhere on the internet. [[User:Sivans1734|Sivans1734]] ([[User talk:Sivans1734|talk]]) 02:24, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I need help submitting my project for English. [[User:Loganschuchard|Loganschuchard]] ([[User talk:Loganschuchard|talk]]) 17:16, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:You cannot create a new article for the subject we already have one here [[Rachel Eliza Griffiths]] your draft is also unreferenced so of no use whatsoever. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 17:22, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Loganschuchard|Loganschuchard]]: by {{tq|"submitting '''my project for English'''"}} do you mean that you're working on some sort of school or college homework project? In which case, please tell your teacher that this isn't what Wikipedia is about. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:31, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Sivans1734|Sivans1734]] but not one of those sources are [[WP:R|reliable]] or independent meaning they are not of any value on showing us how they are notable enough to meet the standard of inclusion in a global encyclopedia. [[User:Mcmatter|McMatter]] <sup>([[User talk:Mcmatter|talk]])</sup>/<sub>([[Special:Contributions/Mcmatter|contrib]])</sub> 04:55, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:38, 24 October 2023 review of submission by Caucasian127 == |
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:Hello, @[[User:Sivans1734|Sivans1734]]. In addition to what McMatter said, please note that '''all''' information in a Wikipedia article must be [[WP:verifiable|verifiable]] from a pubished source. Unpublished information, no matter who it is from, may never be included in an article. A further point is that {{HD/WINI}} [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 17:17, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Caucasian127|ts=17:38, 24 October 2023|draft=Draft:Siege_of_Archesh}} |
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This page need to be moved on a article [[User:Caucasian127|Caucasian127]] ([[User talk:Caucasian127|talk]]) 17:38, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 03:32, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Toothpickdog == |
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:@[[User:Caucasian127|Caucasian127]] your draft is in the pool to be reviewed, there are over 3000 other drafts waiting for review. Please be patient. A review may take four or more months. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 18:28, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Toothpickdog|ts=03:32, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Havelock Mussel And Seafood Festival}} |
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== 18:39, 24 October 2023 review of submission by Hailey4818 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Hailey4818|ts=18:39, 24 October 2023|draft=Draft:Enchanted_Readings}} |
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why was it declined [[User:Hailey4818|Hailey4818]] ([[User talk:Hailey4818|talk]]) 18:39, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Hailey4818|Hailey4818]] Your draft was completely inappropriate for Wikipedia and will soon be deleted. It has been rejected and will not be considered further. Please use Facebook or another social media website to promote quack theories. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 18:41, 24 October 2023 (UTC) |
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= October 25 = |
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== 07:22, 25 October 2023 review of submission by Sayerhsdilip == |
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{{Lafc|username=Sayerhsdilip|ts=07:22, 25 October 2023|draft=User:Sayerhsdilip/sandbox}} |
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Why my article submission was declined |
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I need your assistance to understand the reason behind declining my article submission. So that i can revise the article and re-share for review. [[User:Sayerhsdilip|Sayerhsdilip]] ([[User talk:Sayerhsdilip|talk]]) 07:22, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Sayerhsdilip}} I fixed your request to include a link to your draft as intended. |
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:First, if you work for this company, the Terms of Use require that to be disclosed, please read [[WP:PAID]] as well as [[WP:COI]]. |
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:Wikipedia is not a place to tell about a company and what it does. A Wikipedia article about a company must summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the company, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable company]]. "Significant coverage" is that which goes beyond merely telling what the company does and goes into detail about what is significant/important/influential about the company as the source sees it(not as the company itself might see it). Your draft does not do this, it merely describes the offerings of the company with promotional language("one stop shop"; "convenient and seamless", etc.). Much of the draft is also unsourced. Please read [[WP:YFA|Your First Article]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 07:34, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 07:29, 25 October 2023 review of submission by Musitafa Kalyowa == |
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{{Lafc|username=Musitafa Kalyowa|ts=07:29, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Kyeru_Phiona_Bridget}} |
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Can I resubmit this article for review? [[User:Musitafa Kalyowa|Kalyowa Musita]] ([[User talk:Musitafa Kalyowa|talk]]) 07:29, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:No, it has been rejected and will not be considered further- [[WP:AKON|no amount of editing can confer notability]] on a topic. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 07:36, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:If you have an association with this person, it needs to be disclosed, please see your user talk page for more information. If you are employed by or otherwise compensated by this person, the Terms of Use require that to be disclosed. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 07:38, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 07:40, 25 October 2023 review of submission by VPNMage == |
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{{Lafc|username=VPNMage|ts=07:40, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Hide.me_VPN}} |
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Why is topic contrary to purpose of Wikipedia? There are lots of Wikipedia pages for VPN companies. |
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I made some changes but now don't know how to submit article for revision again. [[User:VPNMage|VPNMage]] ([[User talk:VPNMage|talk]]) 07:40, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:VPNMage|VPNMage]] your article has been rejected and will not be considered further. It's only purpose is to advertise and promote the VPN, which is prohibited on Wikipedia. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 07:42, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Then you should delete this article too: [[NordVPN]]. It is much more focused on advertising. [[User:VPNMage|VPNMage]] ([[User talk:VPNMage|talk]]) 08:01, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::No, it's not. It provides a summary of what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] say about the company- not merely documenting its activities. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:32, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::Also note that not every company merits a Wikipedia article- even in the same field. Competitors meriting articles does not automatically mean that your company does too. See [[WP:OSE]]. |
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:::I fixed your disclosure for proper display(you had coding in place to suppress it). [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:33, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::Ok then. I will try to create similar article as NordVPN. Now I know what to look at. |
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::::Thank you. [[User:VPNMage|VPNMage]] ([[User talk:VPNMage|talk]]) 08:50, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::@[[User:VPNMage|VPNMage]] if you feel you can write a draft that passes the [[WP:NORG]] requirements and is written in a way that is compatible with [[WP:NPOV]], ping me on my user talk page and I will have another look. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 08:52, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::My advice is that you set aside everything you know about your company, all materials it puts out, and the mere reporting of its activities, and only summarize what independent sources choose to say about your company. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:53, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 09:48, 25 October 2023 review of submission by DC1973 == |
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{{Lafc|username=DC1973|ts=09:48, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Darren_Charlton_(author)}} |
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My proposed article for author Darren Charlton has been declined. I have now cited coverage of the author's book deal in Bookseller magazine. Peviously, I cited reviews of the author's works in both The Times and The Guardian and where works have been shortlisted for prominent literary awards such as the Costa Book Awards. Can you please advise if this will be enough to qualify for acceptance and if not , what more could be provided so that it may be? Thank you. [[User:DC1973|DC1973]] ([[User talk:DC1973|talk]]) 09:48, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:DC1973|DC1973]]: you have resubmitted the draft, so you will receive an assessment when a reviewer gets around to checking it. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:35, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 09:48, 25 October 2023 review of submission by Ricazevedo == |
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{{Lafc|username=Ricazevedo|ts=09:48, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Carlos_Rogério_Figueiredo}} |
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Hi, my name is Ricardo. I have been trying to post a new article on Wikipedia about the scientific biography of a researcher in my field, Dr Carlos Rogerio Figueiredo, and have faced issues. |
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I was required to revise my submission to be impartial and written in a formal tone of Wikipedia. I then completely revised the article and resubmitted it. However, I was informed that my submission appears to be an advertisement, which is not the case and doesn't make sense. |
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The article merely describes Dr Figueiredo's career and scientific tracking record, and the interpretation of "advertisement" is subjective, as describing any biography could also be a form of disseminating that person's career and life achievements. |
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Therefore, I was wondering if you could help me address the specific parts in the text that are causing the problem so I could move forward with this article submission. |
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I would really appreciate your assistance. |
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Kind regards |
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Ricardo [[User:Ricazevedo|Ricazevedo]] ([[User talk:Ricazevedo|talk]]) 09:48, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Ricazevedo}} First you must disclose your connection to this person, since you took a picture of him and he posed for you. See [[WP:COI]] and [[WP:PAID]]. |
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:You did a great job documenting this person's activities, but that's not what we are looking for. We want a summary of what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] say is important/significant/influential about this person- how they meet the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:BIO|a notable person]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 13:02, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::In response to valuable feedback, I've revised my Wikipedia article by reducing excessive detail and emphasizing key milestones. I've also added credible references for the biographical sections, while maintaining well-sourced statements about research. To ensure neutrality, I've either removed potentially promotional phrases or ensured they're adequately referenced. These amendments reflect a commitment to upholding Wikipedia's high standards, and I deeply appreciate the community guidance. [[User:Ricazevedo|Ricazevedo]] ([[User talk:Ricazevedo|talk]]) 17:28, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::Again, you must disclose your connection to this person. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 17:30, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 11:34, 25 October 2023 review of submission by EKHrvatska == |
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{{Lafc|username=EKHrvatska|ts=11:34, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Representation_of_the_European_Commission_in_Croatia}} |
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Dear help, I do not know how to ad references in EN version of the text when they are not existent in Wikipedia arena. I added official references from the official European Commission Representation in Croatia. User EKHrvatska Thank you for your swift treply. [[User:EKHrvatska|EKHrvatska]] ([[User talk:EKHrvatska|talk]]) 11:34, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:EKHrvatska|EKHrvatska]]: see [[WP:REFB]] for advice on correct referencing using inline citations and footnotes. |
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:You also need to show that the organisation is notable. Currently the references are all to its own website, which is a non-independent primary source. |
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:Finally, you appear to have a relationship with the subject. I've posted a message on your talk page with advice on handing this. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 12:02, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::OK, understood. I would like to know how to do it (actually what to report under the CoI, the page is long and takes so much time to read). If I add couple of links like: |
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::https://www.index.hr/vijesti/clanak/u-zagrebu-proslavljeno-10-godina-od-ulaska-u-eu-plenkovic-hrvati-mogu-biti-ponosni/2475874.aspx |
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::[https://www.poslovni.hr/hrvatska/u-kuci-europe-hrvati-mogu-doznati-sve-o-pravima-graana-eu-245888 U Kući Europe Hrvati mogu doznati sve o pravima građana EU - Poslovni dnevnik] |
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::[https://web.archive.org/web/20170721133154/http://europski-fondovi.eu/vijesti/otvorena-ku-europe-u-zagrebu Otvorena Kuća Europe u Zagrebu | europski-fondovi.eu (archive.org)] |
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::[https://net.hr/danas/hrvatska/jos-jedna-ceremonija-otvorili-kucu-europe-u-centru-zagreba-d6f0154c-b1c4-11eb-a416-0242ac13003b Još jedna ceremonija: Otvorili Kuću Europe u centru Zagreba - Net.hr] |
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::and |
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::[[:hr:Kuća_Europe_u_Zagrebu|Kuća Europe u Zagrebu – Wikipedija (wikipedia.org)]] Hopefully it will be OK? [[User:EKHrvatska|EKHrvatska]] ([[User talk:EKHrvatska|talk]]) 12:23, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:EKHrvatska|EKHrvatska]]: I couldn't tell you without looking at those sources in detail whether or not they establish notability per [[WP:GNG]], but I can tell you that the last one, the Croatian Wikipedia article, does not count. |
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:::I'll reply to your COI question on your user page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:22, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::Ok, the four below listed are Croatian news portals. |
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::::: https://www.index.hr/vijesti/clanak/u-zagrebu-proslavljeno-10-godina-od-ulaska-u-eu-plenkovic-hrvati-mogu-biti-ponosni/2475874.aspx |
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::::: [https://www.poslovni.hr/hrvatska/u-kuci-europe-hrvati-mogu-doznati-sve-o-pravima-graana-eu-245888 U Kući Europe Hrvati mogu doznati sve o pravima građana EU - Poslovni dnevnik] |
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::::: [https://web.archive.org/web/20170721133154/http://europski-fondovi.eu/vijesti/otvorena-ku-europe-u-zagrebu Otvorena Kuća Europe u Zagrebu | europski-fondovi.eu (archive.org)] |
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::::: [https://net.hr/danas/hrvatska/jos-jedna-ceremonija-otvorili-kucu-europe-u-centru-zagreba-d6f0154c-b1c4-11eb-a416-0242ac13003b Još jedna ceremonija: Otvorili Kuću Europe u centru Zagreba - Net.hr] |
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::::[[User:EKHrvatska|EKHrvatska]] ([[User talk:EKHrvatska|talk]]) 14:36, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 13:21, 25 October 2023 review of submission by 180.188.243.126 == |
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{{Lafc|username=180.188.243.126|ts=13:21, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Top_penetration_testing_companies_in_UK}} |
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why my article is rejected [[Special:Contributions/180.188.243.126|180.188.243.126]] ([[User talk:180.188.243.126|talk]]) 13:21, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Wikipedia is not a website to compare services. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 13:30, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 14:03, 25 October 2023 review of submission by Stephenjkrajewski == |
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{{Lafc|username=Stephenjkrajewski|ts=14:03, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Nomad eSIM}} |
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Hi you have rejected Nomad eSIM for the following: |
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in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject) |
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reliable |
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secondary |
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independent of the subject |
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I think that these are all met - two articles that go in-depth on the use Nomad, from the NYT and WSJ (reliable), secondary (very much so they review the app without any connection to us) and certainly independent. What needs to happen to get approval? Thank you. |
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[[User:Stephenjkrajewski|Stephenjkrajewski]] ([[User talk:Stephenjkrajewski|talk]]) 14:03, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Stephenjkrajewski|Stephenjkrajewski]]: I haven't read the ''NYT'' and ''WSJ'' articles, but even if they do meet the [[WP:GNG]] standard, two isn't enough, need at least one more. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:13, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Ok, so the the issue is the number of references not the references we've given. I will see if we have a third of that type. I will get back to you - thank you for your help. Stephen [[User:Stephenjkrajewski|Stephenjkrajewski]] ([[User talk:Stephenjkrajewski|talk]]) 14:24, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Stephenjkrajewski|Stephenjkrajewski]]: like I said, I've not checked these sources as they're behind a pay wall, only assumed based on what you say that they meet the [[WP:GNG]] standard for notability. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:32, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::Sources need to cover the topic in-depth, yours certainly don't, some don't even mention the subject others are just listings. Passing the criteria at [[WP:NCORP]] is NOT easy and you are nowhere near passing it. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 14:40, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::Thanks - if the article we're creating is about the simple of factual existence of an mobile application and it is used by thousands of people every month (which can be verified) and exists on the two major app stores and has been reviewed by actual users, why then is the bar so high in terms of reference? It would help if you had an example of a wiki reference of a mobile app that has been verified so we can match what they have done. [[User:Stephenjkrajewski|Stephenjkrajewski]] ([[User talk:Stephenjkrajewski|talk]]) 14:49, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::::Millions of things exist, but we don't have articles about them, the simple factual existence of a mobile application is not a reason to have an article about it? [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 14:55, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::::@[[User:Stephenjkrajewski|Stephenjkrajewski]]: number of users is a meaningless metric as far as notability is concerned, as is where one might buy this app. The only thing that matters here is the sources, and whether they satisfy [[WP:GNG]]. |
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::::::As for comparing with other articles, that is pretty futile, unless those articles have been rated as [[WP:GA|good]], as otherwise you may simply replicate whatever problems they have. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:55, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::@[[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] FYI: NYT articles are readable if you turn of JavaScript support for the site. The same trick does not work for the WSJ. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 15:18, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 16:27, 25 October 2023 review of submission by Nayeem150 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Nayeem150|ts=16:27, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Bhartiya_Hussaini_Dal}} |
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I want to make [[User:Nayeem150|Nayeem150]] ([[User talk:Nayeem150|talk]]) 16:27, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Nayeem150|Nayeem150]] Nope, your draft was rejected and will not be considered further. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:29, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Nayeem150|Nayeem150]]: this draft (such as it is) has been rejected and won't therefore be considered further. |
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:For future reference, please see [[WP:YFA]] and [[WP:REFB]] for advice on article creation and referencing, respectively. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:29, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 17:00, 25 October 2023 review of submission by Emilydenver == |
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{{Lafc|username=Emilydenver|ts=17:00, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Anna_Salman}} |
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I can't find reliable sources for the page as the news published is by articles. What do I do? [[User:Emilydenver|Emilydenver]] ([[User talk:Emilydenver|talk]]) 17:00, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Emilydenver|Emilydenver]]: I've no idea what you mean by {{tq|"the news published is by articles"}}. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:07, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::: The tone is not appropriate " thirst for knowledge and personal growth" "her heart remained dedicated" " revered institution" "a pivotal career move" 'a remarkable milestone" please re-write in a dry neutral tone. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 17:10, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 17:38, 25 October 2023 review of submission by Plato.franco == |
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{{Lafc|username=Plato.franco|ts=17:38, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Ingrid_Olson}} |
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What can I do to make my sources better to make sure next time I submit this article it passes? [[User:Plato.franco|Plato.franco]] ([[User talk:Plato.franco|talk]]) 17:38, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Plato.franco|Plato.franco]]: a key purpose of referencing is to tell the reader where the information came from, so that in can be verified. For example in the 'Biographical Information' section there is only one source cited, which doesn't seem to say anything about which high school she went to (irrelevant) or that her family moved to Sweden (ditto). So if those details don't come from that source, where ''do'' they come from? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 18:11, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 18:13, 25 October 2023 review of submission by Mikivikipeditor == |
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{{Lafc|username=Mikivikipeditor|ts=18:13, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:Balkan_Physics_Olympiad}} |
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The topic is was refused for not meeting notability criteria, yet it has been covered by multiple(5 in sources, i can find more if needed) diferent, independent, reliable sources, which matches the general notability guideline. [[User:Mikivikipeditor|Mikivikipeditor]] ([[User talk:Mikivikipeditor|talk]]) 18:13, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Mikivikipeditor|Mikivikipeditor]] Balkan Physical Union is a primary source and not independent so not helpful for establishing notability nor are routine announcements about the event. For example, [https://www-danas-rs.translate.goog/vesti/drustvo/cetiri-medalje-za-ucenike-iz-srbije-na-balkanskoj-olimpijadi-iz-fizike/?_x_tr_sl=auto&_x_tr_tl=en&_x_tr_hl=en-US this source] is a routine announcement. Take a look at the [[WP:NEVENT|notability guidelines for events]] which is the relevant notability guideline. [[User:S0091|S0091]] ([[User talk:S0091|talk]]) 20:33, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 20:00, 25 October 2023 review of submission by 103.206.205.213 == |
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{{Lafc|username=103.206.205.213|ts=20:00, 25 October 2023|draft=Draft:GRV Media}} |
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I am trying to get an article about GRV Media approved purely as the company is referenced in the article about its flagship website HITC (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HITC). However it is constantly rejected due to not having independent references and the use of press releases etc. Is there any specific minimum article length? I have added references to the gov.uk website showing the legitimacy of the GRV Media limited company (which also lists the founders as mentioned in this article). The company has recently surpassed 100m page views per month across its portfolio of websites making it one of the UK's largest independent publishers. What else can I do to prove the legitimacy of the article and content therein? |
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Thank you |
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[[Special:Contributions/103.206.205.213|103.206.205.213]] ([[User talk:103.206.205.213|talk]]) 20:00, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Hi IP. Wikipedia is [[WP:NOTDIR|is not a directory]] so existing is not enough. Did you read through all the links in the decline notices that outline the notability criteria? The number of views is meaningless so are any sources that emanate from the company such a press releases and routine announcements like acquistions are considered trivial coverage. This is all outlined if you follow the links and read through the material. [[User:S0091|S0091]] ([[User talk:S0091|talk]]) 20:24, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Ok. Understood - I thought the press release would be valid as it wasn't emanated by GRV Media themselves. But rather a 3rd party independent and established publisher. Ok. Let me put together some better citations and sources before I resubmit again. Thanks for the feedback [[Special:Contributions/103.206.205.213|103.206.205.213]] ([[User talk:103.206.205.213|talk]]) 20:37, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::A press release is by definition "emanated by" the company in question. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 21:59, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::I think you are confusing third-party with independence. The content within a source needs to be intellectually independent. Meaning even if a press release is published by WSJ, Financial Times, etc. all they are doing is regurgitating what the company says about itself so not an independent source. However, if they provide their own independent analysis, research, etc. not solely based on what the company says, then that may be used but it needs to be in-depth. [[User:S0091|S0091]] ([[User talk:S0091|talk]]) 22:17, 25 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 02:08, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Rogen27 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Rogen27|ts=02:08, 26 October 2023|draft=Draft:Rogen_Cellar_Arpon}} |
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I don't know what to add. I'm creating a article about may self [[User:Rogen27|Rogen27]] ([[User talk:Rogen27|talk]]) 02:08, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:There is nothing to add, this isn't a social media site. It is an encyclopedia on [[WP:N|notable]] topics. The draft has been rejected and will not be considered further.[[User:Mcmatter|McMatter]] <sup>([[User talk:Mcmatter|talk]])</sup>/<sub>([[Special:Contributions/Mcmatter|contrib]])</sub> 02:25, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 06:12, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Danceguru1212 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Danceguru1212|ts=06:12, 26 October 2023|draft=Draft:Sreenanda Shankar}} |
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My request for submission has been rejected twice. I have made several changes to improve my chances of acceptance, some of which are based on feedback from the help desk. Is there a limit on the number of times an article is rejected after which it gets declined? Can anyone help me with what else I need to change in the article to improve my chances of acceptance? [[User:Danceguru1212|Danceguru1212]] ([[User talk:Danceguru1212|talk]]) 06:12, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Danceguru1212}} You must disclose your connection to this person, please see [[WP:COI]] and [[WP:PAID]]. There is not a specific limit on the number of times a draft may be resubmitted, as long as you are showing progress and the person seems to be [[WP:N|notable]]. If you don't show progress, though, your draft nay be rejected. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 11:06, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 06:27, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Muntasirahmmed == |
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Hi, |
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This festival is happening in March, and about now is the time when people are likely to be googling and buying tickets. I'm hoping some will find their way to this article and be able to expand it - particularly to add missing headline acts from past years. |
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I want to post one article on my company TAKO. I am a TAKO's permanent staff. Would you please accept my writing that is in draft in my sandbox? please? [[User:Muntasirahmmed|Muntasirahmmed]] ([[User talk:Muntasirahmmed|talk]]) 06:27, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Almost two months ago my draft submission was declined as I had only a few poorly sourced references. I've added a lot since then, but they're not great quality - there just aren't many references available on the internet that I can find. |
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Thanks for your help in getting this article online! |
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:Hi @[[User:Muntasirahmmed|Muntasirahmmed]]. Absolutely not. Your draft was completely inappropriate for Wikipedia and I have rejected it, so it will not be considered further. Wikipedia is not a vehicle to advertise or spam your company. Use LinkedIn or Facebook for that. |
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Don. [[User:Toothpickdog|Toothpickdog]] ([[User talk:Toothpickdog|talk]]) 03:32, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You also failed to make a paid editing disclosure which is a breach of the Wikimedia Terms of Use. If you are to try and edit again in topics involved with your company, you '''must''' make this disclosure. Follow the tutorial at [[WP:PAID]]. If you do not make this disclosure you will be blocked from editing. |
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:I also notice you added copyrighted material from your company to the draft. This is prohibited. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 06:55, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::{{u|Muntasirahmmed}} You must make the [[WP:PAID|paid editing disclosure]], a Terms of Use requirement and mandatory. You should also read [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. |
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::Your sandbox(which I have fixed the link to go to) was deleted as blatant promotion and its content was wholly inappropriate for an encyclopedia. Wikipedia is not a place for companies to tell the world about themselves. A Wikipedia article about an organization must summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the organization, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable organization]]. Articles are typically written by independent editors wholly unconnected with the topic; company representatives rarely succeed in doing as Wikipedia requires. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:35, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 08:05, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Zarakhanmahi757 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Zarakhanmahi757|ts=08:05, 26 October 2023|draft=Draft:Oni_Hasan}} |
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:{{u|Zarakhanmahi757}} I removed the tags you placed here, which are for the draft talk page. You don't ask a quesiton, but your draft was rejected and will not be considered further. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:28, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 08:15, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Logi0256 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Logi0256|ts=08:15, 26 October 2023|draft=Draft:Evaluations_and_Language_Resources_Distribution_Agency}} |
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Hello, after several attempts to create my article, it has been rejected several times. I've being doing the pertinent changes asked in order to respect wikipedia's policy. The content is informative and not as an advertisement. I would like to ask for your help so I can achieve the publication of my article. Thank you in advance. [[User:Logi0256|Logi0256]] ([[User talk:Logi0256|talk]]) 08:15, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Logi0256}} First, if you are associated with this agency, that must be declared, please see [[WP:COI]] and [[WP:PAID]]. |
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::Your draft was declined several times before being rejected- there is a distinction between "declined"(which means a draft may be resubmitted) and "rejected"(which means a draft may not be resubmitted). Wikipedia is not a place to merely tell about an organization and what it does, especially in the format you chose, which is like an About page on the organization website. A Wikipedia article about an organization must summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the organization, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable organization]]. Your draft did not do this, so it was correctly rejected and will not be considered further. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:31, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 09:14, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Wisest Arab == |
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{{Lafc|username=Wisest Arab|ts=09:14, 26 October 2023|draft=Draft:Hany_Abdulmonem}} |
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Hello |
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Please i would like to ask for assistance to correct the mistakes in my article to pass the review and the article be published |
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Thank you [[User:Wisest Arab|Wisest Arab]] ([[User talk:Wisest Arab|talk]]) 09:14, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Toothpickdog|Toothpickdog]]: do you have a question about your draft, or the review process? |
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:{{u|Wisest Arab}} Please disclose your connection with this person; see [[WP:COI]] and [[WP:PAID]]. |
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:Please note that sources don't have to be online; offline sources are perfectly acceptable, as long as they otherwise meet the requirements in terms of reliability etc. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:41, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Wikipedia is not a place to merely tell about someone and their accomplishments. A Wikipedia article about a person must summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the person, showing how they meet the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:BIO|a notable person]]. Please read [[WP:YFA|Your First Article]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:19, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::@[[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] Thanks for your response. I guess I don't really have a question, other than to say, "What do I need to do to get this online?" If it's just a matter of being patient, that's OK; but if the draft is going to need additional review cycles, then I fear we'll have missed the peak 2025 interest period. |
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:@[[User:Wisest Arab|Wisest Arab]]: it's mostly unreferenced, which is totally unacceptable in an article on a living person, and the few sources there are don't establish notability per [[WP:GNG]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 09:20, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Thanks too for the tip about offline sources. As chance would have it, some old Havelock community paper documents were unearthed today, so I now feel more confident about using them here. [[User:Toothpickdog|Toothpickdog]] ([[User talk:Toothpickdog|talk]]) 00:59, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 05:35, 30 December 2024 review of submission by EclipseExpress == |
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{{Lafc|username=EclipseExpress|ts=05:35, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Katy_Perry_Collections}} |
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Can you add more to this page? [[User:EclipseExpress|EclipseExpress]] ([[User talk:EclipseExpress|talk]]) 05:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:You draft was a blatant advertisement. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:41, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Wikipedia is not interested in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is only interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in [[WP:reliable sources|reliable sources]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 15:02, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:EclipseExpress|EclipseExpress]]: if you're asking someone here at the help desk (and/or at the Teahouse) to co-edit the draft with you, then the answer is no, that's not something we get involved in. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 10:53, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Drmohammadimath == |
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{{Lafc|username=Drmohammadimath|ts=10:53, 26 October 2023|draft=Draft:Stefano_De_Marchi}} |
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Why has been declined my draft? |
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The previous time that this article was declined I had been used footnotes for references...and the helping guys in the help page told me that it is not good to use footnotes...So I had to delete them and used external links...but this time it has been declined and they told me why do not you use footnotes....It is very strange and I do not know why Wikipedia is bothering me and reject an article about one of the best Mathematicians in Italy!!! |
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All the things I have written in this article are true and I put all the references! |
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[[User:Drmohammadimath|Drmohammadimath]] ([[User talk:Drmohammadimath|talk]]) 10:53, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 05:42, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Jadan? Moreno == |
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:Hi @[[User:Drmohammadimath|Drmohammadimath]]. Every single source you have used is a paper or book or article written by Stefano. This means they are not independent of the subject, which means you have not proven that Stefano passes the [[WP:NACADEMIC]] criteria. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 10:57, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Jadan? Moreno|ts=05:42, 30 December 2024|draft=User:Jadan?_Moreno/sandbox}} |
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I'm not sure why I can't publish this page. [[User:Jadan? Moreno|Jadan? Moreno]] ([[User talk:Jadan? Moreno|talk]]) 05:42, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Jadan? Moreno|Jadan? Moreno]]: because it has been rejected (twice), for the reasons given in the notices and comments. TL;DNR = we don't publish promotional autobiographies with no evidence of notability. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:36, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 11:09, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Akakachan == |
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{{Lafc|username=Akakachan|ts=11:09, 26 October 2023|draft=Draft:Avenger's_Infinty_War}} |
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yuy [[User:Akakachan|Akakachan]] ([[User talk:Akakachan|talk]]) 11:09, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 08:38, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Cian Nollaig == |
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:@[[User:Akakachan|Akakachan]]: you don't ask a question, but this draft has been rejected, as there already exists an article on the same topic at [[Avengers: Infinity War]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:16, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Cian Nollaig|ts=08:38, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:I_Love_Limerick}} |
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Hi, I hope all is well. I am finding the feedback unclear for the article's sources being declined. When I compare the sources used to similar pages based in the region; my article uses third-person citations whereas the other pages cite articles from either their own websites or websites their companies own. [[User:Cian Nollaig|Cian Nollaig]] ([[User talk:Cian Nollaig|talk]]) 08:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Cian Nollaig}} Please see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]. Each article or draft is judged on its own merits. There are numerous ways inappropriate content can get past us, this cannot justify adding more inappropriate content, otherwise nothing could ever be removed from Wikipedia. It is possible for inappropriate content to exist, even for years, we can only address what we know about. If you want to help us, you can identify these other articles you have seen so action can be taken. We need the help. If you want to use other articles as a model or example, use those that are [[WP:GOODARTICLE|classified as good articles]], which have been checked by the community. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:The draft still has some unsourced sections. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:36, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 09:14, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Dcbeatz == |
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{{Lafc|username=Dcbeatz|ts=09:14, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:HiiKER}} |
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This is very interesting. Since this rejection, I spoke to the company. They said they have been bombarded with requests for them to pay more than 1000 dollars to get a wikipedia article published. This is 100% part of a corrupt system in wikipedia! [[User:Dcbeatz|Dcbeatz]] ([[User talk:Dcbeatz|talk]]) 09:14, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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why was this rejected can i get a specific reason [[User:Ryanatour1|Ryanatour1]] ([[User talk:Ryanatour1|talk]]) 14:45, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Dcbeatz|Dcbeatz]], that is an unfortunate ongoing scam by scammers who are not affiliated with Wikipedia. Please carefully read (and show the company) [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Scam warning]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 09:20, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Ryanatour1|Ryanatour1]]: let's turn this around – can you give me even one specific reason why this ''should'' be included in a global [[encyclopaedia]]? Because I sure can't think of any. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:53, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Yes, this is a scam that Wikipedia has nothing to do with. Scammers monitor this and other pages to then contact the subjects of drafts. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Dcbeatz|Dcbeatz]]: it's also interesting that you're on speaking terms with the company behind this app. This very much suggests a conflict of interest, which needs to be disclosed; I will post instructions on your talk page. |
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:::The subject is notable if the person it is written about is notable [[User:Ryanatour1|Ryanatour1]] ([[User talk:Ryanatour1|talk]]) 14:59, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:If you speak with them again, warn them against paying any money to anyone. Not only is this almost certain to be a scam, as already pointed out, the company is also unlikely to get anything for their money. Even if these folks are ''bona fide'' editors who know what they're doing, there is nothing anyone can do to guarantee that an article will be published, or more to the point, that it will remain so. And there's every chance they are very far from ''bona fide''. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:41, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Quite so. Therein lies the rub. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:02, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Because Sebastian Munoz Rodriguez is a household name that should be cherished by all [[User:Ryanatour1|Ryanatour1]] ([[User talk:Ryanatour1|talk]]) 14:58, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::Nonsense. Blocked as NOTHERE. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 15:03, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 13:37, 30 December 2024 review of submission by 43.225.193.153 == |
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{{Lafc|username=43.225.193.153|ts=13:37, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Md_Tauseef_Alam}} |
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How to add more references when it is not available in Web, although I can find is just few social media profiles along research paper publications [[Special:Contributions/43.225.193.153|43.225.193.153]] ([[User talk:43.225.193.153|talk]]) 13:37, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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I don't understand the reason my article was declined. [[User:Macpacgov|Macpacgov]] ([[User talk:Macpacgov|talk]]) 17:18, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:OP blocked for username and promotion. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 17:20, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Remember to log in when posting. Sources do not need to be online, see [[WP:REFB|Referencing for Beginners]] to learn how to write references. Social media profiles do not establish [[WP:BIO|that the person is notable]]; an article should primarily summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage choose on their own to say about the person. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 13:40, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:25, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Xpillz == |
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{{Lafc|username=Xpillz|ts=17:25, 26 October 2023|draft=Draft:9ice Kidd (Musician)}} |
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my submission not qualifies for Wikipedia article [[User:Xpillz|Xpillz]] ([[User talk:Xpillz|talk]]) 17:25, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 17:23, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Microesoft1212 == |
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:Indeed, @[[User:Xpillz|Xpillz]], your draft does not qualify for an article. Do you have any further questions? <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 17:27, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Microesoft1212|ts=17:23, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Chellikere}} |
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::But I have provided citation and arrange everything,what could be missing or what more left to be fixed so that it can be acceptable [[User:Xpillz|Xpillz]] ([[User talk:Xpillz|talk]]) 17:37, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Hello, while writing the article for this locality, I've come to the conclusion that it's hard to find sources that directly mention the locality with respect to another thing. |
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:::Your citations do not prove this person meets the [[WP:SINGER]] criteria. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 17:40, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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For example, articles rarely mention the nearest metro station, it is something you'd find on google maps. Therefore, citing for statements like these has become a challenge. Therefore, in order to still have a citation, I've cited articles that vaguely have the information that I'm looking for. |
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:::@[[User:Xpillz|Xpillz]] most of the sources are [[WP:RS|not reliable]] (no evidence of editorial oversight, history of fact-checking, some offer promotional services which means they are not reliable or independent, etc.). [[User:S0091|S0091]] ([[User talk:S0091|talk]]) 17:44, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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In order to get the article published, would it be prefferable if I just deleted the points for which getting a citation is very hard, thereby reducing the size of the article or should I continue with my vague citations. |
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Thank you [[User:Microesoft1212|Microesoft1212]] ([[User talk:Microesoft1212|talk]]) 17:23, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Microesoft1212|Microesoft1212]]: everything in the draft must come directly from reliable published sources. If you are writing what ''you'' know about the subject, and then struggling to find sources to support what you've written, you're going about it [[WP:BACKWARD]]. Also, you're probably engaging in either [[WP:original research|original research]] or synthesis, which is not allowed. Please stick to only that information which can be clearly backed up by sources. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:30, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 18:12, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Sachake94 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Sachake94|ts=18:12, 26 October 2023|draft=Draft:Adheesha Dharmakeerthi}} |
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I've submitted a wikipedia draft for a fintech marketer in Sri Lanka. With website references of the figure |
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-Business magazines feature article about him |
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-Business news site feature article about him |
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-An article he wrote which was published on a leading newspaper |
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-A brand blog of a fintech app in Sri Lanka talking about an innovation he did. |
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== 19:25, 30 December 2024 review of submission by UtpalSarmaAssam == |
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Someone has rejected my article saying the person is not noteworthy! I think that's completely insane [[User:Sachake94|Sachake94]] ([[User talk:Sachake94|talk]]) 18:12, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=UtpalSarmaAssam|ts=19:25, 30 December 2024|draft=User:UtpalSarmaAssam/sandbox}} |
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Reason for not publishing [[User:UtpalSarmaAssam|UtpalSarmaAssam]] ([[User talk:UtpalSarmaAssam|talk]]) 19:25, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:No indication of [[Wikipedia:Notability (people)|notability]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 19:26, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Sachake94|Sachake94]] let's go through your sources one by one: |
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::{{u|UtpalSarmaAssam}}, vast swathes of your draft are unreferenced, in violation of policies [[WP:V|Verifiability]] and [[WP:BLP|Biographies of living people]]. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 19:54, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:1) economynext.com, an interview so cannot be used to establish notability. See [[WP:INDEPENDENT]]. |
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:2) echelon.lk, the... same interview? see above. |
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:3) frimi.lk, a blog post so not [[WP:RELIABLE]]. Also barely talks about the guy |
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:4) apidm.lk, a staff page, so not [[WP:INDEPENDENT]]. |
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:5) apidm.lk, another staff page, so not [[WP:INDEPENDENT]]. |
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:So, how exactly do you believe this person meets the [[WP:NBASIC]] criteria? <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 18:22, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 20:12, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Drtasadukitoo == |
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{{Lafc|username=Drtasadukitoo|ts=20:12, 30 December 2024|draft=User:Drtasadukitoo/sandbox}} |
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I want to create new article [[User:Drtasadukitoo|Drtasadukitoo]] ([[User talk:Drtasadukitoo|talk]]) 20:12, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Drtasadukitoo|Drtasadukitoo]] Your first attempt is all about you, but you fail [[WP:BIO]], and have written an advert for yourself. You have confused Wikipedia with a website that is interested in your life and achievements. Please use a résumé site like LinkedIn, and note [[WP:NOTLINKEDIN]] 🇺🇦 [[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]] [[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk to me</small></sup>]] 🇺🇦 20:16, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Jhulford|Jhulford]]. Unfortunately every single source you've provided is [[WP:PRIMARY]] as its either from the library itself or from an organisation closely connected to the library. |
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:Respectfully, any organisation can pump out whatever sort of advertising they want about themselves. Wikipedia is only interested in what reliable, independent, secondary sources have to say about the organisation. |
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:Check the criteria at [[WP:NORG]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 19:13, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::I added some better citations to outside sources is this any better? I would appreciate your advice. [[User:Jhulford|Jhulford]] ([[User talk:Jhulford|talk]]) 19:54, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::Much of the draft is worded as advertising- the library describing its services and offerings. This does not establish notability. Wikipedia is primarily interested in what others say about the library. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:20, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 20:53, 30 December 2024 review of submission by SabrinaKJones == |
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{{Lafc|username=SabrinaKJones|ts=20:53, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:RemoFirst}} |
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I created an article and received feedback to make it more useful and make sure everything features citations. I updated it on 12/24/24 but have not had any response since then if the article is OK now, or if it requires more edits. It is not published yet. [[User:SabrinaKJones|SabrinaKJones]] ([[User talk:SabrinaKJones|talk]]) 20:53, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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What is this article lacking? It is a webpage informing people about the mustache club. [[User:JimmyTommm|JimmyTommm]] ([[User talk:JimmyTommm|talk]]) 19:06, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:I fixed your link, you need the "Draft:" portion. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:59, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:We don't do pre-review reviews; for feedback, please submit it again. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:01, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 22:57, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Moulyags == |
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:Wikipedia is not the place to tell people about your club. That's what social media is for. When the news writes about your club and what makes it [[WP:ORG|a notable organization]], let us know. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:10, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Moulyags|ts=22:57, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kannada_News_Today}} |
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::{{u|JimmyTommm}}, the relevant guideline is [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 00:48, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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I've noticed that some live pages on Wikipedia seem to lack sufficient sources or detailed references, yet they remain active. This has caused some confusion about the criteria for article approval. While I understand the importance of adhering to Wikipedia's notability and sourcing guidelines, I would appreciate clarification on how these standards are consistently applied. It would also help to know if my draft for Kannada News Today meets the requirements or needs further improvement. [[User:Moulyags|Moulyags]] ([[User talk:Moulyags|talk]]) 22:57, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Moulyags}} This is a volunteer project, where people do what they can when they can. As such, inappropriate articles can and do get by us, for many reasons(one big reason is that this process has not existed the entire time Wikipedia has existed). We can only address what we know about. This cannot justify adding more inappropriate content. If you want to help us, please identify these other inappropriate articles you have seen so action can be taken. We need the help. See [[WP:OSE|Other stuff exists]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 23:03, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:45, 26 October 2023 review of submission by Hamody Saif is back == |
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:Please disclose your relationship with Kannada news, as required by policy(see [[WP:COI]] and [[WP:PAID]]) as you claim to have personally created its logo. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 23:05, 30 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Why did you treat on me [[User:Hamody Saif is back|Hamody Saif is back]] ([[User talk:Hamody Saif is back|talk]]) 19:45, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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= December 31 = |
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:@[[User:Hamody Saif is back|Hamody Saif is back]]. You didn't bother to source it after being given 2 chances to do so and thus the draft was rejected. Please read [[WP:GNG]]. Regards, [[User:Seawolf35|Seawolf35]] ([[User talk:Seawolf35#top|talk]] - [[Special:EmailUser/Seawolf35|email]]) 23:07, 26 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 00:16, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Blitzite2 == |
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It's hard to get in-depth sources when it hasn't been professionally reviewed a lot. The game has received a lot of critical acclaim, with $1M of revenue approximately. [[User:Blitzite2|Blitzite2]] ([[User talk:Blitzite2|talk]]) 00:16, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It likely doesn't merit an article, then- reviews are usually how games/films/books etc, merit articles. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 01:04, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 04:01, 27 October 2023 review of submission by Midwesterngal == |
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:Hello, @[[User:Blitzite2|Blitzite2]]. Revenue is irrelevant. Critical acclaim is relevant - provided it is published in [[WP:reliable sources|reliable sources]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 10:20, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Midwesterngal|ts=04:01, 27 October 2023|draft=Draft:Matt_Weinhold}} |
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I have left things on the talk page, but this keeps getting declined each time for slightly different reasons - it's getting difficult to know what to fix. I initially got advice on seeking out more reviews. It was "too many primary sources" at one point because interviews are bad. So we found more reviews and more information. Now it appears sources aren't good - but I don't know which ones. |
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I can and will keep digging, but it's starting to feel like I'm doing this in the dark - for a person who is already listed multiple times in Wikipedia. But this is frustrating. |
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I would also just like to note that as someone new to this, the feeling is that I'm trying to do something dreadfully wrong when I'm simply trying to fill in a blank. Is Matt Weinhold the missing George Clooney page someone forgot to do? No. But has he been consistently contributing to the pop culture landscape across multiple genres for 20 years? Absolutely. Will multiple people recognize the work that would not exist without him? This is also true. |
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At the same time, I'm trying to overcome the gatekeeping here and I'm not getting plain assistance. I get links to articles that have a lot of contradictory advice that I am sure makes sense if you've written 100s of articles and is definitely advantageous if you're looking to decline something. |
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[[User:Midwesterngal|Midwesterngal]] ([[User talk:Midwesterngal|talk]]) 04:01, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 09:07, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Thehistorianisaac == |
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:@[[User:Midwesterngal|Midwesterngal]] I am taking a look at this and will respond on the draft's talk page. [[User:S0091|S0091]] ([[User talk:S0091|talk]]) 14:45, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Thehistorianisaac|ts=09:07, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:7th Marine Brigade}} |
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Recently a fellow editor(@[[User:Buckshot06]]) already helped me publish my draft as [[Special Operations Brigade (PLA Navy Marine Corps)]]. May I ask what will happen to the draft? |
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P.S. |
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I turned [[7th Marine Brigade]] into a redirect to [[Special Operations Brigade (PLA Navy Marine Corps)]] [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 09:07, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Drafts get deleted automatically if they are not edited in six months. |
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== 04:57, 27 October 2023 review of submission by Muktar H Abdullahi == |
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:If you are the only editor who has worked on a draft, you can request its deletion by pasting {{tl|db-author}} at the top; but other editors have worked on [[Draft:7th Marine Brigade]], so that option is not available in this case. You can request its deletion at [[WP:MFD]], but it's probably not worth it for a draft. I do suggest you withdraw it from review though, so as not to take up a reviewer's time. You can simply remove th most recent e {{tl|afc submission}} template from the top. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 10:25, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::So the draft was technically never reviewed? [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 11:37, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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To be more effective or more experience person on how to edits Wikipedia or any other Wikipedia project. |
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:::@[[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]]: this draft was reviewed, and declined, [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:7th_Marine_Brigade&diff=prev&oldid=1260209297 once], on Nov 29; but not reviewed again since your resubmission a few days later. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 12:50, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Muktar H Abdullahi|Muktar H Abdullahi]] ([[User talk:Muktar H Abdullahi|talk]]) 04:57, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::So basically it was never re-reviewed |
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::::Doesn't really matter because in the end it was published anyways but yeah [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 12:53, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::It was awaiting new review. We currently have c 1,800 pending drafts in the system, with wait times up to 8 weeks or so. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 13:00, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::Ok understood |
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::::::Removed the review banner and added a comment saying that it is already published [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 13:01, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 09:59, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Mohan1357 == |
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:Hi @[[User:Muktar H Abdullahi|Muktar H Abdullahi]]. Your draft was not appropriate for Wikipedia and has been rejected. Wikipedia is not a blogging platform- articles only exist to summarise and paraphrase what reliable independent sources state about a topic. It is not a place for essays or original research. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 07:40, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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Please kindly assist in working on my article for publication on wikipedia page [[User:Mohan1357|Mohan1357]] ([[User talk:Mohan1357|talk]]) 09:59, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{u|Mohan1357}} Hello, Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell about themselves, please see the [[WP:AUTO|autobiography policy]]. Please see the message left by the reviewer as to what needs to be done; we're not here to be co-editors, just to give advice. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:02, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 05:02, 27 October 2023 review of submission by Rksamson == |
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My draft is being rejected. kindly help [[User:Rksamson|Rksamson]] ([[User talk:Rksamson|talk]]) 05:02, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 10:22, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Brown Balloons == |
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:@[[User:Rksamson|Rksamson]]: this draft has been rejected (twice), and will therefore not be considered further. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:19, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Brown Balloons|ts=10:22, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Bro_MONROW}} |
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This draft page has been rejected by one of the editors. I already provided factual information and reliable sources. [[User:Brown Balloons|Brown Balloons]] ([[User talk:Brown Balloons|talk]]) 10:22, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Unfortunately it seems that this person is not [[WP:BIO|notable as Wikipedia defines a notable person]]. This is why it was rejected and will not be considered further. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:23, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 13:58, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Lorenzo Lwanga == |
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Hello, |
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Hello dear admins, I’ve submitted the draft and still didn’t get answers can you guys please check on it. Thanks [[User:Yeszzzz|Yeszzzz]] ([[User talk:Yeszzzz|talk]]) 13:37, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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I could use a live walk-through on how to edit a few things. Am having trouble with my first article. [[User:Lorenzo Lwanga|Lorenzo Lwanga]] ([[User talk:Lorenzo Lwanga|talk]]) 13:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Yeszzzz|Yeszzzz]]: did you happen to notice the text on top of the draft? |
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:{{tq|"Review waiting, please be patient. This may take 4 months or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 3,380 pending submissions waiting for review."}} |
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:You resubmitted this yesterday. It will be reviewed in due course. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 13:50, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Oh I didn’t notice thanks [[User:Yeszzzz|Yeszzzz]] ([[User talk:Yeszzzz|talk]]) 14:22, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 14:01, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Nandy Movies == |
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I have made edits to my article, provided sources, and references, my article has not yet been accepted. I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me. [[User:Nandy Movies|Nandy Movies]] ([[User talk:Nandy Movies|talk]]) 14:01, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It has not been "blocked" whatever that means [[Draft:Vimal Nair Suresh]] has been declined because it has no content and looks like a test edit. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 13:53, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Nandy Movies|Nandy Movies]]: presumably we're talking about {{courtesy link|Draft:Bhaggyolokkhi}}? It hasn't been accepted, because it is very poorly referenced, and therefore provides no evidence that the subject is notable, either per [[WP:GNG]] or [[WP:NFILM]]. Unreleased films hardly ever are notable, so you should probably wait until the film has come out and received some reviews. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 14:30, 27 October 2023 review of submission by Peter Garlands == |
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:@[[User:Nandy Movies|Nandy Movies]] As an unreleased film, it is likely too soon for there to be an article about it. Press releases do not contribute to our [[Wikipedia:Notability (films)|notability criteria for films]]. Wait for some in-depth coverage from reliable film critics before re-submitting. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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{{Lafc|username=Peter Garlands|ts=14:30, 27 October 2023|draft=User:Peter_Garlands/sandbox}} |
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:PS: Judging by your username, you have a conflict of interest in this subject. That needs to be disclosed. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:10, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It is written like an advertisement, for instance "has proven to be an effective solution to address challenges in ultrasound teaching and has revolutionized how medical professionals acquire ultrasound skills." is just marketing trumpery. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 14:49, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::I have added 5 white papers supporting that statment its not just marketing. But Ok, Im erasing that. IS there anything else I need to delete? thanks [[User:Peter Garlands|Peter Garlands]] ([[User talk:Peter Garlands|talk]]) 14:56, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Five sections have zero sources, it is ALL written in a promotional way and it is most definitely marketing and NOT an encyclopaedia article, do you work for them by any chance? [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 15:03, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::They all have linke they are above, have you read the article? [[User:Peter Garlands|Peter Garlands]] ([[User talk:Peter Garlands|talk]]) 15:05, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::Have you read [[WP:YFA|your first article]] and [[WP:COI]]? [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 15:09, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::And you should note that the sourcing requirements are stricter in medical articles: see [[WP:MEDRS]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 15:23, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::@[[User:Peter Garlands|Peter Garlands]] I am declining this again as it is so clearly written as a PR piece. Wikipedia is NOT to be used for advertising or promotion, which this draft does. Please do not re-submit again without addressing the lack of in-line citations and the wholly inappropriate tone. Further re-submissions without addressing will lead to a rejection. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:23, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::Its not an advertising, Im trying to make a wikipedia article but I have no clue of what is the advertising part of the article, I ve already deleted the sentence that was remarked as "promotional" what else should I delete? [[User:Peter Garlands|Peter Garlands]] ([[User talk:Peter Garlands|talk]]) 16:37, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::::@[[User:Peter Garlands|Peter Garlands]] Honestly? it needs a complete re-write. Nuke it and start from scratch, it is not salvageable in it's current state. You must write in a completely dispassionate way. Make no assertions. Avoid all [[WP:PEACOCK]] language. Only summarise and paraphrase what reliable secondary independent sources state about the device. |
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::::::You also still have not confirmed if you are being paid to write this article, as requested multiple times on your User Talk Page. Failure to declare is a breach of Wikimedia Terms and Conditions and '''will''' lead you to be blocked from editing. '''You must do this now.''' <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:43, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::::Ok, yes Im beeing paid, its my job to write an article for wikipedia, but im not allowed to do any advertising and Im not even trying. I will try to rewrite from scratch thanks [[User:Peter Garlands|Peter Garlands]] ([[User talk:Peter Garlands|talk]]) 16:53, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::::::@[[User:Peter Garlands|Peter Garlands]] You must make a paid editing disclosure immediately. Follow the instructions at [[WP:PAID]]. Failure to do so will result in you being blocked from editing. |
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::::::::I would highly recommend you very carefully read [[WP:BOSS|When your boss tells you to edit Wikipedia]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:58, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::::::Wikipedia is not interested in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is only interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in [[WP:reliable sources|reliable sources]].. Once you have made the mandatory declaration, find several sources that meet [[WP:MEDRS]], ''and'' are wholly independent of the company and of anybody who was involved in developing the product or in research that led to the product. If you can find several such sources, you can go ahead and '''forget absolutely everything you know about the company and the product''' and write a summary of those sources. (Do you see why editing with a [[WP:COI|COI]] is hard?) [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 22:24, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 14:44, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Candus76 == |
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{{Lafc|username=Candus76|ts=14:44, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Thanjavur_K._Ponnaiya_Pillai}} |
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I'm translating a wikipedia page (https://ta.wikipedia.org/wiki/தஞ்சை_க._பொன்னையா_பிள்ளை) and I have added the same sources added there, but my request to turn it into an article is denied because I need more references (which I don't have). What do I do? [[User:Candus76|Candus76]] ([[User talk:Candus76|talk]]) 14:44, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Hello! This draft was declined for submission because the reviewer felt the sourcing was not verifiable. I have gone through and removed any citation that could be seen as a personal blog (though these were blogs by critics and theatre writers) and have removed citations from sources Reisman herself would have input on such as the New Play Exchange. I have also deleted a link to a talk she gave on YouTube. Every other source is a from a national or regional newspaper such as The New York Times or Austin Chronicle, a major trade journal such as American Theatre Magazine, Howlround, or Broadway World, or a theatre organization's website. I've looked at other living playwrights such as Annie Baker and Martyna Majok while creating this page and they use many of the same sources. I can add citations to Reisman's list of Produced Plays but this seemed like overkill as they were mostly referenced in the previous sections. Let me know if this sourcing seems adequate and I'll resubmit. I have reached out to the reviewer for clarification but have yet to hear back. Thank you for your time and guidance! [[User:Beatrice Brooklyn|Beatrice Brooklyn]] ([[User talk:Beatrice Brooklyn|talk]]) 16:30, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Hi @[[User:Candus76|Candus76]]. Each language Wikipedia project is different, with different policies and guidelines. The English Wikipedia has the strictest reference requirements out of all the various language projects. |
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:Hi @[[User:Beatrice Brooklyn|Beatrice Brooklyn]]. I've had a look at all your sources. I think it passes the threshold now and would accept if you re-submitted. |
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:If those sources do not meet our [[Wikipedia:Notability|criteria for inclusion]], and there are no other sources to be found (remember, you can use offline sources as long as they are published and you provide a full citation) then I am afraid the topic does not merit an article on the English Wikipedia at this time. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:46, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::Oh alright, thank you for clearing that up so fast! I'll try searching for more sources :) [[User:Candus76|Candus76]] ([[User talk:Candus76|talk]]) 14:51, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Best of luck - as long as the sources are published and accessible to a reader (even via an offline library or archive) then it is okay to use. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 15:37, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 17:51, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Artennina == |
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Could you please tell me detailed what I should do? I ám a decent person who has the best intentions with this article and I only wat the best for it! Only the sometimes written comments (as English is not my mother language) are not easy to understand. |
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The article has been rejected. We have 2 questions: |
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Please give us another moment. [[User:Artennina|Artennina]] ([[User talk:Artennina|talk]]) 17:51, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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1. When writing the article we based the structure and content on an article about the Swiss National Science Foundation. We very careful to use objective language. We would be interested to hear why the submission "seems to read more like an advertisement", with some specific examples so that the text can be improved. |
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2. We are unable to provide further published sources about Euresearch. Why is our article being rejected for this when there is a related article without any sources? The article, in German, is about the "National Contact Points": https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nationale_Kontaktstellen. There are National Contact Points in all the European countries. The ones for Switzerland are part of the Euresearch network that our article covers. [[User:Wordsmith.ch|Wordsmith.ch]] ([[User talk:Wordsmith.ch|talk]]) 18:52, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:You have not fixed the issues identified by reviewers, including not disclosing your [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. Your references do not establish that this person meets our [[WP:BAND|definition of a notable musician]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:22, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Wordsmith.ch|Wordsmith.ch]] The article has only been declined, not rejected. Rejected would mean it won't be considered further. Who is "we"? Wikipedia accounts can only be used by one person. |
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:The German Wikipedia is a separate project with it's own policies and guidelines. What is acceptable there might not be acceptable here. The English Wikipedia does have the strictest content guidelines. |
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:The problem with your article is that it does not show any evidence that Euresearch passes the [[WP:NORG]] criteria. We need to see significant coverage of the organisation in reliable, independent, secondary sources. Your three sources are all connected to the subject unfortunately. Can you find articles in newspapers or magazines that discuss this organisation? They do not have to be in English and can be offline. |
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:Finally, the copy does read like an advert as it is telling the world about Euresearch. I wouldn't call the language promotional per se, but it reads like the kind of content you'd find on an About Us section of a website. This is the opposite of how English Wikipedia articles should be written: instead you should be paraphrasing what those reliable, independent, secondary sources state about Euresearch. |
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:If you can't find those sources that we require, you might think about simply reworking the draft to an existing Wikipedia page, such as [[Framework Programmes for Research and Technological Development]]. |
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:Hope that helps, but let me know if you have any questions. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 19:34, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Thanks for your help. Can you please explain how the Euresearch article differs from the article I based it on: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swiss_National_Science_Foundation |
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::That also reads like an About Us section. It talks about their magazine and has sources derived from its own website. [[User:Wordsmith.ch|Wordsmith.ch]] ([[User talk:Wordsmith.ch|talk]]) 21:53, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Wordsmith.ch|Wordsmith.ch]] That article is fairly poorly sourced and wouldn't be accepted in it's present state if submitted now. It was first created in 2005 when our policies and guidelines were much more lax. If you were going to base your draft on an existing one, use a [[WP:GOOD]] one. Unfortunately we have thousands of poor quality articles that no one has gotten around to improving yet. I understand this is a frustrating process- it's difficult to write a Wikipedia article from scratch. I'd recommend trying to find at least three secondary sources that discuss Euresearch and paraphrase their content to make up the bulk of the article. Primary sources can be used for basic facts. If you do that, and let me know by pinging me here or on my User Talk Page, I'll take another look. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 22:05, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::Thanks very much. [[Special:Contributions/213.55.244.95|213.55.244.95]] ([[User talk:213.55.244.95|talk]]) 22:08, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::::What would help me is a good article of this type to look at. I reviewed a lot before I started writing and they were all similar to what I did. I looked at WP:GOOD but couldn't find any. Can you suggest a good article about an organisation that I could look at? [[User:Wordsmith.ch|Wordsmith.ch]] ([[User talk:Wordsmith.ch|talk]]) 06:50, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:::::It's difficult to find one, you're right. The problem with these types of agencies is most of their work is done in the background without much secondary source attention. This means it's more difficult to write an article that passes [[WP:NORG]]. |
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:::::My advice would be to not approach this [[WP:BACKWARD]]: do a wide search for secondary, independent, reliable sources that discuss the organisation. Then build the article from that. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 09:51, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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why was it rejected was it too short [[User:Lightningbox14|Lightningbox14]] ([[User talk:Lightningbox14|talk]]) 18:53, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Lightningbox14|Lightningbox14]]: [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day|Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 18:57, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Interviews do not establish notability, because by definition they are the person speaking about themselves. We want to know what others unaffiliated with him say about him. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:18, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Wikipedia is not interested in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is only interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in [[WP:reliable sources|reliable sources]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 22:26, 27 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 19:36, 31 December 2024 review of submission by DesertMouse26 == |
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Hi there - this article was submitted for review and it wasn't accepted. The listed reason was that "the draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article." I see that there's an existing page on the same subject in Japanese (https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shokz). Does that serve as proof that this subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article? [[User:DesertMouse26|DesertMouse26]] ([[User talk:DesertMouse26|talk]]) 19:36, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:No, because different Wikipedias have different policies. What matters is if our policies are met. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:38, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== 19:38, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Henrilebec == |
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Please help to edit and approve, thank you so much [[Special:Contributions/113.254.24.90|113.254.24.90]] ([[User talk:113.254.24.90|talk]]) 00:33, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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It's not clear why scientific notability is different from say "celebrity" notability. My submission for medical technologies includes independent cites in scientific journals, but the Wikipedia article reviewer says this is insufficient to establish "notability". It's not clear why cites in scientific journals are insufficient to establish notability. It seems to me that such cites, sufficient in scientific journals, are not sufficient for Wikipedia. [[User:Henrilebec|Henrilebec]] ([[User talk:Henrilebec|talk]]) 19:38, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Henrilebec|Henrilebec]] I don’t think the issue here is whether the journals are reliable so much as independent as they are written by the subject. The standard for a person such as this is [[WP:NACADEMIC]]. Things like citation index and special awards or academic positions are used to indicated notability, otherwise we need to see articles about him not from him to establish notability. [[User:Mcmatter|McMatter]] <sup>([[User talk:Mcmatter|talk]])</sup>/<sub>([[Special:Contributions/Mcmatter|contrib]])</sub> 19:44, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:I assume you mean this {{courtesy link|Draft:Kanion Co}}? That draft has not been submitted, therefore it cannot be reviewed. And I might add, even if it were submitted, it would not be accepted as it currently stands, given that it is purely promotional. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:17, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::I placed a link to your draft in the header as intended. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:46, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::This is exactly what's not clear. The articles cited are not by Burke, they are about Burke's scientific research projects. The work of Burke and his team were vetted and published by independent scientific journals (Harvard Medical School. Journal of Neurosurgery, Canadian Medical Journal, Departments of Pathology and Surgery,Harvard Medical School,and the Neurosurgical Service of The Children's Medical Center,Boston,Massachusettsetc). If Burke's name appears in the article, it is simply because he was the team leader responsible for assembling and recording the enormous amount of work of the various research teams. Otherwise, modern scientists are unable to understand where these discoveries were made. I could be wrong, but it appears to me that the Wikipedia reviewers are not familiar with older scientific journals that were responsible for vetting (and validating) this type of pioneering medical research. This, for example, was the first known instance of an engineering institution (Cal-Tech) engaging in innovative medical research. Can you provide some clarity for us? [[User:Henrilebec|Henrilebec]] ([[User talk:Henrilebec|talk]]) 20:19, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:::@[[User:Henrilebec|Henrilebec]] Ref 3 and 4 list Burke as an author, so valid to use as a supporting material for information but have no value in establishing notability. The age of the journals make no difference in how we assess, that being said many reviewers are not familiar with the specific [[WP:NACADEMIC]] as it is a more complex and dynamic policy then the more generally applied [[WP:GNG]]. So I am assuming you think they meet criteria 1 of the academic criteria, which may be the case, but I am also not comfortable in this standard enough to assess what a significant contribution to their field would be and how to prove it without cite bombing the article. In my attempts to look up a number of citations of his work I've been unable to get a feeling for this and it could be due to the age of the work in question. I will ping @[[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] here, as they are more familiar with this subject and maybe can provide more insight then I can. [[User:Mcmatter|McMatter]] <sup>([[User talk:Mcmatter|talk]])</sup>/<sub>([[Special:Contributions/Mcmatter|contrib]])</sub> 22:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::::For NACADEMIC questions, I always defer to [[User:David Eppstein|David Eppstein]]. [[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] ([[User talk:WhatamIdoing|talk]]) 00:39, 1 January 2025 (UTC) |
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:::::I tend to avoid debating the notability of medical academics because I do not really understand the citation patterns in those fields. I think [[User:JoelleJay]] may be a better choice for those fields, although she typically takes a harder line than I would. That said, Google Scholar was not promising; I only found one well cited publication, "The corrosion of metals in tissues; and an introduction to tantalum", not enough for [[WP:PROF#C1]] even accounting for the likelihood that papers from that time period are less likely to be well cited today. The draft does not supply any evidence for notability other than through #C1. —[[User:David Eppstein|David Eppstein]] ([[User talk:David Eppstein|talk]]) 00:49, 1 January 2025 (UTC) |
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== 19:58, 31 December 2024 review of submission by 188.229.34.79 == |
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New [[Special:Contributions/188.229.34.79|188.229.34.79]] ([[User talk:188.229.34.79|talk]]) 19:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Why was my application denied. It’s important that I am remembered when I die |
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:A draft that is only an infobox won't be accepted due to [[WP:A3|lack of content]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 02:57, 1 January 2025 (UTC) |
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[[User:The ely community|The ely community]] ([[User talk:The ely community|talk]]) 01:11, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:The ely community|The ely community]]: we don't deal with "applications", we assess proposed article drafts that have been submitted for pre-publication review. Your draft has been deleted. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:14, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== 02:54, 1 January 2025 review of submission by WhoIsBean == |
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I wanted to start writing a Wikipedia Article on a popular Roblox game. I found the draft and it has been declined 2 months ago, what do I do? [[User:WhoIsBean|WhoIsBean]] ([[User talk:WhoIsBean|talk]]) 02:54, 1 January 2025 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|WhoIsBean}} "Popular Roblox game" isn't enough to warrant an article. What we would need to see is [[WP:Notability|multiple]] [[WP:Reliable sources|third-party sources with editorial oversight that explicitly discuss the game (and not Roblox in general)]]. If such sources don't exist - and I wager they're very unlikely to - we can't even discuss the merits of an article. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^_^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 02:56, 1 January 2025 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Sejatizen|Sejatizen]]: not going to happen, sorry. This draft has been rejected and is pending deletion. (And, it's not in English, but at this stage in the proceedings that's just by-the-by.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:12, 28 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Thank you! [[User:WhoIsBean|WhoIsBean]] ([[User talk:WhoIsBean|talk]]) 03:15, 1 January 2025 (UTC) |
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:::I've found a reliable source made by the creators itself, it's only issue is that the information is inside the game and not on a site. [[User:WhoIsBean|WhoIsBean]] ([[User talk:WhoIsBean|talk]]) 03:23, 1 January 2025 (UTC) |
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December 26
[edit]06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23
[edit]- 117.254.37.23 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. 117.254.37.23 (talk) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Firstly, if you're Ssaisushanth45, please log into your account whenever editing.
- Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing).
- I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts?
- It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any.
- We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a deadline.
- Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: WP:BOSS. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
- "We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
- As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us."
- Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me.
- Ssaisushanth45 (talk) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ssaisushanth45: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. When you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug
[edit]- Ramakrishnan.babug (talk · contribs) (TB)
May I know the reason for rejecting my article?
Ramakrishnan.babug (talk) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Ramakrishnan.babug Wikipedia is not for self-promotion. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455
[edit]regarding to uploading a new page or Article i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it Shaurya4455 (talk) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at WP:GNG. Theroadislong (talk) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Shaurya4455 (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD
[edit]Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. CorosanD (talk) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- @CorosanD: That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --bonadea contributions talk 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @CorosanD. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
- Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft BACKWARDS, starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is only interested in what reliable published sources say.
- Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see WP:42.
- Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{ill}}: so
is displayed as Union of Bulgarian Composers - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it.{{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}}
- The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the COM:Threshold of originality, and so is in the public domain).
- You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see image use policy. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. ColinFine (talk) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
- User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @ColinFine qcne (talk) 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC)
December 27
[edit]03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin
[edit]- Fuzzpumpkin (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved.
Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. Fuzzpumpkin (talk) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Fuzzpumpkin Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany
[edit]- Al Gattany (talk · contribs) (TB)
Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk Al Gattany (talk) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Al Gattany: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Al Gattany, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a Notable person deserving of a Wikipedia article. Cullen328 (talk) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi
[edit]- Itsfaizanfaizi (talk · contribs) (TB)
Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them. I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions in this thread explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- I addressed the peacock prose by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately another reviewer found that the work done was not sufficient and rejected it, still as a blatant advert. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 08:58, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- I addressed the peacock prose by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
16:09, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689
[edit]Can someone help me to edit his biography enable for it to be accepted. 2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689 (talk) 16:09, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- We don't provide co-editing services here; it's up to you to show that this person is notable. 331dot (talk) 16:34, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
18:58, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Kolorguide
[edit]- Kolorguide (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am trying to publish something about quality control and specifically about dyne test pens, on the page it shows me the following title: "Dyne Test Pens in Quality Control: Ensuring Surface Tension Accuracy" Please check draft title. No such draft exists Kolorguide (talk) 18:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- The name in your sandbox unimportant; the reviewer, if accepted, would give it the appropriate title. The larger problem is that this reads like a largely unsourced essay, and it's very far away from being a Wikipedia-appropriate article. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 19:14, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
19:00, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Movied Freak
[edit]- Movied Freak (talk · contribs) (TB)
what should i have to add ? Movied Freak (talk) 19:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Movied Freak YouTube and IMDB are unacceptable sources as they are user-generated. YouTube videos produced by a reputable news outlet or similar may be acceptable if on a verified channel. The film is also unreleased, meaning it does not yet merit an article(see notability of future films) unless you can show that there was something unusual about the production of the film(beyond casting announcements, release of trailers, etc.) 331dot (talk) 19:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
20:20, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Abu muttalib
[edit]- Abu muttalib (talk · contribs) (TB)
The aproval to draft of my article is declined. Wanted and instructed to post here to know. Abu muttalib (talk) 20:20, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Abu muttalib is posting a request here all that you understood from the detailed decline rationale? 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Abu muttalib Please see the message by the reviewer as to why it was declined and what you can do about it.
- I see that you took an image of this person, what is your connection to her? 331dot (talk) 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, I got it. I resubmitted with one more additional independent verifiable source.
- As such, no direct connection, except that I was viewer of the said shows and she is from my place. I am a admirer of her singing and wanted a page on Wikipedia for her similar to the Wikipedia page of her husband, which has even a Wikipedia page for both of their common friends Meiyang Chang. The image is clipped and cropped from one of her YouTube videos. Let me share the link. Abu muttalib (talk) 21:23, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Abu muttalib Please do not clip images from anywhere unless their licencing is suitable and allows onward use. File:Deepali Sahay.jpg is being dealt with on Wikimedia Commons and will be deleted unless you follow the process at c:COM:VRT to show that you have permission and/or that the licence at the Youtube video allowed you to upload it. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:08, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Abu muttalib Further; Words/phases such as famous, prestigious, ventured into tend to be words of praise, and reduce your draft to advertorial. Please look at your phraseology carefully. We require flat, neutral, dull-but-worthy prose asserting facts and verifying them with citations. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Got it. Let me rephrase the whole article. Abu muttalib (talk) 09:13, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- At Draft talk:Deepali Sahay you say that there is already an article about her at Deepali Kishore. There cannot be two articles about the same person, so you should not resubmit the draft. (It was disruptive to resubmit it without any changes after the previous decline.) The existing article is in very bad shape – it was created long before the draft process existed, so it has never been reviewed or "accepted", but it can be edited and improved. However, unless there are indeed sources showing that she is notable, that article will be deleted. --bonadea contributions talk 09:29, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Got it. Let me rephrase the whole article. Abu muttalib (talk) 09:13, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- OK. It can be removed. I have the concerned person to send her image so that there is no licensing issue. Abu muttalib (talk) 09:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Abu muttalib Note that she might not hold the copyright to images of her; typically it belongs with the photographer. As I said images are not relevant to getting your draft approved, I would suggest focusing on that first, before worrying about images. 331dot (talk) 09:27, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Abu muttalib Further; Words/phases such as famous, prestigious, ventured into tend to be words of praise, and reduce your draft to advertorial. Please look at your phraseology carefully. We require flat, neutral, dull-but-worthy prose asserting facts and verifying them with citations. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Abu muttalib Please do not clip images from anywhere unless their licencing is suitable and allows onward use. File:Deepali Sahay.jpg is being dealt with on Wikimedia Commons and will be deleted unless you follow the process at c:COM:VRT to show that you have permission and/or that the licence at the Youtube video allowed you to upload it. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:08, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
22:47, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746
[edit]Thank you for your feedback on why my article was not accepted and for giving me the guidelines that I need to follow in order to improve my chances of getting the article approved. I need to know how much time I have to re-edit the article and resubmit. Thanks. Sincerely, --Elreta Dodds. 2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746 (talk) 22:47, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- You have up to six months to do so. Each edit you make resets that clock. Thus there is absolutely no effective deadline. Happy editing. You may also continue to edit after submission. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:04, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- (ec) There is no deadline as long as you are actively working on the draft. If it is inactive for six months, it will be deleted, but even then it can be restored via WP:REFUND. 331dot (talk) 09:05, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
December 28
[edit]01:34, 28 December 2024 review of submission by 103.238.130.133
[edit]- 103.238.130.133 (talk · contribs) (TB)
May I ask why the article was rejected based on notability and how can it be improved for successful resubmission ? 103.238.130.133 (talk) 01:34, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Rejection typically means that improvement is not possible at this time; no amount of editing can confer notability on a topic. It seems like you have no independent reliable sources that have significant coverage of this person, just descriptions of their activities. 331dot (talk) 09:02, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
02:50, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin
[edit]- Fuzzpumpkin (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, I've been having trouble getting my article draft approved to be a "real" article. I'm open to all advice. Fuzzpumpkin (talk) 02:50, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Fuzzpumpkin You need to include the "Draft:" portion when linking to your draft, I fixed this for you above. Please see the messages left by the reviewers; the most recent one asks you to improve the tone of the article, and the reviewer left you specific advice on your draft. 331dot (talk) 09:00, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- There is really no need to open a further thread on this matter, Fuzzpumpkin, Continuing the same thread is usual and helpful. But, since you have, Draft:Office Hours Live's referencing is much improved since my comment, for which I thank you.
- When you are sure that you have handled the all reviewer's advice as well I suggest you resubmit for review. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:02, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
08:06, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi
[edit]- Itsfaizanfaizi (talk · contribs) (TB)
my article has been rejected 2 times. I understand it was rejected due to concerns about advertising and notability. Could you provide specific feedback on the promotional aspects and what type of sources would demonstrate sufficient notability? I am eager to revise the article to meet Wikipedia's standards.
Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 08:06, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Itsfaizanfaizi: slight correction, your draft was previously declined twice, and has now been rejected. Rejection means it won't be considered any further.
- The relevant notability criterion is WP:NBUILD, which means that we require significant coverage in multiple sources that meet the WP:GNG standard. Your draft cites no such source. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:32, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
09:28, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Johnsonbl9ck
[edit]- Johnsonbl9ck (talk · contribs) (TB)
Reviewed End Johnsonbl9ck (talk) 09:28, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Johnsonbl9ck it hasn't been reviewed yet, and don't add fake notices, thanks. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 09:30, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- But it is a waste of everybody's time to submit a draft with no content and no sources. A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliable sources say about a notable subject, and very little else. Please see WP:REFB. ColinFine (talk) 22:15, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
14:07, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Durgaprasadpetla
[edit]- Durgaprasadpetla (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am a beginner on Wikipedia and need some help. I was trying to edit the Talk:Kambala Srinivas Rao page, but I encountered a message saying it was deleted under G8 (talk page of a deleted page). I would like to know: Is it possible to restore the talk page, and under what circumstances? How can I address content or discussions related to the deleted page appropriately? Are there specific steps I should follow to create or request the recreation of the article itself? Thank you for your guidance and support! Durgaprasadpetla (talk) 14:07, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Durgaprasadpetla I fixed your post, the whole url is not needed. You may use the Article Wizard to create a draft. The deleted talk page only has a comment by you. The article was deleted under the A7 speedy deletion criterion(no asserted importance). You need to see your user talk page for important information requiring a response. 331dot (talk) 14:15, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
15:56, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Hays Deutschland
[edit]- Hays Deutschland (talk · contribs) (TB)
I mixed up the references, which I copied from the German Wiki site I worked on. I cant clean the references. Easiest would be to delete all references an set them up new. How can I do that? Hays Deutschland (talk) 15:56, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Hays Deutschland I've removed all the references. If that's not what you meant, please undo my edit. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 12:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
17:07, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Dreimouse in an nutshell
[edit]I have worked hard to make this article, but i got no way of getting the reference to show on the page😞 Dreimouse in an nutshell (talk) 17:07, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please can you disclose your connection with Saxdor? I have left 4 messages today on User talk:Dreimouse in an nutshell and you haven't responded to any of them. I have reviewed the 4 references that you have added to the bottom of the article but none of them even have working URLs. Spiderone(Talk to Spider) 17:26, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
21:01, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Accounttree8
[edit]- Accounttree8 (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have no idea why my article has been denied. The reason it was denied was "Reason as the Prod reason." I have no idea what this means. Please advise. I would like this article to be published ASAP, as there is no good reason for its denial. Accounttree8 (talk) 21:01, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Accounttree8 You claim that you created and own the copyright to the conference logo- and you seem to be on a deadline(we're not). What is your relationship with the conference?
- SafariScribe could you elaborate? 331dot (talk) 21:05, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- I apologize for the mistake, I'm not sure why it is listed that I created the logo. I did not create the logo, nor do I own the copyright. I am more than happy to fix that, but I'm not sure how to fix that. I am a former employee at the conference (I am since retired and now have some time to do things like this). I have been in communication with the conference and they would like to have a presence on this website, as most of our peer conferences do. I'm juts trying to help my former colleagues. I have been attempting to create this page for 9 months. It has been denied every time. I am not on a deadline, I am just frustrated with the countless denials (which is why I indicated ASAP). I am a Wikipedia novice and have tried to correct it many times, to no avail. I am just very frustrated with the process. 80-year old's aren't savvy with technology like this :) Accounttree8 (talk) 21:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you- you must immediately without delay go to Commons and either request deletion of the logo, or show where the logo has been released with a copyright compatible with Wikipedia's(allowing for reuse by anyone for any purpose, including commerical, with attribution). Logos are typically uploaded to this Wikipedia locally under "fair use" rules, which does carry some restrictions(they cannot be in drafts) but does allow limited use in articles.
- Images are not relevant to the draft process, which only considers the text and sources. Images can wait until the draft is accepted.
- As you are acting on behalf of the organization, you have a conflict of interest.
- The trouble you are having is that you have too many references and the ones that you do have don't show that the conference is a notable organization as Wikipedia defines one. As for other conferences- their articles could be inappropriate as well and we just haven't gotten around to addressing them yet. I know this is a lot of information, but these are all important things. Writing a new article is the most difficult task to attempt on Wikipedia for people of any age- we usually recommend that experience be gained first by editing existing articles. 331dot (talk) 21:21, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @331dot You may not be aware that there is a logo complexity threshold at Commons. That threshold handles uncopyrightable items - text and simple geometric shapes. I believe that this logo qualifies as being below that threshold. However, advice from a Commons expert is really essential. I work there, but I am far short of being an expert.
- Your advice to Accounttree8 seek immediate deletion has strong merit c:Commons:Help desk will provide them with all the assistance they require. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 21:28, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- I have requested deletion of the logo.
- Respectfully, I disagree I have a conflict of interest. I have done this on my own volition and have not worked at the conference for 15 years. No one working for the conference had any input with this article.
- Is it possible to give me an example of how to prove the conference is a notable organization as Wikipedia defines one? What would I need to do to show this? Appreciate any help you can provide. Accounttree8 (talk) 21:38, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Accounttree8 You said "I have been in communication with the conference and they would like to have a presence on this website"; does that not mean you're their representative?
- To show notability, you need independent reliable sources that discuss the conference organization itself- not necessarily its member teams. 331dot (talk) 22:10, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Accounttree8 The file is held at c:File:Merrimack Valley Conference Logo.jpg, and you will need to edit the relevant section fo the page holding it. You have both claimed to be the author, and released it under a Creative Commons CC0 1.0 Universal Public Domain Dedication. Neither of these is correct.
- You say "
I apologize for the mistake, I'm not sure why it is listed that I created the logo.
" but you were required to fill that information put when you uploaded the file. Thus it is listed that way because you listed it that way. You need to rectify that at once, please 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 21:22, 28 December 2024 (UTC) - Hello, @Accounttree8. Unfortunately it appears that, like many people, you have a fundamental misunderstanding about Wikipedia. If you are trying to write an article in pursuit of "presence on this website", then you are involved in promotion, which is forbidden anywhere on Wikipedia. Any benefit (or detriment) which a subject may accrue by being the subject of a Wikipedia article is of no interest to Wikipedia. An article on your Conference should be a summary of what sources wholly unconnected with your Conference have chosen to publish in reliable places: what the Conference or its associates say or want to say is irrelevant. Please see an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing. ColinFine (talk) 22:25, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- And this is why nobody donates to Wokipedia! :) Accounttree8 (talk) 22:36, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Accounttree8 Oh dear. That was rather rude. When given good advice it behoves you to say a pleasant word of thanks. Do, please, pull your horns in. If the MVC is notable then all you need to do is to show that it is. Declaring a WP:COI shows a commitment to transparency. It suggests that you have done everything to be an editor in good standing. Arguing against it suggests The lady doth protest too much, methinks
- Thank you for nominating the logo for deletion on Commons. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 23:14, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm sorry you feel that way, @Accounttree8. Let me give my personal view: if ever Wikipedia changed its policies so that it ceased to be one of the few places on the internet blessedly free from people promoting themselves and their activities, I would certainly stop contributing my money, and probably, albeit reluctanty, also stop contributing my time. ColinFine (talk) 20:59, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- And this is why nobody donates to Wokipedia! :) Accounttree8 (talk) 22:36, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- I apologize for the mistake, I'm not sure why it is listed that I created the logo. I did not create the logo, nor do I own the copyright. I am more than happy to fix that, but I'm not sure how to fix that. I am a former employee at the conference (I am since retired and now have some time to do things like this). I have been in communication with the conference and they would like to have a presence on this website, as most of our peer conferences do. I'm juts trying to help my former colleagues. I have been attempting to create this page for 9 months. It has been denied every time. I am not on a deadline, I am just frustrated with the countless denials (which is why I indicated ASAP). I am a Wikipedia novice and have tried to correct it many times, to no avail. I am just very frustrated with the process. 80-year old's aren't savvy with technology like this :) Accounttree8 (talk) 21:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Accounttree8: Please read and attend to the comments from the reviewers. The draft suffers from extreme CITEKILL, as explained in some detail by a couple of your fellow editors who declined the draft at different times. --bonadea contributions talk 22:04, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Nobody here is remotely bothered whether you donate or not, it is irrelevant. Theroadislong (talk) 22:52, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
December 29
[edit]07:03, 29 December 2024 review of submission by RasaPetrauskaite
[edit]- RasaPetrauskaite (talk · contribs) (TB)
Every time I try to make an edit and publish the edit, I get an error message that says that content provided was not properly deflated. This might have happened because I tried to paste a table from a website. But now I cannot undo it and the error message always shows up and prevents me from making any changes. I would like to edit this draft of an article. Could you please suggest how I can move forward with that and resolve the error message? RasaPetrauskaite (talk) 07:03, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RasaPetrauskaite: I've just made a minor edit to this draft without any problems. Perhaps the issue is local to your browser – try restarting, and maybe clearing your cache if that doesn't help? If the issue persists, you are more likely to get competent advice at WP:VPT where folks who know technical stuff hang out. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
14:12, 29 December 2024 review of submission by The27thAlphabet
[edit]- The27thAlphabet (talk · contribs) (TB)
Can i please request help to evaluate this draft. I have added the notable sources and links. but do help in making this better for submission. The27thAlphabet (talk) 14:12, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- @The27thAlphabet: we don't get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. You will get an evaluation when you resubmit the draft. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:57, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- You've only linked to basic profiles and daily business news, that do nothing to confirm anything other than Gupta having those specific jobs. Notability requires a good deal more than this. You need to be looking for independent, reliable sources that are about Gupta. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 18:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
17:46, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Gidan Fasaha
[edit]- Gidan Fasaha (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hy, Please Can You Assist Me Check The Errors On This New Page That I am Adding? It Got Rejected. Gidan Fasaha (talk) 17:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hey Gidan, this was rejected as not a single source was provided to indicate that the subject was notable. While there are nine references, not a single one of them ever mentions Jauro as far as I can tell, let alone confirming any fact asserted in the biography. Just as an example, look at the first paragraph after the lede. Neither Jauro's parents names, the ethnic group they belong to, where they are from, or his father's occupation, have any sourcing whatsoever. The only source provided goes simply to provide more information about the Yandang not the subject of the article. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 18:29, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Gidan Fasaha. A Wikipedia article is a summary of what people wholly unconnected with the subject have published about the subject, and very little else. If you do not have any reliable independent sources, there is literally nothing which you can put into an article. Please see your first article. ColinFine (talk) 21:03, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
18:09, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Manikingr
[edit]Greetings and respect This article, which is about an Iranian artificial intelligence startup called Alef, has been completely edited and is written in an unbiased language without any advertisements for anyone's benefit.The sources of this article are written from official and completely independent media in Iran. But unfortunately, some Wikipedia editors have monopolized the creation of articles and do not allow the creation of new articles and the improvement of Wikipedia. Manikingr (talk) 18:09, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- You have not shown that this company meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable company.
- This process is usually voluntary. If you wish to disregard what you are being told by more experienced people, you can move the draft into the encyclopedia yourself, but you risk it being nominated for deletion. 331dot (talk) 18:23, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
18:21, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Jasminmusicz
[edit]- Jasminmusicz (talk · contribs) (TB)
im a biggner so kindly assist me what is my msitake and how to fix it Jasminmusicz (talk) 18:21, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell about themselves, please see the autobiography policy. Your draft has no sources that show you are a notable musician. 331dot (talk) 18:26, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Jasminmusicz, your highly promotional draft biography of a 13 year old child is completely unreferenced and in violation of multiple Policies and guidelines. Most significantly, it violates Verifiability and the Neutral point of view. Cullen328 (talk) 18:28, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jasminmusicz: I would seriously reconsider whether the price of a Wikipedia article (i.e. permanent loss of your privacy) is worth it. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 20:31, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Jasminmusicz, your highly promotional draft biography of a 13 year old child is completely unreferenced and in violation of multiple Policies and guidelines. Most significantly, it violates Verifiability and the Neutral point of view. Cullen328 (talk) 18:28, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
20:39, 29 December 2024 review of submission by JIMMY OFUOYAn14
[edit]- JIMMY OFUOYAn14 (talk · contribs) (TB)
please what can i do to make my submission to be accepted JIMMY OFUOYAn14 (talk) 20:39, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- There is nothing you can do. Please stop creating new accounts to publish your AI generated autobiography. --bonadea contributions talk 20:52, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- FTR, previously blocked accounts include JIMMY OFUOYAN10 (talk · contribs) and Jimmy ofuo (talk · contribs). --bonadea contributions talk 21:01, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
21:58, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Sam241224
[edit]Hi everyone, I recently submitted a wiki page for review and it got rejected for overly cheese language or unreliable sources, something like that. Things gone too wrong and the page was declined. I need help with improving it if possible. Please guide me as I am new here and if its a dead end, that's also ok. just let me know. thanks. Sam241224 (talk) 21:58, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- As the reviewer noted, at one point schools were inherently notable, but that is no longer the case. Schools must meet WP:ORG just as any other organization. You should not be describing the school and its offerings, you should be summarizing what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the school. If you have no such sources, then the school does not merit an article. 331dot (talk) 22:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- thank you @331dot for your swift and detailed reply,
- Now I got it, Its not what we want to say, but what reliable and Independent sources said that we need to rewrite / convey. Correct me if I am wrong. Can you please check the references and tell me if they qualify?
- thanks for helping me understand whole process Sam241224 (talk) 22:17, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The activities of the school do nof confer notability; there needs to be sources with significant coverage of the school and what makes it important/significant/influential as a school. 331dot (talk) 22:22, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Content like "Scientia emphasizes a balanced approach to learning, integrating technology and modern teaching methods to prepare students for the challenges of a dynamic world. Known for its commitment to community engagement, the school actively participates in initiatives promoting environmental sustainability and social welfare, fostering holistic development in its students." is just blatant advertising and would never be accepted. Theroadislong (talk) 22:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- ok, understood. thank you for checking the contents and pointing out. @Theroadislong Sam241224 (talk) 22:30, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok, got it. So, how can I start a new page about something else. Lets leave this page here. I want to contribute but I don't think the language I use is right, I need to improve on that before I start working on anything else.
- thanks @331dot Sam241224 (talk) 22:29, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- You can create additional sandboxes(User:Sam241224/sandbox 2) or you can use the Article Wizard. Please know that creating new articles is not the best or only way you can contribute. We have millions of articles that need help, and editing those will help you gain experience before you attempt the difficult task of creating a new article. 331dot (talk) 22:33, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok, I will try to contribute to some other articles, maybe something with structure or easy tweaks before going after a big task as you suggested. I am not sure about the language I need to use in wiki content, It will take time for me to get things, but I have started to get the grip on things like my profile, sandbox and talk page, user page and such things. But, its a long journey, from front Wikipedia looks so simple, but from inside so many things are going on. Amazing.
- thanks for putting in your valuable time :) Sam241224 (talk) 22:40, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Sam241224 my genuine advice to new editors is to start out improving existing articles, because writing a new article from scratch is really hard! Like trying to perform in an orchestra when you've only just picked up an instrument. Your Wikipedia Homepage will have some suggested edits you can make at various levels of difficulty. qcne (talk) 22:47, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Qcne, thanks for your suggestion. I will try to find something beginner friendly on my homepage. Any suggestion on matching my tone with Wikipedia standards? Sam241224 (talk) 23:05, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Practice, really. You should only be paraphrasing or summarising what reliable sources say, and make sure when you do you write in a dry style. This could also be useful: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch qcne (talk) 23:08, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- ok, but what is 'dry style'?
- thanks for the link :) Sam241224 (talk) 15:50, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Difficult to really give examples, its something that you pick up once you've done enough editing. The tone should always remain formal, impersonal, and dispassionate. Pretend you're writing an autopsy. Wikipedia only ever describes, never leads the reader or engages them. qcne (talk) 16:08, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- ah, now I got it. Things are becoming clear now. Difficult for me but will try, thank you. Sam241224 (talk) 23:06, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Difficult to really give examples, its something that you pick up once you've done enough editing. The tone should always remain formal, impersonal, and dispassionate. Pretend you're writing an autopsy. Wikipedia only ever describes, never leads the reader or engages them. qcne (talk) 16:08, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Practice, really. You should only be paraphrasing or summarising what reliable sources say, and make sure when you do you write in a dry style. This could also be useful: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch qcne (talk) 23:08, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Qcne, thanks for your suggestion. I will try to find something beginner friendly on my homepage. Any suggestion on matching my tone with Wikipedia standards? Sam241224 (talk) 23:05, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Sam241224 my genuine advice to new editors is to start out improving existing articles, because writing a new article from scratch is really hard! Like trying to perform in an orchestra when you've only just picked up an instrument. Your Wikipedia Homepage will have some suggested edits you can make at various levels of difficulty. qcne (talk) 22:47, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- You can create additional sandboxes(User:Sam241224/sandbox 2) or you can use the Article Wizard. Please know that creating new articles is not the best or only way you can contribute. We have millions of articles that need help, and editing those will help you gain experience before you attempt the difficult task of creating a new article. 331dot (talk) 22:33, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Content like "Scientia emphasizes a balanced approach to learning, integrating technology and modern teaching methods to prepare students for the challenges of a dynamic world. Known for its commitment to community engagement, the school actively participates in initiatives promoting environmental sustainability and social welfare, fostering holistic development in its students." is just blatant advertising and would never be accepted. Theroadislong (talk) 22:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- The activities of the school do nof confer notability; there needs to be sources with significant coverage of the school and what makes it important/significant/influential as a school. 331dot (talk) 22:22, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
December 30
[edit]01:54, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Jogershok
[edit]Why does this not meet the goals and expectations of this WikiProject?
She is listed in the Charlie Project as well: https://charleyproject.org/case/kathleen-ann-shea Jogershok (talk) 02:03, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jogershok: there is insufficient evidence that the subject is notable. Also, the Charley Project is a primary source, and as such contributes nothing towards notability. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:45, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
02:24, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Sivans1734
[edit]- Sivans1734 (talk · contribs) (TB)
My draft was declined for not citing reliable sources but the only spot in which I didn't cite sources was the Early and personal life section which I have all the information from the subject herself and it is not anywhere on the internet. Sivans1734 (talk) 02:24, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Sivans1734 but not one of those sources are reliable or independent meaning they are not of any value on showing us how they are notable enough to meet the standard of inclusion in a global encyclopedia. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 04:55, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Sivans1734. In addition to what McMatter said, please note that all information in a Wikipedia article must be verifiable from a pubished source. Unpublished information, no matter who it is from, may never be included in an article. A further point is that Wikipedia has little interest in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is almost entirely interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in reliable sources. If enough material is cited from independent sources to establish notability, a limited amount of uncontroversial factual information may be added from non-independent sources. ColinFine (talk) 17:17, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
03:32, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Toothpickdog
[edit]- Toothpickdog (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, This festival is happening in March, and about now is the time when people are likely to be googling and buying tickets. I'm hoping some will find their way to this article and be able to expand it - particularly to add missing headline acts from past years. Almost two months ago my draft submission was declined as I had only a few poorly sourced references. I've added a lot since then, but they're not great quality - there just aren't many references available on the internet that I can find. Thanks for your help in getting this article online! Don. Toothpickdog (talk) 03:32, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Toothpickdog: do you have a question about your draft, or the review process?
- Please note that sources don't have to be online; offline sources are perfectly acceptable, as long as they otherwise meet the requirements in terms of reliability etc. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:41, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @DoubleGrazing Thanks for your response. I guess I don't really have a question, other than to say, "What do I need to do to get this online?" If it's just a matter of being patient, that's OK; but if the draft is going to need additional review cycles, then I fear we'll have missed the peak 2025 interest period.
- Thanks too for the tip about offline sources. As chance would have it, some old Havelock community paper documents were unearthed today, so I now feel more confident about using them here. Toothpickdog (talk) 00:59, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
05:35, 30 December 2024 review of submission by EclipseExpress
[edit]- EclipseExpress (talk · contribs) (TB)
Can you add more to this page? EclipseExpress (talk) 05:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @EclipseExpress: if you're asking someone here at the help desk (and/or at the Teahouse) to co-edit the draft with you, then the answer is no, that's not something we get involved in. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
05:42, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Jadan? Moreno
[edit]- Jadan? Moreno (talk · contribs) (TB)
I'm not sure why I can't publish this page. Jadan? Moreno (talk) 05:42, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jadan? Moreno: because it has been rejected (twice), for the reasons given in the notices and comments. TL;DNR = we don't publish promotional autobiographies with no evidence of notability. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:36, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
08:38, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Cian Nollaig
[edit]- Cian Nollaig (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, I hope all is well. I am finding the feedback unclear for the article's sources being declined. When I compare the sources used to similar pages based in the region; my article uses third-person citations whereas the other pages cite articles from either their own websites or websites their companies own. Cian Nollaig (talk) 08:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Cian Nollaig Please see other stuff exists. Each article or draft is judged on its own merits. There are numerous ways inappropriate content can get past us, this cannot justify adding more inappropriate content, otherwise nothing could ever be removed from Wikipedia. It is possible for inappropriate content to exist, even for years, we can only address what we know about. If you want to help us, you can identify these other articles you have seen so action can be taken. We need the help. If you want to use other articles as a model or example, use those that are classified as good articles, which have been checked by the community. 331dot (talk) 10:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- The draft still has some unsourced sections. 331dot (talk) 10:36, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
09:14, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Dcbeatz
[edit]This is very interesting. Since this rejection, I spoke to the company. They said they have been bombarded with requests for them to pay more than 1000 dollars to get a wikipedia article published. This is 100% part of a corrupt system in wikipedia! Dcbeatz (talk) 09:14, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Dcbeatz, that is an unfortunate ongoing scam by scammers who are not affiliated with Wikipedia. Please carefully read (and show the company) Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Scam warning. qcne (talk) 09:20, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, this is a scam that Wikipedia has nothing to do with. Scammers monitor this and other pages to then contact the subjects of drafts. 331dot (talk) 10:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Dcbeatz: it's also interesting that you're on speaking terms with the company behind this app. This very much suggests a conflict of interest, which needs to be disclosed; I will post instructions on your talk page.
- If you speak with them again, warn them against paying any money to anyone. Not only is this almost certain to be a scam, as already pointed out, the company is also unlikely to get anything for their money. Even if these folks are bona fide editors who know what they're doing, there is nothing anyone can do to guarantee that an article will be published, or more to the point, that it will remain so. And there's every chance they are very far from bona fide. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:41, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
13:37, 30 December 2024 review of submission by 43.225.193.153
[edit]- 43.225.193.153 (talk · contribs) (TB)
How to add more references when it is not available in Web, although I can find is just few social media profiles along research paper publications 43.225.193.153 (talk) 13:37, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Remember to log in when posting. Sources do not need to be online, see Referencing for Beginners to learn how to write references. Social media profiles do not establish that the person is notable; an article should primarily summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage choose on their own to say about the person. 331dot (talk) 13:40, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
17:23, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Microesoft1212
[edit]- Microesoft1212 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello, while writing the article for this locality, I've come to the conclusion that it's hard to find sources that directly mention the locality with respect to another thing. For example, articles rarely mention the nearest metro station, it is something you'd find on google maps. Therefore, citing for statements like these has become a challenge. Therefore, in order to still have a citation, I've cited articles that vaguely have the information that I'm looking for. In order to get the article published, would it be prefferable if I just deleted the points for which getting a citation is very hard, thereby reducing the size of the article or should I continue with my vague citations. Thank you Microesoft1212 (talk) 17:23, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Microesoft1212: everything in the draft must come directly from reliable published sources. If you are writing what you know about the subject, and then struggling to find sources to support what you've written, you're going about it WP:BACKWARD. Also, you're probably engaging in either original research or synthesis, which is not allowed. Please stick to only that information which can be clearly backed up by sources. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:30, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
19:25, 30 December 2024 review of submission by UtpalSarmaAssam
[edit]- UtpalSarmaAssam (talk · contribs) (TB)
Reason for not publishing UtpalSarmaAssam (talk) 19:25, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- No indication of notability. qcne (talk) 19:26, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- UtpalSarmaAssam, vast swathes of your draft are unreferenced, in violation of policies Verifiability and Biographies of living people. Cullen328 (talk) 19:54, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
20:12, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Drtasadukitoo
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I want to create new article Drtasadukitoo (talk) 20:12, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Drtasadukitoo Your first attempt is all about you, but you fail WP:BIO, and have written an advert for yourself. You have confused Wikipedia with a website that is interested in your life and achievements. Please use a résumé site like LinkedIn, and note WP:NOTLINKEDIN 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 20:16, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
20:53, 30 December 2024 review of submission by SabrinaKJones
[edit]I created an article and received feedback to make it more useful and make sure everything features citations. I updated it on 12/24/24 but have not had any response since then if the article is OK now, or if it requires more edits. It is not published yet. SabrinaKJones (talk) 20:53, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- I fixed your link, you need the "Draft:" portion. 331dot (talk) 20:59, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- We don't do pre-review reviews; for feedback, please submit it again. 331dot (talk) 21:01, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
22:57, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Moulyags
[edit]I've noticed that some live pages on Wikipedia seem to lack sufficient sources or detailed references, yet they remain active. This has caused some confusion about the criteria for article approval. While I understand the importance of adhering to Wikipedia's notability and sourcing guidelines, I would appreciate clarification on how these standards are consistently applied. It would also help to know if my draft for Kannada News Today meets the requirements or needs further improvement. Moulyags (talk) 22:57, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Moulyags This is a volunteer project, where people do what they can when they can. As such, inappropriate articles can and do get by us, for many reasons(one big reason is that this process has not existed the entire time Wikipedia has existed). We can only address what we know about. This cannot justify adding more inappropriate content. If you want to help us, please identify these other inappropriate articles you have seen so action can be taken. We need the help. See Other stuff exists. 331dot (talk) 23:03, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Please disclose your relationship with Kannada news, as required by policy(see WP:COI and WP:PAID) as you claim to have personally created its logo. 331dot (talk) 23:05, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
December 31
[edit]00:16, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Blitzite2
[edit]It's hard to get in-depth sources when it hasn't been professionally reviewed a lot. The game has received a lot of critical acclaim, with $1M of revenue approximately. Blitzite2 (talk) 00:16, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- It likely doesn't merit an article, then- reviews are usually how games/films/books etc, merit articles. 331dot (talk) 01:04, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, @Blitzite2. Revenue is irrelevant. Critical acclaim is relevant - provided it is published in reliable sources. ColinFine (talk) 10:20, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
09:07, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Thehistorianisaac
[edit]- Thehistorianisaac (talk · contribs) (TB)
Recently a fellow editor(@User:Buckshot06) already helped me publish my draft as Special Operations Brigade (PLA Navy Marine Corps). May I ask what will happen to the draft? P.S. I turned 7th Marine Brigade into a redirect to Special Operations Brigade (PLA Navy Marine Corps) Thehistorianisaac (talk) 09:07, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Drafts get deleted automatically if they are not edited in six months.
- If you are the only editor who has worked on a draft, you can request its deletion by pasting {{db-author}} at the top; but other editors have worked on Draft:7th Marine Brigade, so that option is not available in this case. You can request its deletion at WP:MFD, but it's probably not worth it for a draft. I do suggest you withdraw it from review though, so as not to take up a reviewer's time. You can simply remove th most recent e {{afc submission}} template from the top. ColinFine (talk) 10:25, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- So the draft was technically never reviewed? Thehistorianisaac (talk) 11:37, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thehistorianisaac: this draft was reviewed, and declined, once, on Nov 29; but not reviewed again since your resubmission a few days later. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:50, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- So basically it was never re-reviewed
- Doesn't really matter because in the end it was published anyways but yeah Thehistorianisaac (talk) 12:53, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- It was awaiting new review. We currently have c 1,800 pending drafts in the system, with wait times up to 8 weeks or so. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:00, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ok understood
- Removed the review banner and added a comment saying that it is already published Thehistorianisaac (talk) 13:01, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- It was awaiting new review. We currently have c 1,800 pending drafts in the system, with wait times up to 8 weeks or so. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:00, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Thehistorianisaac: this draft was reviewed, and declined, once, on Nov 29; but not reviewed again since your resubmission a few days later. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:50, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- So the draft was technically never reviewed? Thehistorianisaac (talk) 11:37, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
09:59, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Mohan1357
[edit]Please kindly assist in working on my article for publication on wikipedia page Mohan1357 (talk) 09:59, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Mohan1357 Hello, Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell about themselves, please see the autobiography policy. Please see the message left by the reviewer as to what needs to be done; we're not here to be co-editors, just to give advice. 331dot (talk) 10:02, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
10:22, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Brown Balloons
[edit]- Brown Balloons (talk · contribs) (TB)
This draft page has been rejected by one of the editors. I already provided factual information and reliable sources. Brown Balloons (talk) 10:22, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Unfortunately it seems that this person is not notable as Wikipedia defines a notable person. This is why it was rejected and will not be considered further. 331dot (talk) 10:23, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
13:58, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Lorenzo Lwanga
[edit]- Lorenzo Lwanga (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello,
I could use a live walk-through on how to edit a few things. Am having trouble with my first article. Lorenzo Lwanga (talk) 13:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
14:01, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Nandy Movies
[edit]- Nandy Movies (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have made edits to my article, provided sources, and references, my article has not yet been accepted. I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me. Nandy Movies (talk) 14:01, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Nandy Movies: presumably we're talking about Courtesy link: Draft:Bhaggyolokkhi? It hasn't been accepted, because it is very poorly referenced, and therefore provides no evidence that the subject is notable, either per WP:GNG or WP:NFILM. Unreleased films hardly ever are notable, so you should probably wait until the film has come out and received some reviews. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Nandy Movies As an unreleased film, it is likely too soon for there to be an article about it. Press releases do not contribute to our notability criteria for films. Wait for some in-depth coverage from reliable film critics before re-submitting. qcne (talk) 14:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- PS: Judging by your username, you have a conflict of interest in this subject. That needs to be disclosed. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:10, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
14:44, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Candus76
[edit]I'm translating a wikipedia page (https://ta.wikipedia.org/wiki/தஞ்சை_க._பொன்னையா_பிள்ளை) and I have added the same sources added there, but my request to turn it into an article is denied because I need more references (which I don't have). What do I do? Candus76 (talk) 14:44, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Candus76. Each language Wikipedia project is different, with different policies and guidelines. The English Wikipedia has the strictest reference requirements out of all the various language projects.
- If those sources do not meet our criteria for inclusion, and there are no other sources to be found (remember, you can use offline sources as long as they are published and you provide a full citation) then I am afraid the topic does not merit an article on the English Wikipedia at this time. qcne (talk) 14:46, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Oh alright, thank you for clearing that up so fast! I'll try searching for more sources :) Candus76 (talk) 14:51, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Best of luck - as long as the sources are published and accessible to a reader (even via an offline library or archive) then it is okay to use. qcne (talk) 15:37, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- Oh alright, thank you for clearing that up so fast! I'll try searching for more sources :) Candus76 (talk) 14:51, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
17:51, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Artennina
[edit]Could you please tell me detailed what I should do? I ám a decent person who has the best intentions with this article and I only wat the best for it! Only the sometimes written comments (as English is not my mother language) are not easy to understand. Please give us another moment. Artennina (talk) 17:51, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- You have not fixed the issues identified by reviewers, including not disclosing your conflict of interest. Your references do not establish that this person meets our definition of a notable musician. 331dot (talk) 18:22, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
18:53, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Lightningbox14
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why was it rejected was it too short Lightningbox14 (talk) 18:53, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Lightningbox14: Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 18:57, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
19:36, 31 December 2024 review of submission by DesertMouse26
[edit]Hi there - this article was submitted for review and it wasn't accepted. The listed reason was that "the draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article." I see that there's an existing page on the same subject in Japanese (https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shokz). Does that serve as proof that this subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article? DesertMouse26 (talk) 19:36, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- No, because different Wikipedias have different policies. What matters is if our policies are met. 331dot (talk) 19:38, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
19:38, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Henrilebec
[edit]- Henrilebec (talk · contribs) (TB)
Notability question It's not clear why scientific notability is different from say "celebrity" notability. My submission for medical technologies includes independent cites in scientific journals, but the Wikipedia article reviewer says this is insufficient to establish "notability". It's not clear why cites in scientific journals are insufficient to establish notability. It seems to me that such cites, sufficient in scientific journals, are not sufficient for Wikipedia. Henrilebec (talk) 19:38, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Henrilebec I don’t think the issue here is whether the journals are reliable so much as independent as they are written by the subject. The standard for a person such as this is WP:NACADEMIC. Things like citation index and special awards or academic positions are used to indicated notability, otherwise we need to see articles about him not from him to establish notability. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 19:44, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- I placed a link to your draft in the header as intended. 331dot (talk) 19:46, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- This is exactly what's not clear. The articles cited are not by Burke, they are about Burke's scientific research projects. The work of Burke and his team were vetted and published by independent scientific journals (Harvard Medical School. Journal of Neurosurgery, Canadian Medical Journal, Departments of Pathology and Surgery,Harvard Medical School,and the Neurosurgical Service of The Children's Medical Center,Boston,Massachusettsetc). If Burke's name appears in the article, it is simply because he was the team leader responsible for assembling and recording the enormous amount of work of the various research teams. Otherwise, modern scientists are unable to understand where these discoveries were made. I could be wrong, but it appears to me that the Wikipedia reviewers are not familiar with older scientific journals that were responsible for vetting (and validating) this type of pioneering medical research. This, for example, was the first known instance of an engineering institution (Cal-Tech) engaging in innovative medical research. Can you provide some clarity for us? Henrilebec (talk) 20:19, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Henrilebec Ref 3 and 4 list Burke as an author, so valid to use as a supporting material for information but have no value in establishing notability. The age of the journals make no difference in how we assess, that being said many reviewers are not familiar with the specific WP:NACADEMIC as it is a more complex and dynamic policy then the more generally applied WP:GNG. So I am assuming you think they meet criteria 1 of the academic criteria, which may be the case, but I am also not comfortable in this standard enough to assess what a significant contribution to their field would be and how to prove it without cite bombing the article. In my attempts to look up a number of citations of his work I've been unable to get a feeling for this and it could be due to the age of the work in question. I will ping @WhatamIdoing here, as they are more familiar with this subject and maybe can provide more insight then I can. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 22:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- For NACADEMIC questions, I always defer to David Eppstein. WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:39, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- I tend to avoid debating the notability of medical academics because I do not really understand the citation patterns in those fields. I think User:JoelleJay may be a better choice for those fields, although she typically takes a harder line than I would. That said, Google Scholar was not promising; I only found one well cited publication, "The corrosion of metals in tissues; and an introduction to tantalum", not enough for WP:PROF#C1 even accounting for the likelihood that papers from that time period are less likely to be well cited today. The draft does not supply any evidence for notability other than through #C1. —David Eppstein (talk) 00:49, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- For NACADEMIC questions, I always defer to David Eppstein. WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:39, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Henrilebec Ref 3 and 4 list Burke as an author, so valid to use as a supporting material for information but have no value in establishing notability. The age of the journals make no difference in how we assess, that being said many reviewers are not familiar with the specific WP:NACADEMIC as it is a more complex and dynamic policy then the more generally applied WP:GNG. So I am assuming you think they meet criteria 1 of the academic criteria, which may be the case, but I am also not comfortable in this standard enough to assess what a significant contribution to their field would be and how to prove it without cite bombing the article. In my attempts to look up a number of citations of his work I've been unable to get a feeling for this and it could be due to the age of the work in question. I will ping @WhatamIdoing here, as they are more familiar with this subject and maybe can provide more insight then I can. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 22:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
19:58, 31 December 2024 review of submission by 188.229.34.79
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New 188.229.34.79 (talk) 19:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
- A draft that is only an infobox won't be accepted due to lack of content. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 02:57, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
January 1
[edit]02:54, 1 January 2025 review of submission by WhoIsBean
[edit]I wanted to start writing a Wikipedia Article on a popular Roblox game. I found the draft and it has been declined 2 months ago, what do I do? WhoIsBean (talk) 02:54, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- @WhoIsBean: "Popular Roblox game" isn't enough to warrant an article. What we would need to see is multiple third-party sources with editorial oversight that explicitly discuss the game (and not Roblox in general). If such sources don't exist - and I wager they're very unlikely to - we can't even discuss the merits of an article. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 02:56, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you! WhoIsBean (talk) 03:15, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- I've found a reliable source made by the creators itself, it's only issue is that the information is inside the game and not on a site. WhoIsBean (talk) 03:23, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you! WhoIsBean (talk) 03:15, 1 January 2025 (UTC)