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You may remember [[Maryvonne Le Dizès]], my [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#3 Oct|story today]] as [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#28 Aug|on 28 August]]. [[User talk:Gerda Arendt#Some September music|Some September music]] was unusual: last compositions and eternal light, with [[György Ligeti|Ligeti]] mentioned in story and music. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 12:03, 3 October 2024 (UTC) |
You may remember [[Maryvonne Le Dizès]], my [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#3 Oct|story today]] as [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#28 Aug|on 28 August]]. [[User talk:Gerda Arendt#Some September music|Some September music]] was unusual: last compositions and eternal light, with [[György Ligeti|Ligeti]] mentioned in story and music. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 12:03, 3 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::: Thank you! - [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#11 Oct|Today I remember]] an organist who was pictured on the Main page on his birthday ten years ago, and I found two recent organ concerts to match, - see top of my talk --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 20:00, 11 October 2024 (UTC) |
:::: Thank you! - [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#11 Oct|Today I remember]] an organist who was pictured on the Main page on his birthday ten years ago, and I found two recent organ concerts to match, - see top of my talk --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 20:00, 11 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::: Today brought [[User talk:Gerda Arendt#ITN recognition for Helmut Bauer (bishop)|a timely promotion]] of [[Helmut Bauer (bishop)|Helmut Bauer]] to the Main page on the day when [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#12 Oct|pieces from Mozart's Requiem]] were performed for him. - Thank you for copy-editing! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 18:18, 12 October 2024 (UTC) |
:::: Today brought [[User talk:Gerda Arendt#ITN recognition for Helmut Bauer (bishop)|a timely promotion]] of [[Helmut Bauer (bishop)|Helmut Bauer]] to the Main page on the day when [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#12 Oct|pieces from Mozart's Requiem]] were performed for him. - Thank you for copy-editing! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 18:18, 12 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::: I made Leif Segerstam my [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#16 Oct|big]] story today. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 13:35, 16 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::: Would you have time to look at a user's (short) first FAC, [[Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/December 2017 North American winter storm/archive1]]? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 07:53, 19 October 2024 (UTC) |
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*I [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=December_2017_North_American_winter_storm&diff=1252230287&oldid=1251958295 took] a quick hack at it. [[User:John|John]] ([[User talk:John#top|talk]]) 12:16, 20 October 2024 (UTC) |
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*: Thank you for improving articles on October, - I noticed that particular "hack" with pleasure! - My [[User:Gerda Arendt/Stories#20 Oct|story today]] is a cantata 300 years old, based on a hymn 200 years old when the cantata was composed, based on a psalm some thousand years old, - so said the 2015 DYK hook. I had forgotten the discussion on the talk. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 13:21, 20 October 2024 (UTC) |
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*: new pics close to home, and a new song - come some day! - I never had a TFA moved (have too few), but am quite conservative in move cases. A DYK article was once moved (while on the Main page) without leaving a redirect, which I thought was crazy, and - not on the main page - a [[Engelbert Humperdinck (composer)|composer's article]] became a dab page because some singer had adapted his name as a stage name, and now the original was no longer the primary topic, which I found kafkaesque. Nobody died, - you are right. Dealing with three articles of people who died three days in a row again, first [[Barbara Kolb]]. What do you think about [[Kaoli Isshiki]]. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 21:34, 24 October 2024 (UTC) |
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*::Taxonomy is always reductive by its nature and naming articles is worth getting right fairly early on in an article's evolution. I read the AfD discussion and had a quick look at sources without finding anything great. It looks like a borderline case and nowadays I'm an inclusionist, so I would weakly keep it. [[User:John|John]] ([[User talk:John#top|talk]]) 21:54, 24 October 2024 (UTC) |
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*::: Thank you. - I came because I saw your comment on the TFA: feel free to boldly make the changes, - the principal editor hasn't edited for the last two years, and I see nobody with more authority in these matters than you. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 13:07, 27 October 2024 (UTC) |
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*::: About the weak keep: could you say it there? (I haven't read the last comment yet that I saw on my watchlist, - I have an article to write.) --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 22:36, 27 October 2024 (UTC) |
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*::: Thank you for that! - Happy whatever you celebrate today, - more who died, more to come, and they made the world [[User talk:Gerda Arendt#rich day|richer]]. Greetings from Madrid where I took the pic of assorted [[Cucurbita]] in 2016. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:29, 31 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::Of course! Your copy edits are spot on and I plan to work my way to being as good as that some time, might as well ask one of the best for mentoring/advice etc. Be warned, the ''Texas Chain Saw'' is quite messy as I am still pulling everything together and adding things. It is one of my most ambitious articles as there is a vast amount of information to process and filter.--[[User:Paleface Jack|Paleface Jack]] ([[User talk:Paleface Jack|talk]]) 18:19, 15 October 2024 (UTC) |
::Of course! Your copy edits are spot on and I plan to work my way to being as good as that some time, might as well ask one of the best for mentoring/advice etc. Be warned, the ''Texas Chain Saw'' is quite messy as I am still pulling everything together and adding things. It is one of my most ambitious articles as there is a vast amount of information to process and filter.--[[User:Paleface Jack|Paleface Jack]] ([[User talk:Paleface Jack|talk]]) 18:19, 15 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Butting in the spirit of learning to walk before you can crawl, [[Begotten (film)|Begotten]] should be PFJ's next nom as it is relatively short with a limited body of sources, while ''Texas Chain Saw'' is a beast, widely written about and known to all. Would like to see PFJ more experienced in the FAC process before he undertakes such a massive cultural milestone, and with more eyes having reviewed at GA/PR before he gets in final copy editors. John, you are a scarce resource; thinking of your time allocation :) [[User:Ceoil|Ceoil]] ([[User talk:Ceoil|talk]]) 23:54, 15 October 2024 (UTC) |
:::Butting in the spirit of learning to walk before you can crawl, [[Begotten (film)|Begotten]] should be PFJ's next nom as it is relatively short with a limited body of sources, while ''Texas Chain Saw'' is a beast, widely written about and known to all. Would like to see PFJ more experienced in the FAC process before he undertakes such a massive cultural milestone, and with more eyes having reviewed at GA/PR before he gets in final copy editors. John, you are a scarce resource; thinking of your time allocation :) [[User:Ceoil|Ceoil]] ([[User talk:Ceoil|talk]]) 23:54, 15 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::: Apologies for the presumption Paleface; just don't want you to be disappointed/frustrated if you reach |
:::: Apologies for the presumption Paleface; just don't want you to be disappointed/frustrated if you reach too soon re TCS. Best. [[User:Ceoil|Ceoil]] ([[User talk:Ceoil|talk]]) 23:59, 15 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{re|Ceoil}} No worries mate. I was thinking that or something even smaller like ''Lake Michigan Monster'' as that one has the same number of sources as ''Troika''. Working my way up to articles over 100 citations is something I want to gradually do. In terms of ''Begotten'' I have been having troubles filtering down essentials on the Themes/Analysis to rewrite it, as sources are often frustratingly vague on specifics on what motifs and themes pertaining to the religious/occult aspects of the film. That will be my 3rd project to work on though I do want to focus on honing and perfecting my ability to copy edit as that is a weakness of mine that I require fine-tuneing.--[[User:Paleface Jack|Paleface Jack]] ([[User talk:Paleface Jack|talk]]) 03:00, 16 October 2024 (UTC) |
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*Still thinking about how best to engage with this request. Meanwhile, what do you think of [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=December_2017_North_American_winter_storm&diff=1252237962&oldid=1251958295 this]? [[User:John|John]] ([[User talk:John#top|talk]]) 13:17, 20 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::Take your time, no rush. As to that edit, it looks good to me.--[[User:Paleface Jack|Paleface Jack]] ([[User talk:Paleface Jack|talk]]) 21:32, 20 October 2024 (UTC) |
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{{re|John}} Just a little update, I have chosen to work on a smaller article for FA instead of ''TCM'' and ''Begotten'' for now. The article in question is called ''[[Lake Michigan Monster]]'', and I have been going over copy editing it with Ceoil for the better part of a month. If you are still busy, thats ok. My only real concern with the article is prose being as perfect as possible through multiple vetting through different users. Yout assistance was, and is always valued in your contributions to ''Troika''. Good luck on your continued endeavers.--[[User:Paleface Jack|Paleface Jack]] ([[User talk:Paleface Jack|talk]]) 16:27, 12 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:I like it. [[User:John|John]] ([[User talk:John#top|talk]]) 20:33, 12 November 2024 (UTC) |
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{{re|John}} Thanks, the more I looked at it, the more I felt it was a good pick me up for all the current things going on in the world. Readers might find it interesting enough--[[User:Paleface Jack|Paleface Jack]] ([[User talk:Paleface Jack|talk]]) 16:06, 13 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:{{tps}} "{{tq|Be warned, the ''Texas Chain Saw'' is quite messy...}}". Quite an understatement, I think. [[User:Martinevans123|Martinevans123]] ([[User talk:Martinevans123|talk]]) 21:27, 12 November 2024 (UTC) |
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::{{u|Martinevans123}} With the scope of the article that massive, the "mess" will be there until the information is all added and copy edits/splicing starts.--[[User:Paleface Jack|Paleface Jack]] ([[User talk:Paleface Jack|talk]]) 16:06, 13 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:::{{small|Sorry. I meant the bit where Leatherface dismembers Kirk. [[User:Martinevans123|Martinevans123]] ([[User talk:Martinevans123|talk]]) 17:58, 13 November 2024 (UTC)}} |
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{{u|Martinevans123}} Funny. Had to transfer all that and effects stuff into a future article to cut down on everything. Cutting things apart and stitching things together in my own work of art is fun but a welcome challenge. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Paleface Jack|Paleface Jack]] ([[User talk:Paleface Jack#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Paleface Jack|contribs]]) </small> |
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:Thanks! It still needs a little work but I'm confident it can reach FA standard. [[User:John|John]] ([[User talk:John#top|talk]]) 09:27, 20 October 2024 (UTC) |
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Thank you for improving articles in November! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:43, 20 November 2024 (UTC) |
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I uploaded pics of a trip that was a 10-day celebration of a 16 November event, but the day was also when a dear friend died. We sang [[Hevenu shalom aleichem]] at his funeral yesterday, and it was good. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 19:25, 30 November 2024 (UTC) |
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I struggle with online editing would like to add header November thanks to last message but can't. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:47, 20 November 2024 (UTC) |
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:Many thanks Gerda. I hope you are well and I appreciate the messages. [[User:John|John]] ([[User talk:John#top|talk]]) 17:03, 20 November 2024 (UTC) |
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== Lake Michigan Monster == |
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Just want to thank you for your copy edits on ''[[Lake Michigan Monster]]'', I don't know if you are done with it or not, or if you feel it is complete enough. At the moment I am working on bringing up anther article I put off int the GA status club. I don't know who else could take a look at ''Lake Michigan Monster'' to make sure the nomination goes smoothly. Any suggestions? [[User:Paleface Jack|Paleface Jack]] ([[User talk:Paleface Jack|talk]]) 00:55, 22 November 2024 (UTC) |
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You were referred based on this discussion: [[Wikipedia:Featured article review/Byzantine Empire/archive3#Byzantine Empire]] |
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If you scroll down, you can see the discussion of a sentence rewrite about Christianity. It's representative of several issues, but the one you can help with (other than your own suggestion) is tone: should feature articles be written formally to be more objective? Or should we use a more direct style to make the content more engaging? This and anything else you have to say would be much appreciated. [[User:Biz|Biz]] ([[User talk:Biz|talk]]) 21:12, 6 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Thank you for the message. I have read the discussion and I will consider posting an opinion there after I think about it a little. [[User:John|John]] ([[User talk:John#top|talk]]) 22:21, 6 December 2024 (UTC) |
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On the Main page today [[Jean Sibelius]] on his birthday. Listening to Beethoven's [[Symphony No. 5 (Beethoven)|Fifth]] from the [[:File:Notre-Dame de Paris, across the Seine, before reopening.jpg|opening of Notre-Dame de Paris]]. We [[User:Gerda Arendt/Images 2024#8 Dec|sang in choirs]] today. -- [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 21:25, 8 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:It's great that it's open again. Such a shock when an old building burns. Congratulations on Sibelius. Might just go and read it, I don't know much about him. ---- |
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:: Sibelius - as my user page says today - is the work of many. I wrote about several of his compositions when his birthday was celebrated in 2015. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 22:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:: Listen today to the (new) [[Perplexities after Escher]]. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 10:58, 12 December 2024 (UTC) |
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July music[edit]
Nice to see your name on my watchlist! - Today's story is about a photographer who took iconic pictures, especially View from Williamsburg, Brooklyn, on Manhattan, 9/11, yesterday's was a great mezzo, and on Thursday we watched a sublime ballerina. If that's not enough my talk offers chamber music from two amazing concerts. -- Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:44, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
Good to hear, and that's an interesting article. Back home and exhausted. It was fun, but I am getting old for long road trips... Let me know if there are any copyediting or reviewing tasks you need done, but I need a day or two to recuperate. John (talk) 16:46, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
August[edit]
Welcome home! Recuperate! Still the same article, in case of interest after recuperation. It's on the Main page, still. On the talk are some open tasks, and the names of the two who helped the most so far. It's great collaboration, and I love it. A breakthrew came today with the opening of the New York Times article. - Listen into the interview at the bottom = meet the person even if you don't understand all the German ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:53, 1 August 2024 (UTC) I have now two articles open for review, FAC for Nun bitten wir den Heiligen Geist, and GAN for a Bach cantata = my story today, - recommended listening, #4 for fury and surprise, #6 for exquisite lament; the music turns 300 years today per liturgy but on 13 August per calendar. Ceoil, thanks for being already at the FAC, and you will want to listen to the Bach, too! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:27, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
Request[edit]John, while you are around I would gratefully ask you to look at Troika (1969 film), a recently failed FAC on a strange and unusual film that badly needs a skilled and astute copy editor. It's out of print, and I see it in punk rock terms; more Wire than Sex Pistols. As said many times before, skilled writers are hen teeth here. Ceoil (talk) 20:51, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
Recent FAC comments[edit]My apologies for barging uninvited onto your talk page. Please let me know what you think the best course of action is for the following issues arising from the Brighton hotel bombing FAC. It is quite impressive how FAC coordinators do not consider the following statement a provocation or intent to edit war: "I do not think links should be added and I will remove them if you add them". Also, as you said, nobody owns a page on here. FAC criteria warns against edit wars, at the very least this is un encyclopedic behavior and at least deserves a tap on the back. By now, if any other editor had made such a comment at an FAC nom with so many reviewers, the nom would have been archived immediately and there would have been a warning on our talk pages. Do you think this should go to ANI, since coords are either ignoring or allowing this behavior? And what would be the consequences of that for the nom? If I were petty I would have added links and checked if SchroCat would have the gall to do an edit war; that would have bogged the article in the dispute resolution stages for 3-6 months and disqualified it from FAC for that period. But fortunately I am not petty and would not want what is overall a good article to suffer such a fate for an issue which is comparatively not so big. What do you think? Matarisvan (talk) 18:02, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
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What do you think of my short version of the life of Alexander Goehr? Our DYK team would probably want that he worked in a training kibbutz, while I was happy to include a link to an article by Brian Boulton, - we sang the Monteverdi Vespers on 1 September 2019. -- Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:18, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
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Great work[edit]
Thank you! John (talk) 12:46, 22 September 2024 (UTC) The Signpost: 26 September 2024[edit]
October music[edit]
You may remember Maryvonne Le Dizès, my story today as on 28 August. Some September music was unusual: last compositions and eternal light, with Ligeti mentioned in story and music. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:03, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
"would subsequently move" --> "moved", that's one of my pet peeves also. Drmies (talk) 21:45, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Some advice[edit]Greetings John, I just wanna thank you for your copy edits to help Troika pass Featured Status. I have been meaning to ask you about how I can master Copy editing. I am aware a lot of that is flow and condensing what is written in articles, however some of these articles that show me how to do so seem to go over my head. I am currently working on some massive projects (The Texas Chain Saw Massacre, Begotten, Stephen D. Richards, etc.) and am having trouble figuring out how to properly condense without complete removal of material. If you are willing to mentor me on this I would appreciate it. If not, some pointers. Happy editing mate! Paleface Jack (talk) 17:17, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
@John: Just a little update, I have chosen to work on a smaller article for FA instead of TCM and Begotten for now. The article in question is called Lake Michigan Monster, and I have been going over copy editing it with Ceoil for the better part of a month. If you are still busy, thats ok. My only real concern with the article is prose being as perfect as possible through multiple vetting through different users. Yout assistance was, and is always valued in your contributions to Troika. Good luck on your continued endeavers.--Paleface Jack (talk) 16:27, 12 November 2024 (UTC)
@John: Thanks, the more I looked at it, the more I felt it was a good pick me up for all the current things going on in the world. Readers might find it interesting enough--Paleface Jack (talk) 16:06, 13 November 2024 (UTC)
Martinevans123 Funny. Had to transfer all that and effects stuff into a future article to cut down on everything. Cutting things apart and stitching things together in my own work of art is fun but a welcome challenge. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paleface Jack (talk • contribs) The Signpost: 19 October 2024[edit]
A barnstar for you![edit]
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Thank you for improving articles in November! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:43, 20 November 2024 (UTC) I uploaded pics of a trip that was a 10-day celebration of a 16 November event, but the day was also when a dear friend died. We sang Hevenu shalom aleichem at his funeral yesterday, and it was good. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:25, 30 November 2024 (UTC) struggle[edit]I struggle with online editing would like to add header November thanks to last message but can't. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:47, 20 November 2024 (UTC)
Lake Michigan Monster[edit]Just want to thank you for your copy edits on Lake Michigan Monster, I don't know if you are done with it or not, or if you feel it is complete enough. At the moment I am working on bringing up anther article I put off int the GA status club. I don't know who else could take a look at Lake Michigan Monster to make sure the nomination goes smoothly. Any suggestions? Paleface Jack (talk) 00:55, 22 November 2024 (UTC) Voting is now open for the WikiProject Military History newcomer of the year and military historian of the year awards[edit]Voting is now open for the WikiProject Military History newcomer of the year and military historian of the year awards for 2024! The top editors will be awarded the coveted Gold Wiki. Cast your votes here and here respectively. Voting closes at 23:59 on 30 December 2024. On behalf of the coordinators, wishing you the very best for the festive season and the new year. MediaWiki message delivery via MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 23:59, 29 November 2024 (UTC) Tone on FA's[edit]Hi John You were referred based on this discussion: Wikipedia:Featured article review/Byzantine Empire/archive3#Byzantine Empire If you scroll down, you can see the discussion of a sentence rewrite about Christianity. It's representative of several issues, but the one you can help with (other than your own suggestion) is tone: should feature articles be written formally to be more objective? Or should we use a more direct style to make the content more engaging? This and anything else you have to say would be much appreciated. Biz (talk) 21:12, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
December music[edit]
On the Main page today Jean Sibelius on his birthday. Listening to Beethoven's Fifth from the opening of Notre-Dame de Paris. We sang in choirs today. -- Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:25, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
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