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= December 7 =


== 04:09, 22 November 2024 review of submission by Rager7 ==
== 06:04, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Almonday ==
{{Lafc|username=Rager7|ts=04:09, 22 November 2024|draft=Draft:The_disappearances_of_Mitchel_Weiser_and_Bonnie_Bickwit}}
{{Lafc|username=Almonday|ts=06:04, 7 December 2024|draft=I need a knowledgable editor}}
For some reason I cannot get an approved article on wikipedia. If you have successful experience with it I'd like to know your rates. Please contact. [[User:Almonday|Almonday]] ([[User talk:Almonday|talk]]) 06:04, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
I have been trying to get the article created but have been rejected three times now. Once, it was due to the person who said it was AI written and was biased. I rewrote it by improving it and providing more sources. The second and third time around (different people by the way) reasoning of rejecting the draft is "it wasn't the best sourced and reliable sources are needed." I'm confused because it should have been accepted the second time around.


So, this leads to question or the problem of this article: Can you find more reliable sources and help improve the information of this article? If not, I presume that this article will go nowhere as the other people suggested that it's better for this article to be on a different wiki instead. [[User:Rager7|Rager7]] ([[User talk:Rager7|talk]]) 04:09, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Almonday|Almonday]]: this help desk is not a marketplace for hired guns. Personally I wouldn't recommend using paid editors under any circumstances, but if you feel you must, you'll need to find a different forum for recruiting one. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:06, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
:Hello @[[User:Almonday|Almonday]]. If you're even contemplating paying somebody to write an article (presumably about Marc Jackson) that strongly suggests that you are here for the purpose of promotion (i.e., telling the world about something). Please be aware that [[WP:NOTPROMO|promotion of any kind]] is forbidden anywhere in Wikipedia. An article about Jackson is possible only if he meets Wikipedia's criteria for [[WP:NMUSICIAN|notability]] - and if there ever is an article about him (whoever writes it) it will ''not'' be based on what he or his associates say or want to say, but on what people wholly unconnected with him have chosen to publish about him in reliable places - whether he likes what they say or not. See [[WP:an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing|an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing]].
:I also endorse DoubleGrazing's warning: most people offering to edit Wikipedia for money are scam merchants: see [[WP:SCAM]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 15:15, 7 December 2024 (UTC)


== 09:41, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Yodawriter ==
:@[[User:Rager7|Rager7]]: the third decline was justified by virtue of there having been no improvement to the sourcing following the second decline, so it's effectively a second opinion by a different reviewer concurring with the previous assessment.
{{Lafc|username=Yodawriter|ts=09:41, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:CAP-XX}}
:As for those sources, I presume FOX5NY is reliable enough. ''Rolling Stone'' can be a bit flaky at times, but let's assume it's also okay here. The rest look like blogs, podcasts, and similar, so I wouldn't consider those reliable.
:Two reliable sources also isn't quite enough to establish notability per [[WP:GNG]]; we usually require three. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:57, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
I feel that I have put in some more notable sources now. Is it enough yet? [[User:Yodawriter|Yodawriter]] ([[User talk:Yodawriter|talk]]) 09:41, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
::Could these sources be okay for the article then? Mitch Weiser and Bonnie Bickwit: Teenagers Disappeared Hitchhiking to a Concert - HubPages (HubPages.com) [https://www.newser.com/story/338775/they-planned-to-hitchhike-to-an-epic-concert-but-vanished.html NY to Revisit Case of Kids Who Set Out for Concert, Vanished] (newser.com) [https://coloradomusic.org/two-teens-hitchhiked-to-a-concert-50-years-later-they-havent-come-home/ Two Teens Hitchhiked to a Concert. 50 Years Later, They Haven’t Come Home - COMBO - The Colorado Music Business Organization] (coloradomusic.org).
::Let me know which ones are reliable and can be put into the article. Sadly, there's not much to go off of here due to the lack of notoriety of this event. [[User:Rager7|Rager7]] ([[User talk:Rager7|talk]]) 22:09, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] I forgot one more source: [https://the-line-up.com/bonnie-bickwit-and-mitchel-weiser Vanished from Summer Camp: Where Are Bonnie Bickwit and Mitchel Weiser?] (the Lineup.com). [[User:Rager7|Rager7]] ([[User talk:Rager7|talk]]) 17:44, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Yodawriter|Yodawriter]]: you have resubmitted the draft, so will get an assessment and feedback when a reviewer gets around to reviewing it. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 09:47, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
== 04:59, 22 November 2024 review of submission by Rtrtyu ==
{{Lafc|username=Rtrtyu|ts=04:59, 22 November 2024|draft=Draft:Laxmi_Maharana}}
You guys need to improve this article so please help in improving it. [[User:Rtrtyu|Rtrtyu]] ([[User talk:Rtrtyu|talk]]) 04:59, 22 November 2024 (UTC)


== 09:52, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Kbss19d ==
:@[[User:Rtrtyu|Rtrtyu]]: this draft has been rejected and will therefore not be considered further. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:44, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Kbss19d|ts=09:52, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sapience_College}}
Can any please help me with this [[User:Kbss19d|Kbss19d]] ([[User talk:Kbss19d|talk]]) 09:52, 7 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Kbss19d|Kbss19d]]: sure. You need to support the information with reliable sources, so that it can be verified. You need to remove every single inline external links from the text. And last but by no means least, you need to provide evidence that this organisation is [[WP:notable|notable]] per the [[WP:ORG]] guideline. HTH, -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 09:55, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
== 07:49, 22 November 2024 review of submission by 78.134.241.82 ==
::ok thanks let me try [[User:Kbss19d|Kbss19d]] ([[User talk:Kbss19d|talk]]) 10:00, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=78.134.241.82|ts=07:49, 22 November 2024|draft=Draft:French_language_in_Croatia}}
I Like to move into my userspace, or I'm in need to improve this article so please help in improving it. [[Special:Contributions/78.134.241.82|78.134.241.82]] ([[User talk:78.134.241.82|talk]]) 07:49, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
::I have submitted reference as well as from external links apart from government sites, but permanently blocked [[User:Kbss19d|Kbss19d]] ([[User talk:Kbss19d|talk]]) 11:05, 7 December 2024 (UTC)


== 10:59, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Kbss19d ==
:User space does not host articles. If you want to continue to work on it, you may do so as a draft. You can't move it at all unless you have a confirmed account(an account that is four days old with 10 edits or more). This topic doesn't seem like it is [[WP:N|notable]] as the sources you have are pretty light on coverage. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:18, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Kbss19d|ts=10:59, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sapience_College}}
can please let me know [[User:Kbss19d|Kbss19d]] ([[User talk:Kbss19d|talk]]) 10:59, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Kbss19d|Kbss19d]] what would you like to know? The draft has been rejected and will therefore not be considered further. Did you read the advice you received above? <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 11:05, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
::yes that links where from all government sites, but later i provided 3 links from different companies like Tv, education agent as well some other link [[User:Kbss19d|Kbss19d]] ([[User talk:Kbss19d|talk]]) 11:08, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
:::All of those sources are listings of the college and not [[WP:SIGCOV|significant coverage]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 11:13, 7 December 2024 (UTC)


== 12:20, 22 November 2024 review of submission by WhiteStar2000 ==
== 11:37, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Royaloaksschoolking ==
{{Lafc|username=WhiteStar2000|ts=12:20, 22 November 2024|draft=Draft:Candidates in the 2025 Philippine Senate election}}
{{Lafc|username=Royaloaksschoolking|ts=11:37, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shubham_X_Rameshwar}}
Because He Is Youngest Businessman [[User:Royaloaksschoolking|Royaloaksschoolking]] ([[User talk:Royaloaksschoolking|talk]]) 11:37, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
I am requesting for assistance because the draft was tagged as not suitable for notability in Wikipedia. For now, I am thinking of decreasing the number of references in the said draft and will insert the names of official candidates there once the Philippines' COMELEC issued a final list of candidates. Thank you. [[User:WhiteStar2000|WhiteStar2000]] ([[User talk:WhiteStar2000|talk]]) 12:20, 22 November 2024 (UTC)


:Hello @[[User:Royaloaksschoolking|Royaloaksschoolking]]. Being the youngest businessman does not merit an article under our [[Wikipedia:Notability (people)|notability policy for people]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 11:44, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
== 12:30, 22 November 2024 review of submission by Mapadam ==
{{Lafc|username=Mapadam|ts=12:30, 22 November 2024|draft=Draft:Joseph_Plaster}}
I received the following Comment: "A error parameters in the references, please fix it. Royiswariii Talk! 02:54, 22 November 2024 (UTC)"
How do I fix error parameters? Any help would be welcome.
[[User:Mapadam|Mapadam]] ([[User talk:Mapadam|talk]]) 12:30, 22 November 2024 (UTC)


== 11:43, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Naman Nanda ==
:Hi @[[User:Mapadam|Mapadam]]. I am not seeing any errors, but I do see notability. I have therefore accepted the draft. Please add some appropriate [[WP:CATEGORIES]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 13:08, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Naman Nanda|ts=11:43, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:Be_Together_Studio}}
::Thank you! [[User:Mapadam|Mapadam]] ([[User talk:Mapadam|talk]]) 22:08, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
i need to know that what type of refrence will be feasiable for a approval [[User:Naman Nanda|Naman Nanda]] ([[User talk:Naman Nanda|talk]]) 11:43, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
:Certainly NOT Linkedin.com. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 11:47, 7 December 2024 (UTC)


== 12:57, 22 November 2024 review of submission by Kalli navya ==
== 12:14, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Bollysocialmedia ==
{{Lafc|username=Kalli navya|ts=12:57, 22 November 2024|draft=Draft:Chitrapuri_colony}}
{{Lafc|username=Bollysocialmedia|ts=12:14, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shubham_X_Rameshwar}}
Please Accept [[User:Bollysocialmedia|Bollysocialmedia]] ([[User talk:Bollysocialmedia|talk]]) 12:14, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
My submission was denied saying there are not enough references. I searched the internet again but couldn't find any other reliable sources. So, I re-arranged my content and removed some. Can you tell me what else can I do in this case. [[User:Kalli navya|Kalli navya]] ([[User talk:Kalli navya|talk]]) 12:57, 22 November 2024 (UTC)


:No. It's completely unsourced. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:16, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
:Hi @[[User:Kalli navya|Kalli navya]], unfortunately I don't think this development merits a Wikipedia article. Our notability requirements are at [[WP:NPLACE]] and [[WP:NBUILD]] - the colony doesn't meet either.
:I'd recommend finding another topic to write about. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 13:00, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
::I understand! I think I will leave this article here in the draft mode and write something else. If I find any references later, I will try to add it. Thanks for your help. [[User:Kalli navya|Kalli navya]] ([[User talk:Kalli navya|talk]]) 13:04, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
:::Best of luck :) <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 13:08, 22 November 2024 (UTC)


== 15:55, 22 November 2024 review of submission by 2601:201:8404:6BC0:208C:DA3B:8FDA:AF92 ==
== 13:09, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Steyncham ==
{{Lafc|username=2601:201:8404:6BC0:208C:DA3B:8FDA:AF92|ts=15:55, 22 November 2024|draft=Draft:Katherine_Propper}}
{{Lafc|username=Steyncham|ts=13:09, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:WePlanet}}
Hello
I would like someone to review submission of the changes on this article subject as since the references on the awards and nominations section are add and check it to see if this is okay so far. Or needs more improvement. [[Special:Contributions/2601:201:8404:6BC0:208C:DA3B:8FDA:AF92|2601:201:8404:6BC0:208C:DA3B:8FDA:AF92]] ([[User talk:2601:201:8404:6BC0:208C:DA3B:8FDA:AF92|talk]]) 15:55, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
I need assistance for this draft because the comments from the editor who rejected it are not specific enough, and I feel this rejection is unfair, especially considering the fact that I had already rewritten this draft to address issues raised by another reviewer. I have never faced such issues before with other articles I wrote for wikipedia [[User:Steyncham|Steyncham]] ([[User talk:Steyncham|talk]]) 13:09, 7 December 2024 (UTC)


:And so they will. It is in the pool for review. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 17:12, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Steyncham|Steyncham]] it has been declined, not rejected. You can improve and re-submit for review. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 13:20, 7 December 2024 (UTC)


== 20:22, 22 November 2024 review of submission by 88.235.212.12 ==
== 14:41, 7 December 2024 review of submission by JesusisGreat7 ==
{{Lafc|username=88.235.212.12|ts=20:22, 22 November 2024|draft=Draft:Darington}}
{{Lafc|username=JesusisGreat7|ts=14:41, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:Uttarayani_Fair}}
I can't find the 3rd item to create this page. So, help is required, and there is no primary topic. [[Special:Contributions/88.235.212.12|88.235.212.12]] ([[User talk:88.235.212.12|talk]]) 20:22, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
I want to know that the draft made by me is enough to be considered a long article [[User:JesusisGreat7|JesusisGreat7]] ([[User talk:JesusisGreat7|talk]]) 14:41, 7 December 2024 (UTC)


:Hi @[[User:JesusisGreat7|JesusisGreat7]], it's been successfully submitted for review - you now need to wait for a volunteer reviewer to reviewer it. This may take a few months.
:Hi IP editor - if Wikipedia only has two articles with "Darington" in the title name, then a disambiguation page shouldn't be created. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 20:58, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
:However: you should remove all emotive language in the draft, like "bustling", "passionate speeches" etc. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:43, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
::You also forgot about "See also" section and [[WP:TWODABS]]. [[Special:Contributions/88.235.212.12|88.235.212.12]] ([[User talk:88.235.212.12|talk]]) 03:49, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
::For sure! [[User:JesusisGreat7|JesusisGreat7]] ([[User talk:JesusisGreat7|talk]]) 14:46, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
:::You might think so, but I did not when I declined it. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 09:31, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


== 21:31, 22 November 2024 review of submission by 185.95.206.18 ==
== 16:06, 7 December 2024 review of submission by RandomItalianAviator ==
{{Lafc|username=185.95.206.18|ts=21:31, 22 November 2024|draft=User:Zhewar_H._Ali/sandbox}}
{{Lafc|username=RandomItalianAviator|ts=16:06, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:Avianca_flight_489_(GeoFS_plane_crash)}}
If I can't put it on Wikipedia, then where should I put something like this? [[User:RandomItalianAviator|RandomItalianAviator]] ([[User talk:RandomItalianAviator|talk]]) 16:06, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I need help addressing an issue with an article I wrote for Wikipedia. The article is a biography about Aram Mala Nuri, an activist and journalist who has had a significant impact on society. However, it was flagged for lacking notability. I strongly believe he is notable due to his contributions and influence as an activist and journalist. Could you please review this issue and clarify why it was deemed non-notable? I am committed to improving and editing the article further, but I need this specific concern to be reconsidered. Thank you. Here is the link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zhewar_H._Ali/sandbox [[Special:Contributions/185.95.206.18|185.95.206.18]] ([[User talk:185.95.206.18|talk]]) 21:31, 22 November 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:RandomItalianAviator|RandomItalianAviator]] That's for you to find out. Wikipedia doesn't host made up things, we're a serious encyclopaedia. Try making a blog or looking at [[Wikipedia:Directory of alternative outlets]] <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:11, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
:Hello, @[[User:Zhewar H. Ali|Zhewar H. Ali]]. I haven't looked at your draft, but please note that "notable" has a special meaning for this purpose. "His contributions and influence as an activist and journalist" are irrelevant ''unless they have been written about by people wholly unconnected with him, and published in reliable sources''. Please review all your sources against the triple criteria in [[WP:42]]: only sources which meet ''all three'' of the criteria can contribute to establishing that the subject is [[WP:notable|notable]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 23:06, 22 November 2024 (UTC)
::Ok sir. Im so sorry, I'll try not to do it again. Sorry for the inconvenience! [[User:RandomItalianAviator|RandomItalianAviator]] ([[User talk:RandomItalianAviator|talk]]) 16:22, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
::Thanks for your response. If you could take a look at the Resources section, you may take a look at the 2nd source, you can see that he is notable and written about him and his contribution to activities related to society and politics. Regards. Please review it and see that the article can be published. [[User:Zhewar H. Ali|Zhewar H. Ali]] ([[User talk:Zhewar H. Ali|talk]]) 12:03, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
::Also, merry Christmas!@ [[User:RandomItalianAviator|RandomItalianAviator]] ([[User talk:RandomItalianAviator|talk]]) 16:36, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
::Greetings. Could you please consider this too. The individual whom the article is about (Aram Mala Nuri) is not related to me, I am just aware of his life attacks and threats that he has been receiving from unknown people. If you could take a look at this report written by an American Organization which is reliable, you may take into account that the article is notable, or should I just focus on that life threat since we have reliable sources available about that particular topic? Thanks for your help. [[User:Zhewar H. Ali|Zhewar H. Ali]] ([[User talk:Zhewar H. Ali|talk]]) 20:03, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:::here is the link to that article about his life threat due to his contribution in Activities, https://cptik.org/articles-for-civil-society/2024/11/8/a-civil-society-activist-shares-his-story-of-death-threats-and-being-stabbed-17-times-1 [[User:Zhewar H. Ali|Zhewar H. Ali]] ([[User talk:Zhewar H. Ali|talk]]) 20:16, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:::If someone is being threatened, it is not a good idea to give him a high profile. [[User talk:A77809|A ton of bricks]] 09:36, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


== 19:54, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Efsaneturan ==
= November 23 =
{{Lafc|username=Efsaneturan|ts=19:54, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:SAYKI}}
our last draft should be suitable [[User:Efsaneturan|Efsaneturan]] ([[User talk:Efsaneturan|talk]]) 19:54, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Efsaneturan|Efsaneturan]] it has been deleted, so it clearly wasn't. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 01:19, 8 December 2024 (UTC)


== 06:02, 23 November 2024 review of submission by 117.230.15.250 ==
== 23:49, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Toptier5stars ==
{{Lafc|username=117.230.15.250|ts=06:02, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Udne_Ki_Aasha}}
{{Lafc|username=Toptier5stars|ts=23:49, 7 December 2024|draft=Draft:Touhou_Mystia's_Izakaya}}
Tough that it got rejected, but I am requesting assistance on how to move my draft into my user page. [[User:Toptier5stars|Toptier5stars]] ([[User talk:Toptier5stars|talk]]) 23:49, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
This draft has 10 sources. 8 sources out of the 10 are from [[Bollywood Hungama]], one from [[Times Now]] but still the draft was declined stating that it does not have reliable sources.
:@[[User:Toptier5stars|Toptier5stars]] moving it to userspace wouldn't change much - it'd still be rejected. Still, follow the directions at [[Help:Move]] if you'd like to do it. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 01:20, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
In that way if we see one of the other shows in [[StarPlus]] ''[[Advocate Anjali Awasthi]]'' also has sources from [[Bollywood Hungama]] but still it's draft was moved to mainspace. Why this difference in perspectives by Wikipedia reviewers? [[Special:Contributions/117.230.15.250|117.230.15.250]] ([[User talk:117.230.15.250|talk]]) 06:02, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
::Oh, no. I'm looking to have it under my userspace, I don't plan to resubmit it. [[User:Toptier5stars|Toptier5stars]] ([[User talk:Toptier5stars|talk]]) 01:22, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Got it. I've moved it to [[User:Toptier5stars/Touhou Mystia's Izakaya]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:47, 8 December 2024 (UTC)


= December 8 =
:The eight citations to Bollywood Hungama count as a single source. They don't have bylines, so were probably just picked up from press releases or feeds. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:49, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


== 11:14, 23 November 2024 review of submission by Fazil Showkat Tantray ==
== 09:16, 8 December 2024 review of submission by JesusisGreat7 ==
{{Lafc|username=Fazil Showkat Tantray|ts=11:14, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Fazil Ahmad Tantray}}
{{Lafc|username=JesusisGreat7|ts=09:16, 8 December 2024|draft=Draft:Uttarayani_Fair}}
Why my Review of newly account rejected all the information about me in article is true and perfect [[User:Fazil Showkat Tantray|Fazil Showkat Tantray]] ([[User talk:Fazil Showkat Tantray|talk]]) 11:14, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
Hi, I just want to know is my draft still not suitable for the submission pls I need assistance to improve it [[User:JesusisGreat7|JesusisGreat7]] ([[User talk:JesusisGreat7|talk]]) 09:16, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
:{{u|Fazil Showkat Tantray}} I fixed your link, you need the "Draft:" portion. Your draft was declined, not rejected. Rejected means that it could not be resubmitted. Declined means that it may be resubmitted(as you already did). Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves, please read the [[WP:AUTO|autobiography policy]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 11:19, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:JesusisGreat7|JesusisGreat7]]: you have resubmitted this draft, and will receive feedback when it has been reviewed again. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
== 12:58, 23 November 2024 review of submission by Chonlawat Yongpraderm ==
{{Lafc|username=Chonlawat Yongpraderm|ts=12:58, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Suki_Teenoi}}
Bonadea said that the source is unreliable, but the source that we using is in suki teenoi Wikipedia Thailand. [[User:Chonlawat Yongpraderm|Chonlawat Yongpraderm]] ([[User talk:Chonlawat Yongpraderm|talk]]) 12:58, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


== 15:23, 8 December 2024 review of submission by Yiyan02 ==
:Hi {{yo|Chonlawat Yongpraderm}} I think you misunderstood the "decline" notice. That sources must be reliable is only one of the requirements. The text in the notice says
{{Lafc|username=Yiyan02|ts=15:23, 8 December 2024|draft=Draft:The_Red_River_Ramblers}}
<blockquote>the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
Is this draft ok? Any improvement required? [[User:Yiyan02|Yiyan02]] ([[User talk:Yiyan02|talk]]) 15:23, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
''[[WP:ORGDEPTH|in-depth]]'' (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)


:@[[User:Yiyan02|Yiyan02]]: you have submitted the draft, and will receive feedback when a reviewer gets around to reviewing it. If you have specific questions, you may ask those here in the meantime. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 15:39, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
''[[WP:RS|reliable]]''
::Thankyou [[User:Yiyan02|Yiyan02]] ([[User talk:Yiyan02|talk]]) 15:49, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Please see [[:Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Theredriverramblers]]. [[User:Justlettersandnumbers|Justlettersandnumbers]] ([[User talk:Justlettersandnumbers|talk]]) 16:01, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
::::Thanks [[User:Yiyan02|Yiyan02]] ([[User talk:Yiyan02|talk]]) 16:22, 8 December 2024 (UTC)


== 17:55, 8 December 2024 review of submission by Kgbalint ==
''[[WP:SECONDARY|secondary]]''
{{Lafc|username=Kgbalint|ts=17:55, 8 December 2024|draft=Draft:AEON_GODS}}
I accept that my draft did not meet the criteria and could not be published. I believe the problem was that I did not use the correct sources and citations, but I am not sure I understood correctly. I would like to know if I am right or not. And I would also like to know what I would have to change to get my article published. [[User:Kgbalint|Kgbalint]] ([[User talk:Kgbalint|talk]]) 17:55, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Kgbalint|Kgbalint]] Yeah, pretty much. For the draft to be accepted, it needs to have multiple [[WP:IS|independent]] [[WP:RS|reliable]] sources that discuss the subject with [[WP:SIGCOV|significant coverage]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 00:58, 9 December 2024 (UTC)


== 18:24, 8 December 2024 review of submission by Rayhigdon7 ==
''[[WP:ORGIND|strictly independent]]'' of the subject
{{Lafc|username=Rayhigdon7|ts=18:24, 8 December 2024|draft=Draft:Alish_Karki}}
may i know the reason please ? [[User:Rayhigdon7|Rayhigdon7]] ([[User talk:Rayhigdon7|talk]]) 18:24, 8 December 2024 (UTC)


:Hi @[[User:Rayhigdon7|Rayhigdon7]], as it was explained to you before you removed the declination in [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Alish_Karki&diff=prev&oldid=1261926089 this edit], which has now been restored: the subject not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia and has been rejected. It will not be considered further. [[User:Bobby Cohn|Bobby Cohn]] ([[User talk:Bobby Cohn|talk]]) 18:34, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Make sure you add references that meet ''all four'' of these criteria before resubmitting.</blockquote>
:Please follow the blue links in the list above, which will tell you what the requirements are. Regards, --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 14:21, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
::It matters little. Blocked for sockpuppetry. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 22:51, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


== 15:44, 23 November 2024 review of submission by 134.255.84.144 ==
== 18:31, 8 December 2024 review of submission by 162.156.70.174 ==
{{Lafc|username=134.255.84.144|ts=15:44, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Windows_12}}
{{Lafc|username=162.156.70.174|ts=18:31, 8 December 2024|draft=Draft:Economic Impacts of Climate Change}}
Dear Wikipedia Review Team,
illegal [[Special:Contributions/134.255.84.144|134.255.84.144]] ([[User talk:134.255.84.144|talk]]) 15:44, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


Thank you for considering our article, "The Economic Impacts of Climate Change: A Journey Towards a Sustainable Future." We appreciate the time you've taken to evaluate our submission. We'd like to clarify that this article is not AI-generated but the result of extensive human research and collaboration. Our aim is to provide an insightful analysis of the economic implications of climate change, supported by credible sources and real-life examples.
:Did you have a question we can help with, IP editor? [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 06:51, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


To address the concerns raised by Qcne, we have reviewed the article and are prepared to make the following revisions:
== 16:17, 23 November 2024 review of submission by Sheikh Ashfakur Rahman ==
{{Lafc|username=Sheikh Ashfakur Rahman|ts=16:17, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Zafran_Hair_Growth_Therapy}}
zafran brand is my company and i want to add my info wikipedia [[User:Sheikh Ashfakur Rahman|Sheikh Ashfakur Rahman]] ([[User talk:Sheikh Ashfakur Rahman|talk]]) 16:17, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


1. Enhance the introduction to clearly state the article's purpose and scope.
:@[[User:Sheikh Ashfakur Rahman|Sheikh Ashfakur Rahman]]: I must warn you, you are very close to being blocked for spamming. I have deleted two of your adverts, and another administrator has deleted at least one more. Wikipedia is not a marketing channel for your business. Please stop now.
2. Provide more detailed citations and context for each source used, ensuring transparency and verifiability.
:Also, you must make a paid-editing disclosure as your very next edit. Instructions have been posted on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:22, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
3. Rephrase sections to adhere more strictly to Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy.
4. Engage with the community for feedback and suggestions for improvement.


We remain committed to creating content that aligns with Wikipedia's mission and are open to further guidance. Please find our revised article [link to the revised article] and a detailed list of sources [link to source list]. We hope to resubmit our work once these changes have been made.
== 21:26, 23 November 2024 review of submission by Chamber Music Queen ==
{{Lafc|username=Chamber Music Queen|ts=21:26, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Irwin_Eisenberg}}
I would like help in improving reliable sources [[User:Chamber Music Queen|Chamber Music Queen]] ([[User talk:Chamber Music Queen|talk]]) 21:26, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


Thank you for your understanding and assistance in this matter.
:Hi @[[User:Chamber Music Queen|Chamber Music Queen]]! Can I suggest you begin by reading through [[WP:REFB|referencing for beginners]] and using that to fix up the citations for the sources you currently have? While you're going through them, compare each of them to [[WP:42]], the 'golden rule', which says you are looking for ''significant coverage'' in ''reliable sources'' that are ''independent of the topic''. If you have questions after fixing the citations, please come back and ask; we'll be much more helpful if we can access the sources. [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 06:36, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


Best regards,
== 21:33, 23 November 2024 review of submission by Robert T. deGavre ==
[Your Name] and Chloe [[Special:Contributions/162.156.70.174|162.156.70.174]] ([[User talk:162.156.70.174|talk]]) 18:31, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Robert T. deGavre|ts=21:33, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Chester_Braddock_deGavre}}
I am trying to edit my AfC article on Chester Braddock deGavre. Previously the name of the draft appeared immediately when I logged in. Now the box is blank. When I type in the name of my draft , it appears in small type with a multitude of symbols. Where is the readable version which can be edited? [[User:Robert T. deGavre|Robert T. deGavre]] ([[User talk:Robert T. deGavre|talk]]) 21:33, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


:We will not consider requests written via [[WP:LLM|chatbot]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:34, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Robert T. deGavre|Robert T. deGavre]], clicking on the link above (or here: [[Draft: Chester Braddock deGavre]]) is taking me to an editable version of the draft. If you click that link, does it get you to the draft that you want to work on? If not, can you be more specific about the blank box, and where you are typing? [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 06:08, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
::Jéske Couriano, we understand your concern regarding AI-generated content. However, I assure you that "The Economic Impacts of Climate Change: A Journey Towards a Sustainable Future" is the product of human thought and collaboration. We have reviewed the feedback provided and made the necessary revisions. Our article combines a rigorous analysis with real-world examples, such as the Jenkins family's inspiring transition to sustainable farming. We look forward to engaging with the Wikipedia community and welcome any additional input that can help us improve the article. Thank you for your vigilance and your contribution to maintaining the integrity of Wikipedia.
::thank you [[User:Robert T. deGavre|Robert T. deGavre]] ([[User talk:Robert T. deGavre|talk]]) 17:24, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
::Best regards,
::Chloe [[Special:Contributions/162.156.70.174|162.156.70.174]] ([[User talk:162.156.70.174|talk]]) 18:41, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
:::It is absolutely AI generated slop, as was your above comment. I have rejected the draft, there is nothing further to be done. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 19:56, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
::::I'm sorry for any confusion, qcne. I can assure you that the article and our comments are the result of human effort and collaboration. Anon and I are committed to creating informative and balanced content that adheres to Wikipedia's guidelines. We've made significant revisions in response to the feedback and are eager to engage with the community. If you have specific suggestions for further improvement, we would greatly appreciate your input. Let's work together to ensure that our article contributes meaningfully to the climate change discourse. [[Special:Contributions/162.156.70.174|162.156.70.174]] ([[User talk:162.156.70.174|talk]]) 20:20, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::Chloe and I are ready to provide any additional clarification or context that might be needed. The article is now more focused on the economic impacts and includes a range of viewpoints on technology and policy, with a clear human-centered narrative. We've also ensured that all sources are credible and properly cited. If you have any particular sections you'd like us to address, please do not hesitate to let us know. Our ultimate goal is to create a valuable resource that aligns with Wikipedia's high standards and sparks important conversations about our planet's future. [[Special:Contributions/162.156.70.174|162.156.70.174]] ([[User talk:162.156.70.174|talk]]) 20:21, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
::::::Thank you for your time, qcne. We've just posted an updated message on the article's talk page, emphasizing our human collaboration and our willingness to address feedback. If you could review our revisions and provide specific areas for improvement, we would be grateful. We've worked hard to ensure the article is neutral and well-sourced, with a clear distinction between fact and opinion. We're looking forward to participating in the community review process and making our article the best it can be with your help. [[Special:Contributions/162.156.70.174|162.156.70.174]] ([[User talk:162.156.70.174|talk]]) 20:24, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::::Reported to ANI. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 20:28, 8 December 2024 (UTC)


== 22:00, 23 November 2024 review of submission by Wangxun2 ==
== 19:51, 8 December 2024 review of submission by Cielakasr ==
{{Lafc|username=Wangxun2|ts=22:00, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Thomas_J._Hastings}}
{{Lafc|username=Cielakasr|ts=19:51, 8 December 2024|draft=Draft:Rymia_empire}}
I want to know why my Page got rejected [[User:Cielakasr|Cielakasr]] ([[User talk:Cielakasr|talk]]) 19:51, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I'd like to add in a segment about Thomas Hastings starting Path and selling it to Sean Fanning later on. I have the escrow documents to prove it. It's not published in any news article so I cannot cite it, but can I still include this in the Wikipedia page? [[User:Wangxun2|Wangxun2]] ([[User talk:Wangxun2|talk]]) 22:00, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Cielakasr|Cielakasr]] We don't host made up things. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 19:56, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
:If you cannot provide a citation for something, it cannot be in an article. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:03, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


= December 9 =
== 22:34, 23 November 2024 review of submission by Jag612red ==
{{Lafc|username=Jag612red|ts=22:34, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Qubein_Center}}
Need more reason about why my article was declined so I can fix this. I really want this to be published as the article doesn't exist yet if you can please tell me why that will be great. Also can you fix my map [[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]] ([[User talk:Jag612red|talk]]) 22:34, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


== 10:59, 9 December 2024 review of submission by 62.224.56.173 ==
:@[[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]], the reviewer has been pretty specific about what you need to include - if you go to your draft and read through the big orange box at the top, you'll see there are links to help you assess whether your sources are independent and secondary (click those words to get to the right guidelines). If you still have questions after reading those, come on back! [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 06:29, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=62.224.56.173|ts=10:59, 9 December 2024|draft=User:Jacqueline.isensee/sandbox}}
Please let me know why my page was rejected and what might be helpful to get published on Wikipedia? Thank you. [[Special:Contributions/62.224.56.173|62.224.56.173]] ([[User talk:62.224.56.173|talk]]) 10:59, 9 December 2024 (UTC)


:This draft was rejected because there is nothing to indicate that the person is [[WP:notable|notable]] under any of our notability standards. There isn't anything that could be done to get it published. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:17, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
(duplicated question moved to this section:)
I dont understand why it was declined. Even though I used source multiple times its reliable and it has depth. It talks about the subject and I don't know what to fix. If anyone can help in what I am doing wrong it would help. [[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]] ([[User talk:Jag612red|talk]]) 22:42, 23 November 2024 (UTC)


== 11:39, 9 December 2024 review of submission by Mishal Mehmood ==
(further question moved to this section:)
{{Lafc|username=Mishal Mehmood|ts=11:39, 9 December 2024|draft=Draft:David_P._Baker}}
Can someone fix my map in my infobox. I would appreciate it. Thank you. [[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]] ([[User talk:Jag612red|talk]]) 23:16, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
can you specify why the article was rejected ?
[[User:Mishal Mehmood|Mishal Mehmood]] ([[User talk:Mishal Mehmood|talk]]) 11:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)


:The draft was declined, not rejected, which means you can resubmit it once you improve it and address the problems the reviewer noted. As {{u| DoubleGrazing}} pointed out, the sources currently in the draft do not adequately demonstrate that the subject is notable per [[WP:NPROF]]. Additional [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] will have to be added to establish this notability before you resubmit or it will be declined again. [[User:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:navy;">''cyberdog''</span><span style="color:orange;">'''958'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Cyberdog958|<span style="color:teal;">Talk</span>]]</sup> 12:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]]: all bar one of your sources are primary, and close to the subject (ie. not independent). We need to see multiple secondary sources that are reliable and independent and have provided significant coverage of the subject.
:What are you saying is wrong with the map? Seems fine to me. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:54, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
::What is bar one whichs one exactly are you talking about [[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]] ([[User talk:Jag612red|talk]]) 16:18, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


== 23:50, 23 November 2024 review of submission by AnimalNorth ==
== 14:34, 9 December 2024 review of submission by LindsayCTC ==
{{Lafc|username=AnimalNorth|ts=23:50, 23 November 2024|draft=Draft:Ron George, Composer}}
{{Lafc|username=LindsayCTC|ts=14:34, 9 December 2024|draft=Draft:Canadian_True_Crime_Podcast}}
Hello,
My sources are well proven to be reliable & durable sources yet is rejected. Is this a matter of syntax or some other issue.


The submission for a page for Canadian True Crime podcast keeps getting declined. We have added as many credible sources that we have. What further sources is Wikipedia looking for?
If after 7 years of the links in this article are solid, why are they not qualified as reliable sources?


Please advise [[User:AnimalNorth|AnimalNorth]] ([[User talk:AnimalNorth|talk]]) 23:50, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
Thanks. [[User:LindsayCTC|LindsayCTC]] ([[User talk:LindsayCTC|talk]]) 14:34, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
:Fixed draft link. [[User:Kline|Kline]] • [[User talk:Kline|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Kline|contribs]] 23:53, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
:Hi @[[User:AnimalNorth|AnimalNorth]]! Links to other Wikipedia articles aren't reliable because [[WP:WINARS|Wikipedia is not a reliable source]]. There's a lot of information in that link that will hopefully explain better than I can. What you ''can'' do is find the source the other Wikipedia article is citing, make sure it says what the article is telling you it says, and then use that source for your own draft. Just be warned that not all sources are created equal; before relying on a source, assess it against the triple criteria at [[WP:42]], our 'golden rule'. If you still have questions after having a go at that, please do come back and we'll try to help answer them. [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 06:50, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


:Hi @[[User:LindsayCTC|LindsayCTC]], there was a warning left on your user talk page about managing a conflict of interest. '''Please review that and kindly make the necessary declarations on your user page.''' As far as the draft article, it needs to show that it is [[WP:Notable]], that is, is has coverage from secondary, independent sources but presently your draft is written very promotionally and with a lot of external links. While the awards are nice, there needs to be in depth coverage of the things you have written about in the draft. [[User:Bobby Cohn|Bobby Cohn]] ([[User talk:Bobby Cohn|talk]]) 15:55, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
= November 24 =
:A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:independent|independent]] commentators have published (in [[WP:reliable sources|reliable sources]]) about the subject - that and almost nothing else. What you know, think, or believe, about the subject is irrelevant, and should play no part in creating the article, except where it is corroborated by independent published sources. This is ''especially'' the case if you are connected with the subject. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 16:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)


== 00:48, 24 November 2024 review of submission by PostRhythmRecords ==
== 17:34, 9 December 2024 review of submission by ZachRivard72 ==
{{Lafc|username=PostRhythmRecords|ts=00:48, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:DPunk}}
{{Lafc|username=ZachRivard72|ts=17:34, 9 December 2024|draft=Draft:Charles_Millaird}}
I don't know what I'm missing. [[User:PostRhythmRecords|PostRhythmRecords]] ([[User talk:PostRhythmRecords|talk]]) 00:48, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
How can I change the name of my draft? It is Charles Milliard... not Charles Millaird. [[User:ZachRivard72|ZachRivard72]] ([[User talk:ZachRivard72|talk]]) 17:34, 9 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:ZachRivard72|ZachRivard72]]: page titles can't be changed, as such; this is effected by moving the page.
:Hey. It seems like your article doesn't meet at the requirements to be an actual published article. You are missing: Referencable sources. You need references and citable sources in your article. To make an reference use the ref keys. To learn more about references and, click this link to this article [[Wikipedia:Citing sources]] [[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]] ([[User talk:Jag612red|talk]]) 01:34, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:OP blocked. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 16:30, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:However, your draft is in French, whereas this is the English-language Wikipedia, so I'd say you have bigger 'issues' than the page title? :) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:37, 9 December 2024 (UTC)


== 01:09, 24 November 2024 review of submission by MyNameIsGeorgeHale ==
== 17:39, 9 December 2024 review of submission by 2405:DA40:35DB:5600:ADE3:5203:6493:3FE0 ==
{{Lafc|username=MyNameIsGeorgeHale|ts=01:09, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Kieran_Howe}}
{{Lafc|username=2405:DA40:35DB:5600:ADE3:5203:6493:3FE0|ts=17:39, 9 December 2024|draft=Draft:Brendon_Tumai}}
what kind of reference are you after? how many do I have to have? [[Special:Contributions/2405:DA40:35DB:5600:ADE3:5203:6493:3FE0|2405:DA40:35DB:5600:ADE3:5203:6493:3FE0]] ([[User talk:2405:DA40:35DB:5600:ADE3:5203:6493:3FE0|talk]]) 17:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
I am not sure if the article for “Kieran Howe” has been properly submitted for review or not. I can’t see it on the list of articles submitted for review.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Kieran_Howe [[User:MyNameIsGeorgeHale|MyNameIsGeorgeHale]] ([[User talk:MyNameIsGeorgeHale|talk]]) 01:09, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


:For notability, we need to see three or more independent and reliable secondary sources that have provided significant coverage of the subject.
:Answered your other post, please only use one forum to seek assistance. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 01:27, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:For verification, we need to see as many sources and citations as is necessary to adequately support the information in the draft. These must be cited inline.
:Currently this draft has one source, which does not meet any of these requirements. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:42, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
:For more information, see [[WP:42]]. [[User:Ca|Ca]] <i><sup style="display:inline-flex;rotate:7deg;">[[User talk:Ca|talk to me!]]</sup></i> 00:18, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 05:31, 24 November 2024 review of submission by 2603:8000:A4F0:9A00:8F1C:1D8A:2ECB:4557 ==
== 19:40, 9 December 2024 review of submission by Kgbalint ==
{{Lafc|username=2603:8000:A4F0:9A00:8F1C:1D8A:2ECB:4557|ts=05:31, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Southern Lights}}
{{Lafc|username=Kgbalint|ts=19:40, 9 December 2024|draft=Draft:AEON_GODS}}
I would like to know, what was the problem specifically. I would really love to create this article, and I want to know what should I improve about my draft. [[User:Kgbalint|Kgbalint]] ([[User talk:Kgbalint|talk]]) 19:40, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
I am not able to use the Move action to change the title of the article to "Southern Lights (sculpture)"
How to rename the title? [[Special:Contributions/2603:8000:A4F0:9A00:8F1C:1D8A:2ECB:4557|2603:8000:A4F0:9A00:8F1C:1D8A:2ECB:4557]] ([[User talk:2603:8000:A4F0:9A00:8F1C:1D8A:2ECB:4557|talk]]) 05:31, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


:I've made a note of that in the draft. There's no need to move this yet, since it will have to be moved in any case, if/when the draft is accepted. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:47, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:You have not shown that this band meets the [[WP:BAND|special Wikipedia definition of a notable band]]. This may be different than the German Wikipedia, as each version of Wikipedia has its own policies. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:52, 9 December 2024 (UTC)


== 07:44, 24 November 2024 review of submission by 2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D ==
== 22:59, 9 December 2024 review of submission by Nichooas li ==
{{Lafc|username=2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D|ts=07:44, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Laxmi_Narayan_(artist)}}
{{Lafc|username=Nichooas li|ts=22:59, 9 December 2024|draft=User:Nichooas_li/sandbox}}
I have already used 90% of professional terms and a large number of references. Why am I not being approved? [[User:Nichooas li|Nichooas li]] ([[User talk:Nichooas li|talk]]) 22:59, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Please help in creating this page. I do not have much knowledge about Wikipedia, so please help in creating this page. Thank you [[Special:Contributions/2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D|2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D]] ([[User talk:2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D|talk]]) 07:44, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


:Because you have not understood what a Wikipedia article is. This is a common problem for people who try to create an article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works.
== 07:48, 24 November 2024 review of submission by 2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D ==
:{{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}}
{{Lafc|username=2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D|ts=07:48, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Laxmi_Narayan_(artist)}}
:No Wikipedia article should ever present arguments or conclusions, except when it is summarising an argument or conclusion from one single cited source. [[WP:original research|original research]] is not permitted. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 23:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Please help me in making this page, I am not able to understand what mistake I am doing so please correct my mistake [[Special:Contributions/2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D|2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D]] ([[User talk:2409:40E2:1021:3933:6359:AC25:5F3E:524D|talk]]) 07:48, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
::{{u|Nichooas li}}, that is not an encyclopedia article. It is an essay. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 08:43, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


= December 10 =
:Don't you think it's time to give this a rest? This is at least the fourth title where it has been attempted, and always failed, to create the article. The subject is clearly not notable.
:Also, note that when you're blocked, you are not allowed to edit even logged-out. The block applies to you as a person, not just to your user account. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:59, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


== 08:09, 24 November 2024 review of submission by Prince Folorunsho Adegoke ==
== 02:00, 10 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0 ==
{{Lafc|username=Prince Folorunsho Adegoke|ts=08:09, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Adebola_Adebileje}}
{{Lafc|username=2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0|ts=02:00, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shubham_X_Rameshwar}}
He is very popular person in the india [[Special:Contributions/2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0|2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0]] ([[User talk:2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0|talk]]) 02:00, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your response. Please check, I think it meets one of the eight academic-specific criteria because the subject is the immediate past Deputy Vice Chancellor of Redeemer's University and her successor, [[Ahmed Yerima]] has an article on Wikipedia which I used as a sample to make her article better. Kindly refer to Editors who can also assist in addressing the issues in the article. [[User:Prince Folorunsho Adegoke|PFA]] ([[User talk:Prince Folorunsho Adegoke|talk]]) 08:09, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Prince Folorunsho Adegoke|Prince Folorunsho Adegoke]]: being ''deputy'' V-C does not satisfy [[WP:NACADEMIC]] #6, if that's what you mean; they would need to be the actual V-C for that. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:34, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:That's as may be, but this draft has been rejected and will therefore not be considered further. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:13, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 10:50, 24 November 2024 review of submission by Idk17272727 ==
== 03:05, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Writer Johnc ==
{{Lafc|username=Idk17272727|ts=10:50, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:The Origin of Christmas}}
{{Lafc|username=Writer Johnc|ts=03:05, 10 December 2024|draft=Lincoln Lu}}
Hello ! Kindly want to follow up regarding the status of my submission, "Lincoln Lu," which is currently under review. I would greatly appreciate any guidance you could provide on how to expedite the process or if there are any amendments I should consider.
Ariticle draft rejected
my draft for an article was rejected for copyright i believe but i wanna know 100% why i dont think i did anything wrong. [[User:Idk17272727|Idk17272727]] ([[User talk:Idk17272727|talk]]) 10:50, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:{{u|Idk17272727}} I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. You were given a clear reason for the rejection at the top of your draft. We also already have an article about [[Christmas]] which details its history. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:58, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


Thank you very much for your assistance!
== 13:18, 24 November 2024 review of submission by Sebdocs ==
{{Lafc|username=Sebdocs|ts=13:18, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Seb_Doherty}}
What is the reason behind this? [[User:Sebdocs|Sebdocs]] ([[User talk:Sebdocs|talk]]) 13:18, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:Wikipedia is [[WP:NOTSOCIAL|not a social media platform]]. This isn't the place for you to be posting a profile of yourself. I placed a warning on your user talk page regarding the creation of autobiographies. Even if it is not an autobiography, you failed to provide any references of any kind to support the notability of "Seb Doherty". Wikipedia does not accept unreferenced drafts. If you can find [[WP:RS|reliable]], [[WP:SECONDARY|secondary sources]] that are [[WP:IS|independent of the subject]], then include them and there might be a chance of the draft being accepted. Otherwise, no. --[[User:Hammersoft|Hammersoft]] ([[User talk:Hammersoft|talk]]) 13:22, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


Hello! As the submission of " Lincoln Lu" is still under review, really want to know how can spped up or what i need to amend ? pls help, many thanks! [[User:Writer Johnc|Writer Johnc]] ([[User talk:Writer Johnc|talk]]) 03:05, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 14:29, 24 November 2024 review of submission by HKFighter ==
{{Lafc|username=HKFighter|ts=14:29, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Renofa_Yamaguchi_FC_Ladies}}
Hi, I wish to resubmit this draft but cannot find the submission button. [[User:HKFighter|HKFighter]] ([[User talk:HKFighter|talk]]) 14:29, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Writer Johnc|Writer Johnc]]: see my answer to your next question below. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:05, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:Hi @[[User:HKFighter|HKFighter]], that's odd. I've submitted it for review for you. @[[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] any idea what happened to the re-submission button? <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:39, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:PS: [[Draft:Lincoln Lu]] isn't "your submission" – you didn't write the draft, and you didn't submit it; {{u|Beetea220}} did. Or are you saying you're operating both accounts? Or are you two working together? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:10, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 03:12, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Writer Johnc ==
::It looks like HKFighter accidentally replaced the Articles for Creation decline templates with the notices from their user talk page. I restored the previous declines – goodness knows the template code is not easy to read if you don't know what it is supposed to look like, and my guess is that HKFighter thought it was the same notice without realising that the talk page version actully looks rather different. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 16:00, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Writer Johnc|ts=03:12, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Orion Land}}
Hello ! Kindly want to follow up regarding the status of my submission - Orion Land which is currently under review. I would greatly appreciate any guidance you could provide on how to expedite the process or if there are any amendments I should consider. Thanks in advance!


== 15:35, 24 November 2024 review of submission by Arota1612 ==
{{Lafc|username=Arota1612|ts=15:35, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Steve_Lyon_(music_producer)}}
Hello


[[User:Writer Johnc|Writer Johnc]] ([[User talk:Writer Johnc|talk]]) 03:12, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
My article has been refused for not reliable sources but there are books and official media. Can you help me by telling which sources are a problem for you and those who are not so I can finish a good article?
I checked other music producer pages and there are very similar
Thank you for your kind help
Regards [[User:Arota1612|Arota1612]] ([[User talk:Arota1612|talk]]) 15:35, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:Hello, {{u|Arota1612}}. The quality of your references is vastly more important than their quantity. Three or four excellent references are far better than dozens of mediocre sources. Most of your references seem to be passing mentions, interviews or event listings. Your draft also has problems with language violating the [[WP:NPOV|Neutral point of view]] policy. One example is {{tpq|An eclectic music-lover from an early age, Lyon found his vocation to music production by flipping over the album covers he loved}}, followed by unnecessary name dropping. As for articles about other music producers, please name them. Perhaps some of those articles need to be deleted. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 00:53, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
::Thank you very much. Made the modifications accordingly. Hope it is good now. Best [[User:Arota1612|Arota1612]] ([[User talk:Arota1612|talk]]) 10:10, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:Arota1612|Arota1612]] It's mandatory that biographic articles have in-line citations for every fact, starting with the date of birth. I notice the top half of the draft has no citations whatsoever: readers therefore cannot verify the information is true. I've declined it for now on that basis: please do re-submit once you've either got citations or removed the uncited paragraphs. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 10:13, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Writer Johnc|Writer Johnc]]: you have resubmitted this draft, so will get feedback when a reviewer gets around to reviewing it. We don't provide pre-reviews here at the help desk, although if you have specific questions you may ask those of course. And no, there is no way to expedite the process, the review could take place today, or it could be several weeks away.
== 15:49, 24 November 2024 review of submission by Jag612red ==
:What is your relationship with this subject? If you work for this business, you need to make a paid-editing-disclosure; I will post instructions on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:04, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Jag612red|ts=15:49, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Qubein_Center}}
I want to know which sources are primary sources so I can change them. I know not all of them are primary. I can easily fix it so my article can get published. Some of them are secondary so I am confused about which is which. Thank you. [[Draft:Qubein Center]] [[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]] ([[User talk:Jag612red|talk]]) 15:49, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


== 03:33, 10 December 2024 review of submission by TJH2020 ==
:The only one which even ''might'' be secondary is no 9, which won't display in my region. Almost all of them are published by the university or the architects, and so are not independent. 13 might be independent, but from what I saw before it threw up the paywall, it looked as if it was regurgitating a Press release, and so is also not independent. And Wikipedia is not a reliable source, and should almost never be cited.
{{Lafc|username=TJH2020|ts=03:33, 10 December 2024|draft=User:TJH2020/John_Santiago}}
:{{HD/WINI}} [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 21:50, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
::Am I allowed to use at least one primary source or do they all secondary sources and will this mean I will have to redo my wiki page. [[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]] ([[User talk:Jag612red|talk]]) 03:08, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
Need help with adding references in the correct places in the article. All the references are credible and correct for the article and information. [[User:TJH2020|TJH2020]] ([[User talk:TJH2020|talk]]) 03:33, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Hello. The purpose of a citation is to allow a user to verify some information about the subject in the article: nothing else. As long as most of the information comes from secondary sources, a small amount of uncontroversial factual information may be cited to [[WP:primary sources|primary sources]] [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 11:11, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
::Also can I shorten the article because I've seen other articles related to my topic with little to no references and still get it published and I'd also like to know if the city newspaper is primary or secondary because 9 and 13 are news articles with sources in them but one is somehow secondary and the other isn't. Im new to Wikipedia and I just want to clear it up because the [[Millis Athletic Convocation Center]] uses primary sources as well and I just want my article to be published [[User:Jag612red|Jag612red]] ([[User talk:Jag612red|talk]]) 03:17, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:::{{u|Jag612red}}, please list here the {{tpq|other articles related to my topic with little to no references and still get it published}}. Maybe some or all of those articles need to be improved or deleted. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 05:20, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:::"The city newspaper" is not primary or secondary: it depends on what it publishes. If it publishes an article which is clearly a regurgitation of a press release, that is primary. If it publishes an interview with the subject, with little commentary, that is primary. If it publishes an article by a named journalist, who is clearly not simply repeating what the subject says, but has done their own investigation and written a commentary, it is secondary. And there can be many intermediate possibilities. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 11:15, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:TJH2020|TJH2020]]: presumably you mean [[Draft:John Santiago]]?
== 16:08, 24 November 2024 review of submission by Unknownkidman ==
:See [[WP:REFB]] for advice on referencing using inline citations, which is what is required in articles on living people ([[WP:BLP]]). -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:59, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Unknownkidman|ts=16:08, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:YoungKar&finesses}}
I think that theses YouTubers need more clout on there name give them a chance [[User:Unknownkidman|Unknownkidman]] ([[User talk:Unknownkidman|talk]]) 16:08, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
:We have no interest in giving people clout; we summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] say about [[WP:BIO|people that meet our criteria]]. "YouTubers" are not inherently notable. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 16:34, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
::{{u|Unknownkidman}}, your style of writing is completely inappropriate for an encyclopedia. Our [[WP:MOS|Manual of Style]] says {{tpq| Editors should write articles using straightforward, succinct, easily understood language}}. I can barely understand what you have written. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 00:37, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


== 18:02, 24 November 2024 review of submission by Mahreen1212 ==
== 08:31, 10 December 2024 review of submission by 103.121.26.106 ==
{{Lafc|username=Mahreen1212|ts=18:02, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:Edgbaston_College}}
{{Lafc|username=103.121.26.106|ts=08:31, 10 December 2024|draft=Underground orange}}
Hello. Could you please tell me why this submission is not accepted? I do see that there is another one here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Underground_Orange . The film title exists in Italian and Spanish under "Bajo Naranja". Thank you. [[Special:Contributions/103.121.26.106|103.121.26.106]] ([[User talk:103.121.26.106|talk]]) 08:31, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Hi - Why was the updated submission rejected on the following basis " not adequately supported by reliable sources". Every source was independent and government/informative.
Does it need to be longer? [[User:Mahreen1212|Mahreen1212]] ([[User talk:Mahreen1212|talk]]) 18:02, 24 November 2024 (UTC)


:We will only consider one draft at a time on any given subject. [[Draft:Underground orange]] was declined procedurally, because there is a previous draft [[Draft:Underground Orange]] already in the system, which predates Draft:Underground orange by several weeks. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:37, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:{{ping|Mahreen1212}} Government sources are considered [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]]; we're looking for secondary sources (newspapers, scholarly books, etc.). —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 18:14, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
::Okay, I see that this previous draft has been waiting for review for about 6 weeks. [[Special:Contributions/103.121.26.106|103.121.26.106]] ([[User talk:103.121.26.106|talk]]) 09:00, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 21:16, 24 November 2024 review of submission by GenesisGSE ==
== 10:02, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Napa comms ==
{{Lafc|username=GenesisGSE|ts=21:16, 24 November 2024|draft=Draft:BADVOID}}
{{Lafc|username=Napa comms|ts=10:02, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Silvia Onofri}}
Hello! Could you please explain why the page I have submitted for pubblication has been rejected so that I can amend potential errors? And what should I do to bring it up to a publishable standard?
Help clean up and write this draft [[User:GenesisGSE|GenesisGSE]] ([[User talk:GenesisGSE|talk]]) 21:16, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
Many thanks [[User:Napa comms|Napa comms]] ([[User talk:Napa comms|talk]]) 10:02, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Napa comms|Napa comms]]: this draft has been declined because it provides insufficient evidence that the subject is [[WP:notable|notable]]. There are two sources cited, one routine business reporting (appointment news), the other an interview (apparently – I can't actually read it); neither of these contribute anything towards notability per the [[WP:GNG]] guideline. We need to see significant coverage of this person, in multiple secondary sources that are reliable and entirely independent. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 10:07, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:We're not here to be co-editors. The draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. It's the end of the line. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:22, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
::OP blocked for username, clearly a company rep. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:43, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 10:48, 10 December 2024 review of submission by ThatOnePixle ==
= November 25 =
{{Lafc|username=ThatOnePixle|ts=10:48, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Adam_Longman-Jones}}
how much information do I need? [[User:ThatOnePixle|ThatOnePixle]] ([[User talk:ThatOnePixle|talk]]) 10:48, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


:Wikipedia is not a place for you to tell about yourself, please see the [[WP:AUTO|autobiography policy]]. I would also suggest that you read [[WP:YOUNG|this page]] with a parent/guardian/custodian. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 02:35, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Warmtoned ==
::{{ping|ThatOnePixle}} To expand on what 331dot says, we generally do not entertain articles on minors unless the claim to [[WP:Notability|notability]] is ''unambiguous'' and the [[WP:Reliable sources|sourcing]] is [[WP:Biographies of living persons|''practically flawless'']]. [[WP:Protecting children's privacy|This is because a Wikipedia article irrevocably denies the subject a chance at a private life.]] —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 19:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Warmtoned|ts=02:35, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Sophia Laforteza}}
Hello! I'm working on a draft for [[Draft:Sophia_Laforteza|Sophia Laforteza of Katseye]], in other words, a member of a band/musical group. As per [[WP:BANDMEMBER]], the individual needs certain independant notability. I'm requesting general information and clarity as to what independant notability exactly means, and how this guideline could be met. This would greatly help the submission of the draft and getting into mainspace, as well as knowing how exactly notable the subject is in regards to getting it accepted on Wikipedia. Cheers! [[User:Warmtoned|Warmtoned]] ([[User talk:Warmtoned|talk]]) 02:35, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


== 12:07, 10 December 2024 review of submission by KishorWhite ==
:I had just realized this may not be the right help desk to ask this question, please let me know if that is the case and where I could be redirected! [[User:Warmtoned|Warmtoned]] ([[User talk:Warmtoned|talk]]) 02:40, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=KishorWhite|ts=12:07, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Council_for_Technical_Education_and_Vocational_Training}}
::{{u|Warmtoned}}, please be patient and wait until your draft has been reviewed before asking for assistance at this help desk. The review is the next step. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 05:27, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
I am neither related to company nor a employer. I don't know why this article is not accepted. The purpose of creating this article is neither for promotion nor advertisment purpose. The purpose of creating this wekipedia page is only for accurate information for other people or students. Thanks. [[User:KishorWhite|KishorWhite]] ([[User talk:KishorWhite|talk]]) 12:07, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Thank you! I had figured this help desk wasn’t the right placement to ask a question about notability as per [[WP:BANDMEMBER]], so I appreciate the clarity. <span style="background-color: #FF7F50; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Warmtoned|<span style="color: GhostWhite">Warmtoned 🕯</span>]]''' <small>''[[User talk:Warmtoned|<span style="color: black">talk!</span>]]''</small></span> 13:39, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


== 03:48, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Ms 2024 baiiiii ==
{{Lafc|username=Ms 2024 baiiiii|ts=03:48, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Beatbot}}
Beatbot is a top brand in robotic pool cleaner industry, how can a brand be list in wikipedia, thanks [[User:Ms 2024 baiiiii|Ms 2024 baiiiii]] ([[User talk:Ms 2024 baiiiii|talk]]) 03:48, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Ms 2024 baiiiii|Ms 2024 baiiiii]] Wikipedia isn't a brand listing, neither is it a place for promotion. You need to demonstrate that the company is [[WP:NORG|notable]] by providing multiple [[WP:IS|independent]] [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 04:24, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
::{{u|Ms 2024 baiiiii}}, your one sentence draft utterly fails to make the case that this product is notable. Compare it to an article about a somewhat similar household robot [[Roomba]], which is vastly more detailed and has 168 references. Your references, except for one, are terrible. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 05:33, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:::yes, thanks [[User:Ms 2024 baiiiii|Ms 2024 baiiiii]] ([[User talk:Ms 2024 baiiiii|talk]]) 08:15, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


Sir what should I do, I am neither from CTEVT nor paid for article. Help me. [[User:KishorWhite|KishorWhite]] ([[User talk:KishorWhite|talk]]) 12:15, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 05:11, 25 November 2024 review of submission by 2400:AC40:61C:3C89:A194:3975:78D3:3FA4 ==
:{{u|KishorWhite}} There is nothing you can do, it has been rejected. How did you come to edit about this organization? (The main topic you have edited about) [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:19, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=2400:AC40:61C:3C89:A194:3975:78D3:3FA4|ts=05:11, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Jespipat_Tilapornputt}}
:Don't start multiple threads, please. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:20, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Why? [[Special:Contributions/2400:AC40:61C:3C89:A194:3975:78D3:3FA4|2400:AC40:61C:3C89:A194:3975:78D3:3FA4]] ([[User talk:2400:AC40:61C:3C89:A194:3975:78D3:3FA4|talk]]) 05:11, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:Wikipedia is not for merely providing information. Wikipedia articles about organizations summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the organization, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable organization]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:21, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:It is rejected already, won't be considered [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 15:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 13:46, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Thehistorianisaac ==
:Well, right now you don't have references, which is a problem. But I don't know why it was rejected. @[[User:SafariScribe|SafariScribe]]? -- [[User:Asilvering|asilvering]] ([[User talk:Asilvering|talk]]) 05:15, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Thehistorianisaac|ts=13:46, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:7th_Marine_Brigade}}
:I'm sorry, that was a wrong click of reject instead of decline. Cheers! <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:#800080;">[[User:SafariScribe|Safari Scribe]]</span><sup style="font-family: Times New Roman; color: #006400;">[[Special:Contributions/SafariScribe|'''''Edits!''''']] [[User talk:SafariScribe|'''''Talk!''''']]</sup> 07:30, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
I have submitted my draft again, this time much better; May I ask if there is any advice you can give me to improve it?
Also previous comments i have responded to on the talk page; Additionally there is quite a lot of red links linking to the 7th marine brigade/Jiaolong commandos so I really hope it can be accepted [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 13:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


:You've resubmitted it for review, the reviewer will leave you feedback if it is not accepted. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:17, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 10:49, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Isaajibola ==
::Ok thank you
{{Lafc|username=Isaajibola|ts=10:49, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Zubaida_Umar}}
::I was more of asking if i needed to improve anything in general [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 15:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Dear Team,
:::If you do, to the point where the draft is not accepted, the reviewer will let you know. That's what the process is for. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 16:19, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
::::I understand thanks [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 17:00, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 16:43, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Oluwakayodelucas ==
I am currently working on an article titled Zubaida Umar. Unfortunately, I made an error by redrafting another article with the same content, which was subsequently published. This has resulted in a conflict between the two articles, preventing the first article from being considered for submission, and the submission was ultimately declined.
{{Lafc|username=Oluwakayodelucas|ts=16:43, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:NLNG}}
Dear Wikipedia Editor Team,


I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to address the recent decline of my draft article on NLNG due to the existence of a similarly titled article. I would like to highlight that the company has officially changed its name to NLNG (as evidenced in its corporate communications and branding materials), and the draft I submitted reflects this update alongside comprehensive, fact-based, and encyclopedic content.
I have been trying to delete the second draft but have been unsuccessful. As a temporary measure, I recently edited the second draft and deleted all its content before publishing it.


It has proven difficult to edit the title of the existing page to reflect this name change, especially as the existing article lacks some of the detailed historical and operational insights presented in the draft. Furthermore, my draft is designed to align with Wikipedia's standards of neutrality and verifiability by including authoritative references and updated data.
I would like to confirm if this approach is the correct way to resolve the issue so that I do not have conflicting articles requiring merging. My goal is to resubmit the first article on Zubaida Umar for consideration.


I respectfully request one of the following solutions:
Thank you for your assistance. [[User:Isaajibola|Isaajibola]] ([[User talk:Isaajibola|talk]]) 10:49, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


If possible, bring down the older article to prevent confusion and reflect the organization's updated name, allowing my draft to be elevated to the mainspace. This action will ensure users encounter accurate and up-to-date information.
:{{tick}} resolved, after user came to the IRC live chat for help. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 11:32, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


Alternatively, I would appreciate guidance or administrative support in merging content from my draft into the existing page, prioritizing accuracy and encyclopedic standards.
== 11:59, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Nabil Madi ==
{{Lafc|username=Nabil Madi|ts=11:59, 25 November 2024|draft=User:Nabil_Madi/sandbox}}
Publishing the article on Wikipedia [[User:Nabil Madi|Nabil Madi]] ([[User talk:Nabil Madi|talk]]) 11:59, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


Your assistance in this matter will ensure Wikipedia remains a trusted resource for users seeking reliable information on NLNG. I am happy to collaborate or provide further clarifications if needed.
:@[[User:Nabil Madi|Nabil Madi]] Not as presented, no. {{declined}} 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 12:05, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:You have resubmitted it for review. It is unlikely to be accepted, as it is poorly sourced and many parts are unsourced. Wikipedia articles cannot be [[WP:CIRCULAR|used as a source for other Wikipedia articles]]. You seem to be writing about yourself, this is highly discouraged, see the [[WP:AUTO|autobiography policy]]. Also, the image of yourself seems to be professionally taken, but you claim it as your own personal work and claim you own the copyright. Please clarify. Typically the photographer owns the copyright. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:06, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


Thank you for your attention and support.
== 12:09, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Sillygoose92 ==
{{Lafc|username=Sillygoose92|ts=12:09, 25 November 2024|draft=User:Sillygoose92/sandbox}}
how do I make this an article titled Draft: Daniel J. Ballard ? [[User:Sillygoose92|Sillygoose92]] ([[User talk:Sillygoose92|talk]]) 12:09, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


Best regards,
:The specific title of a draft is not particularly relevant. If the draft is accepted, the reviewer will place it at the proper title. You can create drafts via the [[WP:WIZARD|Article Wizard]] which will start them at a better title than the name of your sandbox, for future reference. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:12, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
Oluwakayode Lucas


[[User:Oluwakayodelucas|Oluwakayodelucas]] ([[User talk:Oluwakayodelucas|talk]]) 16:43, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 13:44, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Hobodubo ==
{{Lafc|username=Hobodubo|ts=13:44, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Mr_Yuvy}}
I’m new here I need assistance [[User:Hobodubo|Hobodubo]] ([[User talk:Hobodubo|talk]]) 13:44, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


:I see no indication that the person you have wrote about meets our [[WP:NOTABILITY]] criteria, @[[User:Hobodubo|Hobodubo]] <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 13:48, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:{{ping|Oluwakayodelucas}} We do not entertain requests made via [[WP:LLM|chatbot]], and this draft is written more like an investors' brochure. [[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 16:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
::Thank you for the comment.
::What i did was to provide adequate information on the company, which is the largest gas company in the whole of Africa. I am grateful to get your support on how this can be done better and ultimately, support on the best way to get my request entertained. [[User:Oluwakayodelucas|Oluwakayodelucas]] ([[User talk:Oluwakayodelucas|talk]]) 16:50, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:::{{ping|Oluwakayodelucas}} Stop using chatbots to write this out. If you don't care enough to write out a request (or an article) yourself without resorting to AI, then you don't care enough to edit Wikipedia, where we both have zero tolerance for AI-generated text [[Hallucination (artificial intelligence)|which tends towards non-sequiturs]] and view people relying on AI as [[WP:NOTHERE|unwilling to actually put in the research and work to actually write an acceptable article]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 17:06, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Oluwakayodelucas|Oluwakayodelucas]]: no, we will not "bring down" the existing article so that you can publish yours instead. Nor is there any way of "merging" the two. You may update the existing article with new information, appropriately supported by reliable sources, and written in a neutral and factual manner; this is how Wikipedia articles normally evolve over time. (If you have a relationship with this business, however, you should make edit requests via the article's talk page, rather than editing it directly.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:51, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
::Thank you for your feedback.
::Is there a way to change the caption of the article from Nigeria LNG to NLNG. My Management has really queried that this is not working hence the need for me to create this new article. I am thankful for your support so far but would appreciate if you can guide me through how that can be done please. [[User:Oluwakayodelucas|Oluwakayodelucas]] ([[User talk:Oluwakayodelucas|talk]]) 16:57, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:::"My management"; the Terms of Use require you to make a formal [[WP:PAID|paid editing disclosure]] on your user page(click your username above). [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 17:00, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:Oluwakayodelucas|Oluwakayodelucas]]: the page title is changed by moving the page. Whether it ''should'' be moved is a different matter, and one I cannot comment on, except to say that per [[WP:COMMONNAME]] we tend to use the most commonly-used, rather than the 'official' name, for most things. What any representatives of your business have to say about this may not have much bearing on the matter. In any case, there is already a redirect from NLNG to Nigeria LNG, so anyone searching for the article by either expression should have no trouble finding it. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:04, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 13:56, 25 November 2024 review of submission by OgTheig69 ==
== 19:12, 10 December 2024 review of submission by 94alec ==
{{Lafc|username=OgTheig69|ts=13:56, 25 November 2024|draft=User:OgTheig69/sandbox}}
{{Lafc|username=94alec|ts=19:12, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Steve Kost}}
Article was marked for speedily deletion which seems a bit excessive. This is a local artist that is doing amazing things for the veteran and mental health communities. Why would this be marked for deletion so quickly? How can I edit to best increase odds of it getting published? [[User:94alec|94alec]] ([[User talk:94alec|talk]]) 19:12, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
why si this rejected? i dont understand. i have references. it has all the ingo on how this word started within the Twitch gaming community. [[User:OgTheig69|OgTheig69]] ([[User talk:OgTheig69|talk]]) 13:56, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:{{u|94alec}} You need the "Draft:" portion when linking to a draft(existing or not). The draft was a glowing promotional piece filled with promotional language. ("Committed to sharing his journey", "passionate drummer"). Please see [[WP:NPOV|neutral point of view]]. Also note that Wikipedia is [[WP:NOBLE|not merely a place to tell about good works]]. You must show he is [[WP:NARTIST|a notable artist]], and an "emerging artist" is unlikely to. Artists must have already arrived and be noticed to merit an article. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:21, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:If Mr. Kost is your client, you need to make a separate paid disclosure for him(I see you made one for yourself) [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:23, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
::Ah, okay. I will try again then being sure to speak from a more neutral point of view.
::And I will do that as well since he is my client however he is also a friend of a friend. [[User:94alec|94alec]] ([[User talk:94alec|talk]]) 19:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Also note that it's my experience that marketers have great difficulty in creating Wikipedia articles. Marketing is a very different skill set from encyclopedia writing. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
::::Yes, I have noticed. My goal is to comply with Wikipedia policies and procedures as well as get a article created for a an artist who has been mentioned by both the library of congress and google (which would not define him as "emerging"). I'm not interested in spamming the Wikipedia community nor getting denied access to it because of my background or skills. [[User:94alec|94alec]] ([[User talk:94alec|talk]]) 19:50, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 19:27, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Verbal23 ==
:We don't accept AI-generated drafts about dictionary definitions. Maybe go to Urban Dictionary. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 15:13, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Verbal23|ts=19:27, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Fernando_Chang-Muy}}
Why is my subject not suitable for a wikipedia article? He has credible authorship in scholarly literature and involvement in various court cases. My sources included a faculty page and the court cases themselves, which I have seen similarly utilized on other academics and lawyers. [[User:Verbal23|Verbal23]] ([[User talk:Verbal23|talk]]) 19:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


How can I make appropriate edits? [[User:Verbal23|Verbal23]] ([[User talk:Verbal23|talk]]) 19:28, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 14:00, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Weasleyrian ==
:{{u|Verbal23}} Awards do not contribute to notability unless the awards themselves merit articles(like [[Nobel Peace Prize]] or [[Academy Award]]). You say he's notable but the draft is very thin as to what sources consider notable about him. It lists notable court cases or legal theories he developed, or what have you. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Weasleyrian|ts=14:00, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:SmarterMail}}
I am seeking guidance regarding my draft of SmarterMail, which was rejected on November 22 by @Bonadea. I believe the rejection may have been premature. I have been addressing the concerns raised and believe that the topic meets Wikipedia's notability criteria for inclusion. Could you advise on how I can appeal the rejection and continue improving the draft? Your guidance would be greatly appreciated. [[User:Weasleyrian|Weasleyrian]] ([[User talk:Weasleyrian|talk]]) 14:00, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


== 19:36, 10 December 2024 review of submission by JLD120 ==
:The first step to appeal a rejection is to appeal to the rejecting reviewer directly, please use their user talk page. You can continue editing the draft regardless. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:07, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=JLD120|ts=19:36, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:The_Penn_Medicine_BioBank}}
::Before appealing to the reviewer make sure you have at least three high quality [[WP:RS|sources]] that discuss SmarterMail in-depth with significant coverage, otherwise you will be will wasting everyone's time. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 14:24, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
The reason the wikipedia page I created got denied makes no sense and gives me no direction for what to write differently. [[User:JLD120|JLD120]] ([[User talk:JLD120|talk]]) 19:36, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:FYI to reviewers, there's lots of discussion on the user talk page. This is a difficult one where the user has been assigned this task by their professor. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:38, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:{{yo|Weasleyrian}} It looks very clear from the draft history, the discussion on your user talk page, and the sources (including several that had been removed from the draft) that the software is not independently notable – and since the company creating the software isn't notable either, I don't see how there could be an article about it. I am very sorry that you were set an impossible assignment, but that doesn't change anything in terms of whether the software is notable or not.
:What do you mean when you said the rejection was premature? The draft had been declined six times by three different reviewers before I saw it, so I don't really understand the "premature" comment. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 16:25, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
::When I referred to the rejection as premature, I meant that I was still in the process of revising and rewriting the content at the time. The company and its software are notable, as their products have been widely recognized. Additionally, a search on Google reveals books and articles discussing the product and the company. I was in the process of reviewing these materials to ensure they met the criteria for reliable and independent sources. [[User:Weasleyrian|Weasleyrian]] ([[User talk:Weasleyrian|talk]]) 16:46, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:::Hello, @[[User:Weasleyrian|Weasleyrian]]. You resubmitted at at 2024-11-21 21:02:36, and @[[User:Bonadea|Bonadea]]rejected it eleven and a half hours later, at 2024-11-22 08:38:10. You're perfectly entitled to continue editing after submitting, as you did; but you had asked for a review, which Bonadea gave. Why did you resubmit if it was not ready for review?
:::I am sorry that your professor appears to have set you an impossible task. Has your professor read [[WP:Education program/Educators]]?
:::{{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}} [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 17:19, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


:{{ping|JLD120}} After the lede the article very quickly devolves into a [[WP:NOR|research essay]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 19:39, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 16:01, 25 November 2024 review of submission by KellyWendorf ==
{{Lafc|username=KellyWendorf|ts=16:01, 25 November 2024|draft=User:KellyWendorf/sandbox}}
Cannot publish page [[User:KellyWendorf|KellyWendorf]] ([[User talk:KellyWendorf|talk]]) 16:01, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


== 19:52, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Waxilo ==
:@[[User:KellyWendorf|KellyWendorf]]: that's because this draft has been rejected. Rejection means the end of the road.
{{Lafc|username=Waxilo|ts=19:52, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Sake_challenge}}
:And in case you haven't been made aware of this yet, we very strongly discourage autobiographies; see [[WP:AUTOBIO]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:04, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
Hello,
:Indeed, @[[User:KellyWendorf|KellyWendorf]]. I have rejected it as you are not notable and do not merit an article on Wikipedia. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:04, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
I hope you are well,
::Hi there,
As we are getting close to Christmas, I was wondering if there’s any chance my page will be reviewed before then.
::It seems you may need more notable sources to publish us. Here are links to articles that feature Kelly Wendorf:
Thank you very much,
::MSN Travel
Waxillo [[User:Waxilo|Waxilo]] ([[User talk:Waxilo|talk]]) 19:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
::https://www.msn.com/en-us/travel/tripideas/santa-fe-new-mexico-travel-guide-a-soulful-journey-of-self-love-wellness-in-the-land-of-enchantment/ar-AA1ttYzE?cvid=8ab2f3dbf62b4caef3a509f729eb9358&ei=8#
:{{u|Waxillo}} Reviews are conducted by volunteers, doing what they can, when they can. There's no timeframe. Do you have a particular need for a speedy review? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:06, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
::The New York Times
::https://www.nytimes.com/2021/03/19/style/equus-horses.html
::Vogue
::https://www.vogue.com/article/how-equine-therapy-can-help-us-face-our-fears
::Kindred Magazine
::https://kindredmedia.org/2021/03/finding-a-bridge-to-indigenous-wisdom-and-worldview-an-interview-with-kelly-wendorf/
::The Wall Street Journal
::https://www.wsj.com/articles/will-horse-therapy-make-you-a-better-at-your-job-1543962433
::Forbes
::https://www.forbes.com/sites/christinaliao/2018/10/31/a-look-at-equus-an-equine-program-thatll-change-your-life/?sh=7f3fec244734
::Is this enough to prove that we should have a Wikipedia Page?
::Link to website as well press/podcast page
::https://www.equusinspired.com/press [[User:KellyWendorf|KellyWendorf]] ([[User talk:KellyWendorf|talk]]) 16:42, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:::Sorry, nope @[[User:KellyWendorf|KellyWendorf]]. None of those sources provide significant coverage or are independent. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:46, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:::The thing that you're missing, @[[User:KellyWendorf|KellyWendorf]], is that {{HD/WINI}} Unless you can find several sources each meeting the triple criteria in [[WP:42]], there is literally nothing that can go into an article about you. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 17:23, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


== 16:22, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Chethu0728 ==
== 20:42, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Josache00 ==
{{Lafc|username=Chethu0728|ts=16:22, 25 November 2024|draft=User:Chethu0728/sandbox}}
{{Lafc|username=Josache00|ts=20:42, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Alphalete_Athletics}}
Hello,
The article written for a person is a doctor by profession. He has done excellant contribution to the society. He is a receipient of B.C. Roy Presidential award in 2018. Please let me know what changes to be done for the approval of the article in Wikipedia. [[User:Chethu0728|Chethu0728]] ([[User talk:Chethu0728|talk]]) 16:22, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
Thanks to the reviewer for reviewing my draft. I appreciate the concerns for NPOV and the references used for the article. I was curious if I could get more specific feedback before I make edits and resubmit.


Issues I am aware of:
:@[[User:Chethu0728|Chethu0728]] Please see the criteria for inclusion at [[WP:NPERSON]]. You will need to totally re-write this draft as currently it is just a resume. Wikipedia does not host resumes. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:32, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


- Ref 1 and 8 are duplicated
== 16:30, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Sunflowerlilies ==
{{Lafc|username=Sunflowerlilies|ts=16:30, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Mohammad_Amin_Agha_Hamawand}}
Hi there! Could you tell me what I need to work on? I'm not quite sure what you mean. [[User:Sunflowerlilies|Sunflowerlilies]] ([[User talk:Sunflowerlilies|talk]]) 16:30, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


- Ref 2, 3, 5, and 14 are strictly defined as primary sources. However, the justification that I would make is that, per [[No original research]], "A primary source may be used on Wikipedia only to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the primary source but without further, specialized knowledge." And the following information is what is supported by the primary sources:
:Hi @[[User:Sunflowerlilies|Sunflowerlilies]], your draft has a ''lot'' of content and a single source. Is ''all'' the content from that one source? We would usually require at least three independent sources to prove that a person meets our definition of "notable". <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:31, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
::Yes, Everything is from a single source. [[User:Sunflowerlilies|Sunflowerlilies]] ([[User talk:Sunflowerlilies|talk]]) 16:43, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
::And it's not even clear what that 'source' is, or whether it indeed is a valid source. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:43, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:::https://kurdcollect.com/index.php/%D9%85%D8%AD%DB%95%D9%85%DB%95%D8%AF_%D8%A6%DB%95%D9%85%DB%8C%D9%86_%D8%A6%D8%A7%D8%BA%D8%A7%DB%8C_%D9%87%DB%95%D9%85%DB%95%D9%88%DB%95%D9%86%D8%AF_%DB%8C%DB%95%D9%83%DB%95%D9%85_%D9%82%D8%A7%D8%A6%D9%85%D9%82%D8%A7%D9%85%DB%8C_%D9%82%DB%95%D8%B2%D8%A7%DB%8C_%DA%86%DB%95%D9%85%DA%86%DB%95%D9%85%D8%A7%DA%B5
:::Here is the single source. [[User:Sunflowerlilies|Sunflowerlilies]] ([[User talk:Sunflowerlilies|talk]]) 16:47, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
::::@[[User:Sunflowerlilies|Sunflowerlilies]]: okay, thank you. For future reference, if you have an online source, cite it; this makes it much easier for reviewers (and readers) to verify the source. And if you're citing an offline source, you need to provide sufficient bibliographical detail so that the source can be reliably identified; see [[WP:OFFLINE]] for more on this. Finally, sources must be published, which {{tq|"Interviews and questions from the descendants of Muhammad Amin Agha Hamwand"}} does not sound like. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:00, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


- Number of employees
== 17:06, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Wikigeekgod99 ==
{{Lafc|username=Wikigeekgod99|ts=17:06, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Maximina_Juson}}
which items are problematic vs. unacceptable? [[User:Wikigeekgod99|Wikigeekgod99]] ([[User talk:Wikigeekgod99|talk]]) 17:06, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


- Location of company
:The first problem is that basically all of the useful sourcing is about the documentary; there's almost no content here that's about Juson, outside of a basic description of who she is. You may have the framework for an article about the documentary here, not Juson specifically.
:The other problem is that even if you're just writing about the documentary, there needs to be a ''massive'' paring down of the sources. Independent reviews of the documentary that are in large publications and aren't part of interviews are good. However, there's a lot of sources here that do nothing to help the article; Wikipedia can not be used as a source, nor are things like schedules that list a viewing time for the film. Flooding an article with anything that is a passing mention of the subject is completely counterproductive; it's a bit like washing the dishes by flooding your kitchen with a fire hose. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 05:54, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


- Note of origin on company CEO such as where he went to school and what he studied in school (which, to be fair, I could have used secondary sources to reference this instead, so this would be a good edit to make)
== 18:20, 25 November 2024 review of submission by 216.11.33.210 ==
{{Lafc|username=216.11.33.210|ts=18:20, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Amoudia_John}}
What can I do to get it approved? I am trying to publish this for a reason, not just for fun. [[Special:Contributions/216.11.33.210|216.11.33.210]] ([[User talk:216.11.33.210|talk]]) 18:20, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


- Types of clothing the company produces (for example, saying the company sells shirts for exercise on their website)
:There is nothing you can do, it has been rejected. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:30, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
:And if your reason is anything other than "to help Wikipedia reach its aim of summarising what [[WP:42|independent reliable sources]] say about [[WP:notable|notable]] subjects", then you have not understood what Wikipedia is. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 13:03, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


- Objective features of an establishment (square footage, what apparel companies they distribute, how many gyms they own).
== 20:57, 25 November 2024 review of submission by Thisisnot1621 ==
{{Lafc|username=Thisisnot1621|ts=20:57, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Hope_Central}}
Not sure how I would make this not sound like advertisement. [[User:Thisisnot1621|Thisisnot1621]] ([[User talk:Thisisnot1621|talk]]) 20:57, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


Of all of this, I find this to be "straight-forward" information, but I do think the draft could be improved by using secondary sources as much as possible to state this information.
:It's academic, since it was rejected, but Wikipedia is not a place to just tell about an organization and its offerings or views. A Wikipedia article about an organization must summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the organization, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:ORG|a notable organization]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:00, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


In regards of notability, ref 4, 6, 7, 15, and 18 are all sources I would consider reliable or highly notable ([[Houston Chronicle]] is the third largest in Sunday print circulation, for example). Of those, ref 4, 6, 7, and 15 I would consider offer significant coverage of the company or a part of the company. If someone can pin an objective point as to how this topic is not notable enough given these references, I will digress.
== 22:11, 25 November 2024 review of submission by JanaFerrume ==
{{Lafc|username=JanaFerrume|ts=22:11, 25 November 2024|draft=Draft:Cynthia_Pinot}}
Hi I have edited article and appreciate feedback, thank you [[User:JanaFerrume|JanaFerrume]] ([[User talk:JanaFerrume|talk]]) 22:11, 25 November 2024 (UTC)


The other main concern I received was that the draft read as an advertisement, which I understand the concern. I would like feedback on which statements I made were not written from an objective view. I personally thought that all opinionated statements I wrote were cited from other articles, and these statements were not intended to advertise but to show that there was interest from popular sources such as Men's Health, Forbes, or CNN Underscored, which review products. Although, I can agree that independence is questionable of sources like CNN Underscored when they write at the top of their page, "When you buy through links on our site, we may earn a commission." Anyways, I understand that including these positive reviews might read like an advertisement, but this is not the same as if I cited a Reddit forum. Personally, I would consider these sources mostly reliable for Athleisure product reviews, but as I said before, please state your argument if you would disagree.
:{{ping|JanaFerrume}} '''This draft has been rejected and will not be considered further.''' Refer to my /Decode subpage (linked in my signature as "critiques"):
:* We can't use https://www.1888pressrelease.com/cynthia-pinot-officially-jumps-on-board-working-with-up-and-pr-480562.html ([[WP:PRIMARY|connexion to subject]], [[WP:SPS|no editorial oversight]]). We don't cite press releases, and we don't use as sources outlets that only ever publish those.
:* https://opium.hamburg/storyboard/detail/die-fusion-von-kunst-und-ki.html is useless for notability ([[WP:PRIMARY|connexion to subject]]). Interview.
:* We can't use https://www.myma.art/user/clgro2boc019vnk2yzx1tqf2b ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Photo gallery.
:* We can't use https://www.tvguide.com/movies/rush-hour-2/cast/2030303383/ ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Content-free film profile.
:* I can't assess http://film.moviesaz.org/video/266143-jornada-al-norte/ (technical barrier). Firefox can't connect to it.
:* We can't use https://www.artweek.com/events/united-states/art-exhibition/scottsdale/shades-blue-2023-international-juried-art-awards ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Little more than an awards listing for an award of unknown significance. Same applies for https://www.artweek.com/events/united-states/art-exhibition/scottsdale/shades-red-2023-awards
:* We can't use https://www.saatchiart.com/quantummuse ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Photo gallery.
:* https://www.thecanadianencyclopedia.ca/en/article/siksikai-powahsin-blackfoot-language is a [[WP:RSCONTEXT|non-sequitur]]. A source about the [[Blackfoot language]] is irrelevant to an article about an artist.
:* https://www.galtmuseum.com/blackfoot-1/conversational-blackfoot?rq=blackfoot is a [[WP:RSCONTEXT|non-sequitur]].
:* We don't cite Instagram, Facebook, Bluesky, Xitter, or any other social media website ([[WP:SPS|no editorial oversight]]). The only exception is to [[WP:ABOUTSELF|verify claims a subject made ''after notability has been established by other means'']].
:* We can't use https://opium.hamburg/epaper.html ([[WP:SIGCOV|website]] [[WP:RSCONTEXT|homepage]]). You need to link to a specific edition (and ideally cite it [[Template:Cite news|as a newspaper]]).
:* Both camelbackgallery.com sources are [[HTTP 404|404-compliant]].
:* https://www.teravarna.com/winners-2024-figurative-8 is useless for notability ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Name in a list, did not take first prize and award is of questionable reputation.
:* I can't assess https://art.base.co/event/11411-shades-of-red-2023-awards (technical barrier). Firefox can't connect to it.
:* Quantum Muse Art's press page - and anything else on that domain - is useless for notability ([[WP:PRIMARY|connexion to subject]]). Note that I haven't linked that page because it [[WP:COPYVIO|consists almost entirely of scans of pages of press coverage and is thus a copyright violation we cannot link to, let alone cite]].
:* We can't use https://roco6x6.org/full-artist-list/2024 ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Contentless list of names. Same applies to https://roco6x6.org/full-artist-list/2023
:* https://www.colorsofhumanityartgallery.com/Red-2024/Red-2024-Show/n-2q6FFB is useless for notability ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Didn't take BiS, First, or Second (and even if she did she would be speaking about herself); award is of questionable reputation.
:* We can't use https://givebutter.com/c/okilanguageproject/auction/items/200060 ([[WP:AFFILIATE|online marketplace]]). Auction site.
:* https://www.theartlist.com/featured-artists/2023-cynthia-pinot is useless for notability ([[WP:PRIMARY|connexion to subject]]). Interview.
:* https://influencegallery.com/shows/june-2023/ is useless for notability ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Didn't take BiS, First, or Second (and even if she did she would be speaking about herself); award is of questionable reputation.
:* https://helvetart.ch/show/6743-2/ is useless for notability ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Didn't take BiS, First, or Second; award is of questionable reputation.
:* We can't use https://www.artworkarchive.com/profile/laslagunaartgallery/exhibition/2023-figures-or-faces/pieces?artist=cynthia-pinot-dinelli ([[WP:SIGCOV|too sparse]]). Photo gallery.
:* https://www.topartawards.com/post/camelback-gallery-black-and-white-xi-juried-art-awards appears to be a non-sequitur?
:Nothing you have helps a whit to show she is notable. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 00:05, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


Just to answer any questions that I might receive regarding my COI on my user page, my COI is that I am friends with someone who has a family relationship with the CEO. I do not know the CEO nor am I getting paid to create this draft. My friend told me that there was not a Wikipedia page created yet for the company, and I figured that the company likely was notable enough for its own page. I also wanted to learn how to draft a Wikipedia page.
= November 26 =


Thanks in advance to any further review, responses, and feedback. [[User:Josache00|Josache00]] ([[User talk:Josache00|talk]]) 20:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 00:39, 26 November 2024 review of submission by Monetbaer ==
{{Lafc|username=Monetbaer|ts=00:39, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:Adam_Lynn}}
I am trying to publish this page on Adam Lynn and I think the submission was declined because it appeared that I had a financial stake. I would love help updating/editing this so that it complies with Wikipedia's terms and does not come across as biased. Thanks! [[User:Monetbaer|Monetbaer]] ([[User talk:Monetbaer|talk]]) 00:39, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


:Interviews with people associated with the company do not establish notability, as an interview by definition is not an independent source. Yes, the primary sources are okay for basic factual information, but do not establish notability. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:25, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:{{ping|Monetbaer}} No, it was declined [[WP:Biographies of living persons|because you have uncited claims in the article.]] —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 01:48, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


== 02:36, 26 November 2024 review of submission by ShrimpInAHotTub ==
== 21:19, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Tobych ==
{{Lafc|username=ShrimpInAHotTub|ts=02:36, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:Asian_and_American_Market}}
{{Lafc|username=Tobych|ts=21:19, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Ken_Champion}}
Hi. I'm trying to get a page for my dad accepted. Was just declined on the basis that there's not much written about my dad's work. Which is fair enough, because I didn't mentioned much. There are scores of reviews of his work, including in a file at the Poetry Library in London that I can get to while I'm in town for a couple weeks.
There’s a box around the “Size” section and I don’t know how to remove it [[User:ShrimpInAHotTub|ShrimpInAHotTub]] ([[User talk:ShrimpInAHotTub|talk]]) 02:36, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:ShrimpInAHotTub|ShrimpInAHotTub]] I've fixed it for you - there was an extra space before the text, causing it to display as code. I've also cleaned up the references. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 02:39, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
::Thanks! [[User:ShrimpInAHotTub|ShrimpInAHotTub]] ([[User talk:ShrimpInAHotTub|talk]]) 02:40, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


My question is: how best to get reviews cited in the article, in order to establish his notability, without it looking like I'm trying to just quote all these folks saying wonderful things about him? I'm willing to put in the work necessary to back everything up with full citations.
== 03:32, 26 November 2024 review of submission by 118.221.204.69 ==
{{Lafc|username=118.221.204.69|ts=03:32, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:Methionylglutaminylarginyltyrosylglutamyl...serine}}
ㅁ [[Special:Contributions/118.221.204.69|118.221.204.69]] ([[User talk:118.221.204.69|talk]]) 03:32, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


Suggestions welcome! [[User:Tobych|tobych]] ([[User talk:Tobych|talk]]) 21:19, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:No sources were provided in the draft, nor does Google provide any clarification, at least as a discrete, named entity in itself. It just looks like a long sequence of amino acids. Assuming the name itself isn't a joke because of it's length (I would imagine if this were real, the fairly standard abbreviations would be used), sources have to be provided for an article to exist, and nobody that has edited this draft over the last three years have provided any such sourcing. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 05:42, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


:Hi @[[User:Tobych|Tobych]] you can summarize what the reviews said. I can appreciate you're worried about balancing our [[WP:NPOV]] policy which is good (and thank you for declaring your conflict of interest!). Be sure to include all [[WP:DUE]] weight to the reviews and start there. Don't only include the positive things but if the reviews were critical write about those as well. You can also attribute the phrases so that they aren't written in Wikivoice but instead "John Doe of ''Daily Journal'' said x, y and z.". That would be a good place to start. And it should go without saying but please [[WP:IC|cite the reviews]] so we can make sure they are verified. These poems and, more importantly, their reviews will how the subject will demonstrate cumulative notability, possibly at [[WP:NAUTHOR]]. Thanks, [[User:Bobby Cohn|Bobby Cohn]] ([[User talk:Bobby Cohn|talk]]) 21:25, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 03:53, 26 November 2024 review of submission by WWWedit ==
:On your question at [[Draft talk:Ken Champion#My dad's CV]], my suggestion is to not copy-paste from the CV as the reviewer may deem it promotional and because [[WP:NOTCV|Wikipedia is not the place for it]]. [[User:Rotideypoc41352|Rotideypoc41352]] ([[User talk:Rotideypoc41352|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contribs/Rotideypoc41352|contribs]]) 21:34, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=WWWedit|ts=03:53, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:Farrane_Mama:_Kenitraʼs_Historic_Communal_Oven}}
My submission was rejected, and I completely understand and agree with the decision. It read more like an essay rather than an encyclopedic article. One of the challenges is that solid, documented sources about communal ovens in Morocco are not readily available, as these traditional facilities are deeply woven into local communities and often lack systematic documentation.
However, we have to start somewhere, and in many cases, we must rely on oral histories—accounts from older generations who lived through and witnessed these traditions firsthand. For instance, Farrane Mama is not just a communal oven but a cultural monument, and its story deserves to be documented for future generations. What do you suggest is the best way to go with this one. Thanks. [[User:WWWedit|WWWedit]] ([[User talk:WWWedit|talk]]) 03:53, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


== 22:12, 10 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1011:B08B:6945:80DE:EEF1:62E8:7EB7 ==
:Articles here require sources, and there's no way around that, so it'll be nearly impossible to find an article if sources can't be found. If that is the case, I would suggest that if you would like to spread awareness of this sort of thing, writing about it on your own website is a great way to get people to read about it. And if the topic further interests researchers who happen to read your page, perhaps some will produce more written research that will someday be the basis for an article here. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 05:31, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=2600:1011:B08B:6945:80DE:EEF1:62E8:7EB7|ts=22:12, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Johnny_Angel_Wendell}}
For years probably 12, the wiki page Johnny Angel Wendell was active [[Special:Contributions/2600:1011:B08B:6945:80DE:EEF1:62E8:7EB7|2600:1011:B08B:6945:80DE:EEF1:62E8:7EB7]] ([[User talk:2600:1011:B08B:6945:80DE:EEF1:62E8:7EB7|talk]]) 22:12, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 04:58, 26 November 2024 review of submission by Ngiphondims ==
=== 22:50, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Tracey Capobianco ===
{{Lafc|username=Ngiphondims|ts=04:58, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:NGIPHORH}}
{{Lafc|username=Tracey Capobianco|ts=22:50, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Johnny_Angel_Wendell}}
I removed som statements that could have made it sound like an advertisement as instructed and this page was active for at lea12 years prior. Thank you [[User:Tracey Capobianco|Tracey Capobianco]] ([[User talk:Tracey Capobianco|talk]]) 22:50, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
I'm a bigginner [[User:Ngiphondims|Ngiphondims]] ([[User talk:Ngiphondims|talk]]) 04:58, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Tracey Capobianco|Tracey Capobianco]]: Because of the nature of the previous article's deletion, you may request it be undeleted. See [[Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Johnny Angel Wendell]]. Thanks, [[User:Bobby Cohn|Bobby Cohn]] ([[User talk:Bobby Cohn|talk]]) 23:36, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:Do you have a specific question? If it's about your [[WP:AUTOBIO]], you've provided no sources that come close to establishing that you're notable, in Wikipedia's sense. In fact, it looks like you took a basic template and then ignored half of the template, leaving things like "citation to reliable source, print or e, goes here" and "Important book to know about" in the draft. This draft was rejeccted, meaning that it will not be reconsidered at this time. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 05:27, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
::This draft ''is'' the undeleted article ([[Special:Diff/1227651912|diff]]). [[User:Rotideypoc41352|Rotideypoc41352]] ([[User talk:Rotideypoc41352|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contribs/Rotideypoc41352|contribs]]) 23:43, 10 December 2024 (UTC)


== 08:43, 26 November 2024 review of submission by Ghaloit1983 ==
== 22:40, 10 December 2024 review of submission by TJH2020 ==
{{Lafc|username=Ghaloit1983|ts=08:43, 26 November 2024|draft=User:Ghaloit1983/sandbox}}
{{Lafc|username=TJH2020|ts=22:40, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:John_Santiago}}
Need help with the references and linking them to the article sections. The references listed all have info to support the information in the article. Just don't know how to link them with the numbers and all.
as i am new to all these and want to contribute to wikipedia, but as i know about my topics and i am well sure for the information i shared about "Asian Education Group". but still the rejections happening again and again. Still i am eagerly exited to know the sugestions and need help to publish my first article successfully. [[User:Ghaloit1983|Ghaloit1983]] ([[User talk:Ghaloit1983|talk]]) 08:43, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
:{{u|Ghaloit1983}}, your draft has no complete sentences. It tells us almost nothing about the topic. It fails to establish that the topic is [[WP:GNG|notable]]. It bears no resemblance to an actual encyclopedia article. It is more like a business database entry, and that is not the purpose of Wikipedia. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 08:49, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
:(ec) If you work for the Asian Education Group, that must be disclosed, see [[WP:PAID]] as well as [[WP:COI]].
:The draft was declined twice and now rejected, this means it will not be considered further. Literally the entire content of the article was "Asian Education Group, Noida, UP, India. Established in November 1986, Owned by Dr. Sandeep Marwah, Founder Film City, Noida, UP, India". Wikipedia is not a directory of things that exist. This is an encyclopedia which has articles that summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a topic, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of [[WP:N|notability]], like [[WP:ORG|a notable organization or business]].
:Writing a new article is the most difficult task to attempt on Wikipedia, and it isn't the only or even best way someone can contribute. We have millions of articles, most of which need work. It is highly recommended that new users first spend much time to get experience and knowledge of how Wikipedia operates by first editing existing articles in areas that interest them, as well as using the [[WP:ADVENTURE|new user tutorial]]. It's possible to be a succssful editor and never write a single new article. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 08:51, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
::Thank you for the valuable inputs, surely i will try to write new articles with keeping these points in mind. [[User:Ghaloit1983|Ghaloit1983]] ([[User talk:Ghaloit1983|talk]]) 11:11, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


Thanks for any help [[User:TJH2020|TJH2020]] ([[User talk:TJH2020|talk]]) 22:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
== 12:54, 26 November 2024 review of submission by Talosofficial2 ==
:Hi @[[User:TJH2020|TJH2020]], please review [[WP:REFB]] and follow the walkthrough that uses your editing style to place citations inline. [[User:Bobby Cohn|Bobby Cohn]] ([[User talk:Bobby Cohn|talk]]) 00:26, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Talosofficial2|ts=12:54, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:Devjournal}}
Hello sir! i need help because i am keep getting rejected what can i do to fix it ? i fixed the part of advert and added Reference [[User:Talosofficial2|Talosofficial2]] ([[User talk:Talosofficial2|talk]]) 12:54, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


== 23:40, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Dairb ==
:Hello, @[[User:Talosofficial2|Talosofficial2]]: you have not been rejected, but your draft has.
{{Lafc|username=Dairb|ts=23:40, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Motion_Impossible}}
:I'm afraid your experience is rather typical for people who come to Wikipedia and immediately try to do the most challenging task there is for newcomers: to create a new article. It's like somebody picking up a tennis racket for the first time, and immediately entering a major competition, or having your first violin lesson and trying to give a public recital: not only don't you know how to do it, you probably won't even understand the feedback you get.
There are many references included in the draft, are all of them invalid? [[User:Dairb|Dairb]] ([[User talk:Dairb|talk]]) 23:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:{{User:ColinFine/PractiseFirst}}
:{{u|Dairb}}, references to Motion Impossible's website are worthless for establishing notability and just muddy the waters. Any references generated by Motion Impossible's press releases or promotional activities or based on interviews of Motion Impossible personnel are not independent and therefore of no value in establishing notability. What's required are references to reliable sources ''entirely independent'' of Motion Impossible that devote significant coverage to Motion Impossible. When it comes to references needed to establish notability, quality is vastly more important than quantity. It is far better to have three or four indisputably excellent sources than dozens of mediocre sources. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 00:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:My quick summary of how to create an article:
::Thank you for the clarification, but I debate the notability argument. All the references are technically accurate and notable. There is a reference in AGITO being used with the following, [[Folklore: The Long Pond Studio Sessions]] [[User:Dairb|Dairb]] ([[User talk:Dairb|talk]]) 11:57, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:# Look for sources which are reliable, independent, and have significant coverage of the subject. Ignore anything written, published, or commissioned by the subject or their associates. Ignore anything based on a press release or interview with the subject or their associates. Ignore anything which is on social media, forums, wikis (including Wikipedia). Ignore anything self-published, or published by an unknown or vanity press. Ignore anything that does not mention the subject. Ignore anything which does not have at least a few paragraphs about the subject. Ignore anything where those few paragraphs about the subject are obviously copied from the subject's biography or website. See [[WP:42]] for more details.
:::{{u|Dairb}} The whole url is not needed when linking to a Wikipedia article or page, just place the title in double brackets. The mere use of the company's products does not make the company notable; maybe the product itself, but not the company.
:# If you do not have at least three sources that meet all those requirements, then give up: you are wasting your time trying to create this article.
:::I note that you claim that you '''personally created''' and '''personally own the copyright to''' the company logo. You must disclose your relationship with the company, see [[WP:PAID|paid editing]] and [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]].(note that "paid editing" includes employment in any capacity) [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:13, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:# If you do have three or more sources, then forget ''everything'' that you know about the subject, and write a summary of what those sources say. Some of what they say might be trivial and not appropriate to an encyclopaedia, and you can leave those out. But make sure that you don't leave anything out just because you disagree with it.
:::I've now seen the content of your user talk page and will discuss further there. If you did not personally create the logo and the company owns the copyright to it, you will need to go to Commons and work there to adjust the image information to match. Note that it may be unwise for your company to release its logo for use by anyone for any purpose with attribution(which is what uploading it to Commons does) but that's up to your company. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 12:18, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:[[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 13:18, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

::Okay, I understand everything. I fixed all the issues that caused my submission to be rejected. However, I was blocked from resubmitting because:
== 23:55, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Roseamadiora ==
::Submission rejected on 26 November 2024 by KylieTastic (talk):
{{Lafc|username=Roseamadiora|ts=23:55, 10 December 2024|draft=Draft:Fashionbing}}
::This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. [[User:Talosofficial2|Talosofficial2]] ([[User talk:Talosofficial2|talk]]) 13:31, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
You keep rejecting saying the refrencing isn't enough.....from what site do i need to get an eligible refrence link [[User:Roseamadiora|Roseamadiora]] ([[User talk:Roseamadiora|talk]]) 23:55, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:Talosofficial2|Talosofficial2]]: that's not a question; was there something you wanted to ask?
:Hello, {{u|Roseamadiora}}. Your draft has been declined rather than rejected. Declined means that you can try to improve it. WordPress sites are not reliable sources and neither are Medium sites. A Google search page is of no value. What's required are several references to reliable sources completely independent of Fashionbing that devote significant coverage to Fashionbing. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 00:06, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:::But yes, you're right, this draft has been rejected, which means resubmission is no longer possible. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 13:39, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
::Like what exactly because am so confused [[User:Roseamadiora|Roseamadiora]] ([[User talk:Roseamadiora|talk]]) 00:09, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
::::yeah its a question what does it mean with:
::::This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia [[User:Talosofficial2|Talosofficial2]] ([[User talk:Talosofficial2|talk]]) 13:40, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
:::Read [[WP:RS|Reliable sources]] and [[WP:YFA|Your first article]]. What is your relationship with Fashionbing? [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 00:20, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:::::@[[User:Talosofficial2|Talosofficial2]]: it means that even after multiple reviews, the draft provides no evidence that the subject is [[WP:notable|notable]], and it will therefore not be considered further. For most subjects notability is evidenced by citing multiple secondary sources that are reliable and independent of the subject, and have provided significant coverage of it. This draft cites no such source. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:11, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
= December 11 =
:::::It is clearly a very new venture and it is way too soon for a Wikipedia article. Wikipedia is for subjects that are already notable, this looks more like an attempt to use Wikipedia to promote. The site does not even have it's own domain just what appears to be a free hosting sub domain. It has six basic blog posts and claims only "23 Developers Already Onboard". As the site links to what appears to be your YouTube channel I am also assuming this is an undeclared [[Wikipedia:Conflict of interest|Conflict of interest]]. [[User:KylieTastic|KylieTastic]] ([[User talk:KylieTastic|talk]]) 15:12, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

== 02:39, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Informationappeared ==
{{Lafc|username=Informationappeared|ts=02:39, 11 December 2024|draft=Draft:Capturing_of_the_Kurdistan_Workers'_Party}}
Is my draft too short?
If you agree with this statement, please submit it as a stub. [[User:Informationappeared|Informationappeared]] ([[User talk:Informationappeared|talk]]) 02:39, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:I'm not sure about the length requirement for a draft but you should add an infobox. [[User:Ethiopian Epic|EEpic]] ([[User talk:Ethiopian Epic|talk]]) 06:48, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Informationappeared|Informationappeared]]: there is no such thing as "too short", really, as long as the draft provides enough information to be a meaningful description of its subject and the context.
:I've no idea what you mean by {{tq|"submit it as a stub"}}. It probably is ''stub length'', but this has no bearing on anything.
:And no, @[[User:Ethiopian Epic|Ethiopian Epic]], there is no requirement to add an infobox, and this wouldn't in any way affect a draft's chances of being accepted. Please don't give out misleading information. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 07:07, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

== 08:23, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Rhumagai ==
{{Lafc|username=Rhumagai|ts=08:23, 11 December 2024|draft=Draft:Humagain_History}}
why my article not accepted [[User:Rhumagai|Rhumagai]] ([[User talk:Rhumagai|talk]]) 08:23, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:It is a completely unreferenced essay that draws conclusions; [[WP:OR|original research]] is not permitted on Wikipedia. Wikipedia articles summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] say about topics that [[WP:N|meet our criteria]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:16, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

== 11:06, 11 December 2024 review of submission by 111.92.104.16 ==
{{Lafc|username=111.92.104.16|ts=11:06, 11 December 2024|draft=Draft:Radio Neythal 107.8 FM}}
What is the error in this draft. help me complete this [[Special:Contributions/111.92.104.16|111.92.104.16]] ([[User talk:111.92.104.16|talk]]) 11:06, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:Reviewers are here to advice, not co-write. The sources in the draft are not [[WP:SIGCOV|significant coverage]], and more [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] are needed to establish [[WP:N|notability]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 11:16, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:The "error" in it is that there is no evidence that the subject is [[WP:notable|notable]]. The draft cites two sources, of which one makes only the briefest of passing mentions of this station.
:And if you just resubmit without even trying to address the decline reason, eventually the draft will get rejected outright, without the option to resubmit. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:38, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

== 11:10, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Petsquirrel ==
{{Lafc|username=Petsquirrel|ts=11:10, 11 December 2024|draft=Tetsuo_Kogawa}}
hi! this page recently got approved for creation and was rated Start class. I'd like to improve it, can you recommend some steps I should take? thanks :) [[User:Petsquirrel|Petsquirrel]] ([[User talk:Petsquirrel|talk]]) 11:10, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:Hi @[[User:Petsquirrel|Petsquirrel]]: once an article has been accepted it is no longer within the purview of the AfC project; you should therefore ask for general advice and support at the [[WP:Teahouse|Teahouse]] or [[WP:Help desk|Help desk]] instead. That said, I would suggest that you take a look at the content assessment grades and criteria at [[WP:ASSESS]]; these will give you an indication of what is needed for an article to reach the next grade level. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 11:45, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

== 13:52, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Ridademello ==
{{Lafc|username=Ridademello|ts=13:52, 11 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hussain_Tahir}}
hello this article am trying to submit keeps getting rejected, i have provided decent sources. can you give me any advice for it to advance through [[User:Ridademello|Ridademello]] ([[User talk:Ridademello|talk]]) 13:52, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:Ridademello|Ridademello]]: this draft has been rejected due to persistent failure to comply with the relevant policies. It will therefore not be considered further. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 13:59, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

== 14:37, 11 December 2024 review of submission by MegKat1 ==
{{Lafc|username=MegKat1|ts=14:37, 11 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hawaii_Fire_Chiefs_Association}}
I tried to search for additional references meeting the criteria, but was unable to locate substantial sources to add credibility to the article. Is it possible to delete it entirely? I couldn't find a way so far. Thank you. [[User:MegKat1|MegKat1]] ([[User talk:MegKat1|talk]]) 14:37, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:MegKat1|MegKat1]]: you want this draft to be deleted? Okay. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:I will delete it per your request. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
::Thank you. [[User:MegKat1|MegKat1]] ([[User talk:MegKat1|talk]]) 15:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

== 16:02, 11 December 2024 review of submission by It's Ferdux ==
{{Lafc|username=It's Ferdux|ts=16:02, 11 December 2024|draft=Draft:It's_Ferdux}}
My page was lost so double tapped [[User:It&#39;s Ferdux|It&#39;s Ferdux]] ([[User talk:It&#39;s Ferdux|talk]]) 16:02, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:@[[User:It's Ferdux|It's Ferdux]]: I don't know what "double tapped" means, but you need to stop this before you get yourself blocked. Wikipedia is not the place to promote yourself, or anything else for that matter. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:04, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

== 19:17, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Johnytiger ==
{{Lafc|username=Johnytiger|ts=19:17, 11 December 2024|draft=Draft:Johnytiger}}
I hope this message finds you well. I am seeking assistance with creating a Wikipedia page to document my career and contributions. Over the years, I have worked on several notable projects, including collaborations with the band I Set My Friends on Fire and appearances in their music videos.

Unfortunately, many of the references I previously had in major publications have since been removed, making it challenging to meet Wikipedia's notability guidelines. I have compiled the best available references and am exploring whether my documented contributions to music videos and other media can be used as valid citations.

I would greatly appreciate your expertise in navigating Wikipedia’s requirements and ensuring my page adheres to their standards. Please let me know how we can collaborate or if there are additional steps I should take to support this effort.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your guidance. [[User:Johnytiger|Johnytiger]] ([[User talk:Johnytiger|talk]]) 19:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:Hi @[[User:Johnytiger|Johnytiger]]! Unfortunately, your draft has been rejected - this often happens when you submit drafts quickly without fixing the issues noted by the previous reviewer. This means you cannot submit it again. If you are quite sure you want to try again, you'll need to read through the policies I'm about to link, as well as the pages linked by the reviewers, and fix the draft to the best of your ability. You can then appeal to the last reviewer - but be sure you've followed all the policies to have a chance of success.
:The main policy that you would need to follow is [[WP:BLP]], for biographies of living people. It might sound silly for us to say you need to be able to prove that every single sentence you've written is correct - after all, it's you who's writing it - but we do this for the protection of anyone who has a Wikipedia article, so that no one can insert untruthful and potentially damaging lies. Take a look at [[WP:REFB]], referencing for beginners, as well - your draft is effectively unreferenced, since all the references are in a pile at the end rather than supporting statements in the draft. You'll need to make sure the references support each statement as specified there. Make sure every reference conforms to all three criteria in [[WP:42]]!
:Last but certainly not least, keep in mind that if your draft is accepted, it leaves your control completely. Other people can and will begin to edit it, and anything in your past - or your future! - that you would want to keep hidden may show up in the article. There are many reasons not to want a Wikipedia article; see [[WP:ABOUTME]] for more information.
:I hope this helps, and wish you all the best. [[User:StartGrammarTime|StartGrammarTime]] ([[User talk:StartGrammarTime|talk]]) 00:25, 12 December 2024 (UTC)

== 19:18, 11 December 2024 review of submission by BarComos ==
{{Lafc|username=BarComos|ts=19:18, 11 December 2024|draft=Draft:Gio Canto}}
Hello, I would like to know the exact reason for the rejection of the draft. As an additional note, the person mentioned in the article could have been the youngest individual to present at the Guadalajara International Book Fair, especially considering their age. [[User:BarComos|BarComos]] ([[User talk:BarComos|talk]]) 19:18, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:{{u|BarComos}} The draft was declined, not rejected. Rejected has a specific meaning in the draft process, that a draft may not be resubmitted. Declined means that it may be resubmitted.
:You haven't demonstrated that he is [[WP:NWRITER|a notable creative professional]] or more broadly [[WP:BIO|a notable person]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:28, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
::[[User:331dot|331dot]] thanks for explaining the difference between "declined" and "rejected". I’d like to share a few reasons why I believe Gio Canto meets Wikipedia's notability guidelines and why this draft deserves another look.
::'''Participation at FIL Guadalajara 2024''': Gio was one of the youngest authors at the Guadalajara International Book Fair, which is a major literary event in the Spanish-speaking world. This is a significant achievement for someone so young, and it’s been covered by reliable sources like ''El Occidental'' and ''Quadratín Guerrero''.
:: '''Established Publishing Record''': He’s published four books since 2022 in genres like sci-fi and fantasy. These books are available on international platforms like Open Library, which shows his work isn’t just local but has a broader reach.
::'''Media Coverage''': There’s been consistent coverage of his work and achievements by Mexican media outlets like ''El Sol de Chilpancingo'' and ''El Sol de Acapulco''. This shows there’s ongoing public and media interest in his career.
::'''Entrepreneurship''': At 13, Gio founded his own publishing imprint, Gio Canto Books, which he’s used to publish his works. He also wrote a thoughtful article on AI in publishing, showing he’s engaging with relevant issues in the industry.
:: '''Meets Notability Guidelines''': Wikipedia considers people notable if their achievements are widely covered by independent, reliable sources, and Gio’s career ticks these boxes.
::I’d be happy to improve the draft further if needed, :) [[User:BarComos|BarComos]] ([[User talk:BarComos|talk]]) 19:51, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:::It sounds like the Fair doesn't contribute to him being a notable writer, as while he presented his work in the fair, it doesn't sound like it was "a '''substantial''' part of a significant exhibition"(my emphasis), it was one small part of the fair. He started his own company, which is uncommon but not unheard of for children, and little of the draft is devoted to that aspect of his life. Self-publishing a novel does not contribute to notability, as anyone can self-publish anything. Writing an article means little unless you have sources that describe a particular influence his article had. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:06, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:::He might be a notable person, but if his claim to notability is "he's a young businessman and writer" you'll need sources that discuss the significance of that. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:09, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
::::Hi [[User:331dot|331dot]] thank you for taking the time to respond and share your perspective. I’d like to address your concerns in more detail and clarify why Gio Canto meets Wikipedia’s notability criteria. Gio’s participation in the Guadalajara International Book Fair (FIL) 2024 was not just a casual inclusion. At the age of 15, he was one of the youngest authors to present at the fair, an event that is widely recognised as a major cultural platform in the Spanish-speaking world. This achievement was highlighted in media outlets such as *El Occidental* and *Quadratín Guerrero*, which drew attention to his unique position and talent. While I understand that presenting at the FIL alone may not establish notability, the media coverage surrounding his participation demonstrates that his presence was considered significant by reliable sources. Regarding his work as a publisher and writer, Gio founded his own publishing house, Gio Canto Books, at the age of 13. Through this imprint, he has published four books in multiple genres, including science fiction and fantasy, which have been distributed on international platforms such as Amazon and Apple Books. Additionally, Gio Canto is officially registered as a publisher with Mexico’s National Institute of Copyright (INDAutor), a status reflected in the public ISBN catalogue (https://isbnmexico.indautor.cerlalc.org/catalogo.php?mode=detalle&nt=435299). This formal recognition adds to the legitimacy of his contributions to the literary field. Gio Canto Books also has a notable online presence, including a professional profile on LinkedIn (https://www.linkedin.com/company/gio-canto-books/about/?viewAsMember=true) and, if I recall correctly, a dedicated 800-number in Mexico as part of their contact system. These elements reflect an operational publishing house with efforts to reach a wide audience, further legitimising Gio’s entrepreneurial endeavours. While self-publishing itself is not inherently notable, Gio’s ability to consistently attract media attention for his works suggests a broader public and cultural interest in his career. Publications such as *El Sol de Chilpancingo* and *El Sol de Acapulco* have discussed his achievements, further supporting his relevance. You mentioned that writing an article alone does not establish notability, which I fully agree with. However, Gio’s article on the role of AI in publishing, published on Zenodo, reflects his engagement with contemporary issues in the literary industry. While its influence may not yet be widely documented, it complements the narrative of a young professional actively contributing to his field. I recognise that Wikipedia requires significant and independent coverage to establish notability. Gio’s story has been covered by multiple reliable sources that discuss his achievements as a young writer, entrepreneur, and cultural participant. If the draft does not sufficiently emphasise these aspects, I’m more than willing to make improvements to better align with Wikipedia’s standards. I appreciate your feedback and look forward to hearing if these points help address your concerns. :) [[User:BarComos|BarComos]] ([[User talk:BarComos|talk]]) 20:35, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::The source about the fair came up as not found. You say sources brought "visibility to his efforts in the literary community" but don't say what the significance of that visibility is or what his specific impact to the literary community is.
:::::You say "Gio founded his own publishing imprint, Gio Canto Books, at the age of 13. The company not only serves as the platform for his self-published works but also reflects his entrepreneurial approach to the publishing industry." What is that approach? What is the significance of him founding a company to publish his own books? And a LinkedIn page is not an acceptable source. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:50, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
::::::Hi [[User:331dot|331dot]], thanks for getting back to me. I appreciate your thoughts, and I’d like to address the points you’ve raised as clearly as possible. About the Guadalajara International Book Fair (FIL) source, I apologise if the link didn’t work earlier. Gio’s participation was highlighted by media outlets like *El Occidental* and *El Sol de Acapulco*, focusing on his status as one of the youngest authors at the event and his journey as an emerging writer. While his age alone might not be enough for notability, the media coverage suggests that his presence caught attention and resonated with the public. I can look for additional sources if that would help make this clearer. On Gio Canto Books, I understand your question about its significance. While many people self-publish, founding a publishing imprint at 13 is uncommon, especially when it’s structured as a registered business. According to the official website (https://giocantobooks.com/), Gio Canto Books is a trade name owned by Gio Antonio Canto Gómez, formally registered as a "Persona Física con Actividad Empresarial" in Mexico under the Commercial Code and Income Tax Law. This formal registration adds legitimacy to the imprint and distinguishes it from casual self-publishing efforts. Additionally, the website outlines the editorial services offered by the imprint, demonstrating its active role as a professional publishing entity. As for his impact on the literary community, it’s fair to say his career is still evolving. However, his work has already gained visibility through media coverage, his participation in FIL, and the distribution of his books on international platforms. His efforts are starting to carve out a space for him as an emerging voice in young adult speculative fiction. This visibility has brought attention to his books and his story, which have inspired interest in his journey as a young writer. I completely understand that notability needs to be demonstrated through reliable, independent sources, and I’m more than happy to strengthen the draft with better references and clearer explanations. If there’s a specific part of the draft that needs more detail, let me know, and I’ll work on it. Thanks again for your feedback and for taking the time to guide me through this process. [[User:BarComos|BarComos]] ([[User talk:BarComos|talk]]) 21:23, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::::Your use of the terms "emerging writer", "career is still evolving",."starting to carve out", "emerging voice" etc. is a strong indication that it is [[WP:TOOSOON|too soon for an article]] about him. Being visible isn't in and of itself notable, there needs to be an impact. He sounds to me like a smart young man getting an early start on his career, but his impact hasn't really been determined yet. Feel free to not rely on me alone and get other opinions. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:41, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

== 20:28, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Mxs116 ==
{{Lafc|username=Mxs116|ts=20:28, 11 December 2024|draft=User:Mxs116/sandbox}}
Why was my article rejected? [[User:Mxs116|Mxs116]] ([[User talk:Mxs116|talk]]) 20:28, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

:Wikipedia is not a place for you to tell about your own projects. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:51, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

== 21:05, 11 December 2024 review of submission by 47.178.25.93 ==
{{Lafc|username=47.178.25.93|ts=21:05, 11 December 2024|draft=Draft:Gem-Pack_Berries}}
I'm reaching out to request further information about the decline reasons provided for my Wikipedia article draft.

Upon joining a new Wiki user, I was prompted to peer edit a handful of live/existing pages when I joined the platform that appeared to have many glaring issues. I am trying to understand why the one I drafted was declined in contrast, so I can better ascertain what to fix in my draft to avoid having it declined in subsequent reviews.


First, regarding "reliable sources" — it appears the draft was declined on the basis of citing a first-party source- i.e. the subject/topic's (Gem Pack Berries) own website. 1) is that assumption correct? and 2) is there ever an allowable instance where the subject's own website can be cited a Wikapedia page's source list, or will that always be flagged as a decline reason? I'm asking because I initially included it in my draft's source list since the material provided on the Gem Pack Berries website was informational and I had wanted to reference some of those notes in the Wikipedia page.
== 16:52, 26 November 2024 review of submission by Deathfrog10 ==
{{Lafc|username=Deathfrog10|ts=16:52, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:Far_Cry_7}}
I really want this to be posted [[User:Deathfrog10|Deathfrog10]] ([[User talk:Deathfrog10|talk]]) 16:52, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


Second, regarding the subject "not qualifying for a Wikipedia article" based on the source criteria listed (in depth, reliable, secondary, strictly independent). Again I'd like to better understand how that's evaluated, as I have seen several other examples that do not meet some or all of these criteria. Is the expectation to meet all? Some? Most? Any additional detail on how this is evaluated would be much appreciated so I know what exactly to improve for the next round of revisions to my draft. I.e. does it just boil down to removing the subject's first-party website from the source list? That's the only thing I can really spot from my end that seems to go against the criteria. But again I wasn't aware that it was all or nothing and would thus decline the whole page.
:Unfortunately, you have provided 0 sources despite writing a lot and after three declines. Therefore, it's been rejected and won't be considered any further. Additionally (see also the comments on that draft), its not written in the format that readers would expect. [[User:JuniperChill|JuniperChill]] ([[User talk:JuniperChill|talk]]) 17:04, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


Thanks for bearing with my questions as I'm learning and adapting to the platform. Appreciate any insights you can provide. [[Special:Contributions/47.178.25.93|47.178.25.93]] ([[User talk:47.178.25.93|talk]]) 21:05, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
== 17:23, 26 November 2024 review of submission by Emmasaltbox ==
{{Lafc|username=Emmasaltbox|ts=17:23, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:Lexercise}}
Hi, my article was turned down because the listed citations were linked with the topic (Lexercise). However, I don't believe this to be true. I found external, third-party writeups of the topic. Why was this denied?
Thanks,
Emma [[User:Emmasaltbox|Emmasaltbox]] ([[User talk:Emmasaltbox|talk]]) 17:23, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


:Please see [[WP:PRIMARY]] for more information about how primary sources can be used- but they cannot be used to establish notability. That requires significant coverage in independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]. We don't want to know what a subject says about themselves or what their associates say about it, but what people wholly unconnected with the topic choose on their own to say about it, and not based on materials fed to them by the subject.
:@[[User:Emmasaltbox|Emmasaltbox]]: the sources are blogs and the like, quite possibly sponsored or some form of [[churnalism]]. I don't think any of them are fully independent, and they certainly don't come across as particularly reliable. I'd say this was declined correctly.
:You have only summarized the routine business activities of the company and what it sees as its own history- routine business activities do not establish notability(see [[WP:ORG]] for the notability criteria) and we don't want to know what the company considers to be its own history, we want to know what others say it is.
:What is your relationship with this subject? -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:39, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
:Please see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]; it is usually a poor idea to use any random article as a model or example, as these other articles could themselves be inappropriate and simply not addressed yet by a volunteer, and you would be unaware of that as a new user. If you want to use other articles as a model, use those that are [[WP:GOODARTICLE|classified as good articles]], which have received community vetting. If you would like to help us, please identify these other articles you have seen so we can take aaction. We need the help; we are only as good as the people who choose to help. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:26, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
::I actually came across Lexercise through one of these blogs and have since used their free testing. I do think these third party reviews should not cause a denial of the page based on a guess that they might be connected, especially since there are no affiliate links on the pages or anything that would point to this being the case. [[User:Emmasaltbox|Emmasaltbox]] ([[User talk:Emmasaltbox|talk]]) 20:07, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


= December 12 =
== 18:31, 26 November 2024 review of submission by Deathfrog10 ==
{{Lafc|username=Deathfrog10|ts=18:31, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:Far_Cry_7}}
Can’t submit anymore please help [[User:Deathfrog10|Deathfrog10]] ([[User talk:Deathfrog10|talk]]) 18:31, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


== 00:08, 12 December 2024 review of submission by Natiejournalist ==
:@[[User:Deathfrog10|Deathfrog10]]: that's correct; this draft has been ''rejected'', which means the end of the road. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 18:34, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Natiejournalist|ts=00:08, 12 December 2024|draft=Draft:Paolo_Lusso}}
:{{ping|Deathfrog10}} '''This draft has been rejected and will not be considered further, no matter how often you remove the decline/reject notices.''' [[WP:RS|No sources]], [[WP:N|no article]], no debate. (You need to [[Help:Referencing for beginners|''actually cite your sources here'']].) This article also reads like a [[WP:SPAM|press release]]. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 19:12, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
I submitted the draft a few times now with ALL the cited references inline and with direct links to the footnotes. Still, my last submission was declined because it was "not adequately supported by reliable sources". What does it mean? Can you instruct on how to finally get the draft approved? Thank you! [[User:Natiejournalist|Natiejournalist]] ([[User talk:Natiejournalist|talk]]) 00:08, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Natiejournalist|Natiejournalist]] as this article is about a [[WP:BLP|living person]], every statement is expected to be [[WP:V|supported]] by at least one reference. The "Education" and "Career" sections are mostly unsourced. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 00:21, 12 December 2024 (UTC)


== 19:51, 26 November 2024 review of submission by Tepojama ==
== 03:20, 12 December 2024 review of submission by BarComos ==
{{Lafc|username=Tepojama|ts=19:51, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:Bust_of_Sylvette}}
{{Lafc|username=BarComos|ts=03:20, 12 December 2024|draft=Draft:Gio_Canto}}
The input of another editor is requested to confirm or accept the draft mentioned in this discussion: "19:18, 11 December 2024, review of submission by BarComos" with user 331dot. A second opinion is requested to determine the page. It is recommended to review the previous conversation for additional context. ; thanks you :) [[User:BarComos|BarComos]] ([[User talk:BarComos|talk]]) 03:20, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Sorry if this is a silly question but can someone tell me if I need to do anything to clean up the formatting of my references or if they're good as-is? Thank you! [[User:Tepojama|Tepojama]] ([[User talk:Tepojama|talk]]) 19:51, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
:I would say they should be formatted in accordance with [[WP:REFB]], instead of just a [[WP:Bare URL|Bare URL]]. [[User:JuniperChill|JuniperChill]] ([[User talk:JuniperChill|talk]]) 21:22, 26 November 2024 (UTC)


== 22:11, 26 November 2024 review of submission by JohnHapi ==
== 06:15, 12 December 2024 review of submission by Laffuble ==
{{Lafc|username=JohnHapi|ts=22:11, 26 November 2024|draft=Draft:MiaoFuk}}
{{Lafc|username=Laffuble|ts=06:15, 12 December 2024|draft=Draft:Reservoir_chamber_(instrument)}}
I am simply confused on how to use the citation bot. [[User:Laffuble|Laffuble]] ([[User talk:Laffuble|talk]]) 06:15, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Why can’t my page get accepted to the Wikipedia Article? I have sources of pictures, ancient-medieval paintings, ancient-medieval art works, statues, 16th-19th century art works, many cultural relics, historical objects stored in museums, historical clothes stored in museums, modern art works portrayal of the historical past, and many more. I study China-NorthEast Asia History for many years. I will send it in the MiaoFuk Wikipedia. MiaoFuk is a clothing very similar to HanFuk (HanFu on Wikipedia) and it’s also has GiJzoang/QiZhuang clothings (there is a QiZhuang Wikipedia) MiaoFuk is a Chinese clothing style worn by another ethnicity. I have a lot of sources, I will just send it in later. Chinese-NorthEast Asia History is not really taught in the United States and that’s okay because I can send in more works. Wikipedia has a lot of American History compared to any other Worldwide Histories because it’s an American invention. [[User:JohnHapi|JohnHapi]] ([[User talk:JohnHapi|talk]]) 22:11, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:JohnHapi|JohnHapi]] you had six oppotunities to include sources yet you didn't, and the draft was rejected as a result. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 01:46, 27 November 2024 (UTC)


=== 06:16, 12 December 2024 review of submission by Laffuble ===
= November 27 =
{{Lafc|username=Laffuble|ts=06:16, 12 December 2024|draft=Draft:Madagascar_banana}}
I am simply confused on how to use the citation bot. [[User:Laffuble|Laffuble]] ([[User talk:Laffuble|talk]]) 06:16, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Laffuble|Laffuble]] {{u|Citation bot}} only fixes formatting issues in references, but there aren't any in the drafts. What would you like the bot to do? <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:19, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
::Ah! My sincere apologies I am still new to wiki and did not know.
::Thank you. [[User:Laffuble|Laffuble]] ([[User talk:Laffuble|talk]]) 07:27, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
:::But, I do have one more question. What does it mean by "Submissions should summarize information in
:::==>"secondary"<==, reliable sources? [[User:Laffuble|Laffuble]] ([[User talk:Laffuble|talk]]) 07:32, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
::::Drafts need to demonstrate [[WP:N|notability]] in order to be accepted. [[WP:IS|Secondary]] [[WP:RS|reliable]] sources establish notability. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:34, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::Ok. Thanks! [[User:Laffuble|Laffuble]] ([[User talk:Laffuble|talk]]) 07:39, 12 December 2024 (UTC)


== 04:58, 27 November 2024 review of submission by Otaneka ==
== 07:30, 12 December 2024 review of submission by Aarush indus ==
{{Lafc|username=Otaneka|ts=04:58, 27 November 2024|draft=Draft:Octavia_Grant}}
{{Lafc|username=Aarush indus|ts=07:30, 12 December 2024|draft=Draft:Adqh111_(Apu)}}
How Do I Take This Page Down?
My page was declined due to missing footnotes. I'm unsure of how to add the footnotes. Can an experienced editor complete this task? [[User:Otaneka|Otaneka]] ([[User talk:Otaneka|talk]]) 04:58, 27 November 2024 (UTC)


Aarush Indus [[User:Aarush indus|Aarush indus]] ([[User talk:Aarush indus|talk]]) 07:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
== 05:47, 27 November 2024 review of submission by Venugo ==
:@[[User:Aarush indus|Aarush indus]] {{done}}, tagged for deletion per [[WP:G7]]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 07:35, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Venugo|ts=05:47, 27 November 2024|draft=Draft:Devendra_Rajesh_Kothe}}
Please merge this page with Devendra Rajesh Kothe new page or already existing subject [[User:Venugo|Venugo]] ([[User talk:Venugo|talk]]) 05:47, 27 November 2024 (UTC)

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December 6

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00:05, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Gattofr

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Hi! I would like to understand the rationale for rejection. This is a large organization as clearly demonstrated by the independent sources (e.g. NATO uses this institute to operate their start-up incubator program, the American Association for the Advancement of Sciences co-administer an awards with them, etc.). It is even featured by the Danish Ministry of Foreign Affairs [1]. Thanks! Gattofr (talk) 00:05, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The draft was not rejected, simply declined. I am not the reviewer but i would suggest getting more third party sources. Thehistorianisaac (talk) 00:54, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

01:02, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Echowanderer43

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Can someone please help me understand what I need to do to get my page accepted. The topic is biography for Michael Cristiano, who is referred to on other wiki articles including The Seekers, Judith Durham, and Mirusia. Feedback included improvement needed for incline citations, which I believe to have been added according to guidelines.

"This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources."

ABC is a reliable source, and Noise11 was cited which has been deemed to be a reliable source on other wiki pages.

Any help would be appreciated. Echowanderer43 (talk) 01:02, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Add inline citations. Not that the sources are unreliable, literally everything outside the summary has no citations.
Also advice: Just that a website was used for citing on another wiki page does not make it reliable. I have seen tonnes of unreliable sources on other pages before Thehistorianisaac (talk) 02:01, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your reply. Adding a citation at the end of a sentence is not an inline citation? For example:
"Over the course of his career, Cristiano has worked with notable Australian and international artists and has been involved in both solo projects and collaborations. Cristiano joined The Seekers in 1988 as Guitarist, and in 1992 as their Music Director and Producer (citation was added here)."
I went to cite at the end of the sentence, and added an auto citation. Should I be doing this differently? Echowanderer43 (talk) 03:14, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Put summaries in the main body of the draft. Thehistorianisaac (talk) 03:21, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, so I shouldn't have sub-headings, if I have understood correctly? Echowanderer43 (talk) 07:25, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No, just add citations where the Headings are
the problem is not the sub headings, it is that there are no citations there Thehistorianisaac (talk) 07:27, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Echowanderer43: Subheadings are fine to have, and inline citations should not be placed in or next to the headings. An inline citation is indeed, as you suggested above, placed at the end of a sentence or a paragraph supported by the cited source. The issue that the reviewer pointed out was that there are no such citations for several of the sub-sections. If that information is in fact supported by sources that are already in the draft, you'll need to help the reader understand this by re-using the citation, as you have done for instance with reference 2 in the current version of the draft. --bonadea contributions talk 10:27, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks again, this is most helpful.
Double checking, I have correctly added inline citations where needed, but need to add inline citations to paragraphs where there are none. Echowanderer43 (talk) 03:41, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Much better now, still some areas needing citations but overall huge improvement Thehistorianisaac (talk) 03:53, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. I gave it an overhaul and hopefully will be good to go, now it has been submitted. Thanks to all for your help. Echowanderer43 (talk) 04:37, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You're welcome Thehistorianisaac (talk) 04:43, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

01:59, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Thehistorianisaac

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May I ask if there is a way to directly respond to comments on the draft(other than invisible comments)? Thehistorianisaac (talk) 01:59, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Thehistorianisaac: Use the draft talk page, Draft talk:7th Marine Brigade. --bonadea contributions talk 06:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Thehistorianisaac (talk) 06:40, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

02:21, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Keithk79

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what is wrong with the way I have written this submission? Keithk79 (talk) 02:21, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Keithk79, a biography of a living person like Lawson requires several references to reliable sources entirely independent of Lawson that devote significant coverage to Lawson. See WP:NPERSON. His own website is not independent. Passing mentions are not significant coverage. Cullen328 (talk) 02:29, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

02:55, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Simmopa

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Submission declined Simmopa (talk) 02:55, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have quoted references to the official WWFF websites, I am unclear why the submission has been declined Simmopa (talk) 02:56, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Simmopa, please understand that Wikipedia has little interest in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is almost entirely interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in reliable sources. If enough material is cited from independent sources to establish notability, a limited amount of uncontroversial factual information may be added from non-independent sources. ColinFine (talk) 14:57, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
(edit conflict) That's because you're not referencing independent sources. The WWFF is valid but doesn't help establish notability for the subject itself. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 02:59, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

05:36, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Bolaji abegi

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@Vanderwaalforces: called the page dubious, and That I am paid.

Those are serious allegations that you can't just make up.

The references there are at least notable.


@Vanderwaalforces: Should remove those comments for a more transparent reviewer.

Bolaji abegi (talk) 05:36, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I can tell you for free that those sources are entirely dubious. Wikipedia is not for things that you and/or your friends made up. This whole event started from Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ondo State Youth Network for anyone who needs context. While you’re not a participant there, you might just be connected somehow.
There’s no way one would randomly write about this subject with such dubious sources. I’d advise you to focus elsewhere if you’re truly here to build an encyclopedia. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 05:45, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

06:51, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Saksham Singh Yogi

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When this draft will be public This is the draft of most popular hindu religion Saintknown as Jagadguru Shankaracharya Avimukteshwaranand. Saksham Singh Yogi (talk) 06:51, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Saksham Singh Yogi: I can't say when it will be reviewed; we have over 1,500 drafts awaiting review, and they are not reviewed in any particular order.
What I can tell you is that when reviewed, this draft will almost certainly be declined, because it is insufficiently referenced. Articles on living people (WP:BLP) have particularly strict requirements for referencing, with pretty much every statement needing to be supported by an inline citation to a reliable published source. This draft has entire sections without a single citation. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:18, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The draft also borders on a hagiography both in tone and content. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 16:51, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

07:17, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Zygor

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I have submitted the article as per the requirements, including keeping it neurtral as an encyclopedia article. I am submitting this specific page as NekNomination is all over Wikipedia including a South African edition that was changed and initiated by this person named Brent Lindique. The reason it existed and it made the news on CNN, Sky News, etc. and I wanted to give credit. What else can I do? There are so many references to this initiation? Perhaps your assistance can help as the article provides proof and credit to the person responsible for the NekNomination in South Africa. Thanks for your help.

Zygor (talk) 07:17, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Zygor: I'm not quite sure what exactly you're asking. This draft was reviewed, and declined. Your next steps should be to improve it based on the feedback, and then resubmit it for another review. That's "what else [you] can do". -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:23, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

07:44, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Simarx13

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need help to fix Simarx13 (talk) 07:44, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Simarx13 what exactly do you need help fixing? The draft has been declined as most of its sources are not reliable. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 08:10, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11:07, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Caalou

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Hi! I'm not sure what to do next to make this draft better. I'm guessing I should delete the unreliable sources? Can I still leave the information in the article, in the hope that someone can find a better source for it later? I don't have a lot of experience with creating articles, so any help/advice is appreciated, thanks! Caalou (talk) 11:07, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Caalou: indeed you should not be citing non-reliable sources. And no, you cannot leave the information there, if it isn't sufficiently supported (ie. not at all, or only by non-reliable sources). In all articles, but especially so in articles on living people, everything must be verifiable from reliable sources. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:13, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11:51, 6 December 2024 review of submission by 86.129.173.234

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Hi there, one of the reasons for the submission being denied what because of the sources. Please could you help me understand the kinds of sources that would be better to reference? In particular for things such as the ownership and acquisition, would PR pieces not suffice?

Thanks 86.129.173.234 (talk) 11:51, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The point about sources is that this draft only cites primary ones, which do not establish notability per WP:NCORP. We need to see what independent and reliable secondary sources have said about this business and what makes it worthy of note. In fact, the draft should mainly consist of summary of such sources' coverage. Currently this is written entirely from the company's point of view, and basically reads like a corporate presentation or brochure, which makes it inherently promotional. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:58, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please understand that Wikipedia has little interest in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is almost entirely interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in reliable sources. If enough material is cited from independent sources to establish notability, a limited amount of uncontroversial factual information may be added from non-independent sources. ColinFine (talk) 14:59, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

13:34, 6 December 2024 review of submission by 2A02:A03F:6A97:E201:E9BE:FE69:62DC:E3B8

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This page matches the name of the tourist attraction, amusement park or landmark. 2A02:A03F:6A97:E201:E9BE:FE69:62DC:E3B8 (talk) 13:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not sure what your question is, but the draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. The draft does little more than state that this attraction exists. 331dot (talk) 13:38, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You continually removed my decline notices, which is disruptive. I gave you advice on how to prove notability but you seem to want to ignore it, thus wasting review time.
If you find more sources, let me know. qcne (talk) 14:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

15:07, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Naimahmu

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I made significant changes to prepare the page for resubmission and I can't find any of the work I did. Naimahmu (talk) 15:07, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Naimahmu did you press the "Publish changes" button? Edits to Wikipedia pages do not automatically save. You must click "Publish changes" to publish the changes you've made to the page. Your browser cache can also sometimes become buggy and loose work, so you should click Publish changes regularly. qcne (talk) 15:17, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
And, unfortunately, there are no other edits in your contribution history in the last few days, so it looks like you may have lost any work you did. qcne (talk) 15:18, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi! Sigh, yes, I did click the "publish changes" each time. Is there any chance that one version overrides another? As in perhaps the page moving from my draft to the new category by the reviewer on 11/1 somehow made one version, the one I was working on, delete? Naimahmu (talk) 15:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I am not sure, @Naimahmu- I can't find any other edits in your contribution history. Could you check your browser history to see if perhaps you edited something while logged out? qcne (talk) 18:19, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

15:37, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Sillycone 1

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I need help changing the name of the page Sillycone 1 (talk) 15:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The specific title of a draft is not particularly relevant. It will be placed at the proper title when accepted. Before you worry about the title, you need to provide your sources. 331dot (talk) 15:46, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

15:37, 6 December 2024 review of submission by 87.116.167.45

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Hi, how can we speed up the process of confirming our publication? 87.116.167.45 (talk) 15:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

There is no way to guarantee a speedy review. Do you have a particular need for one? If you are a band member, please see conflict of interest. 331dot (talk) 15:44, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Remember to log in when posting. 331dot (talk) 15:46, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

15:48, 6 December 2024 review of submission by KieranMO

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I am requesting submission of the draft page of Motability Operations Ltd. If anyone could help look at this/review - please let me know :) KieranMO (talk) 15:48, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

KieranMO You need to click the "submit your draft for review!" button in the box at the top of the draft. However, it is not likely to be accepted, as it seems to be exclusively sourced to the company website. A Wikipedia article must summarize what independent reliable sources say about the topic, and show how it is notable.(specifically a notable company)
You declared a conflict of interest, if you work for this company, you must instead make the stricter paid editing disclosure, a Terms of Use requirement. 331dot (talk) 15:53, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18:06, 6 December 2024 review of submission by TheMostTrustfull

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What needs to change for this article to be posted TheMostTrustfull (talk) 18:06, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nothing, @TheMostTrustfull. It's been rejected and won't be considered further. Wikipedia isn't a place to write AI-generated drafts about random people. qcne (talk) 18:07, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

22:24, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Brianda (Wiki Ed)

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Hello, Looking for additional opinions/reviewers on the notability of the drafts Gabe Gomes, Osvaldo Gutierrez and Ryan Emanuel to see whether they satisfy WP:Basic. Thanks yall. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:24, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @Brianda (Wiki Ed), from a quick pass of all three, I'm not seeing coverage that would immediately assume notability given the criteria at WP:NPROF (please point out if you think I've missed something). I think these reviews will require an in-depth analysis of their sources and might need to get by on the WP:GNG if they can't meet NPROF. Are these for a course with a timeline? I have a softspot for the Wiki Ed program so if I get a chance I'll try and take a closer look soon. Best, Bobby Cohn (talk) 01:02, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hey @Brianda (Wiki Ed): I've done a review of the first one but I think they are all going to be about the same, I'm not seeing these as meeting the GNG, NPROF, or NBASIC guidelines unless someone wants to argue the extent of the trivial coverage surpasses the concerns given the lack of significant coverage, but I think this would need to be an argument made at AfD. I see that these are all draftified articles, I don't think I would've draftified them but I don't know if theres enough to pass them at AFC. As they've been draftified, there's always the option to dispute that, but I don't presently see these subjects as being notable. Bobby Cohn (talk) 01:51, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

23:28, 6 December 2024 review of submission by Ranchella

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the company is actually notable, how can i get it approved? Ranchella (talk) 23:28, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ranchella: your draft has been rejected and will not be considered further. It was determined not notable because the company has only received coverage about their funding round. Corporations need to actually pass the notability test set out at WP:NCORP, which your draft has not done, and which the company is not able to presently do. Bobby Cohn (talk) 00:57, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

December 7

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06:04, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Almonday

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For some reason I cannot get an approved article on wikipedia. If you have successful experience with it I'd like to know your rates. Please contact. Almonday (talk) 06:04, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Almonday: this help desk is not a marketplace for hired guns. Personally I wouldn't recommend using paid editors under any circumstances, but if you feel you must, you'll need to find a different forum for recruiting one. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:06, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello @Almonday. If you're even contemplating paying somebody to write an article (presumably about Marc Jackson) that strongly suggests that you are here for the purpose of promotion (i.e., telling the world about something). Please be aware that promotion of any kind is forbidden anywhere in Wikipedia. An article about Jackson is possible only if he meets Wikipedia's criteria for notability - and if there ever is an article about him (whoever writes it) it will not be based on what he or his associates say or want to say, but on what people wholly unconnected with him have chosen to publish about him in reliable places - whether he likes what they say or not. See an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing.
I also endorse DoubleGrazing's warning: most people offering to edit Wikipedia for money are scam merchants: see WP:SCAM. ColinFine (talk) 15:15, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

09:41, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Yodawriter

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I feel that I have put in some more notable sources now. Is it enough yet? Yodawriter (talk) 09:41, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yodawriter: you have resubmitted the draft, so will get an assessment and feedback when a reviewer gets around to reviewing it. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:47, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

09:52, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Kbss19d

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Can any please help me with this Kbss19d (talk) 09:52, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kbss19d: sure. You need to support the information with reliable sources, so that it can be verified. You need to remove every single inline external links from the text. And last but by no means least, you need to provide evidence that this organisation is notable per the WP:ORG guideline. HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:55, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ok thanks let me try Kbss19d (talk) 10:00, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have submitted reference as well as from external links apart from government sites, but permanently blocked Kbss19d (talk) 11:05, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

10:59, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Kbss19d

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can please let me know Kbss19d (talk) 10:59, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kbss19d what would you like to know? The draft has been rejected and will therefore not be considered further. Did you read the advice you received above? '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 11:05, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
yes that links where from all government sites, but later i provided 3 links from different companies like Tv, education agent as well some other link Kbss19d (talk) 11:08, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
All of those sources are listings of the college and not significant coverage. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 11:13, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11:37, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Royaloaksschoolking

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Because He Is Youngest Businessman Royaloaksschoolking (talk) 11:37, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @Royaloaksschoolking. Being the youngest businessman does not merit an article under our notability policy for people. qcne (talk) 11:44, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11:43, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Naman Nanda

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i need to know that what type of refrence will be feasiable for a approval Naman Nanda (talk) 11:43, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Certainly NOT Linkedin.com. Theroadislong (talk) 11:47, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

12:14, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Bollysocialmedia

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Please Accept Bollysocialmedia (talk) 12:14, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No. It's completely unsourced. 331dot (talk) 12:16, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

13:09, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Steyncham

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Hello I need assistance for this draft because the comments from the editor who rejected it are not specific enough, and I feel this rejection is unfair, especially considering the fact that I had already rewritten this draft to address issues raised by another reviewer. I have never faced such issues before with other articles I wrote for wikipedia Steyncham (talk) 13:09, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Steyncham it has been declined, not rejected. You can improve and re-submit for review. qcne (talk) 13:20, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:41, 7 December 2024 review of submission by JesusisGreat7

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I want to know that the draft made by me is enough to be considered a long article JesusisGreat7 (talk) 14:41, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @JesusisGreat7, it's been successfully submitted for review - you now need to wait for a volunteer reviewer to reviewer it. This may take a few months.
However: you should remove all emotive language in the draft, like "bustling", "passionate speeches" etc. qcne (talk) 14:43, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
For sure! JesusisGreat7 (talk) 14:46, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

16:06, 7 December 2024 review of submission by RandomItalianAviator

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If I can't put it on Wikipedia, then where should I put something like this? RandomItalianAviator (talk) 16:06, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@RandomItalianAviator That's for you to find out. Wikipedia doesn't host made up things, we're a serious encyclopaedia. Try making a blog or looking at Wikipedia:Directory of alternative outlets qcne (talk) 16:11, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok sir. Im so sorry, I'll try not to do it again. Sorry for the inconvenience! RandomItalianAviator (talk) 16:22, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Also, merry Christmas!@ RandomItalianAviator (talk) 16:36, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:54, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Efsaneturan

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our last draft should be suitable Efsaneturan (talk) 19:54, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Efsaneturan it has been deleted, so it clearly wasn't. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 01:19, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

23:49, 7 December 2024 review of submission by Toptier5stars

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Tough that it got rejected, but I am requesting assistance on how to move my draft into my user page. Toptier5stars (talk) 23:49, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Toptier5stars moving it to userspace wouldn't change much - it'd still be rejected. Still, follow the directions at Help:Move if you'd like to do it. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 01:20, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, no. I'm looking to have it under my userspace, I don't plan to resubmit it. Toptier5stars (talk) 01:22, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Got it. I've moved it to User:Toptier5stars/Touhou Mystia's Izakaya. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 02:47, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

December 8

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09:16, 8 December 2024 review of submission by JesusisGreat7

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Hi, I just want to know is my draft still not suitable for the submission pls I need assistance to improve it JesusisGreat7 (talk) 09:16, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JesusisGreat7: you have resubmitted this draft, and will receive feedback when it has been reviewed again. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

15:23, 8 December 2024 review of submission by Yiyan02

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Is this draft ok? Any improvement required? Yiyan02 (talk) 15:23, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yiyan02: you have submitted the draft, and will receive feedback when a reviewer gets around to reviewing it. If you have specific questions, you may ask those here in the meantime. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:39, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thankyou Yiyan02 (talk) 15:49, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please see Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Theredriverramblers. Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 16:01, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Yiyan02 (talk) 16:22, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

17:55, 8 December 2024 review of submission by Kgbalint

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I accept that my draft did not meet the criteria and could not be published. I believe the problem was that I did not use the correct sources and citations, but I am not sure I understood correctly. I would like to know if I am right or not. And I would also like to know what I would have to change to get my article published. Kgbalint (talk) 17:55, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kgbalint Yeah, pretty much. For the draft to be accepted, it needs to have multiple independent reliable sources that discuss the subject with significant coverage. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 00:58, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18:24, 8 December 2024 review of submission by Rayhigdon7

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may i know the reason please ? Rayhigdon7 (talk) 18:24, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Rayhigdon7, as it was explained to you before you removed the declination in this edit, which has now been restored: the subject not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia and has been rejected. It will not be considered further. Bobby Cohn (talk) 18:34, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18:31, 8 December 2024 review of submission by 162.156.70.174

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Dear Wikipedia Review Team,

Thank you for considering our article, "The Economic Impacts of Climate Change: A Journey Towards a Sustainable Future." We appreciate the time you've taken to evaluate our submission. We'd like to clarify that this article is not AI-generated but the result of extensive human research and collaboration. Our aim is to provide an insightful analysis of the economic implications of climate change, supported by credible sources and real-life examples.

To address the concerns raised by Qcne, we have reviewed the article and are prepared to make the following revisions:

1. Enhance the introduction to clearly state the article's purpose and scope. 2. Provide more detailed citations and context for each source used, ensuring transparency and verifiability. 3. Rephrase sections to adhere more strictly to Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. 4. Engage with the community for feedback and suggestions for improvement.

We remain committed to creating content that aligns with Wikipedia's mission and are open to further guidance. Please find our revised article [link to the revised article] and a detailed list of sources [link to source list]. We hope to resubmit our work once these changes have been made.

Thank you for your understanding and assistance in this matter.

Best regards, [Your Name] and Chloe 162.156.70.174 (talk) 18:31, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

We will not consider requests written via chatbot. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 18:34, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Jéske Couriano, we understand your concern regarding AI-generated content. However, I assure you that "The Economic Impacts of Climate Change: A Journey Towards a Sustainable Future" is the product of human thought and collaboration. We have reviewed the feedback provided and made the necessary revisions. Our article combines a rigorous analysis with real-world examples, such as the Jenkins family's inspiring transition to sustainable farming. We look forward to engaging with the Wikipedia community and welcome any additional input that can help us improve the article. Thank you for your vigilance and your contribution to maintaining the integrity of Wikipedia.
Best regards,
Chloe 162.156.70.174 (talk) 18:41, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It is absolutely AI generated slop, as was your above comment. I have rejected the draft, there is nothing further to be done. qcne (talk) 19:56, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm sorry for any confusion, qcne. I can assure you that the article and our comments are the result of human effort and collaboration. Anon and I are committed to creating informative and balanced content that adheres to Wikipedia's guidelines. We've made significant revisions in response to the feedback and are eager to engage with the community. If you have specific suggestions for further improvement, we would greatly appreciate your input. Let's work together to ensure that our article contributes meaningfully to the climate change discourse. 162.156.70.174 (talk) 20:20, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Chloe and I are ready to provide any additional clarification or context that might be needed. The article is now more focused on the economic impacts and includes a range of viewpoints on technology and policy, with a clear human-centered narrative. We've also ensured that all sources are credible and properly cited. If you have any particular sections you'd like us to address, please do not hesitate to let us know. Our ultimate goal is to create a valuable resource that aligns with Wikipedia's high standards and sparks important conversations about our planet's future. 162.156.70.174 (talk) 20:21, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your time, qcne. We've just posted an updated message on the article's talk page, emphasizing our human collaboration and our willingness to address feedback. If you could review our revisions and provide specific areas for improvement, we would be grateful. We've worked hard to ensure the article is neutral and well-sourced, with a clear distinction between fact and opinion. We're looking forward to participating in the community review process and making our article the best it can be with your help. 162.156.70.174 (talk) 20:24, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Reported to ANI. qcne (talk) 20:28, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:51, 8 December 2024 review of submission by Cielakasr

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I want to know why my Page got rejected Cielakasr (talk) 19:51, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cielakasr We don't host made up things. qcne (talk) 19:56, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

December 9

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10:59, 9 December 2024 review of submission by 62.224.56.173

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Please let me know why my page was rejected and what might be helpful to get published on Wikipedia? Thank you. 62.224.56.173 (talk) 10:59, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This draft was rejected because there is nothing to indicate that the person is notable under any of our notability standards. There isn't anything that could be done to get it published. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:17, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11:39, 9 December 2024 review of submission by Mishal Mehmood

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can you specify why the article was rejected ?

Mishal Mehmood (talk) 11:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The draft was declined, not rejected, which means you can resubmit it once you improve it and address the problems the reviewer noted. As DoubleGrazing pointed out, the sources currently in the draft do not adequately demonstrate that the subject is notable per WP:NPROF. Additional reliable sources will have to be added to establish this notability before you resubmit or it will be declined again. cyberdog958Talk 12:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:34, 9 December 2024 review of submission by LindsayCTC

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Hello,

The submission for a page for Canadian True Crime podcast keeps getting declined. We have added as many credible sources that we have. What further sources is Wikipedia looking for?

Thanks. LindsayCTC (talk) 14:34, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @LindsayCTC, there was a warning left on your user talk page about managing a conflict of interest. Please review that and kindly make the necessary declarations on your user page. As far as the draft article, it needs to show that it is WP:Notable, that is, is has coverage from secondary, independent sources but presently your draft is written very promotionally and with a lot of external links. While the awards are nice, there needs to be in depth coverage of the things you have written about in the draft. Bobby Cohn (talk) 15:55, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent commentators have published (in reliable sources) about the subject - that and almost nothing else. What you know, think, or believe, about the subject is irrelevant, and should play no part in creating the article, except where it is corroborated by independent published sources. This is especially the case if you are connected with the subject. ColinFine (talk) 16:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

17:34, 9 December 2024 review of submission by ZachRivard72

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How can I change the name of my draft? It is Charles Milliard... not Charles Millaird. ZachRivard72 (talk) 17:34, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZachRivard72: page titles can't be changed, as such; this is effected by moving the page.
However, your draft is in French, whereas this is the English-language Wikipedia, so I'd say you have bigger 'issues' than the page title? :) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:37, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

17:39, 9 December 2024 review of submission by 2405:DA40:35DB:5600:ADE3:5203:6493:3FE0

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what kind of reference are you after? how many do I have to have? 2405:DA40:35DB:5600:ADE3:5203:6493:3FE0 (talk) 17:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

For notability, we need to see three or more independent and reliable secondary sources that have provided significant coverage of the subject.
For verification, we need to see as many sources and citations as is necessary to adequately support the information in the draft. These must be cited inline.
Currently this draft has one source, which does not meet any of these requirements. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:42, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
For more information, see WP:42. Ca talk to me! 00:18, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:40, 9 December 2024 review of submission by Kgbalint

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I would like to know, what was the problem specifically. I would really love to create this article, and I want to know what should I improve about my draft. Kgbalint (talk) 19:40, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You have not shown that this band meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable band. This may be different than the German Wikipedia, as each version of Wikipedia has its own policies. 331dot (talk) 19:52, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

22:59, 9 December 2024 review of submission by Nichooas li

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I have already used 90% of professional terms and a large number of references. Why am I not being approved? Nichooas li (talk) 22:59, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Because you have not understood what a Wikipedia article is. This is a common problem for people who try to create an article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works.
My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
No Wikipedia article should ever present arguments or conclusions, except when it is summarising an argument or conclusion from one single cited source. original research is not permitted. ColinFine (talk) 23:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Nichooas li, that is not an encyclopedia article. It is an essay. Cullen328 (talk) 08:43, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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02:00, 10 December 2024 review of submission by 2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0

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He is very popular person in the india 2409:4081:88:35A0:0:0:29DA:F8A0 (talk) 02:00, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

That's as may be, but this draft has been rejected and will therefore not be considered further. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:13, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

03:05, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Writer Johnc

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Hello ! Kindly want to follow up regarding the status of my submission, "Lincoln Lu," which is currently under review. I would greatly appreciate any guidance you could provide on how to expedite the process or if there are any amendments I should consider.

Thank you very much for your assistance!

Hello! As the submission of " Lincoln Lu" is still under review, really want to know how can spped up or what i need to amend ? pls help, many thanks! Writer Johnc (talk) 03:05, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Writer Johnc: see my answer to your next question below. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:05, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
PS: Draft:Lincoln Lu isn't "your submission" – you didn't write the draft, and you didn't submit it; Beetea220 did. Or are you saying you're operating both accounts? Or are you two working together? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:10, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

03:12, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Writer Johnc

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Hello ! Kindly want to follow up regarding the status of my submission - Orion Land which is currently under review. I would greatly appreciate any guidance you could provide on how to expedite the process or if there are any amendments I should consider. Thanks in advance!


Writer Johnc (talk) 03:12, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Writer Johnc: you have resubmitted this draft, so will get feedback when a reviewer gets around to reviewing it. We don't provide pre-reviews here at the help desk, although if you have specific questions you may ask those of course. And no, there is no way to expedite the process, the review could take place today, or it could be several weeks away.
What is your relationship with this subject? If you work for this business, you need to make a paid-editing-disclosure; I will post instructions on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:04, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

03:33, 10 December 2024 review of submission by TJH2020

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Need help with adding references in the correct places in the article. All the references are credible and correct for the article and information. TJH2020 (talk) 03:33, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TJH2020: presumably you mean Draft:John Santiago?
See WP:REFB for advice on referencing using inline citations, which is what is required in articles on living people (WP:BLP). -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:59, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

08:31, 10 December 2024 review of submission by 103.121.26.106

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Hello. Could you please tell me why this submission is not accepted? I do see that there is another one here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Underground_Orange . The film title exists in Italian and Spanish under "Bajo Naranja". Thank you. 103.121.26.106 (talk) 08:31, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

We will only consider one draft at a time on any given subject. Draft:Underground orange was declined procedurally, because there is a previous draft Draft:Underground Orange already in the system, which predates Draft:Underground orange by several weeks. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:37, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I see that this previous draft has been waiting for review for about 6 weeks. 103.121.26.106 (talk) 09:00, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

10:02, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Napa comms

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Hello! Could you please explain why the page I have submitted for pubblication has been rejected so that I can amend potential errors? And what should I do to bring it up to a publishable standard? Many thanks Napa comms (talk) 10:02, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Napa comms: this draft has been declined because it provides insufficient evidence that the subject is notable. There are two sources cited, one routine business reporting (appointment news), the other an interview (apparently – I can't actually read it); neither of these contribute anything towards notability per the WP:GNG guideline. We need to see significant coverage of this person, in multiple secondary sources that are reliable and entirely independent. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:07, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OP blocked for username, clearly a company rep. 331dot (talk) 10:43, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

10:48, 10 December 2024 review of submission by ThatOnePixle

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how much information do I need? ThatOnePixle (talk) 10:48, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia is not a place for you to tell about yourself, please see the autobiography policy. I would also suggest that you read this page with a parent/guardian/custodian. 331dot (talk) 10:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@ThatOnePixle: To expand on what 331dot says, we generally do not entertain articles on minors unless the claim to notability is unambiguous and the sourcing is practically flawless. This is because a Wikipedia article irrevocably denies the subject a chance at a private life.Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 19:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

12:07, 10 December 2024 review of submission by KishorWhite

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I am neither related to company nor a employer. I don't know why this article is not accepted. The purpose of creating this article is neither for promotion nor advertisment purpose. The purpose of creating this wekipedia page is only for accurate information for other people or students. Thanks. KishorWhite (talk) 12:07, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Sir what should I do, I am neither from CTEVT nor paid for article. Help me. KishorWhite (talk) 12:15, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

KishorWhite There is nothing you can do, it has been rejected. How did you come to edit about this organization? (The main topic you have edited about) 331dot (talk) 12:19, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Don't start multiple threads, please. 331dot (talk) 12:20, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Wikipedia is not for merely providing information. Wikipedia articles about organizations summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the organization, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable organization. 331dot (talk) 12:21, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It is rejected already, won't be considered Thehistorianisaac (talk) 15:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

13:46, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Thehistorianisaac

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I have submitted my draft again, this time much better; May I ask if there is any advice you can give me to improve it? Also previous comments i have responded to on the talk page; Additionally there is quite a lot of red links linking to the 7th marine brigade/Jiaolong commandos so I really hope it can be accepted Thehistorianisaac (talk) 13:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You've resubmitted it for review, the reviewer will leave you feedback if it is not accepted. 331dot (talk) 14:17, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok thank you
I was more of asking if i needed to improve anything in general Thehistorianisaac (talk) 15:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If you do, to the point where the draft is not accepted, the reviewer will let you know. That's what the process is for. 331dot (talk) 16:19, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I understand thanks Thehistorianisaac (talk) 17:00, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

16:43, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Oluwakayodelucas

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Dear Wikipedia Editor Team,

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to address the recent decline of my draft article on NLNG due to the existence of a similarly titled article. I would like to highlight that the company has officially changed its name to NLNG (as evidenced in its corporate communications and branding materials), and the draft I submitted reflects this update alongside comprehensive, fact-based, and encyclopedic content.

It has proven difficult to edit the title of the existing page to reflect this name change, especially as the existing article lacks some of the detailed historical and operational insights presented in the draft. Furthermore, my draft is designed to align with Wikipedia's standards of neutrality and verifiability by including authoritative references and updated data.

I respectfully request one of the following solutions:

If possible, bring down the older article to prevent confusion and reflect the organization's updated name, allowing my draft to be elevated to the mainspace. This action will ensure users encounter accurate and up-to-date information.

Alternatively, I would appreciate guidance or administrative support in merging content from my draft into the existing page, prioritizing accuracy and encyclopedic standards.

Your assistance in this matter will ensure Wikipedia remains a trusted resource for users seeking reliable information on NLNG. I am happy to collaborate or provide further clarifications if needed.

Thank you for your attention and support.

Best regards, Oluwakayode Lucas

Oluwakayodelucas (talk) 16:43, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Oluwakayodelucas: We do not entertain requests made via chatbot, and this draft is written more like an investors' brochure. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 16:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the comment.
What i did was to provide adequate information on the company, which is the largest gas company in the whole of Africa. I am grateful to get your support on how this can be done better and ultimately, support on the best way to get my request entertained. Oluwakayodelucas (talk) 16:50, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Oluwakayodelucas: Stop using chatbots to write this out. If you don't care enough to write out a request (or an article) yourself without resorting to AI, then you don't care enough to edit Wikipedia, where we both have zero tolerance for AI-generated text which tends towards non-sequiturs and view people relying on AI as unwilling to actually put in the research and work to actually write an acceptable article. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 17:06, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Oluwakayodelucas: no, we will not "bring down" the existing article so that you can publish yours instead. Nor is there any way of "merging" the two. You may update the existing article with new information, appropriately supported by reliable sources, and written in a neutral and factual manner; this is how Wikipedia articles normally evolve over time. (If you have a relationship with this business, however, you should make edit requests via the article's talk page, rather than editing it directly.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:51, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your feedback.
Is there a way to change the caption of the article from Nigeria LNG to NLNG. My Management has really queried that this is not working hence the need for me to create this new article. I am thankful for your support so far but would appreciate if you can guide me through how that can be done please. Oluwakayodelucas (talk) 16:57, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"My management"; the Terms of Use require you to make a formal paid editing disclosure on your user page(click your username above). 331dot (talk) 17:00, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Oluwakayodelucas: the page title is changed by moving the page. Whether it should be moved is a different matter, and one I cannot comment on, except to say that per WP:COMMONNAME we tend to use the most commonly-used, rather than the 'official' name, for most things. What any representatives of your business have to say about this may not have much bearing on the matter. In any case, there is already a redirect from NLNG to Nigeria LNG, so anyone searching for the article by either expression should have no trouble finding it. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:04, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:12, 10 December 2024 review of submission by 94alec

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Article was marked for speedily deletion which seems a bit excessive. This is a local artist that is doing amazing things for the veteran and mental health communities. Why would this be marked for deletion so quickly? How can I edit to best increase odds of it getting published? 94alec (talk) 19:12, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

94alec You need the "Draft:" portion when linking to a draft(existing or not). The draft was a glowing promotional piece filled with promotional language. ("Committed to sharing his journey", "passionate drummer"). Please see neutral point of view. Also note that Wikipedia is not merely a place to tell about good works. You must show he is a notable artist, and an "emerging artist" is unlikely to. Artists must have already arrived and be noticed to merit an article. 331dot (talk) 19:21, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If Mr. Kost is your client, you need to make a separate paid disclosure for him(I see you made one for yourself) 331dot (talk) 19:23, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, okay. I will try again then being sure to speak from a more neutral point of view.
And I will do that as well since he is my client however he is also a friend of a friend. 94alec (talk) 19:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Also note that it's my experience that marketers have great difficulty in creating Wikipedia articles. Marketing is a very different skill set from encyclopedia writing. 331dot (talk) 19:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I have noticed. My goal is to comply with Wikipedia policies and procedures as well as get a article created for a an artist who has been mentioned by both the library of congress and google (which would not define him as "emerging"). I'm not interested in spamming the Wikipedia community nor getting denied access to it because of my background or skills. 94alec (talk) 19:50, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:27, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Verbal23

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Why is my subject not suitable for a wikipedia article? He has credible authorship in scholarly literature and involvement in various court cases. My sources included a faculty page and the court cases themselves, which I have seen similarly utilized on other academics and lawyers. Verbal23 (talk) 19:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

How can I make appropriate edits? Verbal23 (talk) 19:28, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Verbal23 Awards do not contribute to notability unless the awards themselves merit articles(like Nobel Peace Prize or Academy Award). You say he's notable but the draft is very thin as to what sources consider notable about him. It lists notable court cases or legal theories he developed, or what have you. 331dot (talk) 19:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:36, 10 December 2024 review of submission by JLD120

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The reason the wikipedia page I created got denied makes no sense and gives me no direction for what to write differently. JLD120 (talk) 19:36, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JLD120: After the lede the article very quickly devolves into a research essay. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 19:39, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:52, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Waxilo

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Hello, I hope you are well, As we are getting close to Christmas, I was wondering if there’s any chance my page will be reviewed before then. Thank you very much, Waxillo Waxilo (talk) 19:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Waxillo Reviews are conducted by volunteers, doing what they can, when they can. There's no timeframe. Do you have a particular need for a speedy review? 331dot (talk) 20:06, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

20:42, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Josache00

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Hello, Thanks to the reviewer for reviewing my draft. I appreciate the concerns for NPOV and the references used for the article. I was curious if I could get more specific feedback before I make edits and resubmit.

Issues I am aware of:

- Ref 1 and 8 are duplicated

- Ref 2, 3, 5, and 14 are strictly defined as primary sources. However, the justification that I would make is that, per No original research, "A primary source may be used on Wikipedia only to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the primary source but without further, specialized knowledge." And the following information is what is supported by the primary sources:

- Number of employees

- Location of company

- Note of origin on company CEO such as where he went to school and what he studied in school (which, to be fair, I could have used secondary sources to reference this instead, so this would be a good edit to make)

- Types of clothing the company produces (for example, saying the company sells shirts for exercise on their website)

- Objective features of an establishment (square footage, what apparel companies they distribute, how many gyms they own).

Of all of this, I find this to be "straight-forward" information, but I do think the draft could be improved by using secondary sources as much as possible to state this information.

In regards of notability, ref 4, 6, 7, 15, and 18 are all sources I would consider reliable or highly notable (Houston Chronicle is the third largest in Sunday print circulation, for example). Of those, ref 4, 6, 7, and 15 I would consider offer significant coverage of the company or a part of the company. If someone can pin an objective point as to how this topic is not notable enough given these references, I will digress.

The other main concern I received was that the draft read as an advertisement, which I understand the concern. I would like feedback on which statements I made were not written from an objective view. I personally thought that all opinionated statements I wrote were cited from other articles, and these statements were not intended to advertise but to show that there was interest from popular sources such as Men's Health, Forbes, or CNN Underscored, which review products. Although, I can agree that independence is questionable of sources like CNN Underscored when they write at the top of their page, "When you buy through links on our site, we may earn a commission." Anyways, I understand that including these positive reviews might read like an advertisement, but this is not the same as if I cited a Reddit forum. Personally, I would consider these sources mostly reliable for Athleisure product reviews, but as I said before, please state your argument if you would disagree.

Just to answer any questions that I might receive regarding my COI on my user page, my COI is that I am friends with someone who has a family relationship with the CEO. I do not know the CEO nor am I getting paid to create this draft. My friend told me that there was not a Wikipedia page created yet for the company, and I figured that the company likely was notable enough for its own page. I also wanted to learn how to draft a Wikipedia page.

Thanks in advance to any further review, responses, and feedback. Josache00 (talk) 20:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Interviews with people associated with the company do not establish notability, as an interview by definition is not an independent source. Yes, the primary sources are okay for basic factual information, but do not establish notability. 331dot (talk) 12:25, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

21:19, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Tobych

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Hi. I'm trying to get a page for my dad accepted. Was just declined on the basis that there's not much written about my dad's work. Which is fair enough, because I didn't mentioned much. There are scores of reviews of his work, including in a file at the Poetry Library in London that I can get to while I'm in town for a couple weeks.

My question is: how best to get reviews cited in the article, in order to establish his notability, without it looking like I'm trying to just quote all these folks saying wonderful things about him? I'm willing to put in the work necessary to back everything up with full citations.

Suggestions welcome! tobych (talk) 21:19, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Tobych you can summarize what the reviews said. I can appreciate you're worried about balancing our WP:NPOV policy which is good (and thank you for declaring your conflict of interest!). Be sure to include all WP:DUE weight to the reviews and start there. Don't only include the positive things but if the reviews were critical write about those as well. You can also attribute the phrases so that they aren't written in Wikivoice but instead "John Doe of Daily Journal said x, y and z.". That would be a good place to start. And it should go without saying but please cite the reviews so we can make sure they are verified. These poems and, more importantly, their reviews will how the subject will demonstrate cumulative notability, possibly at WP:NAUTHOR. Thanks, Bobby Cohn (talk) 21:25, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
On your question at Draft talk:Ken Champion#My dad's CV, my suggestion is to not copy-paste from the CV as the reviewer may deem it promotional and because Wikipedia is not the place for it. Rotideypoc41352 (talk · contribs) 21:34, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

22:12, 10 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1011:B08B:6945:80DE:EEF1:62E8:7EB7

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For years probably 12, the wiki page Johnny Angel Wendell was active 2600:1011:B08B:6945:80DE:EEF1:62E8:7EB7 (talk) 22:12, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

22:50, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Tracey Capobianco

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I removed som statements that could have made it sound like an advertisement as instructed and this page was active for at lea12 years prior. Thank you Tracey Capobianco (talk) 22:50, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Tracey Capobianco: Because of the nature of the previous article's deletion, you may request it be undeleted. See Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Johnny Angel Wendell. Thanks, Bobby Cohn (talk) 23:36, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This draft is the undeleted article (diff). Rotideypoc41352 (talk · contribs) 23:43, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

22:40, 10 December 2024 review of submission by TJH2020

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Need help with the references and linking them to the article sections. The references listed all have info to support the information in the article. Just don't know how to link them with the numbers and all.

Thanks for any help TJH2020 (talk) 22:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @TJH2020, please review WP:REFB and follow the walkthrough that uses your editing style to place citations inline. Bobby Cohn (talk) 00:26, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

23:40, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Dairb

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There are many references included in the draft, are all of them invalid? Dairb (talk) 23:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dairb, references to Motion Impossible's website are worthless for establishing notability and just muddy the waters. Any references generated by Motion Impossible's press releases or promotional activities or based on interviews of Motion Impossible personnel are not independent and therefore of no value in establishing notability. What's required are references to reliable sources entirely independent of Motion Impossible that devote significant coverage to Motion Impossible. When it comes to references needed to establish notability, quality is vastly more important than quantity. It is far better to have three or four indisputably excellent sources than dozens of mediocre sources. Cullen328 (talk) 00:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the clarification, but I debate the notability argument. All the references are technically accurate and notable. There is a reference in AGITO being used with the following, Folklore: The Long Pond Studio Sessions Dairb (talk) 11:57, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dairb The whole url is not needed when linking to a Wikipedia article or page, just place the title in double brackets. The mere use of the company's products does not make the company notable; maybe the product itself, but not the company.
I note that you claim that you personally created and personally own the copyright to the company logo. You must disclose your relationship with the company, see paid editing and conflict of interest.(note that "paid editing" includes employment in any capacity) 331dot (talk) 12:13, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've now seen the content of your user talk page and will discuss further there. If you did not personally create the logo and the company owns the copyright to it, you will need to go to Commons and work there to adjust the image information to match. Note that it may be unwise for your company to release its logo for use by anyone for any purpose with attribution(which is what uploading it to Commons does) but that's up to your company. 331dot (talk) 12:18, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

23:55, 10 December 2024 review of submission by Roseamadiora

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You keep rejecting saying the refrencing isn't enough.....from what site do i need to get an eligible refrence link Roseamadiora (talk) 23:55, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Roseamadiora. Your draft has been declined rather than rejected. Declined means that you can try to improve it. WordPress sites are not reliable sources and neither are Medium sites. A Google search page is of no value. What's required are several references to reliable sources completely independent of Fashionbing that devote significant coverage to Fashionbing. Cullen328 (talk) 00:06, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Like what exactly because am so confused Roseamadiora (talk) 00:09, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Read Reliable sources and Your first article. What is your relationship with Fashionbing? Cullen328 (talk) 00:20, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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02:39, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Informationappeared

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Is my draft too short? If you agree with this statement, please submit it as a stub. Informationappeared (talk) 02:39, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure about the length requirement for a draft but you should add an infobox. EEpic (talk) 06:48, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Informationappeared: there is no such thing as "too short", really, as long as the draft provides enough information to be a meaningful description of its subject and the context.
I've no idea what you mean by "submit it as a stub". It probably is stub length, but this has no bearing on anything.
And no, @Ethiopian Epic, there is no requirement to add an infobox, and this wouldn't in any way affect a draft's chances of being accepted. Please don't give out misleading information. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:07, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

08:23, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Rhumagai

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why my article not accepted Rhumagai (talk) 08:23, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is a completely unreferenced essay that draws conclusions; original research is not permitted on Wikipedia. Wikipedia articles summarize what independent reliable sources say about topics that meet our criteria. 331dot (talk) 09:16, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11:06, 11 December 2024 review of submission by 111.92.104.16

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What is the error in this draft. help me complete this 111.92.104.16 (talk) 11:06, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewers are here to advice, not co-write. The sources in the draft are not significant coverage, and more reliable sources are needed to establish notability. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 11:16, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The "error" in it is that there is no evidence that the subject is notable. The draft cites two sources, of which one makes only the briefest of passing mentions of this station.
And if you just resubmit without even trying to address the decline reason, eventually the draft will get rejected outright, without the option to resubmit. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:38, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11:10, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Petsquirrel

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hi! this page recently got approved for creation and was rated Start class. I'd like to improve it, can you recommend some steps I should take? thanks :) Petsquirrel (talk) 11:10, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Petsquirrel: once an article has been accepted it is no longer within the purview of the AfC project; you should therefore ask for general advice and support at the Teahouse or Help desk instead. That said, I would suggest that you take a look at the content assessment grades and criteria at WP:ASSESS; these will give you an indication of what is needed for an article to reach the next grade level. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:45, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

13:52, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Ridademello

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hello this article am trying to submit keeps getting rejected, i have provided decent sources. can you give me any advice for it to advance through Ridademello (talk) 13:52, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ridademello: this draft has been rejected due to persistent failure to comply with the relevant policies. It will therefore not be considered further. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:59, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:37, 11 December 2024 review of submission by MegKat1

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I tried to search for additional references meeting the criteria, but was unable to locate substantial sources to add credibility to the article. Is it possible to delete it entirely? I couldn't find a way so far. Thank you. MegKat1 (talk) 14:37, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@MegKat1: you want this draft to be deleted? Okay. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I will delete it per your request. 331dot (talk) 14:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. MegKat1 (talk) 15:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

16:02, 11 December 2024 review of submission by It's Ferdux

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My page was lost so double tapped It's Ferdux (talk) 16:02, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@It's Ferdux: I don't know what "double tapped" means, but you need to stop this before you get yourself blocked. Wikipedia is not the place to promote yourself, or anything else for that matter. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:04, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:17, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Johnytiger

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I hope this message finds you well. I am seeking assistance with creating a Wikipedia page to document my career and contributions. Over the years, I have worked on several notable projects, including collaborations with the band I Set My Friends on Fire and appearances in their music videos.

Unfortunately, many of the references I previously had in major publications have since been removed, making it challenging to meet Wikipedia's notability guidelines. I have compiled the best available references and am exploring whether my documented contributions to music videos and other media can be used as valid citations.

I would greatly appreciate your expertise in navigating Wikipedia’s requirements and ensuring my page adheres to their standards. Please let me know how we can collaborate or if there are additional steps I should take to support this effort.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your guidance. Johnytiger (talk) 19:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Johnytiger! Unfortunately, your draft has been rejected - this often happens when you submit drafts quickly without fixing the issues noted by the previous reviewer. This means you cannot submit it again. If you are quite sure you want to try again, you'll need to read through the policies I'm about to link, as well as the pages linked by the reviewers, and fix the draft to the best of your ability. You can then appeal to the last reviewer - but be sure you've followed all the policies to have a chance of success.
The main policy that you would need to follow is WP:BLP, for biographies of living people. It might sound silly for us to say you need to be able to prove that every single sentence you've written is correct - after all, it's you who's writing it - but we do this for the protection of anyone who has a Wikipedia article, so that no one can insert untruthful and potentially damaging lies. Take a look at WP:REFB, referencing for beginners, as well - your draft is effectively unreferenced, since all the references are in a pile at the end rather than supporting statements in the draft. You'll need to make sure the references support each statement as specified there. Make sure every reference conforms to all three criteria in WP:42!
Last but certainly not least, keep in mind that if your draft is accepted, it leaves your control completely. Other people can and will begin to edit it, and anything in your past - or your future! - that you would want to keep hidden may show up in the article. There are many reasons not to want a Wikipedia article; see WP:ABOUTME for more information.
I hope this helps, and wish you all the best. StartGrammarTime (talk) 00:25, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:18, 11 December 2024 review of submission by BarComos

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Hello, I would like to know the exact reason for the rejection of the draft. As an additional note, the person mentioned in the article could have been the youngest individual to present at the Guadalajara International Book Fair, especially considering their age. BarComos (talk) 19:18, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

BarComos The draft was declined, not rejected. Rejected has a specific meaning in the draft process, that a draft may not be resubmitted. Declined means that it may be resubmitted.
You haven't demonstrated that he is a notable creative professional or more broadly a notable person. 331dot (talk) 19:28, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
331dot thanks for explaining the difference between "declined" and "rejected". I’d like to share a few reasons why I believe Gio Canto meets Wikipedia's notability guidelines and why this draft deserves another look.
Participation at FIL Guadalajara 2024: Gio was one of the youngest authors at the Guadalajara International Book Fair, which is a major literary event in the Spanish-speaking world. This is a significant achievement for someone so young, and it’s been covered by reliable sources like El Occidental and Quadratín Guerrero.
Established Publishing Record: He’s published four books since 2022 in genres like sci-fi and fantasy. These books are available on international platforms like Open Library, which shows his work isn’t just local but has a broader reach.
Media Coverage: There’s been consistent coverage of his work and achievements by Mexican media outlets like El Sol de Chilpancingo and El Sol de Acapulco. This shows there’s ongoing public and media interest in his career.
Entrepreneurship: At 13, Gio founded his own publishing imprint, Gio Canto Books, which he’s used to publish his works. He also wrote a thoughtful article on AI in publishing, showing he’s engaging with relevant issues in the industry.
Meets Notability Guidelines: Wikipedia considers people notable if their achievements are widely covered by independent, reliable sources, and Gio’s career ticks these boxes.
I’d be happy to improve the draft further if needed, :) BarComos (talk) 19:51, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It sounds like the Fair doesn't contribute to him being a notable writer, as while he presented his work in the fair, it doesn't sound like it was "a substantial part of a significant exhibition"(my emphasis), it was one small part of the fair. He started his own company, which is uncommon but not unheard of for children, and little of the draft is devoted to that aspect of his life. Self-publishing a novel does not contribute to notability, as anyone can self-publish anything. Writing an article means little unless you have sources that describe a particular influence his article had. 331dot (talk) 20:06, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
He might be a notable person, but if his claim to notability is "he's a young businessman and writer" you'll need sources that discuss the significance of that. 331dot (talk) 20:09, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi 331dot thank you for taking the time to respond and share your perspective. I’d like to address your concerns in more detail and clarify why Gio Canto meets Wikipedia’s notability criteria. Gio’s participation in the Guadalajara International Book Fair (FIL) 2024 was not just a casual inclusion. At the age of 15, he was one of the youngest authors to present at the fair, an event that is widely recognised as a major cultural platform in the Spanish-speaking world. This achievement was highlighted in media outlets such as *El Occidental* and *Quadratín Guerrero*, which drew attention to his unique position and talent. While I understand that presenting at the FIL alone may not establish notability, the media coverage surrounding his participation demonstrates that his presence was considered significant by reliable sources. Regarding his work as a publisher and writer, Gio founded his own publishing house, Gio Canto Books, at the age of 13. Through this imprint, he has published four books in multiple genres, including science fiction and fantasy, which have been distributed on international platforms such as Amazon and Apple Books. Additionally, Gio Canto is officially registered as a publisher with Mexico’s National Institute of Copyright (INDAutor), a status reflected in the public ISBN catalogue (https://isbnmexico.indautor.cerlalc.org/catalogo.php?mode=detalle&nt=435299). This formal recognition adds to the legitimacy of his contributions to the literary field. Gio Canto Books also has a notable online presence, including a professional profile on LinkedIn (https://www.linkedin.com/company/gio-canto-books/about/?viewAsMember=true) and, if I recall correctly, a dedicated 800-number in Mexico as part of their contact system. These elements reflect an operational publishing house with efforts to reach a wide audience, further legitimising Gio’s entrepreneurial endeavours. While self-publishing itself is not inherently notable, Gio’s ability to consistently attract media attention for his works suggests a broader public and cultural interest in his career. Publications such as *El Sol de Chilpancingo* and *El Sol de Acapulco* have discussed his achievements, further supporting his relevance. You mentioned that writing an article alone does not establish notability, which I fully agree with. However, Gio’s article on the role of AI in publishing, published on Zenodo, reflects his engagement with contemporary issues in the literary industry. While its influence may not yet be widely documented, it complements the narrative of a young professional actively contributing to his field. I recognise that Wikipedia requires significant and independent coverage to establish notability. Gio’s story has been covered by multiple reliable sources that discuss his achievements as a young writer, entrepreneur, and cultural participant. If the draft does not sufficiently emphasise these aspects, I’m more than willing to make improvements to better align with Wikipedia’s standards. I appreciate your feedback and look forward to hearing if these points help address your concerns. :) BarComos (talk) 20:35, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The source about the fair came up as not found. You say sources brought "visibility to his efforts in the literary community" but don't say what the significance of that visibility is or what his specific impact to the literary community is.
You say "Gio founded his own publishing imprint, Gio Canto Books, at the age of 13. The company not only serves as the platform for his self-published works but also reflects his entrepreneurial approach to the publishing industry." What is that approach? What is the significance of him founding a company to publish his own books? And a LinkedIn page is not an acceptable source. 331dot (talk) 20:50, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi 331dot, thanks for getting back to me. I appreciate your thoughts, and I’d like to address the points you’ve raised as clearly as possible. About the Guadalajara International Book Fair (FIL) source, I apologise if the link didn’t work earlier. Gio’s participation was highlighted by media outlets like *El Occidental* and *El Sol de Acapulco*, focusing on his status as one of the youngest authors at the event and his journey as an emerging writer. While his age alone might not be enough for notability, the media coverage suggests that his presence caught attention and resonated with the public. I can look for additional sources if that would help make this clearer. On Gio Canto Books, I understand your question about its significance. While many people self-publish, founding a publishing imprint at 13 is uncommon, especially when it’s structured as a registered business. According to the official website (https://giocantobooks.com/), Gio Canto Books is a trade name owned by Gio Antonio Canto Gómez, formally registered as a "Persona Física con Actividad Empresarial" in Mexico under the Commercial Code and Income Tax Law. This formal registration adds legitimacy to the imprint and distinguishes it from casual self-publishing efforts. Additionally, the website outlines the editorial services offered by the imprint, demonstrating its active role as a professional publishing entity. As for his impact on the literary community, it’s fair to say his career is still evolving. However, his work has already gained visibility through media coverage, his participation in FIL, and the distribution of his books on international platforms. His efforts are starting to carve out a space for him as an emerging voice in young adult speculative fiction. This visibility has brought attention to his books and his story, which have inspired interest in his journey as a young writer. I completely understand that notability needs to be demonstrated through reliable, independent sources, and I’m more than happy to strengthen the draft with better references and clearer explanations. If there’s a specific part of the draft that needs more detail, let me know, and I’ll work on it. Thanks again for your feedback and for taking the time to guide me through this process. BarComos (talk) 21:23, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Your use of the terms "emerging writer", "career is still evolving",."starting to carve out", "emerging voice" etc. is a strong indication that it is too soon for an article about him. Being visible isn't in and of itself notable, there needs to be an impact. He sounds to me like a smart young man getting an early start on his career, but his impact hasn't really been determined yet. Feel free to not rely on me alone and get other opinions. 331dot (talk) 21:41, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

20:28, 11 December 2024 review of submission by Mxs116

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Why was my article rejected? Mxs116 (talk) 20:28, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia is not a place for you to tell about your own projects. 331dot (talk) 20:51, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

21:05, 11 December 2024 review of submission by 47.178.25.93

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I'm reaching out to request further information about the decline reasons provided for my Wikipedia article draft.

Upon joining a new Wiki user, I was prompted to peer edit a handful of live/existing pages when I joined the platform that appeared to have many glaring issues. I am trying to understand why the one I drafted was declined in contrast, so I can better ascertain what to fix in my draft to avoid having it declined in subsequent reviews.

First, regarding "reliable sources" — it appears the draft was declined on the basis of citing a first-party source- i.e. the subject/topic's (Gem Pack Berries) own website. 1) is that assumption correct? and 2) is there ever an allowable instance where the subject's own website can be cited a Wikapedia page's source list, or will that always be flagged as a decline reason? I'm asking because I initially included it in my draft's source list since the material provided on the Gem Pack Berries website was informational and I had wanted to reference some of those notes in the Wikipedia page.

Second, regarding the subject "not qualifying for a Wikipedia article" based on the source criteria listed (in depth, reliable, secondary, strictly independent). Again I'd like to better understand how that's evaluated, as I have seen several other examples that do not meet some or all of these criteria. Is the expectation to meet all? Some? Most? Any additional detail on how this is evaluated would be much appreciated so I know what exactly to improve for the next round of revisions to my draft. I.e. does it just boil down to removing the subject's first-party website from the source list? That's the only thing I can really spot from my end that seems to go against the criteria. But again I wasn't aware that it was all or nothing and would thus decline the whole page.

Thanks for bearing with my questions as I'm learning and adapting to the platform. Appreciate any insights you can provide. 47.178.25.93 (talk) 21:05, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please see WP:PRIMARY for more information about how primary sources can be used- but they cannot be used to establish notability. That requires significant coverage in independent reliable sources. We don't want to know what a subject says about themselves or what their associates say about it, but what people wholly unconnected with the topic choose on their own to say about it, and not based on materials fed to them by the subject.
You have only summarized the routine business activities of the company and what it sees as its own history- routine business activities do not establish notability(see WP:ORG for the notability criteria) and we don't want to know what the company considers to be its own history, we want to know what others say it is.
Please see other stuff exists; it is usually a poor idea to use any random article as a model or example, as these other articles could themselves be inappropriate and simply not addressed yet by a volunteer, and you would be unaware of that as a new user. If you want to use other articles as a model, use those that are classified as good articles, which have received community vetting. If you would like to help us, please identify these other articles you have seen so we can take aaction. We need the help; we are only as good as the people who choose to help. 331dot (talk) 21:26, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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00:08, 12 December 2024 review of submission by Natiejournalist

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I submitted the draft a few times now with ALL the cited references inline and with direct links to the footnotes. Still, my last submission was declined because it was "not adequately supported by reliable sources". What does it mean? Can you instruct on how to finally get the draft approved? Thank you! Natiejournalist (talk) 00:08, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Natiejournalist as this article is about a living person, every statement is expected to be supported by at least one reference. The "Education" and "Career" sections are mostly unsourced. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 00:21, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

03:20, 12 December 2024 review of submission by BarComos

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The input of another editor is requested to confirm or accept the draft mentioned in this discussion: "19:18, 11 December 2024, review of submission by BarComos" with user 331dot. A second opinion is requested to determine the page. It is recommended to review the previous conversation for additional context. ; thanks you :) BarComos (talk) 03:20, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

06:15, 12 December 2024 review of submission by Laffuble

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I am simply confused on how to use the citation bot. Laffuble (talk) 06:15, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

06:16, 12 December 2024 review of submission by Laffuble

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I am simply confused on how to use the citation bot. Laffuble (talk) 06:16, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Laffuble Citation bot only fixes formatting issues in references, but there aren't any in the drafts. What would you like the bot to do? '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 07:19, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ah! My sincere apologies I am still new to wiki and did not know.
Thank you. Laffuble (talk) 07:27, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
But, I do have one more question. What does it mean by "Submissions should summarize information in
==>"secondary"<==, reliable sources? Laffuble (talk) 07:32, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Drafts need to demonstrate notability in order to be accepted. Secondary reliable sources establish notability. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 07:34, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok. Thanks! Laffuble (talk) 07:39, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

07:30, 12 December 2024 review of submission by Aarush indus

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How Do I Take This Page Down?

Aarush Indus Aarush indus (talk) 07:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Aarush indus  Done, tagged for deletion per WP:G7. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 07:35, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]