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Your submission at Articles for creation: CAP-XX (December 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AlphaBetaGamma were:

Submission seems to be partially WP:LLM Generated.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 03:02, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I do think this is a valuable entry into Wikipedia as it explains a key company in Australias electronics industry that has had a global presence for decades, as well as entanglements with large, well known companies like Tesla, Maxwells, Murata etc.

I have written the whole article and I am currently re-editing it to try and make it more neutral. I did think it was neutral personally. But could you guide me on what I could delete or words to change, to get this passed?

This is my first ever Wiki article and so I am not experienced at this sorry. Yodawriter (talk) 10:27, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Yodawriter! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 03:02, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: CAP-XX (December 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

and see WP:SOLUTIONS.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Theroadislong (talk) 11:48, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Thero, the article I have just republished contains a large variety of sources including government, university, and industry published completely separate from CAP-XX so I am not sure why I keep getting this comment regarding sources. I think your comment on WP:Solutions was a clue that my words may be a problem? so I have deleted the words solution, global, growing, and strategy from the article. Yodawriter (talk) 12:51, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: CAP-XX (December 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:CAP-XX and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Theroadislong (talk) 13:24, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: CAP-XX has been accepted

CAP-XX, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top 21% of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

qcne (talk) 21:10, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]