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'''Nominator:''' {{User|CatchMe}} 04:33, 8 December 2024 (UTC) |
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'''Reviewer:''' [[User:Medxvo|Medxvo]] ([[User talk:Medxvo|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Medxvo|contribs]]) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC) |
'''Reviewer:''' [[User:Medxvo|Medxvo]] ([[User talk:Medxvo|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Medxvo|contribs]]) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC) |
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* "Other critics, including Breihan and Danielle Chelosky for ''Uproxx'', also highlighted ..." - "Other critics, including ''Uproxx''{{'s}} Danielle Chelosky and Breihan, also highlighted ..." |
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* [[Joan Jett]] can be wikilinked, I think? |
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* "on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon hours before release" - "on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon, hours before its release" |
* "on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon hours before release" - "on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon, hours before its release" |
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* "The song was included in the regular set list of her seventh concert tour ..." - "The song was included in the regular set list of Lovato's seventh concert tour ..." |
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This is a really well-written and well-sourced article, and I've actually enjoyed reading it :) {{ping|CatchMe}} I will put this {{onhold}} for now. [[User:Medxvo|Medxvo]] ([[User talk:Medxvo|talk]]) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC) |
This is a really well-written and well-sourced article, and I've actually enjoyed reading it :) {{ping|CatchMe}} I will put this {{onhold}} for now. [[User:Medxvo|Medxvo]] ([[User talk:Medxvo|talk]]) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC) |
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:Thank you so much for taking this review, [[User:Medxvo|Medxvo]]! This is my first GAN so I really appreciate it. I think everything is done now. I also changed the link of the ''Insider'' reference, which was renewed (previously it was insider.com) and gave an error in the archive. [[User:CatchMe|CatchMe]] ([[User talk:CatchMe|talk]]) 19:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::You've done an impressive job on the article, {{u|CatchMe}}! I will {{pass}} it now. Hope to see more GANs from you in the future! [[User:Medxvo|Medxvo]] ([[User talk:Medxvo|talk]]) 19:34, 8 December 2024 (UTC) |
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Nominator: CatchMe (talk · contribs) 04:33, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- "Instagram stories" - "Instagram Stories"
- "On the same date, Lovato published a video ..." - we didn't actually specify the date in the preceding sentence, so I suggest, "She additionally published a video ...", or you can add "Three days later" in the preceding sentence instead of "Days later"
- "The singer announced the release ..." - "Lovato announced the release ..."
- "it was promoted by billboards" - "it was promoted by digital billboards"
- "National Public Radio's Reanna Cruz also compared ..." - you can just say NPR instead of National Public Radio
- "compared the vocal affectations of the song with "Born This Way" by American singer Lady Gaga" - "compared the vocal affectations of the song to those of Lady Gaga's "Born This Way" (2011)" -- you don't need to specify Gaga's nationality since you didn't do so with the other artists
- "Other critics, including Breihan and Danielle Chelosky for Uproxx, also highlighted ..." - "Other critics, including Uproxx's Danielle Chelosky and Breihan, also highlighted ..."
- I think Insider Inc. should be replaced with Insider (in prose and citations)
- "Regarding Lovato's dressing, Breihan found similarities with Joan Jett" - "Breihan compared her appearance in the video to the style of Joan Jett"
- "on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon hours before release" - "on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon, hours before its release"
- "The song was included in the regular set list of her seventh concert tour ..." - "The song was included in the regular set list of Lovato's seventh concert tour ..."
- Vulture can be linked in ref 35 for consistency
- Ref 19 is missing the author
This is a really well-written and well-sourced article, and I've actually enjoyed reading it :) @CatchMe: I will put this 
On hold for now. Medxvo (talk) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for taking this review, Medxvo! This is my first GAN so I really appreciate it. I think everything is done now. I also changed the link of the Insider reference, which was renewed (previously it was insider.com) and gave an error in the archive. CatchMe (talk) 19:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- You've done an impressive job on the article, CatchMe! I will ✓ Pass it now. Hope to see more GANs from you in the future! Medxvo (talk) 19:34, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.