Talk:Skin of My Teeth

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GA Review

Passed. Medxvo (talk) 19:35, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: CatchMe (talk · contribs) 04:33, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Instagram stories" - "Instagram Stories"
"On the same date, Lovato published a video ..." - we didn't actually specify the date in the preceding sentence, so I suggest, "She additionally published a video ...", or you can add "Three days later" in the preceding sentence instead of "Days later"
"The singer announced the release ..." - "Lovato announced the release ..."
"it was promoted by billboards" - "it was promoted by digital billboards"
"National Public Radio's Reanna Cruz also compared ..." - you can just say NPR instead of National Public Radio
"compared the vocal affectations of the song with "Born This Way" by American singer Lady Gaga" - "compared the vocal affectations of the song to those of Lady Gaga's "Born This Way" (2011)" -- you don't need to specify Gaga's nationality since you didn't do so with the other artists
"Other critics, including Breihan and Danielle Chelosky for Uproxx, also highlighted ..." - "Other critics, including Uproxx's Danielle Chelosky and Breihan, also highlighted ..."
I think Insider Inc. should be replaced with Insider (in prose and citations)
"Regarding Lovato's dressing, Breihan found similarities with Joan Jett" - "Breihan compared her appearance in the video to the style of Joan Jett"
"on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon hours before release" - "on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon, hours before its release"
"The song was included in the regular set list of her seventh concert tour ..." - "The song was included in the regular set list of Lovato's seventh concert tour ..."
Vulture can be linked in ref 35 for consistency
Ref 19 is missing the author

This is a really well-written and well-sourced article, and I've actually enjoyed reading it :) @CatchMe: I will put this On hold for now. Medxvo (talk) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much for taking this review, Medxvo! This is my first GAN so I really appreciate it. I think everything is done now. I also changed the link of the Insider reference, which was renewed (previously it was insider.com) and gave an error in the archive. CatchMe (talk) 19:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You've done an impressive job on the article, CatchMe! I will ✓ Pass it now. Hope to see more GANs from you in the future! Medxvo (talk) 19:34, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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... that in "Skin of My Teeth", Demi Lovato declared that she barely escaped death?

Source: Harper's Bazaar

ALT1: ... that Demi Lovato staged a "funeral" for her pop music before releasing "Skin of My Teeth"? Source: People, Billboard
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Improved to Good Article status by CatchMe (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

CatchMe (talk) 20:19, 8 December 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Everything is good to go save one nitpick. I know this is an extremely minor deviation, but the article itself does not acknowledge that the song says she barely escaped death, only mentioning the lyric followed by the account of here near-fatal overdose. The Bazaar does make that link, so an extremely minor rephrase in the article would make it so ALT0 can run. Otherwise, outstanding work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for reviewing this, Pbritti! I did a minor change to the article, so I think it is resolved now. CatchMe (talk) 01:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent work! Thanks for making that change. We're good to go here! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]