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= October 25=
= December 27 =


== 03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin ==
== Vert Skating - Articles for creation ==
{{Lafc|username=Fuzzpumpkin|ts=03:24, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Office_Hours_Live}}
Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved.


Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] ([[User talk:Fuzzpumpkin|talk]]) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
Hello,
I got a comment saying that (Vert Skating) should be merged with existing one,
I just wanted to let you know that (ver skateboarding) its with a skateboarding, usually a piece of wood with 4 wheels.
and (vert skating) is with skates usually 4 wheels per skate, two totally different sports.
please let me know. thanks.


:@[[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
>> Comment: Consider merging with the existing article as necessary. Mephistophelian (contact) 01:57, 25 October 2012 (UTC)


== 08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany ==
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Vert_Skating
{{Lafc|username=Al Gattany|ts=08:01, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Mohammad_Hossain}}
Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]]: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
[[User:XK8ER|XK8ER]] ([[User talk:XK8ER|talk]]) 02:44, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
::Ok thanks [[User:Al Gattany|Al Gattany]] ([[User talk:Al Gattany|talk]]) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
:::{{u|Al Gattany}}, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a [[WP:NPERSON|Notable person]] deserving of a Wikipedia article. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)


== 12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi ==
:I believe the existing article wasn't meant to be [[Vert skateboarding]] but [[Aggressive inline skating]] which has a section "[[Aggressive inline skating#Vert|Vert]]".
{{Lafc|username=Itsfaizanfaizi|ts=12:42, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hafeez_Center}}
:The draft's main problem seems to be its dearth of [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]. The current references either aren't reliable (such as the photo blog) or they say very little on vert skating beyond a dictionary definition. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 06:00, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them.
I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions ''in this thread'' explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
I see, I have edited the [[Aggressive inline skating]] page for the vert section because people think its part of it but its not. Skateparks usually have [[Vert Ramps]] and people think that its the same sport as park or street skating. Since there is a section for [[Vert Skateboarding]] there should be also a section for [[Vert Skating]] and also one for bikes [[Vert BMX]] all tree sports are similar, but riding a vert ramp with a bike is totally different than with skates. If you need me to fax documentation on this I will, online sources are very hard because this sport is very rare and you usually see Vert ramps with skateboards and not with skates. [[User:XK8ER|XK8ER]] ([[User talk:XK8ER|talk]]) 06:21, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
::I addressed the '''peacock prose''' by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. [[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
::::Unfortunately another reviewer found that the work done was not sufficient and rejected it, still as a blatant advert. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 08:58, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


== 16:09, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689 ==
:Sources need not be available online; you can just as well use the print editions of newspapers or skating magazines as refereces as long as you provide sufficient bibliographical information to allow the readers to identify the source. However, if vert skating is so rare that it hasn't received significant coverage in [[WP:RS|reliable sources]], then it isn't considered [[WP:N|notable]] enough by Wikipedia's standards to be the subject of a stand-alone article, and we should instead improve the section within the larger [[aggressive inline skating]] article.
{{Lafc|username=2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689|ts=16:09, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Julian_Alturas}}
:As an aside, the [[vert skateboarding]] article is not a shining example of what a Wikipedia article should be. Its only reference is a Wikipedia article (and Wikipedia does not consider itself a reliable source), and it provides mostly vague generalities and a lengthy list of "see also" links. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 13:56, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
Can someone help me to edit his biography enable for it to be accepted. [[Special:Contributions/2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689|2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689]] ([[User talk:2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689|talk]]) 16:09, 27 December 2024 (UTC)


:We don't provide co-editing services here; it's up to you to show that this person is notable. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 16:34, 27 December 2024 (UTC)


== 18:58, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Kolorguide ==
thanks for the information, I have many different online sources but they seem to be broken links.
{{Lafc|username=Kolorguide|ts=18:58, 27 December 2024|draft=Dyne Test Pens in Quality Control: Ensuring Surface Tension Accuracy}}
for example athletes winning x-games medals and its results,
I am trying to publish something about quality control and specifically about dyne test pens, on the page it shows me the following title: "Dyne Test Pens in Quality Control: Ensuring Surface Tension Accuracy" Please check draft title. No such draft exists [[User:Kolorguide|Kolorguide]] ([[User talk:Kolorguide|talk]]) 18:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
<nowiki>http://www.lgactionsports.com/2008/events/asc/res_inlvertf.html</nowiki>
as you can see its broken so as a reference can we include "archive.org" urls for verification purposes?
<nowiki>http://web.archive.org/web/20081209090451/http://www.lgactionsports.com/2008/events/asc/res_inlvertf.html</nowiki>
[[User:XK8ER|XK8ER]] ([[User talk:XK8ER|talk]]) 05:12, 27 October 2012 (UTC)


:The name in your sandbox unimportant; the reviewer, if accepted, would give it the appropriate title. The larger problem is that this reads like a largely unsourced essay, and it's ''very'' far away from being a Wikipedia-appropriate article. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 19:14, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
:The Internet Archive is considered to reliably reproduce what the website originally said. In fact the {{tl|cite web}} template that's used to nicely format web sources even has "archiveurl=" and "archivedate=" parameters for this very purpose. But I don't think the original website you provided is all that helpful: It's a [[WP:PRIMARY|primary source]], the competition's organizers reporting on their own competition. Has that competition received some secondary coverage, such as newspaper articles? That would be much better. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 13:32, 28 October 2012 (UTC)


== 19:00, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Movied Freak ==
=October 26=
{{Lafc|username=Movied Freak|ts=19:00, 27 December 2024|draft=User:Movied_Freak/sandbox}}
what should i have to add ? [[User:Movied Freak|Movied Freak]] ([[User talk:Movied Freak|talk]]) 19:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC)


:{{u|Movied Freak}} YouTube and IMDB are unacceptable sources as they are user-generated. YouTube videos produced by a reputable news outlet or similar may be acceptable if on a verified channel. The film is also unreleased, meaning it does not yet merit an article(see [[WP:NFF|notability of future films]]) unless you can show that there was something unusual about the production of the film(beyond casting announcements, release of trailers, etc.) [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Scott Jay Kenyon]] ==


== 20:20, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Abu muttalib ==
First, A big thanks to Huon for his detailed and very helpful reply - it is very interesting and instructive to see how this process works and I hope I get it now.
{{Lafc|username=Abu muttalib|ts=20:20, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft: Deepali Sahay}}
The aproval to draft of my article is declined. Wanted and instructed to post here to know. [[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] ([[User talk:Abu muttalib|talk]]) 20:20, 27 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] is posting a request here all that you understood from the detailed decline rationale? 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
I have two questions. When replying to a thread in this section of talk is it ok to add via edit or is there another way to keep the threads together? I have been starting a new thread with each new set of questions and I see that Huon was able to paste them together.
:{{u|Abu muttalib}} Please see the message by the reviewer as to why it was declined and what you can do about it.
:I see that you took an image of this person, what is your connection to her? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
::Yes, I got it. I resubmitted with one more additional independent verifiable source.
::As such, no direct connection, except that I was viewer of the said shows and she is from my place. I am a admirer of her singing and wanted a page on Wikipedia for her similar to the Wikipedia page of her husband, which has even a Wikipedia page for both of their common friends Meiyang Chang. The image is clipped and cropped from one of her YouTube videos. Let me share the link. [[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] ([[User talk:Abu muttalib|talk]]) 21:23, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] Please '''do not clip images''' from anywhere unless their licencing is suitable and allows onward use. [[:File:Deepali Sahay.jpg]] is being dealt with on Wikimedia Commons and will be deleted unless you follow the process at [[c:COM:VRT]] to show that you have permission and/or that the licence at the Youtube video allowed you to upload it. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 09:08, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
::::@[[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] Further; Words/phases such as ''famous, prestigious, ventured into'' tend to be words of praise, and reduce your draft to advertorial. Please look at your phraseology carefully. We require flat, neutral, dull-but-worthy prose asserting facts and verifying them with citations. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 09:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::Got it. Let me rephrase the whole article. [[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] ([[User talk:Abu muttalib|talk]]) 09:13, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
::::::At [[Draft talk:Deepali Sahay]] you say that there is already an article about her at [[Deepali Kishore]]. There cannot be two articles about the same person, so you should not resubmit the draft. (It was disruptive to resubmit it without any changes after the previous decline.) The existing article is in very bad shape – it was created long before the draft process existed, so it has never been reviewed or "accepted", but it can be edited and improved. However, unless there are indeed sources showing that she is notable, that article will be deleted. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 09:29, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
::::OK. It can be removed. I have the concerned person to send her image so that there is no licensing issue. [[User:Abu muttalib|Abu muttalib]] ([[User talk:Abu muttalib|talk]]) 09:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::{{u|Abu muttalib}} Note that she might not hold the copyright to images of her; typically it belongs with the photographer. As I said '''images are not relevant''' to getting your draft approved, I would suggest focusing on that first, before worrying about images. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:27, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


== 22:47, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746 ==
Also, I have been able to edit some of the article along the lines Huon suggested. It would be very helpful if the first parts - the opening, Career, and the first two paragraphs of Scientific Work - could be looked at and critiqued so I can see whether or not I am on the right track and whether the subject is starting to seem notable enough.
{{Lafc|username=2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746|ts=22:47, 27 December 2024|draft=Draft:Allen_A._Dennard_Jr.}}
Thank you for your feedback on why my article was not accepted and for giving me the guidelines that I need to follow in order to improve my chances of getting the article approved. I need to know how much time I have to re-edit the article and resubmit. Thanks. Sincerely, --Elreta Dodds. [[Special:Contributions/2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746|2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746]] ([[User talk:2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746|talk]]) 22:47, 27 December 2024 (UTC)


:You have up to six months to do so. Each edit you make resets that clock. Thus there is absolutely no effective deadline. Happy editing. You may also continue to edit after submission. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 09:04, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
Thanks again for your help.
:(ec) There is no deadline as long as you are actively working on the draft. If it is inactive for six months, it will be deleted, but even then it can be restored via [[WP:REFUND]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:05, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
[[User:Seriouscallersonly|Seriouscallersonly]] ([[User talk:Seriouscallersonly|talk]]) 22:25, 26 October 2012 (UTC)


= December 28 =
:When you re-open an older thread via "edit", there's a certain risk that it might be missed - in this case, I think a new thread was entirely appropriate. When the thread you're replying to is quite recent, just editing it may be easier - the last time I simply had to remove the section heading to merge two consecutive sections on the same topic into one. So that's something of a judgement call. If in doubt, starting a new section cannot hurt.
:I'm rather busy right now, but I have added the draft to my watchlist and will take a closer look to those paragraphs tomorrow. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 22:40, 26 October 2012 (UTC)


== 01:34, 28 December 2024 review of submission by 103.238.130.133 ==
:: Thanks! [[User:Seriouscallersonly|Seriouscallersonly]] ([[User talk:Seriouscallersonly|talk]]) 22:47, 26 October 2012 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=103.238.130.133|ts=01:34, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Jan_D._Corvin}}
May I ask why the article was rejected based on notability and how can it be improved for successful resubmission ? [[Special:Contributions/103.238.130.133|103.238.130.133]] ([[User talk:103.238.130.133|talk]]) 01:34, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


:Rejection typically means that improvement is not possible at this time; [[WP:AKON|no amount of editing can confer notability]] on a topic. It seems like you have no independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that have significant coverage of this person, just descriptions of their activities. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:02, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:: I did have another question. Hypervelocity stars have lots of news coverage so they are notable & they have an entry in Wikipedia - does that give the discoverers some notability? I know it is not hard & fast one way or the other but your thoughts would be helpful - thanks! [[User:Seriouscallersonly|Seriouscallersonly]] ([[User talk:Seriouscallersonly|talk]]) 17:36, 27 October 2012 (UTC)


== 02:50, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin ==
:::I just had a closer look at those sections, and I believe the sources are still problematic. For example, the list of publications ''is'' sufficient to see that Kenyon has a h-index of 63 (if one knows how to compute the h-index, which laypersons probably don't know) - but a source that explicitly says "Kenyon has a h-index of 63" and continues "that means he's broadly cited" would be ''much'' better. The latter part is currently opinion - I agree with the assessment, but it's still our personal opinion. In general, sources that actually discuss Kenyon in some detail are better than lists of data that mention him.
{{Lafc|username=Fuzzpumpkin|ts=02:50, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Office Hours Live}}
:::The coverage of the luminosity problem relies heavily on Kenyon's own papers, with secondary sources cited for claims that a priori aren't related to him. But Offner and McKee mention both Kenyon's discovery of the luminosity problem and his suggested solution - and we should cite them for it, not Kenyon himself. For comparison have a look at [[Clyde Tombaugh]]'s article: I believe that manages not to cite a single Tombaugh paper and still has sources for his various discoveries. Another article worth a look might be that on [[Stephen Hawking]]: It's a [[WP:Featured articles|featured article]], among the best Wikipedia has to offer. It does cite some Hawking papers, but it also offers numerous secondary sources on his research. Of course Hawking is probably the most famous physicist alive and had entire biographies written about him; we cannot expect quite the same for Kenyon. But the article may still serve as an example of what we'd ideally like to have.
Hi, I've been having trouble getting my article draft approved to be a "real" article. I'm open to all advice. [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]] ([[User talk:Fuzzpumpkin|talk]]) 02:50, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::The answer to the hypervelocity stars is similar: Their discovery surely gives notability - but it would be better to have a secondary source saying that Kenyon discovered them, not just Kenyon's own paper. The basic idea of Wikipedia's notability is not that you did something important, but that others have acknowledged you did so.
:::Articles on people with importand publications sometimes have a dedicated "publications" section that lists the person's own papers without using them as references. For someone with as many publications as Kenyon we should probably only list the highlights - his book on symbiotic stars, the luminosity problem paper, the hypervelocity star paper, and so on. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 19:04, 27 October 2012 (UTC)
:{{u|Fuzzpumpkin}} You need to include the "Draft:" portion when linking to your draft, I fixed this for you above. Please see the messages left by the reviewers; the most recent one asks you to improve the tone of the article, and the reviewer left you specific advice on your draft. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 09:00, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:There is really no need to open a further thread on this matter, [[User:Fuzzpumpkin|Fuzzpumpkin]], Continuing the same thread is usual and helpful. But, since you have, [[Draft:Office Hours Live]]'s referencing is much improved since my comment, for which I thank you.
:When you are sure that you have handled the all reviewer's advice as well I suggest you resubmit for review. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 09:02, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


== 08:06, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi ==
= October 27 =
{{Lafc|username=Itsfaizanfaizi|ts=08:06, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Hafeez_Center}}
== physics ==
my article has been rejected 2 times.
I understand it was rejected due to concerns about advertising and notability. Could you provide specific feedback on the promotional aspects and what type of sources would demonstrate sufficient notability?
I am eager to revise the article to meet Wikipedia's standards.
[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]] ([[User talk:Itsfaizanfaizi|talk]]) 08:06, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Itsfaizanfaizi|Itsfaizanfaizi]]: slight correction, your draft was previously ''declined'' twice, and has ''now'' been rejected. Rejection means it won't be considered any further.
a pendulum is displaced sideward from the vertical and the released.As it swings down toward the vertical axis ,its kenitic energy increases,where does the energy come from? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/49.145.14.183|49.145.14.183]] ([[User talk:49.145.14.183|talk]]) 05:44, 27 October 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:The relevant notability criterion is [[WP:NBUILD]], which means that we require significant coverage in multiple sources that meet the [[WP:GNG]] standard. Your draft cites no such source. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:32, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


== 09:28, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Johnsonbl9ck ==
:From the [[Gravitational potential|potential energy]]: The pendulum is displaced along an arc, not just sideward but a little upward as well. But this help desk is for questions about the [[WP:AFC|Articles for creation]] process. For general knowledge questions, please try the [[WP:REFDESK|reference desk]]. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 10:38, 27 October 2012 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Johnsonbl9ck|ts=09:28, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kamalı Zeybek (film, 1954)}}
Reviewed End [[User:Johnsonbl9ck|Johnsonbl9ck]] ([[User talk:Johnsonbl9ck|talk]]) 09:28, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Johnsonbl9ck|Johnsonbl9ck]] it hasn't been reviewed yet, and don't [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Kamal%C4%B1_Zeybek_(film,_1954)&diff=prev&oldid=1265722872 add fake notices], thanks. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 09:30, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:But it is a waste of everybody's time to submit a draft with no content and no sources. A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what [[WP:42|independent reliable sources]] say about a [[WP:notable|notable]] subject, and very little else. Please see [[WP:REFB]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 22:15, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


== 14:07, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Durgaprasadpetla ==
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Walman]] ==
{{Lafc|username=Durgaprasadpetla|ts=14:07, 28 December 2024|draft=Kambala Srinivas Rao}}
I am a beginner on Wikipedia and need some help. I was trying to edit the Talk:Kambala Srinivas Rao page, but I encountered a message saying it was deleted under G8 (talk page of a deleted page).
I would like to know:
Is it possible to restore the talk page, and under what circumstances?
How can I address content or discussions related to the deleted page appropriately?
Are there specific steps I should follow to create or request the recreation of the article itself?
Thank you for your guidance and support! [[User:Durgaprasadpetla|Durgaprasadpetla]] ([[User talk:Durgaprasadpetla|talk]]) 14:07, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:{{u|Durgaprasadpetla}} I fixed your post, the whole url is not needed. You may use the [[WP:WIZARD|Article Wizard]] to create a draft. The deleted talk page only has a comment by you. The article was deleted under [[WP:A7|the A7 speedy deletion criterion]](no asserted importance). You need to see your user talk page for important information requiring a response. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 14:15, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


== 15:56, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Hays Deutschland ==
I attempted to create a redirect page for Walman and received the message
{{Lafc|username=Hays Deutschland|ts=15:56, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Dominic_V._Spinelli}}
I mixed up the references, which I copied from the German Wiki site I worked on. I cant clean the references. Easiest would be to delete all references an set them up new. How can I do that? [[User:Hays Deutschland|Hays Deutschland]] ([[User talk:Hays Deutschland|talk]]) 15:56, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Hays Deutschland|Hays Deutschland]] I've removed all the references. If that's not what you meant, please [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:Dominic_V._Spinelli&action=edit&undoafter=1245744559&undo=1265958956 undo my edit]. <span style="white-space:nowrap"><span style="font-family:monospace">'''<nowiki>'''[[</nowiki>[[User:CanonNi]]<nowiki>]]'''</nowiki>'''</span> ([[User talk:CanonNi|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/CanonNi|contribs]])</span> 12:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


== 17:07, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Dreimouse in an nutshell ==
This is not the correct place to request new redirects. Please follow the instructions at Articles for creation/Wizard-Redirects. Thank you.
{{Lafc|username=Dreimouse in an nutshell|ts=17:07, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Saxdor}}
I have worked hard to make this article, but i got no way of getting the reference to show on the page😞 [[User:Dreimouse in an nutshell|Dreimouse in an nutshell]] ([[User talk:Dreimouse in an nutshell|talk]]) 17:07, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:Please can you disclose your connection with Saxdor? I have left 4 messages today on [[User talk:Dreimouse in an nutshell]] and you haven't responded to any of them. I have reviewed the 4 references that you have added to the bottom of the article but none of them even have working URLs. [[User:Spiderone|<span style="color: #996600">Spiderone</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Spiderone|<span style="color:brown">(Talk to Spider)</span>]]</sup> 17:26, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


== 21:01, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Accounttree8 ==
But I see no information at that site to explain what I did wrong.
{{Lafc|username=Accounttree8|ts=21:01, 28 December 2024|draft=Draft:Merrimack_Valley_Conference}}
I have no idea why my article has been denied. The reason it was denied was "Reason as the Prod reason." I have no idea what this means. Please advise. I would like this article to be published ASAP, as there is no good reason for its denial. [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] ([[User talk:Accounttree8|talk]]) 21:01, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


:{{u|Accounttree8}} You claim that you created and own the copyright to the conference logo- and you seem to be on a deadline([[WP:DEADLINE|we're not]]). What is your relationship with the conference?
MD <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Kolinuts68|Kolinuts68]] ([[User talk:Kolinuts68|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Kolinuts68|contribs]]) 13:53, 27 October 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:{{u|SafariScribe}} could you elaborate? [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:05, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
::I apologize for the mistake, I'm not sure why it is listed that I created the logo. I did not create the logo, nor do I own the copyright. I am more than happy to fix that, but I'm not sure how to fix that. I am a former employee at the conference (I am since retired and now have some time to do things like this). I have been in communication with the conference and they would like to have a presence on this website, as most of our peer conferences do. I'm juts trying to help my former colleagues. I have been attempting to create this page for 9 months. It has been denied every time. I am not on a deadline, I am just frustrated with the countless denials (which is why I indicated ASAP). I am a Wikipedia novice and have tried to correct it many times, to no avail. I am just very frustrated with the process. 80-year old's aren't savvy with technology like this :) [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] ([[User talk:Accounttree8|talk]]) 21:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Thank you- you must '''immediately without delay''' go to Commons and either request deletion of the logo, or show where the logo has been released with a copyright compatible with Wikipedia's(allowing for reuse by anyone for any purpose, including commerical, with attribution). Logos are typically uploaded to this Wikipedia locally under "fair use" rules, which does carry some restrictions(they cannot be in drafts) but does allow limited use in articles.
:::Images are not relevant to the draft process, which only considers the text and sources. Images can wait until the draft is accepted.
:::As you are acting on behalf of the organization, you have a [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]].
:::The trouble you are having is that you [[WP:CITEKILL|have too many references]] and the ones that you do have don't show that the conference is a [[WP:ORG|notable organization as Wikipedia defines one]]. As for other conferences- their articles [[WP:OSE|could be inappropriate as well]] and we just haven't gotten around to addressing them yet. I know this is a lot of information, but these are all important things. Writing a new article is the most difficult task to attempt on Wikipedia for people of any age- we usually recommend that experience be gained first by editing existing articles. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:21, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
::::@[[User:331dot|331dot]] You may not be aware that there is a logo complexity threshold at Commons. That threshold handles uncopyrightable items - text and simple geometric shapes. I believe that this logo qualifies as being below that threshold. However, advice from a Commons expert is really essential. I work there, but I am far short of being an expert.
::::Your advice to [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] seek immediate deletion has strong merit [[c:Commons:Help desk]] will provide them with all the assistance they require. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 21:28, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
::::I have requested deletion of the logo.
::::Respectfully, I disagree I have a conflict of interest. I have done this on my own volition and have not worked at the conference for 15 years. No one working for the conference had any input with this article.
::::Is it possible to give me an example of how to prove the conference is a notable organization as Wikipedia defines one? What would I need to do to show this? Appreciate any help you can provide. [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] ([[User talk:Accounttree8|talk]]) 21:38, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::{{u|Accounttree8}} You said "I have been in communication with the conference and they would like to have a presence on this website"; does that not mean you're their representative?
:::::To show notability, you need independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that discuss the conference organization itself- not necessarily its member teams. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:10, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] The file is held at [[:c:File:Merrimack Valley Conference Logo.jpg]], and you will need to edit the relevant section fo the page holding it. You have both claimed to be the author, and released it under a [[Creative Commons]] [[ccorg:publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en|CC0 1.0 Universal Public Domain Dedication]]. Neither of these is correct.
:::You say "{{tq|I apologize for the mistake, I'm not sure why it is listed that I created the logo.}}" but you were required to fill that information put when you uploaded the file. Thus it is listed that way because you listed it that way. You need to rectify that at once, please 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 21:22, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Hello, @[[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]]. Unfortunately it appears that, like many people, you have a fundamental misunderstanding about Wikipedia. If you are trying to write an article in pursuit of "presence on this website", then you are involved in [[WP:NOTPROMO|promotion]], which is forbidden anywhere on Wikipedia. Any benefit (or detriment) which a subject may accrue by being the subject of a Wikipedia article is of no interest to Wikipedia. An article on your Conference should be a summary of what sources wholly unconnected with your Conference have chosen to publish in reliable places: what the Conference or its associates say or want to say is irrelevant. Please see [[WP:an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing|an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 22:25, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
::::And this is why nobody donates to Wokipedia! :) [[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] ([[User talk:Accounttree8|talk]]) 22:36, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::@[[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]] Oh dear. That was rather rude. When given good advice it behoves you to say a pleasant word of thanks. Do, please, pull your horns in. If the MVC is notable then ''all'' you need to do is to show that it is. Declaring a [[WP:COI]] shows a commitment to transparency. It suggests that you have done everything to be an editor in good standing. Arguing against it suggests [[The lady doth protest too much, methinks]]
:::::Thank you for nominating the logo for deletion on Commons. 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 23:14, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::<small>I'm sorry you feel that way, @[[User:Accounttree8|Accounttree8]]. Let me give my personal view: if ever Wikipedia changed its policies so that it ceased to be one of the few places on the internet blessedly free from people promoting themselves and their activities, I would certainly stop contributing my money, and probably, albeit reluctanty, also stop contributing my time. </small> [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 20:59, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:{{yo|Accounttree8}} Please read and attend to the comments from the reviewers. The draft suffers from extreme CITEKILL, as explained in some detail by a couple of your fellow editors who declined the draft at different times. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 22:04, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Nobody here is remotely bothered whether you donate or not, it is irrelevant. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 22:52, 28 December 2024 (UTC)


= December 29 =
:There's a simplified procedure for requesting redirects; it's at [[WP:AFC/R]] (or you can tell the [[Wikipedia:Article wizard/Redirect|Article Wizard]] that you want to create a redirect). That doesn't involve as thorough a review as the submission of a new article, and correspondingly it's much faster. However, since "[[Walman]]" may have other meanings besides the language, a [[WP:Disambiguation page]] seemed more appropriate than a redirect. I have created it. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 17:24, 27 October 2012 (UTC)


== 07:03, 29 December 2024 review of submission by RasaPetrauskaite ==
::Kolinuts, the technical bits do take some learning, but you have successfully identified a good place for a [[WP:Disambiguation]] page, which Huon made. I ended up making some related ones and also some links, so folks looking for [[Wallman]], [[Wollman]], and [[Wolman]] can get to the right place too. Thanks for pointing this out! [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 02:40, 28 October 2012 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=RasaPetrauskaite|ts=07:03, 29 December 2024|draft=Draft:Measure_J_(Sonoma_County,_2024)}}
Every time I try to make an edit and publish the edit, I get an error message that says that content provided was not properly deflated. This might have happened because I tried to paste a table from a website. But now I cannot undo it and the error message always shows up and prevents me from making any changes. I would like to edit this draft of an article. Could you please suggest how I can move forward with that and resolve the error message? [[User:RasaPetrauskaite|RasaPetrauskaite]] ([[User talk:RasaPetrauskaite|talk]]) 07:03, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:RasaPetrauskaite|RasaPetrauskaite]]: I've just made a minor edit to this draft without any problems. Perhaps the issue is local to your browser – try restarting, and maybe clearing your cache if that doesn't help? If the issue persists, you are more likely to get competent advice at [[WP:VPT]] where folks who know technical stuff hang out. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 08:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
==[[Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Dr._Christopher_L._Snyder]]==
I had written the article below and wanted to see if there is someone I could pay to make it into the correct format so my biography can be included into the Wikipedia.
[[Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Dr._Christopher_L._Snyder]] <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Noah2noaa|Noah2noaa]] ([[User talk:Noah2noaa|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Noah2noaa|contribs]]) 14:21, 27 October 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


== 14:12, 29 December 2024 review of submission by The27thAlphabet ==
:Wikipedia editors tend to be volunteers and usually "work" for free; while there are a few editors-for-hire, in general there's no need to offer payment. Furthermore, money tends to create [[WP:COI|conflicts of interest]].
{{Lafc|username=The27thAlphabet|ts=14:12, 29 December 2024|draft=Draft:Ashwani_Gupta_(business_executive)}}
:I just had a look at the draft, and there are several problems. Most importantly, The sources don't suffice to establish Snyder's [[WP:N|notability]]. To be considered notable enough for a Wikipedia article he must have received significant coverage in [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject, such as newspaper articles. Two of the draft's sources are written by Snyder himself (and thus not independent); the other two are directory entries and not considered significant enough. I'm also not quite sure where those directories get their information - parts seem to be user-submitted, which would be unreliable (for example, I believe I could rate him without ever having seen him).
Can i please request help to evaluate this draft. I have added the notable sources and links. but do help in making this better for submission. [[User:The27thAlphabet|The27thAlphabet]] ([[User talk:The27thAlphabet|talk]]) 14:12, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:Even if better sources can be found, the draft will have to be rewritten significantly. It reads more like a [[hagiography]] than an encyclopedia article - would you expect our article on [[Niccolò Machiavelli]] to begin with "Niccolò Machiavelli was a results-oriented politician with a passion for promoting the fortunes of his home town"? That sounds good but ultimately tells us little about the subject (maybe even more about Machiavelli than about a doctor). Claims such as that Snyder "earned a reputation for precision and accuracy" would need a secondary source explicitly making that claim, and better yet, attribution to that source: "When Snyder was hired for a full-time position at the University of Pittsburgh, the ''Random Pittsburgh Newspaper'' noted his reputation for precision and accuracy" or something like that. In general, we aim for a [[WP:NPOV|neutral point of view]], not for an [[WP:SPAM|advertisement]].
:Furthermore, the draft should have [[WP:INCITE|inline citations]] and [[Help:Footnotes|footnotes]] to clarify which of the sources supports which of the draft's statements.
:I'd be willing to help with the more technical parts such as the footnotes, but I have no idea where to look for better sources; without those not much can be done. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 17:24, 27 October 2012 (UTC)


:@[[User:The27thAlphabet|The27thAlphabet]]: we don't get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. You will get an evaluation when you resubmit the draft. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 16:57, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Combination EMS Service and Departments]] ==
:You've only linked to basic profiles and daily business news, that do nothing to confirm anything other than Gupta having those specific jobs. Notability requires a good deal more than this. You need to be looking for independent, reliable sources that are ''about'' Gupta. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 18:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


== 17:46, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Gidan Fasaha ==
References
{{Lafc|username=Gidan Fasaha|ts=17:46, 29 December 2024|draft=Draft:Aliyu_Saidu_Jauro}}
Hy, Please Can You Assist Me Check The Errors On This New Page That I am Adding? It Got Rejected. [[User:Gidan Fasaha|Gidan Fasaha]] ([[User talk:Gidan Fasaha|talk]]) 17:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


:Hey Gidan, this was rejected as not a single source was provided to indicate that the subject was notable. While there are nine references, not a single one of them ever mentions Jauro as far as I can tell, let alone confirming any fact asserted in the biography. Just as an example, look at the first paragraph after the lede. Neither Jauro's parents names, the ethnic group they belong to, where they are from, or his father's occupation, have any sourcing whatsoever. The only source provided goes simply to provide more information about the ''Yandang'' not the subject of the article. [[User:CoffeeCrumbs|CoffeeCrumbs]] ([[User talk:CoffeeCrumbs|talk]]) 18:29, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
http://www.naemt.org/Libraries/Member%20Resources%20Documents/Issues%20in%20Staffing%20Emergency%20Medical%20Services-A%20National%20Survey%20of%20Local%20Rural%20and%20Urban%20EMS%20Directors.sflb
:Hello, @[[User:Gidan Fasaha|Gidan Fasaha]]. A Wikipedia article is a summary of what people wholly unconnected with the subject have published about the subject, and very little else. If you do not have any [[WP:42|reliable independent sources]], there is literally nothing which you can put into an article. Please see [[WP:your first article|your first article]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 21:03, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


== 18:09, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Manikingr ==
{{Lafc|username=Manikingr|ts=18:09, 29 December 2024|draft=Draft:Alef_(company)}}
Greetings and respect
This article, which is about an Iranian artificial intelligence startup called Alef, has been completely edited and is written in an unbiased language without any advertisements for anyone's benefit.The sources of this article are written from official and completely independent media in Iran.
But unfortunately, some Wikipedia editors have monopolized the creation of articles and do not allow the creation of new articles and the improvement of Wikipedia. [[User:Manikingr|Manikingr]] ([[User talk:Manikingr|talk]]) 18:09, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


:You have not shown that this company meets the [[WP:ORG|special Wikipedia definition of a notable company]].
http://www.penflexinc.com/Are-Combination-Departments-The-Future-c31.html
:This process is usually voluntary. If you wish to disregard what you are being told by more experienced people, you can move the draft into the encyclopedia yourself, but you risk it being nominated for deletion. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:23, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


== 18:21, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Jasminmusicz ==
:You should add those references to the draft; in fact, the draft should be ''based'' on such sources. You should also use [[WP:INCITE|inline citations]] and [[Help:Footnotes|footnotes]] to clarify which source supports which of the draft's statements.
{{Lafc|username=Jasminmusicz|ts=18:21, 29 December 2024|draft=Draft:Jasmin_(Zara)}}
:On a more general note, your draft seems based on our [[combination fire department]] article, with parts of it literally the same, and other parts with "firefighters" substituted by "EMS" (and with "junior" substituted by "cadet" even where that substitution makes no sense, such as "cadet high school" instead of "junior high school"). Are firefighters and EMS really that similar? Then we might be better off with a section on EMS in the combination fire department article than with a second article that largely says the same as the first. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 19:18, 27 October 2012 (UTC)
im a biggner so kindly assist me what is my msitake and how to fix it [[User:Jasminmusicz|Jasminmusicz]] ([[User talk:Jasminmusicz|talk]]) 18:21, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
= October 28 =
:Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell about themselves, please see the [[WP:AUTO|autobiography policy]]. Your draft has no sources that show you are a [[WP:BAND|notable musician]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:26, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Hilda the Wicked Witch]] ==
::{{u|Jasminmusicz}}, your highly promotional draft biography of a 13 year old child is completely unreferenced and in violation of multiple [[WP:PAG|Policies and guidelines]]. Most significantly, it violates [[WP:V|Verifiability]] and the [[WP:NPOV|Neutral point of view]]. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 18:28, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:::{{ping|Jasminmusicz}} I would '''''seriously reconsider''''' whether the price of a Wikipedia article (i.e. [[WP:Protecting children's privacy|permanent loss of your privacy]]) is worth it. —[[User:Jéské Couriano|<i style="color: #1E90FF;">Jéské Couriano</i>]] [[User talk:Jéské Couriano|<span style="color: #228B22">v^&lowbar;^v</span>]] <sup><small>[[User:Jéské Couriano/AG|threads]] [[User:Jéské Couriano/Decode|critiques]]</small></sup> 20:31, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


== 20:39, 29 December 2024 review of submission by JIMMY OFUOYAn14 ==
Hello,
{{Lafc|username=JIMMY OFUOYAn14|ts=20:39, 29 December 2024|draft=User:JIMMY_OFUOYAn14/sandbox}}
please what can i do to make my submission to be accepted [[User:JIMMY OFUOYAn14|JIMMY OFUOYAn14]] ([[User talk:JIMMY OFUOYAn14|talk]]) 20:39, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:There is nothing you can do. Please stop creating new accounts to publish your AI generated autobiography. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 20:52, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:FTR, previously blocked accounts include {{user|JIMMY OFUOYAN10}} and {{user|Jimmy ofuo}}. --''[[User:Bonadea|bonadea]]'' <small>[[Special:Contributions/Bonadea|contributions]] [[User talk:Bonadea|talk]]</small> 21:01, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


== 21:58, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Sam241224 ==
I wonder about references and citations for the book series Hilda the Wicked Witch.
{{Lafc|username=Sam241224|ts=21:58, 29 December 2024|draft=User:Sam241224/sandbox}}
Would links to places like Librarything, Goodreads and e.g. Amazon.com be considered valid?
Hi everyone, I recently submitted a wiki page for review and it got rejected for overly cheese language or unreliable sources, something like that. Things gone too wrong and the page was declined. I need help with improving it if possible. Please guide me as I am new here and if its a dead end, that's also ok. just let me know. thanks. [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 21:58, 29 December 2024 (UTC)


:As the reviewer noted, at one point schools were inherently notable, but that is no longer the case. Schools must meet [[WP:ORG]] just as any other organization. You should not be describing the school and its offerings, you should be summarizing what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the school. If you have no such sources, then the school does not merit an article. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
Thank you
::thank you @[[User:331dot|331dot]] for your swift and detailed reply,
::Now I got it, Its not what we want to say, but what reliable and Independent sources said that we need to rewrite / convey. Correct me if I am wrong. Can you please check the references and tell me if they qualify?
::thanks for helping me understand whole process [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 22:17, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:::The activities of the school do nof confer notability; there needs to be sources with significant coverage of the school and what makes it important/significant/influential as a school. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:22, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
::::Content like "Scientia emphasizes a balanced approach to learning, integrating technology and modern teaching methods to prepare students for the challenges of a dynamic world. Known for its commitment to community engagement, the school actively participates in initiatives promoting environmental sustainability and social welfare, fostering holistic development in its students." is just blatant advertising and would never be accepted. [[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] ([[User talk:Theroadislong|talk]]) 22:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::ok, understood. thank you for checking the contents and pointing out. @[[User:Theroadislong|Theroadislong]] [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 22:30, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
::::Ok, got it. So, how can I start a new page about something else. Lets leave this page here. I want to contribute but I don't think the language I use is right, I need to improve on that before I start working on anything else.
::::thanks @[[User:331dot|331dot]] [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 22:29, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::You can create additional sandboxes([[User:Sam241224/sandbox 2]]) or you can use the [[WP:WIZARD|Article Wizard]]. Please know that creating new articles is not the best or only way you can contribute. We have millions of articles that need help, and editing those will help you gain experience before you attempt the difficult task of creating a new article. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 22:33, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
::::::Ok, I will try to contribute to some other articles, maybe something with structure or easy tweaks before going after a big task as you suggested. I am not sure about the language I need to use in wiki content, It will take time for me to get things, but I have started to get the grip on things like my profile, sandbox and talk page, user page and such things. But, its a long journey, from front Wikipedia looks so simple, but from inside so many things are going on. Amazing.
::::::thanks for putting in your valuable time :) [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 22:40, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::::@[[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] my genuine advice to new editors is to start out improving existing articles, because writing a new article from scratch is really hard! Like trying to perform in an orchestra when you've only just picked up an instrument. Your [[Special:Homepage|Wikipedia Homepage]] will have some suggested edits you can make at various levels of difficulty. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 22:47, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
::::::::Hi @[[User:Qcne|Qcne]], thanks for your suggestion. I will try to find something beginner friendly on my homepage. Any suggestion on matching my tone with Wikipedia standards? [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 23:05, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::Practice, really. You should only be paraphrasing or summarising what reliable sources say, and make sure when you do you write in a dry style. This could also be useful: [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch]] <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 23:08, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::ok, but what is 'dry style'?
::::::::::thanks for the link :) [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 15:50, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::::::::Difficult to really give examples, its something that you pick up once you've done enough editing. The tone should always remain formal, impersonal, and dispassionate. Pretend you're writing an autopsy. Wikipedia only ever describes, never leads the reader or engages them. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 16:08, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
::::::::::::ah, now I got it. Things are becoming clear now. Difficult for me but will try, thank you. [[User:Sam241224|Sam241224]] ([[User talk:Sam241224|talk]]) 23:06, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


= December 30 =
[[User:Paulkater|Paulkater]] ([[User talk:Paulkater|talk]]) 07:48, 28 October 2012 (UTC)


== 01:54, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Jogershok ==
:Amazon definitely is not a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] because they have an obvious [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]] and no editorial oversight or fact-checking. I believe reviews at Goodreads and Librarything are user-submitted content, which means they aren't reliable by Wikipedia's standards either. Good sources would be reviews published by reputable publishers (and not [[WP:SPS|self-published]]), such as in newspapers or literary magazines. [[Kirkus Reviews]] may be worth a look. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 13:22, 28 October 2012 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Jogershok|ts=01:54, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kathleen_Ann_Shea}}
Why does this not meet the goals and expectations of this WikiProject?


She is listed in the Charlie Project as well:
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/INTEGRATION(festival)]] ==
https://charleyproject.org/case/kathleen-ann-shea [[User:Jogershok|Jogershok]] ([[User talk:Jogershok|talk]]) 02:03, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Jogershok|Jogershok]]: there is insufficient evidence that the subject is [[WP:notable|notable]]. Also, the Charley Project is a primary source, and as such contributes nothing towards notability. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:45, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
How can i move a article to article for creation if it has been declined once and i need the reviewers to review it once more?? The page i am asking about is http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/INTEGRATION(festival). I have added the inline citations they asked for. So if u can review it, pleas review it and move it to article space. Thanks
[[User:Integrationrocks|Integrationrocks]] ([[User talk:Integrationrocks|talk]]) 18:55, 28 October 2012 (UTC)


== 02:24, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Sivans1734 ==
:I have submitted the draft for you; you can do so yourself by adding '''<nowiki>{{subst:submit}}</nowiki>''' to the very top. However, the sources are rather insufficient. I believe out of the first six only one so much as mentioned the article's subject. Furthermore, there's no need to cite multiple copies of the same article - one will suffice, and the others don't count as independent anyway. One reference is a blog, which is not considered [[WP:RS|reliable]]. I don't think many (if any) write about the festival in appreciable detail. For example, which source is supposed to confirm the "introduction" section's very first sentence? I didn't find confirmation for that in any of the sources. The "events" section doesn't cite any sources at all. I don't think that's enough coverage to establish Integration's [[WP:N|notability]], and even if it were the unsourced parts of the draft would have to be removed. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 19:17, 28 October 2012 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Sivans1734|ts=02:24, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Felicia_Grossman}}
My draft was declined for not citing reliable sources but the only spot in which I didn't cite sources was the Early and personal life section which I have all the information from the subject herself and it is not anywhere on the internet. [[User:Sivans1734|Sivans1734]] ([[User talk:Sivans1734|talk]]) 02:24, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Sivans1734|Sivans1734]] but not one of those sources are [[WP:R|reliable]] or independent meaning they are not of any value on showing us how they are notable enough to meet the standard of inclusion in a global encyclopedia. [[User:Mcmatter|McMatter]] <sup>([[User talk:Mcmatter|talk]])</sup>/<sub>([[Special:Contributions/Mcmatter|contrib]])</sub> 04:55, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Architecturemps]] ==
:Hello, @[[User:Sivans1734|Sivans1734]]. In addition to what McMatter said, please note that '''all''' information in a Wikipedia article must be [[WP:verifiable|verifiable]] from a pubished source. Unpublished information, no matter who it is from, may never be included in an article. A further point is that {{HD/WINI}} [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 17:17, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


== 03:32, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Toothpickdog ==
Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Architecturemps]]
{{Lafc|username=Toothpickdog|ts=03:32, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Havelock Mussel And Seafood Festival}}
Hi,
This festival is happening in March, and about now is the time when people are likely to be googling and buying tickets. I'm hoping some will find their way to this article and be able to expand it - particularly to add missing headline acts from past years.
Almost two months ago my draft submission was declined as I had only a few poorly sourced references. I've added a lot since then, but they're not great quality - there just aren't many references available on the internet that I can find.
Thanks for your help in getting this article online!
Don. [[User:Toothpickdog|Toothpickdog]] ([[User talk:Toothpickdog|talk]]) 03:32, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Toothpickdog|Toothpickdog]]: do you have a question about your draft, or the review process?
I am confused about images. I have uploaded a number to the gallery but during the edits I don't know how to access the image already uploaded. I cannot find the gallery. Also, two images have been deleted by th editor. One of these is my own photograph, the other is on an open-access source and in addition, I also have copyright permission from the creator. I have tried uploading both these images using a number of the upload criteria but am I just getting more confused. Can you please advise particularly regarding the copyright issue as in this case it should not be a problem. Many thanks.[[User:John&#39;Jack&#39;Welsh|John&#39;Jack&#39;Welsh]] ([[User talk:John&#39;Jack&#39;Welsh|talk]]) 19:56, 28 October 2012 (UTC)
:Please note that sources don't have to be online; offline sources are perfectly acceptable, as long as they otherwise meet the requirements in terms of reliability etc. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:41, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
::@[[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] Thanks for your response. I guess I don't really have a question, other than to say, "What do I need to do to get this online?" If it's just a matter of being patient, that's OK; but if the draft is going to need additional review cycles, then I fear we'll have missed the peak 2025 interest period.
::Thanks too for the tip about offline sources. As chance would have it, some old Havelock community paper documents were unearthed today, so I now feel more confident about using them here. [[User:Toothpickdog|Toothpickdog]] ([[User talk:Toothpickdog|talk]]) 00:59, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


== 05:35, 30 December 2024 review of submission by EclipseExpress ==
:I have fixed the images currently in the articles; there was a duplicate "File:" and a line break that might also have been problematic. I'm not quite sure what you mean by the "gallery"; there is a "File:" [[WP:Namespace|namespace]] that holds all images uploaded to Wikipedia, such as [[:File:ArchitectureMPS Image-type.jpg]], [[:File:Interior Photograph of Gallery, Margate, UK.jpg]] and [[:File:Turner Contemporary Gallery photograph by Manuel Shvartzberg.jpg]]. It's not quite easy to find a given image in that namespace, but if you uploaded them yourself, it's easiest to check [[Special:Contributions/John&#39;Jack&#39;Welsh|your contributions]] (that's how I found those images).
{{Lafc|username=EclipseExpress|ts=05:35, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Katy_Perry_Collections}}
:I believe up to now the only deleted images were ones of which other identical copies still exist - [[:File:AMPS logo. Designed by AMPS 2012.jpg]], for example, probably was a duplicate of the logo.
Can you add more to this page? [[User:EclipseExpress|EclipseExpress]] ([[User talk:EclipseExpress|talk]]) 05:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:[[:File:Turner Contemporary Gallery photograph by Manuel Shvartzberg.jpg]] is tagged for copyright problems because it's not enough to say that evidence of permission will be provided on request - such information must be provided immediately when the photo is uploaded. Since that image is apparently a duplicate of [[:File:Interior Photograph of Gallery, Margate, UK.jpg]], its deletion wouldn't be a great loss anyway (and when people realize it's a duplicate, one of the images will probably be deleted as such).
:The licensing information on [[:File:Interior Photograph of Gallery, Margate, UK.jpg]] is a little dubious, too - it says that the image is in the public domain and that it was released under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 1.0 License - I'm no lawyer, but I doubt both can be correct at the same time. Apparently not all content on the journal's website is in the public domain; its [http://architecturemps.com/submissions/ submission page] states: "Copyright of images is the responsibility of individual authors and you will be asked to sign a copyright declaration. Copyright of the article remains with the author." There's no indication that content is released for re-use under any license. Thus the photo is still copyrighted by the author (or by someone else whose permission the author had), and it may or may not have been released under a [[free content|free license]] - I can't tell.
:For the procedure on requesting copyright permission, see [[WP:Requesting copyright permission]]; for an example declaration of consent, see [[WP:Declaration of consent for all enquiries]]. You have apparently released all of your own images under a free license and noted that on the relevant file page; I don't think any of those are threatened by deletion.
:However, the draft's main problem is not with the images but with the references. The journal apparently is brand-new and has been released only this year. Yet the article's sources are all older, with the newest three dating from 2011. I doubt any of those sources have much to say about a journal that wasn't even published when they were written. In particular, I doubt the journal is [[WP:N|notable]] (yet). It might be best to wait until the journal itself (and not just the topics it publishes on) has been subject to significant coverage in [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 20:50, 28 October 2012 (UTC)
= October 29 =
== volvo car corporation ==


:@[[User:EclipseExpress|EclipseExpress]]: if you're asking someone here at the help desk (and/or at the Teahouse) to co-edit the draft with you, then the answer is no, that's not something we get involved in. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
How the big data strategy gives volvo car corporation competitive advantage? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/75.93.149.235|75.93.149.235]] ([[User talk:75.93.149.235|talk]]) 01:44, 29 October 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->


== 05:42, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Jadan? Moreno ==
:[[Image:Symbol move vote.svg|20px]] '''This page is for questions about the [[WP:AFC|Articles for creation]] process. Please consider asking this question at the [[Wikipedia:Reference desk]]'''. They specialize in knowledge questions and will try to answer any question in the universe (except how to use Wikipedia, since that is what the [[WP:HD|Help Desk]] is for). Just follow the link, select the relevant section, and ask away. You could always try {{Google wikipedia||searching Wikipedia}} for an article related to the topic you want to know more about. I hope this helps.<!-- Template:AFCHD --> [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:24, 29 October 2012 (UTC)
{{Lafc|username=Jadan? Moreno|ts=05:42, 30 December 2024|draft=User:Jadan?_Moreno/sandbox}}
I'm not sure why I can't publish this page. [[User:Jadan? Moreno|Jadan? Moreno]] ([[User talk:Jadan? Moreno|talk]]) 05:42, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Jadan? Moreno|Jadan? Moreno]]: because it has been rejected (twice), for the reasons given in the notices and comments. TL;DNR = we don't publish promotional autobiographies with no evidence of notability. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 06:36, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Deena Mehta]] ==


== 08:38, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Cian Nollaig ==
I created an article [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Deena Mehta]] few days back which was reviewed on 26th October. The submission of article has been declined stating the comment by the reviewer
{{Lafc|username=Cian Nollaig|ts=08:38, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:I_Love_Limerick}}
"The achievements should be countered with criticism, or substantiated with additional reliable sources. Go Phightins! 20:47, 26 October 2012 (UTC)"
Hi, I hope all is well. I am finding the feedback unclear for the article's sources being declined. When I compare the sources used to similar pages based in the region; my article uses third-person citations whereas the other pages cite articles from either their own websites or websites their companies own. [[User:Cian Nollaig|Cian Nollaig]] ([[User talk:Cian Nollaig|talk]]) 08:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:{{u|Cian Nollaig}} Please see [[WP:OSE|other stuff exists]]. Each article or draft is judged on its own merits. There are numerous ways inappropriate content can get past us, this cannot justify adding more inappropriate content, otherwise nothing could ever be removed from Wikipedia. It is possible for inappropriate content to exist, even for years, we can only address what we know about. If you want to help us, you can identify these other articles you have seen so action can be taken. We need the help. If you want to use other articles as a model or example, use those that are [[WP:GOODARTICLE|classified as good articles]], which have been checked by the community. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:The draft still has some unsourced sections. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:36, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


== 09:14, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Dcbeatz ==
Can you explain me detail what need to be done from my end to make this article more effective.
{{Lafc|username=Dcbeatz|ts=09:14, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:HiiKER}}
This is very interesting. Since this rejection, I spoke to the company. They said they have been bombarded with requests for them to pay more than 1000 dollars to get a wikipedia article published. This is 100% part of a corrupt system in wikipedia! [[User:Dcbeatz|Dcbeatz]] ([[User talk:Dcbeatz|talk]]) 09:14, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


:Hi @[[User:Dcbeatz|Dcbeatz]], that is an unfortunate ongoing scam by scammers who are not affiliated with Wikipedia. Please carefully read (and show the company) [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Scam warning]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 09:20, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
I have tried putting in all the media & reliable references and written the article with a bias view itself. Awaiting your response
:Yes, this is a scam that Wikipedia has nothing to do with. Scammers monitor this and other pages to then contact the subjects of drafts. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:Dcbeatz|Dcbeatz]]: it's also interesting that you're on speaking terms with the company behind this app. This very much suggests a conflict of interest, which needs to be disclosed; I will post instructions on your talk page.
:If you speak with them again, warn them against paying any money to anyone. Not only is this almost certain to be a scam, as already pointed out, the company is also unlikely to get anything for their money. Even if these folks are ''bona fide'' editors who know what they're doing, there is nothing anyone can do to guarantee that an article will be published, or more to the point, that it will remain so. And there's every chance they are very far from ''bona fide''. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:41, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


== 13:37, 30 December 2024 review of submission by 43.225.193.153 ==
[[User:Marketing ACM|Marketing ACM]] ([[User talk:Marketing ACM|talk]]) 05:09, 29 October 2012 (UTC)Marketing_ACM
{{Lafc|username=43.225.193.153|ts=13:37, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Md_Tauseef_Alam}}
How to add more references when it is not available in Web, although I can find is just few social media profiles along research paper publications [[Special:Contributions/43.225.193.153|43.225.193.153]] ([[User talk:43.225.193.153|talk]]) 13:37, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


:Remember to log in when posting. Sources do not need to be online, see [[WP:REFB|Referencing for Beginners]] to learn how to write references. Social media profiles do not establish [[WP:BIO|that the person is notable]]; an article should primarily summarize what independent [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] with significant coverage choose on their own to say about the person. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 13:40, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:Well, Mehta has been the subject of significant coverage in reliable sources; she's clearly notable. But much of the article's content is currently not supported by those sources: For example, the "education" and "personal life" sections don't cite any sources, and none of the draft's current sources mentions Mehta's education at Sydenham College. The source for her "Special Contribution to Indian Capital Market" award is the organization bestowing the award, a [[WP:PRIMARY|primary source]]. An independent source would be much better. And the ''Economic Times'' article doesn't say that she has been elected president of the BSE, but that she was about to be elected. A source confirming that she did indeed win that election would be nice. On the other hand the ''Sunday Times of India'' article gives some details on Mehta's early career that the draft currently doesn't use. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:24, 29 October 2012 (UTC)


== 17:23, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Microesoft1212 ==
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Ghanaian UK Based Achievement Awards]] ==
{{Lafc|username=Microesoft1212|ts=17:23, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Chellikere}}
Hello, while writing the article for this locality, I've come to the conclusion that it's hard to find sources that directly mention the locality with respect to another thing.
For example, articles rarely mention the nearest metro station, it is something you'd find on google maps. Therefore, citing for statements like these has become a challenge. Therefore, in order to still have a citation, I've cited articles that vaguely have the information that I'm looking for.
In order to get the article published, would it be prefferable if I just deleted the points for which getting a citation is very hard, thereby reducing the size of the article or should I continue with my vague citations.
Thank you [[User:Microesoft1212|Microesoft1212]] ([[User talk:Microesoft1212|talk]]) 17:23, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Microesoft1212|Microesoft1212]]: everything in the draft must come directly from reliable published sources. If you are writing what ''you'' know about the subject, and then struggling to find sources to support what you've written, you're going about it [[WP:BACKWARD]]. Also, you're probably engaging in either [[WP:original research|original research]] or synthesis, which is not allowed. Please stick to only that information which can be clearly backed up by sources. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 17:30, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
I am a member o the GUBA team and am writing on behalf of the organisation, what can i do to make this wiki article go live?


== 19:25, 30 December 2024 review of submission by UtpalSarmaAssam ==
:First of all you might want to have a look at our guideline on [[WP:COI|conflicts of interest]]; it may be better not to write on behalf of the organization at all (after all we're here to write an encyclopedia, not to provide free advertising).
{{Lafc|username=UtpalSarmaAssam|ts=19:25, 30 December 2024|draft=User:UtpalSarmaAssam/sandbox}}
:The draft's main problem is its lack of [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject, such as newspaper articles. We require significant coverage in such sources both to establish the topic's [[WP:Nn|notability]] and to allow our readers to [[WP:V|verify]] the draft's content. Most of the draft's current sources are the organization's own web pages, with some [[WP:SPS|self-published sources]] such as someone's personal website and LinkedIn thrown in. And the sources other than GUBA itself don't even mention it and thus could not be used to verify anything about GUBA even if they were reliable.
Reason for not publishing [[User:UtpalSarmaAssam|UtpalSarmaAssam]] ([[User talk:UtpalSarmaAssam|talk]]) 19:25, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:Furthermore, the draft's tone is unduly laudatory. Take the very first line: GUBA "is a prestigious, annual awards ceremony" - who called it prestigious? Claims such as that would ''definitely'' need a reliable source that's independent of GUBA.
:The "judges" sections, on the other hand, tell us very little about GUBA. The judges may or may not be individually notable; their biographies should not dominate the GUBA article. They also read like puffery: "Her songs are effortless, elegant and timeless in a way that is rare in this era of music and her honeyed voice is frequently compared to the likes of Sade, Phyllis Hyman and Norah Jones" - really? Says who? We actually have an article on [[Rhian Benson]]; a simple link thereto would be much more appropriate than this paean of praise. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:24, 29 October 2012 (UTC)


:No indication of [[Wikipedia:Notability (people)|notability]]. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 19:26, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Association of Christian Librarians]] ==
::{{u|UtpalSarmaAssam}}, vast swathes of your draft are unreferenced, in violation of policies [[WP:V|Verifiability]] and [[WP:BLP|Biographies of living people]]. [[User:Cullen328|Cullen328]] ([[User talk:Cullen328|talk]]) 19:54, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


== 20:12, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Drtasadukitoo ==
Question [[regarding Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Association of Christian Librarians]]
{{Lafc|username=Drtasadukitoo|ts=20:12, 30 December 2024|draft=User:Drtasadukitoo/sandbox}}
I want to create new article [[User:Drtasadukitoo|Drtasadukitoo]] ([[User talk:Drtasadukitoo|talk]]) 20:12, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Drtasadukitoo|Drtasadukitoo]] Your first attempt is all about you, but you fail [[WP:BIO]], and have written an advert for yourself. You have confused Wikipedia with a website that is interested in your life and achievements. Please use a résumé site like LinkedIn, and note [[WP:NOTLINKEDIN]] 🇺🇦&nbsp;[[User:Timtrent|<span style="color:#800">Fiddle</span><sup><small>Timtrent</small></sup>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Timtrent|<span style="color:#070">Faddle</span><sup><small>Talk&nbsp;to&nbsp;me</small></sup>]]&nbsp;🇺🇦 20:16, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
What's the deal with my article being declined? I submitted it for the first time this morning and got a message instantly that it had been declined due to insufficient notability 45 days ago by a wikipedia reviewer (which couldn't possibly be true given that I'd never posted it before and there was absolutely no time between its submission and rejection). The organization certainly meets your notability criteria--there are plenty of journal articles on the organization, not to mention it has had a master's thesis written about it--but much of the information relevant to the short article I'm submitting is most current from the organization's own website (headquarters, current membership, etc.). I cite the master's thesis and another journal article for much of the information, and the ACL website for the most current information. Was it rejected by an automated system? Do I need to change the citation formatting somehow?


== 20:53, 30 December 2024 review of submission by SabrinaKJones ==
I just went back to the talk page and discovered that someone had written an article under the same title 45 days ago that was rejected (from what I could tell) based on a lack of sources cited). I believe my sources establish the organization's notability (or at least I could provide further evidence of it if that was required), but my article is not being reviewed because of the previous submission. How might I have my submission reviewed?
{{Lafc|username=SabrinaKJones|ts=20:53, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:RemoFirst}}
I created an article and received feedback to make it more useful and make sure everything features citations. I updated it on 12/24/24 but have not had any response since then if the article is OK now, or if it requires more edits. It is not published yet. [[User:SabrinaKJones|SabrinaKJones]] ([[User talk:SabrinaKJones|talk]]) 20:53, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:I fixed your link, you need the "Draft:" portion. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 20:59, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:We don't do pre-review reviews; for feedback, please submit it again. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 21:01, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


== 22:57, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Moulyags ==
[[User:Skaihoi|Skaihoi]] ([[User talk:Skaihoi|talk]]) 14:16, 29 October 2012 (UTC)skaihoi
{{Lafc|username=Moulyags|ts=22:57, 30 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kannada_News_Today}}
I've noticed that some live pages on Wikipedia seem to lack sufficient sources or detailed references, yet they remain active. This has caused some confusion about the criteria for article approval. While I understand the importance of adhering to Wikipedia's notability and sourcing guidelines, I would appreciate clarification on how these standards are consistently applied. It would also help to know if my draft for Kannada News Today meets the requirements or needs further improvement. [[User:Moulyags|Moulyags]] ([[User talk:Moulyags|talk]]) 22:57, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


:{{u|Moulyags}} This is a volunteer project, where people do what they can when they can. As such, inappropriate articles can and do get by us, for many reasons(one big reason is that this process has not existed the entire time Wikipedia has existed). We can only address what we know about. This cannot justify adding more inappropriate content. If you want to help us, please identify these other inappropriate articles you have seen so action can be taken. We need the help. See [[WP:OSE|Other stuff exists]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 23:03, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
:Hello Shaikhoi! Since Wikipedia keeps records of all versions ever submitted, this one was easy to track down. Please refer to the [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Association_of_Christian_Librarians&action=history history of the draft page (link)]. It shows that one ''RoryPatt'' started that draft on 7 September, it was declined on 14 Sept, and on 29 October you came to ''that'' draft and pasted in your own material along with it, and it was declined again today. The reason for the "45 days go" bit is that you piggybacked onto an already existing draft rather than starting your own. That's not necessarily forbidden, but you didn't give any explanation in the [[WP:Edit summary]] for what you meant to do, so the intent was unclear.
:Please disclose your relationship with Kannada news, as required by policy(see [[WP:COI]] and [[WP:PAID]]) as you claim to have personally created its logo. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 23:05, 30 December 2024 (UTC)


= December 31 =
:In any case, the version you're working (on a page which now holds too unrelated versions) is better-formatted, but all but one of your references are from ACL itself. While it's okay to ''briefly'' cite the subject's own webpage for basic non-controversial details like founding date, headquarters location, etc., overall we require [[WP:Independent sources]]. That is, objective sources with no ties to the subject, like the ''Library Journal'' publication you cite once. Looking at GoogleBooks, it appears there a number of books which give some details and examination of ACL, so I'd definitely try footnoting some facts to those sources (you can use http://reftag.appspot.com to auto-create Wikipedia footnotes). Hope this helps explain! [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 16:22, 29 October 2012 (UTC)


== 00:16, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Blitzite2 ==
::I have re-submitted the draft for you; you can do so yourself by adding '''<nowiki>{{subst:submit}}</nowiki>''' to the very top. The decline message also contained a relevant note: "When you are ready to resubmit, [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Association_of_Christian_Librarians&action=edit&section=new&preload=Template:AFC_submission/Subst&editintro=Template:AFC_submission/Subst/Editintro click here]."
{{Lafc|username=Blitzite2|ts=00:16, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Class_of_'09_(video_game)}}
::Besides looking for additional sources I'd suggest looking through the old draft in order to merge everything that's salvageable (and that can be sourced to reliable secondary sources) into the new draft and to remove everything else. If the draft is accepted, that will have to happen anyway. For now I've just left a message so the next reviewer won't be confused by the new draft, but combining them into one would remove all ambiguity. I haven't looked at the old draft in detail and cannot tell whether there is anything worth salvage - maybe it's best to just remove the old draft outright. The old decline message should remain as a historical record until the draft is accepted, though. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 16:29, 29 October 2012 (UTC)
It's hard to get in-depth sources when it hasn't been professionally reviewed a lot. The game has received a lot of critical acclaim, with $1M of revenue approximately. [[User:Blitzite2|Blitzite2]] ([[User talk:Blitzite2|talk]]) 00:16, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


:It likely doesn't merit an article, then- reviews are usually how games/films/books etc, merit articles. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 01:04, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Colours (musical group)]] ==
:Hello, @[[User:Blitzite2|Blitzite2]]. Revenue is irrelevant. Critical acclaim is relevant - provided it is published in [[WP:reliable sources|reliable sources]]. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 10:20, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


== 09:07, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Thehistorianisaac ==
I just got this message on a page I am trying to create, but I don't know what to do, or how to do it. This is my first attempt at making a page so the terminology is somewhat confusing.
{{Lafc|username=Thehistorianisaac|ts=09:07, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:7th Marine Brigade}}
Recently a fellow editor(@[[User:Buckshot06]]) already helped me publish my draft as [[Special Operations Brigade (PLA Navy Marine Corps)]]. May I ask what will happen to the draft?
This sandbox is in the Wikipedia namespace. Either move this page into your userspace, or remove the {{tl|User sandbox}} template.
P.S.
I don't know how to remove the User Sandbox template, or even what it is.
I turned [[7th Marine Brigade]] into a redirect to [[Special Operations Brigade (PLA Navy Marine Corps)]] [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 09:07, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Also, I don't know if I move the page into my userspace, it won't be considered as a real Wiki article.


:Drafts get deleted automatically if they are not edited in six months.
Can you help please? brosed [[User:Brosedarts|brosed]] ([[User talk:Brosedarts|talk]]) 19:32, 29 October 2012 (UTC)
:If you are the only editor who has worked on a draft, you can request its deletion by pasting {{tl|db-author}} at the top; but other editors have worked on [[Draft:7th Marine Brigade]], so that option is not available in this case. You can request its deletion at [[WP:MFD]], but it's probably not worth it for a draft. I do suggest you withdraw it from review though, so as not to take up a reviewer's time. You can simply remove th most recent e {{tl|afc submission}} template from the top. [[User:ColinFine|ColinFine]] ([[User talk:ColinFine|talk]]) 10:25, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
::So the draft was technically never reviewed? [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 11:37, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:::@[[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]]: this draft was reviewed, and declined, [https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Draft:7th_Marine_Brigade&diff=prev&oldid=1260209297 once], on Nov 29; but not reviewed again since your resubmission a few days later. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 12:50, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
::::So basically it was never re-reviewed
::::Doesn't really matter because in the end it was published anyways but yeah [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 12:53, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:::::It was awaiting new review. We currently have c 1,800 pending drafts in the system, with wait times up to 8 weeks or so. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 13:00, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
::::::Ok understood
::::::Removed the review banner and added a comment saying that it is already published [[User:Thehistorianisaac|Thehistorianisaac]] ([[User talk:Thehistorianisaac|talk]]) 13:01, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


== 09:59, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Mohan1357 ==
:You originally created the draft as a sub-page of your user page, a so-called "sandbox". It was moved to [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Colours (musical group)]], the preferred location for drafts that are about to be submitted, but [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]], the user who performed the move, apparently forgot to remove the message that said the page was (or used to be) a sandbox. It was created by the "{{tl|user sandbox}}" code at the very top of the draft. I removed that message.
{{Lafc|username=Mohan1357|ts=09:59, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Mohan_Kumar_(academic)}}
:I noticed another problem with your draft. I don't think the sources are sufficient to establish the band's [[WP:N|notability]]. For that purpose we require significant coverage in [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject. But your sources are either blogs, which are not considered reliable because they are not subject to editorial oversight (and the information seems to be either from a band member's brother-in-law or from a CD booklet and thus is not independent either), or track listings and credits from websites such as AllMusic - that's not considered significant enough. Are there independent reviews of the band and its work? Has it received newspaper coverage? That would be much better. For example, the claims about the record label's lack of experience, the poor marketing, or the lesser appeal of the second album would all need a reliable source to back them up - but right now none of the sources other than the blogs writes as much as a single sentence of text on the band. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 20:29, 29 October 2012 (UTC)
Please kindly assist in working on my article for publication on wikipedia page [[User:Mohan1357|Mohan1357]] ([[User talk:Mohan1357|talk]]) 09:59, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


:{{u|Mohan1357}} Hello, Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell about themselves, please see the [[WP:AUTO|autobiography policy]]. Please see the message left by the reviewer as to what needs to be done; we're not here to be co-editors, just to give advice. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:02, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Jesus Ojeda Y Sus Parientes]] ==


== 10:22, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Brown Balloons ==
Jesus Ojeda sings cool songs and he is so famous and he was three mens thats uses only on intresis each one. gutar ....[[]] <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/216.100.93.70|216.100.93.70]] ([[User talk:216.100.93.70|talk]]) 22:33, 29 October 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
{{Lafc|username=Brown Balloons|ts=10:22, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Bro_MONROW}}

This draft page has been rejected by one of the editors. I already provided factual information and reliable sources. [[User:Brown Balloons|Brown Balloons]] ([[User talk:Brown Balloons|talk]]) 10:22, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:That should be added to [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Jesus Ojeda Y Sus Parientes|the draft]], and it should be backed up by [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject, such as newspaper articles or independent reviews. Right now there's so little context that I cannot even tell whether Jesus Ojeda is one person or a trio. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 22:42, 29 October 2012 (UTC)
:Unfortunately it seems that this person is not [[WP:BIO|notable as Wikipedia defines a notable person]]. This is why it was rejected and will not be considered further. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 10:23, 31 December 2024 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Proism]] ==

Hello, I have worked for over a year now on the creation of my religion. I have a small group of followers in my communtity and would like to achieve more. I have contacted national news sites to no avail. I have tried to get my religion on wikipedia before but i have no sources. Is there any way you could put it up to get the world out? Just trying to make a difference in the world. Thanks, Noah <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Vanzan15|Vanzan15]] ([[User talk:Vanzan15|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Vanzan15|contribs]]) 23:32, 29 October 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:Short answer: No. Without [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject we cannot have an article. Furthermore, you seem to have a [[WP:COI|connflict of interest]]: Wikipedia is supposed to be an encyclopedia, not a tool for evangelism. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 01:39, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

= October 30 =

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Rajpal Abeynayake]] ==

Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Rajpal Abeynayake]]
Hi what do i need to change to get this article to conform to your requirements, I can get the subject of this article who is the editor of the largest and oldest English language newspaper to get his bio confirmed if you wish. Also i have two references here that confirm most of the data i have in the article. The newspaper itself published a short bio today.
http://www.dailynews.lk/2012/10/30/news13.asp
Singhayotha
[[User:Singhayotha|Singhayotha]] ([[User talk:Singhayotha|talk]]) 00:16, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

:To establish Abeynayake's [[WP:N|notability]] we need significant coverage in [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject, such as the article in ''The Nation''. His own employer is not an independent source, and I doubt the ''Galle Literary Festival'' website is subject to editorial oversight - it's probably not reliable by Wikipedia's standards. So only one of the sources satisfies our requirements, but we usually interpret "significant covereage" to mean "more than one good source" - the more the better. Confirmation by Abeynayake would obviously not be independent and therefore wouldn't help. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 01:49, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

::Abeynayake's own newspaper is not an ideal source, since as editor he presumably has great control of the content, but it could be useful for citing non-controversial information like date/place of birth, schools attended, etc. In terms of [[WP:Independent sources]] analysing his ''significance'', I checked out GoogleBooks, and there are 49 hits for his name, at least some of which from very credible works on Sri Lankan history and literature. I would suggest perusing those and seeing what ''footnotable'' facts can be included; not also you can turn gBooks URLs into Wikipedia-format footnotes automatically using http://reftag.appspot.com . You may also find more gBooks hits using search terms like "Abeynaya Sri Lanka" to widen your search. Also see if you can find any articles covering him in other papers (in any language), ideally with a link if they're available online. Hope this helps, and as you can imagine your article will be far more useful to readers once the sources are clearly indicated so readers know where they can verify this information, as well as learn more. [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 05:17, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/DeeVS]] ==
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{{Infobox musical artist
| name = Dee VS
| image = Dee_VS.jpg
| caption = Dee in 2012.
| origin = London, UK
| background = solo_singer
| birth_name = Derrick Kofi Abaitey
| alias = DeeVS, Dee Versatile, Hook Master
| birth_place = [[Accra]], [[Greater Accra Region|Greater Accra]], Ghana
| genre = [[Afro Beat]], [[Contemporary R&B|R&B]], [[dance-pop]]
| years_active = 2011-present
| website = {{url|htrecords.co.uk/dee-vs/}}
| label = [[Hit Time Records]]{{clr}} [[RudeBoi Music]]
}}

'''Derrick Abaitey''', better known by his stage name '''DeeVS''', is a multi talented [[Afrobeat]] and [[Hiplife]] Artist and the founder of [[Vibe Squad]]. He is signed to [[HT Records UK|HT Records UK]] music label and RudeBoi Music<ref name="keepquietandwatchout.wordpress">{{cite web|last=ceci|first=J'aime|title=Keep and Watch|url=http://keepquietandwatchout.wordpress.com/2012/09/19/the-interview-lilinha-vs-vibe-squad-from-ghana-3/|publisher=Keep Quiet and Watch Out|accessdate=28 October 2012}}</ref>.

Dee released his version of Sauce Kid's Carolina track called Adonko<ref name="bigxgh">{{cite web|last=Kwasi|first=Paa|title=Adonko|url=http://www.bigxgh.com/deevs-adonko/|publisher=Bigxgh|accessdate=28 October 2012}}</ref> and is set to released his debut single SHINE 15th November 2012

==Discography==

===Singles===

*"SHINE" - 15 November 2012
*"Lose Control" - 15 December 2012

==Music career==
Dee got recognised from his time with Vibe Squad after releasing their smash hit<ref name="bbc">{{cite web|last=Edu|first=DJ|title=Destination Africa|url=http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/b01dd3hw|publisher=1xtra|accessdate=28 October 2012}}</ref> Wadi Mi Sika, which got everyone dancing azonto in the clubs<ref name="guardian">{{cite web|last=Macpherson|first=Alex|title=Afrobeats – review|url=http://www.guardian.co.uk/music/2012/jul/17/dj-abrantee-afrobeats-review|publisher=The guardian|accessdate=28 October 2012}}</ref> .
Dee is currently working on an EP which is set to release in 2013. It promises to be full of energy and positive messages for young people.
You can always expect nothing but future proof and quality music from Dee.

==Performances and Appearances==

• Post Club, Birmingham - 7th July 2012.

• D'Banj Live, HMV Apollo, 27th August 2012<ref name="ghanaweb">{{cite news|last=Ghana|first=Mefiri|title=D'banj Live @ HMV Apollo 27th August|url=http://www.ghanaweb.com/GhanaHomePage/entertainment/artikel.php?ID=247926|accessdate=28 October 2012|newspaper=GhanaWeb|date=17 Aug 2012}}</ref> .

• Ghana Independence day, Indigo 02 - March 2011.

• Afrobeats Sundays - December 2011.

• Ghana Party in the park, August 2009.

== References ==
{{Reflist}}
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==External links==
*{{Official website|facebook.com/officialdeevs}}
* [http://www.htrecords.co.uk/dee-vs/ Derrick Abaitey] on [[HT Records]
{{collapse bottom}}
[[User:Dabaitey|Dabaitey]] ([[User talk:Dabaitey|talk]]) 12:41, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

:That's a copy of your draft. It's awaiting review. What do you need help with?
:At a glance I doubt DeeVS is [[WP:N|notable]] (yet). The Guardian, the BBC and GhanaWeb don't mention DeeVS at all, and the other sources look like blogs. He hasn't released any albums yet, so I don't see which of the criteria of [[WP:MUSIC]] he's supposed to satisfy. Furthermore, claims such as "multi talented" or "smash hit" would have to be backed up by reliable sources; it's much better to present hard facts than such vague opinions.
:If you are Derrick Abaitey, as your username suggests, you may also want to have a look at our guideline on [[WP:COI|conflicts of interest]]. Writing an [[WP:Autobiography|autobiography]] is strongly discouraged. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 13:14, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

== My first article ==

<p></p>[[File:Symbol question.svg|17px]] <span style="font-weight:bold">Question: </span>question
I have submitted an article in AfC. Initially it was rejected due to lack of independent references. Now I have added some more references. Is that sufficient. Here is the link of the article submitted for AfC. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Mysore_Cements_Limited

Thanks,
--[[User:Cs.harsha|Chansa Harsha ]] ([[User talk:Cs.harsha|talk]]) 13:40, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

:There are enough reliable independent sources to clearly establish Mysore Cement's [[WP:N|notability]], but much of the draft's content is still based on [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]] such as Mysore's own website or their directors' report. Primary sources must be used with care, and only for uncontroversial statements; content should be ''based'' on coverage in secondary sources. Unless better sources can be found, I expect we'll have to remove or significantly shorten the sections that currently don't cite any secondary sources. The "internal issues and conflicts" section struck me as particularly inappropriate. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:05, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Fintage House]] ==
How long does it take for an article to be reviewed when a blacklog elimination drive is on please? [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Fintage House]]

[[User:Rosievero|Rosievero]] ([[User talk:Rosievero|talk]]) 13:43, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

:There's still a backlog of several hundred articles; currently the oldest unreviewed drafts are from October 22. So it may take about a week until yours is reviewed. I just had a short look; I didn't see any major problems, but the prose is a little awkward. It seems more a list of bullet points than running text. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:05, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/S-FRAME Software]] ==

[[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/S-FRAME Software]] I believe I have uploaded this article only once and that it is an informative, fair article on an important topic. Please can you advise me on what steps I would need to take to get my article published. Any help would be greatly appreciated. THANK YOU 14:53, 30 October 2012 (UTC) <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:N.Tagge|N.Tagge]] ([[User talk:N.Tagge|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/N.Tagge|contribs]]) </span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:Actually you did edit the other draft as well; compare its [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/S-FRAME&action=history revision history]. The two drafts seem pretty much identical to me, so it shouldn't matter which one gets submitted for review. However, I don't think the drafts in their current form are ready for publication. The sources are rather dubious and often don't support the statements they're cited for. For example, the source for the claim that "S-FRAME is a suite of Finite Element Analysis and Computer Aided Engineering software packages that work to create Building Information Modelling for engineers" is a table which only says that S-FRAME's capabilities are "structural analysis". That does't sound sufficient to me. In fact, very few of the sources cover S-FRAME in appreciable detail, probably not even enough to establish the company's [[WP:N|notability]]. The best of the bunch is probably the ''Canadian consulting engineer'' article, and we don't really make use of what it has to say about S-FRAME or its predecessor SOFTEK. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 15:26, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

== what inspired Antoni gaudi's designs for building ==

What inspired Gntoni gaudi's designs for buildings? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/82.22.110.80|82.22.110.80]] ([[User talk:82.22.110.80|talk]]) 15:16, 30 October 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:[[Image:Symbol move vote.svg|20px]] '''This page is for questions about the [[WP:AFC|Articles for creation]] process. Please consider asking this question at the [[Wikipedia:Reference desk]]'''. They specialize in knowledge questions and will try to answer any question in the universe (except how to use Wikipedia, since that is what the [[WP:HD|Help Desk]] is for). Just follow the link, select the relevant section, and ask away. You could always try {{Google wikipedia||searching Wikipedia}} for an article related to the topic you want to know more about. I hope this helps.<!-- Template:AFCHD --> [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 15:26, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Chrysalix Energy Venture Capital]] ==


== 13:58, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Lorenzo Lwanga ==
{{Lafc|username=Lorenzo Lwanga|ts=13:58, 31 December 2024|draft=User:Lorenzo_Lwanga/sandbox}}
Hello,
Hello,


I could use a live walk-through on how to edit a few things. Am having trouble with my first article. [[User:Lorenzo Lwanga|Lorenzo Lwanga]] ([[User talk:Lorenzo Lwanga|talk]]) 13:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
I'm having a tough time sourcing my article. Do press releases not count as a source? Also, if a claim is made (and backed up by a primary source like their website), should I even bother citing it?

Thanks

[[User:Jammer19|Jammer19]] ([[User talk:Jammer19|talk]]) 16:23, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

:Press releases are cosidered [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]] because they're written by one of the participants in the events they describe. Wikipedia content should be based on reliable secondary sources, such as newspaper articles. Primary sources may be used for uncontroversial details (such as a company's founding date, for example), but they must be used with care lest we assign them [[WP:UNDUE|undue weight]]. More relevantly, they don't suffice to establish a subject's [[WP:N|notability]] (that requires significant coverage in reliable sources that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject) and thus cannot show that we should have an article on the topic in the first place. So it's certainly better to cite a primary source than no source at all, but a secondary source is ''much'' better still. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 16:43, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

== Please help me edit my submission as it keeps being declined ==

Hello there,

I would very much appreciate some help as I keep trying to add valid impartial sources to my article on the Curzon Memories App but even when I try and update it, it keeps being declined.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Curzon_Memories_App

I updated it quite substantially a few weeks ago and noone has reviewed it.

How do I get someone to have another look and if possible can you see any particular issues that could be amended to allow publication??

Any help or advice you can give would be much appreciated.

Many thanks,

Charlotte <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Croftscv|Croftscv]] ([[User talk:Croftscv|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Croftscv|contribs]]) 22:29, 30 October 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:First of all, you may want to read our guideline on [[WP:COI|conflicts of interest]]; it may be a good idea not to write the article about the app you developed yourself. I have submitted the draft for another review; you can do so yourself by adding '''<nowiki>{{subst:submit}}</nowiki>''' to the very top. But I believe the sources are still highly problematic. There are many [[WP:Primary sources|primary sources]] such as your own paper, your research centre biography, or the cinema's website. Other sources, such as blogs or press releases, are not considered [[WP:RS|reliable]] by Wikipedia's standards. I haven't checked every single source, and some may indeed be reliable and independent of the subject (the ''Wired'' article seems the best of the bunch), but Wikipedia content should be ''based'' on such sources, and this draft currently clearly isn't. So it will probably have to be shortened significantly when the dubious sources are removed or de-emphasized. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 23:13, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

= October 31 =

== formatting request ==

Hello. I would like some help with formatting the new entries and rewrites of my entry. Huon and other editors have kindly helped me to this point. However, I can't figure out how to properly cite my new references. I had originally submitted an entry with 53 references. Huon added formatting which unfortunately I'm not familiar with. I've tried to figure it out, with no success. Could you kindly fix the formatting for me? Please note that I have not yet updated the long reference list at the bottom. Thanks [[User:Rollingwagon|Rollingwagon]] ([[User talk:Rollingwagon|talk]]) 04:37, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

:I've formatted the references and replied at lenght at [[User talk:Rollingwagon|your talk page]]. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 23:34, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Peter Prior (Gulumba)]] ==

This badly needs to be re-evaluated. There is not a single article written by the Author about the Author cited. This man is the first Australian Aboriginal to shoot a white Australian (notably one of such high status as a Superintendent) and be treated equally by the Courts. There are several Court Cases cited, as well as at least one PhD Thesis. This is not minor history, nor is it under attributed or unreferenced. I am happy to add in more detail, but this man deserves to be as well known within Australia as Mabo.[[User:Aaron1975|Aaron1975]] ([[User talk:Aaron1975|talk]]) 08:23, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

:I believe the source that the reviewer meant is this: ''Prior, P, 1982 'Early History of Palm Island' in Aboriginal & Islander Catholic Council: Let's Rewrite Our History (9th Annual Conference, Brisbane, 4-7 January, 1982), p.40.'' At a glance that does look like a source written by Prior himself although he died a few years earlier. I'm pretty sure the 1930 'Statement to Inquest into the Death of Robert Curry' is by Prior himself (who by the way is called Pryor by most of the contemporary sources), and that statement's author is also given as "Prior, P". You should probably give the full first names to avoid such confusion. Anyway, Prior's statement and the court documents (which don't mention ''this'' Prior at all) are considered [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]]; Wikipedia content should not be based on such sources. Quite a few of the other sources don't mention Prior either. And Wikipedia requires published sources, making the heavily-used unpublished BA thesis unsuitable. And quite a few claims in the draft aren't supported by sources at all; "hero" is an opinion Wikipedia shouldn't endorse; there's no indication in either the draft or its sources (as far as I've read them) of Prior's pursuit of native title, and the source for his descendants doesn't say they're his descendants.
:In summary, Prior seems [[WP:N|notable]], but I'd suggest getting rid of most of the problematic sources - the contemporary newspapers that do mention Prior and Watson's thesis seem the best we have. Prior's statement for the police currently only serves as source for a quote from that statement; that's an appropriate use of a primary source. But what cannot be confirmed by the sources should be removed. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 13:17, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Giorgio Madia]] ==

I reworked the references by using the template tool, added some more reliable sources like they have been suggested, found some more and similar references, and removed those, containing "only" production details. I hope it's better now! And I'm sorry in case I put this request and comment twice now. I was just not sure about the right "channel" to put the reworked article ... ;) Thank you for your support![[User:Staatsballett Berlin|Staatsballett Berlin]] ([[User talk:Staatsballett Berlin|talk]]) 10:41, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
::Hello. I've had a look at the article. The new references are a great improvement. They establish notability and are to reliable independent sources. I'm going to move the article onto the encyclopedia shortly. It will take a few minutes. Best wishes, [[User:Voceditenore|Voceditenore]] ([[User talk:Voceditenore|talk]]) 12:42, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

== about new articles ==

I have some poems composed be myself. These have not been yet published in any source. So if I write them here, is there any probability to be used them by others. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Dev Kumar Tiwari|Dev Kumar Tiwari]] ([[User talk:Dev Kumar Tiwari|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Dev Kumar Tiwari|contribs]]) 14:16, 31 October 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:Short answer: No. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a publisher of poetry, and an encyclopedia article on a poem that has not been published elsewhere would be considered [[WP:OR|original research]] and unsuitable for Wikipedia. The [http://poetry.wikia.com/wiki/Poetry_wiki Poetry Wiki] may be a better venue. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:24, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

== North Woods Law (TV series) ==

Hi, I just created a Wiki article for a tv show called North Woods Law and it didn't pass the review because copyright infringement, but I work for the the show and my boss the (show runner) asked me to make it. How can I resubmit the page without it being seen as copyright infringement. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:JohnCoffee64|JohnCoffee64]] ([[User talk:JohnCoffee64|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/JohnCoffee64|contribs]]) 19:30, 31 October 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:First of all you may want to read our guideline on [[WP:COI|conflicts of interest]]. It may be better to wait until someone not involved with the show writes an article.
:Regarding the copyright issue: Wikipedia publishes [[free content]] that's available under the [[Wikipedia:Text of Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License|CC-BY-SA 3.0 License]]. The copyright holder may release the text under that license (see [[WP:Requesting copyright permission]] for details; an example release form is given at [[Wikipedia:Declaration of consent for all enquiries]]), but usually it's easier to just rewrite the text in your own words than to bother with the copyrighted text.
:Wikipedia content must be based on [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject, such as reviews published in newspapers or TV magazines. That disqualifies Animal Planet's website anyway. We require significant coverage in such sources, both to establish the show's [[WP:N|notability]] and to allow our readers to [[WP:V|verify]] the article's content. The draft's only independent source was a very short blurb from ''TV Guide''; that's probably the kind of routine coverage every TV program receives and not significant enough (and "significant coverage" usually means "more than just a single source" anyway).
:Furthermore, the draft's tone was more reminiscent of an advertisement than an encyclopedia article: "Each punch of the time clock is a ticket to extreme danger and drama"? Says who? That would either need a source backing it up (and preferably a source relating that statement to the TV show) or it would have to be rewritten or removed.
:In summary, my suggestion is that if you intend to write that article yourself you should make doubly sure that your draft is based on independent reliable sources and that it is written from a [[WP:NPOV|neutral point of view]] - I'd abandon the current version outright and start over from scratch. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 20:37, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The Red Velvet Boys]] ==
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Greg Longstaff:Greg Longstaff was originally from the small town of Beech Creek, Pennsylvania. Greg Longstaff went to the Central High school where he was voted prom king in 1971. Greg Longstaff was a notorious "Player" in high school and was rumored to have dated every attractive woman in his graduating class. Longstaff went on to attend the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill were he met Vente Johnson and Mark Flattery, who would go on to become the other members of The Red Velvet Boys. Vente Johnson: Vente Johnson was a shy child from Bowlegs, Oklahoma. Johnson attended Bowlegs High School, where he began to break out of his shell by dating the Senior Prom Queen his freshman year. Johnson would go on to date over 65 women in his four year tenure at Bowlegs High School. Vente Johnson suave, laid back personality made him the first unanimous pick for prom king in Bowleg's High School history. Vente Johnson received a full scholarship to Harvard University but instead chose to attend the University of North Carolina in 1972. Mark Flattery: Mark Flattery was widely known as the most reserved of The Red Velvet Boys. Flattery came from a city near Cleveland, Ohio called Chagrin Falls. There he attended Kenston High School and found time to be the captain of the basketball team, salutatorian, and prom king in 1971. Despite receiving a basketball scholarship from Dartmouth University, Mark Flattery attended the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. History: Although the true beginning of The Red Velvet Boys is unknown, it is known that the three men became acquainted with each other on October 11th, 1972 at fraternity party in Chapel Hill. The three men lived in southern campus of Chapel Hill and quickly became good friends. Campus life for The Red Velvet Boys was very entertaining. Their extraverted personalities quickly gained them great popularity and notoriety on campus. Needless to say all three of The Red Velvet Boys were notorious for the attractive women they dated. In an interview with Vente Johnson, an NBC reported asked Johnson why he chose Chapel Hill over Harvard University in which he replied, " Have you seen the women at the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill?" The group gained notice at a greater level when Greg Longstaff began dating the 1973 Miss Universe Margarita Moran and Mark Flattery began to date Rina Messinger. The group quickly became popular socialites and were regularly asked to attend parties and events all along the East and West coast. Greg Longstaff cemented the Red Velvet Boy name when he was voted the sexiest man alive in 1975. Vente Johnson and Mark Flattery both earned this award following Longstaff in 1976 and 1977. In 1976 when Vente Johnson revealed his relationship with Patsy Wood, Miss North Carolina 1971, and Peter Longstaff( Greg Longstaff's brother) announced his four week relationship with Susie Proffitt, The Red Velvet Boys became household names as the first true playboy socialites.

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*HTTP://WWW.KENSTON.K12.OH.US/KHS/ATHLETICS/ATHLETICS.PHP
*HTTP://WWW.KENSTON.K12.OH.US/KHS/ACADEMICS/ACADEMICS.PHP
*HTTP://WWW.BOWLEGS.K12.OK.US
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[[Special:Contributions/152.23.250.240|152.23.250.240]] ([[User talk:152.23.250.240|talk]]) <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|undated]] comment added 22:10, 31 October 2012 (UTC)</span><!--Template:Undated--> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:That's a copy of your draft. What exactly do you need help with?
:I had a look at the draft and noticed that none of its three sources (the fourth link apparently is broken) mention the Red Velvet Boys at all. To be considered [[WP:N|notable]] a topic must have received significant coverage in [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject, such as newspaper articles. I failed to find sources on my own. Without such coverage we cannot accept the submission. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 22:58, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

== Request to upload a picture ==

Please see [[Wikipedia talk:Files for upload#Wikipedia:Files for_upload.2FWizard.2FLicense-Copyrighted]]. Thanks, [[User:Amqui|Amqui]] ([[User talk:Amqui|talk]]) 23:37, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

:What exactly do you need help with? [[Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Articles for creation]] would be the best place to inform members of this WikiProject of the discussion, but I don't quite see the relevance. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 23:58, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

=November 1=
== What does each knob mean on a digital voltage meter ==

Beginer, looking for very basic information on how to read and understand what each turn on volt meter means, plus what it stands emblem means.

any help will be help ful in laymen's term PLEASE. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/208.82.108.50|208.82.108.50]] ([[User talk:208.82.108.50|talk]]) 01:15, 1 November 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:[[Image:Symbol move vote.svg|20px]] '''This page is for questions about the [[WP:AFC|Articles for creation]] process. Please consider asking this question at the [[Wikipedia:Reference desk]]'''. They specialize in knowledge questions and will try to answer any question in the universe (except how to use Wikipedia, since that is what the [[WP:HD|Help Desk]] is for). Just follow the link, select the relevant section, and ask away. You could always try {{Google wikipedia||searching Wikipedia}} for an article related to the topic you want to know more about. I hope this helps.<!-- Template:AFCHD --> [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 01:50, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

== Problem with re-submitting an article ==

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have submitted an article for Wikipedia and incorporated the suggestions of the reviewers, and am now ready to re-submit.

Unfortunately, when I press SAVE - nothing seems to happen.

Could you please advise me if I am doing something wrong.

Thanks in advance,

[[User:Atlas255|Atlas255]] ([[User talk:Atlas255|talk]]) 04:46, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

:I have submitted the draft for you, but unfortunately I cannot tell what exactly went wrong. You apparently could save the additional references, so it's not a general problem. You can submit a draft manually by adding '''<nowiki>{{subst:submit}}</nowiki>''' to the very top. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 05:06, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

== prakasam ==

who is the father of indian politics <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/122.169.153.214|122.169.153.214]] ([[User talk:122.169.153.214|talk]]) 08:31, 1 November 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:[[Image:Symbol move vote.svg|20px]] '''This page is for questions about the [[WP:AFC|Articles for creation]] process. Please consider asking this question at the [[Wikipedia:Reference desk]]'''. They specialize in knowledge questions and will try to answer any question in the universe (except how to use Wikipedia, since that is what the [[WP:HD|Help Desk]] is for). Just follow the link, select the relevant section, and ask away. You could always try {{Google wikipedia||searching Wikipedia}} for an article related to the topic you want to know more about. I hope this helps.<!-- Template:AFCHD --> Depending on what you consider "Indian politics", I'd say [[Jawaharlal Nehru|Nehru]] or maybe [[Mohandas Gandhi|Gandhi]]. If you take a wider view, you could go with [[Chandragupta Maurya]], among the first to establish some kind of rule over almost all of India. I don't think [[Tanguturi Prakasam]] is significant enough for the title. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:19, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Richard Rolfe]] ==

I have submitted an article (Richard Rolfe) recently and had the submission declined on two main points: the subject is not sufficiently notable and the citations are weak. Before making the submission I reviewed like articles and pages in order to assess the worth of this subject.

Given the work for which Richard Rolfe has received a variety of accolades and the extensive national coverage he obtained for this work the subject appeared highly notable. In particualr when compared to some pages already within the Wikipedia pages. Although Jersey is a small country the citations I included all came from national media including the BBC and a region of ITV for example. Mr Rolfe continues to be interviewed extensively by the media and so the article I submitted seemed highly pertinent.

I would be grateful for advice as to how I might further meet the requirements for submission. Having reviewed again the extensive guides on submission I am at a loss to take this further, (although thoroughly enjoying the process of interacting with Wikipedia)[[User:Journeaux|Journeaux]] ([[User talk:Journeaux|talk]]) 14:46, 1 November 2012 (UTC) [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Richard Rolfe]]

:At a glance Rolfe does appear to meet our [[WP:N|notability]] standards. However, multiple sources cited to credit Rolfe with certain accomplishments in fact don't mention him at all. This includes the sources no. 2, 3 and 4, which combined are supposed to confirm much of the actual work Rolfe did at Le Rocquier. And the one source that mentions Rolfe's bout with cancer provides less detail than our article - where did the additional information come from?
:I believe some of the information currently not supported by the cited sources could be salvaged by using others of the article's sources instead, but what cannot be sourced should be removed. Furthermore, the sources hosted at gov.je sites should probably be considered [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]] - in effect that's Rolfe's employer writing about Rolfe. They may be helpful, but we should treat them with greater care than true news sources. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 15:18, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

== Help removing submission ==

Hi, I submitted an article draft at AfC but in the meantime a couple of editors reviewed the draft in my userspace and helped to take it live. I'm not sure how to remove the submission now - can someone here help me to delete it? The submission is here: [[Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Apartment_Therapy]]

If this isn't the right place to ask, please let me know if there's a more appropriate venue. Thanks, [[User:16912_Rhiannon|16912 Rhiannon]] ([[User talk:16912_Rhiannon|Talk]] &middot; [[User:16912_Rhiannon|COI]]) 21:01, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

:I've nominated the draft for [[WP:CSD|speedy deletion]] as a page whose only significant author requested its deletion. I also declined the submission so no one else will bother to review it.
:You could have nominated the draft for deletion yourself by adding '''{{tl|db-author}}''' to the very top, but other than that, this help desk is indeed the right venue for all questions related to the Articles for creation process. For questions on Wikipedia in general you may find the [[WP:Help desk|main help desk]] a better place. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 21:39, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

::Thanks, really appreciate your help. [[User:16912_Rhiannon|16912 Rhiannon]] ([[User talk:16912_Rhiannon|Talk]] &middot; [[User:16912_Rhiannon|COI]]) 22:30, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Oliver McGee]] ==

Hi - I have added new references - not sure if I submitted my article for review again properly. Can you help? thanks!

Kathryn <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Kmitch419|Kmitch419]] ([[User talk:Kmitch419|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Kmitch419|contribs]]) 21:41, 1 November 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:You did submit the article properly; as long as there's a "review waiting" message and the page is categorized among the [[:Category:Pending AfC submissions|pending AfC submissions]] (the very last line), everything is ok.
:However, I don't think the references are sufficient. Most of them seem to be [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]] such as McGee's own website or those of organizations he's associated with. Press releases are not considered [[WP:RS|reliable]] by Wikipedia's standards, and the ACE doesn't even write a single sentence about McGee. That's not quite the significant coverage in reliable sources we need. Conversely, most of the article (including all awards but one) doesn't cite any secondary sources at all. Maybe McGee has been the subject of newspaper coverage?
:As an aside, you had pasted multiple copies of the draft on the page. I removed all but one of them. Please try to avoid having more than one copy; it's usually rather difficult for reviewers to check which of the copies is supposed to be reviewed. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 22:16, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

= November 2 =

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/SwiftKey]] ==

My submission for SwiftKey was recently declined twice for reading like an advertisement. I used the [[Swype]] page as a guide for how to create the SwiftKey page (as both are competing third party keyboards for Android it seemed reasonable). I do not see how my submission is so different compared to the Swype page with regard to content. I kept all of the information factual. I started from SwiftKey’s beginning and explained it’s evolution. There are only two major differences that I notice between the SwiftKey page and the Swype page. The first is listing the awards SwiftKey has won. I can see how this may be interpreted as advertising, so I will remove it if I must. The other major difference from the Swype page is the description of the evolution of the 3 versions of SwiftKey. I feel like this is no different than describing the updates to the [[Android operating system]] such as describing ICS or Jelly Bean in the [[Android version history]]. I'm just trying to explain my thought process because I really don't understand why the SwiftKey article was declined. Will someone please explain what it is that needs adjustment (or removal, if necessary) in order to have the page published? Thanks in advance for any response.[[User:G what|G what]] ([[User talk:G what|talk]]) 01:55, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

:I'd say it's more an issue of tone. Your draft addresses the reader - an encyclopedia article never should do so. Or take this statement: "The '''Fluency Prediction Engine''' is the most notable feature in SwiftKey." Firstly, we should not be using boldface, with ''very'' few exceptions such as the first occurrence of the article title; see [[MOS:BOLD]]. Secondly, that statement is not supported by sources, and thirdly, it provides no relevant information anyway. The sentence immediately afterward explains what the Engine actually does; that's much more helpful. (There's a second virtually identical statement about the Fluency Prediction Engine a little further down, including yet another use of boldface - was that deliberate?) And maybe it's just me, but the word "solution" seems to be heavily overused. What's the difference between an "on-screen keyboard solution" and an "on-screen keyboard"? I'm not sure what the section on the "VIP beta testing" is supposed to tell me about SwiftKey except that the company likes to flatter its volunteer testers. It's unsourced, too. On that note: Phrases such as "significant improvement" practically scream for a source. If they cannot be attributed to a source, we can remove them outright and won't lose anything of value.
:And while that's not an issue of advertising, the "more information" section looks like an afterthought and should probably be merged with the rest of the text.
:Another side note: References shouldn't be added to section headings but to text. In those cases I'd probably put the source after "The followinng new features were included". [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 02:45, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

==Not a news article==
Hello good afternoon, I have a question because my Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/tropical depression 01W (2010) is not a news. It is an article that I write each day what is happening to the storm system. That is not a news. It is an article about the storm's life[[User:Hurricane trackers|Hurricane trackers]] ([[User talk:Hurricane trackers|talk]]) 04:42, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

:I assume you refer to [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/tropical depression 01W (2010)]]. I doubt that tropical depression is [[WP:N|notable]] by Wikipedia's standards. Has it been the subject of signifcant coverage in [[WP:RS|reliable sources]]? The references you cite look like routine NOAA coverage, which would probably not suffice to establish it's a notable storm system. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 06:17, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

== [[Frank Maguire (solicitor)]] ==

Thank you for creating [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Frank Maguire (solicitor)]] article for me.

As per your comment I now modified the article to take out subjective words and added more reference to demonstrate objective view of Frank. Can you please let me know how can I make the comment that refers to subjective word usage disappear from the top of the article?

Thank you
C[[User:Carolinehaney|Carolinehaney]] ([[User talk:Carolinehaney|talk]]) 13:08, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

:That comment is generated by the {{tl|peacock}} template at the very top of the article. When you feel the issue has been resolved you can simply remove the template. However, I feel it's still appropriate because the article in parts still praises Maguire lavishly with either no source at all or only his own law firm as a source. Is "Master Yachtsman" even a title? Are his colleagues the best available source for the claim that he was "respected"? (As an aside, the source doesn't actually say so.) The bare facts, in this case the "Solicitor of the Year" award Maguire won, are much more telling than ultimately vague opinions such as that about "respect", especially if there are no independent sources for the latter.
:As an aside, what is the "key cases" section supposed to be about? I would assume that it's about legal cases Maguire was involved in, but rather it seems to be a loose collection of times Maguire expressed an opinion on something, often backed up only by [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]] written by Maguire himself. For quite a few cases it's not even clear what the "case" was about: What should "Opposing View - Holyrood Magazine March 2010" tell me about Maguire?
:Also, since the draft has been accepted and is now a live article, it's technically no longer within the scope of [[WP:WikiProject Articles for creation|WikiProject Articles for creation]] and this help desk. The [[WP:Help desk|main help desk]] may be a better venue for future questions. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:07, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[User:Legmore/sandbox]] ==

Hi

I have submitted something on Wikipedia but I don't think I have completed it correctly. Is there any way I can withdraw it?

Lindsay
[[User:Legmore|Legmore]] ([[User talk:Legmore|talk]]) 14:17, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

* You need to remove the {{tl|AfC submission}} template from the article. I've done this for you. --[[User:Ritchie333|<font color="#7F007F">'''Ritchie333'''</font>]] [[User talk:Ritchie333|<font color="#7F007F"><sup>(talk)</sup></font>]] [[Special:Contributions/Ritchie333|<font color="#7F007F"><sup>(cont)</sup></font>]] 14:34, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

== what browser does you live chat work in? so far Chrome and Fire fox does not show a white box to type in. ==

[[User:Corey12|Corey12]] ([[User talk:Corey12|talk]]) 15:55, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

:Personally I don't use a browser at all but a chat client: [[mIRC]]. For Firefox you probably want a dedicated chat extension like [[ChatZilla]]. I don't know about Chrome and cannot give any advice on that. There also exist less comfortable "webchat" pages such as http://webchat.freenode.net/ - those should work from any modern browser. I just tested it, and in my Firefox the link I provided does work. If it doesn't with yours, that may be due to restrictive settings regarding JavaScript, but I don't guarantee for that. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 16:31, 2 November 2012 (UTC)
:If you want Wikipedia general help the channel name will be '''wikipedia-en-help'''. Enter any nick you would like to use. -- <b>[[User:Dcshank|<span style="color:#3cc8c8">:- )</span>]] [[User talk:Dcshank|<span style="color:#3cc8c8">Don</span>]]</b> 22:10, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Scott Jay Kenyon]] ==

Thanks again to Huon for an excellent critique of the article I am writing, [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Scott Jay Kenyon]],
and very clear pointers on how to proceed. I have tried to use this advice in the revision - I have added many secondary sources, eliminated some of the lists, and followed Huon's suggestion of a separate publication list. If Huon or someone else could take a look at the revision, I would appreciate it. I am hopeful it has what is needed but if it does not please let me know how to fix the parts that are not quite right. Thanks!
[[User:Seriouscallersonly|Seriouscallersonly]] ([[User talk:Seriouscallersonly|talk]]) 19:25, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

:Reviewed, accepted, published. [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 19:41, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

:: Wow! That was fast! And great news - thanks very much! [[User:Seriouscallersonly|Seriouscallersonly]] ([[User talk:Seriouscallersonly|talk]]) 19:43, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Westchester Bank]] ==

What is wrong with the way I am citing my sources? I've tried several times to contact the users who have reviewed my article but have not heard anything back. Is there a number I can call to speak with someone?

Thanks

Bill <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Wthogan|Wthogan]] ([[User talk:Wthogan|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Wthogan|contribs]]) 20:19, 2 November 2012 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:I don't think there's a phone helpline; since Wikipedia is basically a volunteer effort, that would probably be impractical. We have a [http://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=wikipedia-en-help live help chat], though.
:The problem is not the way you cite the sources, but the fact that the draft's only source is the bank itself. Wikipedia content should be based on [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject, such as newspaper articles. We require significant coverage in such sources, both to establish a topic's [[WP:N|notability]] and to allow our readers to [[WP:V|verify]] the article's content.
:I just noticed there's a second draft with additional sources: [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The Westchester Bank]]. I haven't looked at the ''The Westchester County Business Journal'' since it's apparently not available online, but the ''Yahoo News'' pieces in fact aren't news reports but press releases originating with the bank. Those are not considered independent sources; by Wikipedia's standards they're probably not reliable either because they haven't been subject to editorial oversight. The ''County Business Journal'' may be a good source, but on its own it's not enough: "Significant coverage" usually means "more than one source with at least a paragraph each on the subject". [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 22:19, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

= November 3 =
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Elizabeth Van Wie Davis]] ==

To whom it may concern: I am having trouble understanding what is meant by 'independent sources' regarding the article I am attempting to create: [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Elizabeth Van Wie Davis]]. Thank you so much for your help and time!

Very Respectfully,
[[User:Je 1847|Je 1847]] ([[User talk:Je 1847|talk]]) 00:17, 3 November 2012 (UTC)Je 1847

:"[[WP:Independent sources|Independent sources]]" are sources that are independent of the article's subject - in particular, sources not written by her or her close associates. This concerns the vast majority of the draft's sources. Disregarding Wikipedia links for a moment (Wikipedia doesn't consider itself a [[WP:RS|reliable]] source), we have eleven references to publications by Davis, three to documents and websited hosted by her employer the Colorado School of Mines (which are presumably influenced or written outright by Davis, and even if they weren't her employer would likely still be biased in her favor), and one to the Asia-Pacific Center for Security Studies which according to that document included Davis among its faculty at that time. That's fifteen out of sixteen. The last one, the ''China Review International'' review of her book, is truly independet, but it's not enough to base an article on. To be considered [[WP:N|notable]] by Wikipedia's standards, she must have been the subject of significant coverage in reliable independent sources - definitely more than just one book review. Maybe she received some newspaper coverage, perhaps on the occasion of her awards? [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 01:32, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Duke Forum For Law &#38; Social Change]] ==

Re: [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Duke Forum for Law & Social Change]]

Hi,

I am not sure what third party sources I can provide for this article. It is one of the nine law journals at Duke Law School. All other journals have Wikipedia pages but this one currently does not. A list of all law journals at Duke, including the Duke Forum for Law and Social Change can be found here:
http://scholarship.law.duke.edu/journals/

All of my sources cited are on Duke Law School's webpage. This is a reliable third party source. Is there some other source that I can provide which might help this page get published? Thank you!

Sincerely,
Shamoor Anis
[[User:Shamoor|Shamoor]] ([[User talk:Shamoor|talk]]) 05:39, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

:The Duke Law School is not a third-party source on its own journal. The other Duke law journal articles (or at least those I had a look at) are also in a sorry state, but while [[WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS|other insufficiently sourced articles exist]], that's no reason to create more. For a well-sourced article on a law journal, have a look at the [[Harvard Law Review]]: Sources include the New York Times, the Boston Globe, CBS News, the Journal Citation Reports and two books published with reputable publishers. ''Those'' are third-party sources. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 11:25, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

== Review of [[User:JordanJAH/sandbox]] ==

Hello, I recently submitted an article for confirmation/release, however couldn't figure out how to change the title. Currently the article is sitting in my sandbox as "[[User:JordanAH/sandbox]]" but the actual article will be titled: Christopher J. Howell.

Not sure how this will affect the confirmation but wanted to make you aware.


== 14:01, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Nandy Movies ==
Thank you,
{{Lafc|username=Nandy Movies|ts=14:01, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Bhaggyolokkhi}}
Jordan
I have made edits to my article, provided sources, and references, my article has not yet been accepted. I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me. [[User:Nandy Movies|Nandy Movies]] ([[User talk:Nandy Movies|talk]]) 14:01, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
[[User:JordanJAH|JordanJAH]] ([[User talk:JordanJAH|talk]]) 23:58, 3 November 2012 (UTC)


:@[[User:Nandy Movies|Nandy Movies]]: presumably we're talking about {{courtesy link|Draft:Bhaggyolokkhi}}? It hasn't been accepted, because it is very poorly referenced, and therefore provides no evidence that the subject is notable, either per [[WP:GNG]] or [[WP:NFILM]]. Unreleased films hardly ever are notable, so you should probably wait until the film has come out and received some reviews. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:I have moved the draft to [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Christopher J. Howell]], the preferred location for drafts and the correct title. I've also left a message with a link to the new title at your sandbox; you can remove that message and re-use the sandbox whenever you want.
:@[[User:Nandy Movies|Nandy Movies]] As an unreleased film, it is likely too soon for there to be an article about it. Press releases do not contribute to our [[Wikipedia:Notability (films)|notability criteria for films]]. Wait for some in-depth coverage from reliable film critics before re-submitting. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:However, I noticed that your draft doesn't cite any sources. Wikipedia requires significant coverage in [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject, both to establish its [[WP:N|notability]] and to allow our readers to [[WP:V|verify]] the article's content. Without such sources we cannot accept the submission. Maybe Howell has been the subject of newspaper coverage?
:PS: Judging by your username, you have a conflict of interest in this subject. That needs to be disclosed. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 14:10, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:As an aside, I was rather surprised by the prominent mention of Howell's international travels. Is that really important enough to be mentioned in what the [[WP:LEAD|lead section]]?
:There was also this statement: "With more than two decades of industry experience Howell brings to the table a wealth of proven tactics that help others reach their destiny." It sounds good, but what exactly is it supposed to tell the reader, beyond his 20+ years of experience? It would probably have to be reworded or removed lest the draft is considered to be [[WP:SPAM|unduly promoting its subject]]. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 02:55, 4 November 2012 (UTC)


== 14:44, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Candus76 ==
= November 4 =
{{Lafc|username=Candus76|ts=14:44, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Thanjavur_K._Ponnaiya_Pillai}}
I'm translating a wikipedia page (https://ta.wikipedia.org/wiki/தஞ்சை_க._பொன்னையா_பிள்ளை) and I have added the same sources added there, but my request to turn it into an article is denied because I need more references (which I don't have). What do I do? [[User:Candus76|Candus76]] ([[User talk:Candus76|talk]]) 14:44, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


:Hi @[[User:Candus76|Candus76]]. Each language Wikipedia project is different, with different policies and guidelines. The English Wikipedia has the strictest reference requirements out of all the various language projects.
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/LA Progressive]] ==
:If those sources do not meet our [[Wikipedia:Notability|criteria for inclusion]], and there are no other sources to be found (remember, you can use offline sources as long as they are published and you provide a full citation) then I am afraid the topic does not merit an article on the English Wikipedia at this time. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 14:46, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
::Oh alright, thank you for clearing that up so fast! I'll try searching for more sources :) [[User:Candus76|Candus76]] ([[User talk:Candus76|talk]]) 14:51, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:::Best of luck - as long as the sources are published and accessible to a reader (even via an offline library or archive) then it is okay to use. <span style="background-color: RoyalBlue; border-radius: 1em; padding: 3px 3px 3px 3px;">'''[[User:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">qcne</span>]]''' <small>[[User talk:Qcne|<span style="color: GhostWhite">(talk)</span>]]</small></span> 15:37, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


== 17:51, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Artennina ==
I am writing to request some advice on getting an article created for a publication that I read regularly, [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/LA Progressive]]. My submission has been rejected twice for two different reasons.
{{Lafc|username=Artennina|ts=17:51, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Roeland_Hendrikx}}
Could you please tell me detailed what I should do? I ám a decent person who has the best intentions with this article and I only wat the best for it! Only the sometimes written comments (as English is not my mother language) are not easy to understand.
Please give us another moment. [[User:Artennina|Artennina]] ([[User talk:Artennina|talk]]) 17:51, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


:You have not fixed the issues identified by reviewers, including not disclosing your [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]. Your references do not establish that this person meets our [[WP:BAND|definition of a notable musician]]. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 18:22, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
The first rejection came on October 30, 2012 from Abdullah Alam. His reason was, "This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources". I understood what he was asking, added the sources and resubmitted for consideration.


== 18:53, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Lightningbox14 ==
The second rejection came on Nov 1, 2012 from "Charmless Coin". This time, the rejection explanation did not mention a lack of sources but instead the problem was the tone. The reviewer stated,"This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article".
{{Lafc|username=Lightningbox14|ts=18:53, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Cough_Code}}
why was it rejected was it too short [[User:Lightningbox14|Lightningbox14]] ([[User talk:Lightningbox14|talk]]) 18:53, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Lightningbox14|Lightningbox14]]: [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia is not for things made up one day|Wikipedia is not for things made up one day]]. -- [[User:DoubleGrazing|DoubleGrazing]] ([[User talk:DoubleGrazing|talk]]) 18:57, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
I am happy to make the changes but I'm concerned about submitting a third revision and getting yet another rejection with a different reason for it not making the grade.


== 19:36, 31 December 2024 review of submission by DesertMouse26 ==
I was hoping you could give it a look and tell me what I am doing wrong.
{{Lafc|username=DesertMouse26|ts=19:36, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Shokz}}
Hi there - this article was submitted for review and it wasn't accepted. The listed reason was that "the draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article." I see that there's an existing page on the same subject in Japanese (https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shokz). Does that serve as proof that this subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article? [[User:DesertMouse26|DesertMouse26]] ([[User talk:DesertMouse26|talk]]) 19:36, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


:No, because different Wikipedias have different policies. What matters is if our policies are met. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:38, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
Thank you,


== 19:38, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Henrilebec ==
[[User:Mlw143|Mlw143]] ([[User talk:Mlw143|talk]]) 00:39, 4 November 2012 (UTC)Mlw143
{{Lafc|username=Henrilebec|ts=19:38, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Gerald L. Burke}}
Notability question
It's not clear why scientific notability is different from say "celebrity" notability. My submission for medical technologies includes independent cites in scientific journals, but the Wikipedia article reviewer says this is insufficient to establish "notability". It's not clear why cites in scientific journals are insufficient to establish notability. It seems to me that such cites, sufficient in scientific journals, are not sufficient for Wikipedia. [[User:Henrilebec|Henrilebec]] ([[User talk:Henrilebec|talk]]) 19:38, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


:@[[User:Henrilebec|Henrilebec]] I don’t think the issue here is whether the journals are reliable so much as independent as they are written by the subject. The standard for a person such as this is [[WP:NACADEMIC]]. Things like citation index and special awards or academic positions are used to indicated notability, otherwise we need to see articles about him not from him to establish notability. [[User:Mcmatter|McMatter]] <sup>([[User talk:Mcmatter|talk]])</sup>/<sub>([[Special:Contributions/Mcmatter|contrib]])</sub> 19:44, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:The reviewers who look at the submissions usually use canned responses that address the most severe issue - it may happen that the draft has other issues that get resolved one after another. Since the reviewers are ''extremely'' busy (after massive efforts we still have a backlog of several hundred unreviewed submissions) they don't take the time to look thoroughly for additional problems once they have determined that the draft currently isn't ready for the article space. I'm sorry for the frustration, but the alternative would bury the reviewers under mountains of additional work.
::I placed a link to your draft in the header as intended. [[User:331dot|331dot]] ([[User talk:331dot|talk]]) 19:46, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:For example, the current reviewer focused on the tone (and I'll say something about that, so please bear with me), but the sources are still problematic. Many of them are [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]] such as the LA Progressive itself. Others, such as blogs and opinion pieces, are not considered [[WP:RS|reliable]] by Wikipedia's standards because they lack editorial oversight. Yet others such as Snopes don't even mention the LA Progressive. And the link that's supposed to point to the ''Daily Kos'' is actually a duplicate of the ''Talking Points Memo'' link. But Wikipedia content should be based on [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject - in fact, we require significant coverage in such sources to establish a topic's [[WP:N|notability]]. I don't think the current sources suffice to meet that standard. Has the LA Progressive been the subject of coverage in mainstream newspapers? That would be helpful.
::This is exactly what's not clear. The articles cited are not by Burke, they are about Burke's scientific research projects. The work of Burke and his team were vetted and published by independent scientific journals (Harvard Medical School. Journal of Neurosurgery, Canadian Medical Journal, Departments of Pathology and Surgery,Harvard Medical School,and the Neurosurgical Service of The Children's Medical Center,Boston,Massachusettsetc). If Burke's name appears in the article, it is simply because he was the team leader responsible for assembling and recording the enormous amount of work of the various research teams. Otherwise, modern scientists are unable to understand where these discoveries were made. I could be wrong, but it appears to me that the Wikipedia reviewers are not familiar with older scientific journals that were responsible for vetting (and validating) this type of pioneering medical research. This, for example, was the first known instance of an engineering institution (Cal-Tech) engaging in innovative medical research. Can you provide some clarity for us? [[User:Henrilebec|Henrilebec]] ([[User talk:Henrilebec|talk]]) 20:19, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:Regarding the tone, the draft does take a very positive view of the LA Progressive. For example, it notes the LA progressive upholds "the long held tradition of advocacy journalism" (twice). Firstly, such a claim should be backed up by a secondary source. Secondly, that statement is rather vague. Whose tradition is that? Since when was it held? Don't we just mean that the LA Progressive is an example of advocacy journalism? The "controversy" section is another egregious example: First the draft engages in a lengthy explanation of Sarah Palin's background that's rather irrelevant to the LA Progressive. Then it one-sidedly reports the LA Progressive's uncorroborated coverage as fact (Snopes, for example, doesn't just report that the story exists but that by its very nature it is unverifiable) and finally engages in some quote mining by implying that BaileyWo endorsed the LA Progressive's accuracy when in fact he refers to a 63-page PDF "Vetting" file compiled by the Democratic Party in Alaska. According to the Jefferson County Republicans, ''Daily Kos'' removed its post on the subject - if that's true, it would be rather strong evidence ''against'' the story's reliability. A somewhat less severe example of inappropriate tone is the mention of the "concentration of newspaper ownership in the hands of a few" - I doubt there's any reliable source connecting that to the LA Progressive, and without such a source it becomes [[WP:OR|original research]], something Wikipedia should not engage in.
:::@[[User:Henrilebec|Henrilebec]] Ref 3 and 4 list Burke as an author, so valid to use as a supporting material for information but have no value in establishing notability. The age of the journals make no difference in how we assess, that being said many reviewers are not familiar with the specific [[WP:NACADEMIC]] as it is a more complex and dynamic policy then the more generally applied [[WP:GNG]]. So I am assuming you think they meet criteria 1 of the academic criteria, which may be the case, but I am also not comfortable in this standard enough to assess what a significant contribution to their field would be and how to prove it without cite bombing the article. In my attempts to look up a number of citations of his work I've been unable to get a feeling for this and it could be due to the age of the work in question. I will ping @[[User:WhatamIdoing|WhatamIdoing]] here, as they are more familiar with this subject and maybe can provide more insight then I can. [[User:Mcmatter|McMatter]] <sup>([[User talk:Mcmatter|talk]])</sup>/<sub>([[Special:Contributions/Mcmatter|contrib]])</sub> 22:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC)
:And while that wouldn't stop the draft from being accepted, it would profit from some copyediting. I fixed a couple of (surprisingly systematic) typos, but there may be more. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 02:55, 4 November 2012 (UTC)


== 19:58, 31 December 2024 review of submission by 188.229.34.79 ==
Thank you [[User:Huon|Huon]] -- you obviously spent a considerable amount of time on answering my question. I will work on it, using your suggestions and resubmit.
{{Lafc|username=188.229.34.79|ts=19:58, 31 December 2024|draft=Draft:Kılıbıklar ve Kıvırcık Korkusuz Kamber}}
New [[Special:Contributions/188.229.34.79|188.229.34.79]] ([[User talk:188.229.34.79|talk]]) 19:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC)


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December 26

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06:11, 26 December 2024 review of submission by 117.254.37.23

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My draft article has been rejected multiple times and I am trying to get it approved. I will submit one more edit. I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025. Appreciate the community's help. 117.254.37.23 (talk) 06:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Firstly, if you're Ssaisushanth45, please log into your account whenever editing.
Secondly, bear in mind that as a paid user, you are not allowed to attempt publishing this yourself; you must go through the AfC review system (as you are now doing).
I cannot find any multiple rejections or even declines. One version was deleted from the main article space for being purely promotional. Another was moved into the draft space, where it has been declined ones. Or have you created this under other titles and/or other user accounts?
It isn't clear what support you require. Please ask specific questions, if you have any.
We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us. Wikipedia is not edited to a deadline.
Finally, you yourself should read, and more to the point show to you boss, this: WP:BOSS. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:39, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks DoubleGrazing. I had published the article and was put into Speedy Deletion mode. After a couple of back and forths, one of the reviewers had moved the article to draft space. There are no other versions. Not sure how you interpret "I request any experienced editors to help me refine this article so I can get it approved before Jan 1, 2025" for this
"We do not get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. More generally, you will struggle to find anyone in the wider community to do that, on a subject in which few other editors have any interest. Besides, you are being paid to create this, not us (we're all volunteers), so why would anyone else do your job for you?
As for your Jan 1 deadline (whether self- or externally imposed), that isn't a consideration for us."
Other reviewers were kind enough to point out areas in my article which violated certain rules - I was merely requesting more of the same once I submit my edited version for review and noting this is a priority for me.
Ssaisushanth45 (talk) 06:55, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Ssaisushanth45: if all you're requesting is another review (after you resubmit your draft), then that is what you will get anyway; there is no need to request it in advance here at the help desk. When you get your review is another matter; we have over 1,800 pending drafts in the system, the oldest have been waiting for two months, and therefore we cannot promise this will happen before your deadline. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

06:47, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Ramakrishnan.babug

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May I know the reason for rejecting my article?

Ramakrishnan.babug (talk) 06:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Ramakrishnan.babug Wikipedia is not for self-promotion. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 06:49, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

15:22, 26 December 2024 review of submission by Shaurya4455

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regarding to uploading a new page or Article i want upload my self article on Wikipedia how can i upload it Shaurya4455 (talk) 15:22, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft has been rejected there is zero evidence that you pass the criteria at WP:GNG. Theroadislong (talk) 15:26, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Shaurya4455 (ec) I fixed your post to provide a link to your draft as intended. The short answer to your question is, you don't. Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell the world about themselves. Please read the autobiography policy. 331dot (talk) 15:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:25, 26 December 2024 review of submission by CorosanD

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Would you tell me what is missing or not done right in the latest draft of the article, so to be sure it would be accepted next time when submitted ? Thank you. CorosanD (talk) 19:25, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CorosanD: That's the purpose of the review – submit the draft if you think it is ready, and the reviewer will evaluate whether anything is missing. --bonadea contributions talk 19:53, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, @CorosanD. I'm afraid that what is not done right is exactly what most people do when they try the challenging task of creating a Wikipedia article before spending time learning how Wikipedia works. My earnest advice to new editors is to not even think about trying to create an article until you have spent several weeks - at least - learning about how Wikipedia works by making improvements to existing articles. Once you have understood core policies such as verifiability, neutral point of view, reliable, independent sources, and notability, and experienced how we handle disagreements with other editors (the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle), then you might be ready to read your first article carefully, and try creating a draft.
Specifically: large parts of your draft are unreferenced, which suggests that you wrote the draft BACKWARDS, starting with what you know, rather than starting with what your sources said. Wikipedia isn't intersted in what you know (or what I know): it is only interested in what reliable published sources say.
Furthermore, not many of your sources meet the triple criteria of being reliable, independent, and containing significant coverage of Boladjiev - see WP:42.
Next, external references are almost never permitted within the text of an article, and should be removed. I see that one of them is in fact to an article in another Wikipedia (bg-wiki). You can wikilink to that using the template {{ill}}: so {{ill|Union of Bulgarian Composers|bg|Съюз на Българските Композитори}} is displayed as Union of Bulgarian Composers [bg] - a redlink because there is no such article in the English Wikipedia, but with the blue "[bg]" link to the Bulgarian article. If ever somebody write the English article, the template will automatically link to it.
The last point is that I believe that all the images you have uploaded are copyright violations, and I have nominated most of them for deletion. (I have left the poster, because I think it is probably below the COM:Threshold of originality, and so is in the public domain).
You have claimed that all these images are your own work, which I very much doubt, and you have purported to grant a licence on them: unless you actually do hold the copyright on these images, you do not have the legal power to do so. Please see image use policy. However, the presence or absence of images does not affect whether a draft is accepted, so I suggest you remove the images, and worry about getting properly licensed copies later on. ColinFine (talk) 20:38, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
User has had a helpful discussion in the IRC Live Chat where we've gone over the copyright issues and source issues. Thanks for your excellent advice too, @ColinFine qcne (talk) 20:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

December 27

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03:24, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin

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Hi, I'm asking for any advice on how to get this article approved.

Today, I cited every paragraph and attempted to strip it of all subjective, opinionated language. I really hope I can get this done! Thank you. Fuzzpumpkin (talk) 03:24, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Fuzzpumpkin Instead of reviewing it formally I have left you a comment which I hope you will find useful. The comment shows what would prejudice acceptance. I have not checked beyond that comment. When you are happy, please resubmit for review 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:53, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

08:01, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Al Gattany

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Reject my article reason copyright license: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n3LSZFQHZoNZPJJVyJ-F5kmHApr5wLyM/view?usp=drivesdk Al Gattany (talk) 08:01, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Al Gattany: I'm not sure what you're asking, but the source from where the content was copied clearly claims copyright. All the document in your Google Drive folder says is who owns the domain name, which has nothing to do with this matter. (And for future reference, please don't link to cloud drive content, many users are rightly concerned about clicking on such links.) -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:04, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok thanks Al Gattany (talk) 08:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Al Gattany, your draft completely fails to make the case that Mohammad Hossain is a Notable person deserving of a Wikipedia article. Cullen328 (talk) 08:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

12:42, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi

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Please assist me with how I can make edits to my article. I didn't understand where I was making mistakes and how to avoid them. I'll be grateful as a newbie. So, please mentor me while editing. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 12:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Itsfaizanfaizi Please look at not only my recent second decline, but the body of the article, where I have left a ,multitude of tags designed to help you. Then come back here and ask further questions in this thread explaining what extra information you would like 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 12:46, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I addressed the peacock prose by removing or rephrasing exaggerated terms and subjective descriptions. And also add citations for indepth and reliable resources. Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 13:11, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Itsfaizanfaizi I have not looked to check, nor will I. I trust what you have said; thank you. If you are confident that this is likely to be accepted then please resubmit for review. If you lack that confidence, then do additional work before resubmissiom. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 13:21, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Unfortunately another reviewer found that the work done was not sufficient and rejected it, still as a blatant advert. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 08:58, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

16:09, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689

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Can someone help me to edit his biography enable for it to be accepted. 2001:4453:7FF:6500:F461:BEF6:7CEC:5689 (talk) 16:09, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

We don't provide co-editing services here; it's up to you to show that this person is notable. 331dot (talk) 16:34, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18:58, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Kolorguide

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I am trying to publish something about quality control and specifically about dyne test pens, on the page it shows me the following title: "Dyne Test Pens in Quality Control: Ensuring Surface Tension Accuracy" Please check draft title. No such draft exists Kolorguide (talk) 18:58, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The name in your sandbox unimportant; the reviewer, if accepted, would give it the appropriate title. The larger problem is that this reads like a largely unsourced essay, and it's very far away from being a Wikipedia-appropriate article. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 19:14, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:00, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Movied Freak

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what should i have to add ? Movied Freak (talk) 19:00, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Movied Freak YouTube and IMDB are unacceptable sources as they are user-generated. YouTube videos produced by a reputable news outlet or similar may be acceptable if on a verified channel. The film is also unreleased, meaning it does not yet merit an article(see notability of future films) unless you can show that there was something unusual about the production of the film(beyond casting announcements, release of trailers, etc.) 331dot (talk) 19:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

20:20, 27 December 2024 review of submission by Abu muttalib

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The aproval to draft of my article is declined. Wanted and instructed to post here to know. Abu muttalib (talk) 20:20, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Abu muttalib is posting a request here all that you understood from the detailed decline rationale? 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Abu muttalib Please see the message by the reviewer as to why it was declined and what you can do about it.
I see that you took an image of this person, what is your connection to her? 331dot (talk) 20:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I got it. I resubmitted with one more additional independent verifiable source.
As such, no direct connection, except that I was viewer of the said shows and she is from my place. I am a admirer of her singing and wanted a page on Wikipedia for her similar to the Wikipedia page of her husband, which has even a Wikipedia page for both of their common friends Meiyang Chang. The image is clipped and cropped from one of her YouTube videos. Let me share the link. Abu muttalib (talk) 21:23, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Abu muttalib Please do not clip images from anywhere unless their licencing is suitable and allows onward use. File:Deepali Sahay.jpg is being dealt with on Wikimedia Commons and will be deleted unless you follow the process at c:COM:VRT to show that you have permission and/or that the licence at the Youtube video allowed you to upload it. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:08, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Abu muttalib Further; Words/phases such as famous, prestigious, ventured into tend to be words of praise, and reduce your draft to advertorial. Please look at your phraseology carefully. We require flat, neutral, dull-but-worthy prose asserting facts and verifying them with citations. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Got it. Let me rephrase the whole article. Abu muttalib (talk) 09:13, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
At Draft talk:Deepali Sahay you say that there is already an article about her at Deepali Kishore. There cannot be two articles about the same person, so you should not resubmit the draft. (It was disruptive to resubmit it without any changes after the previous decline.) The existing article is in very bad shape – it was created long before the draft process existed, so it has never been reviewed or "accepted", but it can be edited and improved. However, unless there are indeed sources showing that she is notable, that article will be deleted. --bonadea contributions talk 09:29, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK. It can be removed. I have the concerned person to send her image so that there is no licensing issue. Abu muttalib (talk) 09:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Abu muttalib Note that she might not hold the copyright to images of her; typically it belongs with the photographer. As I said images are not relevant to getting your draft approved, I would suggest focusing on that first, before worrying about images. 331dot (talk) 09:27, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

22:47, 27 December 2024 review of submission by 2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746

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Thank you for your feedback on why my article was not accepted and for giving me the guidelines that I need to follow in order to improve my chances of getting the article approved. I need to know how much time I have to re-edit the article and resubmit. Thanks. Sincerely, --Elreta Dodds. 2600:1702:2F70:C990:B1B1:D8DA:C8EE:6746 (talk) 22:47, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You have up to six months to do so. Each edit you make resets that clock. Thus there is absolutely no effective deadline. Happy editing. You may also continue to edit after submission. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:04, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
(ec) There is no deadline as long as you are actively working on the draft. If it is inactive for six months, it will be deleted, but even then it can be restored via WP:REFUND. 331dot (talk) 09:05, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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01:34, 28 December 2024 review of submission by 103.238.130.133

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May I ask why the article was rejected based on notability and how can it be improved for successful resubmission ? 103.238.130.133 (talk) 01:34, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Rejection typically means that improvement is not possible at this time; no amount of editing can confer notability on a topic. It seems like you have no independent reliable sources that have significant coverage of this person, just descriptions of their activities. 331dot (talk) 09:02, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

02:50, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Fuzzpumpkin

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Hi, I've been having trouble getting my article draft approved to be a "real" article. I'm open to all advice. Fuzzpumpkin (talk) 02:50, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Fuzzpumpkin You need to include the "Draft:" portion when linking to your draft, I fixed this for you above. Please see the messages left by the reviewers; the most recent one asks you to improve the tone of the article, and the reviewer left you specific advice on your draft. 331dot (talk) 09:00, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
There is really no need to open a further thread on this matter, Fuzzpumpkin, Continuing the same thread is usual and helpful. But, since you have, Draft:Office Hours Live's referencing is much improved since my comment, for which I thank you.
When you are sure that you have handled the all reviewer's advice as well I suggest you resubmit for review. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 09:02, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

08:06, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Itsfaizanfaizi

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my article has been rejected 2 times. I understand it was rejected due to concerns about advertising and notability. Could you provide specific feedback on the promotional aspects and what type of sources would demonstrate sufficient notability? I am eager to revise the article to meet Wikipedia's standards.

Itsfaizanfaizi (talk) 08:06, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Itsfaizanfaizi: slight correction, your draft was previously declined twice, and has now been rejected. Rejection means it won't be considered any further.
The relevant notability criterion is WP:NBUILD, which means that we require significant coverage in multiple sources that meet the WP:GNG standard. Your draft cites no such source. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:32, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

09:28, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Johnsonbl9ck

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Reviewed End Johnsonbl9ck (talk) 09:28, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Johnsonbl9ck it hasn't been reviewed yet, and don't add fake notices, thanks. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 09:30, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
But it is a waste of everybody's time to submit a draft with no content and no sources. A Wikipedia article should be a summary of what independent reliable sources say about a notable subject, and very little else. Please see WP:REFB. ColinFine (talk) 22:15, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:07, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Durgaprasadpetla

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I am a beginner on Wikipedia and need some help. I was trying to edit the Talk:Kambala Srinivas Rao page, but I encountered a message saying it was deleted under G8 (talk page of a deleted page). I would like to know: Is it possible to restore the talk page, and under what circumstances? How can I address content or discussions related to the deleted page appropriately? Are there specific steps I should follow to create or request the recreation of the article itself? Thank you for your guidance and support! Durgaprasadpetla (talk) 14:07, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Durgaprasadpetla I fixed your post, the whole url is not needed. You may use the Article Wizard to create a draft. The deleted talk page only has a comment by you. The article was deleted under the A7 speedy deletion criterion(no asserted importance). You need to see your user talk page for important information requiring a response. 331dot (talk) 14:15, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

15:56, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Hays Deutschland

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I mixed up the references, which I copied from the German Wiki site I worked on. I cant clean the references. Easiest would be to delete all references an set them up new. How can I do that? Hays Deutschland (talk) 15:56, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hays Deutschland I've removed all the references. If that's not what you meant, please undo my edit. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 12:14, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

17:07, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Dreimouse in an nutshell

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I have worked hard to make this article, but i got no way of getting the reference to show on the page😞 Dreimouse in an nutshell (talk) 17:07, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please can you disclose your connection with Saxdor? I have left 4 messages today on User talk:Dreimouse in an nutshell and you haven't responded to any of them. I have reviewed the 4 references that you have added to the bottom of the article but none of them even have working URLs. Spiderone(Talk to Spider) 17:26, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

21:01, 28 December 2024 review of submission by Accounttree8

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I have no idea why my article has been denied. The reason it was denied was "Reason as the Prod reason." I have no idea what this means. Please advise. I would like this article to be published ASAP, as there is no good reason for its denial. Accounttree8 (talk) 21:01, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Accounttree8 You claim that you created and own the copyright to the conference logo- and you seem to be on a deadline(we're not). What is your relationship with the conference?
SafariScribe could you elaborate? 331dot (talk) 21:05, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I apologize for the mistake, I'm not sure why it is listed that I created the logo. I did not create the logo, nor do I own the copyright. I am more than happy to fix that, but I'm not sure how to fix that. I am a former employee at the conference (I am since retired and now have some time to do things like this). I have been in communication with the conference and they would like to have a presence on this website, as most of our peer conferences do. I'm juts trying to help my former colleagues. I have been attempting to create this page for 9 months. It has been denied every time. I am not on a deadline, I am just frustrated with the countless denials (which is why I indicated ASAP). I am a Wikipedia novice and have tried to correct it many times, to no avail. I am just very frustrated with the process. 80-year old's aren't savvy with technology like this :) Accounttree8 (talk) 21:12, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you- you must immediately without delay go to Commons and either request deletion of the logo, or show where the logo has been released with a copyright compatible with Wikipedia's(allowing for reuse by anyone for any purpose, including commerical, with attribution). Logos are typically uploaded to this Wikipedia locally under "fair use" rules, which does carry some restrictions(they cannot be in drafts) but does allow limited use in articles.
Images are not relevant to the draft process, which only considers the text and sources. Images can wait until the draft is accepted.
As you are acting on behalf of the organization, you have a conflict of interest.
The trouble you are having is that you have too many references and the ones that you do have don't show that the conference is a notable organization as Wikipedia defines one. As for other conferences- their articles could be inappropriate as well and we just haven't gotten around to addressing them yet. I know this is a lot of information, but these are all important things. Writing a new article is the most difficult task to attempt on Wikipedia for people of any age- we usually recommend that experience be gained first by editing existing articles. 331dot (talk) 21:21, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@331dot You may not be aware that there is a logo complexity threshold at Commons. That threshold handles uncopyrightable items - text and simple geometric shapes. I believe that this logo qualifies as being below that threshold. However, advice from a Commons expert is really essential. I work there, but I am far short of being an expert.
Your advice to Accounttree8 seek immediate deletion has strong merit c:Commons:Help desk will provide them with all the assistance they require. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 21:28, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have requested deletion of the logo.
Respectfully, I disagree I have a conflict of interest. I have done this on my own volition and have not worked at the conference for 15 years. No one working for the conference had any input with this article.
Is it possible to give me an example of how to prove the conference is a notable organization as Wikipedia defines one? What would I need to do to show this? Appreciate any help you can provide. Accounttree8 (talk) 21:38, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Accounttree8 You said "I have been in communication with the conference and they would like to have a presence on this website"; does that not mean you're their representative?
To show notability, you need independent reliable sources that discuss the conference organization itself- not necessarily its member teams. 331dot (talk) 22:10, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Accounttree8 The file is held at c:File:Merrimack Valley Conference Logo.jpg, and you will need to edit the relevant section fo the page holding it. You have both claimed to be the author, and released it under a Creative Commons CC0 1.0 Universal Public Domain Dedication. Neither of these is correct.
You say "I apologize for the mistake, I'm not sure why it is listed that I created the logo." but you were required to fill that information put when you uploaded the file. Thus it is listed that way because you listed it that way. You need to rectify that at once, please 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 21:22, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, @Accounttree8. Unfortunately it appears that, like many people, you have a fundamental misunderstanding about Wikipedia. If you are trying to write an article in pursuit of "presence on this website", then you are involved in promotion, which is forbidden anywhere on Wikipedia. Any benefit (or detriment) which a subject may accrue by being the subject of a Wikipedia article is of no interest to Wikipedia. An article on your Conference should be a summary of what sources wholly unconnected with your Conference have chosen to publish in reliable places: what the Conference or its associates say or want to say is irrelevant. Please see an article about yourself isn't necessarily a good thing. ColinFine (talk) 22:25, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
And this is why nobody donates to Wokipedia! :) Accounttree8 (talk) 22:36, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Accounttree8 Oh dear. That was rather rude. When given good advice it behoves you to say a pleasant word of thanks. Do, please, pull your horns in. If the MVC is notable then all you need to do is to show that it is. Declaring a WP:COI shows a commitment to transparency. It suggests that you have done everything to be an editor in good standing. Arguing against it suggests The lady doth protest too much, methinks
Thank you for nominating the logo for deletion on Commons. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 23:14, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm sorry you feel that way, @Accounttree8. Let me give my personal view: if ever Wikipedia changed its policies so that it ceased to be one of the few places on the internet blessedly free from people promoting themselves and their activities, I would certainly stop contributing my money, and probably, albeit reluctanty, also stop contributing my time. ColinFine (talk) 20:59, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Accounttree8: Please read and attend to the comments from the reviewers. The draft suffers from extreme CITEKILL, as explained in some detail by a couple of your fellow editors who declined the draft at different times. --bonadea contributions talk 22:04, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Nobody here is remotely bothered whether you donate or not, it is irrelevant. Theroadislong (talk) 22:52, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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07:03, 29 December 2024 review of submission by RasaPetrauskaite

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Every time I try to make an edit and publish the edit, I get an error message that says that content provided was not properly deflated. This might have happened because I tried to paste a table from a website. But now I cannot undo it and the error message always shows up and prevents me from making any changes. I would like to edit this draft of an article. Could you please suggest how I can move forward with that and resolve the error message? RasaPetrauskaite (talk) 07:03, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@RasaPetrauskaite: I've just made a minor edit to this draft without any problems. Perhaps the issue is local to your browser – try restarting, and maybe clearing your cache if that doesn't help? If the issue persists, you are more likely to get competent advice at WP:VPT where folks who know technical stuff hang out. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:07, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:12, 29 December 2024 review of submission by The27thAlphabet

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Can i please request help to evaluate this draft. I have added the notable sources and links. but do help in making this better for submission. The27thAlphabet (talk) 14:12, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@The27thAlphabet: we don't get involved in co-editing here at the help desk. You will get an evaluation when you resubmit the draft. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:57, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You've only linked to basic profiles and daily business news, that do nothing to confirm anything other than Gupta having those specific jobs. Notability requires a good deal more than this. You need to be looking for independent, reliable sources that are about Gupta. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 18:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

17:46, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Gidan Fasaha

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Hy, Please Can You Assist Me Check The Errors On This New Page That I am Adding? It Got Rejected. Gidan Fasaha (talk) 17:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Gidan, this was rejected as not a single source was provided to indicate that the subject was notable. While there are nine references, not a single one of them ever mentions Jauro as far as I can tell, let alone confirming any fact asserted in the biography. Just as an example, look at the first paragraph after the lede. Neither Jauro's parents names, the ethnic group they belong to, where they are from, or his father's occupation, have any sourcing whatsoever. The only source provided goes simply to provide more information about the Yandang not the subject of the article. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 18:29, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, @Gidan Fasaha. A Wikipedia article is a summary of what people wholly unconnected with the subject have published about the subject, and very little else. If you do not have any reliable independent sources, there is literally nothing which you can put into an article. Please see your first article. ColinFine (talk) 21:03, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18:09, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Manikingr

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Greetings and respect This article, which is about an Iranian artificial intelligence startup called Alef, has been completely edited and is written in an unbiased language without any advertisements for anyone's benefit.The sources of this article are written from official and completely independent media in Iran. But unfortunately, some Wikipedia editors have monopolized the creation of articles and do not allow the creation of new articles and the improvement of Wikipedia. Manikingr (talk) 18:09, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You have not shown that this company meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable company.
This process is usually voluntary. If you wish to disregard what you are being told by more experienced people, you can move the draft into the encyclopedia yourself, but you risk it being nominated for deletion. 331dot (talk) 18:23, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18:21, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Jasminmusicz

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im a biggner so kindly assist me what is my msitake and how to fix it Jasminmusicz (talk) 18:21, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell about themselves, please see the autobiography policy. Your draft has no sources that show you are a notable musician. 331dot (talk) 18:26, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Jasminmusicz, your highly promotional draft biography of a 13 year old child is completely unreferenced and in violation of multiple Policies and guidelines. Most significantly, it violates Verifiability and the Neutral point of view. Cullen328 (talk) 18:28, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jasminmusicz: I would seriously reconsider whether the price of a Wikipedia article (i.e. permanent loss of your privacy) is worth it. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v threads critiques 20:31, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

20:39, 29 December 2024 review of submission by JIMMY OFUOYAn14

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please what can i do to make my submission to be accepted JIMMY OFUOYAn14 (talk) 20:39, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

There is nothing you can do. Please stop creating new accounts to publish your AI generated autobiography. --bonadea contributions talk 20:52, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
FTR, previously blocked accounts include JIMMY OFUOYAN10 (talk · contribs) and Jimmy ofuo (talk · contribs). --bonadea contributions talk 21:01, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

21:58, 29 December 2024 review of submission by Sam241224

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Hi everyone, I recently submitted a wiki page for review and it got rejected for overly cheese language or unreliable sources, something like that. Things gone too wrong and the page was declined. I need help with improving it if possible. Please guide me as I am new here and if its a dead end, that's also ok. just let me know. thanks. Sam241224 (talk) 21:58, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

As the reviewer noted, at one point schools were inherently notable, but that is no longer the case. Schools must meet WP:ORG just as any other organization. You should not be describing the school and its offerings, you should be summarizing what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the school. If you have no such sources, then the school does not merit an article. 331dot (talk) 22:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
thank you @331dot for your swift and detailed reply,
Now I got it, Its not what we want to say, but what reliable and Independent sources said that we need to rewrite / convey. Correct me if I am wrong. Can you please check the references and tell me if they qualify?
thanks for helping me understand whole process Sam241224 (talk) 22:17, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The activities of the school do nof confer notability; there needs to be sources with significant coverage of the school and what makes it important/significant/influential as a school. 331dot (talk) 22:22, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Content like "Scientia emphasizes a balanced approach to learning, integrating technology and modern teaching methods to prepare students for the challenges of a dynamic world. Known for its commitment to community engagement, the school actively participates in initiatives promoting environmental sustainability and social welfare, fostering holistic development in its students." is just blatant advertising and would never be accepted. Theroadislong (talk) 22:25, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ok, understood. thank you for checking the contents and pointing out. @Theroadislong Sam241224 (talk) 22:30, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, got it. So, how can I start a new page about something else. Lets leave this page here. I want to contribute but I don't think the language I use is right, I need to improve on that before I start working on anything else.
thanks @331dot Sam241224 (talk) 22:29, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You can create additional sandboxes(User:Sam241224/sandbox 2) or you can use the Article Wizard. Please know that creating new articles is not the best or only way you can contribute. We have millions of articles that need help, and editing those will help you gain experience before you attempt the difficult task of creating a new article. 331dot (talk) 22:33, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I will try to contribute to some other articles, maybe something with structure or easy tweaks before going after a big task as you suggested. I am not sure about the language I need to use in wiki content, It will take time for me to get things, but I have started to get the grip on things like my profile, sandbox and talk page, user page and such things. But, its a long journey, from front Wikipedia looks so simple, but from inside so many things are going on. Amazing.
thanks for putting in your valuable time :) Sam241224 (talk) 22:40, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Sam241224 my genuine advice to new editors is to start out improving existing articles, because writing a new article from scratch is really hard! Like trying to perform in an orchestra when you've only just picked up an instrument. Your Wikipedia Homepage will have some suggested edits you can make at various levels of difficulty. qcne (talk) 22:47, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Qcne, thanks for your suggestion. I will try to find something beginner friendly on my homepage. Any suggestion on matching my tone with Wikipedia standards? Sam241224 (talk) 23:05, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Practice, really. You should only be paraphrasing or summarising what reliable sources say, and make sure when you do you write in a dry style. This could also be useful: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch qcne (talk) 23:08, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ok, but what is 'dry style'?
thanks for the link :) Sam241224 (talk) 15:50, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Difficult to really give examples, its something that you pick up once you've done enough editing. The tone should always remain formal, impersonal, and dispassionate. Pretend you're writing an autopsy. Wikipedia only ever describes, never leads the reader or engages them. qcne (talk) 16:08, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ah, now I got it. Things are becoming clear now. Difficult for me but will try, thank you. Sam241224 (talk) 23:06, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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01:54, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Jogershok

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Why does this not meet the goals and expectations of this WikiProject?

She is listed in the Charlie Project as well: https://charleyproject.org/case/kathleen-ann-shea Jogershok (talk) 02:03, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jogershok: there is insufficient evidence that the subject is notable. Also, the Charley Project is a primary source, and as such contributes nothing towards notability. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:45, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

02:24, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Sivans1734

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My draft was declined for not citing reliable sources but the only spot in which I didn't cite sources was the Early and personal life section which I have all the information from the subject herself and it is not anywhere on the internet. Sivans1734 (talk) 02:24, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sivans1734 but not one of those sources are reliable or independent meaning they are not of any value on showing us how they are notable enough to meet the standard of inclusion in a global encyclopedia. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 04:55, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, @Sivans1734. In addition to what McMatter said, please note that all information in a Wikipedia article must be verifiable from a pubished source. Unpublished information, no matter who it is from, may never be included in an article. A further point is that Wikipedia has little interest in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is almost entirely interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in reliable sources. If enough material is cited from independent sources to establish notability, a limited amount of uncontroversial factual information may be added from non-independent sources. ColinFine (talk) 17:17, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

03:32, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Toothpickdog

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Hi, This festival is happening in March, and about now is the time when people are likely to be googling and buying tickets. I'm hoping some will find their way to this article and be able to expand it - particularly to add missing headline acts from past years. Almost two months ago my draft submission was declined as I had only a few poorly sourced references. I've added a lot since then, but they're not great quality - there just aren't many references available on the internet that I can find. Thanks for your help in getting this article online! Don. Toothpickdog (talk) 03:32, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Toothpickdog: do you have a question about your draft, or the review process?
Please note that sources don't have to be online; offline sources are perfectly acceptable, as long as they otherwise meet the requirements in terms of reliability etc. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:41, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@DoubleGrazing Thanks for your response. I guess I don't really have a question, other than to say, "What do I need to do to get this online?" If it's just a matter of being patient, that's OK; but if the draft is going to need additional review cycles, then I fear we'll have missed the peak 2025 interest period.
Thanks too for the tip about offline sources. As chance would have it, some old Havelock community paper documents were unearthed today, so I now feel more confident about using them here. Toothpickdog (talk) 00:59, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

05:35, 30 December 2024 review of submission by EclipseExpress

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Can you add more to this page? EclipseExpress (talk) 05:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@EclipseExpress: if you're asking someone here at the help desk (and/or at the Teahouse) to co-edit the draft with you, then the answer is no, that's not something we get involved in. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

05:42, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Jadan? Moreno

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I'm not sure why I can't publish this page. Jadan? Moreno (talk) 05:42, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jadan? Moreno: because it has been rejected (twice), for the reasons given in the notices and comments. TL;DNR = we don't publish promotional autobiographies with no evidence of notability. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:36, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

08:38, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Cian Nollaig

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Hi, I hope all is well. I am finding the feedback unclear for the article's sources being declined. When I compare the sources used to similar pages based in the region; my article uses third-person citations whereas the other pages cite articles from either their own websites or websites their companies own. Cian Nollaig (talk) 08:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Cian Nollaig Please see other stuff exists. Each article or draft is judged on its own merits. There are numerous ways inappropriate content can get past us, this cannot justify adding more inappropriate content, otherwise nothing could ever be removed from Wikipedia. It is possible for inappropriate content to exist, even for years, we can only address what we know about. If you want to help us, you can identify these other articles you have seen so action can be taken. We need the help. If you want to use other articles as a model or example, use those that are classified as good articles, which have been checked by the community. 331dot (talk) 10:35, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The draft still has some unsourced sections. 331dot (talk) 10:36, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

09:14, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Dcbeatz

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This is very interesting. Since this rejection, I spoke to the company. They said they have been bombarded with requests for them to pay more than 1000 dollars to get a wikipedia article published. This is 100% part of a corrupt system in wikipedia! Dcbeatz (talk) 09:14, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Dcbeatz, that is an unfortunate ongoing scam by scammers who are not affiliated with Wikipedia. Please carefully read (and show the company) Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Scam warning. qcne (talk) 09:20, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, this is a scam that Wikipedia has nothing to do with. Scammers monitor this and other pages to then contact the subjects of drafts. 331dot (talk) 10:38, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Dcbeatz: it's also interesting that you're on speaking terms with the company behind this app. This very much suggests a conflict of interest, which needs to be disclosed; I will post instructions on your talk page.
If you speak with them again, warn them against paying any money to anyone. Not only is this almost certain to be a scam, as already pointed out, the company is also unlikely to get anything for their money. Even if these folks are bona fide editors who know what they're doing, there is nothing anyone can do to guarantee that an article will be published, or more to the point, that it will remain so. And there's every chance they are very far from bona fide. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:41, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

13:37, 30 December 2024 review of submission by 43.225.193.153

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How to add more references when it is not available in Web, although I can find is just few social media profiles along research paper publications 43.225.193.153 (talk) 13:37, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Remember to log in when posting. Sources do not need to be online, see Referencing for Beginners to learn how to write references. Social media profiles do not establish that the person is notable; an article should primarily summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage choose on their own to say about the person. 331dot (talk) 13:40, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

17:23, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Microesoft1212

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Hello, while writing the article for this locality, I've come to the conclusion that it's hard to find sources that directly mention the locality with respect to another thing. For example, articles rarely mention the nearest metro station, it is something you'd find on google maps. Therefore, citing for statements like these has become a challenge. Therefore, in order to still have a citation, I've cited articles that vaguely have the information that I'm looking for. In order to get the article published, would it be prefferable if I just deleted the points for which getting a citation is very hard, thereby reducing the size of the article or should I continue with my vague citations. Thank you Microesoft1212 (talk) 17:23, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Microesoft1212: everything in the draft must come directly from reliable published sources. If you are writing what you know about the subject, and then struggling to find sources to support what you've written, you're going about it WP:BACKWARD. Also, you're probably engaging in either original research or synthesis, which is not allowed. Please stick to only that information which can be clearly backed up by sources. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:30, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:25, 30 December 2024 review of submission by UtpalSarmaAssam

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Reason for not publishing UtpalSarmaAssam (talk) 19:25, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No indication of notability. qcne (talk) 19:26, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
UtpalSarmaAssam, vast swathes of your draft are unreferenced, in violation of policies Verifiability and Biographies of living people. Cullen328 (talk) 19:54, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

20:12, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Drtasadukitoo

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I want to create new article Drtasadukitoo (talk) 20:12, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Drtasadukitoo Your first attempt is all about you, but you fail WP:BIO, and have written an advert for yourself. You have confused Wikipedia with a website that is interested in your life and achievements. Please use a résumé site like LinkedIn, and note WP:NOTLINKEDIN 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 20:16, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

20:53, 30 December 2024 review of submission by SabrinaKJones

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I created an article and received feedback to make it more useful and make sure everything features citations. I updated it on 12/24/24 but have not had any response since then if the article is OK now, or if it requires more edits. It is not published yet. SabrinaKJones (talk) 20:53, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed your link, you need the "Draft:" portion. 331dot (talk) 20:59, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
We don't do pre-review reviews; for feedback, please submit it again. 331dot (talk) 21:01, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

22:57, 30 December 2024 review of submission by Moulyags

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I've noticed that some live pages on Wikipedia seem to lack sufficient sources or detailed references, yet they remain active. This has caused some confusion about the criteria for article approval. While I understand the importance of adhering to Wikipedia's notability and sourcing guidelines, I would appreciate clarification on how these standards are consistently applied. It would also help to know if my draft for Kannada News Today meets the requirements or needs further improvement. Moulyags (talk) 22:57, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Moulyags This is a volunteer project, where people do what they can when they can. As such, inappropriate articles can and do get by us, for many reasons(one big reason is that this process has not existed the entire time Wikipedia has existed). We can only address what we know about. This cannot justify adding more inappropriate content. If you want to help us, please identify these other inappropriate articles you have seen so action can be taken. We need the help. See Other stuff exists. 331dot (talk) 23:03, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please disclose your relationship with Kannada news, as required by policy(see WP:COI and WP:PAID) as you claim to have personally created its logo. 331dot (talk) 23:05, 30 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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00:16, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Blitzite2

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It's hard to get in-depth sources when it hasn't been professionally reviewed a lot. The game has received a lot of critical acclaim, with $1M of revenue approximately. Blitzite2 (talk) 00:16, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It likely doesn't merit an article, then- reviews are usually how games/films/books etc, merit articles. 331dot (talk) 01:04, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, @Blitzite2. Revenue is irrelevant. Critical acclaim is relevant - provided it is published in reliable sources. ColinFine (talk) 10:20, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

09:07, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Thehistorianisaac

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Recently a fellow editor(@User:Buckshot06) already helped me publish my draft as Special Operations Brigade (PLA Navy Marine Corps). May I ask what will happen to the draft? P.S. I turned 7th Marine Brigade into a redirect to Special Operations Brigade (PLA Navy Marine Corps) Thehistorianisaac (talk) 09:07, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Drafts get deleted automatically if they are not edited in six months.
If you are the only editor who has worked on a draft, you can request its deletion by pasting {{db-author}} at the top; but other editors have worked on Draft:7th Marine Brigade, so that option is not available in this case. You can request its deletion at WP:MFD, but it's probably not worth it for a draft. I do suggest you withdraw it from review though, so as not to take up a reviewer's time. You can simply remove th most recent e {{afc submission}} template from the top. ColinFine (talk) 10:25, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So the draft was technically never reviewed? Thehistorianisaac (talk) 11:37, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Thehistorianisaac: this draft was reviewed, and declined, once, on Nov 29; but not reviewed again since your resubmission a few days later. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:50, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So basically it was never re-reviewed
Doesn't really matter because in the end it was published anyways but yeah Thehistorianisaac (talk) 12:53, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It was awaiting new review. We currently have c 1,800 pending drafts in the system, with wait times up to 8 weeks or so. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:00, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok understood
Removed the review banner and added a comment saying that it is already published Thehistorianisaac (talk) 13:01, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

09:59, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Mohan1357

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Please kindly assist in working on my article for publication on wikipedia page Mohan1357 (talk) 09:59, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Mohan1357 Hello, Wikipedia is not a place for people to tell about themselves, please see the autobiography policy. Please see the message left by the reviewer as to what needs to be done; we're not here to be co-editors, just to give advice. 331dot (talk) 10:02, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

10:22, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Brown Balloons

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This draft page has been rejected by one of the editors. I already provided factual information and reliable sources. Brown Balloons (talk) 10:22, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunately it seems that this person is not notable as Wikipedia defines a notable person. This is why it was rejected and will not be considered further. 331dot (talk) 10:23, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

13:58, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Lorenzo Lwanga

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Hello,

I could use a live walk-through on how to edit a few things. Am having trouble with my first article. Lorenzo Lwanga (talk) 13:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:01, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Nandy Movies

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I have made edits to my article, provided sources, and references, my article has not yet been accepted. I don't understand why . I request clarification please help me. Nandy Movies (talk) 14:01, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Nandy Movies: presumably we're talking about  Courtesy link: Draft:Bhaggyolokkhi? It hasn't been accepted, because it is very poorly referenced, and therefore provides no evidence that the subject is notable, either per WP:GNG or WP:NFILM. Unreleased films hardly ever are notable, so you should probably wait until the film has come out and received some reviews. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Nandy Movies As an unreleased film, it is likely too soon for there to be an article about it. Press releases do not contribute to our notability criteria for films. Wait for some in-depth coverage from reliable film critics before re-submitting. qcne (talk) 14:08, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
PS: Judging by your username, you have a conflict of interest in this subject. That needs to be disclosed. I have posted instructions on your talk page. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:10, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:44, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Candus76

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I'm translating a wikipedia page (https://ta.wikipedia.org/wiki/தஞ்சை_க._பொன்னையா_பிள்ளை) and I have added the same sources added there, but my request to turn it into an article is denied because I need more references (which I don't have). What do I do? Candus76 (talk) 14:44, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Candus76. Each language Wikipedia project is different, with different policies and guidelines. The English Wikipedia has the strictest reference requirements out of all the various language projects.
If those sources do not meet our criteria for inclusion, and there are no other sources to be found (remember, you can use offline sources as long as they are published and you provide a full citation) then I am afraid the topic does not merit an article on the English Wikipedia at this time. qcne (talk) 14:46, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oh alright, thank you for clearing that up so fast! I'll try searching for more sources :) Candus76 (talk) 14:51, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Best of luck - as long as the sources are published and accessible to a reader (even via an offline library or archive) then it is okay to use. qcne (talk) 15:37, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

17:51, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Artennina

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Could you please tell me detailed what I should do? I ám a decent person who has the best intentions with this article and I only wat the best for it! Only the sometimes written comments (as English is not my mother language) are not easy to understand. Please give us another moment. Artennina (talk) 17:51, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You have not fixed the issues identified by reviewers, including not disclosing your conflict of interest. Your references do not establish that this person meets our definition of a notable musician. 331dot (talk) 18:22, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18:53, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Lightningbox14

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why was it rejected was it too short Lightningbox14 (talk) 18:53, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Lightningbox14: Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 18:57, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:36, 31 December 2024 review of submission by DesertMouse26

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Hi there - this article was submitted for review and it wasn't accepted. The listed reason was that "the draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article." I see that there's an existing page on the same subject in Japanese (https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shokz). Does that serve as proof that this subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article? DesertMouse26 (talk) 19:36, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No, because different Wikipedias have different policies. What matters is if our policies are met. 331dot (talk) 19:38, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:38, 31 December 2024 review of submission by Henrilebec

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Notability question It's not clear why scientific notability is different from say "celebrity" notability. My submission for medical technologies includes independent cites in scientific journals, but the Wikipedia article reviewer says this is insufficient to establish "notability". It's not clear why cites in scientific journals are insufficient to establish notability. It seems to me that such cites, sufficient in scientific journals, are not sufficient for Wikipedia. Henrilebec (talk) 19:38, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Henrilebec I don’t think the issue here is whether the journals are reliable so much as independent as they are written by the subject. The standard for a person such as this is WP:NACADEMIC. Things like citation index and special awards or academic positions are used to indicated notability, otherwise we need to see articles about him not from him to establish notability. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 19:44, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I placed a link to your draft in the header as intended. 331dot (talk) 19:46, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is exactly what's not clear. The articles cited are not by Burke, they are about Burke's scientific research projects. The work of Burke and his team were vetted and published by independent scientific journals (Harvard Medical School. Journal of Neurosurgery, Canadian Medical Journal, Departments of Pathology and Surgery,Harvard Medical School,and the Neurosurgical Service of The Children's Medical Center,Boston,Massachusettsetc). If Burke's name appears in the article, it is simply because he was the team leader responsible for assembling and recording the enormous amount of work of the various research teams. Otherwise, modern scientists are unable to understand where these discoveries were made. I could be wrong, but it appears to me that the Wikipedia reviewers are not familiar with older scientific journals that were responsible for vetting (and validating) this type of pioneering medical research. This, for example, was the first known instance of an engineering institution (Cal-Tech) engaging in innovative medical research. Can you provide some clarity for us? Henrilebec (talk) 20:19, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Henrilebec Ref 3 and 4 list Burke as an author, so valid to use as a supporting material for information but have no value in establishing notability. The age of the journals make no difference in how we assess, that being said many reviewers are not familiar with the specific WP:NACADEMIC as it is a more complex and dynamic policy then the more generally applied WP:GNG. So I am assuming you think they meet criteria 1 of the academic criteria, which may be the case, but I am also not comfortable in this standard enough to assess what a significant contribution to their field would be and how to prove it without cite bombing the article. In my attempts to look up a number of citations of his work I've been unable to get a feeling for this and it could be due to the age of the work in question. I will ping @WhatamIdoing here, as they are more familiar with this subject and maybe can provide more insight then I can. McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 22:11, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

19:58, 31 December 2024 review of submission by 188.229.34.79

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New 188.229.34.79 (talk) 19:58, 31 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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