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Hello, I have made the necessary adjustments to the reason why it was rejected primarily; sources. There are very notable and reliable sources now as you can see. The Inan Family has become a big name in Turkey and should have a page dedicated to them. There is no reason why the page should be rejected again, since there are several accurate sources and the page is now ready for publication. Thank you for your help. |
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November 4
00:09:05, 4 November 2019 review of draft by Mritch999
I need help formatting my sources.
Mritch999 (talk) 00:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- You're talking about Draft:John Manley Barnett. There's several problems. The one you mentioned here is the sources. You've got them all pre-formatted, with reference numbers embedded in the text. That means if anybody adds or deletes a reference in the future, all the references need to get re-numbered. That's not workable. Please see WP:CITE for how we do references.
- As for the images, you mentioned on my talk page that, According to the newspapers, there is no copyright on them. That's not plausible. You may not have found a copyright notice, but it's copyrighted. It's almost certain that every one of the images you've used is going to be deleted as a copyright violation. -- RoySmith (talk) 00:41, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
04:40:50, 4 November 2019 review of draft by GouravSWS
GouravSWS (talk) 04:40, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- GouravSWS, This article needs better sources. The website of the subject is not suitable. You also need to prove that the organization is in fact notable. To do that, you will need coverage in multiple reliable, independent sources. Also, the programs section should likely be removed. The admissions section and lead also are unsourced. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:10, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
06:45:04, 4 November 2019 review of submission by Anshu2818
Anshu2818 (talk) 06:45, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- Your draft has not been submitted, but it will be rejected if you do, because it is just blatant advertising. Theroadislong (talk) 09:02, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
10:36:06, 4 November 2019 review of submission by Cdsfd
Hi! The article has been re-done and new sources have been added that should qualify the topic as being sufficiently notable. Cdsfd (talk) 10:36, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- Cdsfd, None of the sources discuss the subject with significant coverage. The topic seems unnotable. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 22:25, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
11:21:55, 4 November 2019 review of submission by Isara22
Respected Wiki editors,
Thank you for all the insightful clarifications.
I have declared my connection to the company on my profile page, as I am a current full-time employee. I have modified the article by removing the list of services, to prevent the content from looking promotional. I have added a new reference to help the notability issue:
I hope all those can bring the page closer to being accepted.
Isara22 (talk) 11:21, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- I'm sorry but no, the topic just isn't sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia yet. Theroadislong (talk) 11:37, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
12:06:44, 4 November 2019 review of submission by 193.161.89.106
- 193.161.89.106 (talk · contribs) (TB)
193.161.89.106 (talk) 12:06, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- Kevindkarlsen The page seemed to be about a nonexistent person, or a non-notable person. Wikipedia does not have articles about everyone, only those who have received substantial coverage in media. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 22:58, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
12:46:13, 4 November 2019 review of draft by Junniest
Junniest (talk) 12:46, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- You have not indicated which of the musical notability criteria is satisfied. We don't use external links in the body of an article and content like "Their music is freely available on Bandcamp, and on music streaming services such as Spotify, Google Music and Apple Music." is totally inappropriate for an encyclopedia. Theroadislong (talk) 13:39, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
13:31:00, 4 November 2019 review of draft by Than sein aung
- Than sein aung (talk · contribs) (TB)
Than sein aung (talk) 13:31, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- Draft makes no sense at all and has not been submitted for review. Theroadislong (talk) 13:41, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
GLOBAL VIDYAJYOTI INTERNATIONAL PUBLIC SCHOOL, GLOBAL INTERNATIONAL COLLEGE review of draft by RR
Rrarya6 (talk) 14:29, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Rrarya6: - as said by the reviewer, since it lacks any sources at all, it can't show notability. Have a look at referencing for beginners to see how to add references. Nosebagbear (talk) 14:54, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
https://www.imdb.com/name/nm7641196/?ref_=ttfc_fc_cr15
Moushumi Mitra with a screen name Moushumi Moush is a Costume Designer in the Indian cinema .
Filmography Mango Dreams https://www.imdb.com/name/nm7641196/?ref_=ttfc_fc_cr15
Pratichaaya https://www.imdb.com/name/nm7641196/?ref_=ttfc_fc_cr15 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moushumi Mitra (talk • contribs) 16:52, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- Moushumi Mitra, IMDb is not a reliable source. And don't add sources here, add them into the article using the guide that Nosebagbear linked above.Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 22:26, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
Request on 18:18:04, 4 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by TonyGonzalezTGI
- TonyGonzalezTGI (talk · contribs) (TB)
I don't understand why my article is being declined. It cites exclusively independent, reliable sources and reads very neutral.
Any specific feedback is appreciated.
TonyGonzalezTGI (talk) 18:18, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- TonyGonzalezTGI, You seem to have a conflict of interest with this article. I have left a note on your talk page regarding how to deal with that. In essence, you need to declare any conflicts of interest. You don't need to say "Oh I am Antonio" or "I know him", merely that you have a conflict of interest.
- Once you've done that, note that not all sources are up to snuff. IMDb is not a reliable source. Modern tire dealer, and tire review both seem like unreliable industry publications to me. The CEO corner bit is an interview, which is a primary source and not independent. Wikipedia cannot be used as a source. I'm on the fence about whether Tire Business is reliable. A films own website should not be used to talk about itself. And since this is a biography of a living person, every claim should generally be sourced. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 22:42, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
Need help for this. This is my personal page and I want to know why it is rejected?
18:23:32, 4 November 2019 review of submission by Thesecretorder
- Thesecretorder (talk · contribs) (TB)
tso 18:23, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Thesecretorder: Wikipedia is not a web host. We are not here to host folk's personal pages. Draft space and user space is still to used to imrpove the encyclopedia by creating articles about notable subjects that meet our policies. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 22:54, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
19:59:31, 4 November 2019 review of draft by CheatCodes4ever
- CheatCodes4ever (talk · contribs) (TB)
But I did put references on it! I don’t get the coding of references, but what I’ve got is good enough! Please understand me, I put references from the ARIA Charts. It failed, it wasn’t on the charts. I have got it! Don’t decline this page again! It’s good enough!
CheatCodes4ever (talk) 19:59, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- CheatCodes4ever, The reference does not show that the subject is notable, i.e. that it should be included on Wikipedia. The album did not top the charts, and there is no other reason provided why it would be notable. Also, you will need more than a single reference. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 22:52, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
20:05:48, 4 November 2019 review of submission by Cgandara2318
- Cgandara2318 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Can you tell me specifically what's wrong with the page??
Cgandara2318 (talk) 20:05, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
- As it says on your draft "Wikipedia is not intended as a how-to service". Theroadislong (talk) 22:27, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
November 5
Request on 00:33:37, 5 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Benjiebj
Hello! Sorry to bother, was just wondering if you could help me improve my writing skills for the DataLand page? Would really need help with creation of multiple pages.
Benjiebj (talk) 00:33, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
- Benjiebj, The issue here isn't so much with your writing skills, but with the subject itself. There are tens of millions of businesses. We have to have some way to determine which ones to cover, which is our notability guideline. Only businesses that have been covered in multiple, reliable, and independent secondary sources may be included. It seems that Dataland does not meet that requirement. In terms of your writing, you should take care to write from a neutral point of view. The current article reads like a promotion. It has too many peacocking words. Non-neutral phrases include "expertise is complemented and enhanced ", "Backed by the solid reputation", "strategically located and envisioned" and many others. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:48, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
00:42:19, 5 November 2019 review of draft by Nobo71
Just asking, I know that I need more sources. But I would like to know if that is the main reason why it isn't accepted at the moment. I understand that it is not ready. But is it on a positive way to be included? Could it be rated from 1-10 on how good it is at the moment as 1 being bad and 10 being great? Thanks, I would appreacite it.
Nobo71-Wikipedia.org 00:42, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Nobo71: - so it's not a quality of editing issue, so ranking 1-10 doesn't really make sense (layout and such is fine). It's the lack of suitable sourcing that's the issue. Almost all of your sources are tweets or from Sequester Access. You need several (3 is good) sources that are: in-depth, independent (no reason to be biased and generally no interviews), reliable (good editorial control) and secondary (newspapers, etc). Canyon News might be a decent source (it's not playing well with my laptop), but try finding a couple more reviews from other publications. Nosebagbear (talk) 10:32, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
06:38:16, 5 November 2019 review of submission by KBSKasyap
KBSKasyap (talk) 06:38, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
- KBSKasyap, This seems to be an average person, like you or I. There is no assertion of their notability, i.e. the reason they should have an article. Only folks who have been covered in multiple, reliable, independent sources can have articles about them. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 07:56, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
08:18:42, 5 November 2019 review of submission by Jazinto99
Jazinto99 (talk) 08:18, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
- Jazinto99, The article had no sources. To include folks on Wikipedia, we need multiple reliable and independent sources that discuss them with significant coverage. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 08:42, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
09:50:58, 5 November 2019 review of submission by Shuvo chandra pall
- Shuvo chandra pall (talk · contribs) (TB)
Shuvo chandra pall (talk) 09:50, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
This article was taken from an engineering student.An engineering student can invent anything within his limit .so i requested all of you please review again and take as a valid article .
- @Shuvo chandra pall: There are many engineering students and notability is what matters and that is based off coverage in reliable secondary sources - it is not notable. Nosebagbear (talk) 10:34, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
11:36:17, 5 November 2019 review of submission by Shivkumawat
- Shivkumawat (talk · contribs) (TB)
Shivkumawat (talk) 11:36, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
- You have instructed to read WP:NCORP and WP:GNG. Nothing more we can help. Matthew hk (talk) 11:48, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
12:13:36, 5 November 2019 review of submission by 194.243.213.83
- 194.243.213.83 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Please, can someone help me for the publication of this page .... Ferdinandi was a famous designer in the 60s in Italy. There are also official news and photos attached, but this profile remains a draft. I hope for a welcome help.
Thanks anyway. 194.243.213.83 (talk) 12:13, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
- You need to read Wikipedia:Citing sources or Help:Referencing for beginners. The subject may be notable, but you need to state which page from the books you listed. Matthew hk (talk) 13:03, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
Request on 14:18:28, 5 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by 68.103.78.155
- 68.103.78.155 (talk · contribs) (TB)
68.103.78.155 (talk) 14:18, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
i Put in one reference yesterday so it should be an article by the end of the year. 68.103.78.155 (talk) 14:18, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
Request on 19:46:42, 5 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by 83.151.229.56
- 83.151.229.56 (talk · contribs) (TB)
I'm not sure how to proceed with this article, I think the concept has received considered academic and press attention under this title, as you can see at Draft_talk:Blue_space. I can find more if necessary. Do they need to be cited in the article to pass WP:NEO or is their existence sufficient?
83.151.229.56 (talk) 19:46, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
- The advice AngusWoof left on the page is pretty good, I'd reccomend you take it. Perhaps ask Angus if you have other concerns. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:03, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
21:18:44, 5 November 2019 review of submission by 24.248.175.194
- 24.248.175.194 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello K.e.coffman. I would like to know the reason why this topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia.
What would qualify the individual for a page on Wikipedia? I am asking because I do believe Mr. David Amber deserves a page on Wikipedia because of his contributions to the K-Pop music industry.
Thank you.
24.248.175.194 (talk) 21:18, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
21:33:55, 5 November 2019 review of submission by Frakes928
I have listened to many user's suggestions and went through to remove externals links and move them to an external links section of the article. I have also cites references to substantiate the news with specific articles.
Frakes928 (talk) 21:33, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
- Frakes928, There are only two sources. To be notable, a source usually needs, at a minimum, at least 3 sources that are reliable, independent, and discuss the subject with significant coverage. The subject of the draft does not seem to meet those requirements. If you can find three good sources, feel free to add them here and ping me using {{ping|CaptainEek}}. If not, the subject is likely not notable. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 02:07, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
November 6
01:42:37, 6 November 2019 review of submission by PKeenan1
P. Andrews-Keenan 01:42, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
I'd like to remove the Chicago crusader reference from the draft page for Black Fine Art Month. I cannot find the entry now — Preceding unsigned comment added by PKeenan1 (talk • contribs) 01:42, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- PKeenan1, I could not find the entry either. Have you previously edited it? Did you create it?Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 02:05, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- @PKeenan1: Draft:Black Fine Art was deleted as a copyright violation. See also the reply to your question #14:44:04, 3 November 2019 review of submission by PKeenan1 --Worldbruce (talk) 02:14, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
03:49:18, 6 November 2019 review of draft by EMU FAM
I just would like to confirm that my article Draft:Branches school camp is not valid for submission due to it being too minor a topic worthy of its own Wikipedia article. And secondly, ask why I wasn't notified earlier when I had submitted the article on two other occasions that this article wasn't valid for publishing, I just ended up wasting a lot of time. - EMU FAM 6/11/2019 16:49 GMT+13
EMU FAM (talk) 03:49, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- EMU FAM, I think it is not worthy of a standalone article, as it is not notable. Any such information could just be merged into the school itself. An editor did warn you initially that the article might not be notable. But we generally don't just tell people to stop initially, we give them the benefit of the doubt. Oftentimes, articles that do not appear notable at the first review turn out to be notable after draftees find new sources. Alas, the opposite has happened to you. Even experienced editors have had that happen to them. Such are the travails of creating articles from scratch, and is a reason we often recommend new editors first edit existing articles to get a feel for things. But feel free to work on expanding the Wakatipu High School article, or any article that interest you! If you'd like further guidance before creating a future draft, you may wish to ask here first to see if the subject might be notable. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 04:08, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
Request on 04:28:08, 6 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by GouravSWS
GouravSWS (talk) 04:28, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- GouravSWS, Lot of issues here. For starters, the lead seems to be a copyright violation. The tone is also highly promotional. There aren't enough sources. And no proof of notability. It just seems to be an ad, not an entry in an encyclopedia. To fix that, you must make the tone neutral, and find better sources. Also do not copy and past material into an article from an outside source, as that breaks copyright law. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:47, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
06:41:54, 6 November 2019 review of submission by TheAlexCohen
- TheAlexCohen (talk · contribs) (TB)
I would like to know why this was rejected? Was it simply because there was not enough information on the life of Alexander Cohen because my whole purpose of publishing this page was for it to go public and edit as long as it is public. Please let me know what I can do to grant the Great Alexander Cohen a Wikipedia page
TheAlexCohen (talk) 06:41, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- TheAlexCohen, Well one of the issues here is that you seem to be Cohen, or at least are closely connected. Note that we strongly discourage people from creating autobiographies. That would represent a conflict of interest, which requires certain disclosures (please click on the link and read what those disclosures are).
- The main issue is that Cohen is just an average person like you or I. I don't have a page about myself, and neither do most folks. Only people who have received coverage from multiple reliable and independent sources (think articles in the New York Times) are considered "notable" and can have articles. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 07:51, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
08:27:57, 6 November 2019 review of draft by Khanadilaltaf
- Khanadilaltaf (talk · contribs) (TB)
I had submitted this article for publishing and it was marked for speedy deletion. I have removed the objections and have checked it with Citation Bot as well as DAB solver for any problems. It is the perception of the deleting editor that I am trying to promote the pages cited, but I declare unequivocally that I neither have any connection or financial interest with sources cited. It is a new topic that the public should be aware of and only manufacturers of the product have published anything citable on the subject. Thus, I am left with the choice of either publishing them as citation or no citations at all.
Khanadilaltaf (talk) 08:27, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Khanadilaltaf, If a subject has not been covered by reliable sources, it is not notable, i.e. it is not fit for coverage. While the subject may be interesting, if it has not meet the WP:GNG it does not require an article. While perhaps not promoting any one thing or product, the tone is definitely promotional. Ensure that the tone is neutral. Ultimately: find at least 3 reliable, independent sources. If such sources cannot be found, the subject is likely not notable. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 08:57, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
09:03:57, 6 November 2019 review of draft by Kumargau
Kumargau (talk) 09:03, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Related discussion: Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest/Noticeboard#User:Kumargau. They've now recreated Piramal Pharma Solutions in mainspace, so it's not necessary to review this draft anymore. – Thjarkur (talk) 10:52, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- I have deleted the mainspace copy of the draft. In light of the paid editing issues, I believe Draft:Piramal Pharma Solutions needs to be reviewed and accepted by an experienced editor first. -- Ed (Edgar181) 15:54, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
09:04:04, 6 November 2019 review of submission by Situle
Situle (talk) 09:04, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Situle, The article has no sources. At least 3 reliable and independent sources that discuss the subject with significant coverage will be needed to prove notability. See more at WP:BIO. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:39, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
11:43:00, 6 November 2019 review of draft by Qowa
This is a translated version from arabic wikipedia and article is based on a living person, who is a minister in united arab emirates
Qowa (talk) 11:43, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Qowa, You've stumbled upon the problem: he is a living person. Per WP:BLP, that means that the sourcing requirements are strict. The article has insufficient inline sources. It also does not have enough sources to show that he is notable per WP:BIO. The part about "has many identities" strikes me as odd too, perhaps a mistranslation? If not, that requires a very good source. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:37, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
14:10:36, 6 November 2019 review of submission by Alexander Andronkin
- Alexander Andronkin (talk · contribs) (TB)
I have written the page content following your guidelines, and mirroring other pages which have been accepted by your platform. So I cannot see why you continue to reject my submission. Please can you give me specific pointers of what you would like me to add or remove, thank you. Or please give me the contact details of a managing editor to look into why I continue to be rejected when my content is the same or better than other Wiki pages, currently it seems unreasonably unfair. Alexander Andronkin (talk) 14:10, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Alexander Andronkin, There are no managing editors, we are all volunteers committed to building an encyclopedia. You might wish to read WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS to understand why comparing your content to other content is a logical fallacy. Just because an article exists does not mean it passes muster. Many bad articles were created before the Articles for Creation process became standard, and have evaded detection. If you find an article that seems unfair, let us know and we'll take a look at it, as it likely does not meet policy either.
- The company you are writing about is likely not notable. Only companies that have been covered in multiple reliable and independent sources can have articles. The sources shown did not meet that standard. Additionally, articles do not promote their subjects, Wikipedia is not an ad platform. Furthermore, if you are employed by SSLS, have a financial stake in the company, or have been paid by them in any way to write that article, you MUST disclose that per WP:PAID. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:24, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
14:10:46, 6 November 2019 review of submission by Zippylips
New editor trying to submit an article about the new president of Hudson Valley Community College. The draft was rejected, not sure if it was for notability or for lack of reference. Any help appreciated
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Roger_A._Ramsammy
Zippylips (talk) 14:10, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Zippylips, The issue here seems to be notability. I am unsure if they meet WP:BIO. Usually, that means at least 3 sources that are reliable, independent, and discuss the subject with significant coverage. If you believe you have 3 sources, you may wish to add them here . If you do not have 3 sources that meet WP:BIO, please look for more. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:34, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
Request on 14:33:09, 6 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Leporeanto
- Leporeanto (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hi, I would like to write a biography how should I do? Greetings, Antonio
Leporeanto (talk) 14:33, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Leporeanto, Howdy hello! Who would you like to write a biography about? Please note, autobiographies, and biographies of people you know personally, are strongly discouraged per WP:COI. Non-COI biographies must meet the requirements at WP:BIO, i.e. that they are notable. Only folks who have been the subject of multiple, reliable, independent sources usually qualify for an article. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:27, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
15:13:09, 6 November 2019 review of submission by Ach825125
Hello editor, I would like to know why its been declined? I also want to know what changes that I can make to be publish. I actually trying to make an biography of model. This is my first attempt. Everything in the article are true, so please advise on how to make a biography that can be publish to the public.
Thank you Sudarshan
Sudarshan Acharya (talk) 15:13, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Ach825125, Biographies require good sourcing. Currently, you have no reliable sources. Neither YouTube or Wikipedia can be used as sources.You need coverage in newspapers, magazines, books, media outlets, that sort of thing. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:31, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
19:39:58, 6 November 2019 review of submission by UltraNightMist
- UltraNightMist (talk · contribs) (TB)
UltraNightMist (talk) 19:39, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- UltraNightMist, A random YouTuber is not notable. Only folks who have been covered in multiple reliable and independent sources can have articles about them.Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:47, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
22:32:47, 6 November 2019 review of submission by Laurenlewis
- Laurenlewis (talk · contribs) (TB)
I added the information requested by the reviewer, including the abstracting and indexing information.
Laurenlewis (talk) 22:32, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Laurenlewis: I've resubmitted the draft on your behalf. --Worldbruce (talk) 04:24, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
23:46:23, 6 November 2019 review of draft by Josanva
Hi, I'm requesting some help to be able to resubmit this article about author Miquel Reina. I recently got the message that the article was declined because the references I used were not enough. Can you please Google the author? He is a well-known author in many countries so I'm not sure what could I do to fix the article.
Thanks.
Josanva (talk) 23:46, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Josanva, You've stumbled upon to the answer to your query: Google. If you can google and find him, you should be able to find reliable sources. Generally, a biography (per WP:BIO) requires at least 3 reliable, independent sources, that discuss the subject with significant coverage. Think of news stories, being written about in books, magazines, newspapers, etc. The article as is does not seem to have 3 sources that meet the requirements of WP:BIO, or the specific criteria WP:NAUTHOR (which is usually stricter than the normal bio requirement). Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 07:48, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
November 7
03:50:27, 7 November 2019 review of submission by TZubiri
Hello, here is a list of links regarding Kenneth Reitz's notability:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Requests_(software) <<-- Kenneth Reitz as a red link https://vorpus.org/blog/why-im-not-collaborating-with-kenneth-reitz/ <-- Viral news about Kenneth reitz https://www.reddit.com/search/?q=url%3Ahttps%3A%2F%2Fvorpus.org%2Fblog%2Fwhy-im-not-collaborating-with-kenneth-reitz%2F <-- Instances where the above link was referenced. https://talkpython.fm/episodes/show/115/python-for-humans-projects <-- Interview with kenneth reitz https://www.leica-camera.blog/2013/09/05/kenneth-reitz-exploring-the-material-world-in-an-electronic-universe/ <-- interview
https://realpython.com/interview-kenneth-reitz/ <-- interview https://realpython.com/interview-kenneth-reitz/ <-- interview https://www.heroku.com/podcasts/castalio-podcast/episdio-80-kenneth-reitz---python-requests <-- interview
https://medium.com/@DJetelina/pipenv-review-after-using-in-production-a05e7176f3f0 <-- Critique on one of his libraries
Anyway, I was looking for a review regarding the content, grammar, style and how I handled the primary sources.
Thanks, though. TZubiri (talk) 03:50, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
- @TZubiri: Please read our guideline on reliable sources for reasons that these are not acceptable to demonstrate notability. shoy (reactions) 14:53, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
Request on 09:45:12, 7 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Salahuddin Ahmed Azad
- Salahuddin Ahmed Azad (talk · contribs) (TB)
Why my page titled Keith Sutliff isn't published? I've provided enough references and information. But why is it still in draft?
Salahuddin Ahmed Azad (talk) 09:45, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
- Hi Salahuddin Ahmed Azad. The draft has not been published for three reasons:
- IMDb, being user-generated, is not a reliable source. I see nothing to suggest that Mixcloud is a reliable and independent source. Indie Activity is a primary source interview without analysis by the interviewer. It is not independent. The Los Angeles Times is the only independent, reliable, secondary source. Novice editors are commonly advised to provide at least three such sources.
- The draft fails to objectively summarize significant viewpoints on the subject. It describes the reviews of Refuge as mixed, but the only review cited is negative.
- In a biography of a living person, you can expect that almost every statement about them is likely to be challenged, but the bulk of the draft has no inline citations.
11:01:54, 7 November 2019 review of submission by Aayushmamu04
- Aayushmamu04 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Please, Review again. Thank you.
Aayushmamu04 (talk) 11:01, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
- Aayushmamu04, This person is not notable. They do not meet our requirements for inclusion. Only those who have received significant coverage in multiple reliable and independent sources qualify for articles. As is, most of the article is unsourced, and only serves to promote the subject. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:11, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
11:48:07, 7 November 2019 review of submission by ThiagoTechera28
- ThiagoTechera28 (talk · contribs) (TB)
- No draft specified!
Why has my Cookie Clicker Beta Achievements review been declined? Link: Cookie Clicker Beta Achievements ThiagoTechera28 (talk) 11:48, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
12:29:32, 7 November 2019 review of draft by ThiagoTechera28
- ThiagoTechera28 (talk · contribs) (TB)
I think I did everything right on my draft! Please tell me what I need to do to improve.
ThiagoTechera28 (talk) 12:29, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
- Hi ThiagoTechera28. Draft:Cookie Clicker Beta Achievements has been declined, as stated on the draft and your user page, because it cites no independent, reliable, secondary sources, and thus fails to demonstrate that the topic is notable (suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia). --Worldbruce (talk) 14:33, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
13:44:15, 7 November 2019 review of submission by Neomohatli60
- Neomohatli60 (talk · contribs) (TB)
Neomohatli60 (talk) 13:44, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
[Content removed per WP:BLPREMOVE] --Worldbruce (talk) 14:27, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
Iyini I-Card B's Net Worth? Inani le-Cardi B elikhona njengamanje, elinganiselwa ku- $ 8 million ngoFebhuwari nguForbes, manje libalwa ku- $ 12 wezigidi yi-Celebrity Net Worth.
Umsebenzi weCardi B UCardi B, ogama lakhe langempela nguBelcalis Marlenis Almanzar, wazalelwa esigabeni saseWashington Heights eManhattan ngo-Oct. 11, 1992 futhi wakhulela eThe Bronx enezingane zaseNew York ngabazali bakhe baseCaribbean émigrés - ubaba waseDominican kanye nomama waseTrinidadian / waseSpain.
Igama likadadewabo nguHennessy Carolina, ngakho-ke abantu baqala ukumbiza njengoBacardi - igama ayeshintsha kulo ngegama lakhe "lesiteji".
- Hi Neomohatli60. If English is not your first language, you may be more comfortable contributing to one of Wikipedia's other language versions, such as https://zu.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ikhasi_Elikhulu. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:27, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
16:38:52, 7 November 2019 review of submission by Tanmay Chakrabarty
- Tanmay Chakrabarty (talk · contribs) (TB)
I think i made the nessary changes and added all the things requested
Tanmay Chakrabarty (talk) 16:38, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
- Your topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia, it has no independent sources with which to establish notability. Theroadislong (talk) 16:43, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
17:57:32, 7 November 2019 review of draft by Sunshinedaydreamwiki
- Sunshinedaydreamwiki (talk · contribs) (TB)
Sunshinedaydreamwiki (talk) 17:57, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
If I reference a movie that the subject was in, but her name does not appear in that link, should I use the link as an External Link that is provided for informational purposes about the movie? Sunshinedaydreamwiki (talk) 17:57, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
- Sunshinedaydreamwiki, Probably not. Also please note, that IMDb, and Wiki's are not reliable sources. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:08, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
22:12:15, 7 November 2019 review of submission by Cezar.vasiescu
Hello! If you are kind please give me some advice on what is to be done to get my article validated. I work for Framför and I think it would be a good thing for our company to be visible on Wikipedia. I expect your reply. Best regards Cezar Cezar.vasiescu (talk) 22:39, 7 November 2019 (UTC) Cezar.vasiescu (talk) 22:12, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
22:44:25, 7 November 2019 review of draft by Randy000
There is a notice on my submission re the artist Rudy Rotter, that states ... "This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Rudy Rotter, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one."
The most recently edited version (in which I have now included === header marks) is the submission I want to keep. I'm not sure what and where the other submission exists, but if you can help me deactivate it, it will be appreciated. I presume the other article version was also created by me ... but if not, I would then want to view it before deactivating. Otherwise, have the above referenced article is my request.
I'll likely have other future questions being a novice, but for now this assistance will be greatly appreciated.
Thanks, and please let me know of any questions .... Randy Rotter (randy000)
Randy000 (talk) 22:44, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
November 8
03:10:41, 8 November 2019 review of draft by Tandy
I tried to submit a page (about Karrie Karahalios, Full Professor of Computer Science at the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign), but it looks like my page is still just a draft and has not been submitted. I am not sure what I need to do to submit it. It's been sitting there a few weeks. Any advice you can give would be helpful. Thanks! - Tandy Warnow
Tandy (talk) 03:10, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
03:18:36, 8 November 2019 review of submission by Tandy
I got a response to my earlier inquiry from Longhair (about the page I had written for Karrie Karahalios). I had declared the conflict of interest, based on both being in the same department. I thought that the declaration would allow Wikipedia to *evaluate* the suggested page on its merits. It seems, based on the response from Longhair, that perhaps Wikipedia will not even consider it, because of the conflict of interest? I am not sure how to interpret the response in some other way. If that is the answer, then I would respectfully request that Wikipedia write a page about Karrie Karahalios. By the way, she was just elected a Distinguished Member of the Association for Computing Machinery (ACM), so she really *is* a distinguished researcher. In any event, some clear instruction would help. Tandy (talk) 03:18, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
- Hi Tandy. Editors are discouraged from creating articles about colleagues, but it is not forbidden. If you are going to do it despite being advised against it, then you are going about it in the right way - declaring your conflict of interest and putting the page through Articles for creation. To have Draft:Karrie Karahalios reviewed for publication, click the blue "Submit your draft for review!" button in the large grey box at the top of the draft. The review process is highly backlogged, so it may take 4-5 months. If it is declined, then consider asking at Requested articles that an uninvolved editor write a biography of her, identifying for them which criteria of WP:PROF she meets, and supplying sources that prove it. --Worldbruce (talk) 18:59, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
11:11:45, 8 November 2019 review of submission by Iamsrh
jmt tours pvt ltd is tours and travels destination management company which plans tours,holidays for individuals and organisations it has offices in India, Dubai, Singapore and Malaysia etc, the company established 2009 in India and 2001 in Dubai.it well reputed company with large staff and agents around the world serving the tourists and travelers help in assisting the packages regarding their needs etc, Iamsrh (talk) 11:11, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
- Iamsrh, Wikipedia only has articles on notable companies. That means coverage in multiple reliable and independent sources. Also, WIkipedia is not an ad platform. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 14:34, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
11:19:58, 8 November 2019 review of draft by MayWiki1
My article was rejected due to lack of resource ('Needs more references with significant in-depth coverage about the subject himself that are not primary sources.") and I've added additional sources but not sure what more is needed?
Thanks
MayWiki1 (talk) 11:19, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
- MayWiki1, The issue here is that the existing sources talk more about Barretts company, and very little about Barret. Clearly his company is notable, and has an article. But you need sources that focus on Barrett if he is to have his own article. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 14:35, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
11:41:17, 8 November 2019 review of submission by Kul.khare
Kul.khare (talk) 11:41, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
- Kul.khare, There is only one source, which does not establish notability. You need several reliable and independent sources. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 14:32, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
12:31:12, 8 November 2019 review of submission by Smitpshah17
- Smitpshah17 (talk · contribs) (TB)
E-commerce platform is one on the requested articles on Wikipedia. And it is not a link farm to the sites you mentioned, I took the idea and concept from that site. Everyone doesn't know everything, so other sources are necessary for the article. Please review again.
Smitpshah17 (talk) 12:31, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
- Smitpshah17, Howdy hello! I personally agree with K.e.coffman. There is already an article on e commerce, which is somewhat lacking as is. If you wish, you might compress your article down to a section and add it to the existing article. While it may have been a requested article, not all requested articles are destined to become actual articles. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 14:31, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
15:47:29, 8 November 2019 review of submission by Vikash kajal
- Vikash kajal (talk · contribs) (TB)
- No draft specified!
Vikash kajal (talk) 15:47, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
16:32:19, 8 November 2019 review of submission by Omartaw
I'd like to post this article about DJS (UK) Limited, from what I can see the sources were reliable and independent. Is there something that specifically needs referencing better? Omartaw (talk) 16:32, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
- Hi Omartaw. The notability guidelines for companies explicitly exclude, as trivial coverage, inclusion in "best of", "top 100", "fastest growing" or similar lists. Mentioning such things and non-notable business awards and accolades makes the draft come across as highly promotional and rather desperate. Other cited sources lack significant coverage. The Independent, for example, only mentions PiggyBank in passing as the commissioner of a study.
- Most businesses are not notable. You may find WP:BFAQ#COMPANY informative. --Worldbruce (talk) 21:29, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
16:45:46, 8 November 2019 review of submission by MadShelton
- MadShelton (talk · contribs) (TB)
- No draft specified!
16:45:46, 8 November 2019 review of draft by MadShelton
MadShelton (talk) 16:45, 8 November 2019 (UTC) I added more credible sources.
- @MadShelton: This person is not notable as Wikipedia defines the term. Please read WP:NBIO. shoy (reactions) 19:19, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
Request on 17:49:49, 8 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by GreenLightDiode
- GreenLightDiode (talk · contribs) (TB)
I am looking to see why my article was denied. I know I shouldn't base my argument on other articles but I see other players with their own article who are not as "notable" and haven't had as much press coverage. Is there any way I could get help making this distinction? I'd appreciate the help.
Thank you!
GreenLightDiode (talk) 17:49, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
- As indicated when it was denied, Baseball players are considered Notable if they have played in an MLB game. Johnny is still at single A. None of the accomplishments at TCU seem to give Notability on his own. I'm not saying he won't be notable in a few years, but right now, I don't see how he is.Naraht (talk) 18:41, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
17:59:56, 8 November 2019 review of submission by Cezar.vasiescu
Hello there. I've done some changes to the article. Please let me know if I managed to resolve the conflict of interest. And regarding the "not sufficiently notable" what more is to be done?. Thank you very much! Cezar.vasiescu (talk) 17:59, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
- Your draft has zero sources, notability is judged by looking at the depth of coverage in independent, reliable, secondary sources, we have no interest in what the company says about itself.
There is nothing to indicate that it would pass Wikipedia:Notability (organizations and companies) either. Theroadislong (talk) 18:28, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
19:38:06, 8 November 2019 review of draft by Randy000
This may be a repeat of a submission i made yesterday but forgot to add the 4 tildes to my signature.
re Message: "This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Rudy Rotter, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one."
Request: I am unaware of what or where the other submission in my name exists. This Sandbox version is the article i want to use to soon replace the currently existing published "Rudy Rotter" Wikipedia page. Can you please assist me in resolving this duplication and help to make the sandbox article the sole article of focus. Thanks.
Randy000 (talk) 19:38, 8 November 2019 (UTC)Randy Rotter (randy000)
Randy000 (talk) 19:38, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
- The article already exists here Rudy Rotter you can improve it there, you don't need to create a draft for it. Theroadislong (talk) 19:54, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
November 9
November 9
I created a page Comfort Page and it got deleted, but it can’t be deleted, it’s for people to talk about things, you can’t delete it. You’re not supposed to be doing anything with it! Leave it alone! Don’t even view it! — Preceding unsigned comment added by CheatCodes4ever (talk • contribs) 02:52, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Longhair and CheatCodes4ever: I am not an admin, so I can't see what was in there. Howewer, since you state above it’s for people to talk about things[...] I am concerned that you haven't understood Wikipedia's goals. Wikipedia is a collaborative project to create an Encyclopedia. Of course discussion is needed, but only on topics that cover Wikipedia. See WP:NOT for more info on what Wikipedia is not. Victor Schmidt mobil (talk) 06:12, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
- It was a page inviting others into a discussion, which as you know is outside the goals of Wikipedia. -- Longhair\talk 06:15, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
I was trying to create something like a talk page since I don’t go on talk to answer things. I wanted to talk about things. I could use my original page, but it’s not just for me. I want it to be a page for everybody. I do understand that Wikipedia is an encyclopaedia, this is something that is viewed by users who want to talk about things so they can get answered if they don’t go on talk.User:CheatCodes4ever, 05:39, 10 November 2019
07:53:26, 9 November 2019 review of draft by TobyBK
I am new to wiki and I just wanted to list a new museum but the link I used to cite from yahoo news was rejected so I used another link which was already approved on the Patpong page. Is there anything else I should do to get my submission through? Many thanks
TobyBK (talk) 07:53, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
- Hi TobyBK. Wikipedia covers topics that have attracted significant attention from the world at large and over a period of time. It is unlikely that a museum which opened last month would be able to demonstrate such coverage. Creating a new article is one of the most difficult, frustrating, and time consuming tasks a new editor can attempt. You will find it easier if you spend a while editing existing articles to gain familiarity with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If you aren't sure where to start, see Wikipedia:Community portal for ways to help. --Worldbruce (talk) 21:42, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
Request on 08:35:41, 9 November 2019 review of submission by NCHANGNDE
H, please I will like to know why my article is submitted for deletion. what are the prerequisite for an article to be valid. Thanks
NCHANGNDE (talk) 08:35, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
- Answered below, though the draft was rejected, not deleted Nosebagbear (talk) 14:59, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
08:40:43, 9 November 2019 review of submission by NCHANGNDE
Hi, please I will like to have some help on how to make my article notable enough to be published on Wikipedia. This is my first article and I will appreciate your help, thanks.
NCHANGNDE (talk) 08:40, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi,
My article Submission declined on 6 November 2019
How to solve this issue..!!
Please give me guidance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ChilakamarthiPrabhakar (talk • contribs) 11:13, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
- @NCHANGNDE: - the draft was rejected as not being notable. It had a complete lack of reliable, secondary, sources so was automatically unable to show notability
- For it to be notable it would need good sources that showed the subject met at least one of the conditions at musician notability. Nosebagbear (talk) 14:58, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
13:46:23, 9 November 2019 review of submission by JohnWolcott
- JohnWolcott (talk · contribs) (TB)
- No draft specified!
JohnWolcott (talk) 13:46, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi, I created a page for martial artist Rika Ishige here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Rika_Ishige
I first want to say thanks for taking the time to look it over.
But I have a few questions:
1. I never said she was a mixed martial artist, I said she was a martial artist.
2. She already has a Thai version of her page here: https://th.wikipedia.org/wiki/ริกะ_อิชิเกะ
So why can't I create an English version?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best,
John
Thanks for your help.
- @JohnWolcott: - hi there. I'm not a specialist in MMA notability, but it's worth reading the specific comment made by your reviewer. They indicated:
- "Please read the guidelines at the link below and show how Ishige meets the requirements - 3 fights in a top tier MMA competition.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Mixed_martial_arts/MMA_notability#Fighters "
- Different wikipedias use different rules for can qualify as an article, so the existence in one wikipedia doesn't necessarily mean they warrant an article in, say, english wikipedia. Nosebagbear (talk) 15:02, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
17:06:44, 9 November 2019 review of submission by Invisible12345
- Invisible12345 (talk · contribs) (TB)
I'm trying to open a page in Wikipedia for a Sportsmen, who is One of the world ISKA chempion(You can chek it). So, he need a page in this system not only for his popularity, but also for his fans.
Therefore Im sending you it severel times and I will so glad if you will help me to creating this page(if I'm making any mistakes please help me). Thank you...
Invisible12345 (talk) 17:06, 9 November 2019 (UTC)
November 10
05:08:38, 10 November 2019 review of submission by 27.34.104.217
- 27.34.104.217 (talk · contribs) (TB)
27.34.104.217 (talk) 05:08, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi sir, I am new here but I have been involved media sector so nice 2009 and I have some references too, please help me to have Wikipedia page.
09:15:43, 10 November 2019 review of draft by 117.242.63.174
- 117.242.63.174 (talk · contribs) (TB)
how to change the headline of topic
117.242.63.174 (talk) 09:15, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
- Article has been accepted with the title corrected to Kazi Kundli, Thanks for helping improve Wikipedia. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 09:37, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
10:59:20, 10 November 2019 review of submission by 2A02:587:D1A:AC00:AD4F:F880:3B11:4CF1
The founder of the academy is perhaps part of Indias squash history. Also this project the Academy which is his brainchild and pet project is very unique and probably the only one of its kind which is self funded and is also a social engineering project. The rejection hence requires a review. 2A02:587:D1A:AC00:AD4F:F880:3B11:4CF1 (talk) 10:59, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
13:36:55, 10 November 2019 review of draft by Drjaitley
This individual has been a prominent figure in the United States and India in the era when social media or online news articles weren't introduced. But, still, I have finally found an ONLINE news article that shows his entire interview given to The Tribune (https://www.tribuneindia.com/2000/20000913/cth1.htm , scroll down to find Dr.Jaitley's Interview). Also, through the gallery on Dr.Jaitley's website (https://drjaitley.net/), it's evident to anyone as to who he is. Online evidence/supporting material is limited, but if you'd like for me to attach snapshots of his news coverage and interviews from renowned newspapers, I'm definitely looking forward to it. Looking forward to the appropriate guidance.
Drjaitley (talk) 13:36, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
13:49:02, 10 November 2019 review of draft by Drjaitley
You're regarding this as "unsourced" puffery because I don't have any ONLINE sources supporting what has been written. So, kindly suggest ways I should be able to conform to Wikipedia's rules, which can also help me accomplish my goal.
Drjaitley (talk) 13:49, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
- The puffery includes "widely known""continuously aiding" "over fourteen thousand hours of flying time as a commercial pilot." "continued his day and night efforts to strengthen" " strongly facilitated" "relentlessly encouraged" "outstanding commitment and dedicated leadership" " tireless efforts" "inspirational and role mode" "recognized and appreciated" " promoting his greater form of understanding" none of this is sourced and is all promotional puffery, totally inappropriate in tone for an encyclopaedia article. Theroadislong (talk) 14:01, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
14:28:06, 10 November 2019 review of draft by Drjaitley
Firstly Sir/Ma'am, this is written by myself and ofcourse if these extra phrases, to Wikipedia, seems in any way "puffery" please feel free to do way with them, because my objective is just to be able to make Dr.Jaitley known to a larger audience through Wikipedia. And, this is unequivocally "puffery" because according to Wikipedia it isn't a reliable source, and it will be until it's "proved" otherwise.
And, I have supporting material that indeed proves that all of these are true, but unfortunately, they're not online-based. So, again, I'm asking you Sir/Ma'am, how should I be able to submit them? I look forward to your guidance.
Drjaitley (talk) 14:28, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
Request on 15:25:39, 10 November 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Drjaitley
I want to know, in the first place, that if Wikipedia accepts non-online-based sources.
How should I submit them? The online sources I have are not reliable and sufficient. I have several news articles covering this individual I'm trying to create a Wikipedia page for. Kindly provide guidance.
Drjaitley (talk) 15:25, 10 November 2019 (UTC)
16:01:37, 10 November 2019 review of submission by Wikiabc123wiki
- Wikiabc123wiki (talk · contribs) (TB)
Hello, I have made the necessary adjustments to the reason why it was rejected primarily; sources. There are very notable and reliable sources now as you can see. The Inan Family has become a big name in Turkey and should have a page dedicated to them. There is no reason why the page should be rejected again, since there are several accurate sources and the page is now ready for publication. Thank you for your help. Wikiabc123wiki (talk) 16:01, 10 November 2019 (UTC)