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:Happy New Year {{ping|JohnnyDoobydoo|p=!}} A quick cursory glance looks like the references have been properly formatted—good job, that will significantly assist in the next reviewer in being better able to assess the [[WP:N|notability]] and quality of the draft. I don't have time at the moment, but should the draft still be unreviewed by the time I get around to reviewing drafts next, I will start with yours. Cheers, [[User:MicrobiologyMarcus|<span style="font-size:70%; font-family:serif">microbiology</span>Marcus]] <sup>(''[[User talk:MicrobiologyMarcus|petri dish]]·[[Special:Contributions/MicrobiologyMarcus|growths]]'')</sup> 17:56, 2 January 2024 (UTC) |
:Happy New Year {{ping|JohnnyDoobydoo|p=!}} A quick cursory glance looks like the references have been properly formatted—good job, that will significantly assist in the next reviewer in being better able to assess the [[WP:N|notability]] and quality of the draft. I don't have time at the moment, but should the draft still be unreviewed by the time I get around to reviewing drafts next, I will start with yours. Cheers, [[User:MicrobiologyMarcus|<span style="font-size:70%; font-family:serif">microbiology</span>Marcus]] <sup>(''[[User talk:MicrobiologyMarcus|petri dish]]·[[Special:Contributions/MicrobiologyMarcus|growths]]'')</sup> 17:56, 2 January 2024 (UTC) |
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== Draft: SGFC Athletics == |
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Hello Marcus, i appreciate your feedback and the insights given to better create the page noted above. |
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I have done a quick review of the Draft SGFC Athletics and modify most of the references. All the BARE sources have been deleted and dead citation is removed for relevant ones. i have used reliable sourced references and citations in my edits for the Drafts. I would like you to please review it one more time for accuracy to know if there are other issues to be added or edited. i have submitted it again today the 2nd January 2024 for review. Thank you for your time. [[User:Lakestein|Lakestein]] ([[User talk:Lakestein|talk]]) 03:30, 3 January 2024 (UTC) |
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pubudu gamage at User:Darma 2012/sandbox
so if you can tell me about what's wrong i am a kid i am still 9 year old and name was tlaking pls i need post a page it school home work if not i will fail pls sir Darma 2012 (talk) 15:38, 22 December 2023 (UTC)
- Hi @Darma 2012: you need sources to write an article on Wikipedia. Do you have secondary, reliable and independent sources of information that discuss the subject of the article? They are required for any biographies. The article in your sandbox doesn't have any sources. Check out Help:Referencing for beginners. microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 15:58, 22 December 2023 (UTC)
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- Thanks @Robertsky, happy holidays to you as well, and I hope your new year brings you joy, success, and creative fulfillment! Kindly, microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 16:50, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
Speedy delete on Vittorio Arigoni
I think I have the redirect page fixed now. Have a look. I was too fast on my cell phone with the template.--Akrasia25 (talk) 19:54, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- Another editor placed the proper redirect. [1] Redirects are created with
#REDIRECT [[Page name]]
. Thanks, microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 19:59, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
Request for adminship
Sir how can I become an admin in Wikipedia.Some Indian users are today creating some fake battles without any source.They are giving wrong page no. And creating fake battles. This may affect the educational purpose of Indian subcontinent and maybe of world history. Please Kindly guide me how can I become an admin so that I will be able to block this type of users.Thanks!! Kemilliogolgi (talk) 02:05, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- See WP:Requests for adminship. microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 02:06, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- Sir I don't know how to apply for a request for adminship, please tell me step by step 🥺 please Kemilliogolgi (talk) 02:34, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
Regarding AfC:Conjugate gradient squared method
You declined my submission on the basis of notability. However, according to Wikipedia:WikiProject_Mathematics/Reference_resources, the existence of the Mathworld page, supplemented by the other sources, should be sufficient to qualify the article as encyclopaedic. Do I need to find more sources to further verify notability?
--MtPenguinMonster (talk) 04:12, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- @MtPenguinMonster: on a second look, yeah I'll agree notability can be argued here. I'll admit I failed to realize some of the references were university instructional material, I had taken it all for primary research. Consider it fixed. microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 16:22, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
what part is getting declined? do i need to remove the author part to get it accepted? the rest is pretty obvious that its notable Vvsmart100 (talk) 07:21, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Vvsmart100: have a look at WP:BLP for guidance on what is required (inline citations) for biographies of living persons. If you need further help, see WP:REFB for guidance on properly referencing content for Wikipedia. microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 15:18, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
Hi - I've done some edits on this draft by another user which was rejected for being promotional in tone. Let me know (a) if this is an improvement, and (b) if anything more needs to be done before the article can be created. I think this individual's work is notable, covered in academic journals, and would like to see an article on him regardless of current YouTuber drama. GnocchiFan (talk) 16:03, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
- Hey @GnocchiFan: you've probably already seen it, but I did some cleanup work and then acceptabed. Just a heads up for future work, remember to always try to mainain a WP:NPOV. I changed stole to accused of plagiarising in regards to the current YouTube drama. I'm not familiar with what has been going on, but browsing the linked pages, I think it’s safe to say that there are some NPOV concerns on those pages as well. microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 17:07, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
Hello,
Thank you for your speedy review. Can you give me an example of things that made you think it's an essay ?
I'm new and trying to contribute with both sides of view and unfortunately comments are always broad. I would really appreciate something specific.
Thank you in advance and Happy New Year ! yasszz 20:34, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
- Hi @Yasszz: you seem to have done a major rewrite since this message so I will gloss over some of the things already addressed. Your use of transition words, while not an ineffective form of writing, appeared to be excessive: you had a section that started three consecutive paragraphs indeed, notably, and Recognizing these challenges, the final paragraph of which contained no citations. Taken together, these two factors combined appeared to be significant WP:OR problems. The Excel graph that existed in the article was not clear and was not used to supplement the text and aid in reader understanding, but instead was referenced directly in the text as a form of an argument. Again, either WP:OR or essay concerns.
- In general, Wikipedia wants to stick to presenting the facts and narratives already established by independent reliable and secondary sources, not create those facts and narratives themselves.
- Moving forward, I see that the article has been created in mainspace with the above issues still present, and there is a merge template? What is your plan for addressing the issues? microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 17:47, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- hello @MicrobiologyMarcus
- Yes I completely understood your concerns of wiki non-compliance and worked on it to make the article as straightforward and keep it accurate as it is now possible. As a beginner on this encyclopedia, my essayish writing took the best of me as some users told haha
- I wish the article in the main space is erased awaiting for an approving review on the draft. Only then, I hope to move the draft on the main space. Unfortunately, Idk how to do it myself :( and only now realized it created quite a mess, which I'm sorry about I was misguided by some tutorials. yasszz 18:32, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Yasszz: consider placing the template {{db-g7}} on the top of the page to allow the mainspace one to be deleted. microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 18:38, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
Review question
Hello,I have a question, I have created my draft and submitted it for review but it's taking too much time to get reviewed. What can I do for faster review ??
? Kemilliogolgi (talk) 10:20, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- @Kemilliogolgi: at the time of my response, the notification on the draft submission template reads This may take 2–3 weeks or more, since drafts are reviewed in no specific order. There are 553 pending submissions waiting for review. Please be patient while reviewers get around to your submission. microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 17:50, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
Hello, thank you for the feedback. I have added some information to the Citations and I would like to know if they are good now. Are there any other issues with the draft? Happy new Year, JohnnyDoobydoo (talk) 11:18, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
- Happy New Year @JohnnyDoobydoo! A quick cursory glance looks like the references have been properly formatted—good job, that will significantly assist in the next reviewer in being better able to assess the notability and quality of the draft. I don't have time at the moment, but should the draft still be unreviewed by the time I get around to reviewing drafts next, I will start with yours. Cheers, microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 17:56, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
Draft: SGFC Athletics
Hello Marcus, i appreciate your feedback and the insights given to better create the page noted above. I have done a quick review of the Draft SGFC Athletics and modify most of the references. All the BARE sources have been deleted and dead citation is removed for relevant ones. i have used reliable sourced references and citations in my edits for the Drafts. I would like you to please review it one more time for accuracy to know if there are other issues to be added or edited. i have submitted it again today the 2nd January 2024 for review. Thank you for your time. Lakestein (talk) 03:30, 3 January 2024 (UTC)