User contributions for 85.193.218.178

8 August 2017

• 02:0902:09, 8 August 2017 diff hist −7 History of United States prison systems "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 02:0702:07, 8 August 2017 diff hist −8 Wheel of Fortune (American game show) "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 02:0502:05, 8 August 2017 diff hist −7 The Wacky Molestation Adventure "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 02:0402:04, 8 August 2017 diff hist −14 History of Korea "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 02:0202:02, 8 August 2017 diff hist −14 Early life and career of Julius Caesar "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 01:1401:14, 8 August 2017 diff hist +4 Osborne effect "plummeted" -> "fell sharply" ; See plain English - readability counts
• 00:3700:37, 8 August 2017 diff hist +18 Osborne effect "inventories" -> "the quantity of unsold goods" ; it was ambiguous, and known mainly in US

7 August 2017

• 22:5922:59, 7 August 2017 diff hist −4 Osborne Computer Corporation "following" -> "after"; See plain English - readability counts
• 22:4822:48, 7 August 2017 diff hist −11 Osborne effect "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 14:1814:18, 7 August 2017 diff hist +195 Talk:Aspic →The article is misleading.
• 14:0614:06, 7 August 2017 diff hist +287 Talk:Aspic →The article is misleading.
• 13:5313:53, 7 August 2017 diff hist +341 Talk:Aspic →The article is misleading.: new section
• 13:1113:11, 7 August 2017 diff hist +108 Rollerball pen also "rollerball"; BTW: see Google Search
• 12:5212:52, 7 August 2017 diff hist +19 Pen "writing implement" -> "writing instrument"; see plain English, readability counts
• 12:4112:41, 7 August 2017 diff hist +2 Inkwell "Holes known as inkwells"? Wrong. BTW that "small container" is simply an inkwell.
• 11:0011:00, 7 August 2017 diff hist +1 Talk:Conic section →Precision.: typo

6 August 2017

• 16:1716:17, 6 August 2017 diff hist +176 User talk:JL 09 →Spinning jenny: new section
• 06:1006:10, 6 August 2017 diff hist −340 Talk:Alzheimer's disease Undid - Sorry, it has nothing to do with the Alzheimer's disease
• 06:0506:05, 6 August 2017 diff hist +340 Talk:Alzheimer's disease →The effect of dual-language immersion: new section

5 August 2017

• 16:5916:59, 5 August 2017 diff hist −11 DxO Labs "not soft" is redundant here and can be confusing as a special kind of "not soft sharpness"
• 13:1613:16, 5 August 2017 diff hist −48 Umbrella term "interval"? , "function"? - too much math here, see plain English - readability counts
• 12:5412:54, 5 August 2017 diff hist +16 Talk:Conic section →Precision.: better wording
• 06:1306:13, 5 August 2017 diff hist +503 Talk:Conic section →Precision.

4 August 2017

• 03:1903:19, 4 August 2017 diff hist +742 Talk:Conic section →Precision.

3 August 2017

• 15:3515:35, 3 August 2017 diff hist +1 Straw man "advanced" -> "presented"; see plain English - readability counts
• 15:2015:20, 3 August 2017 diff hist +385 Talk:Strabismus →Why did you revert all of my changes?
• 05:4605:46, 3 August 2017 diff hist +48 Roulade Roulade can be also sweet.
• 05:2705:27, 3 August 2017 diff hist +246 Talk:Conic section →Precision.
• 05:1505:15, 3 August 2017 diff hist +776 Talk:Strabismus →Why did you revert all of my changes?
• 03:4603:46, 3 August 2017 diff hist +253 Talk:Conic section →Precision.: new section

1 August 2017

• 11:1811:18, 1 August 2017 diff hist +186 User talk:Doc James →Strabismus: new section
• 11:1311:13, 1 August 2017 diff hist +103 Strabismus Okay, but why did you revert ALL my changes? See this article's talk.
• 11:0611:06, 1 August 2017 diff hist +561 Talk:Strabismus →Why did you revert all of my changes?: new section
• 00:1700:17, 1 August 2017 diff hist −72 Strabismus nonsensical sentence deleted

31 July 2017

• 23:4423:44, 31 July 2017 diff hist +80 Roulade +pronunciation
• 23:0323:03, 31 July 2017 diff hist +195 Strabismus the most common word is "squint"; +pronunciation
• 17:5017:50, 31 July 2017 diff hist −13 Honeypot (computing) ce: the word "apparent" is confusing here; "abuser" in not "abuse"

30 July 2017

• 23:2323:23, 30 July 2017 diff hist 0 Kiev (brand) "only" -> http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/misplaced-modifiers
• 00:1400:14, 30 July 2017 diff hist −2 Phossy jaw ce: it's like Future in the Past. English grammar is inconsistent. Any ideas?

29 July 2017

• 22:2422:24, 29 July 2017 diff hist −2 Impeachment process against Richard Nixon Undid. Please avoid confusing idioms and use plain English - readability counts
• 22:0322:03, 29 July 2017 diff hist −3 Spinning jenny "ushered in" -> "started"; see plain English - readability counts
• 15:1815:18, 29 July 2017 diff hist +1 Maneuverable reentry vehicle the word "autonomous" is crucial; "in flight" is too obvious, and now it is also implied by "autonomous"
• 13:2313:23, 29 July 2017 diff hist +7 Maneuverable reentry vehicle "shifting targets in flight" makes NO SENSE
• 00:3600:36, 29 July 2017 diff hist −23 United States presidential election "all but" is illogical, and confusing; see plain English

28 July 2017

• 23:4623:46, 28 July 2017 diff hist −1 Frictionless plane readability: "all but" -> "almost"; see plain English
• 23:0723:07, 28 July 2017 diff hist −2 Impeachment process against Richard Nixon readability: "all but" -> "almost"; rephrased; see plain English
• 22:5522:55, 28 July 2017 diff hist −1 Glossary of baseball (M) "all but certain" -> "almost certain"; see plain English
• 22:4222:42, 28 July 2017 diff hist −1 Every Man in His Humour "all but certain" is terribly illogical; see plain English
• 01:2501:25, 28 July 2017 diff hist +76 Batter (cooking) →Beer batter: an excellent source added

27 July 2017

• 21:4921:49, 27 July 2017 diff hist −340 Emotion in animals Tautology and redundancy deleted. We have an article named "Emotion", right?