User contributions for 85.193.218.178

21 August 2017

• 14:4314:43, 21 August 2017 diff hist 0 Turbofan "any" is confusing here - this increase does take place; +comma

20 August 2017

• 03:0503:05, 20 August 2017 diff hist 0 Turbofan →Low-bypass turbofan: Oops - int. link (overall pressure ratio) corrected
• 03:0003:00, 20 August 2017 diff hist +12 Turbofan →Low-bypass turbofan: "despite" -> "which is necessary" (it was illogical); +better syntax

19 August 2017

• 02:1202:12, 19 August 2017 diff hist +42 Clergy Less common terms

18 August 2017

• 00:4500:45, 18 August 2017 diff hist +1 Crowd "people spill" but "a crowd spills"

16 August 2017

• 15:1915:19, 16 August 2017 diff hist −14 Umbrella term "belonging to a common category"; See plain English - readability counts
• 02:3302:33, 16 August 2017 diff hist −1 Rabbit-Proof Fence "make it home" -> "return home"; See plain English - readability counts

15 August 2017

• 15:2915:29, 15 August 2017 diff hist +112 Gastroparesis +pronunciation (extremely hard to find)

13 August 2017

• 21:4021:40, 13 August 2017 diff hist 0 Geostationary orbit "only" -> http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/misplaced-modifiers
• 19:0119:01, 13 August 2017 diff hist −29 Turbofan "to the turbojet" is redundant and misleading in this context; "inlet" has no sense here; rephrased
• 17:4417:44, 13 August 2017 diff hist +74 Turbofan easy to understand animation first
• 16:3316:33, 13 August 2017 diff hist 0 Turbofan "in concert" -> "together" - see plain English; "only" - see http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/misplaced-modifiers
• 15:4415:44, 13 August 2017 diff hist +4 Comac C919 →Development: testbed - unexplained technical term

9 August 2017

• 06:2806:28, 9 August 2017 diff hist +91 Chamorro language +pronunciation
• 06:2506:25, 9 August 2017 diff hist +91 Chamorro people +pronunciation

8 August 2017

• 16:5916:59, 8 August 2017 diff hist +4 Vaporware ce rephrased
• 16:4316:43, 8 August 2017 diff hist +198 User talk:Bamnamu →History of Korea: new section
• 16:0516:05, 8 August 2017 diff hist +154 User talk:Quinton Feldberg →Thanks for the invitation.: new section
• 14:4514:45, 8 August 2017 diff hist +196 User talk:AldezD →Wheel of Fortune (U.S. game show): new section
• 02:0902:09, 8 August 2017 diff hist −7 History of United States prison systems "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 02:0702:07, 8 August 2017 diff hist −8 Wheel of Fortune (American game show) "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 02:0502:05, 8 August 2017 diff hist −7 The Wacky Molestation Adventure "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 02:0402:04, 8 August 2017 diff hist −14 History of Korea "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 02:0202:02, 8 August 2017 diff hist −14 Early life and career of Julius Caesar "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 01:1401:14, 8 August 2017 diff hist +4 Osborne effect "plummeted" -> "fell sharply" ; See plain English - readability counts
• 00:3700:37, 8 August 2017 diff hist +18 Osborne effect "inventories" -> "the quantity of unsold goods" ; it was ambiguous, and known mainly in US

7 August 2017

• 22:5922:59, 7 August 2017 diff hist −4 Osborne Computer Corporation "following" -> "after"; See plain English - readability counts
• 22:4822:48, 7 August 2017 diff hist −11 Osborne effect "before long" -> 'soon"; See plain English - readability counts
• 14:1814:18, 7 August 2017 diff hist +195 Talk:Aspic →The article is misleading.
• 14:0614:06, 7 August 2017 diff hist +287 Talk:Aspic →The article is misleading.
• 13:5313:53, 7 August 2017 diff hist +341 Talk:Aspic →The article is misleading.: new section
• 13:1113:11, 7 August 2017 diff hist +108 Rollerball pen also "rollerball"; BTW: see Google Search
• 12:5212:52, 7 August 2017 diff hist +19 Pen "writing implement" -> "writing instrument"; see plain English, readability counts
• 12:4112:41, 7 August 2017 diff hist +2 Inkwell "Holes known as inkwells"? Wrong. BTW that "small container" is simply an inkwell.
• 11:0011:00, 7 August 2017 diff hist +1 Talk:Conic section →Precision.: typo

6 August 2017

• 16:1716:17, 6 August 2017 diff hist +176 User talk:JL 09 →Spinning jenny: new section
• 06:1006:10, 6 August 2017 diff hist −340 Talk:Alzheimer's disease Undid - Sorry, it has nothing to do with the Alzheimer's disease
• 06:0506:05, 6 August 2017 diff hist +340 Talk:Alzheimer's disease →The effect of dual-language immersion: new section

5 August 2017

• 16:5916:59, 5 August 2017 diff hist −11 DxO Labs "not soft" is redundant here and can be confusing as a special kind of "not soft sharpness"
• 13:1613:16, 5 August 2017 diff hist −48 Umbrella term "interval"? , "function"? - too much math here, see plain English - readability counts
• 12:5412:54, 5 August 2017 diff hist +16 Talk:Conic section →Precision.: better wording
• 06:1306:13, 5 August 2017 diff hist +503 Talk:Conic section →Precision.

4 August 2017

• 03:1903:19, 4 August 2017 diff hist +742 Talk:Conic section →Precision.

3 August 2017

• 15:3515:35, 3 August 2017 diff hist +1 Straw man "advanced" -> "presented"; see plain English - readability counts
• 15:2015:20, 3 August 2017 diff hist +385 Talk:Strabismus →Why did you revert all of my changes?
• 05:4605:46, 3 August 2017 diff hist +48 Roulade Roulade can be also sweet.
• 05:2705:27, 3 August 2017 diff hist +246 Talk:Conic section →Precision.
• 05:1505:15, 3 August 2017 diff hist +776 Talk:Strabismus →Why did you revert all of my changes?
• 03:4603:46, 3 August 2017 diff hist +253 Talk:Conic section →Precision.: new section

1 August 2017

• 11:1811:18, 1 August 2017 diff hist +186 User talk:Doc James →Strabismus: new section