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1 August 2017

• 11:1311:13, 1 August 2017 diff hist +103 Strabismus Okay, but why did you revert ALL my changes? See this article's talk.
• 11:0611:06, 1 August 2017 diff hist +561 Talk:Strabismus →Why did you revert all of my changes?: new section
• 00:1700:17, 1 August 2017 diff hist −72 Strabismus nonsensical sentence deleted

31 July 2017

• 23:4423:44, 31 July 2017 diff hist +80 Roulade +pronunciation
• 23:0323:03, 31 July 2017 diff hist +195 Strabismus the most common word is "squint"; +pronunciation
• 17:5017:50, 31 July 2017 diff hist −13 Honeypot (computing) ce: the word "apparent" is confusing here; "abuser" in not "abuse"

30 July 2017

• 23:2323:23, 30 July 2017 diff hist 0 Kiev (brand) "only" -> http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/misplaced-modifiers
• 00:1400:14, 30 July 2017 diff hist −2 Phossy jaw ce: it's like Future in the Past. English grammar is inconsistent. Any ideas?

29 July 2017

• 22:2422:24, 29 July 2017 diff hist −2 Impeachment process against Richard Nixon Undid. Please avoid confusing idioms and use plain English - readability counts
• 22:0322:03, 29 July 2017 diff hist −3 Spinning jenny "ushered in" -> "started"; see plain English - readability counts
• 15:1815:18, 29 July 2017 diff hist +1 Maneuverable reentry vehicle the word "autonomous" is crucial; "in flight" is too obvious, and now it is also implied by "autonomous"
• 13:2313:23, 29 July 2017 diff hist +7 Maneuverable reentry vehicle "shifting targets in flight" makes NO SENSE
• 00:3600:36, 29 July 2017 diff hist −23 United States presidential election "all but" is illogical, and confusing; see plain English

28 July 2017

• 23:4623:46, 28 July 2017 diff hist −1 Frictionless plane readability: "all but" -> "almost"; see plain English
• 23:0723:07, 28 July 2017 diff hist −2 Impeachment process against Richard Nixon readability: "all but" -> "almost"; rephrased; see plain English
• 22:5522:55, 28 July 2017 diff hist −1 Glossary of baseball (M) "all but certain" -> "almost certain"; see plain English
• 22:4222:42, 28 July 2017 diff hist −1 Every Man in His Humour "all but certain" is terribly illogical; see plain English
• 01:2501:25, 28 July 2017 diff hist +76 Batter (cooking) →Beer batter: an excellent source added

27 July 2017

• 21:4921:49, 27 July 2017 diff hist −340 Emotion in animals Tautology and redundancy deleted. We have an article named "Emotion", right?