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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jim Kalafat (November 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Vanderwaalforces were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 18:31, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Ms.Aloisia! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Vanderwaalforces (talk) 18:31, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Vanderwaalforces Thank you for such a quick response to my submission.

There are Gladiators, who have live pages, however, they have fewer to no sources on their pages. For example, Raye Hollitt, Danny Lee Clark (No Sources), Sha-ri Pendleton (1 Source cited), Mark Tucker (all sources are unreliable, also have a tag), Shannon Hall etc. I am not questioning your judgment, nor do I mean any offense, I am just trying to understand the "qualifies for a Wikipedia article", as in my opinion, Jim Kalafat has gained his coverage over time, in my humble opinion, and after looking into the ones who don't have pages, Jim is much more notable than his peers, who have a live page, or not.

I apologize if anything is offensive, I am just trying to make my understanding clear. Kindy, guide me in this regard. Thank you.

P.S. I accessed the list from the page of American Gladiators.

Thank you, again. Ms.Aloisia (talk) 19:55, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Ms.Aloisia Hi there, those pages you mentioned, they are nothing but what I call problem pages. You see any article that has a tag on it's top, it is just a problem page that might never get fixed or that might take almost forever before someone decides to fix it. So, I won't want this new draft to be like that too. Just, go back to the draft, add more accurate and reliable sources, specifically, add the missing citations, the (citation needed) parts, and when you're done and confident that it is good to go, resubmit it, ping me here, I will come to check it. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 21:57, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Vanderwaalforces ok. Thank you.

Just one more thing, in the comment you have mentioned "Submission is improperly sourced and athlete". As per the information, I was able to collect, he is a former athlete, and although, the information about his football career is more, his notability is based on his career as a Gladiator. Although, I did find a lot of sources which would expand on his Gladiator career, however, I was afraid, that it might hurt the tone of the article.

Would it be acceptable, if I remove all the information, that requires citation, and resubmit?

Thank you! Ms.Aloisia (talk) 22:12, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

In the lead, Jim Kalafat (also known as Jim Starr) is an American athlete, actor, and producer., I want to urge you to see the notability guideline for athletes at WP:NATHLETE, for actors at WP:NACTOR, and for producers at WP:NPRODUCER, see if this subject can pass any of them, if they can significantly pass notability as an actor, then prove it, if athlete, then prove it and so on. If you try your best and can't prove it, I'd urge you to chill out and wait till the subjects becomes significantly notable. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 22:29, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Already chill... I do understand that not everything can be done correctly in the first go, there is always room to learn and grow. thank you for you help. Hopefully, I with community's help, I will be able to improve.

I will go through, what you have sent. Thank you. Ms.Aloisia (talk) 22:39, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jim Kalafat has been accepted

Jim Kalafat, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:59, 8 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Piet Cremers has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Piet Cremers. Thanks! Ruud Buitelaar (talk) 00:02, 12 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your notification. Ms.Aloisia (talk) 18:31, 12 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much for your suggestions. I will see to it that they are done. Thank you. Ms.Aloisia (talk) 18:33, 12 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Piet Cremers has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Piet Cremers. Thanks! Ruud Buitelaar (talk) 18:59, 12 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Piet Cremers has been accepted

Piet Cremers, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Ruud Buitelaar (talk) 22:38, 12 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot. :) Ms.Aloisia (talk) 22:57, 12 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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