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Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]


  • "Instagram stories" - "Instagram Stories"
  • "On the same date, Lovato published a video ..." - we didn't actually specify the date in the preceding sentence, so I suggest, "She additionally published a video ...", or you can add "Three days later" in the preceding sentence instead of "Days later"
  • "The singer announced the release ..." - "Lovato announced the release ..."
  • "it was promoted by billboards" - "it was promoted by digital billboards"
  • "National Public Radio's Reanna Cruz also compared ..." - you can just say NPR instead of National Public Radio
  • "compared the vocal affectations of the song with "Born This Way" by American singer Lady Gaga" - "compared the vocal affectations of the song to those of Lady Gaga's "Born This Way" (2011)" -- you don't need to specify Gaga's nationality since you didn't do so with the other artists
  • "Other critics, including Breihan and Danielle Chelosky for Uproxx, also highlighted ..." - "Other critics, including Uproxx's Danielle Chelosky and Breihan, also highlighted ..."
  • I think Insider Inc. should be replaced with Insider (in prose and citations)
  • Joan Jett can be wikilinked, I think?
  • "Regarding Lovato's dressing, Breihan found similarities with Joan Jett" - "Breihan compared her appearance in the video to the style of Joan Jett"
  • "on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon hours before release" - "on The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon, hours before its release"
  • "The song was included in the regular set list of her seventh concert tour ..." - "The song was included in the regular set list of Lovato's seventh concert tour ..."
  • Vulture can be linked in ref 35 for consistency
  • Ref 19 is missing the author

This is a really well-written and well-sourced article, and I've actually enjoyed reading it :) @CatchMe: I will put this  On hold for now. Medxvo (talk) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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