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"This dropping of historical context and fact dishonours those heroes among the European expedition. It dishonours Pocahontas. And worse, it abuses the modern child's potential for understanding the growing pains of Western Culture and the founding of America."

Uhh...thats very NPOV if I do say so myself. I'm deleting it.

-Mr. Tachyon

I assume something with a copyright date of 1899 is eligible to be included here? Still there's a lot of POV here and not much meat. -- Zoe

The POV-ness is due largely to the fact that the source seems to take Smith's memoirs at face value, whereas they are today believed to biggest source of baloney outside the Italian peninsula. -Smack 06:00 14 Jul 2003 (UTC)

Anything pre-1923 is in the Public Domain in the U.S. so this qualifies.


Just wanted to point out that in the Pocahontas definition she was 13 when she saved John Smith, and in this definition she was 11.

The abstract mentions that Capt. Smith was knighted. To the best of my knowledge, as of 2006, he had not been (Google: Knighthood sought for Capt. John Smith) 2ndCharter (talk) 21:07, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"English unwillingness to work" - Is there any chance someone can rephrase this? It seems quite prejudiced if I say so myself. As if whoever wrote it has some assumption that ALL English people are lazy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Harry McThompson (talk • contribs) 00:09, 23 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Comment--- Death The text says: "John Smith lived untill then he was reserected 21 June 1631. He was worshiped by the name of lord satin in 1633 (bold added here for emphasis) in the south aisle of Saint Sepulchre-without-Newgate Church, Holborn Viaduct, London."

Question: Is there a typo on one of the dates, or was he buried in late 1631 and RE-buried in 1633? This needs clarified in the text -- unless London had an unburied corpse stored somewhere for 2 years? Lifesnadir (talk) 04:55, 17 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

birth date

An anonymous IP was curious about Smith's birth date, apparently not noting that the years of birth and death were right after his name. I have removed their ALL CAPS COMMENT from the middle of the article, which is hopefully not a tact they will regularly follow. - DavidWBrooks 20:13, 3 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

The currently shown death date for Smith is both wrong and inconsistent with the balance of the article, and while I am no historian, a number of internal dates in the article also do not match my history-class memory of events. Doc W 14:01, 14 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Baptism Date

  • This and others say it happened on 9 January 1579.
  • this says it happened on 6 January 1580.

The consensus seems to be 9 January rather than 6 January, but what do we make of the discrepancy between 1579 and 1580? - JackofOz (talk) 03:02, 7 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

google on "john smith" born 1579, and "john smith" born 1580. You'll note that some comment that their sources state that it's around the end of 1579/beginning of 1580. Others just say 1579/1580. Baptism date is near birth date, but not the same (depending on circumstances, may be a few weeks later). The UNC page seems to have some reliable sources; the Britannia is least reliable. None of them are primary sources, but you might be able to find a reliable source quoting the baptism date using the hints that you've found so far. Tedickey (talk) 20:21, 7 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
post-mortem on the date. I don't see any discussion of date. FYI date discussions of persons who lived in times more remote from the present are not only perfectly legitimate but are often expected. Not to include them is often totally bad form. We can't always know when things happened in history. Often there are different theories. If it is relevant WP should not seek to simplify to one date, it should present the theories. But here, we have a problem. The editors want to use the usual web sites as sources. They think way too much of web sites! Typically they only repeated what someone else said on another web site and that derives ultimately from someone's off the cuff simplification or invention. WP offers the opportunity for the ordinary man to do historian's work. This means you have to come UP to it; it isn't easy work. There are no easy answers; if there were, we wouldn't need historians, we could just settle for whichever of the reams of mythological bunk tickles our fancy. You have to find scholarly discussions of the date in credible sources. It is both a lot of work and a lot of fun. The world is not or should not be interested in convenient myths just so it won't be troubled by any non-convenience in WP articles. Become historians, and have fun doing it.Dave (talk) 10:12, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The gap is still too wide, but is the editor (or sources) mixing OS and NS dates here? Mugginsx (talk) 14:06, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed merger

I support this, although I don't see a great deal to salvage in John Smith (statesman). The Singing Badger 01:32, 4 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

John Smith in film

What's up with this section? For a man who's been a character in American history and lore for nigh 400 years, that's a lot of space spent on a minor Disney film and its direct-to-video sequel. In addition it does not present a NPOV. -Acjelen 03:42, 12 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Quite correct. I've trimmed it. - [User:DavidWBrooks|DavidWBrooks] 11:23, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
Beware of vandalism at this site.

"Smith fathered Pocahontas bastered son."

Huh? "Smith fathered Pocahontas bastered son." There is no evidence or citation to support this statement. I suggest this statement be removed until it is substantiated with facts. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 66.25.168.154 (talk) 21:42, 5 May 2007 (UTC).[reply]

So, I've been able to find two (rather lousy) references to this: one in an NY Times article and another in a book by Jyotsna Kapur called "Coining for Capital: Movies, Marketing and the Transformation of Childhood." And each of these refers to an educator from Seattle named Robert Eaglestaff, who apparently did an interview with the Chicago Tribune back when Disney's 'Pocahontas' came out. I couldn't find the original interview (cited in Kapur's book), but the Times may be referring to it when it says: "Mr. Eaglestaff pointed to an account of the relationship between Smith and Pocahontas, said to be in Smith's diaries, in which Smith raped and impregnated Pocahontas." Now if that were in Smith's diaries it seems likely that it would be more widely reported. Eaglestaff (or the reporter) may have been thinking of the oral tradition to which the Wikipedia article on Pocahontas refers, referring to Linwood Custalow: "Linwood "Little Bear" Custalow, in a 2007 book, asserted that Pocahontas was raped during [her captivity at Henricus], citing oral tradition handed down over four centuries."......Perhaps, if someone is interested in pursuing this, they could try to track down the Chicago Tribune interview referenced in Kapur's book. If there's anything to substantiate it, or if the myth is so widespread that it's worth debunking the popular misconception, then it might be worth including a section in the article. At this point, though, I don't see any real evidence to support it. NY Times: Coming to Classrooms, the Real Pocahontas Story Jyotsna Kapur, 'Coining for Capital' — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brijohn6882 (talk • contribs) 21:53, 14 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Water Trail

[Captain John Smith Chesapeake National Historic Trail]] should be included in the article.

US or UK spelling?

Recently, 86.136.175.11 (talk · contribs · WHOIS) changed the spelling in Christopher Newport, John Smith of Jamestown and John Rolfe from US to UK English. I've started a discussion on what national variety of English these articles should use at Talk:Christopher Newport#US or UK spelling?. Anyone who has an opinion is invited to join and help us work towards a consensus. —Josiah Rowe (talk • contribs) 19:30, 14 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The article currently carries a "{{Use British English}}" but if this article started as US English, then per WP:RETAIN it should revert to it. The question is does MOS:TIES say this has a weak affinity for Britain, or is it also strong, as it does have a strong affinity for the U.S. -- 67.70.32.190 (talk) 05:24, 31 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Daily Press

This article was on the front cover of my newspaper Daily Press. It said students at school copy the text and use it on reports and stuff. That's not good Ryan Holloway 18:14, 23 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Cpt Smith & Pocahontas

Thay both present in pop culture than just the movie. For example Presley's song Fever which is few years older that the Disney movie (and more popular among adults :> ) Mar1u5z (talk) 08:36, 12 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

POV

"Henry Brooks Adams, the pre-eminent Harvard historian of the second half of the 19th century, attempted to debunk Smith’s claims of heroism. He said that Smith’s recounting of the story of Pocahontas had been progressively embellished, made up of “falsehoods of an effrontery seldom equalled in modern times.” Although there is general consensus among historians that Smith tended to exaggerate, his account does seem to be consistent with the basic facts of his life. Adams' attack on Smith, an attempt to deface one of the icons of Southern history, was motivated by political considerations in the wake of the Civil War. Adams had been influenced to write his fusillade against Smith by John G. Palfrey who was promoting New England colonization, as opposed to southern settlement, as the founding of America."

This is all very biased without any attempt at documentation. Who claims it was politically motivated? Can we have a source? Who claims that his account is consistent with his life? This is all unsuitable as is. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.253.235.141 (talk) 13:18, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The Jill Lepore article states that Adams and others were interested in promoting New England as the birthplace of America. That's a bit short of what this article claims, so someone who can access the article should go see what exactly it supports (http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2007/04/02/070402fa_fact_lepore). JustinBlank (talk) 22:02, 13 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Suggestions

  • In the notes the same book is repeated many times with different page numbers. One way in which WP handles this is as follows: a separate bibiography that uses template:cite book. One parameter in the list is "ref=CITEREFauthoryear". In the note you use template:harvnb with a a parameter "p=" or "pp=" for page or pages. The result is a brief 3-or-4-word note that gives the page number and links you to the full bibliographic item below.
  • The style. Too many editorial insertions. It reads like an essay. I would have to say, this is not yet WP style. For example, the incident with the Indian maiden is not "infamous." Leave out words such as these. Also, that is an interesting theoretical explanation of the incident but it is presented as fact when in fact it is only a theory. You need to state whose theory it is. In such cases one would state the source of the story and then give the theories explaining it; that is, to distinguish between the historical evidence and the historian's theory about it. The editor tries not to take a stand himself. This is not always easy, no one said it was. Currently I'd have to rate this article B or below. Have fun.Dave (talk) 09:48, 8 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
More than that - the article relies far to heavily on LeMay et al. Rich Farmbrough, 10:11, 14 July 2010 (UTC).[reply]

Should executions be included?

Over at the History.com is a video titled Death at Jamestown which can be seen here. As most know, History.com is a considerably reliable source when it comes to actual history and not reality programming. What surprised me was the claim made at about 0:30 and to quote it, "John Smith finally took over the colony, imposed martial law and executed people who wouldn't work." Actually there were a couple of surprises, but this is the only one directly related to John Smith. Now to be fair, I cannot find another reference which lays claim to Smith's ordered executions. This doesn't mean that other sources do not exist. My feeling is that if the claim is true (and not a stretch or twist of the fact that Smith ordered those not working to not eat), it most definitely needs to be documented in the article. I also feel a second source is in order since it appears to be so rare. Any thoughts on the subject? Is one source enough? MagnoliaSouth (talk) 19:27, 19 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Given the context (an offhand remark by a narrator), additional sources are needed TEDickey (talk) 21:54, 19 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

What on earth has Captain John Smith got to do with Kings Lynn

Is it me or are you having a laugh? Are you thinking of the Rolfes at Heacham perchance?Greenpenwriter (talk) 23:30, 3 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This kind of remark in unhelpful and is borderline malicious to a possibly new or newish editor. A simple critical statement using wiki guidelines (as shown above by other editors) is better. I only created Jamestown section in this article late June 2012 but will work on rest of this article per the more helpful suggestions. Mugginsx (talk) 17:50, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Article revisit

I revisited the article on request. I can't say that it has changed any. The material it seems to me is sound and at the encyclopedic level. So, I would still rate it as B. My critique (for what it seems to be worth, not much I guess) concerns the language and the formatting.Dave (talk) 15:20, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • It still needs an English language edit to correct the grammatical errors and make sure the phrases are at the appropriate formal level. Mr. Muggins, I think you are moving in the right direction. Be bold, but give reasons for your changes - grammar, spelling, awkward phrase, not a neutral point of view, etc. That way if someone takes issue you will have a leg to stand on. Now that you may have had a chance to track me down, keep it to yourself, will you? I would now add one comment. In my opinion the sections are too long. They could be split into subsections. I realize of course that every writer, regardless of their experience or skill, writes differently. So, I am not even going to approach the topic of how I would write it. I do think it should be grammatical. The length of the article, well, it is a big topic. Smith is an important historical figure, at least to us in New England. He was quite a man. He could have had a rich Turkish princess but he tossed her over for freedom. He wanted to name Cape Ann after her but the king said no. If it really gets huge we might consider splitting it, say, Smith at Jamestown, Smith at somewhere else.Dave (talk) 15:20, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • No one has taken on the refs. I can't say I blame you. You almost have to be a programmer. It clearly needs the Harvard ref system. Everything is done by hand, and that is allowed on WP, and if there is a coherent system, we are encouraged not to touch it. However, those repetitions are not in my view a coherent system. Moreover, in any system, raw url's are not allowed. At the time of my previous comments I was just discovering harvard ref. I've done more of them since then. It does not work quite the way I said. I will get started on that briefly so you can see what I mean. Only started.Dave (talk) 15:20, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you Dave. Oops, I hope I have not inadvertenly interfered. Should have read this first. Please feel free to revert. Mugginsx (talk) 16:31, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't see anything reverted. Here is some help: HELP:FOOT. I was going to list more help but down at the bottom I just noticed something new: the multiple page numbers. The programmers have not all gone to sleep after all and apparently they do something else for their money besides hassle the editors. This is new. I've never used it before, although it is easy enough to use. So, I could give you some help for the citations and the abbreviated citations, which utilize harvref, but now that there is another possibility, who is to say harvref is the best way to do it? You can find harvref under "template:harvref" and the publication citations under "template:cite book" and the like. Someone now has to decide what system should be in use in this article. I propose that that person should be YOU. What I have done are only examples, but you can see I've cut down by several notes. I'm not going to work on the Smith article. I propose you take it over. If you read the help and browse around in the templates you should be up to speed in less time than you think. It is all laid out pretty good. As I say J. Wales must have got them off their thumbs to do some useful work. It's up to you. I'm a tech writer. I always worked on Framemaker, Epic, and earlier I did Unix macros and so on so I enjoy it, more or less. Keeps me from going mad, mad, mad. Do it yourself design is very interesting and I can pick my poisons. If this is something you care to do, go, go, go! If someone hassles you just work it out and push on, on, on. By the time you are done you should be a silver or gold editor, whatever. I could probably put all the precious metals on my user pages and then some, but I find standing out from the crowd makes you a target. When I was in the service I was told that when I walked into a room I should stand out from the crowd. The only trouble is, in war, the crowd contains a man or woman with a sniper rifle. So, you may have great credentials but sooner or later a jerk will show up who can get nastier than you and then it may not be worth it. Some people are professional nasties. It is up to you what you want to do. Are you interested in programming? Well I think I have managed to reply to you requests. If you would like, take a look at template:harvnb and the help page I mentioned and see what works for you. Since no one else really is on the article I think you have threw up all over my cheese design and text. After a certain number of edits you'll be listed as the chief contributor and then people will email YOU! Best wishes. PS feel free to change anything I did.Dave (talk) 19:35, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Please feel free (anyone) to change the type of referencing that is here. I have not as yet perfected the preferred use of citation listing that others do. Still trying to learn it. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't Apologies. Mugginsx (talk) 14:34, 25 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Removed the named siblings of John Smith

I removed the reference to John Smith's siblings by name. None of the recent scholarship mentions these names and no reference was given to support the claim. If anyone has a reliable source that mentions names of Smith's sisters and/or brothers, it can, of course, be reinstated. Mugginsx (talk) 20:24, 5 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 30 August 2015

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The result of the move request was: not moved. DrKiernan (talk) 19:03, 7 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

John Smith (explorer) → Captain John Smith – This man seems to be universally known as 'Captain'. Per WP:COMMONNAME this should be included in the title, which also eliminates the need for disambiguation. Zacwill16 (talk) 17:03, 30 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

ENGVAR all over the place

"colonise", "colonize", "baptise", "baptize" (admittedly within an image), "labour", "rumour", "harbor", "laborious". Since we can't excise one of the "baptize"s, using some ENGVAR that spells it -ize is best, and since Oxford spelling preserves the (majority) -our spellings I'm gonna go with that. Hijiri 88 (聖やや) 00:49, 18 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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