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Strengthen the lead?

I would like to strengthen the lead with a stronger statement about scientific consensus, possibly following "Multiple lines of scientific evidence show that the climate system is warming" with something like "This scientific consensus is supported by 97% of publishing climate scientists" from FAQ Q1 and possibly "and by national and international scientific organizations"? Regarding relevant citations, would people accept NASA as a source? I see there are citation numbers in the FAQ; do those relate to the main article's reference numbers? My browser doesn't display anything for them. My concern with the "multiple lines" statement alone is that a non-scientific reader may well think "Oh, they're still arguing." Thank you, Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 12:25, 26 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

There's been enough talk around showing that it isn't still controversial as far as scientists are concerned. If you want to convince like that about it your best bet is to just put the various facts about global warming in a fairly straightforward manner rather than emphasizing the scientific consensus too much which they tend to just see as some conspiracy. That is what this article is about after all Dmcq (talk) 14:51, 26 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
FAQ refs work fine for me, though the heading for that section is formatted differently than for articles so I didn't notice it at first. But clicking a ref hyperlink still takes me to the ref section. As for the proposal, if a reader thinks "multiple lines of scientific evidence" means "some scientists but not all" then god help them with the rest of the article. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 23:34, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I am in hearty agreement for a stronger statement. Mine would be that "The assertion that global warming is caused by greenhouse gases (GHG) is not a new one. It is simply that a body which receives more radiation energy than it emits gets warmer. Nearly all climate scientists agree that gases which capture infrared radiation interfere with the biosphere's emissions of infrared radiation."
DaveyHume (talk) 14:03, 12 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Error in first sentence of Summary?

Global warming, also referred to as climate change, is the observed century-scale rise in the average temperature of the Earth's climate system and its related effects.

The term climate system includes the lithosphere which is 5-100km deep. As far as I know, temperature measurements are limited to the atmosphere and water bodies. Correct? 81.131.171.255 (talk) 12:57, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The forces of the climate system modulate the lithosphere through geomorphology. prokaryotes (talk) 14:35, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
That's one of many ways the lithosphere interacts with the other four parts of the climate system and vice versa.NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 23:08, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@81.131.171.255 First, we don't report on what any of us think we know. We only report on what the reliable sources say, and in this case they say "Warming of the climate system is unequivocal." That said, sure we measure the temp of the lithosphere. I've helped my wife take such measurements many times. But no on here should care about my personal experience. All we really care about is how hard you've searched for reliable sources and whether you found any. Did you try a google search and google scholar search on _EARTHS CRUST TEMPERATURE_ or _TEMPERATURE LITHOSPHERE_ ? NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 23:08, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I suggest, NewsAndEventGuy, that the article replace "climate system" with "biosphere"?

I criticize the FACT that "global warming" is also referred to as "climate change", and I hold Wikipedia in high enough esteem that I reckon the difference should be noted here. It could say "Global warming, which is believed likely to cause (inconvenient/drastic/dangerous) climate change."

-- pick one of those in parentheses.

Global warming is quite well defined in the article, but "Climate Change" is a timid phrase, and in fact drastic climate change is a predicted consequence of global biosphere warming. It is far easier to demonstrate that there is a thermodynamic radiation imbalance affecting the biosphere, than to model the consequent climate changes. The people and industries with an interest in denying the reality of human caused GW take delight in the absurdly irrelevant assertion that "for billions of years the climate has been changing"
DaveyHume (talk) 13:39, 12 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Arctic amplification

William M. Connolley please elaborate on this edit, in particular the removal of the Nature study featuring your old colleagues at RC - https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Global_warming&type=revision&diff=852657378&oldid=852657235 If you do not object of mentioning the study, please re-add that part, thanks! @William M. Connolley: prokaryotes (talk) 14:10, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

What William objected to was that the edit got cause and effect all mixed up. Arctic warming isn't called "arctic amplification"; rather, arctic amplification causes warming to proceed at a faster pace than at lower latitudes (see the article on arctic amplification that you linked). Likewise, extreme weather in mid-latitudes doesn't cause arctic warming; rather, arctic warming causes changes to planetary wave patterns that could be associated with extreme weather (as explained in the abstract of the article that you cited). William M. Connolley may of course correct my interpretation as necessary. Shock Brigade Harvester Boris (talk) 03:34, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
No need for correction you're exactly right William M. Connolley (talk) 12:14, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I'm aware of that mix-up, but why not just correct that next time? prokaryotes (talk) 12:23, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AA own section?

NewsAndEventsGuy, the regional section also refers to short term fluctuations, which AA is not. This topic could also be expanded a little more, and have more updates, for instance AA is much more than twice the global mean already, and more elaborating on the weather patterns, and long term scenarios (temperature gradient vanishing due to lack of ice in the Arctic). I suggest we either have a AA sub section, or a sub section for short term trends (ie. cold blob) prokaryotes (talk) 13:22, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Instead of the frustrating experience of live tweaking, I agree the whole section could stand a refresher. Suggest you draft a comprehensive suggestion in your sandbox then post the draft to talk, and we'll all work together much more smoothly. For examples of that approach, search contribs by user @Enescot: NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 13:24, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
We really only need to decide sections order. prokaryotes (talk) 13:31, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I'm opposed to a section "arctic amplification" and "regional observations" side by side, as you already know. The reason is that arctic amplification is an example of regional observations. I'm also opposed to just putting "arctic amplification" as a subheading under regional observations until there is consensus on adding additional subheadings under that section. So it seems your perception of what we "really need to decide" differs from mine, and I have already described what I believe is the most effective way to proceed. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 13:36, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I like regional too, lets eject the short term stuff into a new section then? prokaryotes (talk) 13:45, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Or Regional and then another sub section here for AA. prokaryotes (talk) 13:49, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Don't thinks so. Whatever the title, the text in this section seems to emphasize that the vagaries of place and time are interesting (so we can talk about them a bit) but more importantly they all miss the point because the issue is global long term averages, not vagaries in either time or region. Also, all the stuff you added about extreme weather belongs in another section entirely, because the section is not discussing extreme weather, its discussing observed temperature. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 13:52, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, and this emphasis that we need a dedicated section, because AA is observed temperature + extreme weather. prokaryotes (talk) 17:30, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think you're following the sources accurately. AA is hypothesized - subject to ongoing debate - to contribute to extreme weather in the northern hemisphere but AA itself is independent of the existence of extreme weather. Then of course there is the ANT-arctic regions, and so at wikipedia "arctic amplification" redirects to polar amplification where sentence one defines the phenomena for both poles in terms of warming (not extreme weather) saying, "Polar amplification is the phenomenon that any change in the net radiation balance (for example greenhouse intensification) tends to produce a larger change in temperature near the poles than the planetary average." In addition, elsewhere I have pointed out you arer adding the connection to extreme weather in WIKIVOICE, even though Dr Francis herself in December wrote an essay summarizing the continuing debate and open research questions. There is a lot to be said for inline attribution in these cases. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 18:26, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
AA causes more EW, "The stalling of the northern hemisphere jet stream is being increasingly firmly linked to global warming, in particular to the rapid heating of the Arctic and resulting loss of sea ice." https://www.theguardian.com/environment/2018/jul/27/extreme-global-weather-climate-change-michael-mann The content I've added is reliable sourced. If you want to add to it, go for it. prokaryotes (talk) 18:36, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
This quote does not provide a different definition of AA so changes nothing. (A) The faster warming compared to other places is a regional temperature observation that could reasonably be in the section for regional temperature observations. (B) Re neutral presentation of AA's hypothesized impact on EW by tweaking the jetstream it's an oxymoron to say "increasingly firmly linked". That's like saying 110%, or "definitely (maybe)". (C) Neutral word choice aside, the hypothesized link to extreme weather belongs in a section covering effects, not temperature observations. A likely candidate is the existing subsection Global_warming#Environmental which already has a bullet point for extreme weather. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 18:59, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I've moved the AA stuff to the feedback section, since AA is considered a Planetary scale feedback https://websites.pmc.ucsc.edu/~jnoble/papers/ArcticAmplification.pdf prokaryotes (talk) 19:43, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Aspects of it probably belong in more than one place, as this thread attests, There are regional temp observations to be explained, the feedback aspect, and the hypothesized link to extreme weather. Maybe shoehorning it all into one section isn't the best way to help readers understand how the big topic of this article has many pieces that interact in a systemic way? NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 20:10, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The mention on temps warming twice is still at the regional temps section. The AA section is not really about EW per se, it's just about attribution and the mechanism. This could be extended ofc, with for instance going into more details about the jet stream patterns, and the subsequent record events (extreme heat, rain, drought, fire etc). prokaryotes (talk) 20:21, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

FYI, on Aug 20 a new literature review from Potsdam Instit was published. Story at scidaily NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 11:46, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Similar to last yrs Uni of Kansas report 'Weather whiplash' triggered by changing climate will degrade Midwest's drinking water A few more active editors for this article here would help to keep up with the science. prokaryotes (talk) 12:21, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Keep up in the detail articles, sure. Rare is the time any one new paper should find its way into this article, since this article should be a grand summary similar to the WG1 WG2 WG3 SPMs. Said another rway this page should be a fast read from 30,000.... no make that 50,000 feet with the big picture points. Each one new paper fills in details under those points and can be fleshed out in child articles further down the tree. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 13:26, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

constraints on climate feedback likelihood

This part in the climate feedback section makes no sense to me, "The IPCC projections previously mentioned span the "likely" range (greater than 66% probability, based on expert judgement)[121] for the selected emissions scenarios. However, the IPCC's projections do not reflect the full range of uncertainty.[122] The lower end of the "likely" range appears to be better constrained than the upper end." -- can we remove this, or does it belong in the model section? prokaryotes (talk) 21:31, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It could be better explained I suppose. Did you spend any time with the main RS that supports the statement? NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 21:41, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
That's funny, it's the Synthesis report with hundreds of pages, what you cite is not really about cf. prokaryotes (talk) 22:02, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I cited the RS in our article for that bit of text. Yes, it appears in the AR4 WG1 SYR. No, its not a cite to the entire thing which you say is hundreds of pages. It's a cite to a specific sub sub sub section. Did you read this bit all the way through? I thought it explained things just fine. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 22:19, 31 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Suicide research

There seems to be a bit of a discussion in the edit summaries as whether to include the recent research that suggests that global warming might cause more suicide. Let us streamline that discussion here. In my opinion, there are a couple of criteria to be met before research should be added to a general and well-read article as this one:

  • It should be confirmed by multiple sources; it should not be scientifically controversial.
  • It should be a general study; applicable to all affected regions.
  • If those two are true, it should not get undue weight by devoting multiple lines to it.

I'm not yet convinced that this research should be included. There is still substantial doubt about this study, see for instance the Scientific American review of the research (https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/global-warming-linked-to-higher-suicide-rates-across-north-america/). An other article linking global warming to suicides found that the link global warming-suicide is not general, but only happens during growth season in India: http://www.pnas.org/content/early/2017/07/25/1701354114.

If it is included, I strongly believe it should be summarized in one sentence, and not only mention two specific countries and one research article. Other effects are also summarized in one sentence in this bullet point. Why do people think it should be included/not included? Femkemilene (talk) 08:16, 3 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Move to Effects of global warming on humans This is a featured article sitting at the top of the topical tree, with the most traffic of all articles on the tree. So this article should be as short, punchy, and well-cited as possible. Adding the latest topical soundbite int he media stream works against this and weakens this article. In addition, we need to be wary of WP:RECENTISM when dealing with kinda new ideas of this sort. This article can certainly include in summary form reference to physical and psychological health impacts.... actually strike "can" and say "should". This article should include a few words about possible physical and psychological health impacts. That's important. But we don't need every paper on that topic as they come off the press to be added here. Instead, shuttle people off to the appropriate sub-articles. When including this material at the subarticles be on the lookout for WP:WIKIVOICE when dealing with new stuff before the global scientific community has had ample time to comment. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 12:17, 3 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Notice that this 2011 study cites (Fritze et al., 2008, Anderson, 2001; Basu & Samet, 2002; Qi, Tong, & Hu, 2009) in regards to increased suicide rates. The study is also cited at the section for psychological impacts at Effects of global warming on humans. prokaryotes (talk) 00:25, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Oh right, I did move this to that article, and you only reverted the part of the move at this page NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 01:06, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
? I've added the section on psychology in 2013. My point is, that there are more studies in the general literature. I think a mention here and more extensive over at the effects page. prokaryotes (talk) 01:11, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
For clarification, I cannot see any move to the effects page by you. Here is a recent more extensive article by wired on this subject. Looking at above cited SA article, it appears to only look at North America and recent publication. prokaryotes (talk) 01:45, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Oops. I confused Effects of global warming on humans with Effects of global warming on human health. I had moved this text to the latter and its still there. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 01:56, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, but don't you think it requires a mention at the main article here (there is lots of research on this, don't just look at recent coverage, I could extend a ref with above cited PDF study from 2011)? I'm perfectly comfortable with a one-liner. prokaryotes (talk) 02:07, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
In summary form, sure. E.g., Many human mental health issues have also been linked to global warming, e.g., blah (cite), blahblah (Cite), and suicide (Cite). At The main sub article Effects of global warming maybe expand the blah to a full sentence. At the specific sub-sub-article Effects of global warming on human health we can expand still more. Cramming the recommended soundbite from each paper as they come along into the top article makes for a crummy top article that will have a very hard time whenever it comes up at WP:FAR. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 10:40, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Tibi adsentior. prokaryotes (talk) 17:28, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
English please. HiLo48 (talk) 23:03, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Clathrate gun

If you know the RSs for this subject, please take a gander at the mega changes underway at Clathrate_gun_hypothesis. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 11:35, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

RSs? Femkemilene (talk) 19:11, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, try this link RSs NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 19:16, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Planetary boundaries

Re this edit, which added article Planetary boundaries as one of the main articles under our section climate change feedback, the reason give was that the concept is supposedly a framework to prevent feedbacks, per new PNAS study, only the cited paper does not mention the planetary feedback concept. Additionally, the concept is still being debated and so far as I know has yet to be embraced by the UN or UNFCC. So I reverted that particular edit here.
It's certainly an interesting paradigm, and touches on many topics including mitigation, adaptation, politics, but it isn't clear what RSs would allow us to work it in here, or how that could best be done in context with the article as a whole. But if anyone wants to start with doing research in the RSs, I certainly have an open mind about it. Just needs to pass muster with our various guidelines. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 21:55, 8 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Rockström, co-author of the PNAS study is the utmost expert on planetary boundaries (The PNAS study acknowledges members of the Planetary Boundary team). In his 2009 study Rockström, postulated a planetary boundary framework, which is based on feedback processes in the climate system. The PNAS study which identified ten tipping points, and related thresholds, basically uses the planetary boundary concept. A bit unclear why they not refer to it directly. However, the page should be linked there, then with See also, because climate tipping points are modulated within the planetary climate system constraints. If someone could take a peak into this study, many of the same authors, and think it mentions feedbacks and boundaries http://science.sciencemag.org/content/early/2015/01/14/science.1259855/tab-pdf prokaryotes (talk) 22:18, 8 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
This study connects both terms Planetary Boundaries: Exploring the Safe Operating Space for Humanity prokaryotes (talk) 22:21, 8 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
You know these sources better than me. Go for it. Just make sure whatever you do is based on what others will read in the sources rather than applying the rest of your knowledge to your reading of the sources. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 22:23, 8 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Okay will add something, also the PB article seems like it needs an update. prokaryotes (talk) 22:26, 8 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Warming in what time period?

This concerns the second line of the article: "Multiple lines of scientific evidence show that the climate system is warming." Warming is a relative term. I suggest we add "over the last century" to the end to clarify that the warming has occurred relative to what it was a 100 years ago. As the IPCC source cited for this statement also notes the time period over which the warming has occurred (recent decades). -Obsidi (talk) 14:29, 16 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Opposed it may be a good faith suggestion but per WP:LEAD this is supposed to summarize the main body of the article and we cover this pretty thoroughly in the main body. The lead is already excessively bloated with descriptors and a hint of tech speak that reduces the friendliness of the lead's read. If we add every nuance that can be supported by similar reasoning the lead will become an article instead of a summary! NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 16:41, 16 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Opposed as use of the word "is" clearly mens it's now, a continuing process. . . . dave souza, talk 14:08, 17 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Studies on indoor Co2 emissions

Recently, I've added two study results on CO2 concentrations assessing indoor Co2 concentrations, and it has been removed, however, the projected CO2 amount in Earth's atmosphere by the end of the century (outdoors) is in this ballpark, thus while not aiming at these trajectories, these studies appear relevant. I acknowledge a certain OR attribution in these findings, when posting it here, but it appears still, relevant, since it matches this topic. It is sad that we have to wait for studies to point this out directly. @Gorthian: prokaryotes (talk) 04:51, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I would say that is definitely OR. We have no idea how the concentrations of CO2 in the general atmosphere would affect humans. Until specific studies have been done on just that, extrapolating from indoor effects to atmospheric effects is pure speculation. There are just too many unknown factors.
Those studies would be good citations in the carbon dioxide article, though. :-) — Gorthian (talk) 05:01, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with Gorthian. If the extrapolation to global warming is made in the articles themselves, you could post it on health effects of global warming as well. Definitely important for CO2 article, but not sufficiently relevant for global warming. Femkemilene (talk) 07:19, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Same here. The bigger problem, in my opinion, is that about the time the Steffen "Hothouse" paper made scary headlines it seems like you've really been shoehorning in disjointed bits of cursory language from primary sources. It's illegal to litter, you know. Makes a ton of work for others cleaning up. If you want to look into this, with due time and labor, I just did some cursory searching on Carbon dioxide oognition in google and google scholar. Search the last two years only. There's a ton of material you could master before figuring out how to best improve our articles based on secondary sources. But most eds don't do that, because it means work and time and care. Here's three to get you started. These may not all be secondary RS but can get you started, and their bibliographies are further resources
NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 09:37, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Gorthian:, I wrote about this after reading [this new Forbes article]. Why would be the CO2 effect indoors differently to outdoors, it is the same toxicity. Forbes: How Does Climate Change Affect The Air We Breathe Indoors? Money Quote, "At 600 ppm we start to see the first hints of reduced cognitive function as CO2 is increasing in our blood stream. At 1000 ppm we see distinct impairment. At 2500 ppm we are effectively incompetent." prokaryotes (talk) 12:14, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I think the indoor emphasis is due to the fact that we do not experience these CO2 levels outdoors, yet. prokaryotes (talk) 12:21, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@NewsAndEventsGuy:, thank you for looking into this in more detail, and providing more spot on studies, will follow this topic and may add something more on point per WP guides at a later time (unless someone else does). prokaryotes (talk) 12:39, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Even if this topic was relevant to the article (
This is going off into the weeds. Direct health effects of CO2 are covered in other articles (e.g., Carbon_dioxide#Human_physiology) but aren't on-point for an article about global warming. Shock Brigade Harvester Boris (talk) 12:55, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I do think that if good research (as in multiple studies, clear consensus) is available, we should include it in a subarticle about global warming as well (health effects). We have done the same for ocean acidification, which is included in this article. It is not a direct effect of the warming, but definitely very closely related. @Prokaryotes:, before you spend a lot of energy looking for RS, maybe it would be wise to first find consensus on the relevance. I do not support inclusion, but might change mind if the sources are a) about global warming (not indoors) b) there is a clear consensus c) the magnitude of the effect is similar to other health effects. Femkemilene (talk) 13:06, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Whether cognition studies with CO2 are relevant to global warming isn't up to us. It's up to what we find in RSs. And so....
Opining = bad.
Finding Reading Collating Comprehending RSs = good
Let's close this thread as  Done for now. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 13:29, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

conservative

As P is trying to add "underestimate" (in Wikivoice) in the lead, using what looks like an advocacy publishing house, I thought I'd just remind us about this section of another article - Intergovernmental_Panel_on_Climate_Change#Conservative_nature_of_IPCC_reports NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 00:50, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The source meets, "Self-published expert sources may be considered reliable when produced by an established expert on the subject matter, whose work in the relevant field has previously been published by reliable third-party publications.", anyhow, the part in question is a cite of Naomi Oreskes study on this subject. Thus, a reliable secondary source for this claim. The report itself is more technical. prokaryotes (talk) 00:54, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
In any event it is inappropriate for the lead, as the lead is supposed to be a summary of the article body. Shock Brigade Harvester Boris (talk) 00:57, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The Climate feedback, and Climate Model section both mention it. The page is founded on the IPCC results, and when experts (the report is co-authored by Kevin Anderson, James Hansen, Michael E. Mann, Michael Oppenheimer, Naomi Oreskes, Stefan Rahmstorf, Eric Rignot, Hans Joachim Schellnhuber, Kevin Trenberth, and others), dedicate an entire report on this, publish study on this specific circumstance, then this should be mentioned. prokaryotes (talk) 01:13, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The precise cite for the study is Brysse, K, Oreskes, N, O’Reilly, J & Oppenheimer, M 2013, ‘Climate change prediction: Erring on the side of least drama?’, Global Environmental Change, vol. 23, no. 1, pp. 327-337 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0959378012001215 prokaryotes (talk) 01:18, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with NewsAndEventGuy and Shock Brigade Harvester Boris that this should not be in the lede. First of all, there are enough reliable sources that we don't really have to rely on self-published experts. For me more importantly is that the article should be about global warming mostly and not focus on the sources. Especially the lede is not the place to discuss some meta-analysis of climate science. When there is expert consensus that the IPCC is outdated/too conservative (sea level rise as far as I can tell), we might simply want to use a different source. (In terms of sea level rise, IPCC will have a special report september next year about this, I expect it too have slightly higher estimates). Femkemilene (talk) 08:41, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I have removed it from it lead. Same sort of reasons. Wikipedia is not in the business of saving the world, it is an encyclopaedia and should say what is in reliable sources with due weight. When they submit it to peer review and there's been some discussion about it then it could qualify to go into the lead. Dmcq (talk) 09:04, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Arguments not mentioning underestimation, conservatism of projections in lede space:
.."the lead is supposed to be a summary of the article body"
The article already states "Not all effects of global warming are accurately predicted by the climate models used by the IPCC. Observed Arctic shrinkage has been faster than that predicted.[156] Precipitation increased proportionally to atmospheric humidity, and hence significantly faster than global climate models predict.[157][158] Since 1990, sea level has also risen considerably faster than models predicted it would."
"..should say what is in reliable sources ... submit it to peer review" and "don't really have to rely on self-published experts"
The study has been published in peer review, has a cite count of 99, https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0959378012001215 If you do not like the BT link, or the direct link, there is lots of coverage in reliable secondary sources, ie. https://skepticalscience.com/climate-scientists-esld.html or take this study which highlights the key finding, and references the study "Moreover, the systematic tendency of climate models to underestimate temperature change during warm paleoclimates suggests that climate models are more likely to underestimate than to overestimate the amount of long-term future change." and "suggest that climate models may still be underestimating or missing relevant feedback https://science2017.globalchange.gov/chapter/15/ prokaryotes (talk) 09:38, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The article from 2013 looks okay but I am extremely leery of sticking in publications from think tanks into the lead, and that's what I removed. Have we a more recent study as well, that would be good but I'd go for the 2013 one if anything. Dmcq (talk) 11:26, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
.. "no meta-analysis of sources in lede?" Femkemilene (talk) 12:27, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
See also: Systematic review
The IPCC report itself is a meta analysis. Maybe it is time to re-think how much we want to stress these findings, and instead try to focus on the best and latest available science (the reports are usually outdated too). prokaryotes (talk) 12:24, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Two different ways of using meta-analysis here. What I meant is that you don't want to focus on the reliability of sources in the lede. If the IPCC is not the best source (which it quite often still is, even though slightly outdated), than we should mention a better source instead of making the lede even bigger. We should not waste space on talking about reliability of sources instead of global warming.
I agree with you that we should focus on the latest research, and that the IPCC reports become less valuable after 5 years have passed. However, a popular but still controversial paper is not better than an slightly outdated consensus statement and we should not use those too much. Femkemilene (talk) 12:33, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The peculiarity is that the scope of this article is global warming, yet the major source we use to cite foremost has weaknesses, based on statistical definitions, model shortcomings, and ignoring some research results But this is not considered controversial, as in being wrong - the reliability is not really questioned, it is more how we frame it, or present it here. So we should inform the reader that these consensus results emphasis on assessing the average risks, but informed decision making needs to account also of the greater risks, since they outweigh the medium risks, even if they are statistically less likely. My failure was that the study was just released, I should have used the 2013 direct link instead. But this discussion, is a discussion we have to have. I am not suggesting for major reworking the article, but add these brief pointers. prokaryotes (talk) 12:47, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Your real failure is POV pushing as evidenced by your comment that we should inform the reader that these consensus results emphasis on assessing the average risks, but informed decision making needs to account also of the greater risks, since they outweigh the medium risks, even if they are statistically less likely. What we should actually do is neutrally report what is found in the RSs while giving appropriate consideration to due weight. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 13:28, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
What we actually do is discussing the addition of a lede edit in which we actually use RSs. If we do not point out the shortcomings, identified by RSs, the reader is not fully informed about the topic. The question is if this belongs in the lede. Given the magnitude, implications, associated existential risk to human civilisation - pointed out by RSs, in my opinion a brief mention belongs in the lede. prokaryotes (talk) 13:43, 20 August 2018 (UTCwith weight i)
The magnitude, implications, associated existential risk and suchlike to human civilization of things is irrelevant on Wikipedia except in so far as that is commented on with weight in relevant and reliable sources. Dmcq (talk) 13:53, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Summary

To wrap this up for now, Boris suggested only article summary into lede, which appears to be the case here. Femkemilene appears to agree to use the 2013 citation (unless there is a better source, NCA report 2017?), but only occasionally. Dmcq, also mentioned support for the 2013 study. The opinion of the other two participating editor remains unclear. Maybe we just wait for more input from other editors, and look what the mainstream media is reporting on this subject. prokaryotes (talk) 16:14, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Now there's an idea. Look for mainstream secondary sources. Why didn't we think of that? NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 17:29, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
From today, "But more than a dozen Arctic climate scientists contacted by National Geographic agree that this year's active-layer data highlights the limitations of global climate models. The sophisticated computer programs that forecast future climate scenarios often used by government decision-makers simply can't capture major changes in permafrost." https://www.nationalgeographic.com/environment/2018/08/news-arctic-permafrost-may-thaw-faster-than-expected/ prokaryotes (talk) 17:45, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
That's news okay but doesn't qualify in comparison to the other sources in this article. As he article itself says "The discovery has not been peer-reviewed or published and represents limited data from one spot in one year". Dmcq (talk) 18:30, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
OMG. After all our drama about OR/POV. Now you're suggesting an RS that doesn't even mention the IPCC provides WP:VERIFICATION for "IPCC conservative". I should start keeping track when you do this, so I have diffs next time you accuse me of harassment. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 19:00, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Nobody stated that this is only about the IPCC, again we talk about this edit, and this study, quote "the available evidence suggests that scientists have in fact been conservative in their projections of the impacts of climate change. In particular, we discuss recent studies showing that at least some of the key attributes of global warming from increased atmospheric greenhouse gases have been under-predicted, particularly in IPCC assessments" prokaryotes (talk) 19:15, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Upon careful review, I think the text added to the lead about the climate models needs to be reworked to avoid stealth OR. Here is the history

We should not imply OR via the backdoor when we can not do OR in a straightforward way. So the text needs some more work. Maybe the more recent refs P posted offer a way forward. (Thanks at cursory read those seem useful). But rather than bog down in that, I will ignore this because I will - eventually - dig out the lead text at time this article was granted FA status, and will propose that we basically restore that text with updated references and no new crap from the current lead unless its been discussed and approved blow by blow. Lean Mean. Accessible. Readable. Enticing. The current lead is ........ not. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 19:31, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The thing is that IPCC uses studies and models which other researchers also use, thus this subject is interconnected. The latest most extensive read on this subject is this report (which you should read since it is based on RSs). The study you cited today from PIK, also mentions models. prokaryotes (talk) 19:45, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
But we can't have article text making or strongly implying that connection based on your belief even if I share that belief because that's original research. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 20:51, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Citing a peer reviewed study is not OR. Your cites for OR above, you may want to reassess your conclusions, if a governmental report finding constitutes what you claim. In any case I made my point now several times, and any further discussions belongs on the OR noticeboard. Please focus. prokaryotes (talk) 21:35, 21 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Point of no return study

@NewsAndEventsGuy, can you explain why you reverted this edit, what do you mean with, "misconstrued primary technical paper", in your summary edit? prokaryotes (talk) 23:02, 30 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your text (which I reverted)
A 2018 study concluded that too little climate actions by 2035 could result in crossing a point of no return to limit global warming below 2°C.[1]
The key misrepresentation here is that you assumed that post 2035 renewable energy growth would only be 2%, whereas the study also contemplates a scenario with growth rate of 5% after 2045 yielding the same odds. Your user page says you blog at climatestate.com, a policy advocacy site. Often your take on WP:PRIMARY sources seems to combine with confirmation bias and your admitted alarm. In this case, you reported the worst scenario in this study, simply ignoring the paper does contemplate a more aggressive climate mitigation effort at a later point in time. Besides those key criticisms, I also think this text is so generalized that it adds nothing. We have already said elsewhere that scientists recommend policy action. Your text says "too little climate action"... what action? Adaptation? The paper is about mitigation specifically. And "too little" begs for a [clarification needed] tag, and the paper does elaborate on this. Finally you say "Could result", which is wishy washy mambly pambly... is that 1% odds? 99%? The study quantifies the likelihood at 67% I think. To be honest, this particular PRIMARY source is a bit to dense for me to pretend to understand the nuances. But to go back to the beginning, I think you misrepresented the source in support of a POV that we should act immediately. Whether I agree with that sentiment or not is besides the point here at Wikipedia. Our beliefs either way are not a reason to misconstrue a PRIMARY source. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 23:46, 30 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "The point of no return for climate action: effects of climate uncertainty and risk tolerance". Earth System Dynamics. 2018. doi:10.5194/esd-9-1085-2018. {{cite journal}}: Unknown parameter |authors= ignored (help)CS1 maint: unflagged free DOI (link)
The press release from the European Geological Union, If governments don’t act decisively by 2035 to fight climate change, humanity could cross a point of no return after which limiting global warming below 2°C in 2100 will be unlikely.. The press release (and the study btw), say pretty much what I tried to add to article space. I kept it brief because the article is so large. Climate action is a synonym for climate mitigation, hence why that part was added to the mitigation section. prokaryotes (talk) 00:09, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
On the main point, the press release you cite doesn't only say what you say it says. You're misrepresenting it the same way you misrepresented the PRIMARY source. The press release explains the likelihood (67%), and talks about two scenarios, not one.... 2% growth in renewables post-2035 and 5% post-2045, just as I explained above. From the press release If we were to reduce emissions at a faster rate, by increasing the share of renewable energy by 5% each year, we would buy another 10 years. I'm not opposed to making appropriate use of this work, but your edit is not appropriate use. On the small quibble, where is "climate action" defined specifically as a synonym of climate mitigation and excluding climate adaptation or geoengineering? From the lead of this article (which is our top one in the topic) Possible societal responses to global warming include mitigation by emissions reduction, adaptation to its effects, building systems resilient to its effects, and possible future climate engineering. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 00:26, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Carbon budget

The other more fundamental problem is this one-liner inserted the scary phrase "point of no return", but the study's true value (and related works) is to develop the concept of Carbon budget across our climate articles. Currently "carbon budget" is a redir to Carbon cycle but (A) there used to be text at 'carbon budget' and (b) the target article carbon cycle does not appear talk about carbon budget. Neither does the main article Global warming nor climate mitigation, at least on a rapid skim reading. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 01:13, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Because it is scary, that is why the inventor of the Carbon Budget, Hans Joachim Schellnhuber, wrote in the foreword of the report we discussed in above conservative section, "Climate change is now reaching the end-game ... the issue is the very survival of our civilization". prokaryotes (talk) 03:23, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Methane FYI

FYI methane article seems based on old sources and may need big update. GWP and half lifes are a bit too deep for me to do more than check sources and attempt to do verification. NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 12:05, 4 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Scientific discussion about existential threat to civilisation

More recent discourse goes beyond, we have a consensus, and the IPCC is too conservative in some aspects, or potentially catastrophic climate change, more like we have an emergency. For instance: As policy continues to stagnate, news.com.au contacted nearly 30 scientists across the country to get their views on the contentious issue. Overwhelmingly they agreed Australia wasn’t doing enough about our “existential threat to civilisation”., or If governments don’t act decisively by 2035 to fight climate change, humanity could cross a point of no return after which limiting global warming below 2°C in 2100 will be unlikely, or ..the issue is the very survival of our civilization Shouldn't this be also covered in the scientific discussion section, with extending to Scientific opinion on climate change? The citations above establish notability via experts in their fields, peer-reviewed journal, and/or through reliable secondary sources. prokaryotes (talk) 12:37, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

We have one sentence in the scientific discussion section addressing exactly that: In November 2017, a second warning to humanity signed by 15,364 scientists from 184 countries stated that "the current trajectory of potentially catastrophic climate change due to rising greenhouse gases from burning fossil fuels, deforestation, and agricultural production – particularly from farming ruminants for meat consumption" is "especially troubling".
The first source you're mentioning only has nearly 30 Australian scientist, so the current source is better. The second source does not mention emergencies or things in that directions (tbf, I haven't read the paper since its first draft). Alarm among climate scientists is definitely present, but I think that the current text clearly demonstrates that and that the two sources you are quoting do not provide a better basis than the current source. Femkemilene (talk) 12:59, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
There is a difference between, potentially catastrophic climate change, and existential threat to civilisation.prokaryotes (talk) 13:16, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I understand that. There is also a difference between nearly 30 scientists and 15,364 scientists. Because this is a very broad article, small questionnaires don't fit in here. Femkemilene (talk) 13:35, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
existential threat to civilisation doesn't belong anywhere near the scientific discussion section William M. Connolley (talk) 13:38, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"...news.com.au contacted nearly 30 scientists across the country to get their views on the contentious issue". Statements made in such interviews are not reliable from a scientific point of view. What you need are peer reviewed articles where the threat to civilization is seriously investigated, and review articles based on such articles. There may well exist such scientific studies on how climate change could lead to a collapse of our civilization. If sthat's the case, we should discuss the issue based on such articles. Count Iblis (talk) 14:44, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Yes there are, and this emerging scientific opinion isn't really debated as far as I know. See, Michael E Mann, or here (UN, which I think is based on this study), here (Effective Thesis, looks like a review of some sorts), here (Scripps, peer reviewed study discussion). There is also lots of secondary sources on this recent PNAS study, for instance briefly discussed here (Science Media Centre), here (World Economic Forum discusses it). prokaryotes (talk) 14:50, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]