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5 November 2023

• 07:5107:51, 5 November 2023 diff hist −2,180 Wikipedia:Everything you need to know It may be OK to cite something produced by the subject; the point is that independent sources are needed also. Defining "significant viewpoint" first, to avoid confusion about what it means. If a view is too fringe to be mentioned in a broader article, a See Also link likely wouldn't appear there either. Original research is not limited to analysis of *primary* sources. Shortening things that are redundant or too detailed for a summary page. Full sentences. Using name of actual baseball player. Tag: Reverted
• 05:5505:55, 5 November 2023 diff hist 0 Iron Curtain →Poland: Capitalizing Tag: Reverted
• 05:2605:26, 5 November 2023 diff hist −844 1995 American League Championship Series More encyclopedic tone, per the template at the top. I'm not sure whether there was actual rain in Game 4, but either way it probably doesn't need to be mentioned Tag: Reverted
• 04:5304:53, 5 November 2023 diff hist −1 White Zombie (film) →Aftermath and influence: Unneeded space Tag: Reverted
• 01:2601:26, 5 November 2023 diff hist +2 Henry VI, Part 1 (The Hollow Crown) Periods at end of sentences Tag: Reverted

4 November 2023

• 22:0622:06, 4 November 2023 diff hist −106 Presbyopia Listing treatments in sidebar that are discussed in the "Treatment" section of the article. Removing redundant citations and excessive spacing. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 22:0422:04, 4 November 2023 diff hist −14 1995 American League Division Series It wasn't "taken away from them" Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 21:4821:48, 4 November 2023 diff hist +1 Rachel Keller Apostrophe Tag: Reverted
• 21:3921:39, 4 November 2023 diff hist +7 1985 World Series →Matchups: I'm not quite sure whether commas belong after the year, but the time appears immediately after that, and the featured article 1926 World Series had commas there prior to a recent unconstructive edit which was subsequently restored for no good reason Tag: Reverted
• 21:3221:32, 4 November 2023 diff hist +25 Houston Astros sign stealing scandal →Background: Adding author name and fixing url. Anyone who reverts this should take note of the red letters which then appear in ref 22 Tag: Reverted
• 21:2221:22, 4 November 2023 diff hist +16 1994 World Series The List of World Series champions starts at 1903, so we should clarify that that is the starting point if we say this was the second time it was not played. It would be easier just to say "The first time since 1904", but either way we should be accurate Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 20:5220:52, 4 November 2023 diff hist −15 Opioid epidemic in the United States →History: It was not a rebuttal to the letter itself. The problem was not the letter, but the way it was misrepresented. Also check out the editing history of the article about the letter, which has likewise been reverted for reasons that have nothing to do with actual content. Tag: Reverted
• 20:5020:50, 4 November 2023 diff hist +54 Mark Geragos The pardon was not requested on January 20, 2001. That is when it was granted. The cited source was actually a dead link, but you can see from the archive that Geragos is not mentioned: https://web.archive.org/web/20030206224333/https://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2003/01/25/eveningnews/main537972.shtml The new LA Times source does mention Geragos. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 20:3420:34, 4 November 2023 diff hist −1,047 1997 World Series No source for the Marlins being underdogs. A run does not "nullify" a run by the other team. Removing redundancy and awkwardness, such as details of Game 3 being repeated under Game 7. Marlins' fire sale didn't all happen in one day. Tag: Reverted
• 20:3420:34, 4 November 2023 diff hist −111 2000 World Series The Yankees had a better winning percentage in 1995 than in 2000 Tag: Reverted
• 19:4419:44, 4 November 2023 diff hist +53 1933 World Series Restoring days of the week, which there was no reason to remove. Tag: Reverted
• 19:3619:36, 4 November 2023 diff hist +43 1932 World Series Restoring days of the week, which there was no reason to remove. Tag: Reverted
• 19:3119:31, 4 November 2023 diff hist +71 1931 World Series Restoring days of the week, which there was no reason to remove. Tag: Reverted
• 19:2619:26, 4 November 2023 diff hist +64 1930 World Series Restoring days of the week, which there was no reason to remove. I'm not sure about the use of "A's" here, especially with the apostrophe when it's not possessive, but I'll leave that alone Tag: Reverted
• 19:1819:18, 4 November 2023 diff hist +51 1929 World Series Restoring days of the week, which there was no reason to remove. Tag: Reverted
• 19:1119:11, 4 November 2023 diff hist +43 1927 World Series Restoring days of the week, which there was no reason to remove. Tag: Reverted
• 19:0219:02, 4 November 2023 diff hist +7 1925 World Series →Matchups: Since the time appears right after this Tag: Reverted
• 18:5918:59, 4 November 2023 diff hist +7 1924 World Series →Matchups: Since the time appears right after this Tag: Reverted
• 18:5718:57, 4 November 2023 diff hist +73 1926 World Series Restoring days of the week, which there was no reason to remove. Tags: Undo Reverted
• 18:5318:53, 4 November 2023 diff hist +66 1925 World Series →Matchups: Restoring days of the week Tag: Reverted
• 18:3018:30, 4 November 2023 diff hist −799 1924 World Series Restoring days of the week. Moving specific details about Game 1 into Game 1 section, and removing redundant description of Game 7 from the lede. Tag: Reverted