User contributions for 108.14.43.230

2 September 2018

• 05:4305:43, 2 September 2018 diff hist −38 Kolob This seems obvious to the point where needing to state it borders on the ridiculous.
• 05:3905:39, 2 September 2018 diff hist −731 Kolob This is an article about Mormon Cosmology, not refutations of it.

31 August 2018

• 04:0004:00, 31 August 2018 diff hist +1 Rollin' 30s Harlem Crips spacing
• 04:0004:00, 31 August 2018 diff hist +23 Rollin' 30s Harlem Crips initial description leaves out Belizeans, which the rest of the article almost exclusively emphasizes.
• 03:5803:58, 31 August 2018 diff hist +1 Rollin' 30s Harlem Crips oxford comma
• 03:5703:57, 31 August 2018 diff hist −28 Rollin' 30s Harlem Crips Lots of spelling/grammar issues. Added internal links. Removed mention of Los Angeles, since it's a Los Angeles gang.
• 03:5503:55, 31 August 2018 diff hist −105 Rollin' 30s Harlem Crips Situation unexplained/uncited, and following sentences make more sense
• 03:5403:54, 31 August 2018 diff hist −14 Rollin' 30s Harlem Crips →Activities
• 03:5303:53, 31 August 2018 diff hist +11 Rollin' 30s Harlem Crips using slang here is very ambiguous without direct quote or explanation.

30 August 2018

• 09:5609:56, 30 August 2018 diff hist +139 Talk:Nongoloza's Children No edit summary
• 09:5509:55, 30 August 2018 diff hist +51 Talk:Jonny Steinberg No edit summary
• 09:5109:51, 30 August 2018 diff hist −41 Numbers Gang Source? Tag: references removed
• 09:5009:50, 30 August 2018 diff hist −100 Numbers Gang Source? Tag: references removed
• 09:5009:50, 30 August 2018 diff hist −100 Numbers Gang Source? Tag: references removed
• 09:4909:49, 30 August 2018 diff hist −72 Numbers Gang Source? Tag: references removed
• 09:4709:47, 30 August 2018 diff hist +188 Talk:Numbers Gang No edit summary
• 09:4609:46, 30 August 2018 diff hist −73 Numbers Gang 404 Tag: references removed
• 09:4509:45, 30 August 2018 diff hist −148 Numbers Gang 404 Tag: references removed
• 09:4409:44, 30 August 2018 diff hist −147 Numbers Gang 403 Tag: references removed
• 09:4309:43, 30 August 2018 diff hist −67 Numbers Gang 404 Tag: references removed
• 09:2009:20, 30 August 2018 diff hist −54 Numbers Gang this source is racist propaganda, not news or academic, and it doesn't even make sense to reference it .... this is probably an article to watch closely. Tag: references removed
• 08:4008:40, 30 August 2018 diff hist −16 Numbers Gang no explanation
• 08:4008:40, 30 August 2018 diff hist −385 Numbers Gang No source, conflicts with beginning, if true and sourced should be at beginning not end.

25 August 2018

• 22:0622:06, 25 August 2018 diff hist −11 Cellphone surveillance makes no sense

7 August 2018

• 14:2714:27, 7 August 2018 diff hist −255 Edda Very confusing, should be part of separate article.
• 14:2614:26, 7 August 2018 diff hist −64 Edda That should be a separate article. really confusing here

15 June 2018

• 05:5505:55, 15 June 2018 diff hist −487 E-40 Owning stocks is standard, not enterepeneur

13 June 2018

• 22:4322:43, 13 June 2018 diff hist −89 Jackass (franchise) This is for thngs they influenced, not things that influenced them. Should be in a separate section.
• 13:2613:26, 13 June 2018 diff hist −23 Cultural appropriation name in url
• 13:2113:21, 13 June 2018 diff hist −15 Cultural appropriation Not in link, searching didn't find much evidence of this term or of ethnic group, other cited examples might be better
• 13:0813:08, 13 June 2018 diff hist −36 Cultural appropriation Language not in reference, so neutral people is better as the message seems to be to everyone.
• 13:0113:01, 13 June 2018 diff hist −636 Cultural appropriation Dead link, and very weak single source for a major claim about an academic field. Tag: references removed

11 June 2018

• 21:0321:03, 11 June 2018 diff hist −10 PicoJava Obviously ? Bad word.
• 20:3520:35, 11 June 2018 diff hist +325 Talk:List of fastest computers No edit summary
• 20:3120:31, 11 June 2018 diff hist −7 TOP500 bad word
• 20:0920:09, 11 June 2018 diff hist +50 Earth Simulator Clarified ES OS
• 20:0620:06, 11 June 2018 diff hist −143 Earth Simulator Terrible sentence.
• 08:3408:34, 11 June 2018 diff hist −5 Cyber Insider Threat No edit summary

10 June 2018

• 09:0909:09, 10 June 2018 diff hist −803 United States Marine Corps the graphic was updated, but this text was not
• 04:4204:42, 10 June 2018 diff hist −6 United States Special Operations Command phrasing
• 03:3203:32, 10 June 2018 diff hist +3 Disposition Matrix missing a word

8 June 2018

• 18:4518:45, 8 June 2018 diff hist −258 Reston virus not relevant
• 04:1304:13, 8 June 2018 diff hist +20 John Draper No edit summary
• 04:1304:13, 8 June 2018 diff hist +11 John Draper No edit summary

7 June 2018

• 15:2415:24, 7 June 2018 diff hist +65 New Life+: Young Again in Another World →Controversy

6 June 2018

• 12:0412:04, 6 June 2018 diff hist −168 Make America Great Again weird speculative statement

28 May 2018

• 23:1223:12, 28 May 2018 diff hist −3 Edith Bouvier Beale poor choice of wording.

10 April 2018

• 08:0108:01, 10 April 2018 diff hist −26 DEFCON Terrible sentence, could be improved further.

2 April 2018

• 12:4512:45, 2 April 2018 diff hist −391 Roy Harper (character) There seems to be no reason for this info other than to include a misogyny-lite quote.
• 12:1312:13, 2 April 2018 diff hist −11 Great Lakes Avengers Arguably the more important of the two reasons given.