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10 January 2014

• 03:5303:53, 10 January 2014 diff hist +191 Talk:12 Years a Slave (film) →Final fate of Solomon Northrup
• 03:5003:50, 10 January 2014 diff hist +13 12 Years a Slave (film) Spill link is dead already.
• 01:3501:35, 10 January 2014 diff hist +3 Lance Henriksen bare links preferable to hidden URLs Tag: changing height and/or weight
• 01:1101:11, 10 January 2014 diff hist +170 Jennifer's Body Remove entirely unnecessary repetition of named reference after every sentence. Proper source for Rick Groen not just vague link to Metacritic. Also use Template:Plainlist, it is what Template:Infobox film suggests, it is clear and easier to read
• 01:0001:00, 10 January 2014 diff hist +435 Jennifer's Body CinemaScore C- Placement not ideal but not enough for a separate "Audience response" section (although some of the audience demographics overlaps with the Box Office section but it doesn't belong there either.)
• 00:5200:52, 10 January 2014 diff hist +15 Jennifer's Body →Soundtrack: specify the author
• 00:4900:49, 10 January 2014 diff hist −16 Jennifer's Body →Soundtrack: Remove unnecessary subheading. A music section might be split into Soundtrack and Score sections but without only a small descriptive paragraph the Tracklist subheading only clutters the page index.
• 00:4500:45, 10 January 2014 diff hist +139 Jennifer's Body Either Variety is the source or it isn't. Change link to Variety.com. Also change section title to WP:MOSFILM recommended title
• 00:4000:40, 10 January 2014 diff hist −68 Jennifer's Body IGN review clearly does not belong beside review aggregators. Better at the end than in a clearly wrong place. Remove per suggestion. Push reference down.
• 00:2900:29, 10 January 2014 diff hist −93 Jennifer's Body Reference is used only once. Better to include it inline, especially since there are no other references that have been pushed out to the Reflist.
• 00:2500:25, 10 January 2014 diff hist +280 Jennifer's Body Grammar. What is a "review aggregate" supposed to be. "Review aggregator" or "Review aggregation website". IGN is just another review.

9 January 2014

• 20:4420:44, 9 January 2014 diff hist +79 Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film →Unreliable Box Office Mojo: copyedit to be a little clearer.
• 20:3420:34, 9 January 2014 diff hist +1,571 Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film →Unreliable Box Office Mojo: new section
• 20:2020:20, 9 January 2014 diff hist +2 Talk:Box Office Mojo No edit summary
• 20:1920:19, 9 January 2014 diff hist +214 Talk:Box Office Mojo →Not so reliable source
• 20:0520:05, 9 January 2014 diff hist +6 Marvel One-Shots avoid jargon. redirects to Twitter anyway.
• 17:5817:58, 9 January 2014 diff hist +286 User talk:Jack Greenmaven No edit summary
• 17:5617:56, 9 January 2014 diff hist +797 User talk:Jack Greenmaven →Unreliable Box Office Mojo: new section
• 17:5117:51, 9 January 2014 diff hist +647 Talk:Seven Psychopaths →Box office mojo not reliable.
• 17:4517:45, 9 January 2014 diff hist −116 Seven Psychopaths One last edit to request discussion on Talk page. This seems a lot like WP:OR bad policy to fix known mistakes in source. Undid revision 589947857 by Corvoe
• 17:4217:42, 9 January 2014 diff hist +226 Talk:Seven Psychopaths →Box office mojo not reliable.
• 17:4117:41, 9 January 2014 diff hist +2,135 Talk:Seven Psychopaths →Box office mojo not reliable.: new section
• 17:2317:23, 9 January 2014 diff hist −145 Seven Psychopaths Please follow WP:SIMPLE rules and explain why you reverted change to WP:RS. (Alternatively revert back to before edit warning was ignored and figures rounded without explanation) Undid 589879521 by Special:Contributions/Jack Greenmaven
• 17:1717:17, 9 January 2014 diff hist +44 The Wolf of Wall Street (2013 film) Template:Infobox film recommends Template:Plainlist. Also in critical response do not equivocate, write decisively, avoid "mostly".
• 17:0417:04, 9 January 2014 diff hist +117 Insomniac Games WP:RELTIME Now? Since when? where was it before. if someone wrote "now" those other things must be important, right?
• 16:5916:59, 9 January 2014 diff hist −156 Resistance (video game series) copyedit. change intel to intelligence for clarity and for one less spelling error. other edits for brevity.
• 02:5802:58, 9 January 2014 diff hist +408 Rampart (film) No edit summary
• 02:4902:49, 9 January 2014 diff hist +6 Seven Psychopaths No edit summary
• 02:2802:28, 9 January 2014 diff hist +44 Frisky Dingo No Metacritic. Anyone ratings?
• 02:1002:10, 9 January 2014 diff hist −117 Kick-Ass (film) WP:UNDUE detail about sequel. It is barely notable that the main actors reprise their roles, it might be notable if any of them did not reprise their roles.
• 02:0802:08, 9 January 2014 diff hist −151 Seven Psychopaths Replace Box Office Mojo with reliable source. (The compromise figures and consensus indicated by warnings was ignored and figures were rounded so a WP:RS reliable source is the answer if warnings are going to be ignored and figures changed anyway.)
• 01:5601:56, 9 January 2014 diff hist +9 Sasha DiGiulian WP:RELTIME A good encyclopedia says when (or since when). See also WP:NOTNEWS

8 January 2014

• 14:4814:48, 8 January 2014 diff hist +23 The Wolf of Wall Street (2013 film) replacing a source is different to removing a source. The Slate is clearly an improvement though. Add author name to citation.