User contributions for 109.77.206.203

6 July 2022

• 03:0803:08, 6 July 2022 diff hist −24 Zero Hour (Star Trek: Enterprise) Copyedit. Remove extra "at" from "at back at Earth,"
• 03:0103:01, 6 July 2022 diff hist −9 John Campea Copyedit. "with whom Campea is personal friends with" could rephrase or could simply remove it.
• 02:5802:58, 6 July 2022 diff hist +2 John Campea List the same number in the intro and the article body.
• 02:5702:57, 6 July 2022 diff hist +38 John Campea Too many primary sources (too many video references too).
• 02:4702:47, 6 July 2022 diff hist −83 Reginald Barclay This outside commentary does not seem appropriate. Undid revision 1088969848 by Verdana Bold (talk) Tag: Undo
• 02:4002:40, 6 July 2022 diff hist +726 Business as Usual (Star Trek: Deep Space Nine) Review from The A. V. Club
• 02:3102:31, 6 July 2022 diff hist +342 Business as Usual (Star Trek: Deep Space Nine) Review from Tor.com 6 out of 10.
• 01:3201:32, 6 July 2022 diff hist −27 Detained (Star Trek: Enterprise) Copyedit. Avoid repetition ... together ... together.
• 01:2701:27, 6 July 2022 diff hist −1 Renaissance Man (film) MOS:DOUBT
• 01:1701:17, 6 July 2022 diff hist +94 Thor: Love and Thunder Add author to reference
• 01:0801:08, 6 July 2022 diff hist +982 Talk:Chip 'n Dale: Rescue Rangers (film) →Bobby Driscoll: VanityFair article
• 00:5100:51, 6 July 2022 diff hist −1 12 Mighty Orphans Update Rotten Tomatoes. 63% 88 reviews
• 00:4900:49, 6 July 2022 diff hist −22 12 Mighty Orphans MOS:STRAIGHT
• 00:4800:48, 6 July 2022 diff hist 0 12 Mighty Orphans Keep the review aggregators together
• 00:4500:45, 6 July 2022 diff hist +2 Talk:Facing the Giants →RECEPTION section
• 00:4500:45, 6 July 2022 diff hist +231 Talk:Facing the Giants →RECEPTION section: WP:USERGENERATED
• 00:4200:42, 6 July 2022 diff hist +267 Regular Show: The Movie Review from CinemaCrazed
• 00:4100:41, 6 July 2022 diff hist −264 Regular Show: The Movie WP:USERGENERATED Audience scores from Rotten Tomatoes are not allowed either. No critic score, only 2 reviews listed. Tag: references removed
• 00:3900:39, 6 July 2022 diff hist −189 Regular Show: The Movie WP:UGC IMDB scores are not allowed. Tag: references removed
• 00:3800:38, 6 July 2022 diff hist −486 Scary Stories: Dark Web WP:USERGENERATED Audience scores from IMDB and other user voted web polls are not allowed. Tag: references removed
• 00:3600:36, 6 July 2022 diff hist +1,105 Muhammad: The Last Prophet Reviews.
• 00:3000:30, 6 July 2022 diff hist +71 Muhammad: The Last Prophet Metacritic 47%
• 00:2800:28, 6 July 2022 diff hist +133 Muhammad: The Last Prophet WP:UGC and WP:IMDB user voted scores not allowed. Undid revision 1092096661 by SlashPositive (talk) Tag: Undo
• 00:2700:27, 6 July 2022 diff hist +163 Bloody Hell (2020 film) WP:USERGENERATED Audience scores from Rotten Tomatoes and IMDB are not allowed.
• 00:2000:20, 6 July 2022 diff hist −6 Bloody Hell (2020 film) WP:FILMLEAD "If the nationality is not singular, cover the different national interests later"
• 00:1800:18, 6 July 2022 diff hist +945 Last Knights Review from The New York Times
• 00:1300:13, 6 July 2022 diff hist −231 Last Knights WP:UGC and WP:IMDB almost all of this has to go. Undid revision 1095054070 by Leftorwriter (talk) Tag: Undo
• 00:1200:12, 6 July 2022 diff hist +130 Last Knights We don't include audience reviews or other WP:UGC usergenerated content so I need to revert this edit to cleanly revert all of it Undid revision 1095815950 by Captainllama (talk) Tag: Undo
• 00:1100:11, 6 July 2022 diff hist +14 Last Knights WP:FILMPLOT 400-700 words. Needs a trim.
• 00:0700:07, 6 July 2022 diff hist −32 Elektra (2005 film) Revert unexplained change to lead section. Please read WP:FILMLEAD. You need to expand the critical response section before adding else to the lead. Undid revision 1092639664 by 37.163.3.188 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 00:0200:02, 6 July 2022 diff hist −42 Catwoman (film) Remove irrelevant Navbox
• 00:0100:01, 6 July 2022 diff hist +88 Catwoman (film) Citation needed. Highest grossing female-led superhero film statement not verified. Ideally it should be both verified and shown to be noteworthy too.

5 July 2022

• 23:5323:53, 5 July 2022 diff hist −13 Catwoman (film) Restore neutral wording. Better not to use the phrase "box office bomb" unless a reliable source specifically uses it first. The Box Office section of the article should have better sources before the lead makes such claims.
• 23:5223:52, 5 July 2022 diff hist −45 Catwoman (film) Revert unsourced claim. The film lost far more than the budget subtracted from the gross revenue. Tag: Undo
• 23:4723:47, 5 July 2022 diff hist −38 Home Alone (franchise) WP:INFOBOX avoid links within the same page, not a table of contents. Remove another link from the Infobox that is just linking to lower on this very page.
• 23:4623:46, 5 July 2022 diff hist −62 Home Alone (franchise) WP:ANTAGONIST also this level of subdivision is excessive.
• 23:4223:42, 5 July 2022 diff hist −109 Home Sweet Home Alone Copyedit. Video references should be clearly marked as Template:Cite AV Media. What Columbus said is relevant, the exact place he said it and the interviewer is only incidental and listing that detail in the reference should be more than enough.
• 23:3723:37, 5 July 2022 diff hist +222 Home Alone 2: Lost in New York Cult claims need better sources. WP:MEDIUM is not a reliable source.
• 23:3323:33, 5 July 2022 diff hist −13 Home Alone 2: Lost in New York Revert unexplained changes. Metacritic says reviews were mixed. No explanation was given for changes. Revision as of 18:52, 18 May 2022 (edit) (undo) Nicolasburle
• 23:2923:29, 5 July 2022 diff hist +333 Home Alone 2: Lost in New York Better CinemaScore reference.
• 22:0522:05, 5 July 2022 diff hist −42 The Hunger Games (franchise) →Cast and crew: Unnecessary subdivision, all one series.
• 22:0422:04, 5 July 2022 diff hist −27 The Hunger Games (franchise) Please follow the WP:SIMPLE rules and explain your changes with an edit summary. Subdividing the series is unnecessary. Undid revision 1095225269 by 186.208.72.150 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 22:0322:03, 5 July 2022 diff hist −33 Transformers (film series) Revert unexplained changes. Please follow the WP:SIMPLE rules and explain your changes with an edit summary. There does not appear to be any good reason to subdivide the series, Rise of the Beasts not even released yet. Undid revision 1096584723 by 186.208.72.150 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 22:0122:01, 5 July 2022 diff hist +6 The Terminal List Rotten Tomatoes 36% 36 reviews 5.4/10
• 21:5521:55, 5 July 2022 diff hist +21 Becky (2020 film) WP:SHORTDESC Purposes: "a disambiguation in searches, especially to distinguish the subject from similarly titled subjects in different fields" overly generic description does not achieve that goal. Undid revision 1096646070 by GhostInTheMachine (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted