User contributions for 109.79.168.76

19 September 2022

• 01:1501:15, 19 September 2022 diff hist −6 Sharpe's Waterloo (TV programme) MOS:PLIST list of people using list template
• 01:1301:13, 19 September 2022 diff hist +21 Sharpe's Peril Template:Cite AV Media should be used for video references
• 01:1201:12, 19 September 2022 diff hist −192 Open Season (2006 film) Plot section already too long. No excuse for making it even longer. Also WP:FILMPLOT Mid- and post-credit scenes should generally not be included in the plot summary. Tag: Undo
• 01:1001:10, 19 September 2022 diff hist −35 Beast (2022 American film) Lukewarm? Better to include the specific score the reviewer gave the film.
• 01:0801:08, 19 September 2022 diff hist −2 Beast (2022 American film) Box office gross. Consistency.
• 01:0301:03, 19 September 2022 diff hist −22 Gunfight at the O.K. Corral (film) MOS:PLIST list of people using list template
• 01:0201:02, 19 September 2022 diff hist +113 Gunfight at the O.K. Corral (film) Stripping indentation from Infobox is not an improvement. Also introduced grammar error. Undid revision 1110931292 by WikiMaster2K15 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 01:0101:01, 19 September 2022 diff hist +28 Gunfight at the O.K. Corral (film) Stripping indentation from lists is not an improvement. Undid revision 1110931085 by WikiMaster2K15 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 00:5800:58, 19 September 2022 diff hist −23 Don't Worry Darling WP:FILMLEAD critical summary should be well supported by text in the article body and I am not seeing anything in the Critical response section to support this claim. This is not the first time I've removed it either. Undid revision 1110803874 by 50.49.195.137 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 00:5600:56, 19 September 2022 diff hist +5 Don't Worry Darling Revert good faith fix so hopefully I can cleanly revert another editor. Undid revision 1110883964 by Malmmf (talk) Tag: Undo
• 00:5100:51, 19 September 2022 diff hist −34 The Fast and the Furious: Tokyo Drift Do include sources for uncredited cameos but there should not be any need to overtly explain the as text where the cast was sourced. The film credits should be the source of everything else (except the _uncredited_ cameos).
• 00:4200:42, 19 September 2022 diff hist −102 A League of Their Own (2022 TV series) Please see Help:Referencing for beginners or ask for help at WP:TEAHOUSE. Tag: Undo
• 00:3900:39, 19 September 2022 diff hist +15 Smile (2022 film) Plot section needed.
• 00:3700:37, 19 September 2022 diff hist +474 Father Stu Revert unexplained delete of budget range. Undid revision 1110952210 by Marychan41 (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
• 00:2200:22, 19 September 2022 diff hist −578 Transformers (film series) Revert unexplained changes. Keep lead section concise, it is supposed to summarize. WP:LEAD (Also that reference writes both "Looks like" and "officially" in the title sentence, which is contradictory, and article expressly says that producer Lorenzo Di Bonaventura was trying to avoid the term reboot, and NONE OF THAT BELONGS HERE ANYWAY.) Tags: Undo references removed
• 00:1800:18, 19 September 2022 diff hist 0 Rumble in the Bronx Typo 7.5 million not 7-5 million
• 00:1700:17, 19 September 2022 diff hist +34 Rumble in the Bronx Long plot. WP:FILMPLOT recommends 400-700 words. Plot is more than 1200 words.

18 September 2022

• 17:2017:20, 18 September 2022 diff hist −2 Ghostbusters: Afterlife typo
• 17:1717:17, 18 September 2022 diff hist −593 Ghostbusters: Afterlife WP:LEAD is supposed to summarize what is in the article. There is no need to include so much tangential information about other film. See talk page. Tag: references removed
• 17:1117:11, 18 September 2022 diff hist −20 Ghostbusters: Afterlife Restore Infobox. Warning comments ignored. Tag: Undo
• 16:5016:50, 18 September 2022 diff hist −245 Miranda Rae Mayo Revert. This is supposed to be an encyclopedia. Not noteworthy.
• 16:4716:47, 18 September 2022 diff hist +32 Miranda Rae Mayo Revert. Wikipedia is not a reliable source and should not be used as a reference Tag: Undo
• 16:0316:03, 18 September 2022 diff hist +501 Dawn (Star Trek: Enterprise) Review from Tor.com rating 5 out of 10.
• 15:4615:46, 18 September 2022 diff hist +169 NCIS: Hawaiʻi Copyedit. Rephrase lead section to be a bit more like the lead section of the NCIS article. It might seem obvious but the lead should explain like as if the reader might not even have watched any of the other shows.
• 15:3615:36, 18 September 2022 diff hist +779 NCIS: Hawaiʻi →Reception: Add Metacritic
• 15:2815:28, 18 September 2022 diff hist −3 JAG (TV series) Tidy lists. See Help:List If you are using that many manual line breaks then you are probably using the list template wrong.
• 15:2515:25, 18 September 2022 diff hist −51 JAG (TV series) Archived copy is a bad reference title. Category:CS1 maint: archived copy as title Cleanup.
• 15:1215:12, 18 September 2022 diff hist +64 Criminal Minds MOS:SLASH out of 5
• 15:0615:06, 18 September 2022 diff hist +59 Criminal Minds Improve reference. Add author which could be found in Metadata. Add date which was clear from the URL but again also included in the page metadata.
• 15:0315:03, 18 September 2022 diff hist −8 Criminal Minds The Guardian location New York? WTF? It is either a London or Manchester newspaper, definitely not New York.
• 15:0115:01, 18 September 2022 diff hist +645 Talk:Criminal Minds →Cast list cleanup needed
• 14:5614:56, 18 September 2022 diff hist +199 Criminal Minds Cleanup list. See Help:List and Talk page.