User contributions for 147.147.73.204

15 August 2023

• 10:0110:01, 15 August 2023 diff hist −1 Aldo Moro →Kidnapping and death: corrected grammar
• 09:5209:52, 15 August 2023 diff hist +5 Leonardo Sciascia →Biography: the novel is not a mystery--the reader knows from the beginning the identity of the killers.
• 09:4909:49, 15 August 2023 diff hist −3 Leonardo Sciascia →Work summary: corrected grammar and syntax

11 August 2023

• 07:5107:51, 11 August 2023 diff hist −4 Goodbye, My Fancy (film) →Plot: corrected grammar
• 07:2907:29, 11 August 2023 diff hist −9 Citizen Kane corrected grammar

9 August 2023

• 19:3419:34, 9 August 2023 diff hist +2 David Manners →Personal life and death: corrected inconsistency

3 August 2023

• 12:0112:01, 3 August 2023 diff hist −8 B. P. Schulberg corrected syntactical errors

2 August 2023

• 07:4807:48, 2 August 2023 diff hist −3 Lupe Vélez →Public image and personality: corrected grammar
• 07:4107:41, 2 August 2023 diff hist +3 Lupe Vélez →Alternative theories and urban legend: corrected grammar
• 07:3607:36, 2 August 2023 diff hist −2 Lupe Vélez →Continued success and final roles (1939–44): corrected grammar

31 July 2023

• 08:5708:57, 31 July 2023 diff hist −1 Sidney Blumenthal corrected grammar

26 July 2023

• 19:0919:09, 26 July 2023 diff hist −3 A Yank at Eton →Plot summary: corrected grammar
• 19:0419:04, 26 July 2023 diff hist −111 Dean Martin →Personal life: deleted information that appeared three sentences earlier.
• 18:5418:54, 26 July 2023 diff hist −1 Ocean's 11 →Reception: corrected spelling

24 July 2023

• 10:3210:32, 24 July 2023 diff hist −2 Extreme Makeover: Home Edition →Reaction and criticism: corrected grammar

22 July 2023

• 18:4518:45, 22 July 2023 diff hist −43 Garson Kanin →Early life: removed fact that has been already stated in first sentence. no need to say it twice.

20 July 2023

• 08:4608:46, 20 July 2023 diff hist −55 Mariano Fortuny (designer) →Fashion designer: I removed the statement that the pleating was all done by hand because the entry on Fortuny's wife states that she designed and patented a machine that was used for pleating.
• 08:4408:44, 20 July 2023 diff hist +2 Mariano Fortuny (designer) →Fashion designer: corrected punctuation

16 July 2023

• 07:1507:15, 16 July 2023 diff hist −1 Middlemarch (TV serial) →Reactions: corrected punctuation.
• 07:1407:14, 16 July 2023 diff hist −31 Middlemarch (TV serial) →Reactions: Removed "noted this fact," because the phrase has no antecedent.

10 July 2023

• 15:2515:25, 10 July 2023 diff hist −9 Natsuo Kirino →Literary career: corrected grammar and punctuation
• 12:3812:38, 10 July 2023 diff hist −3 Brenda Venus →Relationship with Henry Miller: corrected grammar error

8 July 2023

• 14:5114:51, 8 July 2023 diff hist +19 James Hadley Chase →James Hadley Chase: sorry--I added an omitted novel and the alternative title of The Last Page but couldn't manage to configure them correctly. decided that adding the information was more important than getting the format right, and hope that some kind soul will correct the format. thank you.
• 14:4614:46, 8 July 2023 diff hist +6 James Hadley Chase →James Hadley Chase
• 14:4514:45, 8 July 2023 diff hist −9 James Hadley Chase →James Hadley Chase
• 14:4414:44, 8 July 2023 diff hist +10 James Hadley Chase →James Hadley Chase
• 14:4314:43, 8 July 2023 diff hist −1 James Hadley Chase →James Hadley Chase
• 14:4114:41, 8 July 2023 diff hist +37 James Hadley Chase →James Hadley Chase: the list omitted one of his best-known books, so I added it.

2 July 2023

• 21:5621:56, 2 July 2023 diff hist −4 Wedding dress of Queen Victoria →Influence: removed redundant word
• 21:5421:54, 2 July 2023 diff hist −6 Wedding dress of Queen Victoria →Design: white is not a colour--it is the absence of colour.

1 July 2023

• 11:3311:33, 1 July 2023 diff hist +3 Crown Court →Physical layout: corrected grammar

29 June 2023

• 19:1319:13, 29 June 2023 diff hist −9 Dorothy Vernon of Haddon Hall →Plot: corrected grammar
• 19:1219:12, 29 June 2023 diff hist +2 Dorothy Vernon of Haddon Hall →History: corrected spelling

22 June 2023

• 17:1417:14, 22 June 2023 diff hist −1 James Stockdale →Prisoner of war: corrected grammar
• 11:1211:12, 22 June 2023 diff hist −11 Cleopatra (1963 film) →Production: corrected punctuation, removed redundancy

17 June 2023

• 19:3719:37, 17 June 2023 diff hist +1 John Grey →Characters: corrected spelling current

3 June 2023

• 10:0510:05, 3 June 2023 diff hist −4 The Great God Pan corrected grammar

31 May 2023

• 00:0000:00, 31 May 2023 diff hist −3 Tommy Butler →Pursuit: corrected grammar

30 May 2023

• 23:5923:59, 30 May 2023 diff hist +3 Tommy Butler →Pursuit: corrected grammar
• 23:4923:49, 30 May 2023 diff hist 0 Great Train Robbery (1963) →Getaway and planned clean-up: corrected punctuation

29 May 2023

• 09:0909:09, 29 May 2023 diff hist −36 Charabanc →In Northern England: Removed late 1960s and 1970s, as this is clearly wrong--wakes weeks took place early in the century--v. the play Hindle Wakes, about a wakes week, written in 1910 (Wikipedia entry on this). Seaside boarding houses would be the rule in the Thirties, not the late Sixties and Seventies--by then, people would be flying abroad for their holidays!

27 May 2023

• 16:5516:55, 27 May 2023 diff hist −6 Wife selling (English custom) →Sale: corrected grammar

24 May 2023

• 15:2715:27, 24 May 2023 diff hist +7 David Riesman →The Lonely Crowd: complete name was not given

21 May 2023

• 20:3720:37, 21 May 2023 diff hist −1 Murders at Stanfield Hall corrected punctuation