User contributions for 147.147.73.230

30 May 2021

• 07:5907:59, 30 May 2021 diff hist +25 Morus (plant) →In culture: straightened out inaccurate and syntactically garbled sentence.
• 07:5307:53, 30 May 2021 diff hist −6 Morus (plant) →Consumption: corrected obvious error.

28 May 2021

• 15:4815:48, 28 May 2021 diff hist 0 The Big Broadcast of 1936 →Plot: corrected spelling error; recently watched movie and noted spelling.
• 15:4615:46, 28 May 2021 diff hist −1 The Big Broadcast of 1936 →Production notes: corrected grammar

26 May 2021

• 15:3615:36, 26 May 2021 diff hist −4 Zero Mostel →Professional relationships: corrected grammar
• 15:3115:31, 26 May 2021 diff hist +4 Zero Mostel →Ulysses in Nighttown and career revival: corrected grammar
• 06:2306:23, 26 May 2021 diff hist −5 Dixie Lee →Personal life: removed redundancy

24 May 2021

• 18:4918:49, 24 May 2021 diff hist 0 Alfred Rouse →Initial confession: corrected obvious mistake
• 17:0117:01, 24 May 2021 diff hist −1 Ratcliff Highway murders →Second attack: corrected punctuation--a comma is not used before a quotation which is a direct or indirect object.

23 May 2021

• 18:0918:09, 23 May 2021 diff hist −11 Company K →Literary significance & criticism: the book referred to is clearly not a novel but an anthology of fiction, so have made change.
• 08:0308:03, 23 May 2021 diff hist +10 Dennis Nilsen →Confession: no antecedent for "it"; provided one.
• 07:4707:47, 23 May 2021 diff hist −5 Dennis Nilsen →Army service: removed pointless redundancy
• 07:4307:43, 23 May 2021 diff hist +2 HM Prison Full Sutton →History: changed word used improperly--"prolific" means producing something in great abundance. crimes are something you commit, not produce.

22 May 2021

• 07:2007:20, 22 May 2021 diff hist −3 Will Rogers →Vaudeville: improved syntax

20 May 2021

• 14:2814:28, 20 May 2021 diff hist −2 Red Skelton →Television (1951–1970): corrected punctuation--it is incorrect to use a comma before a quotation that is used as a direct or indirect object.
• 14:2014:20, 20 May 2021 diff hist −4 Red Skelton →Film work: corrected grammar--it is incorrect to follow enough with that.
• 13:3513:35, 20 May 2021 diff hist +4 Red Skelton corrected grammar
• 07:0407:04, 20 May 2021 diff hist −11 Marilyn Maxwell →Personal life: removed redundancy--expensive diamond bracelet sounded silly; all diamond bracelets are expensive, indeed very expensive, so no need to particularize.
• 06:5406:54, 20 May 2021 diff hist +1 American Bully →History: corrected spelling--as per dog's own Wikipedia entry
• 06:5206:52, 20 May 2021 diff hist −1 American Bully →History: corrected grammar