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16:0216:02, 26 April 2020 diff hist −364 Joan of Arc (1948 film) →Reception: removed irrelevant material--overkill to make the point. left in explanatory matter which is more than sufficient to make the point even though it is also not necessary.
15:3615:36, 26 April 2020 diff hist +2 Jerry Brown →Personal life: changed "adopted" used for dog (anthropomorphic, grandiose, silly) to neutral verbs
15:3315:33, 26 April 2020 diff hist −6 Jerry Brown →Personal life: changed slang to standard English
15:1215:12, 26 April 2020 diff hist −30 Bawdy House Riots of 1668 removed "perceived"--a prissy disclaimer of any evaluation at all of behavior that is not only more than three centuries old but is so famous it has become accepted general knowledge.
15:0815:08, 26 April 2020 diff hist −4 Bawdy House Riots of 1668 corrected grammar
15:0615:06, 26 April 2020 diff hist +4 Bawdy House Riots of 1668 corrected grammar
15:0515:05, 26 April 2020 diff hist 0 1989 Dewsbury riot →Riot: corrected spelling
15:0415:04, 26 April 2020 diff hist +2 1989 Dewsbury riot →Riot: corrected grammar

19:3419:34, 13 April 2020 diff hist +1 Mazurka (film) →Reception: corrected spelling
14:4814:48, 13 April 2020 diff hist +7 Brothel →United States: supplied missing word
14:4714:47, 13 April 2020 diff hist −3 Brothel →United States: corrected grammar
14:4714:47, 13 April 2020 diff hist −3 Brothel →United States: corrected grammar
14:4514:45, 13 April 2020 diff hist 0 Brothel →United States: changed obviously incorrect word
14:4414:44, 13 April 2020 diff hist −8 Brothel →United States: corrected grammar
14:4214:42, 13 April 2020 diff hist 0 Brothel →United States: corrected spelling
14:3014:30, 13 April 2020 diff hist +5 Dean O'Banion →Early life: corrected idiom
08:3508:35, 13 April 2020 diff hist −92 The Good Old Days (British TV series) cut repeated and unnecessary material. first sentence cut - one hardly needs to say that the songs were performed by present-day performers. who else, then? dead ones? second sentence cut - this information has already been given in the second sentence of the article.

08:3008:30, 12 April 2020 diff hist +25 Deborah Kerr →Film career: statement as written sounded dubious to me--I looked up reference and found that the fact was what I have changed it to.

17:4817:48, 7 April 2020 diff hist −41 Gladys Spencer-Churchill, Duchess of Marlborough →In popular culture: corrected spelling and grammar, improved clarity--but do not see why this obviously trashy novel should be described at such length. Shouldn't the mere face of its existence be noted and the rest removed?
17:4317:43, 7 April 2020 diff hist −3 Gladys Spencer-Churchill, Duchess of Marlborough →Relationship with Marlborough: corrected grammar