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29 July 2019
- 14:0714:07, 29 July 2019 diff hist −437 National Institute for Discovery Science →History: Statement not supported in reference. Article drew no conclusions. Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
23 June 2019
- 12:3312:33, 23 June 2019 diff hist −1,341 Snowball Earth →Effect on early evolution: Uncited speculation. That kin selection is more advantageous in some genetic circumstances does not imply it must happen when advantageous, nor proof that it did. Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 10:5910:59, 23 June 2019 diff hist −758 Snowball Earth →Effect on early evolution: Uncited speculation presented as explanation. Also, the explanation implies that there should be more cancers than there are any other kind of organism. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
8 June 2019
- 19:2019:20, 8 June 2019 diff hist 0 CID-42 →Black Hole: Fixed typo Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
20 May 2019
- 00:0600:06, 20 May 2019 diff hist −4 Superluminous supernova Added links Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
12 May 2019
- 16:5516:55, 12 May 2019 diff hist −896 Body piercing materials →Silver: Section was ridiculous/wrong. Agyria is not caused by wearing small silver jewelry in new piercings but by ingestion of large quantities of silver over time. Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
10 May 2019
- 22:4822:48, 10 May 2019 diff hist −307 Melatonin Deleted what was essentially cited advertisement. Melatonin is more effective than ramelteon in any case, for most uses of melatonin (such as entrainment, to name one). Previous statement = "Dopamine might be as effective as Adderall." Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
12 April 2019
- 04:3404:34, 12 April 2019 diff hist +65 Loaded march Added USMC slang Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
7 April 2019
- 03:5303:53, 7 April 2019 diff hist −116 Hypnotic →Antidepressants: Interpreted a few thousand sleep studies. Benzos do cause notable changes to sleep architecture, as well as "drug spindles", but neither of these are directly relatable to sleep "quality", itself a very imprecise term. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
26 March 2019
- 17:2417:24, 26 March 2019 diff hist −105 Satyr play →Origins: Edited for NPOV. We may all agree that it would be good to ensure the persistence of satyr plays, but Wikipedia is not the place for such efforts or advocacy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
25 March 2019
- 17:4617:46, 25 March 2019 diff hist −83 The Tombs of Atuan ToA actually has less people of color than any other Earthsea book, set as it is in a white ethnostate, and with the protagonist also being white. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
23 March 2019
- 09:1609:16, 23 March 2019 diff hist 0 Thief: The Dark Project →Gameplay: Fixed grammar Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
21 March 2019
- 21:1121:11, 21 March 2019 diff hist −139 Spirits in prison →See also: Removed external link that was likely non-NPOV. If the previous poster reads this, the appropriate place for a link like that is earlier in the article as one view on interpretations, not as an non-contexual external link. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 06:5206:52, 21 March 2019 diff hist −206 Phoenix Lights →Related films: Deleted uncited portion that appeared to be after you get for some sort of found footage film? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
20 March 2019
- 22:5722:57, 20 March 2019 diff hist +105 Kecksburg UFO incident →Television shows: Added that Hays has made this claim on camera twice, as the reported claim in the SyFy doc (which I haven't seen), is identical to the UM episode (which I just finished watching). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
17 March 2019
- 04:2704:27, 17 March 2019 diff hist +1,077 Alternatives to Darwinian evolution No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
16 March 2019
- 20:4820:48, 16 March 2019 diff hist +357 Radish →Description Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 08:5508:55, 16 March 2019 diff hist −3 Abundance of the chemical elements →Universe: Corrected "deductive" to "inductive"; the existence of dark matter and dark energy are not *logically necessary* conclusions from the observations that have led to their being proposed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 08:4308:43, 16 March 2019 diff hist −31 Satellite watching →See also: Removed irrelevant link to a grammar school in the UK Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 00:4500:45, 16 March 2019 diff hist +3 Starr Report →Background: Fixed typo, Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
15 March 2019
- 02:3102:31, 15 March 2019 diff hist +4 Stellar kinematics →Hypervelocity stars: Added links Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
12 March 2019
- 11:4011:40, 12 March 2019 diff hist +4 Coronal hole →First discoveries: Added links Tags: canned edit summary Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
9 March 2019
- 19:0319:03, 9 March 2019 diff hist −142 Sleep-learning →History: Alpha activity does not necessarily indicate a sleeping subject is about to awake. In fact, "alpha intrusion" is a well known sign of poor quality sleep (in which alpha waves impinge on other waveforms throughout sleep. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
8 March 2019
- 22:2822:28, 8 March 2019 diff hist −1 History of Djibouti →Antiquity: Soldiers --> marines, since it is Egyptian marines that are depicted in Hatshepsut's relief. Soldiers can be used generically but no harm in being specific. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
28 February 2019
- 12:5012:50, 28 February 2019 diff hist +67 Atonement in Christianity →Satisfaction theory: Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 12:3612:36, 28 February 2019 diff hist −107 Atonement in Christianity →Moral influence theory: Removed phrase informing reader "That it would be a mistake" to use a given interpretation "alone", which violates NPOV (by being proscriptive). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 05:3405:34, 28 February 2019 diff hist +41 Food and drink prohibitions Rephrased weasel words/non-NPOV phrasing, such as food taboos "seem to make no sense", and, "Even if scientifically inaccurate...". Food taboos don't usually arise in a scientific framework, nor justified in reference to them. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
26 February 2019
- 07:0407:04, 26 February 2019 diff hist −23 Black hole thermodynamics →Overview: Edited for weasel words. "Eventually expected to be clarified" means no adequate answer exists in the given framework (here, string theory), but efforts to develop one continue. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
23 February 2019
- 01:0501:05, 23 February 2019 diff hist −4 Black comedy Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
22 February 2019
- 00:2000:20, 22 February 2019 diff hist +4 HV 2112 →Thorne–Żytkow object: Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
20 February 2019
- 14:1314:13, 20 February 2019 diff hist −15 Cosmic neutrino background Think page might have been vandalized to show CvB. Certainly possible that a foreign language acronym was adopted in English, but otherwise it doesn't match English usage and the "reference" to support it is a link to the same Wiki article. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
18 February 2019
- 17:1017:10, 18 February 2019 diff hist +10 GRB 111209A Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
16 February 2019
- 19:2919:29, 16 February 2019 diff hist +26 Neutrino →Solar neutrino problem: Changed paragraph to reflect a more neutral and precise POV; neutrinos now described as "more complex than previously assumed" vs. "rather more interesting". Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
15 February 2019
- 17:4317:43, 15 February 2019 diff hist +246 Woodward effect Clarified that the objection is to the model and not to any possible effects that may (or may not) be measured in the future; critics object to the explanation whether any measurable effect exists or not. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 15:1215:12, 15 February 2019 diff hist +609 Particle chauvinism →Higgs portal: Clarified what is presumably meant by another editor. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 11:4611:46, 15 February 2019 diff hist +4 Debian →History: Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
11 February 2019
- 12:2012:20, 11 February 2019 diff hist +368 Menthol cigarette →United States: Expanded with further info from already linked reference (NYT article). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
8 February 2019
- 09:3809:38, 8 February 2019 diff hist −1 WireGuard →Features: Fixed ArsTechnica link Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 06:2706:27, 8 February 2019 diff hist −209 Magic: The Gathering Arena →Esports: "2019 will be the best year ever for Magic" and other phrases violating NPOV removed and paragraph reworked. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
4 February 2019
- 23:5823:58, 4 February 2019 diff hist −50 The Urantia Book →Authorship: Nearly finished with Gardner's book on Urantia. Sadler at all times believed in the supernatural insofar as he accepted some religious miracles. He portrayed himself as skeptical, but did not state disbelief in supernatural. Deleted phrase saying otherwis Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
3 February 2019
- 00:5100:51, 3 February 2019 diff hist +12 Assassination of Olof Palme →Leads from the crime scene: Added imperial units as parenthetical to estimated heights of perpetrator in cm. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
27 January 2019
- 14:5214:52, 27 January 2019 diff hist −1 Tărtăria tablets →Discovery: Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
25 January 2019
- 06:4006:40, 25 January 2019 diff hist +201 Hypermetabolism Previous text implied that Fatal Familial Insomnia is frequent cause of hypermetabolism, but FFI is one of the rarest disorders in the world and is nearly 100% hereditary. (That is, people know if they are at risk because their family has it. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
24 January 2019
- 08:1508:15, 24 January 2019 diff hist +218 ʻOumuamua →Observations: Clarified what possibilities are left after limits of 0.08 watts was determined. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 07:5307:53, 24 January 2019 diff hist +21 Exoplanet →Confirmed discoveries: Fixed typo, Fixed grammar, Added links Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
16 January 2019
- 00:3300:33, 16 January 2019 diff hist +86 Treasure guardians in folklore →In folklore: Added qualifying language to the effect that Djinn and gnomes are not solely or even primarily depicted as treasure guardians in their respective cultures. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 00:2400:24, 16 January 2019 diff hist +4 Salamander letter →Suspicion and resolution: Added wiki link to "mercury switch" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
14 January 2019
- 02:0602:06, 14 January 2019 diff hist +54 Vinegar →Diet and metabolism Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
12 January 2019
- 15:4315:43, 12 January 2019 diff hist −2 Papal tiara →Abandonment of the tiara: Removed unnecessary scare quotes around "valid", in keeping with NPOV. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
- 07:4207:42, 12 January 2019 diff hist −3 Enoch →Apocryphal Books of Enoch: "Extensive" to "extant" as a descriptor for Apocrypha about Enoch; surely this is what was meant. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit