User contributions for 18.81.7.108

30 December 2014

• 21:2721:27, 30 December 2014 diff hist +1 Compromise of 1850 Added comma before coordinating conjunction linking main clauses

23 December 2014

• 21:4021:40, 23 December 2014 diff hist +4 Smiles of a Summer Night Fixed dangling participle in third paragraph of plot synopsis

24 April 2014

• 18:5918:59, 24 April 2014 diff hist +18 Mathematics education in the United States →Curricular content: Fixed dangling modifier at beginning of second paragraph

24 February 2014

• 16:5816:58, 24 February 2014 diff hist −20 EToro Capitalized words at beginning of sentences
• 16:5716:57, 24 February 2014 diff hist 0 EToro No edit summary

21 February 2014

• 13:5513:55, 21 February 2014 diff hist +2 Diane Warren →Personal life: Replaced hyphen with em-dash

20 September 2013

• 14:0114:01, 20 September 2013 diff hist +1 Click (novel) Added comma to series in second paragraph. Tag: Visual edit

29 March 2013

• 15:0115:01, 29 March 2013 diff hist −3 Game theory →Biology: Removed spurious comma before conjunction linking compound predicates and fixed faulty parallelism ("less on" requires a "more on").
• 14:5914:59, 29 March 2013 diff hist +10 Game theory →Biology: Fixed dangling modifier in first sentence

26 March 2013

• 20:5320:53, 26 March 2013 diff hist −1 Pink Flamingos Removed spurious comma before restrictive appositive

27 December 2012

• 21:1421:14, 27 December 2012 diff hist 0 Les Misérables (musical) →Reception
• 21:1221:12, 27 December 2012 diff hist −41 Les Misérables (musical) No edit summary

4 December 2012

• 16:0316:03, 4 December 2012 diff hist 0 Organized crime in Minneapolis Removed spurious commas before restrictive appositives in first few sentences

6 August 2012

• 20:5020:50, 6 August 2012 diff hist −1 Coriolanus Removed spurious comma before restrictive appositive: Rome had more than one legendary leader

13 February 2012

• 20:1420:14, 13 February 2012 diff hist −108 Sudden unexpected death in epilepsy Deleted second sentence, which (presumably revised?) first sentence now renders redundant

11 August 2011

• 16:0916:09, 11 August 2011 diff hist −114 John Carter Cash →Biography

26 July 2011

• 14:3114:31, 26 July 2011 diff hist −106 The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen →The Black Dossier: Fixed dangling participle in first sentence, plus other basic copyediting

27 June 2011

• 19:0319:03, 27 June 2011 diff hist +1 Automatic Dependent Surveillance–Broadcast →Description

17 June 2011

• 21:0721:07, 17 June 2011 diff hist 0 Natural Act No edit summary

31 March 2011

• 21:1921:19, 31 March 2011 diff hist −4 Steve Balboni →Curse of the Balboni
• 21:1621:16, 31 March 2011 diff hist +3 Steve Balboni →Curse of the Balboni
• 21:1521:15, 31 March 2011 diff hist 0 Steve Balboni →Curse of the Balboni
• 21:1421:14, 31 March 2011 diff hist −11 Steve Balboni →Curse of the Balboni
• 21:1321:13, 31 March 2011 diff hist +9 Steve Balboni →Curse of the Balboni
• 21:1221:12, 31 March 2011 diff hist −41 Steve Balboni →Curse of the Balboni
• 21:1121:11, 31 March 2011 diff hist −1 Steve Balboni →Curse of the Balboni
• 21:1021:10, 31 March 2011 diff hist +44 Steve Balboni →Curse of the Balboni
• 21:0121:01, 31 March 2011 diff hist −63 Steve Balboni →Curse of the Balboni: "The curse pertains that ... "? Come on, that's not even approximately grammatical.

24 February 2011

• 19:5819:58, 24 February 2011 diff hist +4 Aron Ralston →Other projects

25 January 2011

• 22:0922:09, 25 January 2011 diff hist −1 Orson Welles →The Stranger: Removed illogical comma between a noun ("film") and its appositive ("The Stranger").

19 January 2011

• 14:1614:16, 19 January 2011 diff hist 0 Kermit Roosevelt III →Works
• 14:0014:00, 19 January 2011 diff hist +2 Amy Chua →Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother

27 August 2010

• 14:1214:12, 27 August 2010 diff hist −17 Joe Jackson (musician) →Biography: Fixed dangling modifier

13 August 2010

• 15:2015:20, 13 August 2010 diff hist −4 Davis–Putnam algorithm Got rid of weird use of em-dashes for hyphens
• 15:1915:19, 13 August 2010 diff hist −2 DPLL algorithm No edit summary
• 15:1815:18, 13 August 2010 diff hist −14 DPLL algorithm Got rid of spurious commas before conjunctions linking compound predicates and weird use of em-dashes for hyphens

1 July 2010

• 16:0116:01, 1 July 2010 diff hist +34 Francis Fukuyama →Essays
• 15:4915:49, 1 July 2010 diff hist +5 Francis Fukuyama →Fukuyama's current views
• 15:4415:44, 1 July 2010 diff hist −31 Francis Fukuyama →Fukuyama's current views Tag: references removed

24 March 2010

• 18:1918:19, 24 March 2010 diff hist +3 Joseph O'Neill (writer, born 1964) →Writing
• 18:1718:17, 24 March 2010 diff hist +4 Joseph O'Neill (writer, born 1964) →Writing
• 18:1718:17, 24 March 2010 diff hist −1 Joseph O'Neill (writer, born 1964) →Writing
• 18:1618:16, 24 March 2010 diff hist +1 Joseph O'Neill (writer, born 1964) →Writing
• 18:1618:16, 24 March 2010 diff hist +4 Joseph O'Neill (writer, born 1964) →Life
• 18:1418:14, 24 March 2010 diff hist −1 Joseph O'Neill (writer, born 1964) →Life
• 18:1418:14, 24 March 2010 diff hist +18 Joseph O'Neill (writer, born 1964) →Life

12 March 2010

• 16:3516:35, 12 March 2010 diff hist +6 Sidwell Friends School No edit summary

29 January 2010

• 18:3418:34, 29 January 2010 diff hist −2 Semiconductor →Energy bands and electrical conduction: Corrected misuse of "like", which is properly a preposition