User contributions for 201.220.244.182

29 June 2015

• 17:5417:54, 29 June 2015 diff hist −53 Fall factor rm instances of being vague and specific at the same time. just be as specific as necessary.
• 17:5017:50, 29 June 2015 diff hist −1,150 Serena Williams rm cheesy promo, not supported by the references given, half of which say something different, and which adds nothing of substance to the lead. also rm pov
• 17:4717:47, 29 June 2015 diff hist −39 Serena Williams people know what "No." means. But why not just use the word "number"?
• 17:4517:45, 29 June 2015 diff hist −413 Ice screw lots of verbosity, bad writing, promotion of sources, undefined acronyms, overlinking, MOS violations, inappropriate instructions
• 17:3917:39, 29 June 2015 diff hist −32 Wien's displacement law →Frequency-dependent formulation: it must not
• 17:3817:38, 29 June 2015 diff hist −2 Nordic noir accuracy
• 17:3817:38, 29 June 2015 diff hist −13 Al-Saadi Gaddafi one term suffices
• 17:3817:38, 29 June 2015 diff hist −1 Al-Saadi Gaddafi →Football career: fix
• 17:3717:37, 29 June 2015 diff hist −172 Al-Saadi Gaddafi →Football career: misuse of quotations and non-free text removed
• 17:3317:33, 29 June 2015 diff hist −879 68–95–99.7 rule →Normality tests: sentence interrupted with pointless reference, other edits for tone and style
• 17:2717:27, 29 June 2015 diff hist −1 Clerical error →Examples: rm stray punctuation
• 17:2717:27, 29 June 2015 diff hist −17 Clerical error →Notable clerical errors: neutral title. and it's not a list, obviously
• 17:2617:26, 29 June 2015 diff hist 0 Clerical error →Notable clerical errors: write neutrally
• 17:2417:24, 29 June 2015 diff hist −893 Güey saying the same thing twice is pretty silly. Saying it three times is ridiculous. The etymology needs to be given once and once only. Other miscellaneous style corrections.
• 17:1917:19, 29 June 2015 diff hist −23 2005 Australian Open – Men's singles rm verbosity which contravenes the MOS