User contributions for 46.208.236.218

20 June 2020

• 20:0320:03, 20 June 2020 diff hist +1,896 User talk:46.208.236.218 Recording situation Tag: Reverted
• 20:0220:02, 20 June 2020 diff hist +247 User talk:46.208.236.218 →Your reverts
• 19:5219:52, 20 June 2020 diff hist −18 Death of Garry Hoy improved very poor writing
• 19:5019:50, 20 June 2020 diff hist −3 Bite the bullet No edit summary
• 19:4919:49, 20 June 2020 diff hist −41 Vietnam War draft →Origins: improved
• 19:4819:48, 20 June 2020 diff hist −24 Noor Inayat Khan →Capture and imprisonment: NPOV
• 19:4719:47, 20 June 2020 diff hist −11 Carina Lau No edit summary
• 19:4319:43, 20 June 2020 diff hist −3,272 Fancy rat Undid revision 963608287 by SuperGoose007 (talk) see WP:NOT, and WP:REVEXP. Tag: Undo
• 19:4319:43, 20 June 2020 diff hist −1,020 Eric Dier →Style of play: removed extremely substandard text. Articles must be written from a neutral point of view Tag: references removed
• 19:4119:41, 20 June 2020 diff hist −640 Enthuse (company) →Overview: removed a lot of spammy promo text
• 19:4019:40, 20 June 2020 diff hist +1 Gift Aid grammar
• 19:3819:38, 20 June 2020 diff hist −1 Dean Smith (footballer, born 1971) No edit summary
• 19:3819:38, 20 June 2020 diff hist −1 Dick Taverne No edit summary
• 19:3819:38, 20 June 2020 diff hist +13 Sally Clark →Statistical evidence: "it is likely" is a personal opinion. If a specific person considered it likely, name them.
• 19:3519:35, 20 June 2020 diff hist −46 Sara Thornton case improved opening sentence, not least to mention nationality, not ethnicity
• 19:3419:34, 20 June 2020 diff hist −15 Bridgewater Four →Bert Spencer: improved prose
• 19:3219:32, 20 June 2020 diff hist +43 Bridgewater Four removed some absurd verbosity, added important context about West Midlands Crime Squad
• 19:3019:30, 20 June 2020 diff hist −1 West Midlands Serious Crime Squad →Keith Twitchell, John Lyon McCloy and Patrick Irvine: Wikipedia is not censored
• 19:2919:29, 20 June 2020 diff hist −196 Demographics of the world The article does not need to start with a definition of what demographics are.
• 19:2719:27, 20 June 2020 diff hist −1,833 User talk:46.208.236.218 Undid revision 963607590 by SuperGoose007 (talk) silly note by someone desperate to provoke an edit war for no reason at all. Tags: Blanking Undo
• 19:2719:27, 20 June 2020 diff hist −16 Demographics of the world →Age structure: "on the other hand" makes no sense in this context, and "the percent elderly" makes no sense in any contenxt
• 19:2519:25, 20 June 2020 diff hist −3,272 Fancy rat Undid revision 963607359 by SuperGoose007 (talk) see WP:NOT, and WP:REVEXP Tag: Undo
• 19:2519:25, 20 June 2020 diff hist −278 Eysenck Personality Questionnaire improved lead
• 19:2319:23, 20 June 2020 diff hist −3,272 Fancy rat Undid revision 963607043 by BeamAlexander25 (talk) read WP:NOT, and also WP:REVEXP Tag: Undo
• 19:2219:22, 20 June 2020 diff hist −1,077 User talk:46.208.236.218 removed silly message from a user who evidently did not even look at the edit concerned Tag: Blanking
• 19:2119:21, 20 June 2020 diff hist −3,272 Fancy rat Undid revision 963606936 by Wiki13 (talk) read WP:NOT Tag: Undo
• 19:2019:20, 20 June 2020 diff hist −3,241 Fancy rat →Social behavior: this whole section is unencyclopaedic pet-keeping advice. that is WP:NOT what Wikipedia is for Tag: section blanking
• 19:1819:18, 20 June 2020 diff hist −31 Fancy rat moved sentence to more logical place
• 19:1719:17, 20 June 2020 diff hist −7 Amy Williams →Early life and education: no particular reason to name siblings
• 19:1319:13, 20 June 2020 diff hist −1 COVID-19 pandemic in Dominica →Timeline
• 19:1319:13, 20 June 2020 diff hist −68 COVID-19 pandemic in Dominica →Timeline: empty subheadings are obviously not necessary. In this case, none of the subheadings are necessary
• 19:1019:10, 20 June 2020 diff hist −225 Ignaz Semmelweis Undid revision 962541650 by KIENGIR (talk) The article uses the correct spelling throughout. You can assume that the reader can read, and can thus already see how it is spelled. Tag: Undo
• 19:0919:09, 20 June 2020 diff hist −22 Ignaz Semmelweis Undid revision 962541531 by KIENGIR (talk) this is English Wikipedia. Links to articles in languages that are not English are not useful. Tag: Undo
• 19:0819:08, 20 June 2020 diff hist +94 Chuquicamata tagged for cleanup
• 19:0419:04, 20 June 2020 diff hist −221 Chuquicamata A lot of the text in this article is of very low quality. Removed a completely redundant paragraph and fixed a lot of formatting errors
• 19:0119:01, 20 June 2020 diff hist −4 Los Pelambres mine The name is not anglicised so doesn't take an English article
• 19:0019:00, 20 June 2020 diff hist −132 Los Pelambres mine removed unattributed copied text
• 18:5718:57, 20 June 2020 diff hist +5 Walk This Way →Lyrics: incorrect grammar and poor word choice
• 18:5718:57, 20 June 2020 diff hist −13 Walk This Way →Music: WP:PUFFERY
• 18:5318:53, 20 June 2020 diff hist −19 Chief Minister of Malacca No edit summary
• 18:5318:53, 20 June 2020 diff hist −5 O. R. Tambo International Airport MOS
• 18:5218:52, 20 June 2020 diff hist +6 The Marina Torch pronouns and paragraphs
• 18:5018:50, 20 June 2020 diff hist −42 Al Molinaro less verbose
• 18:4918:49, 20 June 2020 diff hist +3 Stacey Abrams →Personal life
• 18:4818:48, 20 June 2020 diff hist −7 Stacey Abrams →Personal life: Naming a person in successive sentences is dumb. English has pronouns for this. Deliberating obscuring the meaning of an acronym is also dumb.
• 18:4618:46, 20 June 2020 diff hist +2 Wikipedia:Copyright problems/2020 June 20 fixed earlier listing
• 18:4518:45, 20 June 2020 diff hist +419 Wikipedia:Copyright problems/2020 June 20 No edit summary
• 18:4518:45, 20 June 2020 diff hist +5 My Death, My Decision more specific
• 18:4418:44, 20 June 2020 diff hist +51 My Death, My Decision In fact, large chunks of the text have simply been copied from the organisation's website
• 18:4218:42, 20 June 2020 diff hist −644 My Death, My Decision →Introduction: removed copyright violation from https://www.mydeath-mydecision.org.uk/about/