User contributions for 51.6.138.109

2 April 2020

• 13:0913:09, 2 April 2020 diff hist −206 Cidade dos Homens →Season 3: more grammar errors and cheesy writing fixed
• 13:0813:08, 2 April 2020 diff hist −107 Cidade dos Homens →Season 2: removed cheesy writing and misuse of contractions
• 13:0713:07, 2 April 2020 diff hist −133 Cidade dos Homens →Season 1: fixed unencyclopaedic writing
• 13:0513:05, 2 April 2020 diff hist −422 List of The Brittas Empire episodes fixed all sorts of incorrect grammar, spelling mistakes, cheesy and unencyclopaedic writing
• 12:5412:54, 2 April 2020 diff hist −151 Baaba Maal removed unverifiable claims
• 12:5312:53, 2 April 2020 diff hist −100 John Lydon →US President Donald Trump: removed useless words and some editor's personal spin on facts. Just state facts.
• 12:5212:52, 2 April 2020 diff hist +1 John Lydon No edit summary
• 12:5012:50, 2 April 2020 diff hist +4 Attenuated vaccine →Advantages: silly use of slash. Wikipedia is supposed to have high quality articles, not scribbled notes.
• 12:4912:49, 2 April 2020 diff hist −6 Attenuated vaccine →Development: undid some very old vandalism
• 12:4812:48, 2 April 2020 diff hist −17 Attenuated vaccine →Examples
• 12:4812:48, 2 April 2020 diff hist −31 Zhang Ziyi fixed poor style of starting an article with an isolated sentence, removed vague and unverifiable claim
• 12:4712:47, 2 April 2020 diff hist −4 Should I Stay or Should I Go No edit summary
• 12:4612:46, 2 April 2020 diff hist −17 1889–1890 pandemic obviously, otherwise you'd say "proven" and not "conjectured"
• 12:4512:45, 2 April 2020 diff hist −22 1889–1890 pandemic use disambiguation templates to disambiguate.
• 12:3612:36, 2 April 2020 diff hist −6 Palm Dog Award don't patronise
• 12:3612:36, 2 April 2020 diff hist −1 Metronet (British infrastructure company) →Administration
• 12:3512:35, 2 April 2020 diff hist −7 Metronet (British infrastructure company) Starting an article with an isolated sentence is incredibly poor style.
• 12:3412:34, 2 April 2020 diff hist −30 Simon Greenall fixed failure to use paragraphs sensibly and non-neutral writing

1 April 2020

• 22:1922:19, 1 April 2020 diff hist −212 Rungrado 1st of May Stadium fixed failings
• 22:1722:17, 1 April 2020 diff hist −23 The Burghers of Calais removed unverifiable speculation
• 22:1722:17, 1 April 2020 diff hist −34 Port Vale F.C. →History: fixed poor writing
• 22:1522:15, 1 April 2020 diff hist −701 2001 anthrax attacks →Ivins's "non-denial" denials: removed non-free text Tag: references removed
• 22:1422:14, 1 April 2020 diff hist +392 User talk:51.6.138.109 →Edit summaries current
• 22:1222:12, 1 April 2020 diff hist −81 Peter Buck fixed amateurish writing
• 22:1022:10, 1 April 2020 diff hist −194 Salcedo, Dominican Republic improved clueless writing
• 22:0822:08, 1 April 2020 diff hist −310 Global catastrophic risk →Global catastrophic vs. existential: improved writing
• 22:0422:04, 1 April 2020 diff hist −26 Ticket to Ride (board game) →Gameplay
• 22:0422:04, 1 April 2020 diff hist −72 Ticket to Ride (board game) →Gameplay: this is not a game manual
• 22:0122:01, 1 April 2020 diff hist −83 Green Wing series 1 Removed totally pointless sentence
• 22:0122:01, 1 April 2020 diff hist −6 Mahershala Ali →Early life and education
• 21:2721:27, 1 April 2020 diff hist −57 Public health emergency of international concern →2013 MERS
• 21:2621:26, 1 April 2020 diff hist −436 Public health emergency of international concern Lead sections are supposed to be 3 or 4 paragraphs long, not 6
• 21:2321:23, 1 April 2020 diff hist −33 Debra Messing →Controversies
• 21:2221:22, 1 April 2020 diff hist −45 Luke O'Nien →Wycombe Wanderers: removed uncited puffery
• 21:2221:22, 1 April 2020 diff hist −37 Luke O'Nien →Watford: Evidently, someone who wants to write a football fanzine has been at work here.
• 21:2121:21, 1 April 2020 diff hist −109 Luke O'Nien →Watford: rambling nonsense like "put pen to paper" has no place in an encyclopaedia. Nor does puffery.
• 21:2021:20, 1 April 2020 diff hist −6 Recumbent bicycle No edit summary
• 21:1921:19, 1 April 2020 diff hist −26 Cornered (Breaking Bad) →Plot: removed some nonsensical flight of fancy
• 21:1021:10, 1 April 2020 diff hist 0 Stan (song) →Legacy: Wikipedia does not peddle speculation
• 21:0921:09, 1 April 2020 diff hist −72 Stan (song) →Music video: fixed childish writing
• 21:0721:07, 1 April 2020 diff hist −8 Go Back to the Zoo redundant
• 21:0621:06, 1 April 2020 diff hist −176 John Sachs No edit summary
• 21:0421:04, 1 April 2020 diff hist −10 Andrew Sachs →Prank phone call controversy
• 21:0421:04, 1 April 2020 diff hist −13 Andrew Sachs →Writing: instead of saying two things, one vague and one specific and yet uncited, just say one thing clearly.
• 21:0221:02, 1 April 2020 diff hist −5 2008–2016 United States ammunition shortage it doesn't refer to that; it is that.
• 21:0221:02, 1 April 2020 diff hist −10 Queen Letizia of Spain who would have writing skills so poor that they don't know how to use pronouns? incredible.
• 14:5614:56, 1 April 2020 diff hist −11 Spectrum auction say things once. you are not offering the reader a choice.
• 10:4310:43, 1 April 2020 diff hist −26 2009 swine flu pandemic some cretin decided to add their own interpretation of what the source actually says. removed.