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13:0413:04, 10 September 2018 diff hist +94 DBS →Technology: I'm surprised the Digital Book System doesn't have its own article.
12:5612:56, 10 September 2018 diff hist +279 Comparison of e-readers →Discontinued models: As per the note in this page, "This list is missing many of the 1st and 2nd generation e-reader devices from the 1990s to 2005."

05:1805:18, 22 August 2018 diff hist +290 World of Warcraft: The Burning Crusade Corrected dates to what is recorded in citation 2 at https://web.archive.org/web/20070126125539/http://blizzard.com/press/070123.shtml

01:0001:00, 4 August 2018 diff hist −6 VU meter →Other level meters: Fixed mangled paragraph. It had pointlessly disruptive commas, did not capitalise R.M.S., and had not been proof-read to the point it made sense.

12:2412:24, 1 August 2018 diff hist +91 Darwine →See also: Wine made with Apples is called Cider.
12:1512:15, 1 August 2018 diff hist +19 GNU variants →OpenSolaris (Illumos) kernel: Fixed syntax of a claim (previously "jibberish" in edit history) apparently contesting this section's existence on this page.
11:4511:45, 1 August 2018 diff hist −60 Live CD →Features: Puppy Linux *IS* "designed to write appropriately", therefore removed request for clarity and added external reference for more detail. Removed WP:French Spacing for consistency.

12:0012:00, 30 July 2018 diff hist −392 Woggle →Gilwell Woggle: Removed unsourced WP:PRIMARY paragraph (including disclaimer) contributed by User:Ruby Murray due to WP:I-SAW-IT policy, based on excerpt 'William "Green Bar Bill" said to me (Jim Newell)'

23:0223:02, 27 July 2018 diff hist +30 Aurora (singer) →2016–present: Rm ambiguity as per MOS:SEASON. Fixed mangled sentence.
10:1610:16, 27 July 2018 diff hist −1 Principle of least astonishment →Examples: The first major contribution to this article to raise it beyond Stub status was by TreyHarris who chose the American dialect. NVoE should be consistent within the article.

23:2023:20, 26 July 2018 diff hist −90 XigmaNAS https://www.nad4free.org/ is plagued by SSL / TLS errors these days (Invalid certificate: issuer certificate is unknown (sec_error_unknown_issuer)) all part of the bane of HTTPS. Therefore updated URIs to use their new domain/s.

06:4606:46, 25 July 2018 diff hist +3 Write amplification →Over-provisioning: SSD utilities do NOT alternate, as the previous statement claimed (likely due to limited familiarity with English). Fixed as per WP:COMMONALITY. "Alternate" means swinging between two possibilities; "alternative" means an additional option.