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27 April 2017

• 06:5806:58, 27 April 2017 diff hist +6 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 →S.E.5b: fixed my typo
• 06:5606:56, 27 April 2017 diff hist +182 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 →S.E.5b: Added "performance analysis" back with ref supporting it.
• 06:4606:46, 27 April 2017 diff hist 0 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 Fixed unencyclopedic dreamy speculation ("perhaps").
• 06:4406:44, 27 April 2017 diff hist −64 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 →S.E.5b: Removed speculation.
• 06:4206:42, 27 April 2017 diff hist −122 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 →S.E.5b: Removed questionable and unsupported performance analysis.
• 06:4106:41, 27 April 2017 diff hist −79 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 →S.E.5b: Removed dubious assertion that number of spars have something to do with being a "true" sesquiplane.
• 06:3806:38, 27 April 2017 diff hist −54 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 more "reportedly"s
• 06:3306:33, 27 April 2017 diff hist −12 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 →Design: fixed WP:weasel ("reportedly"). Everything in WP is "reported". It has to be to be includable. Saying it looks like covering up for a weak (or non existent) source.
• 06:2506:25, 27 April 2017 diff hist −33 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 simplified
• 06:2206:22, 27 April 2017 diff hist −5 Royal Aircraft Factory S.E.5 "typo"
• 03:3503:35, 27 April 2017 diff hist −1,934 Arbor Day Foundation →Tree City USA: Removed promotional material that was also undue weight (WP:undue
• 03:2103:21, 27 April 2017 diff hist −3 Arbor Day →First Arbor Day in the world: extraneous characters

24 April 2017

• 04:1104:11, 24 April 2017 diff hist −11 Iron lung It read like there was a general polio epidemic in 1960, but there's no mention of such a thing in the link, nor could a search find it. The CDC photo says it was an epidemic in RI. Clarified the wording, got rid of the link, split up long sentence.

23 April 2017

• 22:0222:02, 23 April 2017 diff hist −27 Royal Aircraft Factory B.E.2 Removed unsupported broad implication about usage patterns throughout history. (Discussion is on talk page.)
• 10:1710:17, 23 April 2017 diff hist +40 Royal Aircraft Factory B.E.2 Removed subjective "notoriously" which suggested low (rather than high) stability. Usually it's low stability that's "notorious" which makes it is incongruous here.
• 10:1010:10, 23 April 2017 diff hist +710 Talk:Royal Aircraft Factory B.E.2 →"High stability"?
• 09:3909:39, 23 April 2017 diff hist +585 Talk:Royal Aircraft Factory B.E.2 →"Like many warplanes since" ?: Dubious + uncited = removed

22 April 2017

• 21:0921:09, 22 April 2017 diff hist +952 Talk:Royal Aircraft Factory B.E.2 →"High stability"?
• 19:5119:51, 22 April 2017 diff hist +1,469 Talk:Royal Aircraft Factory B.E.2 →"Like many warplanes since" ?: Neat. But vague, subjective, not supported, not in main text. Still, possibly includable with a good ref.
• 18:4318:43, 22 April 2017 diff hist −4 Thanks for the Memory →Cover versions: subjective ("nice")
• 07:5307:53, 22 April 2017 diff hist −36 Titius–Bode law →Paradoxical origin and subsequent course: removed awkwardly located tag (there is a cite at the end of the sentence that looks like it covers it))
• 07:4907:49, 22 April 2017 diff hist +20 Ceres (dwarf planet) →Discovery: split up run-on

21 April 2017

• 20:0520:05, 21 April 2017 diff hist −10 Electric double-layer capacitor Clarified jargon. "Order of magnitude" is also vague (in binary, it's a factor of two not ten for example) and needs to be clicked on to find out what it means.
• 19:3619:36, 21 April 2017 diff hist −102 Ultralight aviation →Electric powered ultralights: Removed unsupported wp:OR. Who's to say what motivated someone? Electric is MORE costly & mostly INferior at first. More likely done bcse new technology made it obvious it should be tried "because it's there"! :-)
• 19:2719:27, 21 April 2017 diff hist −87 Ultralight aviation →Electric powered ultralights: Reworded the vague and wp:weasel "Research has been conducted in recent years".

20 April 2017

• 20:5520:55, 20 April 2017 diff hist −5 Eipper Quicksilver →Design and development: specified "spoileron" (v. "spoiler")
• 20:5020:50, 20 April 2017 diff hist +12 Eipper Quicksilver →Design and development: "rectangular" was a more distinguishing feature
• 19:3219:32, 20 April 2017 diff hist +19 WISE 0855−0714 →Model-derived understanding: minor clarity and flow

19 April 2017

• 07:2007:20, 19 April 2017 diff hist 0 The Americans season 5 American subject matter (vs. British)

18 April 2017

• 20:0120:01, 18 April 2017 diff hist +2 Rogue wave →Draupner Wave: Reduced some unencyclopedic tone in the wording style (the melodrama conveyed by having the single sentence as a separate paragraph).
• 17:5517:55, 18 April 2017 diff hist −12 Royal Aircraft Factory B.E.2 →Background: Couldn't figure out what "in the event" meant here. Searching found only meanings for "in the event of" which didn't fit. Maybe it's supposed to mean "ultimately", but that's very obscure usage (if at all) that I couldn't find support for.
• 17:4217:42, 18 April 2017 diff hist +7 Royal Aircraft Factory B.E.2 "Notorious stability" would normally imply "notoriously low stability". Clarified.
• 17:3217:32, 18 April 2017 diff hist −27 Royal Aircraft Factory B.E.2 Vague. Seems to be an off-topic subjective commentary about general habits in the use of military aircraft generally.

15 April 2017

• 07:5007:50, 15 April 2017 diff hist +35 List of Better Call Saul episodes →Season 3 (2017): The "so-called" quotes are ambiguous here (and generally unencyclopedic). Rearranged the wording to not need them.

11 April 2017

• 05:0005:00, 11 April 2017 diff hist −23 Oliver Evans "Heat engine vs. Newcomen engine" doesn't really correctly characterize the "high pressure vs. low pressure" question of the day.

9 April 2017

• 07:3907:39, 9 April 2017 diff hist +3 Tramp trade →Tramps today: more encyclopedic wording
• 07:3807:38, 9 April 2017 diff hist −25 Tramp trade →Tramps today: it's not really called "marketing mix"
• 07:3507:35, 9 April 2017 diff hist −4 Tramp trade →Tramps today: subject is the level of prevalence of the trade, not how well it's remembered or forgotten
• 07:3207:32, 9 April 2017 diff hist −22 Tramp trade →Voyage charter: removed source from text where it doesn't really belong, it's still in the cite where it does belong

8 April 2017

• 19:5719:57, 8 April 2017 diff hist −5 Tiny Tim (rocket) "most likely" is wp:weasel. Source says "one of the".
• 19:5019:50, 8 April 2017 diff hist −65 Tiny Tim (rocket) Sources should be in the inline citation, not in the text, unless the fact of the particular source is itself notable (which is possible, but uncommon).
• 19:4519:45, 8 April 2017 diff hist −9 Tiny Tim (rocket) Nonsequitur. "However" implies "following thing contradicts previous thing to some degree". But, size of casing doesn't contradict and is not clearly related to anti-ship requirements. If it is, then that relationship should be more clearly described.
• 17:5817:58, 8 April 2017 diff hist +22 Ezekiel refined previous and fixed broken ref
• 16:5716:57, 8 April 2017 diff hist −81 Ezekiel →Living in Babylon: It's spelled differently than "Aviv" and the link makes it clear, retained "in Babylonia" (a whole other country/region) for even more clarity. Dispensed with ref to Tel Aviv in Israel as unnecessary and digression off-topic.)
• 03:1103:11, 8 April 2017 diff hist +1 Necrotizing fasciitis minor consistency, clarity

7 April 2017

• 20:2820:28, 7 April 2017 diff hist +13 The Expanse (TV series) →Season 2 (2017): How about "street people"? The only thing really observable was that they lived on the street under the overpasses ("lived" = cooking and hanging up laundry). There was no indication as to how they made some of their money.
• 18:3718:37, 7 April 2017 diff hist −15 The Expanse (TV series) →Season 2 (2017): There was no indication that she was "shocked". There was no indication they were "average" Earthers. "Enclave of poor people" was the best I could come up with - please improve it.

5 April 2017

• 19:5619:56, 5 April 2017 diff hist −102 Honey trapping →See also: unsupported claim/characterization, not even mentioned in the links
• 19:4519:45, 5 April 2017 diff hist −174 Pure Energy bogus inline citation Tag: references removed
• 19:4319:43, 5 April 2017 diff hist −132 Self-energy bogus inline citation Tag: references removed