User contributions for 68.10.210.230

20 November 2024

• 19:3819:38, 20 November 2024 diff hist +330 Daniel Toscan du Plantier →Personal life: added final sentence and reference on the cause and location of his death. current

13 November 2024

• 17:5117:51, 13 November 2024 diff hist −10 René Magritte →Legacy: in paragraph seven, “fictional novel” was redundant; “fictional” was removed

20 September 2024

• 00:1100:11, 20 September 2024 diff hist +8 E. Michael Burke →World War II: linked No. 30 Commando to its corresponding Wikipedia page current
• 00:0000:00, 20 September 2024 diff hist +30 E. Michael Burke →World War II: changed "the British 30 Commando unit, created by James Bond author Ian Fleming" to more accurate "the British 30 Commando unit, whose creation was initially proposed by James Bond author Ian Fleming"

9 September 2024

• 21:4721:47, 9 September 2024 diff hist +1 United States Special Operations Command →Somalia: corrected "The first teams into Somalia was CIA..." to "The first teams into Somalia were CIA..."

23 August 2024

• 19:2019:20, 23 August 2024 diff hist +4 Hollins University Cleaned up section on Pulitzer prize winners

8 August 2024

• 21:0121:01, 8 August 2024 diff hist +42 Ralph Bunche House (Washington, D.C.) Added Mr. Bunche's work with the Office of Strategic Services, 1941-1943 current

1 August 2024

• 19:1719:17, 1 August 2024 diff hist −1 Carsten Jensen Changed "his novels" to "his books," since the cited book, "I Have Seen the World Begin," is not a novel but a nonfiction book

20 July 2024

• 23:3823:38, 20 July 2024 diff hist +3 Korean chili pepper →DNA analysis: added "to" after "prior"

16 July 2024

• 23:3323:33, 16 July 2024 diff hist +110 Erling Tambs →Life: added mother's and wife's maiden names
• 23:1723:17, 16 July 2024 diff hist +22 Erling Tambs →Life: clarified his first sailing job
• 23:1523:15, 16 July 2024 diff hist +12 Erling Tambs Added date of death. Per first ref
• 23:1023:10, 16 July 2024 diff hist −51 Erling Tambs →Life: New translation of ref

12 July 2024

• 17:4717:47, 12 July 2024 diff hist +12 Jason Connery →Acting: Corrected role name in "The Other Side of Paradise" to Christopher "Kit" Masters
• 16:3416:34, 12 July 2024 diff hist 0 Anterior cervical discectomy and fusion changed "specialty" from "neurosurgeon" to "neurosurgery" to conform to other medical specialties current

11 July 2024

• 18:2318:23, 11 July 2024 diff hist +45 Benjamin Lavernhe →Career: cleaned up machine-translated first two sentences, correcting for verb-tense problems, style, and continuity

21 June 2024

• 14:4614:46, 21 June 2024 diff hist −1 Jay R. Vargas →Family: removed superfluous < from citation
• 14:4514:45, 21 June 2024 diff hist +183 Jay R. Vargas →Family: changed his ethnicity, previously listed as Mexican-American," to a more accurate description

13 June 2024

• 20:1820:18, 13 June 2024 diff hist +24 Richard J. Flaherty →Later life: added West Virginia to "Milton" as place of burial

7 June 2024

• 14:1714:17, 7 June 2024 diff hist +31 Daisy Coulam →Filmography: linked Deadwater Fell to its Wikipedia page

4 June 2024

• 20:0120:01, 4 June 2024 diff hist −5 Robert Dean Frisbie →Death
• 20:0020:00, 4 June 2024 diff hist +1 Robert Dean Frisbie →Death
• 19:5919:59, 4 June 2024 diff hist −81 Robert Dean Frisbie →Death Tag: references removed
• 19:5619:56, 4 June 2024 diff hist +136 Robert Dean Frisbie →Death

1 June 2024

• 20:2020:20, 1 June 2024 diff hist −1 Bell V-280 Valor →Design: Removed superfluous comma after "tiltrotor"--i.e., "One major difference from the earlier V-22 Osprey tiltrotor, is that..."

31 May 2024

• 22:0022:00, 31 May 2024 diff hist 0 Frans G. Bengtsson →Literary career: In third paragraph, corrected "1000 AD" to more standard "AD 1000" current

16 May 2024

• 13:3913:39, 16 May 2024 diff hist +113 Darién Gap Added text from Wikipedia entry for Darien province: "The Tanela River, which flows toward Atrato, was Hispanicized to Darién [by 16th Century European conquistadors."

15 May 2024

• 23:1023:10, 15 May 2024 diff hist +21 Cimitero Evangelico agli Allori →Notable burials: Expanded Howard Pyle's description to include painter and author, which he was successfully

6 May 2024

• 22:4122:41, 6 May 2024 diff hist +2 Central Cemetery of Bogotá →Notable interments: fixed consistency for double hyphen of last entry, Rivera
• 22:4022:40, 6 May 2024 diff hist +50 Central Cemetery of Bogotá →Notable interments: added José Eustasio Rivera
• 22:3622:36, 6 May 2024 diff hist +2 José Eustasio Rivera →Death: changed "His venture, albeit riffled with difficulties, was moving along..." to "His venture, although riddled with difficulties, was moving along...," because "to riffle" means to shuffle playing cards in a particular way, while "to riddle" is appropriate for this context

29 April 2024

• 20:5820:58, 29 April 2024 diff hist +5 Ralph Puckett →Hill 205: changed colloquial and thus inappropriate "butt" to "buttocks."

25 April 2024

• 15:2115:21, 25 April 2024 diff hist +205 Alastair Pilkington →Family: added first wife's date of death and citation.

19 April 2024

• 21:4321:43, 19 April 2024 diff hist −8 The Turner Diaries Changed redundant "fiction novel" in first sentence to "novel."

13 April 2024

• 23:0723:07, 13 April 2024 diff hist 0 Hilton of Cadboll Stone Corrected "800 AD" with the standard rendering of such dates, "AD 800"

11 April 2024

• 20:1920:19, 11 April 2024 diff hist +7 James Fox →Return to acting: added film date after "Farewell to the King" in parentheses

10 April 2024

• 14:3314:33, 10 April 2024 diff hist −8 War of the Rats Deleted "fiction" from redundant term "fiction novel" in first sentence.

5 March 2024

• 20:3720:37, 5 March 2024 diff hist +250 Talk:Melvin B. Tolson Added comment on cemetery's correct name and Tolson's date of birth as indicated on his tombstone; added link to relevant Findagrave page.

21 February 2024

• 23:1823:18, 21 February 2024 diff hist +3 Nakajima A6M2-N →Operational history: changed incorrect "lined up in a beach" to "lined up along a beach"

9 February 2024

• 15:1815:18, 9 February 2024 diff hist −4 Johannes Vermeer →Career: changed unclear "the city suffered the terrible explosion known as the Delft Thunderclap, which destroyed a large section of the city." to "In 1654, a terrible explosion, known as the Delft Thunderclap, at a gunpowder store destroyed a large section of the city."

18 January 2024

• 03:4803:48, 18 January 2024 diff hist +10 Ryu Hyun-kyung →Personal life: changed fragmentary "the couple announced broke up after 6 years of dating" to "the couple announced that they broke up after 6 years of dating

14 January 2024

• 17:2517:25, 14 January 2024 diff hist 0 Saint Florian Changed years dates to reflect the following rule: "BC should appear after the numerical year, while AD should appear before it."

10 January 2024

• 15:3115:31, 10 January 2024 diff hist +38 William A. Longacre Added University of Chicago for school of doctorate, and specified date of death current

30 December 2023

• 17:1317:13, 30 December 2023 diff hist −22 Okinawa Prefecture →1945–1965: replaced ambiguous introductory phrase, "Near the end of World War II, in 1945," with specific "On 1 April 1945"

25 December 2023

• 21:2621:26, 25 December 2023 diff hist −11 The Vikings (film) →Reception: deleted "rentals of" in first sentence, since in the 1950s films earned revenue at the traditional box office, not from "rentals"