User contributions for 68.175.31.28

15 February 2017

• 21:0021:00, 15 February 2017 diff hist −13 Lee Boyd Malvo fixing source Tag: references removed
• 20:5820:58, 15 February 2017 diff hist +54 Lee Boyd Malvo reconnected missing link on third source

6 February 2017

• 18:1918:19, 6 February 2017 diff hist +90 Nancy Meyers →1980s: not everyone knows what a JAP is; I didn't until I went east to college; plus it's a rather insulting term and need to be put in context

29 June 2016

• 20:3520:35, 29 June 2016 diff hist +495 Freedom of religion in the United States →Colonial precedents: mass bay colony and plymouth were theocracies which punished and banished those who disagreed with their leadership, even Separatists and Puritans like Roger Williams who had come to form the colony with them

21 April 2016

• 16:1316:13, 21 April 2016 diff hist −1 Edward M. House →Early years: typo
• 16:1116:11, 21 April 2016 diff hist +25 Edward M. House →Early years: clarifying that his father was a Confederate supporter
• 16:1016:10, 21 April 2016 diff hist +47 Edward M. House →Early years: corrected inaccurate phrasing, which made it sound as if House's father had run the Union blockade rather than worked against it as the committed confederate he was

18 April 2016

• 02:3502:35, 18 April 2016 diff hist −8 The World at War →Home Video history
• 02:3402:34, 18 April 2016 diff hist +210 The World at War →Broadcast history
• 02:0602:06, 18 April 2016 diff hist 0 The World at War →Broadcast history
• 02:0602:06, 18 April 2016 diff hist +400 The World at War →Broadcast history: bringing home video viewing options up to date.

13 April 2016

• 03:5403:54, 13 April 2016 diff hist +4 Enzo Cilenti →Life and career: inserted anna in tropics link
• 00:5000:50, 13 April 2016 diff hist +17 A Royal Affair →Plot: having just watched the movie, what roused the people was that the affair was exposed and it was a level of immorality that was considered a mockery of the throne

28 March 2016

• 06:2406:24, 28 March 2016 diff hist 0 Rex Harrison →Personal life: correcting poor sentence structure
• 05:4205:42, 28 March 2016 diff hist +47 Ingrid Jonker →Childhood and early career
• 05:4005:40, 28 March 2016 diff hist +222 Ingrid Jonker →Childhood and early career: adding the crucial detail that jonkers mother also committed suicide
• 03:5203:52, 28 March 2016 diff hist +435 Carolyn Gold Heilbrun →Controversies: further clarification of Heilbrun's position vis a vis Columbia
• 03:5003:50, 28 March 2016 diff hist +38 Carolyn Gold Heilbrun →Controversies: further clarification of objection
• 03:4803:48, 28 March 2016 diff hist +165 Carolyn Gold Heilbrun →Controversies: correcting sloppy paraphrase of controversy based on reading articles being mentioned
• 02:1402:14, 28 March 2016 diff hist +206 Erica Blasberg →Death: adding details from referenced sources on Dr. Hess's actions
• 02:0702:07, 28 March 2016 diff hist +16 Erica Blasberg →Death: adding "Dr." to Hess's name to clarify his role
• 02:0502:05, 28 March 2016 diff hist +49 Erica Blasberg →Death: clarifying why Dr. Hess was suspected
• 02:0402:04, 28 March 2016 diff hist +21 Erica Blasberg →Death: clarifying that Dr. Hess was her doctor

26 March 2016

• 23:5423:54, 26 March 2016 diff hist +40 René Laforgue →Psychoanalysis: clarifying a poorly written sentence
• 14:2214:22, 26 March 2016 diff hist +55 Jean Seberg →In popular culture: adding detail on madonna's video

25 March 2016

• 21:4421:44, 25 March 2016 diff hist +11 Zsuzsi Mary →Posthomous releases: correctin grammatical errors in english as a second language

11 February 2016

• 23:4723:47, 11 February 2016 diff hist +28 James McAvoy →Early career: adding correct link to White Teeth Tv serial
• 23:4623:46, 11 February 2016 diff hist −27 James McAvoy →Early career
• 23:4423:44, 11 February 2016 diff hist −7 James McAvoy →Early career: clarifying White teeth references
• 23:4223:42, 11 February 2016 diff hist +94 James McAvoy →Early career: adding author and channel to White Teeth
• 23:3423:34, 11 February 2016 diff hist +28 James McAvoy →Early career: adding the name of McAvoy's character in Band of Brothers
• 23:3123:31, 11 February 2016 diff hist +1 James McAvoy →Wanted, X-Men and subsequent work: fixing X-men paragraph indentation
• 23:3023:30, 11 February 2016 diff hist +1 James McAvoy →Wanted, X-Men and subsequent work: adding paragraph indentation to X-men graf for clarity
• 23:2823:28, 11 February 2016 diff hist −4 James McAvoy →Wanted',' X-Men and subsequent work: fixing punctuation in subheading
• 23:2823:28, 11 February 2016 diff hist +7 James McAvoy →Wanted and subsequent work: adding X-Men to the subheading, since many readers will be looking for this
• 23:2723:27, 11 February 2016 diff hist +4 James McAvoy →Wanted and subsequent work: adding link to Stan Lee's name
• 23:2523:25, 11 February 2016 diff hist +26 James McAvoy →Wanted and subsequent work: adding link to X-men animated series
• 23:0623:06, 11 February 2016 diff hist −12 James McAvoy →Early life and family: further clarifying an otherwise distorted paraphrase
• 23:0523:05, 11 February 2016 diff hist +20 James McAvoy →Early life and family: paraphrasing McAvoy's quote accurately based on reading the original source. it's important not to sloppily paraphrase, something the original writer apparently does not know.
• 23:0223:02, 11 February 2016 diff hist −4 James McAvoy →Early life and family: the continual use of the verb "admittted" implies that McAvoy is accused of something. In the interview quoted, he simply said it.
• 23:0123:01, 11 February 2016 diff hist +2 James McAvoy →Early life and family: just reads more clearly
• 20:0720:07, 11 February 2016 diff hist +15 James McAvoy →Personal life: putting in the name of the award he won - it presents a clearer motivation for why his father got in touch. As I learned at the Columbia Journalism School, specificity is always a stronger form of truth. something Bots wouldn't know.
• 19:5919:59, 11 February 2016 diff hist +17 James McAvoy →Wanted and subsequent work: it is the placement of the russian missiles in Turkey which forms the source of the plot, not the Cuban Missile crises itself.
• 19:5519:55, 11 February 2016 diff hist +112 James McAvoy →Wanted and subsequent work: distinguishing between the comic books of X-men and the cartoons knows and cares nothing for the history of entertainment. this is not "puffery," but accuracy and on a subject about which this Bot knows nothing
• 19:4119:41, 11 February 2016 diff hist +21 James McAvoy →Wanted and subsequent work: an actor should be named in a starring role, not referred to solely as someone's spouse, as it was here.
• 19:3819:38, 11 February 2016 diff hist +52 James McAvoy clarifying that he did not exchange TV for film - which is what US actors generally do, but not British ones, who continue to navigate btwn film, TV and stage.
• 19:3619:36, 11 February 2016 diff hist +26 James McAvoy "the late 2000s" - originally here, means 2080s and 2090s, as it does when we refer to the "late 1800s" or "late 1900s"; since his film career began in 2003, it's inaccurate even if the usage of "late 2000s" meant 2008 or 9 - which it doesn't.

10 February 2016

• 05:5305:53, 10 February 2016 diff hist +73 James McAvoy →Wanted and subsequent work: making another clunky paraphrase more accurate by checking the original source
• 05:4605:46, 10 February 2016 diff hist +54 James McAvoy →Wanted and subsequent work: fixing another inaccurate paraphrase by going to the source
• 05:4305:43, 10 February 2016 diff hist +33 James McAvoy →Wanted and subsequent work: wives deserve their own names