User contributions for 69.112.198.201

1 April 2022

• 17:2717:27, 1 April 2022 diff hist −35 Keep America Beautiful No edit summary

28 March 2022

• 03:0803:08, 28 March 2022 diff hist +24 Jane Campion No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:0003:00, 28 March 2022 diff hist +34 Jane Campion No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 May 2021

• 13:5513:55, 17 May 2021 diff hist +111 Oracle Thinkquest →History

12 May 2021

• 23:0123:01, 12 May 2021 diff hist +11 Oracle Thinkquest →History
• 18:5718:57, 12 May 2021 diff hist +381 Oracle Thinkquest →History

29 July 2009

• 02:0802:08, 29 July 2009 diff hist +596 Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words Improved consistency of "other problems" section, but moved some general examples into examples section. Is this the best place? "Other Problems" is certainly not.
• 01:5701:57, 29 July 2009 diff hist −24 Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words Changed questions to match example; although I now kind of think it feels like it's missing something with "how many is most" gone....
• 00:3800:38, 29 July 2009 diff hist −595 Psychogenic disease On second thought; moved mentions of psychogenic pain and amnesia into "see also" section. This article isn't about those topics and the paragraphs were terribly written anyways.
• 00:3500:35, 29 July 2009 diff hist +123 Psychogenic disease Why does everybody think that every bit of utter crap they pour out onto the internet is encyclopedia worthy? Whoever wrote this needs a good slapping.

21 July 2009

• 20:0220:02, 21 July 2009 diff hist +32 Click-through rate No edit summary

18 July 2009

• 22:3922:39, 18 July 2009 diff hist −188 Magnetic resonance imaging →Implants and foreign bodies: Sentence removed a) read like a Medtronics ad, b) belongs in the pacemaker article, not the MRI article, c) wasn't notable (just clinical trial approval).

17 July 2009

• 15:1715:17, 17 July 2009 diff hist +137 Toxicodendron radicans →Effects on the body

16 July 2009

• 07:0107:01, 16 July 2009 diff hist +22 Where the Wild Things Are →Adaptations

2 July 2009

• 04:0904:09, 2 July 2009 diff hist +176 Peace Frog This article is complete crap.

24 June 2009

• 10:3210:32, 24 June 2009 diff hist +167 Model–view–controller No edit summary
• 10:3010:30, 24 June 2009 diff hist +83 Model–view–controller No edit summary

23 June 2009

• 00:5000:50, 23 June 2009 diff hist +4 Konami Code →History
• 00:4900:49, 23 June 2009 diff hist +24 Konami Code →History

28 May 2009

• 04:4604:46, 28 May 2009 diff hist +55 User talk:Kaiser matias No edit summary
• 04:4504:45, 28 May 2009 diff hist +634 User talk:Kaiser matias →Nominated history of redwings article for deletion.: new section
• 04:4304:43, 28 May 2009 diff hist +1 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Log/2009 May 28 Add a missing { to three blind mice entry... not sure why redwings entry not showing up though.
• 04:4104:41, 28 May 2009 diff hist +69 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Log/2009 May 28 Adding Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/History_of_the_Detroit_Red_Wings
• 04:4004:40, 28 May 2009 diff hist +387 Talk:History of the Detroit Red Wings →Deletion: new section
• 04:3704:37, 28 May 2009 diff hist +355 History of the Detroit Red Wings AfD: Nominated for deletion; see Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/History_of_the_Detroit_Red_Wings
• 04:3404:34, 28 May 2009 diff hist +369 Wikipedia talk:Deletion process →Could this be any more complicated?: new section
• 04:3004:30, 28 May 2009 diff hist +512 Talk:Detroit Red Wings →History section longer than "main article"?: new section

17 May 2009

• 07:3507:35, 17 May 2009 diff hist +4 Talk:Myotonia congenita →Merge with Tomsen Disease
• 07:3407:34, 17 May 2009 diff hist +336 Talk:Thomsen disease →Merge with MC: new section
• 07:3207:32, 17 May 2009 diff hist −44 Myotonia congenita Removed merge template, see talk page.
• 07:3207:32, 17 May 2009 diff hist +614 Talk:Myotonia congenita →Merge with Tomsen Disease: new section
• 07:2607:26, 17 May 2009 diff hist −157 Myotonia congenita Whoever wrote this article had no grasp on writing and no business writing an article in an encyclopedia. Also removed unexplained "warm up effect" comment.

14 May 2009

• 03:0103:01, 14 May 2009 diff hist +1,091 Talk:Weasel word →Poor examples.: new section
• 02:4702:47, 14 May 2009 diff hist −77 Pittsburgh Penguins →The Return of Mario Lemieux: Removed nonsense metaphor; and silly irrelevant link to architectural article.

1 May 2009

• 03:1103:11, 1 May 2009 diff hist −38 Influenza →Influenzavirus A: Actually, I guess "swine flu" is more generic than just H1N1; cleaned up my last edit.
• 03:1003:10, 1 May 2009 diff hist −98 Influenza Removed redundant info present later in article.
• 02:5502:55, 1 May 2009 diff hist +247 Talk:Swine influenza →Article Rename
• 02:5302:53, 1 May 2009 diff hist +662 Talk:Swine influenza →Article Rename: new section

28 April 2009

• 15:2015:20, 28 April 2009 diff hist 0 Talk:2009 swine flu pandemic →Wikipedia is not a doctor...: :-)
• 15:2015:20, 28 April 2009 diff hist +788 Talk:2009 swine flu pandemic →"Prior influenza season" incorrect interpretation of source.: new section

26 April 2009

• 19:5419:54, 26 April 2009 diff hist −86 Weasel word →In business: Removed one example; only because "helps" doesn't really imply that it is the cure. Even though I see where the example was going.

8 April 2009

• 01:2801:28, 8 April 2009 diff hist −44 Red Rover The use of "such" would imply that an example was given, but one was not.
• 01:2701:27, 8 April 2009 diff hist +10 Red Rover →Strategy: Split sections.
• 01:2701:27, 8 April 2009 diff hist −235 Red Rover →Strategy: More verbosity removed. Whoever wrote this has no business writing here.
• 01:2201:22, 8 April 2009 diff hist −2 Talk:Red Rover →Removal of origins "information".
• 01:2101:21, 8 April 2009 diff hist +559 Talk:Red Rover →Removal of origins "information".: new section
• 01:1901:19, 8 April 2009 diff hist +31 Red Rover →Origins
• 01:1601:16, 8 April 2009 diff hist −424 Red Rover →Origins: I can tell you why this text was deleted: It was retarded. Also, the interesting factoids here had no relevance to the origins of the name of this game. Cleaned up. Still needs sources.
• 01:1101:11, 8 April 2009 diff hist −394 Red Rover Canned some extremely unnecessary verbosity.