User contributions for 69.143.60.230

16 January 2022

• 23:5423:54, 16 January 2022 diff hist −1 Perfidious Albion →Examples of usage: remove comma between adjective and noun

4 January 2022

• 15:0115:01, 4 January 2022 diff hist +1 Gauss circle problem →The problem: correct typo

2 January 2022

• 04:5604:56, 2 January 2022 diff hist −3 750 GeV diphoton excess Correct redundancy of using both definite article and possessive tense

31 December 2021

• 08:4208:42, 31 December 2021 diff hist +2 Vortex theory of the atom →William Thomson (Lord Kelvin): add inexplicably missing letters

30 December 2021

• 09:1609:16, 30 December 2021 diff hist −2 Interkosmos Remove extraneous commas

16 September 2021

• 14:2814:28, 16 September 2021 diff hist −3 2013 Boeing 787 Dreamliner grounding Minor grammar fix

6 September 2021

• 14:4714:47, 6 September 2021 diff hist −2 Elliptic-curve cryptography →Backdoors: "Edward Snowden" in this sentence is an object prefixed by adjectives and should not be surrounded by commas

22 August 2021

• 10:5710:57, 22 August 2021 diff hist +1 Braess's paradox Fix possessive apostrophe issue Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 August 2021

• 22:5722:57, 17 August 2021 diff hist −7 Hindley–Milner type system →Overloading: Remove extraneous comma and word

15 August 2021

• 14:1114:11, 15 August 2021 diff hist +2 Hyperbolic discounting Remove erroneous use of verb "states" to refer to something that isn't a statement of anything.

12 August 2021

• 03:1703:17, 12 August 2021 diff hist −53 Top quark condensate Remove unnecessary and confusing engrish, simplifying and clarifying the importance of the top quark’s mass

18 July 2021

• 00:3800:38, 18 July 2021 diff hist −1 MCI Inc. →Proposed Sprint merger: typo

17 July 2021

• 15:5615:56, 17 July 2021 diff hist −6 Hindley–Milner type system →Higher-order types: Minor fixes including extraneous comma after verb

3 June 2021

• 17:3417:34, 3 June 2021 diff hist 0 Airbus A220 →A220: replace inappropriate colon with comma

31 May 2021

• 21:2921:29, 31 May 2021 diff hist +4 Michelangelo (computer virus) Rewrite bizarrely circuitous sentence.

25 May 2021

• 11:4211:42, 25 May 2021 diff hist +67 Peaceful Revolution →Die Wende: Replace reference to Krenz's leadership as "interim." It was not interim, it was just short. His election as general secretary was unconditional and in keeping with longstanding practice.

24 May 2021

• 10:5910:59, 24 May 2021 diff hist 0 Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe Fix minor grammatical error

23 May 2021

• 02:3902:39, 23 May 2021 diff hist −2 Fermi paradox →Lack of resources needed to physically spread throughout the galaxy: correct weird grammar
• 02:0202:02, 23 May 2021 diff hist +2 A Canticle for Leibowitz →Fiat Homo ("Let There Be Man"): correct misspellings

16 May 2021

• 02:2002:20, 16 May 2021 diff hist +1 Flannan Isles Lighthouse →1900 crew disappearance: spelling

11 May 2021

• 23:3923:39, 11 May 2021 diff hist +1 Wason selection task →Policing social rules: Add’l fix to properly pluralize Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:3823:38, 11 May 2021 diff hist 0 Wason selection task →Policing social rules: Somehow the word “context” had been swapped for the nearly-identical, but nonsensical, “content.” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 May 2021

• 22:2522:25, 7 May 2021 diff hist −1 Warsaw Pact invasion of Czechoslovakia →Reactions around the world: Remove extraneous comma after subject
• 21:2721:27, 7 May 2021 diff hist −1 Czechoslovakia Remove extraneous comma between title and name

5 May 2021

• 15:3115:31, 5 May 2021 diff hist −4 John Boozer Correct punctuation (extraneous apostrophe and comma.)
• 00:5800:58, 5 May 2021 diff hist +11 Jacobus Kapteyn →The Kapteyn Universe: missing verb

22 April 2021

• 02:5402:54, 22 April 2021 diff hist −17 Gasoline pill →Other water-to-gasoline "inventors": rewrite credulous, blatantly false description of fraudster’s intent.

16 April 2021

• 14:3414:34, 16 April 2021 diff hist −1 Harry Schwarz →Realigning opposition: Extraneous apostrophe

24 March 2021

• 12:4112:41, 24 March 2021 diff hist −1 McKinley Tower Apartments →Renovation: remove extraneous comma

23 March 2021

• 16:5016:50, 23 March 2021 diff hist −2 Trifocal tensor Fix weird grammar

18 March 2021

• 16:1116:11, 18 March 2021 diff hist −194 Washington Metro rolling stock →8000-series: From the original WMATA press release, those aren't new features to the 8000 series, but are already persent in "its 7000-series cars, which today account for more than half of all trains in service and include popular features such as..." the removed passages which attribute those features to the 8000 cars.

10 March 2021

• 18:1518:15, 10 March 2021 diff hist +2 Mikhail Gorbachev →Foreign policy: Fix possessive of U.S.

29 December 2020

• 22:3122:31, 29 December 2020 diff hist +4 Roddie Edmonds →World War II: Insert missing definite article

15 December 2020

• 13:5213:52, 15 December 2020 diff hist +1 Teichmüller space →Analytic theory: Fix typo

25 May 2020

• 18:0818:08, 25 May 2020 diff hist −2 Black Sox Scandal →Landis appointed Commissioner, bans all eight players (1921): Remove extraneous commas

12 April 2020

• 22:5922:59, 12 April 2020 diff hist −1 Ben's Chili Bowl →Customers and recognition: Remove extraneous comma

19 January 2020

• 00:2700:27, 19 January 2020 diff hist 0 Wilhelm Röntgen →Personal life: Fix improper capitalization Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:0100:01, 19 January 2020 diff hist +1 Delisle scale →History: Fix typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 January 2020

• 05:2005:20, 7 January 2020 diff hist +1 Gerald R. Ford-class aircraft carrier →Electromagnetic Aircraft Launch System: fix possessive

29 December 2019

• 18:2618:26, 29 December 2019 diff hist −2 Vacuous truth Removed extraneous dash in the middle of sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:1705:17, 29 December 2019 diff hist +1 Modified Newtonian dynamics →Outstanding problems for MOND: Typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit