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28 November 2022

• 20:5320:53, 28 November 2022 diff hist +2 Herbert Marcuse →Emigration to the United States Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 November 2022

• 16:3716:37, 8 November 2022 diff hist −44 1834 →Date unknown: The citation was included above with a date Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 November 2022

• 15:4015:40, 6 November 2022 diff hist −110 High concept It’s unnecessary and silly to show the hyphenated, unit-modifier version. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 October 2022

• 15:5615:56, 25 October 2022 diff hist −1 Basil L. Plumley →Military career: Removed superfluous comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 October 2022

• 20:0820:08, 20 October 2022 diff hist +204 Talk:Siege of Silistria (1854) →Punctuation errors: new section Tag: New topic

17 October 2022

• 17:4317:43, 17 October 2022 diff hist −318 Shah Shujah Durrani →Exile: Deleted redundant statement that repeated what was stated a few sentences above Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 October 2022

• 14:3514:35, 15 October 2022 diff hist +9 Vincent Eyre →Later activities Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:3214:32, 15 October 2022 diff hist −8 Vincent Eyre →Later activities Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 October 2022

• 17:4617:46, 10 October 2022 diff hist −4 Florentia Sale No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:4517:45, 10 October 2022 diff hist +18 Florentia Sale No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:4015:40, 10 October 2022 diff hist +42 Alexander Burnes →Final months and death Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 October 2022

• 15:0415:04, 1 October 2022 diff hist 0 Diane Arbus Moved the editorial comment, the second sentence lower, below factual statements Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 September 2022

• 15:2015:20, 27 September 2022 diff hist −1 Richard Ansdell →Life Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:2015:20, 27 September 2022 diff hist 0 Richard Ansdell →Life Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:1815:18, 27 September 2022 diff hist −3 Richard Ansdell →Life: Deleted conjunction that suggested a relationship between death of father and subject’s education. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 September 2022

• 15:0415:04, 14 September 2022 diff hist +4 William Brydon →Retreat from Kabul: Clarified meaning; removed hyperbole Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:4314:43, 14 September 2022 diff hist +14 Henry Tate →Life and career: Improved syntax, capitalization Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:3814:38, 14 September 2022 diff hist −8 Henry Tate →Life and career: Deleted the word rapidly. He didn’t become wealthy rapidly Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:3714:37, 14 September 2022 diff hist −6 Henry Tate →Life and career: Replaced became a millionaire with became wealthy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 September 2022

• 20:1220:12, 13 September 2022 diff hist 0 The Roll Call →History: Corrected comma splice Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

12 September 2022

• 19:2619:26, 12 September 2022 diff hist +1 Longue durée Untangled a long, convoluted, poorly written sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 September 2022

• 17:4117:41, 10 September 2022 diff hist 0 Dominic Thiem →Personal life: Deleted superfluous hyphen Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:5614:56, 10 September 2022 diff hist −2 Myha'la →Early life: Corrected / consolidated awkward phrasing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 September 2022

• 14:5514:55, 8 September 2022 diff hist 0 James E. Williams →Death: Corrected emphasis by inserting parenthetical, and improved syntax with new punctuation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 September 2022

• 13:5513:55, 3 September 2022 diff hist 0 Exercise Tiger Corrected wrong word: minimally, not nominally Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 August 2022

• 15:3115:31, 8 August 2022 diff hist −11 Fred Harvey (entrepreneur) →Early life: Deleted superfluous “a total of” six children Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 August 2022

• 17:0217:02, 3 August 2022 diff hist −5 Carlson's patrol Deleted editorial word “only’ from “only 16 killed.” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 July 2022

• 04:2904:29, 24 July 2022 diff hist +2 Battle of Jarama →Suicide Hill: Broke up a too-long para.

17 July 2022

• 15:1415:14, 17 July 2022 diff hist −10 Dutch Flat, California →Literature: Deleted superfluous word “different” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:5200:52, 17 July 2022 diff hist 0 The Swinging Blue Jeans Corrected incorrect use of semicolon. Replaced it with a colon. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 July 2022

• 00:5300:53, 15 July 2022 diff hist −2 Les Oréades No edit summary

8 July 2022

• 18:0818:08, 8 July 2022 diff hist −8 Doris Davenport →Career: Eliminated superfluous (incorrect) transition word "however." Tag: Visual edit

5 June 2022

• 16:4616:46, 5 June 2022 diff hist −1 Utopia (book) →Book 2: Discourse on Utopia: Eliminated superfluous colon Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 May 2022

• 17:1217:12, 31 May 2022 diff hist −8 Georg Wilhelm Friedrich Hegel Eliminated the false range (“from…to”) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 May 2022

• 15:3115:31, 30 May 2022 diff hist +3 George Meade →Command decisions Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 May 2022

• 14:4914:49, 28 May 2022 diff hist +1 Georges Sorel →Biography Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:4714:47, 28 May 2022 diff hist −8 Georges Sorel →Biography: Corrected the English Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:2314:23, 28 May 2022 diff hist +15 Georges Sorel Clarified a vague reference (vague “it”) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 May 2022

• 13:5013:50, 20 May 2022 diff hist −8 2021 San Jose shooting →Perpetrator: Original: “…but he only used three semiautomatic handguns.” Deleted superfluous, value-laden, non sequitur, illogical use of “only.” Isn’t three enough? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:4413:44, 20 May 2022 diff hist −1 2021 San Jose shooting →Shooting and house arson: Deleted comma. Short introductory clauses do not require a comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:3913:39, 20 May 2022 diff hist +1 2021 San Jose shooting No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:3813:38, 20 May 2022 diff hist −3 2021 San Jose shooting Reworded to separate the victims from the perp. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 May 2022

• 14:0414:04, 19 May 2022 diff hist +5 Tutt–Everett War →Violence increases, 1848–50: Corrected the syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 May 2022

• 20:2620:26, 18 May 2022 diff hist −1 Lawrence Massacre →Collapse of the Women's Prison in Kansas City: Deleted unnecessary colon Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 May 2022

• 13:2613:26, 14 May 2022 diff hist −36 Mauser C96 Deleted redundant explanation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 May 2022

• 14:4114:41, 7 May 2022 diff hist −1 Siege of Cawnpore Removed superfluous comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:3914:39, 7 May 2022 diff hist +11 Siege of Cawnpore No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:5713:57, 7 May 2022 diff hist 0 Jallianwala Bagh massacre →The massacre: Corrected run-on sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:5413:54, 7 May 2022 diff hist −3 Jallianwala Bagh massacre →The massacre: Improved title Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 May 2022

• 14:1914:19, 4 May 2022 diff hist +1 Battle of Bronkhorstspruit →Aftermath Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit