User contributions for 71.127.200.85

17 January 2018

• 00:5400:54, 17 January 2018 diff hist +11 Contract killing →Employers: the sentence's word order was confusing

14 January 2018

• 17:5717:57, 14 January 2018 diff hist −643 Lawrence Tynes →Personal life: is a guy getting in a bar fight and paying a $397 fine over twelve years ago really notable material for an encyclopedia? Tag: references removed
• 17:5117:51, 14 January 2018 diff hist −624 Lawrence Tynes →Personal life: details of where his family lived several years ago and where his children were born are probably not notable or necessary for an encyclopedia, and probably a bit close to overstepping the line when it comes to his privacy

9 January 2018

• 06:2206:22, 9 January 2018 diff hist +474 Brian Sipe →1980 MVP award winning season

27 December 2017

• 18:4718:47, 27 December 2017 diff hist +50 List of NFL MVP awards Undid revision 816882166 by Jim1138 (talk) just because it has no citation doesn't mean it's not WP:VERIFIABLE. it's sourced further down in the article (read the table). it's not original research.

24 December 2017

• 09:5309:53, 24 December 2017 diff hist +50 List of NFL MVP awards No edit summary Tag: Visual edit

6 December 2017

• 10:3910:39, 6 December 2017 diff hist −14 2006 Chicago Bears–Arizona Cardinals game →Dennis Green post-game rant: why don't we link to the wikipedia article for the word "fact?" or the word "deafeated?" or the word "the?" or the word "because?"

24 November 2017

• 00:3100:31, 24 November 2017 diff hist −2 Champions for Christ →Controversy

18 November 2017

• 08:0108:01, 18 November 2017 diff hist −14 George Wallace can we not just throw "neo" in front of everything? regardless of whether if the source has "neo" in it, both terms still mean the same thing

10 November 2017

• 14:5114:51, 10 November 2017 diff hist −77 Sodium oxybate →Mechanism of action: copyedits; removed citation neded tag - GHB's mechanism of action is cited in the main GHB article

27 October 2017

• 06:4506:45, 27 October 2017 diff hist 0 Garrett Brown shouldn't be capitalized

4 September 2017

• 12:5912:59, 4 September 2017 diff hist −133 Buddy Roemer →Later business career: I don't think "doubling their investment" is very notable, and i don't think the part about where money was spent is notable either, as those 3 categories are so broad that it's effectively meaningless. plus, funds are fungible
• 12:5312:53, 4 September 2017 diff hist −24 Buddy Roemer →Later business career: updating tense as this was 3 years ago, and various other copy-edits

16 August 2017

• 05:0905:09, 16 August 2017 diff hist −10 Phil Simms removed editorializing Tag: Visual edit

30 July 2017

• 00:3100:31, 30 July 2017 diff hist 0 Delvin Breaux updated to include 2016 stats

4 July 2017

• 07:4807:48, 4 July 2017 diff hist −110 Jahri Evans no point including that, just confusing to the reader why it would even be mentioned Tag: Visual edit

11 June 2017

• 02:4502:45, 11 June 2017 diff hist +2 Elvis Dumervil →Denver Broncos: 3 CBs; 2 LBs

7 June 2017

• 02:4902:49, 7 June 2017 diff hist −1 History of communication typo/error correction Tag: Visual edit

2 June 2017

• 02:4602:46, 2 June 2017 diff hist −2 Wolf-PAC →"Runaway Convention" theory, ongoing conflict with DNC and Common Cause: copyedit
• 02:4502:45, 2 June 2017 diff hist +22 Wolf-PAC →"Runaway Convention" theory, ongoing conflict with DNC and Common Cause: copyedit
• 02:4302:43, 2 June 2017 diff hist −10 Wolf-PAC →"Runaway Convention" theory, ongoing conflict with DNC and Common Cause: correcting typo
• 02:4202:42, 2 June 2017 diff hist −26 Wolf-PAC →"Runaway Convention" theory, ongoing conflict with Democratic National Committee and Common Cause: shortening section title
• 02:4202:42, 2 June 2017 diff hist +339 Wolf-PAC added citation Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• 02:3402:34, 2 June 2017 diff hist +361 Wolf-PAC several changes, please edit anything you dislike instead of reverting, so as not to revert everything when you only disagree with one part. i am going to add a citation for the part in parenthesis in the first sentence of the section Tag: Visual edit

14 May 2017

• 09:5309:53, 14 May 2017 diff hist 0 Air Coryell →Coryell opens up passing in the NFL: fixing year number Tag: Visual edit
• 08:5908:59, 14 May 2017 diff hist +2 Air Coryell →Coryell opens up passing in the NFL: copyedit (shortens sentence) Tag: Visual edit
• 08:5408:54, 14 May 2017 diff hist +6 Air Coryell copyedit Tag: Visual edit

8 May 2017

• 10:5410:54, 8 May 2017 diff hist −427 Save Ben & Jerry's removed politically charged, poorly worded sentence (including an improper quotation). it was not necessary information for the lede to contain and that info is also expressed within the rest of the article Tag: references removed

21 April 2017

• 07:4907:49, 21 April 2017 diff hist 0 Adam Carolla past tense; that show is cancelled

16 April 2017

• 05:3205:32, 16 April 2017 diff hist −98 Kato Kaelin →O. J. Simpson murder case: commonly known, unnecessary details, especially since there's a link to the trial right there

6 April 2017

• 05:1505:15, 6 April 2017 diff hist −57 Fentanyl →Recreational use: little copyedits; deleted slang term - what is this, 1997? there are no standardized slang terms. just because it's in a source doesn't mean you're required to include it in the article

2 April 2017

• 03:5803:58, 2 April 2017 diff hist −14 James Forrestal pounds should be listed first if anything, but no reason to have both especially in a distinctly american article
• 02:0402:04, 2 April 2017 diff hist −518 Usury →Scholastic theology: the material in that paragraph seemed significantly disconnected from the rest of the section, and didn't explain anything of significance or even relevance. it was unnecessary in the section and adds to the article's length

22 February 2017

• 11:5111:51, 22 February 2017 diff hist +31 Plantation, Florida →Notable people

10 February 2017

• 20:1320:13, 10 February 2017 diff hist −212 Myoclonus →Cause: disagree that clarification was needed, but added some anyway; material occurs earlier in article, doesn't need double citation; let's not exacerbate anxieties of countless hypochondriacs who no doubt comprise overwhelming majority of readers

27 January 2017

• 23:5223:52, 27 January 2017 diff hist −1 Derrick Morgan (American football) →Season highlights: copyedit

26 January 2017

• 03:0303:03, 26 January 2017 diff hist −41 3–4 defense →Overview: Browns and Bills new defensive coordinators will implement 4-3 defenses. it's verifiable common knowledge. i could provide links but don't know how to do citations so please add a citation instead of deleting. will post links on talk page