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07:3607:36, 19 July 2014 diff hist +14 Duty to retreat →U.S. law: just added "of Washington" to "State of Washington" in the court case citation
07:3207:32, 19 July 2014 diff hist −24 Spot zoning →Authority: Changing my own previous sentence. This one is simpler, clearer. I should have edited/previewed before I saved.
07:2807:28, 19 July 2014 diff hist +20 Spot zoning →Authority: changed "contradict" to "contradict or fail to advance" Courts have ruled zoning ordinances unconstitutional not only when they harm public purpose, but also when they fail to advance a public purpose (i.e., serve to useful public purpose
07:2607:26, 19 July 2014 diff hist +29 Spot zoning →Contract zoning: just tweaked last sentence for clarity
07:1707:17, 19 July 2014 diff hist +1,440 Spot zoning What started out as a minor improvement to the definition, became a wholesale re-write and re-organization, to create an orderly progression of ideas, and to move the most important aspects of the definition to the top.

07:0107:01, 25 June 2014 diff hist −4 Manufacture of cheddar cheese →Cheddaring: changed "moisture" to "whey" for accuracy.
06:5906:59, 25 June 2014 diff hist +93 Manufacture of cheddar cheese →Cheddaring: improved introductory paragraph with helpful summary information

05:3105:31, 22 June 2014 diff hist +229 Ivy + Bean →Description: changing description to read less like an advertisement.

20:0120:01, 1 June 2014 diff hist −101 Li Shangyin →External links: replaced dead link with a different, live link

23:2323:23, 31 May 2014 diff hist −1 King Zhou of Shang →Mentions in literature and legend: "lustrous" changed to "lustful" More accurate, understandable
18:3518:35, 31 May 2014 diff hist −107 Saint Olaf →Reign: deleted dubious statement, which is better discussed in later sections of same article, and which is off-topic in this paragraph

03:2503:25, 27 May 2014 diff hist 0 Ruan Ji →Politics and the poet: quiet life, instead of still life. Reads better in English.
03:2303:23, 27 May 2014 diff hist +11 Ruan Ji →Politics and the poet: Diction choice: "shrine" not a good choice. "Glamour and fame" more fitting.
03:1903:19, 27 May 2014 diff hist −5 Ruan Ji →Politics and the poet: Grammar: removed word "from," which is not needed after the word "relinquished."
03:1603:16, 27 May 2014 diff hist 0 Ruan Ji →Life: changed comma to semicolon for improved grammar.
03:1203:12, 27 May 2014 diff hist +25 Seven Sages of the Bamboo Grove Added name as example; added parenthesis for readability
03:0903:09, 27 May 2014 diff hist +6 Seven Sages of the Bamboo Grove Added "wrote" to improve grammar and readability
03:0603:06, 27 May 2014 diff hist +5 Liu Ling (poet) Added "CE" for common era, to distinguish between dates before/after zero year of western dating system

03:0903:09, 22 May 2014 diff hist −2 Stand-your-ground law →Effect on crime rates: last sentence: "resuming" is better word choice than "continuing," since there was a break not continous
03:0703:07, 22 May 2014 diff hist +93 Stand-your-ground law →Effect on crime rates: Adjusted last sentence to reflect the actual findings of Politifact article being cited.
02:5402:54, 22 May 2014 diff hist +11 Duty to retreat improved grammar/sense in first paragraph, indicating that evidence of retreat is an element of acting reasonably
02:4702:47, 22 May 2014 diff hist +46 Castle doctrine →Duty-to-retreat: added link to Wiki page

06:3806:38, 29 April 2014 diff hist 0 Achilles tendon →Rupture: Moved one paragraph earlier in sequence, where it makes more logical progression of ideas

06:3206:32, 17 April 2014 diff hist −12 Rolling (metalworking) →Hot and cold rolling: removed redundant listing of "wheel rims" twice in same sentence.

20:1820:18, 8 March 2014 diff hist +326 1907 Bellingham race riot Added information about 100th anniversary
20:0120:01, 8 March 2014 diff hist +30 Coast Salish →The peoples: added another tribe, and added Salish name for Lummi
19:5719:57, 8 March 2014 diff hist +26 Coast Salish →The peoples: Added two tribes. Coast Salish already verified in individual Wiki entries

04:0004:00, 26 September 2013 diff hist +70 Floating cities and islands in fiction →Film and television: Improved reference to "Laputa" in the Miyazaki reference, which ties it to earlier content in this wiki entry

06:4906:49, 21 April 2013 diff hist −8 SD card →Personal computers: Edited my own work: removed the word "quickly" as being too subjective
06:4706:47, 21 April 2013 diff hist +63 SD card →Personal computers: added link to related info in same article
06:3306:33, 21 April 2013 diff hist +586 SD card →Personal computers: added info on booting from SD card on Apple computers

22:4322:43, 1 April 2013 diff hist +1 Meconium No changes in content. Moved sentences around in first sect. for more logical progression from basic to advanced info.

14:1714:17, 18 March 2013 diff hist +29 Tax policy →Philosophy: added link to proper economic concept. Foitution still makes no sense.
14:1314:13, 18 March 2013 diff hist +14 Tax policy →Philosophy: The sentence still makes poor sense, but at least the tem is real and apropos.
14:1014:10, 18 March 2013 diff hist +6 Tax policy →Philosophy: This appears to not be a real word. This "word" appears over and over in the same unattributed quote, with no definition.