User contributions for 71.86.161.21

23 April 2017

• 11:2511:25, 23 April 2017 diff hist −9 Ron Baker (basketball) Corrected bamw Tags: possible BLP issue or vandalism Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 March 2014

• 02:5002:50, 13 March 2014 diff hist 0 The Injustice to Dou E →Prologue: changed "to" to "as"; corrected grammar

8 March 2014

• 22:3222:32, 8 March 2014 diff hist +10 Gary Locke →Personal life: fixed rambling run-on sentence and punctuation.
• 19:0819:08, 8 March 2014 diff hist +1 Gary Locke Changed "will" to "would" to indicate that the event has already taken place.
• 15:2115:21, 8 March 2014 diff hist 0 Longjing tea →Varieties: changed "longjing" to "Longjing", because it is a proper noun.
• 15:2015:20, 8 March 2014 diff hist +1 Longjing tea →Authentic Longjing: changed "definition" to "definitions"; subject-verb agreement.
• 15:1815:18, 8 March 2014 diff hist 0 Longjing tea →Production and health content: changed "longjing" to "Longjing", because it is a proper noun.
• 15:1715:17, 8 March 2014 diff hist 0 Longjing tea →Production and health content: changed "longjing" to "Longjing", because it is a proper noun.

4 March 2014

• 17:3217:32, 4 March 2014 diff hist 0 Incident at Oglala →Background: changed "drive by" to "drive-by"

2 March 2014

• 12:0112:01, 2 March 2014 diff hist +25 John Leighton Stuart →Early life: fixed sentence fragment.

1 March 2014

• 15:1815:18, 1 March 2014 diff hist +2 Mother Courage and Her Children →Synopsis: changed "small amount of money" to "a small amount of money"

4 February 2014

• 21:4121:41, 4 February 2014 diff hist −1 The Virgin Spring →Controversy: corrected run-on sentence; changed "that" to "the".
• 21:4021:40, 4 February 2014 diff hist +1 The Virgin Spring →Themes: changed "they're" to "they are", for formal usage.

3 February 2014

• 01:4801:48, 3 February 2014 diff hist +1 Christian VII of Denmark →Early life: punctuation correction -- corrected run-on sentence.

31 January 2014

• 00:1100:11, 31 January 2014 diff hist −3 Aras Baskauskas →Early life: deleted 'an' in order to correct grammar.
• 00:1000:10, 31 January 2014 diff hist +19 Aras Baskauskas →Early life: added articles 'a', 'the'; added commas.
• 00:0800:08, 31 January 2014 diff hist −2 Aras Baskauskas →Survivor: Panama: changed 'swab' to 'swap' (fixed typo), changed 'whom' to 'who', and changed 'guys' to 'men' to increase formal tone.

26 January 2014

• 23:3923:39, 26 January 2014 diff hist +1 Non-disclosure agreement changed "it's" to "it is" in order to make more formal

24 January 2014

• 02:3302:33, 24 January 2014 diff hist +2 Rock of Ages (2012 film) →Plot: grammar clean-up: eliminated redundant words.

21 January 2014

• 03:3203:32, 21 January 2014 diff hist −4 Three Cups of Tea →Authorship: grammar: removed extra "the" from sentence.
• 00:5700:57, 21 January 2014 diff hist +1 Fond du Lac, Wisconsin →Historic Districts: fixed typo: changed "as" to "has".

20 January 2014

• 03:0403:04, 20 January 2014 diff hist +1 Mainland China →In mainland China: spelling correction
• 03:0403:04, 20 January 2014 diff hist 0 Mainland China →In mainland China: spelling correction
• 02:2002:20, 20 January 2014 diff hist −2 Foxconn suicides →2010: changed "an estimate of" to "estimated".
• 00:0500:05, 20 January 2014 diff hist −5 Foxconn →Suicides: changed "have continued" to "continued", since present perfect tense indicates something that may have started in the past and continue into the present time.
• 00:0300:03, 20 January 2014 diff hist 0 Foxconn →Working Conditions: punctuation clean-up: capitalized P in province, and added hyphens to 14 year old.