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23 October 2018

• 15:0815:08, 23 October 2018 diff hist +1 John Clare restructured sentence to assist clarification of whose cousin Taylor was
• 11:5211:52, 23 October 2018 diff hist −1 Philammon removed unnecessary period

22 October 2018

• 23:1423:14, 22 October 2018 diff hist +90 Willis (surname) internal links to notable individuals from specific Willis families, as shown in those Burke's pedigrees; incorporated some details from linked individuals' articles for cohesion
• 23:0023:00, 22 October 2018 diff hist +770 Willis (surname) added details of notable Willis families as treated in works by Burke's Peerage from source indicated
• 17:0917:09, 22 October 2018 diff hist 0 John William Willis-Bund removed unnecessary period
• 11:4011:40, 22 October 2018 diff hist −6 Bryan Lee O'Malley of course their divorce took place 'later' than their marriage.

20 October 2018

• 18:0918:09, 20 October 2018 diff hist +31 Ghoncheh Ghavami clarification of prevention of return to the U.K.- article previously implied this was indefinite, rather than- as the NYT source goes on to explain- due to being given a two-year travel ban (also noted earlier in this article), following which presumably return to the U.K. would be permissible
• 02:0702:07, 20 October 2018 diff hist +370 John William Willis-Bund Church Quarterly Review verdict on 'The Celtic Church of Wales'
• 01:4901:49, 20 October 2018 diff hist +578 John William Willis-Bund added details of Willis-Bund's reputation as an historian as encapsulated in 1914 Commons debate, as sourced
• 01:3901:39, 20 October 2018 diff hist +579 John William Willis-Bund reduced (perhaps undue?) emphasis on the opinions of Robert Thomas Jenkins by incorporating the previous block quote into paragraph- incorporated other comments (as sourced) from quoted critics for a somewhat more balanced view of the work
• 01:1701:17, 20 October 2018 diff hist +1 John Walpole Willis added missing period after 'MA'

19 October 2018

• 17:2217:22, 19 October 2018 diff hist −1 Henry Zaga rewrote sentence for clarity

18 October 2018

• 17:0217:02, 18 October 2018 diff hist +2 Big Sir (character) uniformity of surname
• 14:4914:49, 18 October 2018 diff hist +166 Sinfest →Development
• 14:4614:46, 18 October 2018 diff hist +671 Sinfest details of second forum and closure of original one as indicated
• 10:0310:03, 18 October 2018 diff hist +10 Leslie R. H. Willis rewording of one sentence for clarity
• 09:5909:59, 18 October 2018 diff hist +123 Luti Fagbenle source for Nike Midnight Madness clarifying credit under birth name
• 09:5609:56, 18 October 2018 diff hist +490 Talk:Luti Fagbenle Full name
• 09:5209:52, 18 October 2018 diff hist +161 Luti Fagbenle added birth name as was once included in article but removed for no good reason; it doesn't matter whether he uses his full name, publicly available sources show his full name and it's entirely justifiable content in an encyclopaedic article.
• 00:3300:33, 18 October 2018 diff hist +1,582 Charles F. Urschel removed extraneous apostrophe; added details of later life from sources indicated
• 00:0300:03, 18 October 2018 diff hist +338 Charles F. Urschel details of Jarrett- the article previously failed to indicate what happened to him- from source indicated

17 October 2018

• 23:4423:44, 17 October 2018 diff hist +180 Ian Hugo details of Rupert Pole carrying out Hugh Guiler's instructions re: scattering his ashes, as per New York Times article indicated
• 23:4323:43, 17 October 2018 diff hist +185 Rupert Pole details of Pole carrying out Hugo Guiler's instructions re: scattering his ashes, as per New York Times article indicated
• 23:3923:39, 17 October 2018 diff hist +35 Eric Lloyd Wright added half-brother Rupert Pole to info box (internal link included)
• 23:3823:38, 17 October 2018 diff hist +8 Eric Lloyd Wright corrected spelling of name of half-brother Rupert Pole and added internal link, also to article of Anaïs Nin
• 23:3523:35, 17 October 2018 diff hist +1,672 Kathryn Kelly biographical details added from sources indicated
• 22:5122:51, 17 October 2018 diff hist +24 Machine Gun Kelly (gangster) added mention of his wife being an 'experienced criminal' by the time they met, as per her own Wikipedia article
• 22:4722:47, 17 October 2018 diff hist +240 Machine Gun Kelly (gangster) details of his wife's influence on Kelly's criminal career from source indicated
• 22:4422:44, 17 October 2018 diff hist +120 Bonnie and Clyde more details of George Arthur Jones (he who killed W. D. Jones) regarding his suicide- the former phrase implied he killed himself out of remorse, whereas based on this information it was more likely despair over his situation, being that he was to be arrested on other charges- source 200 Texas Outlaws and Lawmen, 1835-1935 by Laurence Yadon, p. 143
• 22:2722:27, 17 October 2018 diff hist +264 Bonnie and Clyde detail of Parker's leg injury from battery acid from W. D. Jones's account, taken from his Wikipedia article and as indicated here
• 22:1622:16, 17 October 2018 diff hist +1 W. D. Jones closed tag
• 22:1522:15, 17 October 2018 diff hist +207 W. D. Jones query re: a statement in the article, hopefully to be expanded upon
• 22:1122:11, 17 October 2018 diff hist +25 Constantine Fitzgibbon source for divorce from Theodora as indicated
• 22:0722:07, 17 October 2018 diff hist +17 Constantine Fitzgibbon altered internal link to Theodora FitzGibbon article to reflect her maiden name; Constantine FitzGibbon certainly didn't 'meet' anyone called 'Theodora FitzGibbon', which would have been quite the coincidence. Her maiden name as sourced in her own article.
• 21:5921:59, 17 October 2018 diff hist +19 Marika Hackman added 'citation needed' tag for past-tense reference to relationship with Amber Bain; they were in a relationship at the time each of the two articles was written, and no more recent source has been included to indicate an end to the relationship mentioned in those articles
• 21:4821:48, 17 October 2018 diff hist −120 Barings Bank updated to current Hansard link for Lord Bruce of Donington's comments; previous link was dead
• 21:3621:36, 17 October 2018 diff hist +12 Les Incompétents added former bass player Olli Rose (as shown at https://www.discogs.com/artist/879113-Olli-Rose and https://rateyourmusic.com/artist/les_incompetents
• 21:1921:19, 17 October 2018 diff hist +19 Bonnie and Clyde (film) 'Citation needed' tag added to unsourced and rather left-field observation
• 21:0821:08, 17 October 2018 diff hist +154 Kate Jackson (singer) details of NME's Cool List 2006 to give context, as shown in that article
• 15:5015:50, 17 October 2018 diff hist +535 Milton Gendel family details from sources indicated
• 00:2600:26, 17 October 2018 diff hist +77 Talk:Sumire Uesaka No edit summary

15 October 2018

• 16:1816:18, 15 October 2018 diff hist −51 Scrope edited poorly-formatted and unsourced line from introductory section

14 October 2018

• 18:5018:50, 14 October 2018 diff hist −54 Bombardier (rank) unsourced statement of unclear relevance to article