User contributions for 99.35.41.28

18 September 2012

• 02:2502:25, 18 September 2012 diff hist −5 Charles Sobhraj tiny changes
• 01:3901:39, 18 September 2012 diff hist −130 Charles Sobhraj capitalization punctuation misspelling style

11 September 2012

• 01:4701:47, 11 September 2012 diff hist +21 Lum's The present tense is appropriate.
• 01:3601:36, 11 September 2012 diff hist −24 Kenny Rogers Roasters →History: simpler
• 01:0901:09, 11 September 2012 diff hist −13 Wendy's →Advertising: simpler
• 01:0801:08, 11 September 2012 diff hist +8 Wendy's →Menu items: I made a few improvements.
• 00:4700:47, 11 September 2012 diff hist 0 Wendy's →Breakfast: This is a proper noun.
• 00:4500:45, 11 September 2012 diff hist −3 Wendy's →Menu: Capital letters were added, etc.
• 00:3100:31, 11 September 2012 diff hist −28 Maid-Rite →Restaurants: The sentences are now more direct.
• 00:2100:21, 11 September 2012 diff hist 0 Big Boy Restaurants →Regional franchises: Spelling error.

18 August 2012

• 01:4101:41, 18 August 2012 diff hist 0 Les Deux Magots →References in literature and popular culture: The punctuation is now better.

14 August 2012

• 17:4317:43, 14 August 2012 diff hist −21 Jay Ferguson (American musician) →Jo Jo Gunne: The sentence was too long. It is now shorter and more direct.
• 17:3017:30, 14 August 2012 diff hist +358 Michael Corby Undid revision 507404489 by 99.35.41.28 (talk)
• 17:2817:28, 14 August 2012 diff hist −358 Michael Corby The paragraph was verbose and filled with hyperbole. Now the paragraph is shorter and conveys the same information.
• 16:5816:58, 14 August 2012 diff hist −187 The Babys →Breakup: Rock (such as Pink Floyd and the Eagles) was very popular in 1980. Disco was rapidly declining and punk was growing, but traditional rock bands thrived anyway.

10 August 2012

• 18:2318:23, 10 August 2012 diff hist 0 List of countries by intentional homicide rate →By country: This is the number in the source.